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See U - I fantasy (Cut Ver.)

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xiceyx
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 29 September 2012 at 4:58:01 PM

Artist: See U
Title: I fantasy (Cut Ver.)
Source: Vocaloid 3
Tags: xiceyx vocaloid 3 i fantasy SeeU short version Korean Pop
BPM: 114.98
Filesize: 6323kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.23 stars, 119 notes)
  2. iYoona's Hard (4.44 stars, 154 notes)
  3. Normal (3.39 stars, 137 notes)


Download: See U - I fantasy (Cut Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Well here is my first map, I think this is one of the bests that I've done because it's timed better xD
Yeaah so it took me a day to complete the 2 levels on this map.
I edited the count down and I do not own the bg's used!
I hope you guys like the map :D

Oh yeah, if you have downloaded before the start of August, you may need to re download, I changed the name of this map, added a new level & changed the skin around!!


Easy: May be finished. Also, changed snap divisor and made the audio from normal to softer! As well I changed the circle size! (Thank you so much for your help iYoonaRawrx)

Normal: I have worked on it, hope its ready? As well as that, I have changed the volume of the audio from normal to softer.

Hard: Thank you so much for iYoonaRawrx for creating a hard level!!! And thank you for finding the combo burst, spinner and other things :D

Thank you for all the people who posted on this map's forum to help!




-xiceyx
HonDon
Hi~

Easy

Generally, some of the slider timings are off
00:10:462 Slider starting timing is weird
00:12:154 Move to (256,256)
00:12:574 Move to (416,256)
00:15:774 New Combo
00:20:073 Slider starting timing is weird
00:24:685 " , also the ending timing too
00:27:708 Timing a bit off
00:29:088 "
00:47:737 " , ending timing is off
00:52:243 Move to (352,192)
00:53:825 Move to (320,256)
00:54:354 Move to (448,256)
00:55:934 Timing is a bit off
01:08:250 Move to (224,224)
01:18:754 Move to (256,256)

I hope this helps!
Topic Starter
xiceyx
Thank you soo much for that help! You have got 1 kudosu! I will work on it :)
MochiRiceDesu
Easy And Normal Seems a bit hard, Also It Has confusing timing >.<
Topic Starter
xiceyx

MochiRiceDesu wrote:

Easy And Normal Seems a bit hard, Also It Has confusing timing >.<
XD sorry about that I am working on it
Topic Starter
xiceyx
Hmm I'm wondering, on the easy level is there a background?
Because I did put one there, and every time I update the beat map on my computer it is there.. But when I see the map on the website its blank like it doesn't have a background picture...
Eismis
How bout this easy version of yours map?

http://www.mediafire.com/?nst6l1j9fbzydbl
Topic Starter
xiceyx

Eismis wrote:

How bout this easy version of yours map?

http://www.mediafire.com/?nst6l1j9fbzydbl
Thank you so much for trying the beat is really slow which I need for an easy level xD
But some notes don't really match with the beat, I will give you kudosu for trying
dawnbreeze
Hey there~
I wanted to help cause I like this song :)

[GENERAL]
I think it will be better to use 1/3 or 1/4 beat snap divisor. (really really recommended)

[EASY]
The spacing is too long for easy.
00:10:077 try to move the end of slider to 00:09:990
00:15:208 put a circle on it.
00:24:077 a circle under a slider track is not allowed for easy.
00:25:730 try to move the end of slider to 00:25:643
00:27:730 put a circle on it.
00:28:599 try to put it to 00:28:512
00:34:077 try to move the start of slider to 00:33:991
00:37:991 try to move it to 00:37:904
00:39:034 try to move it to 00:38:947
00:39:817 try to move it to 00:39:730
00:40:077 try to move it to 00:39:991
00:42:164 try to move it to 00:42:077
00:45:991 delete the circle.
00:42:773 try to move it to 00:42:860
00:50:817 try to resize the slider to 00:49:904
00:50:425 put a cirlce on it.
00:51:643 try to move it to 00:51:469
00:51:730 put a cirlce on it.
00:55:817 try to move it to 00:55:904
00:56:860 delete the repeat and move the start of slider to 00:56:947
00:57:382 try to move the end of slider to 00:57:469
00:59:121 try to move the start of slider to 00:59:034
01:00:686 try to move the start of slider to 01:00:599

