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Katakiri Rekka - (^3^)chu Dere Rhapsody

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MiLu
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MiLu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月2日 at 20:49:07

Artist: Katakiri Rekka
Title: (^3^)chu Dere Rhapsody
Source: Goshujin-sama Daisuki
Tags: score suirenn05 Rare R_a_r_e
BPM: 168
Filesize: 3939kb
Play Time: 02:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.93 stars, 141 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 522 notes)
  3. Rare's Hard (4.91 stars, 392 notes)
  4. suirenn's Normal (4.21 stars, 190 notes)
Download: Katakiri Rekka - (^3^)chu Dere Rhapsody
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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(^3^)chuchu☆ (^3^)chu☆ (^0^)wa☆ (^3^) chuchu→☆

Normal by suirenn05
Hard by R a r e
Last edited by MiLu , edited 27 times in total.
-s u i r e n-
237 posts
Joined May 2011
-s u i r e n-
ぱんつ(*´д｀*)っ▽
MiLu
426 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
MiLu

suirenn05 wrote:

ぱんつ(*´д｀*)っ▽
thank you good pantsu!
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
別に本気出してないし昼寝したのにできちゃった…

edit:Tag追加しといてくださいオナシャスｗ

Download: Katakiri Rekka - (^3^)chu Dere Rhapsody (Short Ver.) (MiLu) [Rare's Hard].osu
Ohrami
685 posts
Joined March 2010
Ohrami
Please rank this now

Fun streams~
MiLu
426 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
MiLu
>Kyou-kun
haha XD
thx :3
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Requested via in-game pm :3

General:
Add opening and Hentai in the tags~

Easy:
OD and AR -1 so it'll be playable better for easy diff~
  1. 00:27:923 (5) - add whistle here to keep the whistles combos ~
  2. 00:30:066 (3) - whistle at the end, with same reason as the above~
  3. 00:33:637 (5) - same as 00:27:923 (5) -
  4. 00:35:780 (3) - move the last slider point one grid up, to make the slider more nicer~
  5. 00:41:137 (2) - move this one grid right and up, to blanket the (1) and (3) ~
  6. 00:48:637 (1) - move last slider point 1 grid to the left, i think it'll be better if you do this so the slider will look much better to me~
  7. 01:02:923 (1) - remove the whistle at the start and then add finish, sounds much better to me~
  8. 01:07:209 (3) - ^
  9. 01:50:066 (3) - ^
  10. 01:55:780 (3) - remove whistle and then add finish so it'll much the Instrumental~
moesuirenn's Normal:
  1. 00:17:923 (1) - remove this NC then ad
    d the NC here 00:17:209 (6) - so it'll much the Instrumental~
  2. 00:20:780 (1) - it'll sound better and to keep the pattern add finish the end of this slider~
  3. 00:21:851 (2) - maybe stuck this under the 00:20:423 (5) - it'll look much better to me~
  4. 00:28:637 (1) - finish here with same reason above~
  5. 00:30:066 (4) - move this one grip up to stuck under the 00:28:280 (6) - it'll look nicer like that~
  6. 00:31:494 (6) - NC here because the combo is going to long for Normal diff~
  7. 00:37:209 (5,1) - same as here 00:17:923 (1) -
  8. 00:40:066 (5) - NC here as well because it's going to long and it's not good normal diff >A</
  9. 00:46:494 (4) - remove whistle at the end then add finish it'll sound better ._. and fits the music
  10. 01:08:637 (1) - finish at the start to keep up the finish combos ~
  11. 01:28:994 (5,1) - same what i said here 00:17:923 (1) -
  12. 01:43:637 (4) - move this two grids down to stuck the 01:41:941 (1) - so it'll be looking much nicer~
Rare's Hard:
OD and HP +1 is better for Hard~
  1. 00:38:637 (6) - NC here for the new vocal?
  2. 01:35:780 (8) - NC here because the combos is going to long here, and i think it's strange~
Insane:
  1. 00:31:494 (1) - make this slider like this? so it'll look better ~ o.o
    SPOILER
  2. 01:02:923 (1) - i think it'll be better if you make a blanket at the 01:03:816 (2) - like this?
    SPOILER
Nice map >A<// and good luck with ranking ~
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

-Sekai- wrote:

Rare's Hard:
OD and HP +1 is better for Hard~ Made it harder than usual. but added HP+1
  1. 00:38:637 (6) - NC here for the new vocal? sry, no fit this to me
  2. 01:35:780 (8) - NC here because the combos is going to long here, and i think it's strange~ I don't think so.
thanks for modding :)

