1. Easy (2.73 stars, 234 notes)
2. Hard (4.98 stars, 539 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 578 notes)
4. Normal (3.64 stars, 275 notes)

Crimmi wrote:

Modding, CrimmiStyle!!!

Mod 4 Mod Request accepted!

[General]

Like I said in IRC, there are inconsistancies within the tags with Taiko, Easy & Insane missing "collab" in them.
There isn't a preview point set in Taiko. I'm remove BarnOwlLover,taiko, and collab from the tags until BarnOwlLover finishes his difficulty. It will be removed from the mapset

Note, I might do some Hitsound nazimodding, so bear in mind that you can ignore them if you wish.

[Easy]

02:00:024 - Unsnapped inherited timing point.

00:15:030 (1) - Maybe add Finish? Done.
00:28:154 (3) - ^^
00:31:435 (2) - Add a clap? Done
00:32:373 (3) - ^
00:36:122 (2) - ^
00:45:028 (x) - I don't think an extra note here wouldn't hurt would it? Added
01:31:431 (1) - Clap on the end of the slider? Done
01:31:899 (2) - ^
01:34:243 (4) - ^
01:37:524 (3) - ^
01:38:930 (3) - ^
01:40:805 (5) - Clap? all done
01:41:742 (1) - ^
01:42:680 (2) - ^
01:45:023 (1) - Finish?all done
01:46:429 (3) - Add a clap? Done, will be modifying the volumes to make it fit better.
01:47:367 (4) - ^
01:48:304 (1) - Clap on the end of the slider?
01:49:242 (2) - ^
01:49:945 (3) - ^
01:54:398 (4) - ^
01:55:335 (1) - Add clap on the repeat.
01:56:741 (2) - Clap?all done
02:07:990 (3) - Add clap at the end of the slider.
02:30:020 (7) - Add finish? all done
02:44:316 (4) - Make this slider longer by 1/4. Done i guess
03:00:486 (1,2) - Add clap?
03:01:892 (3) - Add clap on the 1st repeat & the end of the slider.
03:05:173 (2) - Add clap?
03:06:579 (4) - Add clap at the end of the slider?
03:07:517 (5) - Add finish?
03:08:923 (2) - Add clap.
03:10:329 (4) - Add clap at the end of the slider?
03:12:673 (2) - Add clap.
03:15:016 (x) - Add note?All done
03:22:984 (2) - Add clap?
03:23:453 (3,4,5) - Add claps at the end of these sliders.
03:35:640 (3) - Add finish? all done
03:37:983 (2) - Add clap?eh doesn't seem to fit
03:38:452 (3,4,1,2) - Add claps at the end of these sliders. ^
03:42:436 (3) - Add clap?
03:46:420 (6) - Add clap at the end of the slider?
03:47:357 (2) - Add clap?
03:47:826 (3) - Add clap at the repeat.
03:49:232 (1,2,3,4) - Add clap?I have some hitsounds applied to the end. I will give a closer look later.


[Normal]

02:00:024 - Unsnapped inherited timing point.

00:25:811 (3) - add a clap?
00:30:029 (1) - Add finish?
00:37:529 (1) - ^
00:43:153 (2) - ^
00:45:028 (x) - I don't think an extra note here wouldn't hurt would it?
00:52:527 (3) - Add finish?
00:53:465 (4) - Add clap at the end of the slider?
00:55:105 (2) - Add clap?
00:55:574 (3) - Add clap on the 1st repeat of the slider.
00:57:215 (7) - Add clap at the end of the slider.
00:58:855 (2) - Add clap?
01:15:026 (1) - Add finish?
01:18:307 (2) - Add clap?
01:20:650 (4) - Add clap at the end of this slider.
01:22:056 (6) - Add clap?
01:22:525 (1) - Add finish?
01:56:741 (2,3) - Add clap?
02:00:022 (x) - I don't think an extra note here wouldn't hurt would it?
02:07:522 (3) - Add clap at the end of this slider.
02:08:459 (4) - ^
02:10:099 (2) - Add clap?
02:10:568 (3) - Add clap at repeat?
02:12:209 (7) - Add clap at the end of this slider.
02:13:849 (2) - Add clap.
02:45:019 (x) - I don't think an extra note here wouldn't hurt would it?
02:51:815 (2) - Replace with a short slider?
03:00:486 (3) - Add clap?
03:01:424 (4) - ^
03:01:424 (4) - ^
03:02:127 (5,6) - Add claps at the end of these sliders.
03:05:173 (2) - Add clap?
03:07:986 (1) - ^
03:08:923 (3,4) - ^
03:11:735 (1) - ^
03:12:673 (2,4,6) - ^
03:30:484 (2) - ^
03:30:953 (3) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?
03:32:359 (5) - Add clap?
03:49:232 (4,5) - Add clap?
03:51:107 (1) - This spinner ends the song quite awkardly, shorten it to 03:52:513.

[Hard]

00:14:970 - Unsnapped inherited timing point.
01:29:970 - Unsnapped inherited timing point.

00:30:029 (1) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?
00:31:435 (4) - Add clap?
00:31:904 (5) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?
00:33:310 (4) - Add clap?
00:34:248 (6) - ^
00:35:185 (1) - ^
00:45:028 (x) - I don't think an extra note here wouldn't hurt would it?
00:53:934 (3) - Add clap?
00:54:871 (6) - ^
00:57:683 (3) - ^

[Insane]

The kiai is missing in this diff.

00:14:970 - Unsnapped inherited timing point.
00:27:865 - Unsnapped inherited timing point.

1. I dislike that the song is sooo long. I mean it is not a bad song I liked it. But for playing it feels to repetitive. Well... this is just personal thought and does not change the actual mapping quality
2. imo: The combo colors yellow and green are not that contrastful to your main bg. I had no problems with the guest bg.
3. Well just for saying. Your Video quality is good. That means I won't have to use NoVideo mod :3
4. not necessary but your bookmarks are weird. Mostly snapped to 1/8 and i often see no purpose

1. 00:24:405 (2,3,4,5) - Well i dislike to start with such small things but I think it would look nicer if the 3 HC would be over the sliderbow center
2. 00:27:451 (7,9) - would look better if (7) does overlap less with (9)
3. 00:34:482 (3) - clap does not fit there . Claps focus more on the beat than voice imo. So if you want to focus on the voice use other hitsounds.If you want to focus on beat put the clap on the slider end. I mean 00:33:310 (10,1,2) - have claps on 1/1 so they feel right.
4. 00:50:828 - why is this green line snapped to 1/8 o.o? In the hard diff. it is snapped to 00:50:887 - (minor complain i know ^^)
5. 00:52:996 - I miss a HC here
6. 00:59:792 (8,2) - (8)'s hitburst partially overlapps with the slider (2) of the next combo. Is not as pretty as it could be.
7. 01:24:400 (1,2) - they could cross better
8. 01:25:806 (5) - I don't know. I would prefer it if you would map the voice which means 1/4 notes/sliderrepeats until 01:26:158 - or 01:26:275 -
9. 01:35:649 (7,8) - I think they are to close. Put them further away from each other. Plays/Feels better imo.
10. 02:16:193 - add note
11. 02:58:143 (1,2) - (2) feels wrong. I would repeat (1) instead
12. 03:21:578 (5) - I think this one is boring for an Insane. I would prefer a 1/4 stream here instead

1. 00:17:374 (6) - to close ... I often miss this, because of the jump between (4-5). It is to anti-jumpy
2. 00:24:405 (8) - would look better if (5) ends in the hollow of (8)
3. 01:01:784 (6,7) - looks not so good imo. put it further away from (5)
4. 01:03:073 (5) - looks a bit weird for me. Do a better triplet bow with (3,4,5) or a straight line
5. 01:06:589 - add note
6. 03:40:444 (3) - one grid to the right for a better bow. That would fit better with 03:40:327 (2,3,4) - to (1) overall and also fits to 03:39:389 (5,6,7,8) -

1. 00:05:187 (4) - sounds weird. Let it end on 00:05:422 - and you may add a note on 00:05:656 -
2. 00:07:062 (2) - ^
3. 00:08:937 (6) - ^
4. 00:10:812 (4) - ^
5. 00:20:655 (4,5) - spacing
6. 00:22:061 (7) - put that a bit further away
7. 00:26:748 (4,5) - put (4) a bit further away and map the gap between (4,5)
8. 00:27:920 (1) - not sure what i should think of that. Looks nice but the last turn seems to accelerate the Sliderball
9. 00:37:529 - I miss a note here
10. 00:41:747 (4,5) - like 00:26:748 (4,5) -
11. 01:00:027 (1,2,3,1) - weird spacing. Either increase spacing overall or make them the same
12. 01:06:120 (7) - NC, Remove new combo from 01:07:058 (1) - and add NC to 01:07:292 (2) -
13. 01:08:229 (7,1,2) - spacing should be the same
14. 01:13:620 (4) - put that somewhere else. looks ugly. In fact 01:12:213 (3) - looks ugly too (I guess it is just my but heart sliders must have a certain size)
15. 01:19:713 (2,3,4,5,6) - to close to (1)
16. 01:24:400 (10) - very weird slider
17. 01:41:742 (4,5) - map gap
18. 01:42:914 (1) - see 00:27:920 (1) -
19. 01:56:741 (4,5) - map gap. I say that often i know but you should at least put a note on the next 1/1 here. This gap does not emphazise anything
20. 02:58:143 (5,6,7,8) - If you want to stack these sliders try to not overlap any of them.
21. 03:34:234 (4,5) - see 01:56:741 (4,5)
22. 03:35:405 (1) - see 00:27:920 (1) -
23. 03:38:921 (6,8) - both one grid down and one grid to the left
24. 03:49:232 (4,5) - 01:56:741 (4,5)

