l1106188 wrote:

沒想到今天就做好了 looool
第一次接GD+做Easy 做不太好 請見諒 OTZ

Good Luck!!~
先star~
晚點再來mod~XD

edit:
我想吐潮 BG圖右下那是什麼網址XDD

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. osb.記得刪噢~~

[Normal]

1. 總感覺這Normal不Normal , XDDD
   
   
2. 00:58:810 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這裡間距突然變這麼大感覺不太妥

[Hard]

1. 00:31:921 (10) - re 這個?
2. 00:34:921 (4,5) - (4) 加 clap 然後(5) re clap
3. 00:56:143 (3) - re clap
4. 01:47:698 (3) - 覆蓋在(1)上?

[YuZuKi's style]

1. 00:34:587 (4) - 加個clap在迴轉上吧
2. 00:41:698 (4) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:53:254 (9) - 加 clap?
2. 00:57:921 (6,7) - re clap ?

l1106188 wrote:

GD順便mod了XD

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. osb.記得刪噢~~

[Normal]

1. 總感覺這Normal不Normal , XDDD
   
   
2. 00:58:810 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這裡間距突然變這麼大感覺不太妥

[Hard]

1. 00:31:921 (10) - re 這個?
2. 00:34:921 (4,5) - (4) 加 clap 然後(5) re clap
3. 00:56:143 (3) - re clap
4. 01:47:698 (3) - 覆蓋在(1)上?

[YuZuKi's style]

1. 00:34:587 (4) - 加個clap在迴轉上吧
2. 00:41:698 (4) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:53:254 (9) - 加 clap?
2. 00:57:921 (6,7) - re clap ?

就這些了XD!
good song & good map & good luck~
star~

我也重複看了我那難度 發現遺漏了很多sound,looool

wingman_dw wrote:

[Easy]
nice map Thanks

00:24:587 (5) - hard to read for beginner fix~
00:31:698 (5) - ^fix~

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wingman_dw wrote:

Hello~

[tags]
add "l1106188"

[Easy]
nice map

00:24:587 (5) - hard to read for beginner
00:31:698 (5) - ^

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[Normal]
00:24:365 (4,1) - these follow the song,but hard to read in Normal diff. suggestion

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or

00:17:254 (5,1) - too hard jump. you should fix
00:30:810 (5,6) - I think, it is hard to read,too. rearrange please. my simple suggestion

00:51:698 (3,4,1) - (4,1) this is hard.
01:28:365 (4,5,6,7) - (6,7) spacing
01:23:032 (4,1) - spacing (suggestion)

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[Hard]
no problem for play.so these are almost suggestions,feel free to ignore if you disagree

00:03:699 (1,2) - rearrange please.not good formation.
00:47:921 (6,1) - This spacing doesn't follow the music
00:48:143 (1,2) - change rhythm

00:51:698 (1,2,3,4) - rearrange please.feel poor formation
1/2slider,slide,slider....so monotonous map
for example
00:52:032,00:57:365 add circle.
00:57:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change rhythm.how about this?

01:26:143 (4,5) - more spacing

[Insane]
Unreasonable AR causes annoyance to us,and map becomes harder.
This song is low bpm. AR8 is best for this map.
01:42:365 (5,6,7,8) - hard to read...
01:46:143 (5,6,7) - not follow the song well:/
00:59:921 (7,8,1) - spacing?
I suggest some patterns.
00:35:698 [attachment=0:5cc9c]Larval Stage Planning - Rolling Star (Short Ver.) (YuZuKi_Kenny) [suggestion].osu[/attachment:5cc9c]
3hits including slider is one of the good pattern

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====
Images are just suggestions.you can ignore or change just as you want to do/

GL~

Konei wrote:

From my Queue

black = advices

blue = recommend you to change it

red= must change

pink = I'm not sure myself


General

- Your BG must be 800 X 600 or 1024 X 768. Otherwise it's not ranked

- Delete osb. file in your folder if you don't use storyboard - after that full submit

- Look for a Video on youtube. Theres one named Gold Star (Eroge) You can post it in a Video queue to get audio ripped and HD

- Let the Kiai time end at 01:27:254 and begin it again at 01:30:810


L18's Easy


OD - 1

00:32:143 (1) add clap to slider begin?

