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Twice
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51020 难道不带我一个?
No_Gu
求不折腾了。。。
Topic Starter
Pokie

Twice wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51020 难道不带我一个?
唔…雖然很感謝提供guest diff~
不過這張圖曾經中途轉移給沒谷,而他那邊已經把mod給收集好,就差rank的一步。現在轉回來再加新diff的話可能有點棘手 :(
RS1
T :lol: his is really good, however you may want to raise the drain on it as it is a bit easy for the most part. Great map, keep going!
Topic Starter
Pokie

ShazWow wrote:

T :lol: his is really good, however you may want to raise the drain on it as it is a bit easy for the most part. Great map, keep going!
Thanks for reply and suggestions! Anyway, HPD 7 would be kinda danger on this part :P 03:24:874 -
Melophobia
Don't give up this time, please :(
Topic Starter
Pokie

Melophobia wrote:

Don't give up this time, please :(
(`・ω・´)ゞわかたんっす!

(´;ω;)ゞスターありがとっす!!!
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Pokie ~ :)

Mod for special request ~

This map already enough mods for here > p/1625596



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

  1. Add 'opening' in tags.
  2. Remove unused hitsound file 'normal-hitwhistle5'.
  3. Maybe 'storyboard\1.png' is unused?

[Acceleration]

  1. 01:10:696 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Make a symmetry to here.
  2. 01:28:162 - Missing add finish to here.
  3. 02:28:984 - ^
  4. 02:47:169 (1) - ^

[ERT's Hard]

  1. HP-1 is better.
  2. 00:02:683 - Remove finish,sound better to me.
  3. 02:04:326 (1,2) - This rhythm sound really weird to me,try like this.
  4. 02:47:066 - Missing add finish to here.

[Normal]

  1. HP-1,OD+1 is better IMO.
  2. Have some unsnapped slider in this diff,because of some wrong SV speed changed.
    02:23:641 (2) -
    02:26:929 (2) -
    02:27:751 (4) -
    02:29:806 (2) -
    02:36:381 (2) -
    02:40:491 (3) -
    03:32:683 (2) -
    03:36:381 (1) -
  3. 01:13:470 - Change volume at least 20% pls.
  4. 02:20:867 - ^
  5. 02:12:546 (1,2) - Change a 3/4 repeat slider,follow with lyrics.
  6. 03:31:039 - Add a circle,follow with lyrics.
  7. 03:33:299 (3) - Remove this circle,sound much better.
  8. 03:57:751 - Remove clap,sound much better.

[Gu's Easy]

  1. 00:02:683 - Remove finish,sound better to me.
  2. 02:47:272 (1) - Missing add finish to here.

That's all ~ Nice SB ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Melophobia
SBをチェックしたいからちょっと待ってくれると嬉しい!
Topic Starter
Pokie

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Pokie ~ :)

Mod for special request ~

This map already enough mods for here > p/1625596



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

  1. Add 'opening' in tags. Alright
  2. Remove unused hitsound file 'normal-hitwhistle5'. Omg :o mistake
  3. Maybe 'storyboard\1.png' is unused? ^ orz

[Acceleration]

  1. 01:10:696 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Make a symmetry to here. Fine enough, done
  2. 01:28:162 - Missing add finish to here.
  3. 02:28:984 - ^
  4. 02:47:169 (1) - ^ Added

[ERT's Hard]

  1. HP-1 is better. umm, yea. HPD 5 is more suitable for Hard :P Didn't notice that before, thank you.
  2. 00:02:683 - Remove finish,sound better to me. Done
  3. 02:04:326 (1,2) - This rhythm sound really weird to me,try like this. It based on drums in background music. Fixed with this pattern :P
  4. 02:47:066 - Missing add finish to here. Done

[Normal]

  1. HP-1,OD+1 is better IMO. HP-1, but leaving OD as 3. Since AR was set to 4.
  2. Have some unsnapped slider in this diff,because of some wrong SV speed changed. Timing sections dupilcated again :( I didn't have a normal backup here, but anyway fixed.
  3. 01:13:470 - Change volume at least 20% pls. Done
  4. 02:20:867 - ^ Done
  5. 02:12:546 (1,2) - Change a 3/4 repeat slider,follow with lyrics. Little bit strange since I'm not following vocal, but okay.
  6. 03:31:039 - Add a circle,follow with lyrics. Yes it'll be suitable, but for consistency I better keep it an empty. eg: 01:14:600 - , 02:21:998 - :P
  7. 03:33:299 (3) - Remove this circle,sound much better. ummm, I prefer replacing the pattern and rhythm.
  8. 03:57:751 - Remove clap,sound much better. Done


That's all ~ Nice SB ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
;)
Thank you Rika :oops: 想了下還是傾向先再找一兩個mod才泡… (感覺有人會找碴) 另外轉換mapset時出了這麼多mistakes很抱歉 :o