1. 03:40:327 (5,6) - either on (5) or (6) a new combo. The whole combo is to long for a normal
2. I think the diff is fine. It is uncommon to have a non consistant distance snap for a normal but i don't mind. There wasn't something unfair imo

1. 00:28:154 (3) - Most people dislike more than 1 repeat for easy diffs. I recommend to have no repeats and add a slider on 00:29:092 - 00:29:560 -
2. 00:43:153 (3) - mostly the same like ^
3. 01:08:932 (3) - not sure but you may stack the slider end of (3) with (1)
4. 01:40:336 (5) - NC
5. 01:43:148 (3) - see 00:28:154 (3)
6. 01:52:523 (2) - not sure but i think a NC is good here
7. 01:58:147 (3) - see 00:28:154 (3)
8. 02:23:927 (3) - see 01:08:932 (3) -
9. 02:43:378 (3) - NC
10. 02:58:611 (4) - No slider but a HC on each 1/1 is better imo
11. 03:01:892 (3) - too many repeats
12. 03:05:173 (2,3) - stacks are also bad for easies
13. 03:08:923 (2,3,4) - ^
14. 03:30:015 (3) - NC
15. 03:43:139 (5) - NC

bomber34 wrote:

Like I promised I mod this ^^

[General]

1. I dislike that the song is sooo long. I mean it is not a bad song I liked it. But for playing it feels to repetitive. Well... this is just personal thought and does not change the actual mapping quality Well there were certain parts of the song I wanted to map and that meant I had to map the entire song.
2. imo: The combo colors yellow and green are not that contrastful to your main bg. I had no problems with the guest bg. There is no yellow in my difficulties. And green is default color?
3. Well just for saying. Your Video quality is good. That means I won't have to use NoVideo mod :3 Yes!
4. not necessary but your bookmarks are weird. Mostly snapped to 1/8 and i often see no purpose Resetting all bookmarks

[Insane]

OD - 1? I'd rather keep it difficult.

1. 00:24:405 (2,3,4,5) - Well i dislike to start with such small things but I think it would look nicer if the 3 HC would be over the sliderbow center If I am to take this suggestion I would rather be shown what it looks like, because i don't understand what you want me to do and I think it looks decent as it is. You'll have to prove it can look better to me.
2. 00:27:451 (7,9) - would look better if (7) does overlap less with (9) I think it looks worse when there is a gap. It's why I have an overlap there.
3. 00:34:482 (3) - clap does not fit there . Claps focus more on the beat than voice imo. So if you want to focus on the voice use other hitsounds.If you want to focus on beat put the clap on the slider end. I mean 00:33:310 (10,1,2) - have claps on 1/1 so they feel right. Removed.
4. 00:50:828 - why is this green line snapped to 1/8 o.o? In the hard diff. it is snapped to 00:50:887 - (minor complain i know ^^) I don't really know. Fixed
5. 00:52:996 - I miss a HC here What? I don't know what HC means?
6. 00:59:792 (8,2) - (8)'s hitburst partially overlapps with the slider (2) of the next combo. Is not as pretty as it could be. I do what plays nice, not what looks best. If you have an alternate that plays just as nice as what I have then I will change. Otherwise, 2 is centered and I want 10 goiing up instead of down. So there's no avoiding the hitburst overlap IMO. It also looks fine to me.
7. 01:24:400 (1,2) - they could cross better How? Screenshot?
8. 01:25:806 (5) - I don't know. I would prefer it if you would map the voice which means 1/4 notes/sliderrepeats until 01:26:158 - or 01:26:275 - I don't think it would fit. I chose to map this beat with a lot of sliders, and these sounds don't seem like they would sound nice being mapped. This is the difference between Insane and Hard. Hard has a note heavy approach and so i could note those sounds out. This mapping is different. But if enough people suggest it I will do it.
9. 01:35:649 (7,8) - I think they are to close. Put them further away from each other. Plays/Feels better imo. Made 1.0 and changed the position to look better.
10. 02:16:193 - add note I'll pass.
11. 02:58:143 (1,2) - (2) feels wrong. I would repeat (1) instead Nah. I disagree. you have to hit it a particular way and if you're not good at opposing slider end jumps it's going to feel wrong.
12. 03:21:578 (5) - I think this one is boring for an Insane. I would prefer a 1/4 stream here instead I didn't like that combo. I made it more interesting and turn that repeater into 3 sliders.

[Hard]

1. 00:17:374 (6) - to close ... I often miss this, because of the jump between (4-5). It is to anti-jumpy It is an anti jump. I tried spacing it 1.0 away and it just doesn't play as well as if I wait there and transition. I like it.
2. 00:24:405 (8) - would look better if (5) ends in the hollow of (8) If someone else wants to try to fix that overlap, be my guest. I've tried tweaking that section and if i change the sliders slightly it becomes awkward to play. I've managed to get tit to play and look fairly nice with the overlap where its currently at and don't want to waste my time trying to make a pattern that I've already failed to make work.
3. 01:01:784 (6,7) - looks not so good imo. put it further away from (5) Umm the snap there is already 1.03. How much further than the distance snap I've been using for the whole map do you want these notes. If you truly want me to change show me a screenshot on how far these need to be to be playable and not ugly.
4. 01:03:073 (5) - looks a bit weird for me. Do a better triplet bow with (3,4,5) or a straight line It's a perfect curve. It's curved exactly the same as the sliders.
5. 01:06:589 - add note Meh. It throws off my ability to transition into the next combo. It also would bring the combo to 11 which is unappealing in the center of the screen. It generally just plays better skipping over that sound in my opinion.
6. 03:40:444 (3) - one grid to the right for a better bow. That would fit better with 03:40:327 (2,3,4) - to (1) overall and also fits to 03:39:389 (5,6,7,8) Tweaked the notes around here. IDK if it's perfect. All I know is if I change things around here, it has a tendency to screw things up.-

[AkonFreak's Hard]

1. 00:05:187 (4) - sounds weird. Let it end on 00:05:422 - and you may add a note on 00:05:656 -
2. 00:07:062 (2) - ^
3. 00:08:937 (6) - ^
4. 00:10:812 (4) - ^
5. 00:20:655 (4,5) - spacing
6. 00:22:061 (7) - put that a bit further away
7. 00:26:748 (4,5) - put (4) a bit further away and map the gap between (4,5)
8. 00:27:920 (1) - not sure what i should think of that. Looks nice but the last turn seems to accelerate the Sliderball
9. 00:37:529 - I miss a note here
10. 00:41:747 (4,5) - like 00:26:748 (4,5) -
11. 01:00:027 (1,2,3,1) - weird spacing. Either increase spacing overall or make them the same
12. 01:06:120 (7) - NC, Remove new combo from 01:07:058 (1) - and add NC to 01:07:292 (2) -
13. 01:08:229 (7,1,2) - spacing should be the same
14. 01:13:620 (4) - put that somewhere else. looks ugly. In fact 01:12:213 (3) - looks ugly too (I guess it is just my but heart sliders must have a certain size)
15. 01:19:713 (2,3,4,5,6) - to close to (1)
16. 01:24:400 (10) - very weird slider
17. 01:41:742 (4,5) - map gap
18. 01:42:914 (1) - see 00:27:920 (1) -
19. 01:56:741 (4,5) - map gap. I say that often i know but you should at least put a note on the next 1/1 here. This gap does not emphazise anything
20. 02:58:143 (5,6,7,8) - If you want to stack these sliders try to not overlap any of them.
21. 03:34:234 (4,5) - see 01:56:741 (4,5)
22. 03:35:405 (1) - see 00:27:920 (1) -
23. 03:38:921 (6,8) - both one grid down and one grid to the left
24. 03:49:232 (4,5) - 01:56:741 (4,5)

[Normal]

1. 03:40:327 (5,6) - either on (5) or (6) a new combo. The whole combo is to long for a normal Fine. Although it's really the combo number that not supposed to go to high, not how long the combo goes for in the timeline.
2. I think the diff is fine. It is uncommon to have a non consistant distance snap for a normal but i don't mind. There wasn't something unfair imo

[Easy]

AR -1 ... at least it was a bit to fast for my taste I would oblige however AR -1 doesn't match my spacing and it would require a lot of remapping to make that work.

