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Rotte
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Rotte
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年11月4日 at 2:15:27

Artist: azusa
Title: Summer in photos
Source: Asutarotte no Omocha!
Tags: Rotte asuha naoya summer in photos lkx_shore
BPM: 102
Filesize: 11338kb
Play Time: 04:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Flask's Normal (2.57 stars, 293 notes)
  2. Flower's Easy (0.67 stars, 183 notes)
  3. Hard (4.33 stars, 470 notes)
  4. Shore (4.81 stars, 580 notes)
Download: azusa - Summer in photos
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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o.o/ 1st map

  1. Shore by lkx_shore --- Finished!
  2. Hard by me --- Finished!
  3. Flask's Normal by Flask --- Finished!
  4. Flower's Easy by Flower --- Finished!
Last edited by Rotte , edited 20 times in total.
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Princess God
啦啦啦，mod图喽~渣mod，sorry~
general：
也许可以试试把滑条做得多样一些？
00:46:494可以考虑把kiai time搞到这里
normal难度（补的不说二连击还是把我吓了一小跳的）
00:12:671 remove nc
00:17:377 remove nc
00:20:024 nc
00:32:671 滑条可以考虑做的更滑一些，即把中间的节点往上调调
00:35:024 remove nc
00:35:906 nc
00:37:377 也许可以考虑不要nc？（不过看你后面又不少地方用的这种手法，难道是一种个性？小伙我欣赏你！）
00:49:141 nc
00:50:318 remove nc
01:52:671 remove nc
02:06:200 可以考虑去掉nc
02:53:847~02:54:582 不考虑一下和前面统一？
03:35:024 来个有创意的大滑条何如？
04:09:141 nc吧骚年=w=
04:11:494 个人意见：让其结束于04:12:818，然后在04:13:847处和04:14:288加个note最后 把04:14:582~04:20:318做上spinner
不过强烈建议最后这几个都加上音量渐弱，会有不错的效果的
hard难度
00:20:024 nc
00:39:141 nc
00:42:082 00:43:259 也许都考虑少一小格会更好一些？
01:52:082 nc
01:52:671 remove nc
01:54:435 nc？
02:12:671 如果是个性的话，那么就别改了
02:34:730 nc？
02:43:259 remove nc
02:56:788 02:57:082 这两个地方空拍真的没问题么？
02:58:847 nc
03:06:788 nc
03:10:024 nc
03:21:788 nc
03:28:259 1,2 试试做上一些音效如何？
03:42:082 remove nc
03:45:612 nc
03:47:082 nc
03:58:259 3,4,5,6,7,8 全部nc如何？
04:09:141 nc
04:11:494 意见同normal
lotte篇（OTL，我觉得这个基本不用改了）
00:15:612 nc
00:20:318 nc
00:44:435 nc
03:55:024 nc
04:09:141 nc
04:10:171 结束于 04:10:612，在04:10:906 加一个note，觉得这样节奏比较饱满呢
04:11:494 同 normal
以上~kira~
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte
谢谢Princess God提供的帮助，我会努力让图尽快rank的
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte
I wish everyong can edit and test my beatmap,thanks
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
音效比较基本的加法在群里已经说了，如果还要资讯，我很欢迎:D（相信a32也会很欢迎lol)
[lotte]
01:13:700 (5) - 加个note换成连打，跟随音乐
02:07:818 (3) - 滑条弄成↙?
02:21:494 (2) - 我觉得多余了，到02:21:935就可以换成滑条带过去了
03:26:788 (1) - 像这种地方，每一个note的音量可以慢慢变高，到歌词处变回正常
03:55:024 (6) - new combo
03:59:730 (8) - ↑(你最后new combo全重置，然后看着大白线和连打加)
04:14:435 (1) - 转圈不能超过6秒。缩短到04:17:377,加上finish
04:11:494 (1) - 这段删了转圈，重新摆note比较好:d

其实我还是喜欢一句歌词的末尾用滑条带过
或者唱完歌词后下一句其实前的一个白线开始摆连打弄成5连打

图做得不错.等你做好音效以后我继续来骗星星
lkx_Shore
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Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
rank图至少要8颗星星，多找人mod骗星星吧
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte
:D 骗星星
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[Lotte]
OD： 7调成6?
00:31:494 (3) - 说实话这样的遮挡不太好
00:36:200 (3) - 开端尾端不加whistle,滑条加whistle
00:36:788 (4) - ↑
00:37:377 (1) - ↑
00:41:494 (7) - 去掉finish?
00:42:671 (2) - 我觉得这里的clap换成whistle更好
00:43:847 (4) - 同上，不过滑条开端末端都要加whistle
00:54:730 (1) - whistle
00:55:318 (5) - ↑
00:55:612 (7) - ↑，不过要去掉finish
00:55:906 (8) - ↑
01:14:435 (1) - 滑条末端也加上clap
01:23:259 (7) - finish
01:24:435 (3) - 开端尾端不加whistle,滑条加whistle
01:56:200 (7) - 一般有finish就不用加clap了，去掉clap
01:59:141 (5) - 去掉finish
02:01:494 (6) - ↑
02:02:082 (1) - 滑条加上whistle,开端末端不加whistle
02:03:259 (3) - ↑
02:04:730 (2) - whistle
02:05:024 (3) - whistle
02:05:906 (6) - 滑条加上whistle,末端加whistle，去掉clap
02:13:259 (4) - 去掉finish
02:15:318 (4) - 末端去掉finish
02:17:671 (6) - ↑
02:29:435 (4) - ↑
02:20:906 (1) - 其实我觉得从这里开始摆note，一直摆到02:22:082.接个滑条比较好
02:33:847 (6) - 末端加上clap
02:35:024 (2) - 末端漏了clap
02:57:377 (4) - 末端finish去掉
03:00:906 (2) - 末端漏了clap
03:30:318 (6) - 滑条加whistle,开端末端不加
03:32:671 (4) - whistle
03:32:965 (6) - whistle
03:40:318 (4) - 去掉finish
03:42:671 (8) - ↑
03:55:024 (1) - whistle
03:55:171 (2) - ↑
03:55:466 (4) - ↑
03:55:759 (6) - ↑
03:56:053 (8) - ↑
03:56:200 (9) - ↑
04:12:818 (3) - 噗...这个滑条开端在04:12:965是不是好点
04:14:435 (1) - finish

