This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on woensdag 19 september 2012 at 20:51:04

Artist: Hardwell
Title: Encoded
Tags: misja056 Kyshiro SkyDevil
BPM: 128
Filesize: 2230kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4,97 stars, 235 notes)
2. Kyshiro's Normal (3,99 stars, 147 notes)
3. Misja's Easy (2,09 stars, 99 notes)

Download: Hardwell - Encoded
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hardwell is de artiestennaam van Robbert van de Corput, een Nederlands dj afkomstig uit Breda. Hij is vooral actief in het maken van housemuziek. Hiernaast maakt Hardwell ook regelmatig remixes van bestaande liedjes.

Robbert van de Corput, better known by his stage name Hardwell (born in Breda, Netherlands) is a Dutch progressive and electro house DJ and music producer. Breaking into the scene in 2009 with his bootleg of "Show Me Love vs. Be", he has produced multiple hit EDM singles such as "Encoded" and "Cobra" and also made collaborations and toured with Tiësto.

Oke~

ff 2 dingen:

1. Hier is geupdate collab, ik heb wat sliders gefixt~
2. Je moet een nieuwe combo in je stream zetten in collab wnat 30 combo is iets te veel ._.
3. en hitsound o_o of mag ik dat doen? \:D/

~Star~

Download: Hardwell - Encoded (Ayu) [Collab].osu

Hello,from #modreq
I am newbie modder,this is just suggestions and maybe useless

Kyshiro's Normal

1. 00:20:257 (3,4) - change to reverse sliders?It`s hard to normal players.
2. 00:22:132 (4,5) - ^
3. 00:24:007 (4,5) - ^
4. 00:25:882 (4,5) - ^
5. 00:48:499 (3,4,5,6) - Strange distance spacing,will confuse normal players.
6. 00:43:695 (1) - How about change to this rhythm:http://puu.sh/wTWs

Hard

1. 00:09:945 (4) - New Combo?
2. 00:26:820 (1) - this slider looks too long.maybe you can change it to several shorter slider?
3. 00:34:202 - volume of kiai time is too loud,how about change it to 80%?and your greenline are not on the line.
4. 00:40:413 (2) - 1 grid up and left?
5. 01:05:609 (5) - x:156 y:188
6. 01:11:820 (1) - same as the slider on 00:26:820 (1)
7. 01:10:882 (2,3) - maybe you can change these 2 slider`s shape to make them end to end like font of sliders. like this:http://puu.sh/wU3A

Collab

1. hp -1 and od -1 ?
2. 00:12:171 - Add a note? like 00:08:070 (3,4,5)
3. 00:14:046 - ^
4. 00:14:867 (5) - Remove this note?
5. 00:26:820 (1.......) - oh this stream looks a little hard...
6. 00:34:320 (1) - how about change to this:http://puu.sh/wUqp
7. 00:45:921 - add note?
8. 00:46:273 - add note?
9. 00:47:796 - add note?
10. 00:48:148 - add note?
11. 00:51:898 - add note?
12. 01:05:843 (7) - how about change this note to slider or add note at 01:05:960
13. 01:07:718 (7) - ^
14. 01:09:593 (7) - ^
15. 01:11:585 - add note?
16. 01:17:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about use soft audio style?

nice storyboard

[general]
I think the map looks well designed overall it looks good

[collab]
00:08:421 (4) - doesn't match the music there is no sound there
00:09:124 (6) - the ending to that slider doesn't mach the music fix that.
00:11:820 (1,2) - fix those sliders so they match the beat of the song
00:12:171 - there isn't a note here
00:13:695 (1,2) - its like before those two sliders and a missing note in the middle
00:14:632 (3) - don't hear any note here
00:20:491 (3,4,5,6,7) - fix the streams some notes don't match the beat here
00:24:241 (3,4,5,6) - same here with the stream
00:39:241 (6) - this note seems weird here
00:42:991 (6) - same here as before
00:45:921 - think there should be a note here
00:46:273 - think so here too
00:47:327 (4) - remove this note
00:47:796 - note here would sound right
00:48:148 - put a note here a swell
00:52:249 - a note here?
00:54:359 (3) - this should be moved to 00:54:484
00:54:476 (4) - this one should go to 00:54:710
00:57:171 - a note here?
00:58:109 (6) - remove this note?
01:01:507 (2) - the slider should be cut in half
01:02:562 (2,3) - over mapped right here suggest you remove these
01:02:796 - a note right here?
01:03:616 (5) - move this note backwards to 01:03:499
01:04:437 (2) - remove this note?
01:06:312 (2) - remove this note?
01:08:187 (2) - remove this note?
01:10:999 (4) - remove this note?
01:17:796 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2 sounds weird at the beginning
01:19:671 - put a note right here
01:28:929 (2) - maybe this note shouldn't be here
01:34:554 (2) - remove this note?
01:31:038 - a note right here?
01:31:390 - a note right here?
01:31:976 - a note right here?
01:34:554 (2) - remove this?

[Collab]

00:38:567 (5) - from 1/2 to 1/4
01:24:945 (1) - Overlaps 01:24:007 (1) -
01:40:882 (1) - Overlaps 01:39:945 (1) -
01:45:570 (4) - Suggest here an extra note with hitsound Finish.

00:49:554 (1) - From here on no hitsounds please fix!

[Hard]

Use more and regular hitsounds!