1. 00:28:154 (3) - Most people dislike more than 1 repeat for easy diffs. I recommend to have no repeats and add a slider on 00:29:092 - 00:29:560 - i'll pass. There's no way Easy players could mess that slider up.
2. 00:43:153 (3) - mostly the same like ^It plays well. Not fixing.
3. 01:08:932 (3) - not sure but you may stack the slider end of (3) with (1) I could, but that would make the angle going into it slightly too steep. It plays better where I have it.
4. 01:40:336 (5) - NC Done
5. 01:43:148 (3) - see 00:28:154 (3) ...
6. 01:52:523 (2) - not sure but i think a NC is good here Done
7. 01:58:147 (3) - see 00:28:154 (3) ...
8. 02:23:927 (3) - see 01:08:932 (3) - ...
9. 02:43:378 (3) - NC Done
10. 02:58:611 (4) - No slider but a HC on each 1/1 is better imo It's harder than what I have there though and i don't map that middle sound in any other difficulty.
11. 03:01:892 (3) - too many repeats meh. You complain that my song is to repetitive and you want me to add more repetitive patterns into it.
12. 03:05:173 (2,3) - stacks are also bad for easies That's my favorite part though.
13. 03:08:923 (2,3,4) - ^The stacks are there to change up the pace.
14. 03:30:015 (3) - NC Done
15. 03:43:139 (5) - NC Done

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

[Easy]
02:43:378 (1) - Is that shape normal, or is it just a mistake ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398717 No it isn't. Fixed

[Normal]
00:16:905 (3) - Can you center it with the Slider ? Like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398724 Fixed
00:34:951 (3) - Is not aligned with the Slider, try that: x:80 y:160 I guess it looks better.
01:56:741 (2,3) - Why not symetrical ? Fixed
01:58:616 (4,5,6,7) - They'll look better like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398726 I didn't like the diamond shape. So I changed it completely.
01:59:553 (6) - x:216 y:72
02:00:022 (7) - x:288 y:192
02:20:646 (4,5) - Not aligned Not supposed to be?
02:24:864 (6,7) - Move them so that the 6 is aligned with 5's end and 7's start Doesn't fit the pattern i'm using there, so no.
03:40:327 (5) - 3 Grid up in grid LvL 3 x:312 y:72 It's supposed to dip like that. It looks better my way.
03:40:796 (6) - 1 Grid up x:176 y:72 i'm keeping it where it is.

[Freak Hard]
00:41:278 (3) - Little Nazi modding but not aligned with the previous Slider
01:05:651 (6) - Bad snap with the previous note, put 0.7x
01:19:478 - I think a note here would fit with the music, and make that part a bit easier to play.
01:41:274 (3) - Stack it better, it's not perfectly stacked

[Hard]
00:28:154 (1) - I would have placed it's start on the previous Red Tick, at 00:27:920 I'm following the beat. I can't hitsound that
00:43:153 (1) - Same here, I'd put its start at 00:42:919 ^


That's all, and thanks for your mod, it was very helpful ^^

pimpG wrote:

BANKAI!!!

general

osb file is empty, remove and full submit
consider removing the audio from video, for reduce file size
inconsistency in combo colors Both done

easy

SPOILER

00:15:030 (1) - move to x136 y112 Sure
00:16:436 (2) - move to x472 y184 Changed pattern through here. The next few points aren't valid.
00:16:905 (3) - move to x360 y232, 2nd curve point to x384 y296, 3rd curve point x448 y304 I used them, but then had to adjust for a reverse selection.
00:18:311 (1) - move to x240 y208 This note doesn't exist anymore.
00:18:780 (2) - move to x176 y312 I have it at 179 319
00:19:249 (3) - move to x56 y288 64 288 is better for my new pattern
00:19:952 (4) - move to x144 y144 Mine is at 142 137

00:28:154 (3) - try this? and maybe clap at repeat/tail? I'm not changing it's orientation. Although due to a pattern change, it's placement has changed slightly.
00:30:029 (1) - 2nd curve point 1 grid right, 3rd curve point 1 grid up, and ctrl j? Position has changed, symmetry is fixed. Don't know why you want me to flip vertically.
..........
00:43:153 (3) - same as 00:28:154 (3) No. I'll keep it.
..........
00:51:121 (1,2) - tiny grid is required to fix the shape The shape is fine. It's not supposed to be symmetrical.
(1) 1st x104 y328, 2nd x128 y292, 3rd x184 y292, 4th x208 y328
(2) copy paste (1) and ctrl j ....

btw i think moving (1) to x136 y184 looks better
00:52:996 (3) - new combo? Done
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00:53:699 (4,5) - spacing Fixed
00:56:277 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:00:496 (2) - looks better if you move it away from previous (2), try x128 y168 Fixed.
01:07:526 (1,3) - try to avoid this overlap, try this: I'd rather not mess with grid adjustments. Especially since i already don't like the start of your suggestion. Skipping.
01:06:589 (6) - ctrl j and move to x128 y352
01:07:526 (1) - x184 y248 Not blanketting, because this is part of a pattern and it doesn't look good that way.
01:07:995 (2) - x256 y152
01:08:932 (3) - x448 y248
01:09:870 (4) - x208 y248
01:10:339 (5) - x104 y304
01:11:276 (1) - x24 y96
..........
01:30:962 (1) - 2nd curve point x144 y160, 3rd x160 y224 I don't want the first slider to have that shape. No change.
01:31:899 (2) - 2nd curve point x280 y272, 3rd x265 y208
01:32:837 (1,2) - the current style does not fits the previous note imo, try this: Since this relies on me actually using your previous suggestion, I have to deny this. Sorry
01:34:243 (3) - 2nd curve point 1 or 2 grids left Done
01:58:147 (3) - same as 00:28:154 (3) ^
..........
02:06:115 (1,2) - copy paste 00:51:121 (1,2) and ctrl j?
02:09:865 (1,2) - spacing
02:15:490 (2) - looks better if you move it away from previous (2), try x128 y216
All handled my way

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02:21:583 (6) - ctrl j and move to x152 y48?
02:22:520 (1) - x208 y152?
02:22:989 (2) - x280 y248?
02:23:927 (3) - x472 y152?
02:24:864 (4) - x232 y152?
02:25:333 (5) - x128 y96? Copied changes from first kiai here.
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02:44:316 (2) - slider end in red tick or white tick I'll pass.
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02:51:581 (1) - remove clap, sounds bad imo, because the next white tick was supposed to use a clap, try whistle at slider start? I like it. Not changing.

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00:15:030 (1) - just imo, but this note current place does not fits the next slider shape, try x280 y104? I'll keep for now, but I will change it if enough people mention it.
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00:25:811 (3,4,5) - i think you should keep 1/1 rhythm here or at least make it a repeat slider I like how this plays. I'd rather not change it.
btw keep in mind you are killing the spacing in this section, (3) is too far from previous note and (5) from next note,
i gess you can do that for symmetry but... this song is long (what a long song : D), you should consider making this diff a bit more simple Easy is the simple difficulty. And Simple gets repetitive in long songs.
if you want to keep this 3 circles you can also try this:
YES!!
(3) x312 y224
(4) x256 y264
(5) x200 y224
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00:27:686 (2,3,4,5,1) - i dont like how it currently looks, i hope its just for me, i dont know what to sugest, any idea? I'm don't mind this part actually. 1 seems a bit off actually. Changed that bit.
00:33:310 (7) - remove clap? Don't know why. It's following pace.
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01:00:496 (2,3,4,5) - small spacing issues, (2) 1 grid left, (4) 1 grid lerft 1 grid down, (5) 1 grid left Fixed.
01:02:839 (6) - 2nd curve point 1 or 2 grids down Fixed
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01:12:213 (2) - ctrl j, rotate by -45 and move to x216 y24? It's right where I want it.
01:13:151 (3) - x0 y192? ^
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01:20:181 (4) - x296 y336 looks better imo I've been moving the notes around. This coordinate is no longer valid.
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01:27:564 (5) consider avoiding the sudden 1/4 note, i sugest you start a slider at 01:27:212 and slider tail at 01:27:564 and add repeat? it will need a small remap in this section.... That is the last remnant of the previous mapping. I'd rather keep the timing the same. I made it more recognizable by increasing the snap.
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01:55:335 (3,4,5) - i think you should keep 1/1 rhythm here or at least make it a repeat slider... I'll pass.
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01:56:272 (1,3) - try to avoid this overlap Nothing I can do about it. Sorry.
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02:06:584 (2) - ctrl h and move to x360 y224 Done
02:07:522 (3) - move this note 1 grid up, and 3rd curve point 1 grid down Fixed
02:08:459 (4) - x168 y168 I have it at 176, 168
02:09:396 (1) - 2nd curve point 1 or 2 grids left Fixed
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02:18:771 (1,2,3) - would be nice if you create something like that: Done

btw
(1) x184 y352
(2) x216 y288
(3) x248 y224

02:20:646 (4) - would need to move to x360 y88 if you use the previous sugestions
02:21:114 (5) - would need to move to x224 y56, All set
btw the current place makes a small spacing issue to the next note:
02:22:052 (1,2) - move (1) to x16 y176, (2) to x72 y176 idc about the spacing difference. It plays well.
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02:37:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - hmm lets try irc mod it, ok? Okay?
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03:08:454 (2,4) - try to avoid this overlap No fix, hardly noticeable.
03:11:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - nice Thanks.
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03:28:609 (2) - 2nd curve point 1 or 2 grids down Slider looks fine to me.
03:32:827 (1) - 2nd curve point 1 grid left, 3rd curve point 1 or 2 grids left Unsure if fixed or not. I'd rather have a coordinate mod
03:34:234 (2,3,4) - this shape looks random, i dont know what to sugest atm, lets try irc mod it too Fixed
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03:36:108 (1) - 2nd curve point 2 grids right
03:37:515 (1) - 1 grid up?
03:38:452 (2) - x400 y328?
03:38:921 (3) - x304 y224?
03:39:389 (4) - x440 y200?
03:40:327 (5) - x312 y24?
03:40:796 (1) - x184 y72? Some done....
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03:43:608 (5,6,7) - strange placing/shape imo, lets try irc mod it Changed. Might change more later.
03:45:951 (3) - 2nd curve point x328 y352 Done?
03:49:232 (4,5) - spacing/strange placing/strange shape imo Changed.