Download: Katakiri Rekka - (^3^)chu Dere Rhapsody (Short Ver.) (MiLu) [Rare's Hard].osu
MiLu
426 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
MiLu

-Sekai- wrote:

Requested via in-game pm :3

General:
Add opening and Hentai in the tags~

Easy:
OD and AR -1 so it'll be playable better for easy diff~
  1. 00:27:923 (5) - add whistle here to keep the whistles combos ~
  2. 00:30:066 (3) - whistle at the end, with same reason as the above~
  3. 00:33:637 (5) - same as 00:27:923 (5) -
  4. 00:35:780 (3) - move the last slider point one grid up, to make the slider more nicer~
  5. 00:41:137 (2) - move this one grid right and up, to blanket the (1) and (3) ~
  6. 00:48:637 (1) - move last slider point 1 grid to the left, i think it'll be better if you do this so the slider will look much better to me~
  7. 01:02:923 (1) - remove the whistle at the start and then add finish, sounds much better to me~
  8. 01:07:209 (3) - ^
  9. 01:50:066 (3) - ^
  10. 01:55:780 (3) - remove whistle and then add finish so it'll much the Instrumental~
moesuirenn's Normal:
  1. 00:17:923 (1) - remove this NC then ad
    d the NC here 00:17:209 (6) - so it'll much the Instrumental~
  2. 00:20:780 (1) - it'll sound better and to keep the pattern add finish the end of this slider~
  3. 00:21:851 (2) - maybe stuck this under the 00:20:423 (5) - it'll look much better to me~
  4. 00:28:637 (1) - finish here with same reason above~
  5. 00:30:066 (4) - move this one grip up to stuck under the 00:28:280 (6) - it'll look nicer like that~
  6. 00:31:494 (6) - NC here because the combo is going to long for Normal diff~
  7. 00:37:209 (5,1) - same as here 00:17:923 (1) -
  8. 00:40:066 (5) - NC here as well because it's going to long and it's not good normal diff >A</
  9. 00:46:494 (4) - remove whistle at the end then add finish it'll sound better ._. and fits the music
  10. 01:08:637 (1) - finish at the start to keep up the finish combos ~
  11. 01:28:994 (5,1) - same what i said here 00:17:923 (1) -
  12. 01:43:637 (4) - move this two grids down to stuck the 01:41:941 (1) - so it'll be looking much nicer~
Insane:
  1. 00:31:494 (1) - make this slider like this? so it'll look better ~ o.o
    SPOILER
  2. 01:02:923 (1) - i think it'll be better if you make a blanket at the 01:03:816 (2) - like this?
    SPOILER

fixed all other than General
thx~ ><
-HaRuNa-
555 posts
Joined September 2011
-HaRuNa-
Hi~
From In-game PM~

[Easy]

01:10:423 (2) - two girds left?
01:22:566 (4) - distance

[suirenn05's Normal]

00:33:280 (4,5,6) - x:164 y:56 ? same as 00:31:851 (2) -
02:05:066 (5) - x:208 y:180 ? same as 02:03:280 (2) -
02:05:959 - add spinner?

[Rare's Hard]

00:23:101 (5,6,7) - it was not stacked completely
01:11:852 (1) - ^
01:27:744 (3) - x:136 y:192 ? same as 01:26:316 (5) -
01:28:280 (5) - overlap
01:44:619 - delete greenline~
01:59:976 - ^

[Insane]

01:11:494 (1) - delete NC
01:11:852 (2) - add NC

OK~ That's all~
Good luck :)
MiLu
426 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
MiLu

-HaRuNa- wrote:

Hi~
From In-game PM~

[Easy]

01:10:423 (2) - two girds left?
01:22:566 (4) - distance

[suirenn05's Normal]

00:33:280 (4,5,6) - x:164 y:56 ? same as 00:31:851 (2) -
02:05:066 (5) - x:208 y:180 ? same as 02:03:280 (2) -
02:05:959 - add spinner?