00:11:820 (1) - Too long spinner (automatic +20000 score)
00:26:820 (1) - Boring Slider (please do that multiple times but not too hard)
01:06:077 (1) - Overlaps 01:05:257 (4) -
01:05:257 (4) - Boring Slider (please do that multiple times but not too hard)
01:17:796 (3) - New combo
01:25:882 (1) - Overlaps 01:24:945 (1) -
01:45:570 (3) - An extra note with finish

[Normal]

00:20:257 (3,4) - I think this kind of sliders are bad in Normals!
00:22:132 (4,5) - ^
00:24:007 (4,5) - ^
00:25:882 (4,5) - ^
00:40:296 (1,2,3) - Dont use this in a Normal (Kind of set)
(It's the same thing every time) Fix those kind of settings and I will be happy
Also use more hitsounds!

[Misja's Easy]

Download: Hardwell - Encoded (Ayu) [Misja's Easy].osu

Yes it is not like the other ones (most of it 'cuz of the whistles)

I will star this when the time is ready for it. Like made those changes

Since i know you have updated the map, here is a code :3

I found some mistakes on my diff

Code (u need to change inherition sections too)

[TimingPoints]
4320,468.75,4,2,0,55,1,0
19202,-100,4,1,0,95,0,0
32327,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
32562,-100,4,1,0,55,0,0
33825,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
34294,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
48356,-100,4,1,0,30,0,1
48473,-100,4,1,0,40,0,1
48573,-100,4,1,0,50,0,1
48708,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
48825,-100,4,1,0,70,0,1
48942,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
49059,-100,4,1,0,85,0,1
49176,-100,4,1,0,90,0,1
49294,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
54945,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
56585,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,40,0,0
56702,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
60570,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
77679,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
78968,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
92445,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,40,0,0
94085,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,40,0,0
94202,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
103551,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
104489,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0

[HitObjects]
156,116,4320,6,0,B|196:76|256:32|316:76|356:116,2,232,2|2|2
120,200,6663,2,0,B|92:256|20:264,2,116,0|2|0
212,200,8070,6,0,B|256:184|256:184|284:220|284:220|316:212,1,116,2|0
392,176,9007,2,0,B|436:160|436:160|464:196|464:196|496:188,2,116,2|0|2
356,264,10413,5,0
356,264,10882,1,2
284,204,11351,2,0,B|244:252|276:320,1,116,0|2
180,320,12288,6,0,B|56:320,1,116,0|2
12,240,13226,2,0,B|132:240,1,116,0|2
220,240,14163,5,0
160,168,14632,2,0,B|128:116|148:56,2,116,2|0|2
252,168,16038,5,0
248,76,16507,1,2
324,128,16976,1,0
320,220,17445,5,2
236,260,17913,1,0
252,168,18382,1,2
164,200,18851,1,0
72,200,19320,6,0,B|8:268,4,87,12|0|2|0|0
164,200,21195,2,0,B|220:276,4,87,12|0|2|0|0
220,124,23070,2,0,B|268:108|276:64,4,87,12|0|2|0|0
128,124,24945,2,0,B|80:108|72:64,4,87,12|0|2|0|0
184,48,26820,5,12
272,72,27288,2,0,B|396:104,1,116,2|8
384,100,28226,2,0,B|496:128,1,116,0|8
256,192,29163,12,4,32445
156,48,34320,6,0,B|220:80|196:160,1,116,2|8
176,236,35257,1,0
112,168,35726,2,0,B|48:136|72:56,1,116,8|2
156,48,36663,6,0,B|280:24,1,116,8|0
360,48,37601,1,8
304,124,38070,6,0,B|268:124|268:124|256:164|256:164|204:164,2,116,2|8|0
396,124,39476,2,0,B|432:124|432:124|444:164|444:164|496:164,2,116,8|2|8
332,192,40882,1,0
332,192,41351,1,12
264,256,41820,6,0,B|220:296|220:296|192:352,1,116,2|8
100,344,42757,2,0,B|100:216,1,116,0|8
48,152,43695,6,0,B|100:196|152:152,1,116,2|8
204,76,44632,2,0,B|152:32|100:76,1,116,0|8
48,152,45570,6,0,B|12:272,1,116,2|8
108,276,46507,2,0,B|124:344|200:332,1,116,0|8
188,240,47445,2,0,B|240:192|292:240,1,116,2|8
300,332,48382,2,2,B|364:324|400:260|368:196,1,174,2|6
232,196,49788,6,0,B|288:160|268:96,1,116,8|0
216,20,50726,2,0,B|160:56|180:120,1,116,8|2
88,140,51663,6,8,B|32:164|0:224|32:292|88:324,1,232,8|8
168,280,53070,1,2
212,360,53538,2,8,B|324:328|444:360,1,232
441,359,54945,6,0,B|416:272|480:284|448:180,2,173.999994814396,2|0|6
352,340,57288,6,0,B|304:308|304:308|240:320,2,116,8|0|8
432,292,58695,2,0,B|332:228,2,116,2|8|0
500,228,60101,2,0,B|440:192|440:192|440:136,3,116,8|2|8|0
348,136,61976,5,8
348,136,62445,2,0,B|348:224,4,87,0|0|2|0|4
256,124,64320,6,0,B|208:172|256:236,1,116,8|0
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328,264,66195,2,0,B|392:252,2,58,0|2|0
240,228,67132,6,0,B|184:212,2,58,8|2|0
316,172,68070,2,0,B|376:156,2,58,0|2|0
240,120,69007,2,0,B|180:100,2,58,8|2|0
316,64,69945,2,0,B|376:48,2,58,0|2|0
236,20,70882,2,0,B|176:0,2,58,8|2|0
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364,284,73695,6,2,B|348:316|292:332|264:300|228:244|164:264|148:308,1,232,8|2
256,192,75570,12,4,77445
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336,148,80257,1,0
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356,336,81663,6,0,B|232:360,1,116,8|0
152,336,82601,1,8
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116,260,84476,2,0,B|80:260|80:260|68:220|68:220|16:220,2,116,8|2|8
180,192,85882,1,0
180,192,86351,1,12
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412,40,87757,2,0,B|412:168,1,116,0|8
464,232,88695,6,0,B|412:188|360:232,1,116,2|8
308,308,89632,2,0,B|360:352|412:308,1,116,0|8
464,232,90570,6,0,B|500:112,1,116,2|8
404,108,91507,6,0,B|388:40|312:52,1,116,0|8
324,144,92445,2,0,B|272:144|220:144,1,86.999997407198,2|8
212,52,93382,2,2,B|148:60|112:124|144:188,1,174,2|6
224,140,94788,6,0,B|268:252,1,116,8|0
324,176,95726,2,0,B|368:288,1,116,8|2
428,216,96663,2,0,B|472:328,2,116,8|0|8
396,128,98070,2,0,B|444:84|404:24,2,116,2|8|0
304,128,99476,5,8
212,128,99945,1,2
120,128,100413,2,0,B|108:192|44:208,1,116,8|0
32,116,101351,2,0,B|28:-4,1,116,8|2
120,16,102288,2,0,B|168:56|168:56|228:56,1,116,8|0
221,56,103226,1,8
256,192,103695,12,4,105570