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sliderspeed 1.93? i see your current slider speed (2.0) does not fits the grids, that makes a bit difficult to keep a consistent spacing to circles even in a straight line.. for exemple 00:19:717 (5,6,7) this notes was suposed to be 1.0x spaced, right? but they are not, 1.93 would fix it but you would need to fix all notes spacing, they will increase about 0.05 i gess
btw i'm modding with your current slider speed: I kind of apprehensive to do that

00:17:843 (1) x96 y200 to fix the spacing to the next note? I guess
00:23:233 (4) - spacing, move 1 grid down in you fix the next sugestion Fixed my way
00:23:467 (5,8) - take a look at this overlap, highly sugest you to fix it. try this: ?

(5) ctrl J "ctrl <" and move to x232 y72
you will need to change the next notes a bit ;_;

I slightly improved the bottom slider, but I want to keep the overlap for right now. If enough people bitch at me about it, I will remove.
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00:25:342 (1,2,3) - not perfectly aligned/spaced, use tiny grid move (2) to 428 104. and you should copy (1) and replace (3), move it to x280 y192 Fixed?
00:28:154 (1) - 2nd curve point 2 grids right 1 grid down, 3rd curve point 1 grid down? There's nothing wrong with the sliders as it is
00:29:092 (2) - 2nd curve point 2 grids left 1 grid do wn, 3rd curve point 1 grid down??
00:30:029 (1,2) - spacing Made both 1.02
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00:31:904 (5) - 3rd curve point 2 grids down Done
00:32:607 (6) - x64 y216 It's at 64 221 now.
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00:33:310 (4) - 3rd curve point 1 grid down, 2 grids left? I think fixed.
00:33:779 (5) - 3rd curve point 1 grid up ^
00:34:248 (6,7) - x456 y136 Increased spacing to 1.2 here
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00:36:122 (3,4) - it was suposed to be 1 tiny grid left imo, but would need to move the next notes a bit Fixed?
00:36:591 (5) - ctrl h, move to x72 y296 and 3rd curve point 1 grid right I'm not flipping my slider.
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00:37:997 (2) - 2nd curve point 1 grid left, 3rd curve point 1 grid down Done
00:39:872 (5,6) - x128 y248 Works for me
00:40:341 (1,2,3,1) - spacing Fixed
00:43:153 (1,2) - same as 00:28:154 (1,2) There's nothing wrong with these sliders.
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00:51:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing You can't notice it while playing. No need for me to change.
00:53:934 (3,4,5) -spacing, and imo this shape makes no sense, try something like that: ? I don't like it. Spacing doesn't matter.

btw
(3) x368 y240
(4) 1st curve point x280 y192, 2nd RED curve point x264 y240, 3rd x280 y288
(5) x184 y320
(1) x88 y280
not the best shape but at least it plays better and the spacing is fine

No changes.
00:56:980 (6,1) - spacing Intentional.
00:57:683 (3,4) - spacing, (4) is suposed to be x304 y292 (tiny grid) Fixed
00:59:792 (8) - it was suposed to be x16 y248 I don't agree.
01:00:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - if you agree with the previous sugestion select all this notes and move 1 grid left 1 grid up That wouldn't fit. 1,2 are supposed to be centered around the edge of 00:59:324 (7) -
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01:00:730 (3,4,5) - same as EASY 01:32:837 (1,2) - and you can use the same shape There's nothing wrong with the pattern I have.
01:02:136 (1,2) - spacing Fixed
01:02:839 (3,4,5) - this notes looks random placed because of the next and previous slider shapes i gess, try:

(3) x304 y112
(4) x256 y128
(5) x208 y112
(6) x128 y48

I wasn't going for symmetry. The only part I'm going to look into changing is the end slider, because it's design looks slightly off. I turned it into notes.
01:03:777 (1,2,3) - spacing.. btw this part is suposed to be 1/3 Not remapping my currently playable pattern for a less readable pattern.
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01:08:229 - 1/2 beat slider with 1 repeat? No. I like my current pattern.
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01:09:401 (6,7) - spacing you don't see the butterfly pattern I made?
01:10:104 - same as 01:08:229 No. It's fine where it is.
01:10:807 (1,2) - spacing Fixed
01:12:916 (7,8,9,1) - spacing I don't want to fix. Sorry.
01:13:151 (8,9) - btw, looks strange without a circle in the red tick. add a circle in red tick or remove (9)? It plays perfectly the way I have it.
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01:18:775 - note here? No. I think my rhythm is complete through this part.
01:14:088 (2,3,4) - spacing Intentional.
01:15:026 - consider adding a note here with finish No.
01:15:377 (1,2) - spacing ^
01:18:072 (1,2,3) - looks bad and the shape does not makes sense imo, try this: ?

(1) x120 y368
(2) x48 y272
(3) x80 y136

I'll pass.
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01:19:010 (1) - 1 grid down? I guess.
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01:20:299 (6,7) - suposed to be 1x right? try tiny grid Really doesn't matter. The larger the spacing the better it looks. So that extra .03 will make it look slightly worse.
01:20:885 (9) - 1 grid right No. I'll keep that slider where it is.
01:21:353 (1) - 1 grid up Nothing wrong with this note.
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01:23:814 (5,6,7) - select all, 1 grid right 1 grid down I don't want to mess with this. Sorry.
01:24:400 (1) - would need to move to x48 y120 I have no idea what you're trying to fix. Whatever it is, it aint broken.
01:26:509 (1) - 1 grid down No I'll keep it where it is.
01:26:978 (2) x176 y344 No.
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01:31:548 (6,7,8) - spacing. select (6,7) 1 grid left and (8) 1 grid up Fixed.
01:32:368 (9) - 1 grid right? No. I'll keep it.
01:32:837 (1,2,3) - spacing, as explained in the start of this dificulty mod. try tiny grid? or try something like that:

It doesn't need to be perfect. Only if it looks off does it need to be fixed.
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01:36:352 (2) - 1 grid down? Made 1.0
01:37:290 (1) - ^ I guess so.
01:37:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - lets try irc mod it too ok? I am more than capable of fixing things.
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01:40:336 (1) - 1st curve point x112 y360, 2nd x56 y336, 3rd x48 y272 ? It's already at those coordinates.
01:40:805 (2) - 1st curve point x136 y232, 2nd x112 y176, 3rd x146 y120 ? Done
01:41:274 (3) - 1st curve point x240 y144, 2nd x248 y88, 3rd x312 y64 ? Done
01:41:742 (1) x400 y88 Done
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01:44:086 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - spacing Doesn't matter IMO.
01:46:429 (6) - move 2nd curve point 1 or 2 grids right? looks better imo I agree. Done.
01:46:429 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing ;_; Improved
01:49:945 (3,4,5) - spacing I don't think it matters.
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01:55:335 (1,2,3) - copy paste 01:40:336 (1,2,3) and ctrl j... I think my pattern works better here. No change.
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02:07:522 (5,6,7,8,1) - spacing No change
02:09:631 (5,6) - spacing Fixed.
02:11:974 (11,1) - spacing Intentional
02:12:677 (3,4,5,6) - spacing Improved.
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02:15:490 (2) - 1 grid down Changed next note's position instead.
02:15:958 (4,5,6) - spacing Intentional
02:16:661 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing Improved.
02:16:896 (4,6) - btw try to avoid this overlap? try something like that:

No. That slider isn't appealing. My overlap is fine IMO.
(5) 1 grid up
(6) 1st curve point x144 y48, 2nd RED curve point x192 y48 3rd curve point x240 y64

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02:19:005 (4,5) - looks strange without a circle in the white tick. add a circle in white tick or remove (5)? Not what I wanted.
02:19:474 (1,2,3,4) - spacing Fixed
02:20:646 (1,2,3) - spacing Improved.
02:22:755 (3) - move 1 grid up, and 2nd curve point 1 grid left? Done
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02:23:692 (5,1,2,3,4) - spacing 1,2,3 spacing fixed
02:24:630 (4,5) - strange imo, but i dont know what to sugest atm, lets try irc mod Tweaked the sliders a bit.
02:25:684 (7,8) - spacing Fixed
02:26:622 (3,4,5) - spacing Fixed
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02:28:614 (4) suposed to be a " ~ " slider to work with the next notes:

(4) 1st curve point x304 y176. 2nd x224 y224. 3rd x184 y144. 4th x96 y184
(5) x64 y200
(6) x48 y248
(7) x184 y312
(8) x320 y248
(9) x360 y280
(10) x360 y328 < needs to fix spacing with tiny grid

I'll keep my slider. I don't like where yours takes the notes after it.
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02:38:691 (4,5,6) - spacing Not messing with this.
02:40:566 (4,5,6) - ^ Symmetry
02:41:972 (3) - 1 grid right I guess
02:42:909 (6,1) - spacing Fixed
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02:51:815 (1,2,3,4,5) - select this notes move 1 (holding the other notes too) to x168 y176
02:52:987 (1) - 1st curve point x152 y336. 2nd x56 y256. 3rd x112 y144
02:53:690 (2) - x168 y88
02:53:807 (3) - x208 y60 (tiny grid)
02:53:924 (4) - 1st curve point x252 y36. 2nd x372 y44. 3rd x404 y156 (all tiny grid)
02:54:627 (5) - x384 y248
02:54:862 (6) - 1st curve point x296 y296. 2nd x248 y320. x200 y296
02:55:330 (7) - copy paste (6) ctrl j and move to x248 y208
02:55:799 (8) - 1st curve point x104 y120. 2nd x200 y72. 3rd s296 y120

in the end we have:

^ this is just to try to deal with the next notes
this is the main point of the huge change:


..........huge changes ends here..........

Too different than what I wanted to do here. Sorry.
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02:56:971 (4,5) - this " ) ( " shape allways bother me. try this:?

(4) 2nd curve point x336 y272, 3rd x352 y336
(5) 1st curve point x224 y360, 2nd x184 y320, 3rd x192 y256
(6) x80 y200
(7) x120 y80

Changed what I wanted to change.
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02:58:377 (1,2,3) - spacing Fixed
03:00:955 (2,3,4) - spacing Remapped this part.
03:01:424 (5) - 2nd curve point 2 grids left
03:02:361 (2) - 2nd curve point 1 grid down has no meaning now
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03:06:111 (5,6,7,8) - spacing Plays fine IMO. Don't want to change.
03:07:986 (5) - 2nd curve point 1 grid down What?
03:09:392 (6) - x112 y176 Done
03:09:626 (7) - x160 y296 Done and also pointed down instead.
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03:11:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - nice
03:13:376 (9) - suposed to be x272 y64 i gess Done
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03:21:578 (3,4,5) - spacing Intentional.
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03:23:219 (3,4) - spacing Nothing wrong with it.
03:23:922 (6) - 1 grid down No. I want it starting on the horizontal line.
03:24:859 (8) - ^ ^
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03:25:328 (1,2,3) - spacing Fixed.
03:26:265 (5) - 3rd curve point 1 grid left Moved 1 grid right instead. Adjusted previous slider to match.
03:27:203 (8,9,10) - spacing Fixed.
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03:27:672 (1) - 2nd curve point 1 grid right Done
03:28:257 (3) - spacing I think the spacing looks better the way it is.
03:30:015 (3) - spacing It just looks better the way it currently is.
03:30:953 (6,7,8,9,10) - spacing It's fine. Most streams end up with spacing changes like that.
03:32:359 (3,4,1) - spacing Intentional.
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03:38:218 (2) - spacing Adjusted slightly. Not much I can do.
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03:41:616 (8) - spacing. 2 grids up?Done
03:43:608 (4,5) - spacing It's fine.
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03:45:483 (2) - move to x360 y144 and 2nd curve point 1 grid up Nah. I think I'll keep it.
03:46:420 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing Improved
03:49:232 (1) - spacing Eh the position of 1 needs to stay there. I'll keep as is for right now. It's a small thing.

okay....
i dont think you will change the sliderslpeed to 1.93 so i pointed all spacing issues that i found, try to fix with tiny grid

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my mod allways sucks in insanes but lets see....

00:17:374 (8) - consider avoiding this overlap I don't mind it. Not changing.
00:18:311 (4) - 1st curve point x200 y240, 2nd x256 y264, 3rd x312 y240 Done
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00:21:827 - consider using a circle here, i sugest you move it to x160 y360. and stack the next (1) No. I don't want a circle there. I'm following the vocals.
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00:23:467 (7) - x424 y160 okay
00:23:936 (8) - x304 y192 ^
00:24:170 (1) - x304 y336 ^
00:24:405 (2) - x168 y288
00:24:522 (3) - x128 y288
00:24:639 (4) - x88 y288 All done except I adjust snap to 0.5
00:24:873 (5) - 1st curve point x224 y232, 2nd x264 y280, x224 y344 Changed my way.
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00:25:342 (1) - x376 y336?
00:25:811 (2) - x208 y56? Remapped this bit.
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00:27:451 (7,8,9) - i think the current shape does not mekes sense, try something like that: ?

Stacked now
(7) x368 y176
(8) x320 y148 (tiny grid)
(9) 1st curve point x272 y176, x240 y224, 3rd x168 y224

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00:29:326 (3) - 3rd curve point 1 grid right? Good catch. Fixed.
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00:30:381 (3,4,5,9) - 345's hitbursts overlaps 9's tail. does not affects gameplay but looks bad imo, try this:

(8) x120 y288
(9) x256 y240
(1) x400 y120
(2) x400 y264

Not changing this part.

00:32:373 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - imo, this part is not suposed to be a long stream, remove 8 and 6? Changed.
00:33:427 - if you agree with the previous sugestion you could make a circle here
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00:35:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - no idea what to sugest here, lets try irc mod, but how about this: ? I'm happy with the current pattern.

(1) x96 y48
(2) x216 y128
(3) x256 y128
(4) x296 y128
(5) x448 y40
(6) x296 y224
(7) x256 y224
(8) x216 y224
(1) x96 y48

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00:41:747 (1,2,3) - looks random aligned, try (2) 2nd curve point x464 y304 3rd x416 y352 ? Really don't know why I would need to change the slider points when the alignment is only one grid off.
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00:51:590 (2) - "ctrl >" and move to x360 y40? Unsure what you want me to do.
00:52:293 (4) - looks random aligned, try 2nd curve point x128 y288, 3rd x112 y224 ? Didn't change third point./
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01:00:496 (2) - imo not a good idea to use a long slider with a repeat here, try No.
01:01:902 (5,6,7) - strange alignment imo, try this:

(6) 1st curve point x256 y296, 2nd x200 y264,3rd x144 y296
(7) 1st curve point x56 y240, 2nd x24 y296, 3rd x64 y352
(8) x200 y360 ?
(9) x264 y224 ?
(1) x224 y88 ?

Changed my way.
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01:18:775 (1) 2nd curve point 1 grid left Done
01:19:244 (2) 2nd curve point 1 grid down Done
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01:24:400 (1,2) - imo ugly overlap try this:

(2) 1st curve point x144 y104, 2nd x136 y168, 3rd x192 y200
(3) x272 y32
(4) x88 y64

No
01:25:806 (5) - 2nd curve point x32 y304?
01:26:743 (7) - 2ns curve point x352 y304, 3rd x416 y312?
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01:42:680 (9) - 2nd curve point 1 grid up Done ^^^^
01:50:648 (1) - 3rd curve point 1 grid right
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02:16:193 - consider adding note here i'll pass.
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02:53:690 - consider adding a note here stacked to 2 Added
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02:54:862 (6) - x408 y48 ? Adjusted to 1.5 snap.
02:55:096 (7) - consider adding a note here in x472 y192 No. I'll keep my transition the way it is.
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03:00:486 (1,2,3) - too simple for insane imo Deal with it. I wanted this part to be simple.
03:04:236 (2) - 2nd curve point 1 grid down Done
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03:47:826 (1,2,3) - use same shape as 03:32:827 (1,2,3) ? the current makes no sense imo Moved 2 more in the corner.

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this is finished, hope you like it

star, and good luck Vile and Freak : D

1. default combo colour may not suit for this song

1. AR-1?
2. 00:31:435(2) this may better to me
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3. 00:41:747(1,2)remove note 2 and make this slider end in 00:42:684
4. 01:04:714(3)one grid down
5. 01:40:336(1)remove nc
6. 01:41:274(3)nc
7. 01:41:742(1)remove nc
8. 02:06:115(1)try this
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9. 02:54:393(3,4)maybe 3 x:216 y:360 4 x:208 240
10. 03:19:469(1)make this spinner start at 03:19:235 and end in 03:22:047 and add note at 03:22:516

1. 00:27:686(2)
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2. 00:38:935(4)one grid up
3. 00:42:684(6)something like this?
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4. 02:41:503(1)x:320 y:248
5. 02:42:441(2)x:200 y:176
6. 02:43:378(3)x:320 y:104
7. 02:44:316(4)x:200 y:32
8. 02:51:815(1)remove slider
9. 03:08:923(3)Move center point on 408,96

1. OD-1
2. hitsound too noisy,volume down
3. 00:16:905(6)copy slider 5 and ctrl+h
4. 00:41:278(3)^ copy slider 1
5. 01:01:081(3)move to 01:01:199
6. 01:03:777(8)nc
7. 02:42:441(4)one grid right
8. 02:44:316(8)two grid up
9. 02:59:549(8)copy slider 6

1. 00:53:934(3)just suggestion
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2. 01:04:245 add note

1. OD-1
2. 00:27:686(11)Move center point on 352,168
3. 00:51:590(2)Move center point on 408,128
4. 01:08:464(5)just suggestion
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5. 02:16:193 add note
6. 03:13:376(3)two grid down

Purist wrote:

hi~
m4m from wantuole's mod queue

[General]

1. default combo colour may not suit for this song

I really don't want to use customs sooo...

