Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Pokie ~

Mod for special request ~

This map already enough mods for here > p/1625596



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening' in tags.　Alright
2. Remove unused hitsound file 'normal-hitwhistle5'.　Omg mistake
3. Maybe 'storyboard\1.png' is unused?　^ orz

[Acceleration]

1. 01:10:696 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Make a symmetry to here.　Fine enough, done
2. 01:28:162 - Missing add finish to here.
3. 02:28:984 - ^
4. 02:47:169 (1) - ^　Added

[ERT's Hard]

1. HP-1 is better.　umm, yea. HPD 5 is more suitable for Hard Didn't notice that before, thank you.
2. 00:02:683 - Remove finish,sound better to me.　Done
3. 02:04:326 (1,2) - This rhythm sound really weird to me,try like this.　It based on drums in background music. Fixed with this pattern
4. 02:47:066 - Missing add finish to here.　Done

[Normal]

1. HP-1,OD+1 is better IMO.　HP-1, but leaving OD as 3. Since AR was set to 4.
2. Have some unsnapped slider in this diff,because of some wrong SV speed changed.　Timing sections dupilcated again I didn't have a normal backup here, but anyway fixed.
3. 01:13:470 - Change volume at least 20% pls.　Done
4. 02:20:867 - ^　Done
5. 02:12:546 (1,2) - Change a 3/4 repeat slider,follow with lyrics.　Little bit strange since I'm not following vocal, but okay.
6. 03:31:039 - Add a circle,follow with lyrics.　Yes it'll be suitable, but for consistency I better keep it an empty. eg: 01:14:600 - , 02:21:998 -
7. 03:33:299 (3) - Remove this circle,sound much better.　ummm, I prefer replacing the pattern and rhythm.
8. 03:57:751 - Remove clap,sound much better.　Done

That's all ~ Nice SB ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Melophobia wrote:

[SB]
2-3.png 膝をつく僕に　君が差し出す景色
2-5.png -変わらずにいてと願うこと-
2-6.png -変わりゆく時に生きる僕ら-
2-8.png 君と繋がった空へ　響かせて！
3-4.png 傷さえも無駄にしない
3-5.png いつか君が　示す場所へ
3-6.png 薄い羽が　焼かれようとも
5-7.png 目覚めかけの可能性を
6-1.png 僕のために泣いてくれた
6-8.png 傷さえも無駄にしない

Maybe you can divert 3-1~3-4.png into where 6-5~6-8.png were to save file size, Because they have the same lyric.

Mei_coN wrote:

Normal:03:02:683(3)和03:03:504(1)和03:04:326(2)和03:05:148(1,2,3,4) 这几个slider拉到白线比较好,03:08:436(1,2,3,4)这4个slider的节奏和间距也感觉很莫名,怀疑从03:01:861(1)开始到03:13:367(3)这段出了啥bug,DS跟之前都不同,从1.0变成了0.8,修复下吧=w= 　幫大忙了;w;

Hard:02:12:546(1,2,3,4)感觉按回之前的1/4节奏更好　Done

以上~~

DarknessAngel wrote:

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K姊 !! >///<


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Black words = If I were you,I would do that.
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

Pokie神diff

• 　;w;
  
  (there are some suggestions about the spacing,it doesn't hurt too much if you change nothing so feel free to ignore them.)

1. 00:04:943 (3,4) - 我覺得移到(58,76)玩起來手比較不會壓迫到，因為慢速的關係跳太大不是很舒服:O　移到了(22 144), 這張圖好像沒出現過半疊的note XD 所以就這樣處理了
2. 03:31:039 (1,2) - 這間距是不是該大點 ? 作為進到副歌的前兆，我喜歡像02:21:998 (1,2)，較powerful =w=b　好建議=w=bb

ERT去哪了 ?

• 　他鄉的遠方(誤
  
  (just point out what I thought,feel free to ignore those suggestions if you don't agree them.)

1. 02:46:039 (3) - 移到(228,244) ? 因為節奏、間距都變換了，如果再加上重疊的話就稍難讀了點，分開後我覺得順眼一些　Done
2. 02:12:854 (2) - 這個也跳一下吧，在02:11:724 (4,5)之後突然換成3/4節奏，這樣的間距很可能導致誤判
   這裡的跳也能當作強調人聲的作用，就這幾點來看我覺得還是加大間距好　這個在上個還是上上個mod改成了1/2節奏, 應該大丈夫!(忘記update)
3. 02:16:244 (2) - 在02:13:778 (1,2)用跳了，這裡卻不跳 :O，盡量避免在Hard用這樣的隨機跳法，有點confusing　Done
4. 04:02:682 (1) - 都NC了還不跳一下 !! \(ˋAˊ)/，這樣比較有"結束"的感覺... /.\　Done, 不過估計ert不喜歡我這跳(
5. 唔，我會希望Hard再出彩一點的... ><　>_<

Normal

• 
  
  (there are some a bit important things to me,please consider these.)

1. 02:00:217 (5) - 貌似是個沒對齊線的物件o.o　試著修了一下 希望ok
2. 03:05:148 (1,2,3) - 這些slider頭上加finish，(2)的尾部也加個，跟鑼聲，而且我覺得效果不錯\:D/ (全難度適用)　加在2跟4, 全加有點吵的樣子…
3. 03:12:956 (2) - whistle換成finish感覺力量比較夠 (全難度適用)　同上原因, 但這邊就沒有加了

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Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~ no kds pls ~

[Acceleration]

1. 01:11:929 (2,3,4) - This still no symmetry with 01:10:696 (3).
2. 02:05:559 - Change to normal hitsound is moe fits to here.

[ERT's Hard]

1. 02:15:833 (1,2,3,4) - After test this,i just found more better rhythm.
   

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