From mod queue~ :3

SB - HYPERSUPERCOOL! ;>


[Normal]
00:19:788 - 00:26:351 - remap it, use single circle or slider 1 repeat.
Its hard for normal!

[Hard]
00:26:820 - its too long slider, remap :/
00:30:804 - ^
00:32:679 - 00:34:085 - nothin? why? use spinner then~
01:11:820 - its too long slider, remap :/
01:15:687 - ^

[Collab]
00:32:679 - 00:33:616 - spinner
01:11:234 - unstuck
01:15:687 - too loong !
01:32:445 - 01:34:085 - spinner


Good luck ! ik hou van jou ;33~

As per my modding queue.

General
The storyboard is pretty baller but has a few problems. I'm not a storyboarding pro, but here's what I can make out:

energy.png Fade lasts until 02:13:929, far, far longer than the end of the mp3 and there's absolutely no reason for it. Cut the Fade effect of energy.png at 01:53:234.

Although it doesn't matter much given the SB load isn't that bad, one thing you can do is crop all the energy.png images except the one that makes up the background of the map and trim them as close to the edge of the flamey ball thingy as possible.

Contact a storyboard pro for more help.

Misja's Easy
The volume in the first timing section at 00:04:320 are too loud. Lower it to %25. Also, Timing Section 00:34:294's hitsound volume is too loud. Lower it to about 70%.

Don't use so many sliders. At least on an easy difficulty, create an even number of circle and sliders. Hell, on my Easy difficulties, the circles outnumber the sliders.

Center some of your notes and place more of them on the left side of the screen. It feels like the majority of the notes are on the right. It just feels really weird.

The first section of the song (00:04:320 - 00:19:320) follows something of an alternate beat as shown in Normal. The beat is on a 1/4 divisor. According to music theory, if your first note falls on a downbeat (white tick), the rest of the timeline pattern can have any sort of combination of sliders and note placement you'd like. So, this section of the song (the intro i guess) has notes that alternate on a 1/4.

You can potentially play this section with a timeline pattern such as this, and nobody would bat an eye because it forms a steady beat anyway:



Given this is Easy, all of the notes fall on 1/1...except they shouldn't because none of those notes fall on anything in the song, which is just boring to play. Provided with the fact, that there is a defined beat that simply just falls on 1/4 rather than 1/1, we would be able to create a timeline pattern without confusing new players. Almost like a fake beat.

Here's an example of a timeline pattern I created on Easy, beginning at 00:04:320. I think it might be too hard though. What you have to do is experiment with it, really, and just create patterns that fall on the 1/4 beat.



You don't have to do this pattern as it's strictly an example, but I do want you to experiment with the placement on this section of this difficulty.

00:19:320 (1,2,3,4) - Slider repeating over 2 are unrankable if I recall. Also boring to play. This is done a few more times without the map so I feel no need to point it out.
00:27:288 (2,3) - Don't stack these.
00:48:382 (4) - There's not really any need for this timing section and it feels weird to play.
00:54:945 (1) - Don't stack sliders underneath sliders on Easy.
01:10:882 (5) - Slider is touching HP bar.
01:41:351 (4) - ^
01:42:288 (5,6) - Don't stack (6) underneath (5)

Kyshiro's Normal
The first part of this difficulty lacks hitsounds.


This difficulty lacks a spread. It's particularly challenging for a Normal, similar to a Hard difficulty, until 00:49:788 when it's pitifully easy from then on, using simple 1/1 sliders, almost like Easy. The difficulty fluctuates overal and can be frustrating to play for newer players. I suggest you even out the difficulty on both ends and make it more similar to a Normal, as it's currently possibly unrankable.