求星星

绿线不对齐是不能rank的，你各个难度的绿线都有不对齐的绿线
音效还是得多看图去找感觉，看图的时候别只听，要看怎么摆
lkx_Shore
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Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
唉才看到你已经给了两颗了，不用给了，顺带说下，乱给星星可是不好的（？）
别人要mod你的图才能给，做难度或者只说一句话不能给.
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n
General
- 开 Grid Level 4 ， 耐心的看一遍全图 ，把明显间距不同的地方重摆一下
- 用一些whistle 这歌效果应该很好的
- Normal就老老实实的1/2节奏吧 不要1/4 况且你是最低难度 没有Easy
- 04:11:494 这个点以后BPM明显变慢了吧 测完加条红线
- 减少不必要的NC
- 统一所有diff的kiai time
- 建议preview time 00:45:906 (3) 或者 03:28:259

下面各个diff , 我只说比较明显的问题 , 最好都要注意下~


Normal
- HP Drain 和 OD 用3~4比较适合。
00:06:200 (1,1) - 转盘之后衔接下一个note的时间太少了 新人反应不过来的
00:16:200 (3) - 需要和00:13:847 (5) - 叠好吗
00:20:024 (1) - RNC 没必要
00:35:906 (1,2,3) - 最低难度.. 1/4节奏的3连 （不会被允许的吧?
00:45:024 (1) - RNC 没必要
01:03:259 (1,1) - 最好去掉spinner用note/slider代替 要么把衔接spinner的note放中心
01:11:494 (2,1,1,2) - 这一小段排的比较不美观
01:12:671 (1) - RNC 没必要
01:18:112 (4,5,1) - Hard也是用的这个节奏 和normal的区别在哪~? 新手读不来这节奏的。
01:21:788 (4) - overlap
01:27:377 (2,3,4,5) -
02:24:435 (3) - 间距不同 这个蛮明显
02:53:847 (1,2,3) -
03:03:259 (1,2,3,4) -
03:07:082 (4,1,2) - 间距


Hard
- 建议用大一号note
00:20:906 (1,2) - 节奏没错 但是玩起来很别扭的 可以换个形式..
00:43:259 (1) - RNC 没必要
01:22:082 (5,6) - 5可以像6一样 弧度大一些 flow好一点
02:15:612 (4) - 间距
02:38:259 (2) - ^
03:00:318 (1) - ^
03:58:259 (1,1,1,1) - RNC
04:03:259 (1) - ^


Insane
- HP-1 OD-1 AR-1
00:20:318 (1) - RNC
00:45:318 (1) - ^
01:15:024 (2) - 间距
01:47:965 (5) - ^
01:52:082 (1) - 尾巴的clap去掉
01:59:435 (1,2) - 1RNC 2NC
02:18:553 (1,1) - 很不合理啊 为什么spinner后note放那么远

总的来说 Easy和Normal都还不错， Hard的话还要多努力 特别是排版上 现在感觉很散乱

加油啦 star~
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
a32
Hi~


[General]
  1. 请把BG裁剪成1024*768哦
  2. 还有各个难度的KIAI也要统一的
  3. 04:11:494要加一根90BPM的红线 04:14:347要加一根80BPM的红线(I'm not quite sure about the BPM0.0

[Normal]
  1. 00:35:906(1,2,3) - 不建议在Normal里用1/4
  2. 01:14:435 (1) - 这个Slider尾部没对齐
  3. 01:17:377 (3) - ^
  4. 02:17:965 (4) - ^
  5. 03:47:082 (1) - ^
  6. 03:50:024 (4) - ^
  7. 04:11:494 (6) - 加个NC 要不Combo太长

[Hard]
  1. 00:43:259(1) - 感觉这里NC没有什么用
  2. 03:47:965(1) - 加个Finish吧

[Lotte]
  1. 00:39:730(3) - 往左上移一格吧
  2. 02:20:906(1) - 这地方略难打

That's all!大体上还是不错的，一些细节方面再多加努力吧~
Nymph
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Joined December 2010
Nymph
唔射个星 最近学校有点小忙 实在没心思看图 sry……（顺便取消掉一个kudosu然后给另外一个post了）
Rotte
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Joined October 2011
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Rotte
感谢各位大大的帮忙喵~~~ :)
Gundam
136 posts
Joined January 2011
Gundam
Genera
请确认你拥有这套皮肤的所有权 如果不是你的皮肤请征得原作者的许可后使用

所有diff的source都要相同 自行检查

04:11:494 - Normal&Hard在此处都有一跟BPM83的红线 但是Lotte没有 请检查 如果前2个难度是为了改变slider的速度 请插绿线

Normal

03:35:024 - 这个slider求拉的能更艺术弧线更好看点 拉slider的方法请参见这里

Overall
良心图 祝rank
Urlangce
98 posts
Joined October 2010
Urlangce
Hi~从群里来的乐于助人的渣Mod~

好长的曲子！！

[General]
AudioLeadIn: 1500这个改成0.你不需要这个。。。
Nice SB. 我个人觉得SB的歌词大了点。而且尽量不要放到屏幕的中央。长的歌词分成几段。（这纯属个人意见！你还需要看看大众！）
BG是1024*768是合适的。。你的是1001*767.。。

[Normal]

有些地方slider遮住了一点circle，不知道可不可以。毕竟这是Normal嘛~问一下那些神mapper以求证！

[Hard]

01:14:435 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:17:377 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:17:965 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:32:082 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:47:082 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:50:024 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
关于Unsnapped slider end，点我看解答方法


[Rotte]

02:21:494(3) and 02:22:671(2)：是不是可以考虑吧clap去掉呢？
02:53:259 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
04:14:747 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).

