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Various Artists - SUPER SHOT Compilation
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Nice map!
Sorry if some things in my mod are about sliders or NC, it's not only those
I think that's it, overall it's nice.
Nice map!
Sorry if some things in my mod are about sliders or NC, it's not only those
SPOILER
1:
00:16:054 (7) - new combo? because she starts singing another word or whatever
00:17:789 (6) - remove this and put 00:17:962 (7) earlier (and make it longer so it lasts until it lasted originally) OR leave it as long as it is and add hit circle here 00:18:309 (7), I think it fits better to the music if that long slider starts earlier
(and if you put it earlier, don't forget to change the clap)
00:32:355 (10) - I think you should put the end point of the slider near the middle, or at least don't let it out of the slider - http://puu.sh/yx9W - http://puu.sh/yxan
2:
00:52:591 (2) - I think the new combo should start here and not here 00:52:242 (1) since that's where she starts singing
00:55:381 (2) - ^
00:57:474 (1) - remove new combo
00:57:823 (1) - ^
00:58:172 (2) - add new combo
00:59:218 (5) - not necessary, but maybe you could put this a bit further from (4), cuz people might try to hit it earlier cuz of the placement, or it can be also replaced with 2 hit circles
3:
01:20:033 (7) - the end point fo the slider shouldn't be like this http://puu.sh/yxfH you can just copy this 01:20:718 (1) and flip and rotate (whatever)
01:25:861 (8) - add new combo and maybe remove new combo from here 01:26:204 (1)
01:26:718 (2,3) - try this maybe? cuz of the distance http://puu.sh/yxih
01:34:433 (1,2,3) - I think these should be placed differently, for example put (2) on the top of (3,4) and you place it further from (1)
01:35:118 (4,6) - the end point of the sliders should be more inside of the slider
01:36:661 (8) - add new combo
01:39:233 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this stream might look nicer like this - http://puu.sh/yxNK - well mine might not be perfect, but just try to make it more like a half circle
4:
01:50:112 (3,4,1) - I think this shounds better - http://puu.sh/yxP8
01:53:406 (8) - add new combo 01:53:753 (1) - remove new combo
5:
02:13:443 (1,2) - the end point of the sliders
02:19:090 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:18:031 (2,3) - these can be hardly seen because of the combo burst
02:18:737 (2,3) - maybe ctrl+R, and like that the distance should be also more realistic :3 - http://puu.sh/yxTJ
6:
02:44:700 (1,2) - the end point of the sliders
02:46:967 (9) - add new combo and 02:47:490 (1) - remove new combo
02:52:548 (10,11) - ctrl+R maybe
02:56:037 (2) - just copy paste 02:56:386 (3) and flip horizontally and vetically and put at the same place as it is now
03:01:793 (2) - this is a bit hard to see because of the combo burst of 03:00:746 (8) - you could just remove the repeat from it, and put a hit circle instead
03:04:583 (2,3) - the end point of the sliders
7:
03:15:373 (9) - http://puu.sh/yyiT
03:15:547 (1) - copy and flip 03:16:070 (2)
03:23:919 (1) - try this maybe? - http://puu.sh/yyk6
03:24:268 (3,4,7,9) - the end point of the sliders
03:35:780 (5,6,7,8) - ^
03:37:873 (1) - ^
03:47:291 (5,7) - ^
03:49:036 (1,2,4,5) - ^
03:51:826 (1,2) - ^
03:55:838 (8) - put this in one line with
8:
04:03:456 (6,8) - the end point of the sliders
04:14:824 (13) - ^
(nothing else in this part I guess)
9:
04:31:061 (1) - what about this patterns? - http://puu.sh/yyAv
04:49:723 (4,5,6,7,8) - this maybe? - http://puu.sh/yyDk or this - http://puu.sh/yyEF
04:51:991 (5) - the end point of the slider should be closer to the middle
10:
05:03:853 (4) - add new combo and 05:04:187 (1) - remove new combo
05:04:687 (2) - you can't overlap like that (but it has been mentioned already)
05:05:187 (3) - the end point of the slider should be closer to the middle
05:18:020 (3) - try this maybe - http://puu.sh/yyH7
05:22:854 (1,2,3,4) - try this? - http://puu.sh/yyKk - I don't really like how it looks like now
11:
05:36:033 (5,7) - what about this? - http://puu.sh/yyLC - it might look better, and 05:35:509 (4) disappears when it comes to (7), so it shouldn't be ugly
05:36:905 (9) - the end point of the slider
05:37:777 (1) - ^
05:46:149 (1,2,4) - ^
05:52:951 (5) - copy (3) and flip horizontally?