Generally I wouldn't do stacking on Easy's but it's your choice

01:00:587 (1) finish instead of whistle

01:16:587 (1) remove NC

01:16:587 (1) add finish at slider begin for kiai time

01:23:698 (1) ^


Normal


00:04:036 (1,2) These sliders have irregular spacing IMO

01:16:587 (1) add finish for Kiai time

01:30:810 (1) ^

01:59:032 Here is a timing point with short kiai time, remove it


Hard


00:06:587 (1) add NC and remove it 00:07:032

01:03:573 Map the break! It looks lazy to do that in a hard diff >.<


Fine so far, IMO


Yuzuki's Style


Nice - no errors IMO


Insane


OD + 1

00:31:489 (5) Needs larger spacing


That's all I found.

Good luck

Konei wrote:

L18's Easy


OD - 1 FIX~

00:32:143 (1) add clap to slider begin? NO~

Generally I wouldn't do stacking on Easy's but it's your choice thanks , but i think it okay ?~

01:00:587 (1) finish instead of whistle fix~

01:16:587 (1) remove NC no~ because kiai time

01:16:587 (1) add finish at slider begin for kiai time fix~

01:23:698 (1) ^ fix~

Ryu wrote:

[Easy]
is good~!! Thanks ~

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod~新手mod~请多关照♪~ 你好 XD 我也是

[L08's Easy]
00:17:254 (4,1) - overlap~个人感觉不是很好看~也许可以把1抱住4什么的。。只是建议~没有违反rule我也说不了什么orz~
01:17:476 (2,3) - ^ ~感觉没有特别的情况遮住滑调轨迹不太美观~在easy难度里~。。。
01:38:810 (2,3) - ^ ~觉得没事就无视掉把- -。。。这个改起来也很麻烦。。。orz
找不到问题。。。orz 你有找到 但我都沒採用而已 ...loool, 因為在我眼裡 我覺得不怎麼overlap , XD

Orz~这mod对我太难了。。。orz~ 不會阿 你不是找到許多了XD
Mapset~已经擦不多没有什么。。可以。。。。。
等MAT来挑刺把orz。。。。應該還不能吧
Good luck~~~♪~♪~♪~~~~

Ryu wrote:

From mod queue~ :3


funny song :>

[Easy]
is good~!!

[Normal]

Distance Snap: 1,0 x or 1,5 idk orz
Fix all elements with Distance snap.

[Hard]
Goodie

[moe style]
Circle Size: -1
AR - 6

[Insane]

00:34:254 - add timin point for makin louder circle sound.

Good luck moe Kenny >w<//

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod~新手mod~请多关照♪~

[General]
♪~♪~♪~~~

[L08's Easy]
00:17:254 (4,1) - overlap~个人感觉不是很好看~也许可以把1抱住4什么的。。只是建议~没有违反rule我也说不了什么orz~
01:17:476 (2,3) - ^ ~感觉没有特别的情况遮住滑调轨迹不太美观~在easy难度里~。。。
01:38:810 (2,3) - ^ ~觉得没事就无视掉把- -。。。这个改起来也很麻烦。。。orz
找不到问题。。。orz

[Normal]
♪~♪~♪~~~~orz

[Hard]
♪~♪~♪~~~~orz

[YuZuKi's style]
01:35:254 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 距离均匀。。。感觉没关系~不过美观吧。。。orz

[Insane]
00:05:032 (5,6) - 距离~与前面一致~
00:59:254 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ~均匀点吧~xD

Orz~这mod对我太难了。。。orz~
Mapset~已经擦不多没有什么。。可以。。。。。
等MAT来挑刺把orz。。。。
Good luck~~~♪~♪~♪~~~~

Quilt wrote:

hi~~ yuzuki!! >w</

L18's Easy

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plz AR3 ></

00:16:365 (3,4) - delete and start 00:16:143 - http://puu.sh/yKXq like this?

