Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa
Konniciha!!


[General]
* Your hitsound are messy, there are some random finishs, claps and whistles. Please listen to the song and put clap where snare are hit, and put whistle where bass are hit

OK, I'll try recheck sounds and to find fitting notes


[Normal]
* AR +1?

00:36:617 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
02:09:699 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu, so beginners are hard to see (sometimes, begginers are slow to read)
02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider
02:42:168 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
03:20:593 (7) - New combo?
03:29:018 (1) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
03:30:250 (2) - ^
04:50:182 (2) - ^

All fixed

[Hard]
* There is a whistle at sliderbody, which is annoying. Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)

00:38:672 (1) - This note is almost overlapped by hitbursts, I think it's better to move further away from it
02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider

All fixed

[Lunatic]
00:56:137 (8) - New combo for 0,5x slider, it's confusing without NC it

fixed


I hate Seiga
oh...

Dusty wrote:

[Normal]
If the entire map had the spacing of the kiai section it would be so great because your notes wouldn't have the ugly overlap. (When non-stream notes overlap each other it's my pet peeve ._.)
00:36:822 (5) - Maybe make this a curved slider?
03:10:113 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the spacing change confused me so much that I combobroke. don't think that's a good idea in a Normal...
04:14:634 (1,2) - spacing

All fixed
I should considere this map and some change

[Hard]
00:43:192 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - increase the spacing?
00:56:137 (5,1) - ^?
01:49:767 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^?
02:01:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^?
02:23:055 (3,1) - I don't like this antijump

All fixed

[Lunatic]
parts of this feels overmapped :/ like you're still mapping to the lyrics but just adding 1/4 triples everywhere. IMO if you want to use 1/4 triples in this song you should map to the instruments instead
I see... thanks

03:36:620 (4,5) - don't like this antijump fixed

Overall, I like Hard a lot, but I think Lunatic feels overmapped (it feels like Hard with 1/4 triples, really and I wish it were more of its own thing) and the flow in Normal is kind of eh.

shojimeguro wrote:

as you say i only mod 2 diff so
let's started

Normal
00:28:603 - missing notes sorry no change
00:30:247 - this too
00:35:178 - and here

00:37:644 - 00:38:363 - fill it please fixed
00:41:754 - same sorry no change
00:43:398 - same fixed
00:45:041 - 00:46:682 - 00:48:329 - 00:51:719 - missing notes fixed

Hard
00:01:571 - start here
well the beats seems to be in place so i have no comment

That's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!!

Thank you Modding

pyransc wrote:

Hi my mod.

[Normal]
CS +1 large? sorry no change

00:28:603 - add circle? no change
00:35:178 - ^ no change
00:38:672 (2) - remove NC fixed
00:41:754 - add circle ? fixed
00:42:165 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:43:398 (7) - add NC fixed
00:43:809 (1) - remove NC no change
01:38:055 (2) - remove circle, start spinner here fixed
02:28:192 - add circle no change
02:28:809 (4) - delete this. add slider with one reverse, end at 02:29:219 no change

[Hard]
hitsound are a little chaotic. I do not understand why you sometimes Turn down the audio. hm..ok I'll consider
01:01:480 - 01:02:713 - a very strange part no change
02:27:987 (1,2,3) - use distance snap already,use 1.8x distance

[FreeSky]
ok

384059043 wrote:

hi~ from CLANNAD MODDING QUEUE~

here's my mod >_<

* suggestion
** hightly suggestion
*** unrankable

[Normal]
* 00:27:370 (2,3) - blanket?
** 00:32:302 (3,4,1) - spacing
* 00:38:055 (1) - why new combo? OAO
* 00:45:041 (4,5) - blanket?
** 00:58:192 - add a note
** 00:58:398 (2,3) - spacing
* 01:03:535 (1,2) - blanket
* 01:33:124 (4,1) - don't want to see overlap
* 01:51:206 (1,2) - blanket
* 02:28:809 (3) - not suitable for normal
* 02:49:360 (1,3) - not good-looking
* 02:55:319 (1,2) - confusing..move them left?
* 03:17:511 (4,5) - blanket better
* 03:49:976 (2) - spacing

All fixed!!

good luck~

jogfi2002 wrote:

こんばんはー鏡からのMODです、よろしくね。

[General]
タイミングは問題ないと思う。
ストーリーボードがない場合、マップセットのフォルダーから「.osb」ファイルを削除すべきです。fixed!