05:53:300 (6) - copy (5) and flip vertically (if you did what I wrote above)
05:53:649 (8) - one grid up and 05:53:475 (7) - one grid left
12:
06:05:109 (3,7) - the end point of the sliders
06:07:209 (2) - copy and flip horizontally 06:07:809 (4)
06:15:909 (10,11) - the end point of the sliders
06:21:609 (2,4) - ^
13:
06:36:859 (9) - this sounds better - http://puu.sh/yyVv
06:36:859 (9,2) - the end point of the sliders
06:38:977 (6) - ^
06:39:506 (7) - remove hit cirlce and add new combo and 06:40:036 (1) - remove new combo
06:42:859 (1,2) - the end point of the sliders
06:42:859 (1,2) - this pattern is not very nice - http://puu.sh/yyWc - and some of them can be hardly seen from combo bursts, so I would suggest you to do something with it
06:52:918 (2) - the end point of the slider
06:55:565 (1,2) - the end point of the sliders
14:
07:06:861 (4) - the end point of the slider
07:13:837 (1) - ^
07:21:512 (1) - this might be a bit too close to (4)
15:
07:42:016 (1,3) - ctrl+R maybe? because of the distance between 07:41:673 (7,1)
07:46:473 (1) - the end point of the slider should be inside the slider
07:49:730 (2,3,4) - these can be hardly seen from the combo burst, try to do something with it
16:
08:00:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it would look better like this - http://puu.sh/yzbD
08:01:650 (2) - the end point of the slider
08:13:992 (5) - you should make this better, so it looks like this - http://puu.sh/yzdp - it's a better blanket for (4) and just move the end point of the slider
08:14:507 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern is not nice, this might look better - http://puu.sh/yzfa - but you can also try other patterns
08:16:907 (7) - remove hit circle, it fits better to the music
00:16:054 (7) - new combo? because she starts singing another word or whatever
00:17:789 (6) - remove this and put 00:17:962 (7) earlier (and make it longer so it lasts until it lasted originally) OR leave it as long as it is and add hit circle here 00:18:309 (7), I think it fits better to the music if that long slider starts earlier
(and if you put it earlier, don't forget to change the clap)
00:32:355 (10) - I think you should put the end point of the slider near the middle, or at least don't let it out of the slider - http://puu.sh/yx9W - http://puu.sh/yxan
2:
00:52:591 (2) - I think the new combo should start here and not here 00:52:242 (1) since that's where she starts singing
00:55:381 (2) - ^
00:57:474 (1) - remove new combo
00:57:823 (1) - ^
00:58:172 (2) - add new combo
00:59:218 (5) - not necessary, but maybe you could put this a bit further from (4), cuz people might try to hit it earlier cuz of the placement, or it can be also replaced with 2 hit circles
3:
01:20:033 (7) - the end point fo the slider shouldn't be like this http://puu.sh/yxfH you can just copy this 01:20:718 (1) and flip and rotate (whatever)
01:25:861 (8) - add new combo and maybe remove new combo from here 01:26:204 (1)
01:26:718 (2,3) - try this maybe? cuz of the distance http://puu.sh/yxih
01:34:433 (1,2,3) - I think these should be placed differently, for example put (2) on the top of (3,4) and you place it further from (1)
01:35:118 (4,6) - the end point of the sliders should be more inside of the slider
01:36:661 (8) - add new combo
01:39:233 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this stream might look nicer like this - http://puu.sh/yxNK - well mine might not be perfect, but just try to make it more like a half circle
4:
01:50:112 (3,4,1) - I think this shounds better - http://puu.sh/yxP8
01:53:406 (8) - add new combo 01:53:753 (1) - remove new combo
5:
02:13:443 (1,2) - the end point of the sliders
02:19:090 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:18:031 (2,3) - these can be hardly seen because of the combo burst
02:18:737 (2,3) - maybe ctrl+R, and like that the distance should be also more realistic :3 - http://puu.sh/yxTJ
6:
02:44:700 (1,2) - the end point of the sliders
02:46:967 (9) - add new combo and 02:47:490 (1) - remove new combo
02:52:548 (10,11) - ctrl+R maybe
02:56:037 (2) - just copy paste 02:56:386 (3) and flip horizontally and vetically and put at the same place as it is now
03:01:793 (2) - this is a bit hard to see because of the combo burst of 03:00:746 (8) - you could just remove the repeat from it, and put a hit circle instead
03:04:583 (2,3) - the end point of the sliders
7:
03:15:373 (9) - http://puu.sh/yyiT
03:15:547 (1) - copy and flip 03:16:070 (2)
03:23:919 (1) - try this maybe? - http://puu.sh/yyk6
03:24:268 (3,4,7,9) - the end point of the sliders
03:35:780 (5,6,7,8) - ^
03:37:873 (1) - ^
03:47:291 (5,7) - ^
03:49:036 (1,2,4,5) - ^
03:51:826 (1,2) - ^
03:55:838 (8) - put this in one line with
8:
04:03:456 (6,8) - the end point of the sliders
04:14:824 (13) - ^
(nothing else in this part I guess)
9:
04:31:061 (1) - what about this patterns? - http://puu.sh/yyAv
04:49:723 (4,5,6,7,8) - this maybe? - http://puu.sh/yyDk or this - http://puu.sh/yyEF
04:51:991 (5) - the end point of the slider should be closer to the middle
10:
05:03:853 (4) - add new combo and 05:04:187 (1) - remove new combo
05:04:687 (2) - you can't overlap like that (but it has been mentioned already)
05:05:187 (3) - the end point of the slider should be closer to the middle
05:18:020 (3) - try this maybe - http://puu.sh/yyH7
05:22:854 (1,2,3,4) - try this? - http://puu.sh/yyKk - I don't really like how it looks like now
11:
05:36:033 (5,7) - what about this? - http://puu.sh/yyLC - it might look better, and 05:35:509 (4) disappears when it comes to (7), so it shouldn't be ugly
05:36:905 (9) - the end point of the slider
05:37:777 (1) - ^
05:46:149 (1,2,4) - ^
05:52:951 (5) - copy (3) and flip horizontally?
05:53:300 (6) - copy (5) and flip vertically (if you did what I wrote above)
05:53:649 (8) - one grid up and 05:53:475 (7) - one grid left
12:
06:05:109 (3,7) - the end point of the sliders
06:07:209 (2) - copy and flip horizontally 06:07:809 (4)
06:15:909 (10,11) - the end point of the sliders
06:21:609 (2,4) - ^
13:
06:36:859 (9) - this sounds better - http://puu.sh/yyVv
06:36:859 (9,2) - the end point of the sliders
06:38:977 (6) - ^
06:39:506 (7) - remove hit cirlce and add new combo and 06:40:036 (1) - remove new combo
06:42:859 (1,2) - the end point of the sliders
06:42:859 (1,2) - this pattern is not very nice - http://puu.sh/yyWc - and some of them can be hardly seen from combo bursts, so I would suggest you to do something with it
06:52:918 (2) - the end point of the slider
06:55:565 (1,2) - the end point of the sliders
14:
07:06:861 (4) - the end point of the slider
07:13:837 (1) - ^
07:21:512 (1) - this might be a bit too close to (4)
15:
07:42:016 (1,3) - ctrl+R maybe? because of the distance between 07:41:673 (7,1)
07:46:473 (1) - the end point of the slider should be inside the slider
07:49:730 (2,3,4) - these can be hardly seen from the combo burst, try to do something with it
16:
08:00:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it would look better like this - http://puu.sh/yzbD
08:01:650 (2) - the end point of the slider
08:13:992 (5) - you should make this better, so it looks like this - http://puu.sh/yzdp - it's a better blanket for (4) and just move the end point of the slider
08:14:507 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern is not nice, this might look better - http://puu.sh/yzfa - but you can also try other patterns
08:16:907 (7) - remove hit circle, it fits better to the music
I think that's it, overall it's nice.