渣Mod见谅~~
SB Hitsounds Timing skin 排列啊什么的都很不错（我的就。。。捂脸），所以祝你早日Rank~
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte
:) 以上全部完成
Jimmy_Bao
4 posts
Joined October 2010
Jimmy_Bao
:) 暂时没时间MOD，过几天有时间了再MOD
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
Rotte
00:50:318 (4) - 最后滑条末用clap更好
00:35:024 (5) - 滑条开端用finish
00:46:788 (4) - ↑
01:05:612 (3) - ↑
01:15:024 (2) - whistle?
01:23:259 (7) - finish
02:03:847 (5) - 滑条末端加个whistle?
02:04:435 (1) - whistle
02:14:435 (6) - 滑条末端加个clap
02:17:082 (4) - ...........我只是觉得hd党会怒骂坑爹
02:35:024 (9) - new combo
02:37:377 (12) - ↑
03:14:730 (8) - ↑
03:17:377 (12) - ↑
03:18:553 (1) - 取消new combo
03:22:082 (6) - new combo
03:29:141 (3) - finish
03:38:553 (1) - finish
03:40:906 (5) - new combo
03:46:788 (1) - whistle
03:47:965 (3) - finsih
04:12:216 (2) - 换成单个note更好吧？
-------------------------


纯引a32的[General]

04:11:494要加一根90BPM的红线 04:14:347要加一根80BPM的红线(I'm not quite sure about the BPM0.0

把你04:11:494的bpm改成90
04:12:827插个红线改80
然后在04:13:952加个note？

后面whistle音效不错，但前面还是欠缺了点.
你后面有好多连打，这样会不会显得前面单调了点?
把od调到4吧，这样打起来会很舒服
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

lkx_shore wrote:

Rotte
00:50:318 (4) - 最后滑条末用clap更好
00:35:024 (5) - 滑条开端用finish
00:46:788 (4) - ↑
01:05:612 (3) - ↑
01:15:024 (2) - whistle?
01:23:259 (7) - finish
02:03:847 (5) - 滑条末端加个whistle?
02:04:435 (1) - whistle
02:14:435 (6) - 滑条末端加个clap
02:17:082 (4) - ...........我只是觉得hd党会怒骂坑爹 要的就是这个效果
02:35:024 (9) - new combo
02:37:377 (12) - ↑
03:14:730 (8) - ↑
03:17:377 (12) - ↑
03:18:553 (1) - 取消new combo
03:22:082 (6) - new combo
03:29:141 (3) - finish
03:38:553 (1) - finish
03:40:906 (5) - new combo
03:46:788 (1) - whistle
03:47:965 (3) - finsih
04:12:216 (2) - 换成单个note更好吧？
-------------------------


纯引a32的[General]

04:11:494要加一根90BPM的红线 04:14:347要加一根80BPM的红线(I'm not quite sure about the BPM0.0

把你04:11:494的bpm改成90
04:12:827插个红线改80
然后在04:13:952加个note？

后面whistle音效不错，但前面还是欠缺了点.
你后面有好多连打，这样会不会显得前面单调了点?
把od调到4吧，这样打起来会很舒服


全部修改完成
知道你来骗星星了 :)
L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P
hi 小猫~


因为是first map不可避免会说些比较抽象的东西，毕竟以后的路很大程度会被第一张图的mod影响

rotte
00:13:847 (4,5) - 这地方我个人觉得slider比较配，当然决定权在于你（有些mapper喜欢notes的形状，有些喜欢跟音乐走等等的。。）
00:43:847 (4) - 这个slider body 有个whistle,建议删了（如果不知道我在说什么就按slider的身体关了whistle)
01:10:906 (1) - 不大确定你怎用NC但是这个还是不NC比较好 (建议以后用长白线下NC)
01:20:318 (1) - ^一样
(后面还有这些东西，要改的话我也不必提出来了。。一个combo colour就是说
01:26:200 (7) - stack吧，不然造成古怪spacing
02:10:024 (2,3) - 这种东西非常有趣，但是这首歌老实说不大适合。
每个人都会想尝试各种map法，但是在你寻找自己的mapping定位的同时，也需要注意到map跟歌曲的契合性。。。
03:11:200 (6,7,8) - 不要怀疑，这东西遮挡过不了大部分MAT的把关
04:14:347 (1) - spinner的声音有些大声

HARD
00:10:906 (1,2,1) - 这串明显在整个难度里偏难
02:24:435 (3) - 觉得第一个头不必whistle

normal
00:15:612 (6) - 老大，NC

大概如此了，其他的需要经验来改善，比如排列，音效的运用等（吐槽一下default clap似乎不大好听）

bye 小猫

edit:对了 这张图以first map来说真心很不错，star一个。改天七天没人mod了找我，毕竟我的kudos很少（slap
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte
:) 全部修改完了，还有很多nc都是不知道怎么就出来了T^T
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
[General]
BG is 1001*767, better to find/adjust to a 1024*768 one.
Silencing both sliderslide/slidertick is unrankable, plz fix. (i think just silence slider slide is enough, use tick rate 1 if you don't want massive ticks)
Normal has a different red timing section (third one) with the other two diffs, plz make them consistent (in fact i don't get why is the third red line there)
In some of the parts you have sliderwhistle, but i'm not sure if you do this with intention (example:00:47:965 (2) in Normal) 有些地方的sliderwhistle我听着很别扭不知道你是不是故意的。如果不是的话，请费些心思全去掉。这歌太安静了，这样很明显。
The volume in crease at 00:44:435 (1) - is quite sudden, hope you could turn it down a bit.