[Easy]

1. AR-1? I can live with that.
2. 00:31:435(2) this may better to me
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   I agree. I had to compromise towards the end though.
3. 00:41:747(1,2)remove note 2 and make this slider end in 00:42:684 I don't want to make that slider any longer.
4. 01:04:714(3)one grid down Tweaked the spacing
5. 01:40:336(1)remove nc I'd rather not.
6. 01:41:274(3)nc ^^^
7. 01:41:742(1)remove nc ^^^
8. 02:06:115(1)try this
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   It's supposed to go along with the first verse of this.
9. 02:54:393(3,4)maybe 3 x:216 y:360 4 x:208 240 Yes
10. 03:19:469(1)make this spinner start at 03:19:235 and end in 03:22:047 and add note at 03:22:516 Good suggestion. Done

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1. 00:27:686(2)
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   Done
2. 00:38:935(4)one grid up Eh I changed things around here.
3. 00:42:684(6)something like this?
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   Done
4. 02:41:503(1)x:320 y:248
5. 02:42:441(2)x:200 y:176
6. 02:43:378(3)x:320 y:104
7. 02:44:316(4)x:200 y:32 Done^^^
8. 02:51:815(1)remove slider Remapped this part with a nicer looking transition and pattern
9. 03:08:923(3)Move center point on 408,96 I guess so

[Hard]

1. 00:53:934(3)just suggestion
   SPOILER

   
   Changed to match 00:53:934 (3) - . Good catch.
2. 01:04:245 add note Changed parts through here. I no longer have a stack there

[Insane]

1. OD-1
2. 00:27:686(11)Move center point on 352,168 Okay
3. 00:51:590(2)Move center point on 408,128 ^^^
4. 01:08:464(5)just suggestion
   SPOILER

   
   Nah
5. 02:16:193 add note Yes
6. 03:13:376(3)two grid down Umm?

that's all good luck :3

1. The size of the background is kinda odd. You should resize it to 800x600.
2. Why does the Normal diff have a different soundset (soft) than the other difficulties? I suggest you to change the sampleset of the Normal diff to norma for consistency with the rest of the diffs.

• 
  *I hear the hitsounds too loud. I suggest you to decrease the volume a bit. The hitfinishes are too loud and so are the claps imo.

1. 00:28:154 (2) - I don't think adding 2 repeats so suddently to a slider is a good idea since your previous sliders had just 1 repeat. Also, since this is a Easy diff beginners might think this slider has 1 repeat like the previous and they may get confused here. I think its better to replace this slider with a long one without repeats.
2. 00:30:029 (1) - Here's missing a hitfinish.
3. 00:33:779 (1,2) - Stacking notes at starts of sliders isn't a good idea for Easy difficulties. I don't see it as a friendly and easy-to-read note placement so I suggest you to unstack (1).
4. 00:37:294 - Why did you change the sampleset so all of a sudden? It doesn't fit because the song hasn't changed in anything. I think it's better to remove this green line and keep the normal sampleset.
5. 00:36:122 (2) - Try using this slider shape to make a blanket with the previous note (1). Move it a tad to the left, like this. After this, you can place 00:37:529 (1) at x:168 y:264, where (1) was. I think this will improve the look of this part.
6. 00:40:810 (3) - Again, try using this slider shape to make a blanket with (1). Move it a tad to the left like this.
7. 00:43:153 (3) - Same stuff about sliders with more than 1 repeat. Also, you forgot to add a hitfinish at the start of this slider.
8. 00:52:996 (1) ~ 00:59:324 (2) - I highly dislike this part. It has too much notes at red ticks and that is too much for a Easy diff imo. You did it before a couple of times and since it fit with the music I agreed with it. But here I think you could have done something 1/1. 00:53:465 - here you can hear the voice too so it could be mapped by making the slider (1) end at the next white tick. For example, making this part (00:52:996 (1,2,1,2) like this is muuuch better than before. Also it is consistent with the previous patterns with sliders at red ticks. I also suggest you to do that pattern shown in the picture at 00:56:277 (1,2,3,4). Well, I think you should remap a bit this part like that to make it more easier and suitable for an Easy.
9. 01:01:902 (3) - I think adding a nc here is good since I personally think that this section has too long combos so reducing them a bit would be good.
10. 01:05:651 (5) - ^
11. 01:08:932 (3) - I think a hitfinish sounds too loud and unfitting. I think it sounds better if you remove it.
12. 01:09:870 (4) - Same thing as above about nc ^ (or add it to the previous slider)
13. 01:17:604 (5,1) - This isn't folloowing anything. If you listen carefully it is even better to keep following a 1/1 rhythm instead of adding random notes at red ticks. http://puu.sh/1sJjy
14. 01:21:588 (2) - Here's missing a hitfinish (at the end of this slider).
15. 01:33:305 (2) - To make this pattern visually better move this slider a bit down. Preferably to x:408 y:224.
16. 01:35:649 (4) - For consistency with your previous pattern 00:20:655 (1) add nc here.
17. 01:45:023 - Why soft sampleset o.o?
18. 01:52:523 (1) - Move this slider a grid to the right to perfectly make symmetry with the previous slider (1).
19. 01:57:210 (2) - The way that 01:55:335 (4) covers a bit of this slider looks bad. To make the map look more clean try making a blanket with (2) like this.
20. 02:06:115 (1) - This slider without hitsounds sounds and feels kinda dull and empty. I suggest you to add a whistle at the start of it.
21. 02:07:990 (1,2,3) - Oh this section again .. well I'm not gonna repeat all what I wrote previously so try to follow what I told you about 00:52:996 (1) ~ 00:59:324 (2).
22. 02:16:896 (3) - Add nc here if you did what I suggested you about the 1st kiai ncs. I'm not gonna repeat the rest of suggestions so I just wanted to say that c:
23. 02:28:145 (5) - Hm this part sounds a bit different from the 1st kiai (im not sure though lol). Adding nc here to avoid a combo of 7 is a good idea.
24. 02:41:503 (1,2,1,2) - This part sounds very odd because you ignored a big white tick at 02:43:144 in which you can hear a emphasized sound. As I said earlier, I think adding notes at red ticks like this is unnecessary, might be confusing for beginners and sounds worse than 1/1 notes. Sooo I think it would be better if you rearrange this part a bit with some notes at red ticks if you want but try to place something at that white tick. Feels weird to hear such a hitfinish-like sound at that white tick ignored while playing imo.
25. 02:51:581 (1,2) - Sounds weird since you didn't mapped the whole break and this is like part of it so I think its better to just add a circle at 02:52:518 with hitfinish and deleting the rest.
26. 03:15:016 (4) - Hmmm this is very simple and like a minor detail. I think placing this note at x264 y:168 looks much better than where you placed it imo.
27. 03:25:797 (1) - ^ like above. Try moving this slider to x:496 y:312 to make this pattern look better.
28. 03:35:640 (2) - Here's missing a hitfinish.
29. 03:37:515 (1) - ^?
30. 03:43:139 (1) - Could you improve this slider shape ? The curve looks kinda bad imo.
31. 03:49:232 (2,3,4,5) - This symmetric pattern looks good but you didn't use distance snap so I think you should snap properly these sliders.
32. 03:50:170 (3) - Missing hitfinish at this slider end.
    
    This needs muuuch more work. I suggest you to improve most of the sliders with the new perfect sliders tool to improve the looking of the difficulty in general since this map seems to be old and mapped when the tool wasn't even implemented to the game.