Frostmourne
osu file format v9
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 132482
Countdown: 1
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
[Metadata]
Title:SUPER SHOT Compilation
Artist:Various Artists
Creator:regenz
Version:Frostmourne Collab
Source:
Tags:
[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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176,236,120863,2,0,B|207:278|181:326,1,90,2|8
100,288,121210,1,2
100,288,121297,1,0
100,288,121383,6,0,B|284:288,1,180,0|10
472,288,121903,1,2
316,360,122077,6,0,B|256:296|296:184,1,180,4|10
360,128,122597,1,0
436,180,122771,2,0,B|412:224|360:220,1,90,2|0
216,192,123117,1,8
176,272,123291,2,0,B|100:208,1,90,2|4
56,140,123638,5,2
84,316,123811,1,10
216,192,123984,1,2
276,260,124158,6,0,B|316:228|308:176,1,90
308,180,124418,1,0
308,180,124505,1,10
256,108,124678,1,2
196,44,124851,5,6
180,48,124938,1,0
164,56,125025,1,0
148,68,125112,1,0
136,80,125198,1,2
124,92,125285,1,0
113,106,125372,1,0
106,122,125458,1,0
99,138,125545,1,6
94,155,125632,1,0
91,172,125719,1,0
91,189,125805,1,0
91,207,125892,1,2
94,224,125979,1,0
98,241,126065,1,2
102,258,126152,1,0
109,274,126239,1,4
256,192,126412,12,4,127626
fixed some , thx
Topic Starter
thanks for mod change some , about end of slider ... hmm it's not effect game play and editor. so it's fine and about NC i keep NC base on beats counting.MystykAMV wrote:
From your mod4mod queue.
Nice map!
Sorry if some things in my mod are about sliders or NC, it's not only thoseSPOILER1:
00:16:054 (7) - new combo? because she starts singing another word or whatever
00:17:789 (6) - remove this and put 00:17:962 (7) earlier (and make it longer so it lasts until it lasted originally) OR leave it as long as it is and add hit circle here 00:18:309 (7), I think it fits better to the music if that long slider starts earlier
(and if you put it earlier, don't forget to change the clap)
00:32:355 (10) - I think you should put the end point of the slider near the middle, or at least don't let it out of the slider - http://puu.sh/yx9W - http://puu.sh/yxan
2:
00:52:591 (2) - I think the new combo should start here and not here 00:52:242 (1) since that's where she starts singing
00:55:381 (2) - ^
00:57:474 (1) - remove new combo
00:57:823 (1) - ^
00:58:172 (2) - add new combo
00:59:218 (5) - not necessary, but maybe you could put this a bit further from (4), cuz people might try to hit it earlier cuz of the placement, or it can be also replaced with 2 hit circles
3:
01:20:033 (7) - the end point fo the slider shouldn't be like this http://puu.sh/yxfH you can just copy this 01:20:718 (1) and flip and rotate (whatever)
01:25:861 (8) - add new combo and maybe remove new combo from here 01:26:204 (1)
01:26:718 (2,3) - try this maybe? cuz of the distance http://puu.sh/yxih
01:34:433 (1,2,3) - I think these should be placed differently, for example put (2) on the top of (3,4) and you place it further from (1)
01:35:118 (4,6) - the end point of the sliders should be more inside of the slider
01:36:661 (8) - add new combo
01:39:233 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this stream might look nicer like this - http://puu.sh/yxNK - well mine might not be perfect, but just try to make it more like a half circle
4:
01:50:112 (3,4,1) - I think this shounds better - http://puu.sh/yxP8
01:53:406 (8) - add new combo 01:53:753 (1) - remove new combo
5:
02:13:443 (1,2) - the end point of the sliders
02:19:090 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:18:031 (2,3) - these can be hardly seen because of the combo burst
02:18:737 (2,3) - maybe ctrl+R, and like that the distance should be also more realistic :3 - http://puu.sh/yxTJ
6:
02:44:700 (1,2) - the end point of the sliders
02:46:967 (9) - add new combo and 02:47:490 (1) - remove new combo
02:52:548 (10,11) - ctrl+R maybe
02:56:037 (2) - just copy paste 02:56:386 (3) and flip horizontally and vetically and put at the same place as it is now
03:01:793 (2) - this is a bit hard to see because of the combo burst of 03:00:746 (8) - you could just remove the repeat from it, and put a hit circle instead
03:04:583 (2,3) - the end point of the sliders
7:
03:15:373 (9) - http://puu.sh/yyiT
03:15:547 (1) - copy and flip 03:16:070 (2)
03:23:919 (1) - try this maybe? - http://puu.sh/yyk6
03:24:268 (3,4,7,9) - the end point of the sliders
03:35:780 (5,6,7,8) - ^
03:37:873 (1) - ^
03:47:291 (5,7) - ^
03:49:036 (1,2,4,5) - ^
03:51:826 (1,2) - ^
03:55:838 (8) - put this in one line with
8:
04:03:456 (6,8) - the end point of the sliders
04:14:824 (13) - ^
(nothing else in this part I guess)
9:
04:31:061 (1) - what about this patterns? - http://puu.sh/yyAv
04:49:723 (4,5,6,7,8) - this maybe? - http://puu.sh/yyDk or this - http://puu.sh/yyEF
04:51:991 (5) - the end point of the slider should be closer to the middle
10:
05:03:853 (4) - add new combo and 05:04:187 (1) - remove new combo
05:04:687 (2) - you can't overlap like that (but it has been mentioned already)
05:05:187 (3) - the end point of the slider should be closer to the middle
05:18:020 (3) - try this maybe - http://puu.sh/yyH7
05:22:854 (1,2,3,4) - try this? - http://puu.sh/yyKk - I don't really like how it looks like now
11:
05:36:033 (5,7) - what about this? - http://puu.sh/yyLC - it might look better, and 05:35:509 (4) disappears when it comes to (7), so it shouldn't be ugly
05:36:905 (9) - the end point of the slider
05:37:777 (1) - ^
05:46:149 (1,2,4) - ^
05:52:951 (5) - copy (3) and flip horizontally?