00:23:476 (4,5) - 1/2 later and 00:24:587 (5) - delete note

00:30:587 (4,5) - ^ and 00:31:698 (5) - ^

00:34:365 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/yKZc like this?

00:37:921 (3,4) - ^

00:41:476 (3,4) - ^

00:45:032 (3,4) - ^

00:48:587 (4,5) - ^

00:52:143 (4,5) - ^

00:55:698 (4,5) - ^

00:59:254 (4,5) - ^

01:15:921 (1) - delete reverse?

01:21:476 (2) - delete note?

01:22:365 (5) - ^

01:35:698 (2) - ^

01:36:587 (5) - ^

01:41:032 (5) - ^

01:58:587 (5,6,7) - delete note

01:58:810 - add 1/2 slider

Quilt wrote:

hi~~ yuzuki!! >w</

L18's Easy

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plz AR3 ></

00:16:365 (3,4) - delete and start 00:16:143 - http://puu.sh/yKXq like this?

00:23:476 (4,5) - 1/2 later and 00:24:587 (5) - delete note

00:30:587 (4,5) - ^ and 00:31:698 (5) - ^

00:34:365 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/yKZc like this?

00:37:921 (3,4) - ^

00:41:476 (3,4) - ^

00:45:032 (3,4) - ^

00:48:587 (4,5) - ^

00:52:143 (4,5) - ^

00:55:698 (4,5) - ^

00:59:254 (4,5) - ^

01:15:921 (1) - delete reverse?

01:21:476 (2) - delete note?

01:22:365 (5) - ^

01:35:698 (2) - ^

01:36:587 (5) - ^

01:41:032 (5) - ^

01:58:587 (5,6,7) - delete note

01:58:810 - add 1/2 slider

Normal

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HP2 CS3 AR4 OD3

00:09:254 (4) - delete note?

00:15:698 (4,5) - delete note and add 1/2 slider?

00:17:254 (7,9) - delete notes?

00:20:810 (5) - ^

00:23:254 (4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/yL8o like this?

00:30:365 (3,4) - delete

00:30:365 - add note

00:30:810 - ^

00:33:921 (3,4) - delete and add note on white line

00:35:698 (1,2) - delete and add 1/1 slider

00:36:587 (3,4) - delete and 2/1 slider

00:37:921 (4) - delete and add note

00:43:032 (2) - delete note

00:43:698 (4,5) - delete and add 1/1 slider

00:46:365 (1) - delete and add note

00:47:921 (3) - delete note

00:53:476 (1) - delete and add note

00:55:032 (3) - delete note

00:59:698 (4,5,6) - delete and add 1/1 slider

01:00:587 ~ 01:16:587 -break time too long lol

01:20:143 (1) - delete and add note

01:23:032 (5,7) - delete notes

01:33:698 (5) - delete note

01:35:032 (2) - 1/2 late and 01:35:698 (3) - delete note

01:36:365 (5) - delete note

01:37:254 (8) - delete

01:37:476 - add note

01:39:921 (5) - delete note

01:40:810 (8) - ^

01:44:587 (6) - ^

01:55:032 (5,7) - delete notes

Hard

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01:30:810 - umm dont change SVM

YuZuKi's style

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01:35:254 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - DS 0.4 ?

Insane

SPOILER

00:15:032 (3) - 2grid down (Grid level3)

that's all

fight~~!! Yuzuki!!
GL!

