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yanlu
From baka suirenn05's PM = 3=/

私は初心者です> A<"

[easy]

look's fine~nice playing w

[suirenn's Normal]

AR-1 okay?

00:53:637 - add note (just 提案*
01:25:423 Add note
00:38:816 - add note
00:59:351 - ^
01:59:530 - add note
00:36:137 (4) - silder change :00:36:137 - 00:36:494
00:42:209 (6) - silder change: 00:42:209 - 00:42:566

同色combo 同じ ラジアン >A<
here:
00:18:994 (3) - silder ラジアン 一樣(1)(2)
00:30:423 (5) - 弧度
00:33:637 (6) - ^
00:36:137 (4) - ^
00:58:637 (3) - 弧
01:06:852 (4) - ^
01:18:637 (3) - ^
01:37:566 (2) - ^
01:45:244 (7) - ^
01:27:387 (3) - 弧
01:53:994 (7) - ^
no same ラジアン(?)silder~
hmm...change?


[Rare's Hard]

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330000
00:44:709 (6) - this when I open HD mod can't tap well (strange blocking...

[Insane]

fine~
To long stream! scream!!

以上全体すべてのmod~
Rare

yanlu wrote:

[Rare's Hard]

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330000
00:44:709 (6) - this when I open HD mod can't tap well (strange blocking... sry no change
thanks for modding ~
Topic Starter
MiLu
>yanlu
thank you for modding :)
remi5
chu(^3^)
ganbatte~!!
Topic Starter
MiLu

rem1rya wrote:

chu(^3^)
ganbatte~!!
ありがとう(^3^)
KSHR
modding ;)


[Easy]
01:27:209 (3) - finish,whistle,whistle,whistle,finishっていう順にこの部分だけ妙に音が密集してる気がしたかも 終点のwhistle削除?
01:34:351 (5) - nc付け忘れ
01:35:780 (7) - ここだけ今までの音の付け方とちょっと違ってる 01:24:352 (3) - これと同じ付け方でOKだと思う

[しょたこん]
whistleの使い方に規則性がなくてどうしてもバラバラに聞こえちゃう(特にサビ~終わり辺り)
Hard、Insaneと違ってEasy、Normalは配置でそこまでの音を取ることができないから
曲に合わせてwhistleを置くより、パターン付けでwhistleを置いたほうが綺麗に聞こえるんじゃないかなぁって
もちろん、曲に合わせて置けるところがあるならそれが一番いいからそうしたほうがいいんだろうけど

00:17:923 (2) - 00:18:637~00:19:709の部分だけ少し静かな感じになるから、この範囲に付いてるwhistleちょっと浮いてる印象
00:25:780 (1) ~ 00:48:280 (6) - whistleが2ヵ所しかなくて浮いてるように感じる whistleを置くのであればパターンをつけて置いたほうがいいのかも
例えば この位置にwhistle
00:26:137 (2) - 終点
00:27:209 (5) - ^
00:28:994 (3) - 返し
00:30:423 (5) - ^
00:32:209 (3) - 始点
00:33:637 (6) - ^
00:34:709 (1) - 返し
00:36:137 (4) - ^
00:37:209 (1) - 終点
00:38:994 (4) - 返し
00:40:780 (3) -
00:42:209 (6) - 始点
00:43:637 (2) -
00:44:352 (4) - 終点
00:46:494 (3) - 始点
00:47:923 (5) -
00:48:637 (1) ~ 00:59:709 (4) - ドラムのスネアの音にwhistleをつけてるなら、00:52:923 (3) と00:58:637 (3) のそれぞれの終点のwhistleを削除

[られ]
00:16:851 (3) - whistle?え?ん?ええ??おっとー???
00:47:923 (3) - 2回目の返しにwhistle入れてみては?
00:48:280 (4) - 歌詞で言うと「胸騒"ぎ"」でwhistle付けてると思うんだけど、終点は「ぎー」の伸ばす部分に当たるからなくてもいいように感じた
01:36:137 (9) - (個人的な感覚かもだけど)01:35:780 (8)に合わせた付け方すると綺麗に聴こえるから始点のwhistle削除
01:43:459 (5,6,7) - 使い方はいいなぁって思ったんだけど、whistle4回連続は密集しすぎてるように聴こえた (6)始点のを削除

[Insane]
時間なかった
家に帰ったらこのPost編集して書き込むし(。≖ˇ‸ˇ≖。)
もしくは編集するのだるかったらmodまとめてin gameで
Rare

KSHR wrote:

[られ]
00:16:851 (3) - whistle?え?ん?ええ??おっとー??? 音に合ってると思うんだけど…だめか?
00:47:923 (3) - 2回目の返しにwhistle入れてみては? いれた
00:48:280 (4) - 歌詞で言うと「胸騒"ぎ"」でwhistle付けてると思うんだけど、終点は「ぎー」の伸ばす部分に当たるからなくてもいいように感じた 消した
01:36:137 (9) - (個人的な感覚かもだけど)01:35:780 (8)に合わせた付け方すると綺麗に聴こえるから始点のwhistle削除 消した
01:43:459 (5,6,7) - 使い方はいいなぁって思ったんだけど、whistle4回連続は密集しすぎてるように聴こえた (6)始点のを削除 (6)の終点のwhistle消した
thanks 神mod!!!!!
レイアウト変わってfile uploadわかんないからpuushで貼る http://puu.sh/yeh7
KSHR

R a r e wrote:

KSHR wrote:

[られ]
00:16:851 (3) - whistle?え?ん?ええ??おっとー??? 音に合ってると思うんだけど…だめか?
00:22:209 (1,2,3) -
01:50:780 (1,2,3,4) -
01:56:494 (3,4,5) -

この位置の付け方を確認!
Rare

KSHR wrote:

00:22:209 (1,2,3) -
01:50:780 (1,2,3,4) -
01:56:494 (3,4,5) -

この位置の付け方を確認!
んーなんでこのつけ方してたんでしょう。全部最初の音付けにしました。
http://puu.sh/yeu5
Gloria Guard
surienn'Normal
00:38:994 (4) - この Slider
これはどうですか? http://puu.sh/yfZL

00:15:780 (3,4) - このノート 2個をスライダー一つに変えるのはどうでしょう?拍子に当たるように
http://puu.sh/yg0v

00:40:780 (3,4,5) - 拍子に当たるように 4番(回)ノートを抜くのはどうでしょう?
http://puu.sh/yfRd
http://puu.sh/yg1z
01:30:080 (4,5) -グリッドレベル 4にしてくださって 5ボンノ−トを左に一目盛りだけ移動してくださいスペイシングがアンマッヌンゴガッスブニだ.

01:50:066 (4,5) - これもグリッドレベル4 なさって右側に一目盛り移動して配置してください

Good map suirenn
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
MiLu

KSHR wrote:

[Easy]
01:27:209 (3) - finish,whistle,whistle,whistle,finishっていう順にこの部分だけ妙に音が密集してる気がしたかも 終点のwhistle削除?
01:34:351 (5) - nc付け忘れ
01:35:780 (7) - ここだけ今までの音の付け方とちょっと違ってる 01:24:352 (3) - これと同じ付け方でOKだと思う
全部直したty!


>Gloria Guard
thanks~ :)
hoLysoup
hihi MiLu!
ingame request
⇊ SUGGESTIONS! ⇊

[Easy]
00:50:423 (3,4) - switch these two :D http://puu.sh/BHRk
00:56:137 (3,4) - ^ここも
02:06:137 (1) - このspinner.. too short for [Easy] diff Orz. Start spinner here: 02:05:780~02:07:030. also use 90% volume like [Rare] diff
no problem です~

[水ren]
00:47:923 (5) - add clap too?
00:52:923 (3,4) - combine these 2?? the rhythm is easier -> こんな感じ? http://puu.sh/BI1Y
00:58:637 (3,4) - こっちも
01:44:351 (5,6,7) - ちょっと.. confusingですね。この方が簡単です->01:47:209 (5,6,7)
02:05:780 (1) - use 90% volume? [Rare] diff みたい
no problem です。

[Rare]
01:22:566 (4) - remove clap from slider end and add whistle? 01:33:994 (3,4) - ここみたい
01:48:637 - たぶん.. louder volume? いまfinish hitsound聴こえません~
完璧です~ :>

[Insane]
00:23:637 (4,5,6,7) - make spacing even? こんな感じ? http://puu.sh/BJ3E
00:36:852 (3) - ここclap~
00:47:923 (1) - くラップ~
01:00:066 (1) - make finish hitsound louder? たぶん..
01:57:566 (3,4,5) - maybe move closer to (2)??
02:05:601 (3,4) - remove finish on these two~
02:05:869 (1) - use 90% volume~
^all just suggestions~
これはもうperfectです!
bad mod gomennasai T_T

終了~
I have no kd www gomen :<
Topic Starter
MiLu

hoLysoup wrote:

hihi MiLu! hihihihihihi :)
ingame request
⇊ SUGGESTIONS! ⇊

[Easy]
00:50:423 (3,4) - switch these two :D http://puu.sh/BHRk fixed
00:56:137 (3,4) - ^ここも fixed
02:06:137 (1) - このspinner.. too short for [Easy] diff Orz. Start spinner here: 02:05:780~02:07:030. also use 90% volume like [Rare] diff okay^_^
no problem です~

[Insane]
00:23:637 (4,5,6,7) - make spacing even? こんな感じ? http://puu.sh/BJ3E たぶん直せました!
00:36:852 (3) - ここclap~ fixed
00:47:923 (1) - くラップ~ fixed
01:00:066 (1) - make finish hitsound louder? たぶん.. haaai
01:57:566 (3,4,5) - maybe move closer to (2)?? mmm no change
02:05:601 (3,4) - remove finish on these two~ hai!
02:05:869 (1) - use 90% volume~ fixed
^all just suggestions~
これはもうperfectです!
bad mod gomennasai T_T good mod ty! XD