05:53:300 (6) - copy (5) and flip vertically (if you did what I wrote above)
05:53:649 (8) - one grid up and 05:53:475 (7) - one grid left
12:
06:05:109 (3,7) - the end point of the sliders
06:07:209 (2) - copy and flip horizontally 06:07:809 (4)
06:15:909 (10,11) - the end point of the sliders
06:21:609 (2,4) - ^
13:
06:36:859 (9) - this sounds better - http://puu.sh/yyVv
06:36:859 (9,2) - the end point of the sliders
06:38:977 (6) - ^
06:39:506 (7) - remove hit cirlce and add new combo and 06:40:036 (1) - remove new combo
06:42:859 (1,2) - the end point of the sliders
06:42:859 (1,2) - this pattern is not very nice - http://puu.sh/yyWc - and some of them can be hardly seen from combo bursts, so I would suggest you to do something with it
06:52:918 (2) - the end point of the slider
06:55:565 (1,2) - the end point of the sliders
14:
07:06:861 (4) - the end point of the slider
07:13:837 (1) - ^
07:21:512 (1) - this might be a bit too close to (4)
15:
07:42:016 (1,3) - ctrl+R maybe? because of the distance between 07:41:673 (7,1)
07:46:473 (1) - the end point of the slider should be inside the slider
07:49:730 (2,3,4) - these can be hardly seen from the combo burst, try to do something with it
16:
08:00:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it would look better like this - http://puu.sh/yzbD
08:01:650 (2) - the end point of the slider
08:13:992 (5) - you should make this better, so it looks like this - http://puu.sh/yzdp - it's a better blanket for (4) and just move the end point of the slider
08:14:507 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern is not nice, this might look better - http://puu.sh/yzfa - but you can also try other patterns
08:16:907 (7) - remove hit circle, it fits better to the music
I think that's it, overall it's nice.
not the lyric or vocal.
I think I'll keep that.
Topic Starter
-Chata- wrote:
I'm accepted test play =3=
and I'm feeling some hard part here
regenz's 04:11:509 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1)
mercury2004's 08:07:307 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2)
^ not a big problem.
It's a fine. =3= fun map =3=
I 've stack 5 circles. i think it should easier now.
thanks
BG ดูยากช่วง
01:28:261 (7) - NC
02:14:854 (7) - NC
02:20:501 (5) - NC
02:46:095 (6) - NC
03:05:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Move closer to the end of slider?
03:17:989 (8) - NC here and
03:18:338 (1) - remove NC here.
03:20:780 (10) - NC here and
03:21:303 (1) - remove NC here.
03:45:198 (7) - NC? (suggestion)
03:50:780 (6) - ^
04:12:772 (14) - NC here and
04:12:930 (1) - remove NC here.
04:51:642 (1) - Remove NC here and
04:51:991 (5) - NC here.
- 00:11:026
- 01:45:404
- 01:45:430
- 05:32:187
01:28:261 (7) - NC
02:14:854 (7) - NC
02:20:501 (5) - NC
02:46:095 (6) - NC
03:05:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Move closer to the end of slider?
03:17:989 (8) - NC here and
03:18:338 (1) - remove NC here.
03:20:780 (10) - NC here and
03:21:303 (1) - remove NC here.
03:45:198 (7) - NC? (suggestion)
03:50:780 (6) - ^
04:12:772 (14) - NC here and
04:12:930 (1) - remove NC here.
04:51:642 (1) - Remove NC here and
04:51:991 (5) - NC here.
Not a lot so i dont separate part lol
J-CORE NEVER DIE
SPOILER
[General]
DJ SHARPNEL DJ Genki
[collab]
01:31:690 (1,2,3,4) - i think u should follow the vocal to add notes
01:34:090 (8,9) - jump jump!
01:51:672 (4) - reverse selection
01:37:690 (2,3) - cant read in hd think about it
04:12:772 (14,15,1) -stream? not feel good in play, i think u overmap here, remove(15)
04:13:088 (2,3,4) - ^ remove(3)
07:08:954 (3,4) - reverse selection
07:21:163 (3,4) - ^
07:11:744 (3,4) - ^
07:35:673 - add circle
<SOUND MOD>
00:32:875 - add normal whistle
01:06:893 (3) - normal whistle cancel
01:09:160 - add normal finish
02:20:854 (7) - normal whistle cancel
02:22:795 (2) - add normal whistle
02:23:854 (6) - ^
02:34:795 (2,3,4,5,6) - there use normal whistle feel noisy try to use normal clap or low the vol.
02:37:266 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
DJ SHARPNEL DJ Genki
[collab]
01:31:690 (1,2,3,4) - i think u should follow the vocal to add notes
01:34:090 (8,9) - jump jump!