素晴らしい曲ですね、聞きたら少し悲しみを感じたけど…
ありがとう！少し切ないですよね！

[Normal]
01:16:685 - add note サークル3つにするとstar diffがあがってしまうのでスライダーにしてリターンつけました
01:47:918 (1) - このスライダーと前のノートの距離はDSに合っていない。 fixed
02:39:497 (1,2,3,4) - このnoteを白線に配置するのはうがいいかな？ fixed

04:20:593 (1) - これもDS問題
04:50:182 (2) - ＾
後半は全部1.0xにそろえてあるはずなのですが問題あったのかな 保留

[Hard]
01:44:220 (1,2) - ちょっとこのサークルとこのスライダーは連撃じゃないかって勘違いをしたｗスライダーをもっと少し遠くしてのはいいかも。
03:19:771 (7,8) - ＾
04:47:922 (2,1,2,3) - 前のとは同じで、初見の時は思わずすぐに1をヒットしまった(^_^;)
All fixed!

[Lunatic]
00:34:562 (2,3,4,5) - この跳びは平和なリズムに合ってないと思う。そしてここは小節の始まりでもない。別のModでこうしたのでそのままで！
00:56:137 (1) - リズムは変わっていない、突然の減速はちょっと迷わす。強調したい部分だったのでそのままで！
01:12:576 (7,8,9) - 前のようにもっと緊密に配置して、先後一致するのはいいと思う。どういうことだろう・・？ごめんなさいそのままで

01:14:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - この跳びはちょっと後にして、ずんずんあがっている「木霊する」って歌詞に合ってのほうはもっと適当だと思う。
02:32:922 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ＾
四角形ジャンプはそのままに、スライダーのジャンプを加えてみました！
03:14:429 (5,6,7,8) - これらのノートと 03:15:456 (1,2) は同じに1/8の間隔をとっているですけど、配置の距離は違います。一致するのはいいと思う。fixed!


ほかに特に問題はない。
下手な日本語ですが、申し訳ございません。変なことを言ったら、指摘してください。

会話もできるレベルの上手な日本語だと思います！
Moddingありがとう～

- t e n n y a - wrote:

lily-an yay x)
star ~*

Dagger-Gazel wrote:

hi~ 思ったことをばんばん書いていくので、参考になれば(｡ÒωÓ。)~
(この前のM4Mのあれです！)

ありがとう～！！！

General

1. tagのTouhouはいらないんじゃないかな！ソースにあるし！
2. tagに作詞のazuki、編集のkaztora,eba、アルバム名のreunion、原曲のdesire driveを追加?

Fixed!!