Melophobia wrote:

SBをチェックしたいからちょっと待ってくれると嬉しい!
はあくちゃんー
どうぞどうぞ、待ってますよ!ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ modの数もまだ足りないかもしれないね orz
x847606653
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Melophobia
[SB]
2-3.png 膝をつくに 君が差し出す景色
2-5.png -変わらずにいてとうこと-
2-6.png -変わりゆく時に生きるら-
2-8.png 君と繋がった空へ 響かせて
3-4.png 傷さえも駄にしない
3-5.png いつか君が 示場所へ
3-6.png 薄い羽が 焼かれよう
5-7.png 覚めかけの可能性を
6-1.png のために泣いてくれた
6-8.png 傷さえも駄にしない

Maybe you can divert 3-1~3-4.png into where 6-5~6-8.png were to save file size, Because they have the same lyric.
Mei_coN
第一次的mod就給Pokie啦~~不过个人mod图水平太低,mod不出啥东西,鸡蛋里面挑些骨头吧(死.....

整体上感觉图没啥问题,不过E,N,H的无用绿线略多,删掉吧...

Easy:感觉没啥问题

Normal:03:02:683(3)和03:03:504(1)和03:04:326(2)和03:05:148(1,2,3,4) 这几个slider拉到白线比较好,03:08:436(1,2,3,4)这4个slider的节奏和间距也感觉很莫名,怀疑从03:01:861(1)开始到03:13:367(3)这段出了啥bug,DS跟之前都不同,从1.0变成了0.8,修复下吧=w=

Hard:02:12:546(1,2,3,4)感觉按回之前的1/4节奏更好

Insane:Nice map~~ :)

以上~~ :)
Topic Starter
Pokie

Melophobia wrote:

[SB]
2-3.png 膝をつくに 君が差し出す景色
2-5.png -変わらずにいてとうこと-
2-6.png -変わりゆく時に生きるら-
2-8.png 君と繋がった空へ 響かせて
3-4.png 傷さえも駄にしない
3-5.png いつか君が 示場所へ
3-6.png 薄い羽が 焼かれよう
5-7.png 覚めかけの可能性を
6-1.png のために泣いてくれた
6-8.png 傷さえも駄にしない

Maybe you can divert 3-1~3-4.png into where 6-5~6-8.png were to save file size, Because they have the same lyric.
Missing font file atm :P I'll try fixing them up asap! Thank you.

Notes:
2-1.png
2-7.png
3-2.png
6-6.png
7-3.png?

Mei_coN wrote:

Normal:03:02:683(3)和03:03:504(1)和03:04:326(2)和03:05:148(1,2,3,4) 这几个slider拉到白线比较好,03:08:436(1,2,3,4)这4个slider的节奏和间距也感觉很莫名,怀疑从03:01:861(1)开始到03:13:367(3)这段出了啥bug,DS跟之前都不同,从1.0变成了0.8,修复下吧=w=  幫大忙了;w;

Hard:02:12:546(1,2,3,4)感觉按回之前的1/4节奏更好 Done

以上~~ :)
謝謝妹控!
DarknessAngel
as your request via in-game PM ~ :)


K姊 !! >///<


Red words = Unrankable stuff
Blue words = the thing I think it must be fixed
Black words = If I were you,I would do that.
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice



Pokie神diff



  • (there are some suggestions about the spacing,it doesn't hurt too much if you change nothing so feel free to ignore them.)

  1. 00:04:943 (3,4) - 我覺得移到(58,76)玩起來手比較不會壓迫到,因為慢速的關係跳太大不是很舒服:O
  2. 03:31:039 (1,2) - 這間距是不是該大點 ? 作為進到副歌的前兆,我喜歡像02:21:998 (1,2),較powerful =w=b

ERT去哪了 ?



  • (just point out what I thought,feel free to ignore those suggestions if you don't agree them.)

  1. 02:46:039 (3) - 移到(228,244) ? 因為節奏、間距都變換了,如果再加上重疊的話就稍難讀了點,分開後我覺得順眼一些
  2. 02:12:854 (2) - 這個也跳一下吧,在02:11:724 (4,5)之後突然換成3/4節奏,這樣的間距很可能導致誤判
    這裡的跳也能當作強調人聲的作用,就這幾點來看我覺得還是加大間距好
  3. 02:16:244 (2) - 在02:13:778 (1,2)用跳了,這裡卻不跳 :O,盡量避免在Hard用這樣的隨機跳法,有點confusing
  4. 04:02:682 (1) - 都NC了還不跳一下 !! \(ˋAˊ)/,這樣比較有"結束"的感覺... /.\
  5. 唔,我會希望Hard再出彩一點的... ><

Normal



  • (there are some a bit important things to me,please consider these.)