01:51:672 (4) - reverse selection
01:37:690 (2,3) - cant read in hd think about it
04:12:772 (14,15,1) -stream? not feel good in play, i think u overmap here, remove(15)
04:13:088 (2,3,4) - ^ remove(3)
07:08:954 (3,4) - reverse selection
07:21:163 (3,4) - ^
07:11:744 (3,4) - ^
07:35:673 - add circle
<SOUND MOD>
00:32:875 - add normal whistle
01:06:893 (3) - normal whistle cancel
01:09:160 - add normal finish
02:20:854 (7) - normal whistle cancel
02:22:795 (2) - add normal whistle
02:23:854 (6) - ^
02:34:795 (2,3,4,5,6) - there use normal whistle feel noisy try to use normal clap or low the vol.
02:37:266 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
Topic Starter
Thank deen and termerys for mod my map.
i change most of your mod in hitsound mod but no change in notes.
thankyou verymuch
for termerys mod only change the stream that need to closer the center.
and for bg i'll try to find it later.
thankfor mod both guys.
i change most of your mod in hitsound mod but no change in notes.
thankyou verymuch
for termerys mod only change the stream that need to closer the center.
and for bg i'll try to find it later.
thankfor mod both guys.
Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this
SPOILER
Nice song and map good luck! xDCollab
00:39:509 (3) - add note?
00:43:870 (3) - ^
00:54:684 (1) - delete NC
01:39:233 (7) - NC
01:47:164 (2) - add whistle
01:47:337 (3) - delete whistle start of slider
02:05:545 (1) - NC
03:22:350 (5,6) - how about this slider pattern? http://puu.sh/CN8s
04:40:305 (3,4) - I think this slider looks better http://puu.sh/CN9z
05:51:730 (1) - 2 girds down to make straight with 05:51:033 (7,9) - these notes
07:04:070 (5) - 1 grid right
07:46:816 (2) - check distance ,i think it has too short distance
08:01:650 (2) - how about making slider more roundly to cover this note 08:02:164 (3) -
08:04:392 (4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/CN4L
08:15:021 (4,2) - how about stack each other?
00:39:509 (3) - add note?
00:43:870 (3) - ^
00:54:684 (1) - delete NC
01:39:233 (7) - NC
01:47:164 (2) - add whistle
01:47:337 (3) - delete whistle start of slider
02:05:545 (1) - NC
03:22:350 (5,6) - how about this slider pattern? http://puu.sh/CN8s
04:40:305 (3,4) - I think this slider looks better http://puu.sh/CN9z
05:51:730 (1) - 2 girds down to make straight with 05:51:033 (7,9) - these notes
07:04:070 (5) - 1 grid right
07:46:816 (2) - check distance ,i think it has too short distance
08:01:650 (2) - how about making slider more roundly to cover this note 08:02:164 (3) -
08:04:392 (4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/CN4L
08:15:021 (4,2) - how about stack each other?
No change, 04:39:956 (2) - I make symmetry with 04:38:735 (3) - http://puu.sh/CNxU
Other it's fine , I want to keep it
@เติม เน็ท NC ตาม vocal น่ะ orz
Other it's fine , I want to keep it
@เติม เน็ท NC ตาม vocal น่ะ orz
Topic Starter
Fix most except NC mod in my part thankyou verymuch.HelloSCV wrote:
Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore thisSPOILERNice song and map good luck! xDCollab
00:39:509 (3) - add note?
00:43:870 (3) - ^
00:54:684 (1) - delete NC
01:39:233 (7) - NC
01:47:164 (2) - add whistle
01:47:337 (3) - delete whistle start of slider
02:05:545 (1) - NC
03:22:350 (5,6) - how about this slider pattern? http://puu.sh/CN8s
04:40:305 (3,4) - I think this slider looks better http://puu.sh/CN9z
05:51:730 (1) - 2 girds down to make straight with 05:51:033 (7,9) - these notes
07:04:070 (5) - 1 grid right
07:46:816 (2) - check distance ,i think it has too short distance
08:01:650 (2) - how about making slider more roundly to cover this note 08:02:164 (3) -
08:04:392 (4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/CN4L
08:15:021 (4,2) - how about stack each other?
hi >w<
mod4mod~
[General]
●fine~
[Collab]
●00:12:413 (5) - Ctrl + R
http://puu.sh/DgiD Flow will be better
●00:12:933 (6) - ^
●00:17:095 (2,3,4,5) - Placement suggestion http://puu.sh/DglD
●00:31:835 (9) - Add a new combo.
●01:11:951 (1,2,3,4,5) - Placement suggestion http://puu.sh/DgnW
●02:05:545 (9) - Add a new combo?
●02:47:490 (1,2,3) - Change form http://puu.sh/DgqC Will be funny.
●02:48:886 (6,7,8) - ^
●03:06:327 (9) - Add a new combo?
●03:16:768 (4) - Change form http://puu.sh/DgsS
●03:55:838 (8) - Move (x:360 y:172)
●04:12:614 (13,14,15,1) - Change the rhythm http://puu.sh/DgvV
●04:20:035 (7) - Change the orientation http://puu.sh/DgwJ Flow will be better
●06:21:609 (2) - Ctrl + R
●06:21:909 (3) - ^
●06:28:509 (8) - Move (x:140 y:132)
●06:47:094 (5,6) - ^ (x:220 y:80)
●07:19:768 (2) - Ctrl + R
●07:20:465 (4) - ^
●07:44:759 (3) - Move (x:184 y:44)
●07:50:930 (9) - Add a new combo
●07:58:564 (1) - Remove a new combo.
●08:08:678 (7) - Add a new combo.
●08:17:592 (1) - Remove a new combo.
that's all~
good luck
little MOD... sorry
mod4mod~
[General]
●fine~
[Collab]
●00:12:413 (5) - Ctrl + R
http://puu.sh/DgiD Flow will be better●00:12:933 (6) - ^
●00:17:095 (2,3,4,5) - Placement suggestion http://puu.sh/DglD
328,344,17268,1,0
192,264,17442,1,0
240,340,17615,1,8
264,188,17789,2,0,B|140:184|140:84,1,180,0|0
●00:31:835 (9) - Add a new combo.