[Normal]
01:58:553 (2) - make the shape better plz? http://puu.sh/AzSD
02:20:906 (2) - suggest you to use a single circle here, the piano is not really following the same BPM.
02:22:082 (3) - also this could be started 1/2 later.
03:38:553 (1) - miss a clap
03:49:141 (3) - add whistle at reverse+end?
03:51:494 (3) - if you accept ^, add whistle at beginning+ reverse?

[Hard]
00:27:965 (3,4) - not stacked properly?
00:55:906 (3,4) - strange place for sliders. 00:56:200 - should be a heavy beat, using a slider's end for it... seems not good imo.
02:20:906 (1) - same thing, don't try to follow anything here since the only instrument is a piano which don't follow the BPM.

[Rotte]
02:20:906 (1) - same again.
nice diff.

歌太催眠了。
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte
:) 已经全部修改完成~~
thx
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
sliderslider和slidertick至少删一者，这还没完成。
Normal的最后一条红线仍然与其他两个难度有区别。
00:47:965 (2) - 类似这样的sliderwhistle仍然没有改并且也没有告诉我理由，就来一个全部修改完成。

再补充：
Preview time三个难度设置的不一样。
Tags：Rotte难度里面少个Rotte。
皮肤文件的hit100g.png没用（因为100了是不会出geki的），删掉。

这样实在无法放心，只是要泡就对mod敷衍了事，那就算了。这图如果不是新人图本来也没打算泡。
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte
非常不好意思，因为是新人，所以还是有很多有问题的地方，但是自己仍旧不知道，如果能给予一些帮助的话，就好了。
谢谢NatsumeRin的批评，小猫会继续进行修改的，还有一些细节问题，也希望NatsumeRin能够帮忙指点一些
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte
need modding
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo
o.o/ 小猫~

[General]
  1. Tags里的Manatsu no Photograph是多余的吧？title已经有了~
  2. 总体感觉默认的clap有些违和了~ 我的话估计只会用whistle或者自选clap了, 毕竟这歌没有明显的啪啪啪声~
  3. 最后的2根红线其实是off的但是vocal唱歪了我也不知道咋办了...lol"
[Normal]
  1. 00:10:906 (1) - 手动加下new combo~
  2. 00:46:494 (4) - KIAI早了1/2??? 重音在白线啊lol"
  3. 00:46:788 (1) - 脑袋+finish
  4. 00:56:200 (1) - ^
  5. 01:03:259 (4) - 折返是忘记加clap? 感觉没有故意不加的理由~
  6. 01:05:612 (1) - Finish finish finish~ 为什么都没有finish的影子lol"
  7. 01:12:671 (1) - 没必要new combo的..
  8. 01:15:024 (2) - finish :>
  9. 01:18:553 (1,2) - 交换new combo
  10. 01:19:730 (2,3) - 只是突然想到说一下~ 对于最简单难度的话这里节奏不需要太复杂, 跟vocal的话建议这样排列就足够了~
    SPOILER
  11. 01:22:082 (1) - 去掉new combo....?
  12. 01:24:435 (2) - 建议KIAI这里再结束 :>
  13. 01:57:377 (1,3) - 补上clap???
  14. 02:06:788 (1) - Add finish?
  15. 02:18:553 (1) - 后面补上break, 虽然很短但是对手部复位很有帮助的 :> break手动拽到02:20:906
  16. 02:22:082 (0) - 为什么不把这里的喷泉效果挪到02:23:259 (1)去呢~ o.o 那里才是正统的kiai开始点呢
  17. 02:23:259 (1) - 红线加了clap是故意的??? 我是经常这么干...但是我看到小猫之前的部分都没用这么做所以提一下 :> 顺便加上finish! 后面需要加的地方都自查下吧=w= 就那几个地方..应该很有规律可循 :>
  18. 02:24:435 (2) - 尽量避免clap whistle同时出现, 这里的音乐感觉不到需要同时用到的必要 :<
  19. 02:25:612 (3) - 忘记clap?
  20. 02:41:200 (0) - 这里有无用的timing section.
  21. 03:13:847 (3,4,5) - 03:15:024这里相当明显的鼓点被忽略了 :< 这里宁愿放弃vocal的~我的建议:
    SPOILER
  22. 04:00:906 (2) - 完全没跟着歌走~ 这里跟普通的1/2就好~
  23. 04:06:200 (1) - 这里开始就不要用clap了~ whistle或者干脆不用吧~
  24. 04:14:447 (1) - 不加个spinner么= = 不然vocal还在图突然就毫无预兆地结束了... 长度就2段长白线吧 :>
音效主要是finish的添加别的难度也一样 小猫先改起来吧 :>
加油~