[Insane]

01:11:494 (1) - delete NC
01:11:852 (2) - add NC
all fixed~
thank you :)
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

-HaRuNa- wrote:

[Rare's Hard]

00:23:101 (5,6,7) - it was not stacked completely fixed
01:11:852 (1) - ^ put by intention
01:27:744 (3) - x:136 y:192 ? same as 01:26:316 (5) - I don't think the meaning...
01:28:280 (5) - overlap sry no change
01:44:619 - delete greenline~ deleted
01:59:976 - ^ ^
thanks for modding :)

Download: Katakiri Rekka - (^3^)chu Dere Rhapsody (Short Ver.) (MiLu) [Rare's Hard].osu
ertyukjh010
1,415 posts
Joined December 2009
ertyukjh010


request from forums PM by siu05

[General]

☆ Tags inconsistency
score suirenn05 Rare R_a_r_e
score suirenn05 Rare R_a_r_e
score
score suirenn05 Rare R_a_r_e

[Easy]

HP-1 ?
[Layout]
02:04:351 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a regular pentagon like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329290, and why the distance is 1.27x of 02:04:709 (2)
[rhythm]
02:05:959 (1) - The spinner length is too short, this will lead to new players do not have enough time to rotate, also make it easier to miss. Please increase the length of the spinner or other instead.
[Setting]
00:14:351 - Not aligned timing point. Move it to 00:14:352

[suirenn's Normal]

[Setting]
00:14:351 - Not aligned timing point. Move it to 00:14:352
Seen Fine in this diff :)
And call me ERT is okay QAQ

[Rare's Hard]

[Setting]
00:14:351 - Not aligned timing point. Move it to 00:14:352
01:58:726 - useless inherited point
02:04:262 - ^

[Insane]

OD-1? Because this map there are a large number of stream, easy acc will usually get high rate.
[Layout]
01:20:780 (5,7) - I feel so far
01:26:137 (4,7,10) - ^, It's hard to move when stream
01:31:851 (3,5,7) - ^
01:37:566 (4,7,10) - ^
01:43:280 (3,5,7) - ^
01:44:351 (1) - Distance?
[Setting]
00:14:351 - Not aligned timing point. Move it to 00:14:352

That all :)
-s u i r e n-
237 posts
Joined May 2011
-s u i r e n-
thx>w< ert~~(～*´д｀*)～
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

ertyukjh010 wrote:

[Rare's Hard]

[Setting]
00:14:351 - Not aligned timing point. Move it to 00:14:352 fixed
01:58:726 - useless inherited point removed
02:04:262 - ^ sry, I forgot change volume.
thanks for modding ~

Download: Katakiri Rekka - (^3^)chu Dere Rhapsody (Short Ver.) (MiLu) [Rare's Hard].osu
MiLu
426 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
MiLu

ertyukjh010 wrote:



request from forums PM by siu05

[General]

☆ Tags inconsistency
score suirenn05 Rare R_a_r_e
score suirenn05 Rare R_a_r_e
score
score suirenn05 Rare R_a_r_e
fixed

[Easy]

HP-1 ? no change
[Layout]
02:04:351 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a regular pentagon like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329290, and why the distance is 1.27x of 02:04:709 (2) fixed
[rhythm]
02:05:959 (1) - The spinner length is too short, this will lead to new players do not have enough time to rotate, also make it easier to miss. Please increase the length of the spinner or other instead. fixed
[Setting]
00:14:351 - Not aligned timing point. Move it to 00:14:352 fixed

[suirenn's Normal]

[Setting]
00:14:351 - Not aligned timing point. Move it to 00:14:352 fixed
Seen Fine in this diff :)
And call me ERT is okay QAQ

[Insane]

OD-1? Because this map there are a large number of stream, easy acc will usually get high rate.
[Layout] I think it is better not to change...
01:20:780 (5,7) - I feel so far fixed
01:26:137 (4,7,10) - ^, It's hard to move when stream no change
01:31:851 (3,5,7) - ^
01:37:566 (4,7,10) - ^
01:43:280 (3,5,7) - ^
01:44:351 (1) - Distance? no change
[Setting]
00:14:351 - Not aligned timing point. Move it to 00:14:352 fixed

That all :)
thx~ ;)
Fionana
252 posts
Joined April 2011
Fionana
こんばんわ～ Mod request from pantsusuirenn05
全部提案です :)

Easy
02:06:137 - spinnerの終点は 02:07:030 - かな？

suirenn's Normal
00:28:637 (1) - Finish削除
00:22:566 (6) - 終点Finish?
00:35:494 (1) - whistle追加
01:14:709 (1) - NC削除それに01:16:137 - ここをNC追加?
02:01:484 (3) - Finish追加