  1. 02:00:217 (5) - 貌似是個沒對齊線的物件o.o
  2. 03:05:148 (1,2,3) - 這些slider頭上加finish,(2)的尾部也加個,跟鑼聲,而且我覺得效果不錯\:D/ (全難度適用)
  3. 03:12:956 (2) - whistle換成finish感覺力量比較夠 (全難度適用)

No_Gu



  • (feel free to ignore the suggestion you don't agree.)

  1. 03:41:724 (2) - finish個,跟音樂契合
  2. 03:41:724 (2) - 這形狀看不大順眼lol,可能是因為後面沒有物件了,剩下的這個沒有其他形狀的slider做搭配所以看起來略怪


抱歉昨天意料之外的忙,晚了一天orz

K姊 + 神曲 + 好圖 + Pokie(?) = 必支持
star.

求速rank
Topic Starter
Pokie

DarknessAngel wrote:

as your request via in-game PM ~ :)


K姊 !! >///<


[notice]Red words = Unrankable stuff
Blue words = the thing I think it must be fixed
Black words = If I were you,I would do that.
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice



Pokie神diff

  •  ;w;

    (there are some suggestions about the spacing,it doesn't hurt too much if you change nothing so feel free to ignore them.)

  1. 00:04:943 (3,4) - 我覺得移到(58,76)玩起來手比較不會壓迫到,因為慢速的關係跳太大不是很舒服:O 移到了(22 144), 這張圖好像沒出現過半疊的note XD 所以就這樣處理了
  2. 03:31:039 (1,2) - 這間距是不是該大點 ? 作為進到副歌的前兆,我喜歡像02:21:998 (1,2),較powerful =w=b 好建議=w=bb

ERT去哪了 ?

  •  他鄉的遠方(誤

    (just point out what I thought,feel free to ignore those suggestions if you don't agree them.)

  1. 02:46:039 (3) - 移到(228,244) ? 因為節奏、間距都變換了,如果再加上重疊的話就稍難讀了點,分開後我覺得順眼一些 Done
  2. 02:12:854 (2) - 這個也跳一下吧,在02:11:724 (4,5)之後突然換成3/4節奏,這樣的間距很可能導致誤判
    這裡的跳也能當作強調人聲的作用,就這幾點來看我覺得還是加大間距好
     這個在上個還是上上個mod改成了1/2節奏, 應該大丈夫!(忘記update)
  3. 02:16:244 (2) - 在02:13:778 (1,2)用跳了,這裡卻不跳 :O,盡量避免在Hard用這樣的隨機跳法,有點confusing Done
  4. 04:02:682 (1) - 都NC了還不跳一下 !! \(ˋAˊ)/,這樣比較有"結束"的感覺... /.\ Done, 不過估計ert不喜歡我這跳(
  5. 唔,我會希望Hard再出彩一點的... >< >_<

Normal



  • (there are some a bit important things to me,please consider these.)

  1. 02:00:217 (5) - 貌似是個沒對齊線的物件o.o 試著修了一下 希望ok
  2. 03:05:148 (1,2,3) - 這些slider頭上加finish,(2)的尾部也加個,跟鑼聲,而且我覺得效果不錯\:D/ (全難度適用) 加在2跟4, 全加有點吵的樣子…
  3. 03:12:956 (2) - whistle換成finish感覺力量比較夠 (全難度適用) 同上原因, 但這邊就沒有加了



抱歉昨天意料之外的忙,晚了一天orz 拍拍肩(´・ω・`)辛苦你了

K姊 + 神曲 + 好圖 + Pokie(?) = 必支持
star.

求速rank
謝謝這麼快就來mod~ 趕緊修sb去 :oops:


Edit: storyboard updated + fixed on Gu's Easy
Kotone
沒kd了
快給我rank
This is an order
Topic Starter
Pokie

Kotone wrote:

沒kd了
快給我rank
This is an order
:cry: 感謝主人及主人後宮的第一人!
Kawayi Rika
Recheck ~ no kds pls ~

[Acceleration]

  1. 01:11:929 (2,3,4) - This still no symmetry with 01:10:696 (3).
  2. 02:05:559 - Change to normal hitsound is moe fits to here.

[ERT's Hard]

  1. 02:15:833 (1,2,3,4) - After test this,i just found more better rhythm.

Call me back ~
Topic Starter
Pokie

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~ no kds pls ~

[Acceleration]

  1. 01:11:929 (2,3,4) - This still no symmetry with 01:10:696 (3).
  2. 02:05:559 - Change to normal hitsound is moe fits to here.

[ERT's Hard]

  1. 02:15:833 (1,2,3,4) - After test this,i just found more better rhythm.

Call me back ~


All done, also fixed the pattern on Normal:
02:33:915 (3,4,5,6) - previous pattern crashed
03:58:573 (2,4) - symmerty

>_<
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