grumd wrote:

Это же было 1st solo-map -_-

nekitkas wrote:

General
нету источника и тега предыдущие ораторы были правы

Easy
замапь брейк,а то не дело :c ладно :3


Insane
00:18:430(1) - удали эту ноту,так круче ага
00:27:529(5) - может вместо ноты слайдер? или удалить её угу

ничего путевого не написал,но пофиг :3 все путем
удачи!

ДАЙТЕ КД ШТОЛИ

HP Drain и AR сделать одинаковыми. Просто так лучше как-то будет чувствоваться карта
00:05:130 (3) - nazi: обводка http://puu.sh/A9MI
00:07:464 (1,2) - nazi: бобавим осмысленности http://puu.sh/A9Ni
00:17:030 (5) - обводка
00:30:095 (1) - погнуть?
00:30:562 (2,5) - оверлап?
00:45:728 (1,2,3) - обводка?
00:57:160 (6,3) - оверлап.

я такой нази \:D/

Leorda wrote:

Privet

[General]
* You put the red timing section at the wrong heavy beats. The offset should be 3264. Do this for all diff


[Easy]
00:22:629 (1) - Remove the annoying whistle at sliderbody
00:50:394 (1) - Too soon from spinner for easier diff. It makes beginners are hard to reach/click this after spinner end
01:09:526 (1) - Why clap at end slider? It breaks the clap hitsound pattern - because it fits with song here, imo


[Hard]
* This diff is doesn't have a tags. Please add them


This song is makes me want to make an SB (still thinking, though)

Leorda wrote:

[BCI's Normal]
* AR +1? yep
* The 2nd kiai should end at 01:53:623 guest may have different kiai

00:17:030 (5) - Move 3rd sliderpoint to 1 grid up for better blanket combo (Nazi) okay
00:35:462 (1) - A bit too far from spinner for normal diff. It possible hard to reach for beginners hm, pattern was deteriorated, but okay
00:50:394 (1) - Move 2nd sliderpoint to 1 grid right for better blanket combo (Nazi) yes
01:39:157 (2) - Overlapped by spinner-osu. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read, so this possible hidden for them delete this note

crabovan wrote:

Привет, моддинг на заказ :3

Hard

00:06:064 (2,1,2,3) - может лучше совместить эти части симметрией?
00:09:563 (6,7,1) - конец слайдера симметрично кружкам? ~
00:31:029 (3) - не совсем под конец слайдера размещен (поправь) ~
00:31:495 (4,6) - сделай симметрично ~
00:43:861 (4,5,6) - подвинь на 1 тайл вниз ~
01:02:527 (3,6) - ^ ~
01:24:458 (1,3) - непонятное сочетание все оно понятное! >3<
01:30:991 (2,4) - сделай симметричным ~

BCI's Normal

Маппинг тут то на вокал, то на музыку... Надо выбрать что-то одно.

00:11:201 (1,3) - сделать симметрично
00:17:038 (5) - что это за хрень? :О
00:25:909 (2) - удалить это ноту
00:26:843 (5) - ^
00:29:411 - сюда поставить ноту
00:51:123 (2,4) - не накладываются друг на друга (исправить)
01:00:695 (3) - опять хер знает что :с
01:03:730 - ноту поставить
01:08:166 (3) - сделать слайдер с репитом
01:11:201 - сюда ноту поставить
01:13:069 - ^
01:25:676 (2,4) - может лучше переделать?
01:39:217 - поставить ноту
01:39:684 - ^
01:49:256 (6) - на репите должно быть новое комбо (переделать)
01:51:590 (1) - спиннер не в ритм
01:54:158 - поставить ноту
02:04:664 - ^

В общем, надо эту диффу переделывать конкретно.

Easy

00:16:796 (4,5,1) - сделать симметрично я задумал без симметрии. так и будет

Вроде всё.

crabovan wrote:

BCI's Normal

Маппинг тут то на вокал, то на музыку... Надо выбрать что-то одно. есть такое, каюсь

00:11:201 (1,3) - сделать симметрично и так было
00:17:038 (5) - что это за хрень? :О слайдер, если не видно
00:25:909 (2) - удалить это ноту в ритм идет
00:26:843 (5) - ^ ^
00:29:411 - сюда поставить ноту пожалуй, нет
00:51:123 (2,4) - не накладываются друг на друга (исправить) да, спасибо
01:00:695 (3) - опять хер знает что :с ну слайдер это!1
01:03:730 - ноту поставить без нее лучше
01:08:166 (3) - сделать слайдер с репитом пожалуй, да
01:11:201 - сюда ноту поставить и так хорошо
01:13:069 - ^ ^
01:25:676 (2,4) - может лучше переделать? посоветуй, как?
01:39:217 - поставить ноту нота будет не видна под spinner-osu
01:39:684 - ^ нет с:
01:49:256 (6) - на репите должно быть новое комбо (переделать) всего лишь поставить нк на этот слайд и ничего переделывать не нужно =з=
01:51:590 (1) - спиннер не в ритм а по-моему, в ритм
01:54:158 - поставить ноту если скажешь где, так, чтобы не было лишнего перемапа карты или оверлапа под spinner-osu или еще подо что-нибудь, то да
02:04:664 - ^ немного по-другому сделала