1. 00:23:467 (3) - This slider is a bit out of the screen. You should move it a tad up.
2. 00:27:920 (3) - This slider sounds really awful tbh. Sliders at red tick sound bad and even more when you skip a big white tick by doing this. You should place this slider at the next white tick to keep following the music
3. 00:30:029 (1) - Missing hitfinish at the start and missing clap at the end.
4. 00:37:529 (1) - Missing hitfinish.
5. 00:38:466 (3) - What is this finish here for? It doesn't even fit with the music.
6. 00:40:810 (5) - This hitfinish sounds too loud and unnecessary. I suggest you to remove it.
7. 00:43:153 (1) - A hitfinish at the start of this slider would sound good.
8. 00:56:629 (2) - Notes at red tick in a normal diff >ok. Notes at blue ticks at normal diffs >nope. Really, it's too confusing for beginners to click notes at blue ticks. You shouldn't do this if it isn't even necessary. To avoid this I suggest you to map this part with sliders.
9. 01:06:589 (5) - Missing clap at the end.
10. 01:11:276 (1) - Kinda nazi lol move this slider 1 grid to the left to make a better visual pattern with the previous slider. (to align them)
11. 01:19:010 (2,3,4) - This pattern looks too.. weird. Try making your patterns look more clean and pretty. I suggest you to copy the slider (1) so these 2 sliders have the same shape, and then perhaps try positioning them like this?
12. 01:22:056 (1) - Missing hitfinish at the end.
13. 01:27:564 (5) - Same thing about notes at blue ticks.
14. 01:30:493 (1) - This note gets covered up by the spinner-osu thing. Move it a bit down to avoid this.
15. 01:45:023 (1) - Missing hitfinish.
16. 01:54:398 (1) - This hitfinish sounds really out of place. I think its better if you remove it.
17. 01:56:272 (1) - ^
18. 01:57:679 (3) - Finish at the end?
    
    Well the stuff keep going like that. I mean, in the rest of the map you repeated the same issues so if you find those points useful try applying them to the rest of the map. I don't like the volume of the samples, it is like in the easier diff. They sound too loud. Also, the spacing of the notes is too big. I also dislike how you in some parts changed the spacing just to make symmetry. I suggest you the same thing I suggested you to do with your Easy diff: improve your sliders with the new slider tool.

• 
  *Oh god this hitsound volume really rape my ears. Please decrease it, it's too much. Also try using soft hitsounds from the start to 00:10:812 (4).
  *Ah and if you're going to map the intro, map it entirely. Don't start mapping the half of it all of a sudden. Everything after the red timeline is mappable..
  *You added an extra red timeline at 00:40:927. Remove it. It doesn't make any sense.

1. 00:17:843 - This part feels to empty. Following just the voice makes the diff dull and monotonous to play imo. I suggest you to fill up empty spaces like this one with notes.
2. 00:23:116 (4) - Overmapped note. There's no sound here and this note doesn't even fit so you should remove it.
3. 00:23:702 (7) - This slider's curve looks bad.. try improving it with the new perfect sliders tool. Also, since at the end of the slider the melody changes (in fact, the voice) try adding a nc here. A nc with a number of 10+ is bad and should be avoided if it isn't necessary.
4. 00:27:217 - O.O You're following the voice, okay, but the singer can be heard here at this white tick so... add a note?
5. 00:27:920 (1) - This slider shouldn't start here. It should start at the next white tick. Add a note here and move this slider forward to 00:28:154.
6. 00:33:076 (1) - Make a better curve.. like this.
7. 00:33:779 (2,3) - The space between these two notes feels too empty. I suggest you to replace them with a slider.
8. 00:36:122 (6,7,8) - This pattern looks bad and flows bad. Don't do symmetric patterns just because they look good. That is not right. Try making patterns that feel good to play.
9. 00:37:529 - Don't ignore big white ticks like this and even more when you can hear a hitfinish-like sound in the music. Conclusion: add a note here..
10. 00:38:114 (3) - Overmap
11. 00:39:169 (1) - What's with this unspected jump? It's too much and doesn't fit with the music. I would rather fix the spacing here.
12. 00:40:341 (6) - For consistency with your previous nc add nc here.
13. 00:42:919 (1) - Don't start spinners at blue ticks when it is not necessary. I suggest you to move it forward to the next red tick.
14. 00:54:637 (1,2,1,2,3) - This part flows bad.. I neither like the pattern but to keep it and make it feel a bit better try selecting 00:55:105 (1,2) and then press ctrl+H.
15. 01:02:605 (6) - This shape is o.o I don't know how to say it. Looks very unfitting. I think you should make it simplier, by deleting 1 white point from it. (http://puu.sh/1t9sr)
16. 00:55:105 (1) - This nc isn't necessary so you should remove it imo.
17. 01:07:526 (4) - Missing hitfinish.
18. 01:12:213 (3) - I suggest you to remove the whistle sound from the slider track. Sounds too noisy
19. 01:15:963 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - You tried to follow the voice but the voice doesn't sound like this. The correct way to follow it is this one.
20. 01:19:478 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ http://puu.sh/1t9yD
21. 02:57:205 (3,4,5,6) - This overlap looks awful ;-; really, try avoiding patterns like this, they don't play nor look right.
    
    The problems are those listed above that keep being repeated in the whole diff. Try fixin those, really. This isn't rankable as it is..

1. 00:22:647 (2) - Sounds a bit overmapped and unnecessary. I think this part sounds better without this note
2. 00:32:959 (2) - ^
3. 01:06:589 - Missing note. This sounds too empty and feels awkward to play without a note here.
4. 01:17:604 (4,1) - Since the voice keeps singing here you can take advantage of it by replacing these 2 notes with a slider. Sounds better and fits much more with the music.
5. 01:18:658 (3) - This note at a blue tick isn't following anything. I suggest you to move it forward to the next white tick. Makes much more sense.
6. 01:52:406 (2) - Sounds kinda overmapped
7. 01:56:741 (1) - Why do you skip the section from 01:56:741 to 01:58:147 with this spinner? You should map that part like you did with the rest of the map. Just for consistency.
8. 02:27:676 (8) - This jump is too confusing and doesn't fit with the music. You should fix the spacing here
9. 02:45:019 - I'll repeat this again o.o don't ignore big white ticks and even more when you can hear a emphasized sound in the music. So.. add a note here?
10. 03:13:610 (1) - This spinner sounds so unfitting. It should be starting where 03:13:376 (9) is so my suggestion is removing 9 and moving this spinner there.
11. 03:30:953 (6,7,8,9,10) - Overmaaaap
12. 03:35:640 (4) - Hitfinish at the start?
13. 03:39:624 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Moar overmap
14. 03:50:638 (4) - Hitfinish here too?
    
    Random overmapped triplets everywhere o.o try avoiding these. Uhmm and the flow is weird. It's not bad but it isn't that good neither.

• 
  Basically same issues and stuff about your Hard diff. I don't want to write more, I'm very tired.

Kei wrote:

Hey TVO. I'm very sorry about the biiiiiig delay. I was very busy with school and blah blah you know.

[General]

1. The size of the background is kinda odd. You should resize it to 800x600. I really don't want to. The resolution is almost square, it distorts when I save it as 800x600.
2. Why does the Normal diff have a different soundset (soft) than the other difficulties? I suggest you to change the sampleset of the Normal diff to norma for consistency with the rest of the diffs. Because i'm not consistent with how I set hitsounds. I have my volumes set based on the pace of the song and how many notes are mapped.

[Easy]

• 
  *I hear the hitsounds too loud. I suggest you to decrease the volume a bit. The hitfinishes are too loud and so are the claps imo. I don't think so.