DarknessAngel wrote:

MOD in IRC
just pointed out some stuff which are too hard for an Easy diff

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00:13 <DarknessAngel> : 話說確實難了點
00:13 <DarknessAngel> : 01:21:962 -
00:13 <DarknessAngel> : 01:21:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:14 <DarknessAngel> : ...這是N的排法
00:14 <l1106188> : loool
00:14 <DarknessAngel> : 擬態看得起新手了
00:14 <l1106188> : AImod壞掉了
00:14 <DarknessAngel> : 你太*
00:14 <l1106188> : 他顯示是easy ...
00:14 <l1106188> : 真的假的 loool
00:14 <l1106188> : 那我該怎麼改 QAQ
00:15 <DarknessAngel> : 1/2拍3個note + 遮蔽你瘋惹ㄇ OAO
00:15 <l1106188> : XDDD...
00:15 <l1106188> : 對不起 我以為新手 可以看得懂 loool
00:15 <DarknessAngel> : 啊哈哈 最簡單就折返slider x 2
00:15 <DarknessAngel> : 還有...
00:16 <DarknessAngel> : AR7 ... 您是真的瘋惹還是失誤？lol
00:16 <l1106188> : 瘋了
00:16 <DarknessAngel> : ..
00:17 <DarknessAngel> : EZ AR4大概就極限
00:17 <l1106188> : loool
00:17 <DarknessAngel> : 01:58:365 (4,5,6,7) - 這重疊+1/2拍不行不行><
00:17 <l1106188> : 我當初做想說這叫easy (被打
00:18 <DarknessAngel> : 如過這首BPM120以下 你可以這樣做 但現在不是...
00:18 <DarknessAngel> : 如果
00:18 <l1106188> : 00:23:254 (3,4,5) - 這裡可以嘛 ?~
00:19 <DarknessAngel> : 2個得還可以
00:19 <DarknessAngel> : 的*
00:20 <l1106188> : 01:58:365 (4,5,6,7) -
00:20 <DarknessAngel> : 還有就是節奏複雜吧 你跟太多了 Easy原本就沒那麼多音給你跟的
00:20 <l1106188> : 我這改成slider 折返兩次 OwO?
00:20 <DarknessAngel> : OK
00:20 <l1106188> : 節奏複雜嘛 XDDD
00:21 <DarknessAngel> : 恩
00:21 <l1106188> : 意思是說 1/3那邊 要 ...
00:21 <DarknessAngel> : ?
00:21 <l1106188> : 00:59:254 (4,5) -
00:21 <l1106188> : 像這個
00:21 <l1106188> : 要改嘛 QAQ
00:22 <DarknessAngel> : 我覺得 這就是複雜點
00:22 <DarknessAngel> : 其實光是連續1/1 對新手來說就難了
00:22 <l1106188> : 難怪會有人 modding
00:23 <l1106188> : 裡 全是改成 1/1
00:23 <l1106188> : 那我就全改了 >~<
00:23 <l1106188> : 有1/2的地方都改了 loool
00:23 <DarknessAngel> : 穿插個3/2或2都是不錯的選擇
00:23 <l1106188> : 00:16:365 (3,4) -
00:23 <l1106188> : 這裡呢 OwO
00:24 <DarknessAngel> : 也可以把長條結束點放在紅線 那變化豐富點
00:24 <DarknessAngel> : 00:17:254 (4,1) - 銜接點難了
00:24 <l1106188> : stack ?~
00:24 <DarknessAngel> : bad idea
00:25 <l1106188> : 嘛
00:25 <l1106188> : 我是baka
00:25 <l1106188> : >~<
00:25 <DarknessAngel> : 換成一個長條
00:25 <DarknessAngel> : 然後不要重疊
00:25 <l1106188> : 紅線1/1 長條?~
00:26 <DarknessAngel> : 恩
00:26 <l1106188> : 不重疊 站一點空間 沒問題吧 OwO
00:26 <DarknessAngel> : 恩
00:26 <l1106188> : 00:23:254 (3,4,5) -
00:26 <l1106188> : 這裡闇天使覺得如何 >~<
00:27 <l1106188> : <---完完全全沒做easy的經驗
00:27 <DarknessAngel> : 啊啊 這個也是難了呢
00:27 <DarknessAngel> : 大致就這樣
00:27 <l1106188> : 恩

LaceWingfield wrote:

[L18's Easy]
Are you sure using many 1/2s on easy? just try to reduce them a little bit.