00:19:554 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - All of this plays terribly and may or may not be unrankable.
00:48:851 (4,5,6) - Spacing

I'm not going to mod much else in this difficulty because it needs a ton of work that mostly involves remapping the timeline patterns and overall difficulty, so there isn't much point. Fiddle with it yourselves.

Hard
00:26:820 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think this is a bad mapping technique, so I think you should revise it.
01:26:468 (2,3) - Align these so they stack.
Other than that it's fine methinks. Strongest diff in the set.

Collab
For some reason the timeline patterns on this difficulty feel...awkward compared to Hard.
00:26:820 (1,2,3) - All of the notes in this stream are too far apart. Also, the placement of them isn't very elegant looking.
01:05:843 (7,8) - Move (8) below (7), it's placement is confusing.

Entire mapset needs a ton of work.

A-tan's mod~
im a new mooder~if my mod cant helpful to u~u can ignore me~...

[General]
put (SkyDevil Misja Kyshiro) in Tags~

[Misja's Easy]
orz....i cant find problem....

[Kyshiro's Normal]
00:04:671 (2,3,4,5) - distance not uniform~
00:06:546 (1,3) - distance not uniform~1 and 3 alignment~
00:15:570 (5,1) - distance is too close ...i think u can keep uniform with 00:14:398 - 2(end) and 3...
00:19:554 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ~omg................this is too hard!!to normal diff.. ...i think this have a little overmap.......u need to easier for this diff.......
very nice diff~but too hard for normal.....

[Hard]
00:07:601 - slider not too beautiful~i think u can put on last slider point to (x:304 y:192)~←just suggest~
01:25:882 (1,2,3) - too close~u can move a bit...overlap not too beautiful~
pretty good!~ i like this vocal!!~ ♪~
00:19:085 - to 00:19:202 - have a timing no alignment~
00:49:085 - to 00:49:202 - ^

[Collab]
plz~check in ur timing~a lot of no alignment....

Mapset is good!~vocal very nice~
Good luck~

And then I heard I must do the mdos for collab (HATER D<)

_KcN_ wrote:

Collab

1. hp -1 and od -1 ? ~No, this is an insane
2. 00:12:171 - Add a note? like 00:08:070 (3,4,5) ~Maybe not
3. 00:14:046 - ^ ~ ^
4. 00:14:867 (5) - Remove this note? ~No.
5. 00:26:820 (1.......) - oh this stream looks a little hard... ~It is because its an insane o3o
6. 00:34:320 (1) - how about change to this:http://puu.sh/wUqp ~sure
7. 00:45:921 - add note? ~No
8. 00:46:273 - add note? ~ ^
9. 00:47:796 - add note? ~ ^
10. 00:48:148 - add note? ~ ^
11. 00:51:898 - add note? ~kay
12. 01:05:843 (7) - how about change this note to slider or add note at 01:05:960 ~kay
13. 01:07:718 (7) - ^ ~ ^
14. 01:09:593 (7) - ^ ~ ^
15. 01:11:585 - add note? ~ kaaay
16. 01:17:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about use soft audio style? ~I lowered the hitsound volume

nice storyboard ~Ayu's Fault

pedobear420 wrote:

[general]
I think the map looks well designed overall it looks good

[collab]
00:08:421 (4) - doesn't match the music there is no sound there ~it does D<
00:09:124 (6) - the ending to that slider doesn't mach the music fix that. ~It doesnt have to follow the music EXACTLY.
00:11:820 (1,2) - fix those sliders so they match the beat of the song ~no
00:12:171 - there isn't a note here ~no
00:13:695 (1,2) - its like before those two sliders and a missing note in the middle ~nope
00:14:632 (3) - don't hear any note here ~you shouldnt
00:20:491 (3,4,5,6,7) - fix the streams some notes don't match the beat here ~no
00:24:241 (3,4,5,6) - same here with the stream ~ ^
00:39:241 (6) - this note seems weird here ~for me it doesnt
00:42:991 (6) - same here as before ~no
00:45:921 - think there should be a note here ~there shouldnt
00:46:273 - think so here too ~nonono~
00:47:327 (4) - remove this note ~ no ._.
00:47:796 - note here would sound right ~,,,
00:48:148 - put a note here a swell ~wuuut.
00:52:249 - a note here? ~nooo...
FUUUUUUUUU------ GO GET SOME MODDING TALENTS NAO D<

misja056 wrote:

[Collab]

00:38:567 (5) - from 1/2 to 1/4 ~~whats the problem actually?
01:24:945 (1) - Overlaps 01:24:007 (1) - ~fix
01:40:882 (1) - Overlaps 01:39:945 (1) - ~oh yeah a little bit, fix
01:45:570 (4) - Suggest here an extra note with hitsound Finish. ~okay

00:49:554 (1) - From here on no hitsounds please fix! ~already fixed

Ryu wrote:

SB - HYPERSUPERCOOL! ;> ~Still ayu's fault XD

[Collab]
00:32:679 - 00:33:616 - spinner ~maybe not
01:11:234 - unstuck ~?
01:15:687 - too loong ! ~I agree
01:32:445 - 01:34:085 - spinner ~Its special effect timeee~