В общем, надо эту диффу переделывать конкретно. мнение твое, я не собираюсь ^w^

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B2IN wrote:

Hi ~ -Bakari-

[General]
fine
[Easy]
00:30:335 (1) - remove nc ~
00:31:735 (1) - end the spinner till 00:33:135 (add finish) imo :d sorry, i prefer my pattern. if i make spinner shorter it would be hard to play for beginners

[Hard]
00:16:099 (1) - move to here 00:16:332 (i really recommend you to this) why? it fits with song as is

00:17:032 (3,4,5) - try this :3 nope. i still think that circles following rythm better :<

00:18:199 (8) - finish k~
01:00:906 (8) - add note ~
01:16:542 (8) - I think it should overlapped perfectly 01:14:675 (5) no. distance will be ruined
01:45:014 (7) - neatly stack to 01:44:080 (5) at the end ~
01:52:015 (1) - remove nc no. it following vocals
01:52:715 (2) - nc ^
01:53:882 (1) - remove nc no. i still want my comboing to follow patterns/rythm~
01:55:049 (1) - ^ ^
01:55:982 (4) - nc too short combo
01:59:716 (5) - i recommend you to add the note i tested it. and if (1) were slider i'd started it here. but keep my pattern for now
02:06:484 (7) - neatly stack to 02:05:551 (5) at the end ~



good luck for rank !

Jesss wrote:

Request accepted from my Modding Queue

Sorry for delaying a lot...i've been busy lately :/ but here's my mod

Easy

00:15:866 (2) - nazi time: move to X:420 Y:124 nope. even if i love nazi-mods that much i disagree.
00:29:401 (2) - ^ to X:156 Y:160 why?
00:41:070 (5) - ^ now with slider modelling: ss102 i suggest this: ss103 ~
01:03:474 (3) - ^ ~
No more Symmetry issues found...but i found inconsistences with hitsounds, Specially with some of the softer ones, like:
00:18:199 (5) - Finish hitsound? ~
00:21:467 (4) - clap? whistle
00:22:633 (1) - Clap at the beginning and whistle at the end? nope. claps aren't fits with easy diff
00:18:666 (1) - Whistle at the return part of the slider and clap at the end whistles
00:26:367 (3) - whistle at the end of slider? nope~
00:29:868 (3) - Finish sound terrible here...here's an advice...use whistle here nothing~
00:30:335 (1) - Clap at the beginning and whistle at the end? nope :<
00:31:735 (1) - Finish no way! how? why? there's no need to put ANY hitsound here :<
00:50:405 (1) - Begin with clap and the end of slider with a whistle. Also, i recommend to volume up a little. nope :< only whistle at the end
01:09:541 (1) - Remove clap at the very end of slider? nope
01:13:742 (3) - Clap at the end of slider? ~
01:16:076 (5) - Remove clap...sounds awkward. no. sounds good for me also it fits with song. so i can't find any reasons to remove this one
01:16:542 (1) - remove that finishes (except the true end of slider) and put claps instead.~
01:18:876 (2) - Whistle instead of clap. ~
01:19:343 (3) - Clap. *~*
01:19:810 (4) - Finish sounds better. k~
01:20:276 (1) - Remove that finish. ~
01:22:143 (3) - Put a finish. sounds pretty nice here. nope. feels wrong
01:22:610 (4) - set a Clap whistle
01:37:546 (4) - Whistle at the beginning, please? ~
01:54:349 (1) - Clap at the returning part of the slider instead of the ending one.~

Hard

Very interesting difficulty...huh?
00:19:600 (3,4) - you can use safely a copy+paste from 00:18:899 (1,2) - still prefer my pattern
00:22:633 (1,2,3,4) - you can move freely them to the following coordinate: x:352 y:192 188 is better
00:33:135 (8) - Use finish hitsound.needs something completly different, but i'll use whistle
00:35:002 (1) it's a little offscreen IMO...choose all the combo with the same color and move them up.http://puu.sh/B2Qy it's ok. ;_;
Conclussion about interesting...NICE JOB! i love it!

Final conclussion...easy uses a lot of whistle hitsounds, but in hard, you just uses claps and finishes. You need to balance that details.
it's my way of using hitsounds for easiest diffs. easier must be softer, imo :O
I'll star this...because Hard was very funny...LOL thanks :3

Gabe wrote:

DJ Aligator !