00:17:921 (1): i guess this is better, curving up. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/334956 fix~
00:22:810 (2): 1 grid up so it looks good with (1) fix~
00:23:476 (4): i actually suggest you not to stack since timing is kinda confusing for beginners.change~
00:26:365 (2): 1 grid up? no~

nice. thanks

LaceWingfield wrote:

yo, Yuzuki. mod4mod

[Normal]
00:05:032 (3): add whistle on repeat
00:07:254 (1): add whistle on start
00:09:032 (3): add whistle
00:10:810 (1): add clap on slidertail
00:11:698 (2): add clap at repeat
00:13:032 (3): add clap at sliderhead
00:13:476 (4): add clap at slidertail
00:14:857 (2): add clap at repeat
00:17:921 (1): add finish at sliderhead
00:36:810 (5): i guess add note here and shorten the slider (make the slider start at 00:37:032 so that the clap fits)
01:30:810 (1): add finish on sliderhead
01:52:143 (1): ^

nice one~~

[Hard]
00:05:921 (2): move the whistle to sliderhead
00:13:032 (2): better clap here
00:15:921 (6): add clap
00:52:587 (4): remove clap
00:59:698 (3): ^
01:08:587 (3): ^
01:17:476 (3~6): no need clap at these
01:20:143 (1): Finish better than clap
01:21:032 (3): remove clap
01:21:921 (1): ^
01:22:487 (4): remove clap at slidertail
01:23:698 (1): remove clap add finish
01:24:587 (3): remove clap
01:27:254 (1): ^
01:28:143 (3): ^
01:31:698 (3): ^
01:32:587 (1): ^
01:33:476 (3): ^
01:34:365 (1): remove clap, add finish
01:35:254 (3): remove clap
01:35:476 (4~5): inconsistent spacing. so both of it need 1 grid down
01:37:921 (1): remove clap add finish
01:38:810 (3): remove clap
01:39:698 (1): ^
01:40:857 (3): ^
01:47:698 (3): ^
01:48:365 : add clap at this part of slider

Personally i think that there are too many claps here.

[Yuzuki's Style]
Use claps start from 00:10:810 ~ better imo
00:20:698 (4): add clap here and remove clap at (5)
00:21:587 (4): add clap here, remove clap at (3)
00:22:365 (5): remove clap
00:23:254 (1): ^
00:25:921 (3): ^
00:26:180 (1): ^
00:27:698 (3): ^
00:28:587 (1): ^
00:29:254 (4): ^
00:55:032 (x): add note here. preferably at center
01:30:810 (1): better finish here
01:35:698 (7): add clap here

good

[Insane]
same as hard, use claps start from 00:10:810
00:30:365 (1~x): claps sounds messy from this part.
00:32:810 (4): not consistent spacing. 2 grids down
00:40:143 (6): remove clap
00:41:698 (3): ^
00:42:587 (7): ^
00:49:032 (3): remove clap at this slider and add clap at (4)
00:49:476 (6): remove clap at sliderhead
00:50:624 (3): remove clap at slidertail
00:52:587 (5): remove clap
00:57:365 (3): add clap
00:58:032 (7): ^
01:17:476 (3): remove clap
01:19:254 (4): remove clap at slidertail
01:20:143 (1): remove clap at sliderhead
01:21:032 (3): remove clap
01:21:921 (1): ^
01:22:810 (5): ^
01:24:587 (4): remove clap at sliderhead
01:30:810 (1): better finish
01:31:698 (3): remove clap at sliderhead
01:32:587 (1): remove clap
01:33:476 (5): ^
01:34:265 (1): remove clap at sliderhead
01:35:324 (3): remove clap
01:36:143 (1): remove clap at sliderhead
01:37:132 (3): remove clap
01:37:921 (1): ^
01:38:587 (5): remove clap at slidertail
01:45:032 (1): better finish

personally i think that the diff hard to insane are containing too many unnecessary claps which you need to remove.
Good luck~