Good luck ! ik hou van jou ;33~ ~ayu, chu got a lover here XD

Doodley wrote:

Collab
For some reason the timeline patterns on this difficulty feel...awkward compared to Hard. ~ikr, i did the timing at collab, not ayu
00:26:820 (1,2,3) - All of the notes in this stream are too far apart. Also, the placement of them isn't very elegant looking. ~It's also a bpm of 128, which means a slow stream, anyway i should fix the stream a little bit
01:05:843 (7,8) - Move (8) below (7), it's placement is confusing. ~i thought it was confusing if 8 would be above 7 XD

Athena Tennos wrote:

[Collab]
plz~check in ur timing~a lot of no alignment.... ~fixed

Download: Hardwell - Encoded (Ayu) [Collab].osu

[Collab]
00:05:960 (2) - this note is out-of-line with 00:05:726 (1) - make them in line with each other (x:256)
01:17:796 - extend the timing point for this to 01:15:687 - the sliders are ear-rape.

that's it :3

General

Unrankable issues/ things you must fix
Preview times need to be the same
Easy and Collab don't have epilepsy warning checked
Letterboxing should also be the same for all difficulties.
Guest mappers need to be in tags of all difficulties. Add them.
Misja's green lines are unsnapped. FIX
Hard's kiai ends differently than the other difficulties

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Easy

Modder Comments

Try to map your difficulty to actual sounds. Example: 00:04:320 (1) - this can repeat here instead: 00:05:023 -. That beginning just sounds strange. If you have to make the rhythm more complex to map on beat I would recommend doing so. Other than that complaint I think this difficulty is largely fine. Good hitsounds. Although fix the unsnapped green lines.


01:15:570 (1) - Spinner doesn't end in a meaningful way. Extend to 01:18:382 - ?
01:41:351 (4) - I would really prefer this not invading the lifebar.

Normal

Modder Comments

I think I can get over the overlap at the start since the beat here is pretty nice. The intro could definitely use some whistles though. Please consider adding some.

Remove audio lead-in.

00:19:554 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to make sure all of these spacings are exactly 1.2 or maybe even 1.25. The main problem is overlap. This pattern doesn't look the greatest though. I wont judge.
00:49:085 (5) - I think this is fairly easy to mishit being a triple. perhaps just delete and space out because it's supposed to be a Normal.
01:32:445 - This would be a nice sound for a spinner, but it would be cutting it pretty close to the next note pattern. I would risk adding one.

Hard

Modder Comments

Lacking hitsounds at the start like Normal. Please add hitsounds. Also this diff should have more jumps I think. The beat supports lots of jumps and this follows snap where it could be taking advantage of the upbeat rhythm. Here's an example here: 00:49:788 (2,3) - < this combo would work nice for increased combo segments. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/334729 < not lined up the best but this works well there... I would like to see more jumps like that during the first half of the difficulty. Up to you though.

Remove audio lead-in.

00:11:820 - Please map this gap. It doesn't make any sense to have a gap here.
00:22:015 (3,4) - I don't see the point in making this differently spaced.
00:23:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think the beat is more like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/334718 I think you should go through the intro and listen closely to see if you're skipping over beats or not. It may seem like it plays right at first but you'll find that it's only slightly like the actual beat.
00:38:070 (1,2) - Stack better by turning grid snap off and turning distance snap to 0.0
00:45:570 (1,2) - ^ (check a lot of your stacks to see if they can be stacked better. I know it's nazi, but it couldn't hurt.)
01:11:585 - Missed a sound, add note here please. You may also want to reposition those repeat sliders. I don't think it's that flowing to have them head in that direction.
01:17:796 (1) - This to the end, I really like this part of the song. It's nice and flowing. Check those stacks though!!

Collab

Modder Comments

Well I didn't see too much structurally flawed with it. The drain really goes down during those pauses though.

00:24:241 (3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe move this to the right slightly to line it up more?
00:24:710 (7,1) - This is an obnoxious jump. Might just be me though.
00:28:577 (8,1) - This transition curve can be made better.
00:29:515 (8,1) - Isn't lined up correctly.
01:21:195 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Meh I don't like this.
01:25:882 (5) - I'd rather this be a slider.
01:32:445 - Why do you have these gaps thrown around your difficulties? How about a spinner here?


Conclusion

Fix those unrankable issues and contact me. I will recheck tomorrow for a star.

_KcN_ wrote:

Hello,from #modreq
I am newbie modder,this is just suggestions and maybe useless

Kyshiro's Normal

1. 00:20:257 (3,4) - change to reverse sliders?It`s hard to normal players.Fixed
2. 00:22:132 (4,5) - ^Fixed
3. 00:24:007 (4,5) - ^Fixed
4. 00:25:882 (4,5) - ^Fixed
5. 00:48:499 (3,4,5,6) - Strange distance spacing,will confuse normal players.Fixed
6. 00:43:695 (1) - How about change to this rhythm:http://puu.sh/wTWsHmm not really D:

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod~
[Kyshiro's Normal]
00:04:671 (2,3,4,5) - distance not uniform~ Hm. http://puu.sh/z7My Am I doing this right?

Fixed everything from misja056
Fixed everything from Ryu
Fixed everything from Doodley
Fixed everything from TheVileOne

Recheck


Easy

Seems fine. I guess it doesn't really need to be on beat to play well for an Easy. Still just great hitsounding. I love it for the most part. However those parts where the hitsounding gets quiet. It might be difficult to read for some players, because it's kind of disorienting to have the sound just randomly cut out. I'm mostly concerned about that slider that repeats during the sound cutoff. If you could perhaps make that area a bit more readable, I think it would be perfect!