Rare's Hard
Fine~

Insane
Fine~

Sorry poor Mod..><
頑張ってね！
-s u i r e n-
237 posts
Joined May 2011
-s u i r e n-

Fionana wrote:

こんばんわ～ Mod request from pantsusuirenn05
全部提案です :)

Sorry poor Mod..><
頑張ってね！
thx :P Fionana=3=/
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
♥ MiLu ♥

[General]
"R a r e"はwebではニートだけど一応in gameでは仕事するので入れといてあげましょう


title: (^3^)chu * Dere * Rhapsody (Short Ver.)
まぁどっちでも良い気がする


[Easy]
AR上げてもRating変わらないので+1しましょう

00:25:780 - Insaneには付いてるのでここはfinish
00:25:780 (1,2,4) - spacing
00:31:494 - finish
00:40:780 - なんか寂しいのでwhistle
00:42:209 - ^
00:42:923 - finish
00:47:923 - 音聞いた感じだとここはclapいらないような
00:48:637 (1) - 00:49:173 - よりは00:49:530 - の音を拾いたいかな

00:50:423 - ↑と同じような感じで00:50:959 - も拾う感じで
00:51:494 (1) - ここは1/1のrhythmをキープ
00:54:351 - ここ以降も↑と同じ感じで
01:02:209 (4) - (2,4)のspacingが通常のspacing(1.2x)と見た目的に同じ方が美しい

01:07:209 - ここはfinishじゃないかな　もし残すとしたら01:01:494 - にも同様にfinishで
01:10:780 (3) - うーん1/1ならここにwhistleあってもいいかな
01:15:066 (2) - ここにnoteおくなら01:15:423 - の方がいい
^もし置くならwhistleも。 それと(3)の始点についてるwhistle削除
01:21:494 (2) - ここはwhistle
01:23:637 - finishは合わないかな もしくはinsaneも同様に付けるか
01:24:352 (3) - ^
01:25:780 (1,2) - ここはwhistleをアクセント？に合わせる感じで01:27:209 - からremove 01:27:566 - にadd
それと01:28:280 - にwhistle付きでnote置くと直義 (31)
01:27:209 - Insaneはここfinishなのでこっちも
01:29:351 (2,3) - finish以下略
01:32:923 - finish
01:33:280 (4,5) - 1/2間隔でwhistleはhenなのと1.5間隔は難しいかもしれんので
折り返しslider1個に纏めた方がいいかなって思います
01:35:066 (2,3) - remove finishes
01:38:637 - finish
01:44:351 - ^
01:44:887 - ここの音拾いたい気もする
01:45:066 (4) - whistleつけるなら終点
01:46:494 (2) - whistle
01:47:209 - ^
02:02:923 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 02:03:280 - と02:03:994 - にfinishつけて
02:04:351 - からspinにしちゃえばいいんでないかな(適当)

[suirenn's Normal]
AR, OD+1 HardがAR8なのとこのdiff自体もかなり難しめなのでこれくらいが合うかと思います
00:14:352 ~ 00:25:780 - ちょっとwhistleが足りない感じがするのでdownbeat(一番長い白線)にも付けてみては？
00:28:637 (1) - ここにはfinish合わないです。
00:31:494 (1) - finish
00:36:137 - ここはclapだけで十分ですしwhistleは合わないです。00:36:852 - も同じ
00:37:209 ~ 00:48:637 - このpartにまっすぐなsliderが凄く多いのがとても気になりました...
00:42:923 - finish
00:47:209 - ここもfinishではないです。もしつけるならclap
00:51:852 (2) - ここの終点なんですが、percussionが鳴ってるのは白線と青線なので音取りが中途半端です。
まぁNormalなので00:52:566 - で終わらせるのがベターだと思います
00:57:566 (2) - ^　終点を00:58:280 - に
00:59:709 (4) - この白線部分は音楽聴いてみると他より音が小さいのでnote置くには適さないです
01:08:637 (1) - ここにfinishは合わないですしもし置くとしたら01:02:923 - にも置くべきだと思います
01:10:066 (3) - whistle削除
01:10:423 - whistle追加
01:10:780 - ^
01:11:137 - ^
01:12:923 - ^
01:13:637 - ^
01:14:351 - ^
01:15:423 - ^
01:15:780 - whistle削除
01:18:637 - whistle追加
01:19:351 -
01:20:066 (1) - Kiai前なのでfinishはなんというかやりすぎです、whistleの方がベター。
01:25:959 (2) - 中途半端にvocal拾うよりはこのnote消してアクセント部分だけ拾った方がいいですstar rating的に
01:25:959 (2) - whistle追加
01:32:923 - ^
01:37:387 (2) - 01:25:959 (2) - に同じです
01:44:351 - whistle追加
01:47:566 - 1/2間隔でwhistle置くのは難しいのでここはremoveで
01:48:101 - ここにfinishは合わないです
01:50:244 (5) - このnoteがどの音拾ってるのかイマイチ理解できないのでdelete note？
02:00:780 - finish
02:01:494 - ^
02:02:209 - ^
02:02:923 - ^
02:03:280 - ^
02:03:637 - ^
02:03:994 - ^
02:05:423 (6) - 1/2のkickじゃ音は取れないしcircleにfinishつけて終わった方が気持ちいいかと思うんですがどうでしょう