[HARD]
00:08:512 try to move the end of spinner to 00:08:686
00:09:295 try to move the end of slider to 00:09:208
00:09:904 try to move the end of slider to 00:09:730
00:11:121 try to move the end of slider to 00:11:034

[COMMENT]
Well, almost all of incorrect beat because of a bit off timing. You are almost there.
Using 1/3 or 1/4 beat snap divisor will help you.
I am sorry, I can't correcting all of them, but I think my reply will help you. 8-)
I hope it is not too late... :|
Topic Starter
xiceyx

dawnbreeze wrote:

Hey there~
I wanted to help cause I like this song :)

[GENERAL]
I think it will be better to use 1/3 or 1/4 beat snap divisor. (really really recommended)

[EASY]
The spacing is too long for easy.
00:10:077 try to move the end of slider to 00:09:990
00:15:208 put a circle on it.
00:24:077 a circle under a slider track is not allowed for easy.
00:25:730 try to move the end of slider to 00:25:643
00:27:730 put a circle on it.
00:28:599 try to put it to 00:28:512
00:34:077 try to move the start of slider to 00:33:991
00:37:991 try to move it to 00:37:904
00:39:034 try to move it to 00:38:947
00:39:817 try to move it to 00:39:730
00:40:077 try to move it to 00:39:991
00:42:164 try to move it to 00:42:077
00:45:991 delete the circle.
00:42:773 try to move it to 00:42:860
00:50:817 try to resize the slider to 00:49:904
00:50:425 put a cirlce on it.
00:51:643 try to move it to 00:51:469
00:51:730 put a cirlce on it.
00:55:817 try to move it to 00:55:904
00:56:860 delete the repeat and move the start of slider to 00:56:947
00:57:382 try to move the end of slider to 00:57:469
00:59:121 try to move the start of slider to 00:59:034
01:00:686 try to move the start of slider to 01:00:599

[HARD]
00:08:512 try to move the end of spinner to 00:08:686
00:09:295 try to move the end of slider to 00:09:208
00:09:904 try to move the end of slider to 00:09:730
00:11:121 try to move the end of slider to 00:11:034

[COMMENT]
Well, almost all of incorrect beat because of a bit off timing. You are almost there.
Using 1/3 or 1/4 beat snap divisor will help you.
I am sorry, I can't correcting all of them, but I think my reply will help you. 8-)
I hope it is not too late... :|
Thank you so much for that help!! It really helped! I have worked on the easy level, I gtg right now, but I will edit the hard level as soon as possible! Thank you again I will give you Kudosu! :)

EDIT:
I have edited the Normal/Hard level and thank you!
vast370
Random mod~

[GENERAL]
Try to refrain from using names such as "Short", "Full", or "Cut Ver." in your map title Unless the extension is part of the song's original title. If you map is substantially shorter than the length of the track, you can add (Cut ver.) to the title.
>Remove the short version from title, please. But don't forget to check t/24443
The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.
>Your song's bitrate is 256kbps, change it to meet the above criteria.

[COMMENT]
>Sorry for my bad english.
>Nice song.
Topic Starter
xiceyx

vast370 wrote:

Random mod~

[GENERAL]
Try to refrain from using names such as "Short", "Full", or "Cut Ver." in your map title Unless the extension is part of the song's original title. If you map is substantially shorter than the length of the track, you can add (Cut ver.) to the title.
>Remove the short version from title, please. But don't forget to check t/24443
The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.
>Your song's bitrate is 256kbps, change it to meet the above criteria.