EDIT: 好~继续~

[Storyboard]
  1. 00:38:700 Lyric\05在这里闪了下...需要修正
[Hard]
  1. 首先, KIAI需要统一一下~ 我的建议是:
    1. #1 KIAI 00:46:788 - 01:29:141
    2. #2 KIAI 02:23:259 (*即使这段不要KIAI喷泉也应当设置在这里) - 03:05:612
    3. #3 KIAI 03:29:141 - 04:06:788
    4. 所有难度都按这个来吧 :>
  2. 关于finish的设定（以第一段KIAI为例）:
    1. 00:44:435 (1) - 这个就和你现在的设置一样 S1 finish就很不错
    2. 00:46:788 (1) - 这里建议是增加S2 section, 然后不上S2的finish, 同样的在00:56:200 (3) - 01:05:612 (4) - 01:15:024 (2) - 也补上 :>
    3. 以此类推, 所有难度的所有KIAI都按这个来~
  3. 00:24:141 (8) - 可以试试拆成1个circle+1个1/1 slider, 和vocal对应
  4. 00:43:259 (1) - 多余的new combo, 去掉去掉
  5. 01:18:112 (8,9) - 这里的spacing最好也统一成1.00
  6. 02:12:671 (5,9,10) - 忘记clap了吧!!?
  7. 02:20:906 (1) - 来个S1 finish
  8. 02:23:259 (6) - 补个new combo顺便脑袋加个S2 finish
  9. 02:32:082 (2) - Clap?
  10. 02:32:082 (2,7,2,4) - 尾巴位置unsnapped.
  11. 02:37:965 (2) - Clap??
  12. 02:42:082 (4) - 可以考虑加个new combo.
  13. 02:55:024 (4) - 尾巴clap遗漏/ \
  14. 03:06:200 (3,2) - overlap了, 很多国外无脑MAT/BAT喜欢挑这个.
  15. 03:23:847 (5) - 有些confused, 因为vocal不是这么唱的啊.../ \ 而且因为完全叠住了 无法通过DS来判断所以..
[Rotte]
  1. 00:37:377 (5,6) - 这里clap设定是故意的? 是的话就无视这条 :>
  2. 00:46:788 (4) - New combo.
  3. 00:56:788 (4) - whistle换成clap??
  4. 00:57:377 (6,1) - 尾巴同上o.o 突然clap变成了whistle不太习惯...而且有些违和= =|||
  5. 01:05:612 (6) - New combo.
  6. 01:24:435 (3,4) - 这是啥= =|||||||| 重叠了!! lol"
  7. 01:27:965 (4) - hidden reverse unrankable :<
  8. 01:57:965 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 听上去怪怪的...感觉345的whistle有些多余.嘛无所谓了...
  9. 02:06:788 (1,2,3) - 这spacing很坑...很坑...如果2处都是空1/4倒无妨, 但问题不是
  10. 02:11:200 (1,2,3) - 突然1/4来跳接受不能, 完全没有预兆! 而且真心不适合在这里跳.
  11. 02:13:847 (7) - 串太长了,这里补个new combo
  12. 02:15:906 (1,2,3) - 同.
  13. 02:23:259 (5) - New combo.
  14. 02:43:259 (5,6) - 这样的pattern很容易让人误以为是1/4的.
  15. 03:07:671 (5) - 没叠好呢.
  16. 04:02:082 (4) - New combo.
  17. 04:07:671 (4,5) - 4换个看得清楚的位置吧, 都挤在一块了.. 5调整下叠在3的尾巴上.
That's all for now~~ >▽<
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

JoJo wrote:

o.o/ 小猫~

[General]
  1. Tags里的Manatsu no Photograph是多余的吧？title已经有了~
  2. 总体感觉默认的clap有些违和了~ 我的话估计只会用whistle或者自选clap了, 毕竟这歌没有明显的啪啪啪声~
  3. 最后的2根红线其实是off的但是vocal唱歪了我也不知道咋办了...lol"
[Normal]
  1. 00:10:906 (1) - 手动加下new combo~
  2. 00:46:494 (4) - KIAI早了1/2??? 重音在白线啊lol"
  3. 00:46:788 (1) - 脑袋+finish
  4. 00:56:200 (1) - ^
  5. 01:03:259 (4) - 折返是忘记加clap? 感觉没有故意不加的理由~
  6. 01:05:612 (1) - Finish finish finish~ 为什么都没有finish的影子lol"
  7. 01:12:671 (1) - 没必要new combo的..
  8. 01:15:024 (2) - finish :>
  9. 01:18:553 (1,2) - 交换new combo
  10. 01:19:730 (2,3) - 只是突然想到说一下~ 对于最简单难度的话这里节奏不需要太复杂, 跟vocal的话建议这样排列就足够了~
    SPOILER
  11. 01:22:082 (1) - 去掉new combo....?
  12. 01:24:435 (2) - 建议KIAI这里再结束 :>
  13. 01:57:377 (1,3) - 补上clap???
  14. 02:06:788 (1) - Add finish?
  15. 02:18:553 (1) - 后面补上break, 虽然很短但是对手部复位很有帮助的 :> break手动拽到02:20:906
  16. 02:22:082 (0) - 为什么不把这里的喷泉效果挪到02:23:259 (1)去呢~ o.o 那里才是正统的kiai开始点呢
  17. 02:23:259 (1) - 红线加了clap是故意的??? 我是经常这么干...但是我看到小猫之前的部分都没用这么做所以提一下 :> 顺便加上finish! 后面需要加的地方都自查下吧=w= 就那几个地方..应该很有规律可循 :>
  18. 02:24:435 (2) - 尽量避免clap whistle同时出现, 这里的音乐感觉不到需要同时用到的必要 :<
  19. 02:25:612 (3) - 忘记clap?
  20. 02:41:200 (0) - 这里有无用的timing section.
  21. 03:13:847 (3,4,5) - 03:15:024这里相当明显的鼓点被忽略了 :< 这里宁愿放弃vocal的~我的建议:
    SPOILER
  22. 04:00:906 (2) - 完全没跟着歌走~ 这里跟普通的1/2就好~
  23. 04:06:200 (1) - 这里开始就不要用clap了~ whistle或者干脆不用吧~
  24. 04:14:447 (1) - 不加个spinner么= = 不然vocal还在图突然就毫无预兆地结束了... 长度就2段长白线吧 :>
音效主要是finish的添加别的难度也一样 小猫先改起来吧 :>
加油~