●01:11:951 (1,2,3,4,5) - Placement suggestion http://puu.sh/DgnW
●02:05:545 (9) - Add a new combo?
●02:47:490 (1,2,3) - Change form http://puu.sh/DgqC Will be funny.
●02:48:886 (6,7,8) - ^
●03:06:327 (9) - Add a new combo?
●03:16:768 (4) - Change form http://puu.sh/DgsS
●03:55:838 (8) - Move (x:360 y:172)
●04:12:614 (13,14,15,1) - Change the rhythm http://puu.sh/DgvV
●04:20:035 (7) - Change the orientation http://puu.sh/DgwJ Flow will be better
●06:21:609 (2) - Ctrl + R
●06:21:909 (3) - ^
●06:28:509 (8) - Move (x:140 y:132)
●06:47:094 (5,6) - ^ (x:220 y:80)
●07:19:768 (2) - Ctrl + R
●07:20:465 (4) - ^
●07:44:759 (3) - Move (x:184 y:44)
●07:50:930 (9) - Add a new combo
●07:58:564 (1) - Remove a new combo.
●08:08:678 (7) - Add a new combo.
●08:17:592 (1) - Remove a new combo.
that's all~
good luck
little MOD... sorry
Topic Starter
< no problem it's help me.-Gamu- wrote:
hi >w<
mod4mod~
[General]
●fine~
[Collab]
●00:12:413 (5) - Ctrl + R
●00:12:933 (6) - ^ < OK
●00:17:095 (2,3,4,5) - Placement suggestion http://puu.sh/DglD < Mad slider look better328,344,17268,1,0
192,264,17442,1,0
240,340,17615,1,8
264,188,17789,2,0,B|140:184|140:84,1,180,0|0
●00:31:835 (9) - Add a new combo. < i think it's not a hard jump and it can read●01:11:951 (1,2,3,4,5) - Placement suggestion http://puu.sh/DgnW●02:05:545 (9) - Add a new combo?
●02:47:490 (1,2,3) - Change form http://puu.sh/DgqC Will be funny. seem interest change
●02:48:886 (6,7,8) - ^ seem interest change
●03:06:327 (9) - Add a new combo? < ok
●03:16:768 (4) - Change form http://puu.sh/DgsS < i think it's ok
●03:55:838 (8) - Move (x:360 y:172) < no sry
●04:12:614 (13,14,15,1) - Change the rhythm http://puu.sh/DgvV < no i follow instrument
●04:20:035 (7) - Change the orientation http://puu.sh/DgwJ Flow will be better < i want it same as 6
●06:21:609 (2) - Ctrl + R < it 'll be very hard this song is so fast so i want to make it more harder
●06:21:909 (3) - ^ < it 'll be very hard this song is so fast so i want to make it more harder
●06:28:509 (8) - Move (x:140 y:132) < ok
●06:47:094 (5,6) - ^ (x:220 y:80) < Ok
●07:19:768 (2) - Ctrl + R < i think it's not good
●07:20:465 (4) - ^ < i think it's not good
●07:44:759 (3) - Move (x:184 y:44) <k
●07:50:930 (9) - Add a new combo < not fix
●07:58:564 (1) - Remove a new combo. <k
●08:08:678 (7) - Add a new combo. <k
●08:17:592 (1) - Remove a new combo. <k
that's all~
good luck
little MOD... sorry
thanks for mod
Alright, let's see what I can find.
Do you think the Countdown is really neccessary? It would be not a big deal to remove it. But if you want to hold it, then it is also ok.
00:16:228 (8,9) - I would reverse them because the flow is really bad here. And I think a better flow is better to play then a Jump.
00:28:713 (3,4) - Same here as above.
00:49:277 (3,5,7) - The Whistles are quite strange and doesn't fit so much here.
00:52:242 (1) - NC seems pretty useless here, so remove it?
00:53:637 (1) - Here too.
00:55:032 (1) - Here too.
01:37:004 (10,1) - The Jump feels pretty hard to play.
01:37:690 (2,3) - Here too.
01:39:233 (7) - NC here, because the Stream starts here?
01:54:967 (1) - Please end the Spinner at 01:56:181.
02:23:854 (6) - NC here?
04:12:298 (9) - Here too.
04:47:805 (8) - Here too.
04:48:677 (1) - Remove NC if you take the Suggestion above.
05:02:687 (1) - I don't like the Whistle at the Slider. You should hold the Whistle at the Start Point, but remove it from the silder.
05:05:520 (1,2) - Sounds weird IMO.
05:20:020 (4) - How about to remove Whistle and to set finish?
05:50:335 (5) - NC here, because it feels better to play.
06:08:409 (7) - NC here?
08:10:564 (5) - It looks very hidden because of the stream part and of 08:09:878 (3). People may get disturb at playing.
I hope you can do something with this..
I actually hate this kind of music, so my mod quite sucks. But it is also well mapped, so. :p
Do you think the Countdown is really neccessary? It would be not a big deal to remove it. But if you want to hold it, then it is also ok.
00:16:228 (8,9) - I would reverse them because the flow is really bad here. And I think a better flow is better to play then a Jump.
00:28:713 (3,4) - Same here as above.
00:49:277 (3,5,7) - The Whistles are quite strange and doesn't fit so much here.
00:52:242 (1) - NC seems pretty useless here, so remove it?
00:53:637 (1) - Here too.
00:55:032 (1) - Here too.
01:37:004 (10,1) - The Jump feels pretty hard to play.
01:37:690 (2,3) - Here too.
01:39:233 (7) - NC here, because the Stream starts here?
01:54:967 (1) - Please end the Spinner at 01:56:181.
02:23:854 (6) - NC here?
04:12:298 (9) - Here too.
04:47:805 (8) - Here too.
04:48:677 (1) - Remove NC if you take the Suggestion above.
05:02:687 (1) - I don't like the Whistle at the Slider. You should hold the Whistle at the Start Point, but remove it from the silder.