1. offset+6 is better imo, remember to resnap all note ^^
2. This has 3 diffs of Insane level, which is unrankable, just to let you know =P
3. There is no break? ;_;

• Try to keep spacing consistently between notes, for example 00:10:365 (4,1,2) - or 00:14:143 (1,2,3) - ( look at 00:13:254 (3,4,1) - you'll know what to fix) or 00:15:032 (3,4,1) - spacing inconsistent... and many other places. Use distance if u can, that will make mapset look better ^^

1. 00:17:921 (1) - finish at start
2. 00:30:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - i kinda dislike this kind of stream =/ however it's up to you. But anyway it's not following the rhythm, delete 00:31:032 (4) - move 00:31:254 (5) - to 00:31:032 will sound much better
3. 00:30:810 (3) - clap at start
4. 00:49:476 (6) - remove clap at end
5. 00:52:031 (3) - ^
6. 00:57:587 (4,5) - remove whistle? why is there whistle here?
7. 00:59:921 (7) - finish
8. 01:16:587 (1) - finish at start
9. 01:26:810 (8) - move this to x:256 y:304?
10. 01:28:365 (3) - if u added whistle at 01:27:476 (2) - plz add here too
11. 01:30:810 (1) - to 01:44:587 (7) - I disagree with speeding up in this part, it's inappropirate simply because the rhythm doesnt show any sign for speed up here =/
12. 01:44:587 (7) - remove clap at end
13. 01:45:032 (1) - to 01:59:032 (4) - plz remove all clap at 1st and 3rd beat, as LaceWingfield pointed out
14. 01:58:587 (2,4) - remove clap, add finish at 01:58:587 (2,3,4) -

1. 00:05:254 (5,1) - plz fix this jump, it's too sudden
2. 00:19:698 (1) - remove clap at start
3. 00:20:587 (3,4) - remove clap
4. 00:21:476 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:16:587 (1) - finish at start
6. 01:30:810 (1) - to 01:44:810 (8) - same with Insane
7. 01:45:032 (1) - finish at start

1. 00:13:032 (2) - remove clap
2. 00:15:921 (6) - ^ is this intentional? o_O
3. 00:17:921 (1) - finish at start
4. 00:30:921 (4) - hmm delete this note, it's not here for anything
5. 01:18:365 (1) - remove clap at start
6. 01:19:254 (3) - remove clap
7. 01:21:921 (1) - ^
8. 01:23:032 (5) - remove clap at end
9. 01:25:476 (1) - remove clap
10. 01:58:587 (4,5) - add finish, remove clap at 01:58:587 (4,6) -
    speeding up hm..

1. 00:20:587 (4,5) - spacing issue
2. 01:30:810 (1) - to 01:44:810 (6) - dont use speeding up in normal diff, this is meant to be easy
3. 01:58:143 (4) - finish at end
4. 01:58:810 (5) - finish

• a bit too much 1/2 in this diff, consider to reduce them. The rest is fine

1. 00:24:587 (5) - don't stack this with 00:23:254 (3) - it's hard to read (for new players) plz move to somewhere else
2. 01:58:587 (5,6,7) - finish, remove clap at 01:58:587 (5,7) -

kazumikos wrote:

Hello~

[General]

1. offset+6 is better imo, remember to resnap all note ^^
2. This has 3 diffs of Insane level, which is unrankable, just to let you know =P
3. There is no break? ;_;

[Insane]