Normal

Remove audio lead-in. It's pointless.

I suggest making that note 5 at -49:320 60% volume like the previous combo. You can add another inherited on the red tick after to bring the volume down to 40% again.

Intro is much improved. It's a lot better without the overlap. However 1.4 distance snap is too quick for a Normal. Please snap to 1.2 through out that slider section. 1.2 is about the limit for how fast those sliders can be read for a Normal difficulty and there's still really no overlap at 1.2.

Hard

Went over hitsounding in irc. That kiai time didn't sound great and some of the triples were in the wrong place. Hopefully the next update will have a much more intuitive hitsounding pattern that uses more of the beat, and it will sound and play better.

Update: Hitsounding is definitely better. However I'll just clarify my orignal suggestion in irc since I had to update my suggestion after I mentioned it. I think I updated it again. Sorry ayu for giving you the run around.

Here is the complete list of adjustments to this part of the kiai

I have to mention though my rhythms tend to change through here. Basically this rhythm would sound nice with a lot of different clap rhythms. The main thing though is finding a clap rhythm that is suitable to hit those triples. It can be done with clap, clap, clap, but you need more claps on all the other sliders.

00:35:023 (3) - Add clap to the end of this, because I think the only way it's going to be readable as a stack is if it's 3 claps.
00:35:726 (6) - Add clap to end
00:36:195 (1,2) - Add clap to start of both of these (It will carry the clap rhythm flowingly through the patterns.
00:37:601 (4) - Add clap to start
00:38:538 (2) - Clap
00:38:773 (3) - remove clap (I know i suggested it here, but the new rhythm supports white ticks and i think makes the rhythm more readable)
00:39:007 (4,5) - Add claps so it is clap clap clap again
00:39:945 (1,2) - Clap to both starts if you haven't already
00:41:351 (4) - Add clap to end
00:41:820 (1) - Add clap to start
00:42:757 (4,5,6) - clap clap clap again - because this time it goes with a better clap pattern)
00:43:226 (7) - clap to end if there isn't one there already
00:43:695 (1,2) - Clap to start (to match 39:945)
00:45:101 (4) - Clap to end
00:46:507 (4,5,6) - I guess go back to clap clap clap
00:47:913 (2) - Add clap to start

I think that's it. If I didn't tell you to remove or add one, don't mess with the hitsound. Tell me what you think, and look at the rhythm in taiko if you have any concerns about the integrity of the beat.

Non- hitsound related

00:38:773 (3) - I think this should be placed more under 2. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/335352
00:42:523 (3,4) - I don't like this change in spacing. How about flipping the triple and correcting the spacing gap?
00:45:570 (1,2) - Make this stack perfect please. 0.0


00:29:632 (4,1) - Please make 1.4 like the other spacings. The overlap shouldn't matter as much.

00:51:898 (4,5,6) - Please turn grid snap off, turn distance snap to 0.0 and make these stacks perfect.
00:54:007 (3,4,5) - I think this could be better. I suggest putting the slider here instead 00:54:476 - and add notes where the slider was. If you have to have a whistle on the slider, only have it at the start in this new position.

01:04:320 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Could use some hitsounding, so taiko players can have a good time playing the beat too. Try clap on every second 1/4th in each pattern.

here's the rhythm

01:04:320 (1,2) - clap on the starts Do this for all the sliders in this rhythm

Collab

Audio volume at the start is so loud. It's really making the lack of consistency in rhythm and low hitsound usage at the start noticable. Why not just use the volume setting you used for Hard?

00:08:538 (5) - Your move points shouldn't end this far off from the center of the slider.
00:05:023 (2) - How about clap on the start?
00:06:898 (4) - ^
00:08:538 (5) - clap on end
00:10:648 (3) - clap
00:11:820 (1) - clap on start
00:12:288 (2) - Add clap on end instead

00:41:351 (6) - This doesn't sound right. I recommend removing two repeats and adding a note on that white tick. Also if that white tick was incorporated into the next combo, it would be perfect. (Bring the next note stream closer to it)
01:34:320 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - These patterns don't look very nice. If you could make them look more symmetrical in some way I would prefer it.

Conclusion

There's other things I could nitpick here and there, but I think I got these difficulties in a well enough shape. Here have a star.

My Mod

[Misja's Easy]

1. 00:27:288 (2,3) better this pattern: http://puu.sh/zaK4
2. 00:39:476 add circle and put the slider to 01:24:945
3. 01:24:476 same^
4. 01:13:695 (1) this position is better:
   

   381,284,73695,6,2,B|365:316|309:332|281:300|245:244|181:264|165:308,1,232

5. 01:24:476 same like at 00:39:476

[Kyshiro's Normal]

1. 00:11:351 (4,5,6) make them symmetrical with (4,5,6 at 00:09:476 ) and fix spacing
2. 00:22:132 (4) one more repeat, delete (5) and add a circle at 00:22:835
3. 00:43:695 (1,2,3) try something like this: puu.sh/zaSm and fix spacing
4. 01:26:116 try this: http://puu.sh/zaUd

[Hard]