[Rare's Hard]

00:17:209 - finish
00:20:066 (1,5) -

[strike]frost-b-spec[/strike] wrote:

hi

little things

[Melo's Hard]
00:28:883 (6) - グリッドを外してx0.0で(5)の後ろに合わせてください。

nice~
三連打1回消してからやるといいですね
00:22:209 - 00:16:494 (1) - ←にはついてるんでwhistle追加
00:25:780 - finish
00:36:494 - whistleは合わない
00:36:852 - ^
00:37:387 (1,2,3,4) - 前のsliderに重なるのが少し気になるのでちょっと↓に移動？
00:47:209 (1,2) - whistleは合わない気がするのと、両方の始点にclapあるといいかなって思う
01:09:887 (6,1,2) - 一直線は叩きにくいような？少しカーブさせて並べると流れ的にもベター
01:20:066 - hitsoundの流れ(謎)的にここはwhistleの方がいい気がする
01:22:387 - ここからsoftのhitsoundに切り替えで　Normalだと鳴り方が美しくない
01:42:030 (5,6) - spacingが気になる
01:44:351 - defaultのfinish追加
01:46:494 - whistle
01:47:209 - ^
01:47:744 (5) - 音にはあってるんだけど音量が大きすぎな気がする　60~70%がベター
01:48:548 - 音に合わせてここにnote?まぁHardだし要らない気もする
01:48:637 - defaultのfinish
01:50:066 - ^
01:51:494 - ^
01:54:351 - ^
01:55:780 - ^
01:57:209 - ^
01:58:994 - ここでkick slider?
02:00:066 - defaultのfinish
02:00:780 - ^
02:01:494 - ^
02:02:209 - ^
02:02:923 - ^
02:03:280 - ^
02:03:637 - ^
02:03:994 - ^
02:04:351 - ^
02:04:887 - ^
02:05:423 - ^
02:05:601 - ^
02:05:780 - ^
02:05:869 - さすがにHardで0 spinnerはマズいのでここに入れましょう長さはInsaneに合わせる感じで

[Insane]

00:31:494 - finish
00:42:923 - ^
00:48:637 - ^
00:54:351 - ^
01:00:780 - whistle
01:02:209 - ^
01:06:494 - ^
01:07:923 - ^
01:10:780 - ^
01:10:959 - remove whistle
01:12:744 (3) - slider+単発に？　音的にも合うし対照配置にもできるし
01:22:030 (6) - 2番目のwaipointを2gridくらい下げるともうちょっと美しい
01:40:780 (4,1) - 大きめのjumpの後にしては近い気がした
01:44:351 (1) - 対照に置けてない
02:00:066 ~ 02:02:923 - 白線2個でnewcombo区切る方が音的にも配置的にも合うような
02:00:601 (4,5) - ここが他と比べてめっちゃでかいのが凄い気になる
02:02:923 (1,2,3,4) - 音的に(1,2)より(3,4)がspacing大きい方がいいかもめ
Last edited by Melophobia , edited 1 time in total.
-s u i r e n-
237 posts
Joined May 2011
-s u i r e n-
Melophobiaさん　modありがとうございます :p
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
"R a r e"はwebではニートだけど一応in gameでは仕事するので入れといてあげましょう thanks!!!!