終了~
I have no kd www gomen :< no problem!!
thx~~ :D
Rare

hoLysoup wrote:

[Rare]
01:22:566 (4) - remove clap from slider end and add whistle? 01:33:994 (3,4) - ここみたい nice suggestion. changed by myself
01:48:637 - たぶん.. louder volume? いまfinish hitsound聴こえません~ but this volume are 60%... 02:00:066 (1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4) -
I think twice about.
thanks for modding :D
http://puu.sh/BNNx
Garven
[Hard]
AR 7
01:37:209 (2,3,4,5) - This is a little bit much for a Hard

Did some IRC modding but too lazy to post a log.
Rare

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
AR 7 
01:37:209 (2,3,4,5) - This is a little bit much for a Hard

Did some IRC modding but too lazy to post a log.
ALL fixed~
thanks Garven :)
http://puu.sh/BOnR
Topic Starter
MiLu
thank you Garven :)
-s u i r e n-
Garven thx<333
Garven
Bubbled~
Topic Starter
MiLu

Garven wrote:

Bubbled~
thank you Garven ~~~!!!!!!
-s u i r e n-
Bubbled>w< yay~~ Garven arigato!<3
Jordan
rank this ;w;
LKs
This map is good and fun :3

I have some suggestions here that I think can improve the map

[General]

  1. try to unify kiai-times? It's not hard to do.
  2. Good hitsound, but I think they're a bit silent, hard to catch. I sightly increase the volume. Try it if you agree http://puu.sh/E1X9
  3. set preview time 82476, which can prevent loss of the first word from vocal
[Easy]

01:02:923 (1) - use slidertick to fill the missing clap(and the likes)? It could prevent hitsound blank
01:10:423 (2) - I find note2 is not on the centre of the curve made by sldier1, here is code for tiny adjuesment
184,203,70423,1,2
104,147,70780,1,2
160,67,71137,1,2
240,123,71494,6,0,B|316:147|400:139,1,160,4|0
461,320,72923,2,0,B|385:296|301:304,1,160,2|2
01:22:923 (1) - no hitsound here? it sounds not bad though (you used clap on insane)
01:47:209 (3) - http://puu.sh/E225
02:02:566 (5) - no whistle

[suirenn's Normal]

also, add some clap to the kiai time?
01:57:209 (1) - http://puu.sh/E24l
02:01:851 (4) - no whshitle, it feels bad blended with finish

[Rare's Hard]

00:30:780 (7) - a bit too close to the previous slider. do like this http://puu.sh/E25C
00:52:387 (2) - clap? just saying

[Insane]

00:45:691 (7) - nazi. spacing different
00:46:316 (3) - ^ not really necessary one
00:47:209 (6) - sharp jump, NC at least. also move to x342 y347
00:54:352 (1) - I'm not sure with the sldier. It's hidden by note and hitburst so a stack might not that fits here. It'll be good if you move this slider a bit away
01:07:923 (4,5,6,7,1) - pentagon fix
232,196,67923,1,2
332,96,68102,1,0
457,161,68280,1,8
432,299,68459,1,0
295,324,68637,6,0,B|251:352|251:352|195:296|115:332,2,200,2|2|2
01:25:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - hidoi 1/4 jump. how about do some changes to make it easier. like this 01:37:923 (7,8,9) -
01:40:780 (4) - asymmetric, reshape it plz
01:57:387 (2) - move it a big right?


lol I wrote too many. Don't force yourself to fix things, call me reb if you don't change anything. also call me back if you update
Rare

LKs wrote:

[Rare's Hard]

00:30:780 (7) - a bit too close to the previous slider. do like this http://puu.sh/E25C fixed
00:52:387 (2) - clap? just saying sry no change
thanks for modding~
http://puu.sh/E2q0
Topic Starter
MiLu
Thank you LKs !
almost fixed~
and Im sorry for the delay in my response T_T
LKs
rebubbled
Topic Starter
MiLu

LKs wrote:

rebubbled
thx :)
HakuNoKaemi
Garven
You need to update all difficulties if you want to change the title.
Topic Starter
MiLu
changed and updated :o
Garven
Lookin' good. Ranked!
Rare
ora-!!!!!!!!!!!!
alacat
られさん、みるさんおめでとー(ノ*・ω・)ノ
-s u i r e n-
やったー(*´∀`*)/ MiLuちゃんおめでと~
Garvenもありがと
Cyril Scarlet
(*゚▽゚)/゚・:*【祝】*:・゚\(゚▽゚*)
rui
おめでとう~
Fionana
おめでとう~ :)
Thite
omedeto~ :)
remi5
きたなあ^~^ おめでとう!
ちゅ^3^
F m L_old
congrats!
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