1. 00:30:687 (1) add spinner (to 00:32:445) instead
2. 00:47:913 (2) delelte repeater/ delete (3,4) and add slider from 00:48:499 to 00:48:851
3. 01:15:687 (1) add spinner instead^

[Collab]

1. 01:34:320 please make it more curvy try this pattern:
   

   52,72,94320,6,0,B|64:128|108:136,1,52.5
   108,144,94554,1,8
   104,184,94671,1,0
   120,224,94788,2,0,B|164:260,1,52.5
   204,264,95023,1,0

2. 01:35:257 same^ (rotate it)
3. 01:38:070 try this: http://puu.sh/zb3j with this rhytm: http://puu.sh/zb3S
   (copy/paste (1,2,3) / Ctrl+H , Ctrl+R / delete the circle at the beginning and add one at the end / let the whole thing start at 01:38:070 and fix spacing to the next pattern)
4. 01:44:632 you could use the same technique

Good Luck!

GamerX4life wrote:

My Mod
[Hard]

1. 00:30:687 (1) add spinner (to 00:32:445) instead no
2. 00:47:913 (2) delelte repeater/ delete (3,4) and add slider from 00:48:499 to 00:48:851 no
3. 01:15:687 (1) add spinner instead^

no

[Collab]

1. 01:34:320 please make it more curvy try this pattern: no
   

   52,72,94320,6,0,B|64:128|108:136,1,52.5
   108,144,94554,1,8
   104,184,94671,1,0
   120,224,94788,2,0,B|164:260,1,52.5
   204,264,95023,1,0

2. 01:35:257 same^ (rotate it) no
3. 01:38:070 try this: http://puu.sh/zb3j with this rhytm: http://puu.sh/zb3S
   (copy/paste (1,2,3) / Ctrl+H , Ctrl+R / delete the circle at the beginning and add one at the end / let the whole thing start at 01:38:070 and fix spacing to the next pattern) no
4. 01:44:632 you could use the same technique

no

Good Luck!

Will give kudosu if misja056 or Kyshiro find this helpful.

I had to apologize that I totally forgot to make a Diff for this. Sorry. ;w;

Hello～　From#modrequest

It would be nice if I come across so good at English · · ·

[Misja's Easy]

[Kyshiro's Normal]

[Hard]

[Collab]

GOOD LUCK!

ArtBox wrote:

Hello～　From#modrequest

It would be nice if I come across so good at English · · ·

[Misja's Easy]

SPOILER

HP+1
AR+1or2
OD+2（A value of 0 is not first）
Slider Tick Rate 2 to 1

Please correct so as not to overlap
00:10:882 (2) -
00:28:226 (3) -
00:41:351 (4) -
00:54:945 (1) -
01:26:351 (4) -
01:43:226 (6) -

Up to now a wrapping of the slider（I do make it to the beginner is cruel）
00:19:320 (1) -
00:21:195 (2) -
00:23:070 (3) -
00:24:945 (4) -
01:00:101 (3) -

00:16:038 (1,2,3) - 00:17:445 (1,2,3,4) -　This series of flow is too difficult for beginners,
　　　　　　　　　　please be well, such as between the slider

00:42:757 (2) - 00:43:695 (1) - This arrangement may be confused with a beginner,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　please do not overlap the position shift
01:27:757 (2) - 01:28:695 (1) - ^

01:10:882 (5) - Overlaps the HPbar, please shift the position

01:02:445 (2) - So as not to overlap　Let's wrap up of the slider once（I do make it to the beginner is cruel）

I thought that these are non-MAP has been made ​​very beautiful

[Kyshiro's Normal]

SPOILER

　
00:09:476 (4,5,6) - Played also feel bad it looks、00:11:351 (4,5,6) - Please place this in the same way as at least

00:19:554 (1) - Far from here　00:29:632 (4) - Then normal is difficult to make, let's make a little easier
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(I think it pretty hard and normal folding of the slider)

00:34:320 (1) - Far from here　00:49:320 (5) - There are several numbers that they've hidden, should be to make it look like this↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

01:26:116 (4) - wrapping is turned slightly to hide the display 300 of 01:24:476 (2) - in the normal difficulty should be to fix the position here is not so hidden

[Hard]

SPOILER

HP-1
AR-1（Please try again This is absolutely, certainly is UnRanked）

00:26:820 (1,2,3,4) - Please place close to the 0.8 × the DS（But may remain for now, it is easy to be hard hit if closer）
01:11:820 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Is a suggestion here and say I will be more beautiful these look slightly better this MAP is designed to clean, because it is↓
（The only thing your eyes feel saw）
00:11:820 (1) - Here is who I think is beautiful to the horizontal
00:13:695 (1) - ＾（00:14:398 (2) - is a copy of the 00:13:695 (1) - ）
00:50:726 (1,2,3,4) - Because of the bad look, or to place like this will do?↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　（00:51:429 (2) - is superimposed on the 00:50:726 (1) - I think, after the good and If you cast in the DS0.8 ×）
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

01:37:601 (2) - Here is vertically

I think the difficulty of the hard as it can be good and just

[Collab]

SPOILER

00:26:820 (1) - Far from here　00:30:687 (8) - I was here, but I think it may be a stream,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 and you should get this part of MOD to a greater number of people
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (I did not think of good advice )
01:11:820 (1) - Far from here　01:15:804 (9) - ^

GOOD LUCK!