[COMMENT]
>Sorry for my bad english.
>Nice song.
Thanks for the points, but I'm not sure how to change the bitrate of the song...
So could you help me with that? Or anyone reading this help me?
-Thanks xiceyx
jabberwockey
Here you go~ 192 kbps mp3
http://puu.sh/GSgo
I see you are a new mapper!
There some problems with the map but that's okay, you are still learning! (as am I haha)


[General]
A preview point needs to be set o u o I suggest 00:59:00
( > Timing > Set Current Position as preview point )
Uh since this is a SeeU song, maybe put only SeeU in the skin? If you need skin help you can ask anytime ;3; I can render for you.
A lot of notes are not snapped, so it sounds off .
You should get to fixing these first ; o ;
Topic Starter
xiceyx

Shoily wrote:

Here you go~ 192 kbps mp3
http://puu.sh/GSgo
I see you are a new mapper!
There some problems with the map but that's okay, you are still learning! (as am I haha)


[General]
A preview point needs to be set o u o I suggest 00:59:00
( > Timing > Set Current Position as preview point )
Uh since this is a SeeU song, maybe put only SeeU in the skin? If you need skin help you can ask anytime ;3; I can render for you.
A lot of notes are not snapped, so it sounds off .
You should get to fixing these first ; o ;
Ok thank you so much! I will work on it tomorrow I have to go right now!
Thank you!! I will give you kudosu :D
Topic Starter
xiceyx
:lol:

Shoily wrote:

Here you go~ 192 kbps mp3
http://puu.sh/GSgo
I see you are a new mapper!
There some problems with the map but that's okay, you are still learning! (as am I haha)


[General]
A preview point needs to be set o u o I suggest 00:59:00
( > Timing > Set Current Position as preview point )
Uh since this is a SeeU song, maybe put only SeeU in the skin? If you need skin help you can ask anytime ;3; I can render for you.
A lot of notes are not snapped, so it sounds off .
You should get to fixing these first ; o ;
The audio does not work for the beatmap and I dont know how to change a preview point or where exactly to find it... can you help please? Or anyone else reading this?
Topic Starter
xiceyx

xiceyx wrote:

:lol:

Shoily wrote:

Here you go~ 192 kbps mp3
http://puu.sh/GSgo
I see you are a new mapper!
There some problems with the map but that's okay, you are still learning! (as am I haha)


[General]
A preview point needs to be set o u o I suggest 00:59:00
( > Timing > Set Current Position as preview point )
Uh since this is a SeeU song, maybe put only SeeU in the skin? If you need skin help you can ask anytime ;3; I can render for you.
A lot of notes are not snapped, so it sounds off .
You should get to fixing these first ; o ;
The audio does not work for the beatmap and I dont know how to change a preview point or where exactly to find it... can you help please? Or anyone else reading this?
Wait the audio works, (fixed it lol) anyway I still dont know how to change preview point
dawnbreeze
First you should find the correct preview point on the snap divisor.
Then do this...
Hope this can help you~
Topic Starter
xiceyx
00:59:000 ignore this xD I need the timing thingy xDDD
Topic Starter
xiceyx

dawnbreeze wrote:

First you should find the correct preview point on the snap divisor.
Then do this...
Hope this can help you~
Thank you so much! That helped! xD i'm soo dumb when it comes to making maps
Ceani
[General]
I think you should add "korean pop" to the tags? o3o
Also the volume is a bit loud on both maps.
You could either change it to Soft or set it to 65.
It just hurts my ears >_<

[Easy]
00:10:382 (2) - maybe like this?:

[Normal]
00:08:947 (1) - Like this?:
also...
00:08:947 (1,2,3,1) - at the end of the sliders add a clap? and add a clap to the circle too?
00:12:077 (2,3) - clap?

Thats it.

Sorry for the small mod >_<
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