EDIT: 好~继续~

[Storyboard]
  1. 00:38:700 Lyric\05在这里闪了下...需要修正
[Hard]
  1. 首先, KIAI需要统一一下~ 我的建议是:
    1. #1 KIAI 00:46:788 - 01:29:141
    2. #2 KIAI 02:23:259 (*即使这段不要KIAI喷泉也应当设置在这里) - 03:05:612
    3. #3 KIAI 03:29:141 - 04:06:788
    4. 所有难度都按这个来吧 :>
  2. 关于finish的设定（以第一段KIAI为例）:
    1. 00:44:435 (1) - 这个就和你现在的设置一样 S1 finish就很不错
    2. 00:46:788 (1) - 这里建议是增加S2 section, 然后不上S2的finish, 同样的在00:56:200 (3) - 01:05:612 (4) - 01:15:024 (2) - 也补上 :>
    3. 以此类推, 所有难度的所有KIAI都按这个来~
  3. 00:24:141 (8) - 可以试试拆成1个circle+1个1/1 slider, 和vocal对应
  4. 00:43:259 (1) - 多余的new combo, 去掉去掉
  5. 01:18:112 (8,9) - 这里的spacing最好也统一成1.00
  6. 02:12:671 (5,9,10) - 忘记clap了吧!!?
  7. 02:20:906 (1) - 来个S1 finish
  8. 02:23:259 (6) - 补个new combo顺便脑袋加个S2 finish
  9. 02:32:082 (2) - Clap?
  10. 02:32:082 (2,7,2,4) - 尾巴位置unsnapped.
  11. 02:37:965 (2) - Clap??
  12. 02:42:082 (4) - 可以考虑加个new combo.
  13. 02:55:024 (4) - 尾巴clap遗漏/ \
  14. 03:06:200 (3,2) - overlap了, 很多国外无脑MAT/BAT喜欢挑这个.
  15. 03:23:847 (5) - 有些confused, 因为vocal不是这么唱的啊.../ \ 而且因为完全叠住了 无法通过DS来判断所以..
[Rotte]
  1. 00:37:377 (5,6) - 这里clap设定是故意的? 是的话就无视这条 :>
  2. 00:46:788 (4) - New combo.
  3. 00:56:788 (4) - whistle换成clap??
  4. 00:57:377 (6,1) - 尾巴同上o.o 突然clap变成了whistle不太习惯...而且有些违和= =|||
  5. 01:05:612 (6) - New combo.
  6. 01:24:435 (3,4) - 这是啥= =|||||||| 重叠了!! lol"
  7. 01:27:965 (4) - hidden reverse unrankable :<
  8. 01:57:965 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 听上去怪怪的...感觉345的whistle有些多余.嘛无所谓了...
  9. 02:06:788 (1,2,3) - 这spacing很坑...很坑...如果2处都是空1/4倒无妨, 但问题不是
  10. 02:11:200 (1,2,3) - 突然1/4来跳接受不能, 完全没有预兆! 而且真心不适合在这里跳.
  11. 02:13:847 (7) - 串太长了,这里补个new combo
  12. 02:15:906 (1,2,3) - 同.
  13. 02:23:259 (5) - New combo.
  14. 02:43:259 (5,6) - 这样的pattern很容易让人误以为是1/4的.
  15. 03:07:671 (5) - 没叠好呢.
  16. 04:02:082 (4) - New combo.
  17. 04:07:671 (4,5) - 4换个看得清楚的位置吧, 都挤在一块了.. 5调整下叠在3的尾巴上.
That's all for now~~ >▽<

以上全部修改完成~~从没想过这么累T.T
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
:3 应邀来mod
[General]
Artist里第一个字母也应该大写吧?
hit0 应该是个X更好
tick推荐不换 和slider边圈的颜色保持一致就可以了
[hard]
00:02:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 估计你自己没玩过吧,偏移产生的很大 适合摆点其他造型
00:12:671 (4,5) - 4上去点 5可以不动
00:20:024 (8) - remove 8
00:23:847 - +1 note 或者remove00:24:730 (8,9)
00:25:612 (1) - ctrl+g
00:34:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5才是nc,1都可以随便的说
00:40:906 (8) - 这个平行就好了
00:47:965 (3) - 应该是有弧度更好
00:55:612 (9) - clap
01:09:730 (6) - ^
01:02:377 (4) - 应该和01:01:200 (2)形状相近
01:05:024 (2,3) - ctrl+g
01:17:377 (8) - NC
01:59:730 (7) - 叠到9上去
SPOILER
02:47:965 (3,4) - ctrl+g
03:05:612 soft 100%太高了
04:06:788 (1) - remove NC

:D 就这些
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte

wantuole wrote:

:3 应邀来mod
[General]
Artist里第一个字母也应该大写吧? 这个不变，动漫都是小写ww
hit0 应该是个X更好 好吧
tick推荐不换 变成1了 和slider边圈的颜色保持一致就可以了 懒得换了
[hard]
00:02:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 估计你自己没玩过吧,偏移产生的很大 适合摆点其他造型 偏移改小了
00:12:671 (4,5) - 4上去点 5可以不动 好的
00:20:024 (8) - remove 8 没改，感觉这样符合音乐
00:23:847 - +1 note 或者remove00:24:730 (8,9) 没改
00:25:612 (1) - ctrl+g 没改
00:34:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5才是nc,1都可以随便的说 ok
00:40:906 (8) - 这个平行就好了 好
00:47:965 (3) - 应该是有弧度更好 改了
00:55:612 (9) - clap （音效什么的基本都变了）
01:09:730 (6) - ^
01:02:377 (4) - 应该和01:01:200 (2)形状相近 好
01:05:024 (2,3) - ctrl+g 改了
01:17:377 (8) - NC 明了
01:59:730 (7) - 叠到9上去 好
SPOILER
02:47:965 (3,4) - ctrl+g 没换
03:05:612 soft 100%太高了 改啦
04:06:788 (1) - remove NC 没变

:D 就这些

玩脱了神触谢啦
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
GD complete

SPOILER
osu file format v10

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 140906
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.5
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Manatsu no Photograph
TitleUnicode:Manatsu no Photograph
Artist:azusa
ArtistUnicode:azusa
Creator:-[NYAN]-
Version:Flower's Easy
Source:Asutarotte no omocha
Tags:Rotte azuha naoya
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
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i like this maps~~ :)
Rotte
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Flower wrote:

GD complete

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Flask
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Flask 
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440,196,127965,2,0,B|432:260|404:332,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,324,129141,2,0,B|228:352|168:312|168:312|108:312,2,180,0|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
332,276,131200,1,0,0:0:0
360,220,131494,6,0,B|368:160|352:92,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,232,133259,1,8,0:0:0
348,284,133847,2,0,B|304:284|304:284|284:320|256:324|232:324,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,324,134730,1,0,0:0:0
124,324,135024,2,0,B|111:324|83:320|63:284|63:284|19:284,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
16,224,135906,1,0,0:0:0
20,160,136200,6,0,B|32:108|68:88|104:88,2,120,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
20,220,137671,2,0,B|20:292,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,220,138553,2,0,B|180:220|180:220|216:248|256:256|292:248|328:220|328:220|440:220,1,360,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,100,140906,2,0,B|324:100|324:100|288:72|248:64|212:72|176:100|176:100|64:100,1,360,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
36,212,143259,6,0,B|32:280|56:328,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,320,144435,2,0,B|180:252|156:204,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,184,145612,6,0,B|312:160|348:152|376:160|404:188,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,300,146788,2,0,B|376:324|340:332|312:324|284:296,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,252,147965,1,0,0:0:0
69,214,148553,1,8,0:0:0
69,94,149141,1,0,0:0:0
184,57,149730,1,8,0:0:0
254,154,150318,1,0,0:0:0
368,192,150906,2,0,B|400:204|432:192,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
308,208,151788,5,0,0:0:0
260,244,152082,1,8,0:0:0
232,296,152377,1,0,0:0:0
200,348,152671,6,0,B|140:364|80:344,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,224,153847,2,0,B|140:208|200:228,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
252,200,154730,5,0,0:0:0
296,160,155024,2,0,B|320:128|300:88|300:88|304:44,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,44,156200,2,0,B|187:85|187:85|168:124|196:164,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,140,157377,1,0,0:0:0
426,177,157965,1,8,0:0:0
426,297,158553,2,0,B|380:328|308:328,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
252,328,159435,1,0,0:0:0
192,328,159730,2,0,B|123:328|77:297,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,284,161200,5,0,0:0:0
284,256,161494,1,2,0:0:0
344,252,161788,1,0,0:0:0
404,260,162082,6,0,B|452:272|488:256|508:216,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
460,108,163259,2,0,B|412:96|376:112|356:152,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,144,164435,6,0,B|188:140|172:92|172:92|128:104,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
100,212,165612,2,0,B|148:216|164:264|164:264|208:252,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,316,166788,1,0,0:0:0
420,300,167377,1,8,0:0:0
500,212,167965,2,0,B|512:152|492:84,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,232,169730,2,2,B|320:248,2,60,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,112,170906,5,2,0:0:0
332,84,171200,1,0,0:0:0
272,80,171494,2,0,B|200:88|140:76,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
96,100,172377,1,0,0:0:0
52,140,172671,2,0,B|60:212|48:272,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,320,173847,6,0,B|216:340,1,60
272,340,174435,2,0,B|332:328,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,304,175024,2,0,B|428:264|428:264|404:232|408:196,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
332,112,176200,1,0,0:0:0
228,56,176788,1,8,0:0:0
136,136,177377,1,0,0:0:0
88,248,177965,2,0,B|76:304|64:332,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,272,179141,6,0,B|264:292|328:276,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
436,244,180318,1,8,0:0:0
464,192,180612,1,0,0:0:0
448,136,180906,6,0,B|432:100|384:76|328:88,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,88,181788,1,0,0:0:0
228,88,182082,2,0,B|191:78|143:102|127:138,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,248,183259,5,0,0:0:0
120,292,183553,1,0,0:0:0
168,328,183847,2,0,B|208:336|240:328,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,332,184435,2,0,B|352:348|368:320|428:336,2,120,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
276,212,186200,5,8,0:0:0
332,104,186788,2,0,B|300:76|268:72|244:80|220:104,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
164,96,187671,1,0,0:0:0
104,108,187965,2,0,B|72:152|72:200|108:240|108:240|104:288,2,180,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
164,96,190024,1,0,0:0:0
224,104,190318,6,0,B|280:136|320:204,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,192,191200,1,0,0:0:0
428,188,191494,2,0,B|457:137|513:105,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
500,48,192377,1,4,0:0:0
440,48,192671,6,0,B|320:48,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,72,193553,1,0,0:0:0
208,48,193847,2,0,B|88:48,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,84,194730,1,0,0:0:0
20,140,195024,1,0,0:0:0
32,200,195318,6,0,B|32:272,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
36,320,195906,2,0,B|120:352|224:316,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,256,197377,1,4,0:0:0
400,172,197965,1,8,0:0:0
364,56,198553,1,0,0:0:0
248,28,199141,1,8,0:0:0
156,104,199730,6,0,B|120:164|72:200,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
48,244,200612,1,0,0:0:0
80,292,200906,2,0,B|121:322|157:382,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,356,201788,1,0,0:0:0
272,356,202082,6,0,B|324:356|324:356|336:320|388:308,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,252,202965,1,0,0:0:0
364,192,203259,2,0,B|327:184|315:148|315:148|263:148,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,144,204141,1,0,0:0:0
144,148,204435,2,0,B|108:172|80:176|52:168|32:152,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,44,206200,1,8,0:0:0
320,48,206788,6,0,B|388:68|376:148|376:148|392:212|472:220,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
504,252,208259,2,0,B|516:280|516:304|512:320,2,60,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
444,256,209141,6,0,B|384:280|360:240|316:260,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,256,210318,2,0,B|170:239|146:279|86:255,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,136,211494,6,0,B|68:88|96:64|132:60|164:72,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,72,212671,2,0,B|282:64|318:68|346:92|342:140,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
404,244,213847,5,0,0:0:0
308,316,214435,1,8,0:0:0
192,352,215024,2,0,B|124:360|68:328,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
284,272,216788,2,0,B|292:204|260:148,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,104,217671,5,0,0:0:0
180,72,217965,1,2,0:0:0
120,56,218259,1,0,0:0:0
60,68,218553,6,0,B|8:100|8:100|20:132|16:172,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
16,280,219730,2,0,B|19:305|7:337|7:337|59:369,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,356,220906,6,0,B|256:328|264:376|316:352,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
308,240,222082,2,0,B|341:257|349:209|425:237,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
476,128,223259,5,0,0:0:0
396,40,223847,1,8,0:0:0
280,64,224435,2,0,B|204:80|152:72,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
320,108,225906,1,0,0:0:0
316,168,226200,2,0,B|320:240|304:304,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,336,227082,5,0,0:0:0
216,352,227377,1,2,0:0:0
160,332,227671,1,0,0:0:0
124,284,227965,6,0,B|120:212|136:148,2,120,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,360,229730,1,8,0:0:0
280,352,230024,1,0,0:0:0
336,336,230318,2,0,B|376:336|400:344|400:344|416:332|452:316,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
452,256,231200,1,0,0:0:0
444,196,231494,2,0,B|411:181|395:169|395:169|371:177|331:177,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
287,289,232671,5,0,0:0:0
173,252,233259,1,8,0:0:0
173,132,233847,1,0,0:0:0
287,94,234435,1,8,0:0:0
358,192,235024,1,0,0:0:0
472,152,235612,2,0,B|488:120|476:84,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,272,236788,1,8,0:0:0
456,328,237082,1,0,0:0:0
412,368,237377,6,0,B|348:384|288:372,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,368,238259,1,0,0:0:0
172,368,238553,2,0,B|108:384|48:372,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
48,252,239730,2,0,B|48:188,1,60
72,136,240318,2,0,B|96:76,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,40,240906,2,0,B|208:28|264:36,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,88,242082,5,0,0:0:0
460,164,242671,1,8,0:0:0
480,280,243259,2,0,B|472:344|416:384,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,380,244141,1,0,0:0:0
300,376,244435,2,0,B|248:339|240:275,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,180,245612,1,0,0:0:0
60,232,246200,1,8,0:0:0
24,280,246494,1,0,0:0:0
40,336,246788,6,0,B|96:368|164:348,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
276,352,247965,2,0,B|332:320|400:340,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
460,240,249141,1,0,0:0:0
440,120,249730,1,2,0:0:0
344,48,250318,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,251494,12,0,257347,0:0:0