It was hard to understand some things, but I could make out enough of it that had to be changed indeed. Thanks for your mod~

- Storyboard suggestion
You could make text moving with those 2 lines after lines reach the place of text.
[Misja's Easy]
Overall: Sound is too loud, -10%
00:30:570 - i'd suggest to map sliders/circles to this point, because the 1/4 stream starts right here (which you can't map so you put spinner)
00:54:945 (1) - ~opinion - you could move this somewhere else?
01:15:570 (1) - seriously, if you wanna make fade in with sound, use more green lines instead of 1 (sounds ugly :c )
01:43:695 (1) - ^ same but make fade out
[Hard]
CLAPS, THEY ARE REALLY NOISY ;_;
00:54:945 - 00:56:351 - this part is even mapped in easy, but not here?
01:11:820 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could start this stream from somewhere else, it's the same as first one :c
[Normal]
00:54:945 - 00:56:351 - this part is even mapped in easy, but not here?
00:49:320 (5) - spacing?
[Collab]
00:52:366 (2,3) - spacing
01:03:851 (6,7,1) - ^
Well, nothing really wrong but SOUUNDD IS TOO LOUUUDDD
But nothing wrong :3

Marcin wrote:

- Storyboard suggestion
You could make text moving with those 2 lines after lines reach the place of text.

Erm.. Text? Text of what..?

Anyway, Doing some stuff of what you mentioned. Thanks for the star and the mod.

Ayu wrote:

Marcin wrote:

- Storyboard suggestion
You could make text moving with those 2 lines after lines reach the place of text.

Erm.. Text? Text of what..?

Anyway, Doing some stuff of what you mentioned. Thanks for the star and the mod.

I meant this text which slides at start for ex. beatmap made..

Hi, from my Modding Queue

Easy

Nothing to report

Normal

00:49:320 (5) I think the 5 is too close from the Slider's end. Not good to play.
01:04:320 - 01:15:570 You could add some notes here, there are some in the other diffs

Hard

Nothing to report

Collab

Nothing to report

Not very helping, but I'm a debutant in modding; and it's always that ^^
Nothing much to say. Good beatmap ^^
And nice job Short, but very nice. Good luck with your

Hi hi~

Misja's Easy:
In my opinion, the whistle sounds annoying, imo
00:27:288 (2,3) - This can be confusing, I suggest change the position of (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342208
00:42:757 (2,1) - Overlap, put like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342212
00:53:538 (3,1) - unstack this, i think is not necessary than the (3) cover to (1)
01:09:945 (4,1) - Overlap ugly
01:30:570 (3) - Remove NC?
01:42:288 (5,6) - Unstack this

Kyshiro's Normal:
Please, fix the spacing~
Your distance spacing is x0,8, if you want notes that are farthest apart, change the Distance spacing to x0,9 or x1,0... imo
01:04:320 - i think you should map this.
01:28:226 (2) - Spacing

Hard:
Good diff c:
00:42:288 (2) - Stack this
00:46:038 (2) - stack this.
00:49:085 (5) - 1 grid down?

Collab:
00:08:070 (3) - 1 grid down?
00:24:593 (6,7) - 1 grid up

That's all, sorry for my nazi mod xD
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~

As requested here is my modding:


I personally like the music and know that it is very difficult to map, after some changes, im looking forward to see it ranked

[quote="Fenya"]Hi hi~

Misja's Easy:
In my opinion, the whistle sounds annoying, imo => Own choice
00:27:288 (2,3) - This can be confusing, I suggest change the position of (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342208 => I think it fits
00:42:757 (2,1) - Overlap, put like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342212 => I did this one on purpose
00:53:538 (3,1) - unstack this, i think is not necessary than the (3) cover to (1) => I did this one on purpose
01:09:945 (4,1) - Overlap ugly => I did this one on purpose
01:30:570 (3) - Remove NC? => Better be I think
01:42:288 (5,6) - Unstack this => I did this one on purpose

[quote]

[General]

1. Offset needs a check. Even in the editor you can tell some objects are early since the hitsounds come prematurely.

[SB]

1. You have many unnecessary lines in your code. For example, none of your _M events in your .osb serve any purpose. And that's not all. Give it a run-through.
2. Would make more sense for white.png to fade in and out starting 33734.

[Hard]

1. 00:30:687 (1) - This should start at 00:30:570 - , and would make more sense ending at 00:32:445 - .
2. 00:49:085 (5) - Spacing error is obvious.
3. 00:50:726 (1,2,3) - You've throw all of these on the 1/2, when the rhythm of all other objects have been using 1/4. Additionally, 00:51:546 - is very prominent.
4. 01:15:687 (5) - This should start at 01:15:570 - , and either add a new combo here, or remove the new combo from 00:30:687 (1) - .

[Normal]

1. Map starts at the same place in time as the other diffs, yet this has 3000 AudioLeadIn.
2. 00:26:820 (1) - Kickbacks are partially covered by 00:25:530 (3) - ; I don't think I could allow it.
3. 00:36:546 (1,2) - You're asking 128 1/4 in a Normal diff, which I feel is over the top. Same goes for all 1/4 rhythms in this manner in this section.
4. 01:26:116 (4) - Kickbacks are covered by 01:24:476 (2) - .

[Easy]

1. 00:04:320 - Would help to lower the volume of sliderslide in this section.
2. 01:08:070 (2) - New combo should go here instead of 01:07:132 (1) - .