[Rare's Hard]

00:17:209 - finish んーno change
00:20:066 (1,5) - fixed

[strike]frost-b-spec[/strike] wrote:

hi

little things

[Melo's Hard]
00:28:883 (6) - グリッドを外してx0.0で(5)の後ろに合わせてください。

nice~
三連打1回消してからやるといいですね
00:22:209 - 00:16:494 (1) - ←にはついてるんでwhistle追加 added
00:25:780 - finish added
00:36:494 - whistleは合わない clapに変えました
00:36:852 - ^ clapに変えました
00:37:387 (1,2,3,4) - 前のsliderに重なるのが少し気になるのでちょっと↓に移動？全体的に左に動かした！
00:47:209 (1,2) - whistleは合わない気がするのと、両方の始点にclapあるといいかなって思う whistleは他にも指摘されたら考えます。始点にclapいれました
01:09:887 (6,1,2) - 一直線は叩きにくいような？少しカーブさせて並べると流れ的にもベター　(1)曲げました。
01:20:066 - hitsoundの流れ(謎)的にここはwhistleの方がいい気がする 01:16:852 - ここの返しのfinishに合わせたいからnoで><
01:22:387 - ここからsoftのhitsoundに切り替えで　Normalだと鳴り方が美しくない softにして音量も調節しました。
01:42:030 (5,6) - spacingが気になる fixed
01:44:351 - defaultのfinish追加 added
01:46:494 - whistle added
01:47:209 - ^ added
01:47:744 (5) - 音にはあってるんだけど音量が大きすぎな気がする　60~70%がベター down volume
01:48:548 - 音に合わせてここにnote?まぁHardだし要らない気もする 今まで気付かなかった。added~
01:48:637 - defaultのfinish
01:50:066 - ^
01:51:494 - ^
01:54:351 - ^
01:55:780 - ^
01:57:209 - ^
01:58:994 - ここでkick slider? changed kick slider
02:00:066 - defaultのfinish
02:00:780 - ^
02:01:494 - ^
02:02:209 - ^
02:02:923 - ^
02:03:280 - ^
02:03:637 - ^
02:03:994 - ^
02:04:351 - ^
02:04:887 - ^
02:05:423 - ^
02:05:601 - ^
02:05:780 - ^
02:05:869 - さすがにHardで0 spinnerはマズいのでここに入れましょう長さはInsaneに合わせる感じで added spinner
終盤のfinish軍団は参考にさせてもらってほぼfinishつけました。
音の調節も忘れてたので指摘部分全体に加えて調整しました！
thanks for 神mod!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Download: Katakiri Rekka - (^3^)chu Dere Rhapsody (Short Ver.) (MiLu) [Rare's Hard].osu
xsrsbsns
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xsrsbsns
niceee (^3^)
MiLu
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Topic Starter
MiLu
>Fionana
all fixed~
thank you :)

>Melophobia
SPOILER

Melophobia wrote:

♥ MiLu ♥ ♥ Melophobia ♥

[General]
"R a r e"はwebではニートだけど一応in gameでは仕事するので入れといてあげましょう Rareがいらないって言ったから入れませんでした


title: (^3^)chu * Dere * Rhapsody (Short Ver.)
まぁどっちでも良い気がする　とりあえずno change


[Easy]
AR上げてもRating変わらないので+1しましょう

00:25:780 - Insaneには付いてるのでここはfinish
00:25:780 (1,2,4) - spacing
00:31:494 - finish
00:40:780 - なんか寂しいのでwhistle
00:42:209 - ^
00:42:923 - finish
00:47:923 - 音聞いた感じだとここはclapいらないような
00:48:637 (1) - 00:49:173 - よりは00:49:530 - の音を拾いたいかな

00:50:423 - ↑と同じような感じで00:50:959 - も拾う感じで
00:51:494 (1) - ここは1/1のrhythmをキープ
00:54:351 - ここ以降も↑と同じ感じで
01:02:209 (4) - (2,4)のspacingが通常のspacing(1.2x)と見た目的に同じ方が美しい