1. 00:28:154 (2) - I don't think adding 2 repeats so suddently to a slider is a good idea since your previous sliders had just 1 repeat. Also, since this is a Easy diff beginners might think this slider has 1 repeat like the previous and they may get confused here. I think its better to replace this slider with a long one without repeats. I like this slider. I really don't want to change it.
2. 00:30:029 (1) - Here's missing a hitfinish. Fixed
3. 00:33:779 (1,2) - Stacking notes at starts of sliders isn't a good idea for Easy difficulties. I don't see it as a friendly and easy-to-read note placement so I suggest you to unstack (1). Nothing I can do. I had a pattern there that required a different timeline setup, and this was the only way I could make the pattern fit properly with the current timeline. I have to stack and I don't really want to change it unless I know what I'm doing is going to make it better.
4. 00:37:294 - Why did you change the sampleset so all of a sudden? It doesn't fit because the song hasn't changed in anything. I think it's better to remove this green line and keep the normal sampleset. I agree. Removed
5. 00:36:122 (2) - Try using this slider shape to make a blanket with the previous note (1). Move it a tad to the left, like this. After this, you can place 00:37:529 (1) at x:168 y:264, where (1) was. I think this will improve the look of this part. Unfortunately if I did this, it would put 00:37:529 (1,2) - too far to the left and I would never be able to fit the whole part after in the space available.
6. 00:40:810 (3) - Again, try using this slider shape to make a blanket with (1). Move it a tad to the left like this. I have messed around with this part. The blankets aren't perfect, but they can't be perfect.
7. 00:43:153 (3) - Same stuff about sliders with more than 1 repeat. Also, you forgot to add a hitfinish at the start of this slider. Remapped this part and I don't want a hit finish at the start of this slider. I only do that in Hard
8. 00:52:996 (1) ~ 00:59:324 (2) - I highly dislike this part. It has too much notes at red ticks and that is too much for a Easy diff imo. You did it before a couple of times and since it fit with the music I agreed with it. But here I think you could have done something 1/1. 00:53:465 - here you can hear the voice too so it could be mapped by making the slider (1) end at the next white tick. For example, making this part (00:52:996 (1,2,1,2) like this is muuuch better than before. Also it is consistent with the previous patterns with sliders at red ticks. I also suggest you to do that pattern shown in the picture at 00:56:277 (1,2,3,4). Well, I think you should remap a bit this part like that to make it more easier and suitable for an Easy. Please do not suggest things that sound worse than the way I have it. Rhythm is always better than no rhythm. Also those are not slider sounds, so it sounds bad with the slide. I agree it is a bit difficult, but the alternatives aren't any better. I'd rather have a nice sounding part that's slightly too hard than an Easy part that sounds terrible. Although I might look into an alternative.
9. 01:01:902 (3) - I think adding a nc here is good since I personally think that this section has too long combos so reducing them a bit would be good. Done
10. 01:05:651 (5) - ^ ^
11. 01:08:932 (3) - I think a hitfinish sounds too loud and unfitting. I think it sounds better if you remove it. I want to keep for now.
12. 01:09:870 (4) - Same thing as above about nc ^ (or add it to the previous slider) Done
13. 01:17:604 (5,1) - This isn't folloowing anything. If you listen carefully it is even better to keep following a 1/1 rhythm instead of adding random notes at red ticks. http://puu.sh/1sJjy It sounds perfectly fine. I don't want to change this right now. I like how it plays.
14. 01:21:588 (2) - Here's missing a hitfinish (at the end of this slider). Added
15. 01:33:305 (2) - To make this pattern visually better move this slider a bit down. Preferably to x:408 y:224. Mirrored 01:31:899 (2) - instead. Looks better.
16. 01:35:649 (4) - For consistency with your previous pattern 00:20:655 (1) add nc here. Done
17. 01:45:023 - Why soft sampleset o.o? Because I started with it, and then the tone changed so i couldn't alternate anymore.
18. 01:52:523 (1) - Move this slider a grid to the right to perfectly make symmetry with the previous slider (1). Done
19. 01:57:210 (2) - The way that 01:55:335 (4) covers a bit of this slider looks bad. To make the map look more clean try making a blanket with (2) like this. I fixed the overlap but I do not really know how to replicate the notes in the screenshot.
20. 02:06:115 (1) - This slider without hitsounds sounds and feels kinda dull and empty. I suggest you to add a whistle at the start of it. Added whistles on both ends, made the first part soft hitsounds too, and added whistles to that one as well.
21. 02:07:990 (1,2,3) - Oh this section again .. well I'm not gonna repeat all what I wrote previously so try to follow what I told you about 00:52:996 (1) ~ 00:59:324 (2). ...
22. 02:16:896 (3) - Add nc here if you did what I suggested you about the 1st kiai ncs. I'm not gonna repeat the rest of suggestions so I just wanted to say that c: Done
23. 02:28:145 (5) - Hm this part sounds a bit different from the 1st kiai (im not sure though lol). Adding nc here to avoid a combo of 7 is a good idea. It is different. I lowered the volume by 10% in first kiai. I removed the lowered volume in first kiai.
24. 02:41:503 (1,2,1,2) - This part sounds very odd because you ignored a big white tick at 02:43:144 in which you can hear a emphasized sound. As I said earlier, I think adding notes at red ticks like this is unnecessary, might be confusing for beginners and sounds worse than 1/1 notes. Sooo I think it would be better if you rearrange this part a bit with some notes at red ticks if you want but try to place something at that white tick. Feels weird to hear such a hitfinish-like sound at that white tick ignored while playing imo. I ignore the white ticks in most of the difficulties xd
25. 02:51:581 (1,2) - Sounds weird since you didn't mapped the whole break and this is like part of it so I think its better to just add a circle at 02:52:518 with hitfinish and deleting the rest. I'll keep. I map these in every difficulty.
26. 03:15:016 (4) - Hmmm this is very simple and like a minor detail. I think placing this note at x264 y:168 looks much better than where you placed it imo. Done
27. 03:25:797 (1) - ^ like above. Try moving this slider to x:496 y:312 to make this pattern look better. Done
28. 03:35:640 (2) - Here's missing a hitfinish. Filled in all the missing hit finishes
29. 03:37:515 (1) - ^? ^^^
30. 03:43:139 (1) - Could you improve this slider shape ? The curve looks kinda bad imo. Broke it up.
31. 03:49:232 (2,3,4,5) - This symmetric pattern looks good but you didn't use distance snap so I think you should snap properly these sliders. I used distance snap. It's snapped to 1.2.
32. 03:50:170 (3) - Missing hitfinish at this slider end. There's a hit finish?
    
    This needs muuuch more work. I suggest you to improve most of the sliders with the new perfect sliders tool to improve the looking of the difficulty in general since this map seems to be old and mapped when the tool wasn't even implemented to the game. Start with the old, finish with the old.

[Normal]

1. 00:23:467 (3) - This slider is a bit out of the screen. You should move it a tad up. Raised a bit.
2. 00:27:920 (3) - This slider sounds really awful tbh. Sliders at red tick sound bad and even more when you skip a big white tick by doing this. You should place this slider at the next white tick to keep following the music Replaced with a note on white tick
3. 00:30:029 (1) - Missing hitfinish at the start and missing clap at the end. Added
4. 00:37:529 (1) - Missing hitfinish. Yep
5. 00:38:466 (3) - What is this finish here for? It doesn't even fit with the music. >.< I don't know what I was thinking.
6. 00:40:810 (5) - This hitfinish sounds too loud and unnecessary. I suggest you to remove it. Fixed >.<
7. 00:43:153 (1) - A hitfinish at the start of this slider would sound good. Done
8. 00:56:629 (2) - Notes at red tick in a normal diff >ok. Notes at blue ticks at normal diffs >nope. Really, it's too confusing for beginners to click notes at blue ticks. You shouldn't do this if it isn't even necessary. To avoid this I suggest you to map this part with sliders. It's not confusing. However I agree it doesn't play the best. So I changed it.
9. 01:06:589 (5) - Missing clap at the end. Yep
10. 01:11:276 (1) - Kinda nazi lol move this slider 1 grid to the left to make a better visual pattern with the previous slider. (to align them) I think fixed.
11. 01:19:010 (2,3,4) - This pattern looks too.. weird. Try making your patterns look more clean and pretty. I suggest you to copy the slider (1) so these 2 sliders have the same shape, and then perhaps try positioning them like this? Having trouble replicating the shapes...
12. 01:22:056 (1) - Missing hitfinish at the end. Yep
13. 01:27:564 (5) - Same thing about notes at blue ticks. Took some slight rearranging but fixed.
14. 01:30:493 (1) - This note gets covered up by the spinner-osu thing. Move it a bit down to avoid this. :/ I kind of like where it is currently. I don't really want to fix this.
15. 01:45:023 (1) - Missing hitfinish. Fixed
16. 01:54:398 (1) - This hitfinish sounds really out of place. I think its better if you remove it. Sounds okay to me
17. 01:56:272 (1) - ^ ^
18. 01:57:679 (3) - Finish at the end? Sure
    
    Well the stuff keep going like that. I mean, in the rest of the map you repeated the same issues so if you find those points useful try applying them to the rest of the map. I don't like the volume of the samples, it is like in the easier diff. They sound too loud. Also, the spacing of the notes is too big. I also dislike how you in some parts changed the spacing just to make symmetry. I suggest you the same thing I suggested you to do with your Easy diff: improve your sliders with the new slider tool.

[Hard]

1. 00:22:647 (2) - Sounds a bit overmapped and unnecessary. I think this part sounds better without this note
2. 00:32:959 (2) - ^
3. 01:06:589 - Missing note. This sounds too empty and feels awkward to play without a note here.
4. 01:17:604 (4,1) - Since the voice keeps singing here you can take advantage of it by replacing these 2 notes with a slider. Sounds better and fits much more with the music.
5. 01:18:658 (3) - This note at a blue tick isn't following anything. I suggest you to move it forward to the next white tick. Makes much more sense.
6. 01:52:406 (2) - Sounds kinda overmapped
7. 01:56:741 (1) - Why do you skip the section from 01:56:741 to 01:58:147 with this spinner? You should map that part like you did with the rest of the map. Just for consistency.
8. 02:27:676 (8) - This jump is too confusing and doesn't fit with the music. You should fix the spacing here
9. 02:45:019 - I'll repeat this again o.o don't ignore big white ticks and even more when you can hear a emphasized sound in the music. So.. add a note here?
10. 03:13:610 (1) - This spinner sounds so unfitting. It should be starting where 03:13:376 (9) is so my suggestion is removing 9 and moving this spinner there.
11. 03:30:953 (6,7,8,9,10) - Overmaaaap
12. 03:35:640 (4) - Hitfinish at the start?
13. 03:39:624 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Moar overmap
14. 03:50:638 (4) - Hitfinish here too?
    
    Random overmapped triplets everywhere o.o try avoiding these. Uhmm and the flow is weird. It's not bad but it isn't that good neither.

[Insane]

• 
  Basically same issues and stuff about your Hard diff. I don't want to write more, I'm very tired.

__________________________

In general, you can improve every diff with the new sliders tool. Avoid overmapping, make some patterns look more pretty and clean and that's it.
Good luck