Lunatic

• Suggestion

1. 00:31:891 (7) - がんばって先端を綺麗にスタック~　Fixed
2. 00:36:000 (7) - x^448 y^296にもってくると6.7.8で綺麗な三角形~　Fixed
3. 01:06:206 (4,5) - ちょっと見づらい感あるから4と5の配置を逆にしてみたり？　Fixed
4. 01:11:137 (3) - ここはremove Finishで 01:11:548 (1) - こっちにadd Finish? ( 01:18:124 (1) - ここについてるし！ )
   ほんとだ・・・何を考えていたんだ
5. 01:19:767 (1) - 手前の5.6と1で綺麗に三角形を作ってみては？　Fixed
6. 01:23:261 (2,3,4,5,6) - 音の強さを拾うと2をもう少しジャンプさせて、5.6の距離が近い感じがしました・・・改善案は思い浮かびませんでした!!
   適当にジャンプさせたった！
7. 01:28:911 - Lunaticですし、ここの音を拾って3連打にしてみては？Fixed
8. 01:34:254 - 同じくここも拾って5連打にしても全然問題ないように思えました　ここはのーちぇんじでいきます～
9. 01:45:247 (2,3,4) - 2.3.4の順番を　4.2.3に変えてみては？NICE!!
10. 01:55:521 - ここの音を拾いたい感じがするので 01:55:726 - ここのnoteを削除し、スライダーを引いてみては？Fixed
11. 02:03:946 (11) - 3grid左 1grid上で綺麗になるかも？ Fixed
12. 02:27:781 - remove noteでもいいかも？ Fixed
13. 02:29:219 (5) - 曲調的にここから遅いスライダーで伸ばしたい感じ~ ここはのーちぇんじで～
14. 02:29:630 (1) - サビここからじゃないですかね・・？前後のサビのパターンを確認してみてください oh... おっしゃるとおりで。。
15. 02:46:997 - add note Fixed
16. 02:56:757 - ここからスピン始まってもいい感じ？ Fixed
17. 03:20:798 (7) - メロディ拾ってるのであればここのnoteはいらない・・・？ Fixed
18. 03:36:415 (6) - 4のヒットバーストに少しかぶって見づらい感あったので移動できるのであれば右に移動したほうがいいかも?(remove noteでもいい感じがするけど！)
    ずらしました～
19. 03:45:456 (7) - x^296 y^140くらいが好ましい感じ? Fixed
20. 03:48:127 (9,10) - 9と10は平行に配置したい感じ どういうことだろう・・？のーちぇんじにします
21. 04:36:004 - add noteしてもいいかも Fixed
22. 04:37:853 (2) - この部分はadd finishかも？Fixed
23. 04:45:250 (3) - ちょっといきなり近い気がします　手前にnoteを配置するか　間隔を調整したほうがいいです

add note しましたー

Hard

• Suggestion

1. 00:38:672 (1) - 1grid右で△~ Fixed
2. 00:56:137 (1) - 1grid落として高さそろえた方が綺麗かも? 00:56:959 (1) - こちらは同様に2gridかな~ Fixed
3. 00:58:192 - 音的にここにnote　00:58:398 - ここから 00:58:809 - ここまでスライダーって感じがしました Fixed
4. 01:00:658 - ここの音を拾いたい~ Fixed
5. 01:17:507 (9) - 2grid右? Fixed
6. 02:04:356 (2) - clap忘れかな？Lunaticにはここにclapがあります~ Fixed
7. 02:29:840 (2) - 何だこのスライダーはｗｗｗ　02:30:250 - ここまできっちりひこう！ｗ uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
8. 02:51:826 (4) - 1grid右~ Fixed
9. 03:35:182 - んん・・・Lunaticならここ音拾ってる気がします~・・・どうなんだろう今のままであってるきがするけど・・！
   そのままにしますー
10. 04:26:141 (5) - このnoteは超難しいと思うｗｗｗ (同じタイミングに2個noteおくのはunrankableなので消しておこう！)
11. 04:31:278 (1) - ^
12. 04:34:566 (1) - ^
13. 04:43:812 (9) - ^
    なんでこうなってるんだろうｗｗｗｗｗｗ
14. 04:50:593 (8) - あまり綺麗に見えない感じ・・・！スライダーにかぶらないようにしたほうがいいかも！

Fixed

Normal

• Suggestion

1. 00:34:973 - remove note
2. 00:40:110 (3) - normalでスライダーの後ろにnoteを被せるのはあまりよくないように思えました~・・・。(以後はスルーで！)
3. 04:17:305 (3) - いきなりこれだけリバースするのはわかりづらいかも？

All Fixed!!


リメイクお疲れ様です~　がんばって下さいlω-。)/☆

1. tag is not same between diffs. Either "kaztora" and "kaztra" are wrong

1. 02:29:634 (1) - unsnapped note

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
found issues. you must fix.

[General]

1. tag is not same between diffs. Either "kaztora" and "kaztra" are wrong

[Lizsig's Easy]

1. 02:29:634 (1) - unsnapped note

gl

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions
   

1. Inconsistency in Tags: (I can not find where is not the same, you'd better copy one of these and paste to other
   
   - [Hard] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
   - [Lizsig's Easy] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
   - [Lunatic] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
   - [Normal] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times: (Try to make these the same)
   
   - [Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:617
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:840, ends on 02:39:703
   Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
   Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:381
   - [Lizsig's Easy] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:40:110
   Kiai #2: Starts on 02:29:630, ends on 02:58:196
   Kiai #3: Starts on 04:21:413, ends on 04:34:360
   Kiai #4: Starts on 04:34:566, ends on 04:49:360
   - [Lunatic] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:411
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:630, ends on 02:39:497
   Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
   Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:483
   - [Normal] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:617
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:840, ends on 02:39:703
   Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
   Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:381