有bug幫我fix
tags: summer in photos ._.
Source: Asutarotte no Omocha!
B2IN
B2IN
Hi~ Nyan :3

[Hard]
00:44:435 (5) - add NC. this combo is too long.
01:29:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it's good pattern. but unfit in this section.. orz
02:18:553 (7) - add NC
03:00:759 - (just suggestion) follow the drum sounds. therefore add note.
03:03:259 (7) - add NC. then 03:04:730 (1) - remove NC. 03:05:318 (3) - NC
03:36:200 (6) - NC
03:50:318 (7) - ^
[Shore]
-> oh.. WIP ! DX
00:45:318 (1,2) - Try this arrangement for distinction between the vocals and piano sounds.
Star Stream
2,031 posts
Joined June 2010
Star Stream
From my queue
Only Hard diff.. as requested

[General]
idk but there's already a ranked map with the title as 'Summer in Photos', consider changing it

[Hard]
  1. 00:02:083 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - i don't recommend to stack all the notes on same place
  2. 00:18:553 (7) - ctrl+g would be easier to hit imo, if you accept it, move 00:20:024 (8) - to head
  3. 00:33:553 (8,9) - slider would be easier to hit
  4. 00:34:435 (1,2,3,4) - this too, maybe you could make a hold slider there
  5. 00:43:259 (3) - i could be read as 3hit-slider imo, remove 2 arrows and add a circle instead?
  6. 00:47:965 (3) - maybe you could curve it like this, it would be a small jump too
    SPOILER
  7. 01:29:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too busy with the calm melody, i hope you to make simple rhythm like this
    SPOILER
  8. 02:06:494 (1) - too sharp, plz use 2.6x if you really want to make a strong jump here
  9. 02:19:730 (9) - same as 00:43:259 (3) -
  10. 02:22:082 (1,2,3) - finish on each head
  11. 02:26:788 (8) - confusing 4hit-slider here, remove 1 arrow plz
  12. 02:44:435 (1) - toooooo sharp.. orz
  13. 03:10:024 (2) - ^, maybe stack it on 3's tail
  14. 03:25:318 (1) - yeah, too sharp again
  15. 03:59:730 (3) - 1grid down the 2nd tick?
  16. 04:14:347 (1) - expand it to 04:20:361 - and gradually reduce the volume
hope you to make more new combos, somewhere like 00:44:435 (5) -
maybe use other image so that ppl can notice it's from 'Asutarotte no Omocha!' immediately?

GoGo rank! I <3 this anime :D
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
[General]

  1. <Shore> diff has a different source and tags compare to other diffs
[SB]

  1. There are code about "effectbg.jpg" and "white.png" but no such images in your SB folder
  2. flask.png, flower.png, light.png, nyan.png, spotlight.png didn't used in your SB
  3. There are 2 osb files
And, hard mod as your requested

[Hard]

  1. There are many green lines that didn't snapped correct, you'd better resnap them
  2. 00:36:198 (8) - Unsnapped slider end
  3. 00:36:786 (9) - Unsnapped slider end
  4. 04:06:786 (1) - Unsnapped slider end
  5. 00:45:316 (9) - NC here, on one hand it's anti jumps, and on the other hand make the combo don't over 10
  6. 01:05:610 (4) - No finish here?
  7. 01:52:080 (1) - Ctrl+G, or it easily read to a only one-reverse slider
  8. 02:23:257 (3) - No finish?
  9. 02:23:257 (3) - Hmm, it's confusing imo, maybe try this?
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/505132
  10. 03:00:904 (3) - Finish?
  11. 03:42:669 (5) - No whistle?
  12. 03:45:022 (5) - ^
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
Rotte
i'll Graveyard this map ，and i‘ll resurrect it in July 2013,because i don't have ability to make this map
Only 7 months ~
:)
i'll back to make this maps
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