05:05:520 (1,2) - Sounds weird IMO.
05:20:020 (4) - How about to remove Whistle and to set finish?
05:50:335 (5) - NC here, because it feels better to play.
06:08:409 (7) - NC here?
08:10:564 (5) - It looks very hidden because of the stream part and of 08:09:878 (3). People may get disturb at playing.
I hope you can do something with this..
I actually hate this kind of music, so my mod quite sucks. But it is also well mapped, so. :p
No Changed D:
why not approved 
sorry, but the creater is completely disappearNatteke wrote:
why not approved
R.I.P
Edit: he is come back with no internet at home lol
Topic Starter
I'm not dead Fยู0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:
sorry, but the creater is completely disappearNatteke wrote:
why not approved
R.I.P
Edit: he is come back with no internet at home lol
regenz wrote:
I'm not dead Fยู
YSSS
Topic Starter
กำ ไม่ได้หมายความให้เปลี่ยนแบบน้านนนนนน เขาแค่ให้เปลี่ยนชื่อใน SBเป็นชื่อตอนนี้แล้วก็ใส่แท็กชื่อเก่ากับชื่อใหม่ลงไปก็เท่านั้นเอง xDDregenz wrote:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/556954
Done! thanks Gabe
Topic Starter
ส่งเกสไทโกะให้แล้วจะเอาออกให้นะ
เดี๋ยว ที่ตกลงไม่ใช่เพลงนี้ เอาออกด้วยยยย
Topic Starter
เนรเทศมันไปดาวอังคารเหอะ
ไม่ใช่คนละ
เปรียบเทียบกันแล้วช่างน่าอดสูเสียนี่กระไร
gogogogogo approve
watGabe wrote:
she has ranked maps with that name.
LMAONatteke wrote:
regenz wrote:
I'm not dead Fยู
YSSS
anyways,
ขอสงวนไม่แก้ part ของผมเลยนะ ไม่ว่าจะมีม็อดอะไรเข้ามา , ทำดีสุดแล้วจริงๆ
ที่เหลือก็รอ approve
regenz
00:18:309 (7,8,9) - spacing between 8-7-9's beginning is different
00:21:690 (x) - add a note
00:23:511 (5) - nc for rhythm changing
00:27:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think you can make it better, it's ugly now :3
00:31:835 (9) - nc for 1/2 - 3/4 rhythm changing
02:51:676 (8) - NC for spacing
03:22:175 (4) - spacing
03:55:838 (8) - stacking with 4?
06:50:271 (7,8) - x:97 y:119, to keep same distance
frost
00:52:242 (1) - maybe this nc is un necessary, but since you have do it during all this part so maybe nothing
01:11:951 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing too close?
01:54:967 (1) - end at 01:56:181? I think it's better
Fumika
04:35:247 (2) - overlapping, maybe put it at x:371 y:139
04:46:235 (1,2,3) - x:101 y:301 is better :3
04:37:688 (8) - overlapping :< x:233 y:139?
04:38:037 (1) - It's a bit overlapped, move 04:37:165 (6) to x:170 y:207
04:45:712 (4) - keep some distance between 6 and 3's end
mercury2004
07:41:330 (4,5,6,7) - I think these are not perfectly aligned
00:18:309 (7,8,9) - spacing between 8-7-9's beginning is different
00:21:690 (x) - add a note
00:23:511 (5) - nc for rhythm changing
00:27:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think you can make it better, it's ugly now :3
00:31:835 (9) - nc for 1/2 - 3/4 rhythm changing
02:51:676 (8) - NC for spacing
03:22:175 (4) - spacing
03:55:838 (8) - stacking with 4?
06:50:271 (7,8) - x:97 y:119, to keep same distance
frost
00:52:242 (1) - maybe this nc is un necessary, but since you have do it during all this part so maybe nothing
01:11:951 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing too close?
01:54:967 (1) - end at 01:56:181? I think it's better
Fumika
04:35:247 (2) - overlapping, maybe put it at x:371 y:139
04:46:235 (1,2,3) - x:101 y:301 is better :3
04:37:688 (8) - overlapping :< x:233 y:139?
04:38:037 (1) - It's a bit overlapped, move 04:37:165 (6) to x:170 y:207
04:45:712 (4) - keep some distance between 6 and 3's end
mercury2004
07:41:330 (4,5,6,7) - I think these are not perfectly aligned
@eveless fixed all except about NC (1st line)
Thank you !!
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@regenz จะเริ่ม copy จากไหนอ่ะพี่ ผมงง - -*
Hi, M4M
forgottopost q.q
Really good map so far!
Can you try to at least get 3 more mods? Call me back after that!
Really good map so far!
Marathon
- 00:11:026 (1,2,3,4) - I am going to go nazi with these objects. These objects are placed in a way that it's off from the center of the playground. I am suggesting you to make them centered by highlighting these objects; after highlighting them, try to move them that the two circles are perfectly placed at the middle. Also, with the slider (4), move it some grid at the left, it will give the same proportion has the previous slider.
- 00:17:789 (6) - Can you try to reform this slider a bit to make it more curved? It will look better if it's curved.
- 00:31:835 (9) - This slider's form is looking a bit weird since the end of the slider is almost touching the slider (6). I suggest you to make a blanket with it instead, it's going to look better and it won't be seen as the example I've gave you.
- 00:40:730 (1,2) - Actually, with these objects, the slider sounds a bit late from where it should be.. I highly suggest you to make a reverse of these objects by making CTRL+G. By going this, the slider will be placed to where the previous circle was and, it won't sound late.
- 00:43:695 (2) - This circle is not sounding well to where it is on the timeline and on the playground, it's completely making a jump. I suggest you to move the circle to 00:43:870 (so, it's going to sound better) and by moving it, it's giving it the chance to delete the jump. So, it's even more better!