1. Unsnapped things:
   
   02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   
   Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   01:34:582 - snap to 01:34:562
   03:24:906 - snap to 03:24:908
   04:08:262 - snap to 04:08:264
   04:21:413 - snap to 04:21:415
   04:44:529 - snap to 04:44:429
2. 03:24:086 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
3. 02:56:552 (1) - Needless whistle, just remove it then it will sound better in my view.
4. 04:52:853 (1) - ^^^
   Fine!

1. Unsnapped things:
   
   02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
2. 00:52:439 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
3. 00:40:110 (3) - I guess soft sound effect is the best choice, normal is really a bit noisy.
4. 01:14:836 - A note should be here since you add a note like 01:13:192, so keep it the same plz.
5. 01:27:987 - ^^^
6. 02:55:319 (5) - You'd better not use only a slider to map here, what about this? It can sound better via you change like it.
7. 03:19:976 (1,1) - Where is the spacing :< ? They are almost in the same spacing, ppl can hardly recognize it, try make the spacing fit their timing position.

1. 03:52:648 (1) - What about extending this spinner to 03:55:113? Since vocal "i" is downbeat here.

1. 01:05:795 (1,3) - Ctrl+G please, or it may confuse ppl since the strange arrangement.
2. 03:52:648 (1) - What about extending this spinner to 03:55:113? Since vocal "i" is downbeat here.

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]

1. Inconsistency in Tags: (I can not find where is not the same, you'd better copy one of these and paste to other
   
   - [Hard] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
   - [Lizsig's Easy] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
   - [Lunatic] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
   - [Normal] : liz triangle lizsig azuki kaztora eba reunion desire drive
   Fixed!
2. Inconsistency in Kiai Times: (Try to make these the same)
   
   - [Hard] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:617
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:840, ends on 02:39:703
   Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
   Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:381
   - [Lizsig's Easy] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:40:110
   Kiai #2: Starts on 02:29:630, ends on 02:58:196
   Kiai #3: Starts on 04:21:413, ends on 04:34:360
   Kiai #4: Starts on 04:34:566, ends on 04:49:360
   - [Lunatic] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:411
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:630, ends on 02:39:497
   Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
   Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:483
   - [Normal] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 01:11:548, ends on 01:21:617
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:24:699, ends on 01:31:069
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:29:840, ends on 02:39:703
   Kiai #4: Starts on 02:42:785, ends on 02:49:155
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:08:264, ends on 04:14:634
   Kiai #6: Starts on 04:21:415, ends on 04:31:381

I fixed only my diff


[Normal]

1. Unsnapped things:
   
   02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
2. 00:52:439 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
3. 00:40:110 (3) - I guess soft sound effect is the best choice, normal is really a bit noisy.
4. 01:14:836 - A note should be here since you add a note like 01:13:192, so keep it the same plz.
5. 01:27:987 - ^^^
6. 02:55:319 (5) - You'd better not use only a slider to map here, what about this? It can sound better via you change like it.
7. 03:19:976 (1,1) - Where is the spacing :< ? They are almost in the same spacing, ppl can hardly recognize it, try make the spacing fit their timing position.

ALL fixed
[Hard]

1. 03:52:648 (1) - What about extending this spinner to 03:55:113? Since vocal "i" is downbeat here.

Nice
[Lunatic]

1. 01:05:795 (1,3) - Ctrl+G please, or it may confuse ppl since the strange arrangement.
2. 03:52:648 (1) - What about extending this spinner to 03:55:113? Since vocal "i" is downbeat here.

ALL fixed
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Great!
Good Luck

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]

• 
  
  
  Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
  01:34:582 - snap to 01:34:562
  03:24:906 - snap to 03:24:908
  04:08:262 - snap to 04:08:264
  04:21:413 - snap to 04:21:415
  04:44:529 - snap to 04:44:429[/box]

1. 03:24:086 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
2. 02:56:552 (1) - Needless whistle, just remove it then it will sound better in my view.
3. 04:52:853 (1) - ^^^
   Fine!