Gabe wrote:

Hi Baka.
Here's a fast Mod before I go to sleep. o/

[General]
The Kiai times starts/ends weird in my opinion.
I'm suggesting you to start the first Kiai time @00:49:938.
For the second, start it @01:38:479 and end it @01:53:415 i prefer to follow vocals :<
Edit: I just saw something with the Beatmap forum's title. Be sure to correct the title. Arash Feat. Helena - Broken Angel (Dj Aligator Remix) ~

[Easy]
Why is your hitsounds placed with 1/3? It's better if they're placed with 2/4. If you do it with 2/4, catch me to remod. i'll re-do them
00:24:500 - This slider starts pretty well, but ends bad.~
01:28:211 - Add a new combo, 01:29:611 delete the new combo, 01:31:011 add a new combo. It's better in that way because of the pattern and it will short the next combo. nope. i prefer my pattern, sorry
01:55:282 - Delete the clap. Because there's 3 claps in a row.^~

[BCI's Normal]
Mhm, are you sure this is a Normal or an Hard difficulty? That's kinda hard for a Normal...
I don't find anything wrong here. All I can say is : It's too hard for a Normal difficulty.

[Hard]
00:16:099 - this slider ends weirdly like I said for your Easy difficulty. I'm suggesting you to delete this circle (00:15:866 (3) - ) and move the slider there.~
00:15:866 - If you do that ^ Add a new combo to this slider and remove the combo for this circle : 00:16:799 ~
00:17:733 (8) - Move the circle for x:188 y:192 to make a shape like this no.
01:08:374 (4) - Move the circle for x:156 y: 88 and move this circle (01:08:608 (5) - ) for x:256 y:48 to make a shape like this and in my opinion, it looks pretty good. ~
01:19:343 (3) - This one isn't aligned perfectly with 01:18:409 (1,2) - . you should make it to x:324 ~

Nice map. Here's a star. ♫ thanks~

also :

Gabe wrote:

DJ Aligator !

264,276,44337,2,0,B|252:332|160:332|156:256,2,140,8|0|8

Chewin wrote:

[General]
Remove Letterbox during breaks

[Easy]
00:16:799 (4) - Nazi but move the last waypoint 2 grid up for a better shape i like nazi mods but this 2 grids doesn't make any sense
00:25:667 (3) - New combo nope. new combo evbery 2nd big white line.
00:30:335 (4) - To keep consistency use finish on the head and remove it from the tail? what consistency? i think i put finishes every big white line
00:35:002 (1) - Too soon for the easiest diff of your mapset. You could to reduce 00:31:735 (1) till the long white tick (00:33:135) or just delete this circle
i don't think so, anyway i put circle closer to center of screen
00:50:405 (1) - ^ no. reason same as above
01:16:076 (5) - Add NC and remove it from 01:16:542 (1) ~
01:19:810 (4) - Add NC and remove from 01:20:276 (1) ~
01:20:276 (1) - 2nd waypoint 1 grid up, make it straight so what? i don't want straight slider :/
01:29:611 (1) - Since you used new combo here 01:28:211 (1) you should to remove NC on this circle ~
01:31:011 (3) - Add new combo here instead to avoid this long combo i'd like to put it on (6)
01:38:946 (1) - 2nd waypoint 1 grid left no. don't you think that in this way slider looks better?
01:58:083 (2) - You could to make this slider curved to create a blanket with 01:57:616 (1), something like this: http://puu.sh/D2rM actually i'm avoiding blanket-slider here to keep consistency in shapes
Good map


[Hard]
00:15:866 (1) - Remove NC for consistency and symmetry with 00:14:932 (1) ~
00:16:799 (3) - Add NC here instead. ~
00:24:734 (2) - Overlap with 00:23:334 (4) ? ~
00:25:667 (4) - ^ ~
00:35:002 (1) - 3 grid up for spacing consitency with 00:35:235 (2,3) nope, sorry. i want to keep it as is
00:46:204 (5) - Forgot clap on the head ~
01:12:342 (7) - New combo part of my pattern~
01:13:042 (1) - Remove nc ^
Good

That's all, good luck with rank ;3

Fapfrit wrote:

[Hard]

00:33:252 - запилить брейк тайм? ~
00:41:070 - убрать слайдер@поставить круг? cимметрия :<
00:53:205 (9) - придать форму? это часть идеи.
00:58:339 (3) - придать форму? ^
01:06:391 (5) - может удалить? не очень этот трипл звучит. а круги как-нибудь разнести друг от друга ~
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ну, ошибок нет / спейсинг норм / с ритмом намудрил. хорошо



[Easy]

01:16:542 (2) - редко пишу про "измени форму, подвинь это", но может сделать из слайдера обычный S? blanket slider же
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на изи бывают ошибки?

где-то я эту песню уже слышал. хорошо. ну и про бг с крокодилом :'D

1. BPM: 128,575
2. Offset: 3285

lovhin456 wrote:

Bubbled

osuplayer111 wrote:

Make sure to use the same Kiai Time of the other difficulties.

-Bakari- wrote:

btw, BCI won't fix kiai in normal. "guest diffs can have different kiai and blah blah blah" so. we keep kiai in this way