01:07:209 - ここはfinishじゃないかな　もし残すとしたら01:01:494 - にも同様にfinishで
01:10:780 (3) - うーん1/1ならここにwhistleあってもいいかな
01:15:066 (2) - ここにnoteおくなら01:15:423 - の方がいい
^もし置くならwhistleも。 それと(3)の始点についてるwhistle削除
01:21:494 (2) - ここはwhistle
01:23:637 - finishは合わないかな もしくはinsaneも同様に付けるか
01:24:352 (3) - ^
01:25:780 (1,2) - ここはwhistleをアクセント？に合わせる感じで01:27:209 - からremove 01:27:566 - にadd
それと01:28:280 - にwhistle付きでnote置くと直義 (31)
01:27:209 - Insaneはここfinishなのでこっちも
01:29:351 (2,3) - finish以下略
01:32:923 - finish
01:33:280 (4,5) - 1/2間隔でwhistleはhenなのと1.5間隔は難しいかもしれんので
折り返しslider1個に纏めた方がいいかなって思います
01:35:066 (2,3) - remove finishes
01:38:637 - finish
01:44:351 - ^
01:44:887 - ここの音拾いたい気もする
01:45:066 (4) - whistleつけるなら終点
01:46:494 (2) - whistle
01:47:209 - ^
02:02:923 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 02:03:280 - と02:03:994 - にfinishつけて
02:04:351 - からspinにしちゃえばいいんでないかな(適当) finishは付けたけどスピンはこのままで!
最後のところ意外全部直しました

[Insane]

00:31:494 - finish
00:42:923 - ^
00:48:637 - ^
00:54:351 - ^
01:00:780 - whistle
01:02:209 - ^
01:06:494 - ^
01:07:923 - ^
01:10:780 - ^
01:10:959 - remove whistle
01:12:744 (3) - slider+単発に？　音的にも合うし対照配置にもできるし
01:22:030 (6) - 2番目のwaipointを2gridくらい下げるともうちょっと美しい
01:40:780 (4,1) - 大きめのjumpの後にしては近い気がした
01:44:351 (1) - 対照に置けてない
02:00:066 ~ 02:02:923 - 白線2個でnewcombo区切る方が音的にも配置的にも合うような
02:00:601 (4,5) - ここが他と比べてめっちゃでかいのが凄い気になる
02:02:923 (1,2,3,4) - 音的に(1,2)より(3,4)がspacing大きい方がいいかもめ
yes all fixed!
神modありがとう
べりーべりーさんくす！！！！！！

>xsrsbsns
thank you (^3^)
yanlu
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yanlu
From baka suirenn05's PM = 3=/

私は初心者です> A<"

[easy]

look's fine~nice playing w

[suirenn's Normal]

AR-1 okay?

00:53:637 - add note (just 提案*
01:25:423 Add note
00:38:816 - add note
00:59:351 - ^
01:59:530 - add note
00:36:137 (4) - silder change :00:36:137 - 00:36:494
00:42:209 (6) - silder change: 00:42:209 - 00:42:566

同色combo 同じ ラジアン >A<
here:
00:18:994 (3) - silder ラジアン 一樣(1)(2)
00:30:423 (5) - 弧度
00:33:637 (6) - ^
00:36:137 (4) - ^
00:58:637 (3) - 弧
01:06:852 (4) - ^
01:18:637 (3) - ^
01:37:566 (2) - ^
01:45:244 (7) - ^
01:27:387 (3) - 弧
01:53:994 (7) - ^
no same ラジアン(?)silder~
hmm...change?

[Rare's Hard]

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330000
00:44:709 (6) - this when I open HD mod can't tap well (strange blocking...

[Insane]

fine~
To long stream! scream!!

以上全体すべてのmod~
Rare
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Rare

yanlu wrote:

[Rare's Hard]

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330000
00:44:709 (6) - this when I open HD mod can't tap well (strange blocking... sry no change
thanks for modding ~
MiLu
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MiLu
>yanlu
thank you for modding :)
remi5
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remi5
chu(^3^)
ganbatte~!!
MiLu
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MiLu

rem1rya wrote:

chu(^3^)
ganbatte~!!
ありがとう(^3^)
KSHR
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KSHR
modding ;)


[Easy]
01:27:209 (3) - finish,whistle,whistle,whistle,finishっていう順にこの部分だけ妙に音が密集してる気がしたかも 終点のwhistle削除？
01:34:351 (5) - nc付け忘れ
01:35:780 (7) - ここだけ今までの音の付け方とちょっと違ってる 01:24:352 (3) - これと同じ付け方でOKだと思う

[しょたこん]
whistleの使い方に規則性がなくてどうしてもバラバラに聞こえちゃう（特にサビ～終わり辺り）
Hard、Insaneと違ってEasy、Normalは配置でそこまでの音を取ることができないから
曲に合わせてwhistleを置くより、パターン付けでwhistleを置いたほうが綺麗に聞こえるんじゃないかなぁって
もちろん、曲に合わせて置けるところがあるならそれが一番いいからそうしたほうがいいんだろうけど