- 01:19:176 (4) - This slider is looking very weird, like the form you've made with these red dots, looks like the slider was large and it should be less larger than that. For an example, you could try to move these red dots more closer so it's going to make the slider less larger;
- 01:22:433 (6) - You could make a nice flow here by simply reversing it, by doing Ctrl+G. The current flow with the next slider is just.. simple. So it will be more challenging if you make the change.
- 02:18:560 (1,2) - Make sure to align these circles
- 02:33:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - *Comment*: MUSTAAAAAAAACH!~
- 06:36:506 (8) - That's completely nazi to say but like.. this slider is really close from the previous one, I suggest you to give it some spaces, for an example, move it one grid at the right.
- 06:52:036 (7,12) - Move both of these circles one grid at the right, because they're currently not following the spacing consistency of your previous objects.
- 10:26:676 (2,3,4,5) - I swear they could be looking better if they were perfectly consistent on the spacing o_o
Can you try to at least get 3 more mods? Call me back after that!
Topic Starter
Fix most except NC (well my NC style is a bit complicate.goodbye wrote:
regenz
00:18:309 (7,8,9) - spacing between 8-7-9's beginning is different
00:21:690 (x) - add a note
00:23:511 (5) - nc for rhythm changing
00:27:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think you can make it better, it's ugly now :3
00:31:835 (9) - nc for 1/2 - 3/4 rhythm changing
02:51:676 (8) - NC for spacing
03:22:175 (4) - spacing
03:55:838 (8) - stacking with 4?
06:50:271 (7,8) - x:97 y:119, to keep same distance
1.NC some Hard part that it made easier to play
2.NC every 8 beats
3.some thing special.(except 1-2)
well keep 1 is top piority then 2 3
thanks
Topic Starter
Gabe wrote:
Hi, M4Mforgottopost q.q
Really good map so far!Marathon
- 00:11:026 (1,2,3,4) - I am going to go nazi with these objects. These objects are placed in a way that it's off from the center of the playground. I am suggesting you to make them centered by highlighting these objects; after highlighting them, try to move them that the two circles are perfectly placed at the middle. Also, with the slider (4), move it some grid at the left, it will give the same proportion has the previous slider.
- 00:17:789 (6) - Can you try to reform this slider a bit to make it more curved? It will look better if it's curved.
- 00:31:835 (9) - This slider's form is looking a bit weird since the end of the slider is almost touching the slider (6). I suggest you to make a blanket with it instead, it's going to look better and it won't be seen as the example I've gave you.
- 00:40:730 (1,2) - Actually, with these objects, the slider sounds a bit late from where it should be.. I highly suggest you to make a reverse of these objects by making CTRL+G. By going this, the slider will be placed to where the previous circle was and, it won't sound late.
- 00:43:695 (2) - This circle is not sounding well to where it is on the timeline and on the playground, it's completely making a jump. I suggest you to move the circle to 00:43:870 (so, it's going to sound better) and by moving it, it's giving it the chance to delete the jump. So, it's even more better!
- 01:19:176 (4) - This slider is looking very weird, like the form you've made with these red dots, looks like the slider was large and it should be less larger than that. For an example, you could try to move these red dots more closer so it's going to make the slider less larger;
- 01:22:433 (6) - You could make a nice flow here by simply reversing it, by doing Ctrl+G. The current flow with the next slider is just.. simple. So it will be more challenging if you make the change.
- 02:18:560 (1,2) - Make sure to align these circles
- 02:33:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - *Comment*: MUSTAAAAAAAACH!~
- 06:36:506 (8) - That's completely nazi to say but like.. this slider is really close from the previous one, I suggest you to give it some spaces, for an example, move it one grid at the right.
- 06:52:036 (7,12) - Move both of these circles one grid at the right, because they're currently not following the spacing consistency of your previous objects.
- 10:26:676 (2,3,4,5) - I swear they could be looking better if they were perfectly consistent on the spacing o_o
Can you try to at least get 3 more mods? Call me back after that!
Fix most Except Last song and red dot slider.
For frost part i'll leave it. thanks for mod
Please approve! *throwing star*
*throwing star*Hi! sorry later ! here my mod also thank m4m
[Marathon]
Gameplay:
Sorry later ! great map and funny
Question ? ask me in-game i can explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye !
[Marathon]
Gameplay:
Frostmourne
- 01:52:193 (5) - this should be NC because you can listen that vocals is change and low example here 01:46:643 (1) that is same, so really need NC that would sense lot IMO
- 01:57:742 (5) - Missing NC the vocals is really same at 01:46:643 (1)
- 02:00:516 (6) - NC that vocals is higher and would fit you pattern combo color before that part like 01:52:193 (5)
regenz - 02:18:207 (3) - really need gird 1 left to perfect align with 02:17:854 (1)
- 03:41:710 (5,7) - I see this slider shape are different, try same shape
- 05:45:277 (7) - Why no try same shape with 05:44:579 (5) then fix spacing other part, this would great gameplay IMO
- 06:13:509 (1) - Remove NC there not sense, and keep it consistency pattern before example 06:09:309 (1), many more
- 08:54:842 (1) - grid 1 down to perfect align with 08:55:182 (3) in begin slider
- 10:37:301 (7,8) - The (7) should move to x:290 y:180 and (2) should move to x:172 y:192 to be consistency before part with 10:36:520 (2,3,4,5,6)
Fumika - 04:43:444 (4) - should be NC there vocals change and higher like you did at 04:32:456 (1), 04:45:014 (1) and 04:46:235 (1), so this should be NC as the vocals is so higher
Mercury2004 - 08:12:948 (1,2) - isn't same shape and blanket with 08:14:183 (4,5) try same shape and nice blanket
nice map, really good also i did check hitsound they are everthing consistency
Sorry later ! great map and funny
Question ? ask me in-game i can explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye !
Topic Starter
Fix most but some NC is make player better to see notes. and it's my intention.
thanks
also thanks for star ^^.
thanks
also thanks for star ^^.