00:17:923 (2) - 00:18:637~00:19:709の部分だけ少し静かな感じになるから、この範囲に付いてるwhistleちょっと浮いてる印象
00:25:780 (1) ~ 00:48:280 (6) - whistleが2ヵ所しかなくて浮いてるように感じる whistleを置くのであればパターンをつけて置いたほうがいいのかも
例えば この位置にwhistle
00:26:137 (2) - 終点
00:27:209 (5) - ＾
00:28:994 (3) - 返し
00:30:423 (5) - ＾
00:32:209 (3) - 始点
00:33:637 (6) - ＾
00:34:709 (1) - 返し
00:36:137 (4) - ＾
00:37:209 (1) - 終点
00:38:994 (4) - 返し
00:40:780 (3) -
00:42:209 (6) - 始点
00:43:637 (2) -
00:44:352 (4) - 終点
00:46:494 (3) - 始点
00:47:923 (5) -
00:48:637 (1) ~ 00:59:709 (4) - ドラムのスネアの音にwhistleをつけてるなら、00:52:923 (3) と00:58:637 (3) のそれぞれの終点のwhistleを削除

[られ]
00:16:851 (3) - whistle？え？ん？ええ？？おっとー？？？
00:47:923 (3) - ２回目の返しにwhistle入れてみては？
00:48:280 (4) - 歌詞で言うと「胸騒"ぎ"」でwhistle付けてると思うんだけど、終点は「ぎー」の伸ばす部分に当たるからなくてもいいように感じた
01:36:137 (9) - （個人的な感覚かもだけど）01:35:780 (8)に合わせた付け方すると綺麗に聴こえるから始点のwhistle削除
01:43:459 (5,6,7) - 使い方はいいなぁって思ったんだけど、whistle4回連続は密集しすぎてるように聴こえた (6)始点のを削除

[Insane]
時間なかった
家に帰ったらこのPost編集して書き込むし(。≖ˇ‸ˇ≖｡)
もしくは編集するのだるかったらmodまとめてin gameで
Rare
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Rare

KSHR wrote:

[られ]
00:16:851 (3) - whistle？え？ん？ええ？？おっとー？？？ 音に合ってると思うんだけど…だめか？
00:47:923 (3) - ２回目の返しにwhistle入れてみては？ いれた
00:48:280 (4) - 歌詞で言うと「胸騒"ぎ"」でwhistle付けてると思うんだけど、終点は「ぎー」の伸ばす部分に当たるからなくてもいいように感じた 消した
01:36:137 (9) - （個人的な感覚かもだけど）01:35:780 (8)に合わせた付け方すると綺麗に聴こえるから始点のwhistle削除 消した
01:43:459 (5,6,7) - 使い方はいいなぁって思ったんだけど、whistle4回連続は密集しすぎてるように聴こえた (6)始点のを削除 (6)の終点のwhistle消した
thanks 神mod!!!!!
レイアウト変わってfile uploadわかんないからpuushで貼る http://puu.sh/yeh7
KSHR
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KSHR

R a r e wrote:

KSHR wrote:

[られ]
00:16:851 (3) - whistle？え？ん？ええ？？おっとー？？？ 音に合ってると思うんだけど…だめか？
00:22:209 (1,2,3) -
01:50:780 (1,2,3,4) -
01:56:494 (3,4,5) -

この位置の付け方を確認！
Rare
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Rare

KSHR wrote:

00:22:209 (1,2,3) -
01:50:780 (1,2,3,4) -
01:56:494 (3,4,5) -

この位置の付け方を確認！
んーなんでこのつけ方してたんでしょう。全部最初の音付けにしました。
http://puu.sh/yeu5
Gloria Guard
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surienn'Normal
00:38:994 (4) - この Slider
これはどうですか? http://puu.sh/yfZL

00:15:780 (3,4) - このノート 2個をスライダー一つに変えるのはどうでしょう?拍子に当たるように
http://puu.sh/yg0v

00:40:780 (3,4,5) - 拍子に当たるように 4番(回)ノートを抜くのはどうでしょう?
http://puu.sh/yfRd
http://puu.sh/yg1z
01:30:080 (4,5) -グリッドレベル 4にしてくださって 5ボンノ−トを左に一目盛りだけ移動してくださいスペイシングがアンマッヌンゴガッスブニだ.

01:50:066 (4,5) - これもグリッドレベル4 なさって右側に一目盛り移動して配置してください

Good map suirenn
Good luck! :)
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