• Try to keep spacing consistently between notes, for example 00:10:365 (4,1,2) - or 00:14:143 (1,2,3) - ( look at 00:13:254 (3,4,1) - you'll know what to fix) or 00:15:032 (3,4,1) - spacing inconsistent... and many other places. Use distance if u can, that will make mapset look better ^^

1. 00:17:921 (1) - finish at start
2. 00:30:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - i kinda dislike this kind of stream =/ however it's up to you. But anyway it's not following the rhythm, delete 00:31:032 (4) - move 00:31:254 (5) - to 00:31:032 will sound much better
3. 00:30:810 (3) - clap at start
4. 00:49:476 (6) - remove clap at end
5. 00:52:031 (3) - ^
6. 00:57:587 (4,5) - remove whistle? why is there whistle here?
7. 00:59:921 (7) - finish
8. 01:16:587 (1) - finish at start
9. 01:26:810 (8) - move this to x:256 y:304?
10. 01:28:365 (3) - if u added whistle at 01:27:476 (2) - plz add here too
11. 01:30:810 (1) - to 01:44:587 (7) - I disagree with speeding up in this part, it's inappropirate simply because the rhythm doesnt show any sign for speed up here =/
12. 01:44:587 (7) - remove clap at end
13. 01:45:032 (1) - to 01:59:032 (4) - plz remove all clap at 1st and 3rd beat, as LaceWingfield pointed out
14. 01:58:587 (2,4) - remove clap, add finish at 01:58:587 (2,3,4) -

[Yuzuki's Style]

1. 00:05:254 (5,1) - plz fix this jump, it's too sudden
2. 00:19:698 (1) - remove clap at start
3. 00:20:587 (3,4) - remove clap
4. 00:21:476 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:16:587 (1) - finish at start
6. 01:30:810 (1) - to 01:44:810 (8) - same with Insane
7. 01:45:032 (1) - finish at start

[Hard]

1. 00:13:032 (2) - remove clap
2. 00:15:921 (6) - ^ is this intentional? o_O
3. 00:17:921 (1) - finish at start
4. 00:30:921 (4) - hmm delete this note, it's not here for anything
5. 01:18:365 (1) - remove clap at start
6. 01:19:254 (3) - remove clap
7. 01:21:921 (1) - ^
8. 01:23:032 (5) - remove clap at end
9. 01:25:476 (1) - remove clap
10. 01:58:587 (4,5) - add finish, remove clap at 01:58:587 (4,6) -
    speeding up hm..

[Normal]

1. 00:20:587 (4,5) - spacing issue
2. 01:30:810 (1) - to 01:44:810 (6) - dont use speeding up in normal diff, this is meant to be easy
3. 01:58:143 (4) - finish at end
4. 01:58:810 (5) - finish

Good luck ^^

kazumikos wrote:

Hello~

[L18's Easy]

• a bit too much 1/2 in this diff, consider to reduce them. The rest is fine sorry for first map easy ,but I think is okay~? :3

1. 00:24:587 (5) - don't stack this with 00:23:254 (3) - it's hard to read (for new players) plz move to somewhere else change~
2. 01:58:587 (5,6,7) - finish, remove clap at 01:58:587 (5,7) -fix~

Good luck ^^

Thank you for modding ~

AcceleratorRUS wrote:

IRC Mod

SPOILER

17:59 <AcceleratorRUS> : you ready irc
17:59 <AcceleratorRUS> : ?
17:59 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : uh wai
17:59 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : wait
18:00 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : alright
18:02 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : L18'S Easy is a guess diff. Could I fix?
18:04 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok when i mod normal hard insane and yuzuki?
18:04 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : yup
18:05 <AcceleratorRUS> : lol you not use AudioLeadIn change 0
18:05 <AcceleratorRUS> : your AudioLeadIn 7
18:05 <AcceleratorRUS> : fix it
18:05 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : 7?
18:06 <AcceleratorRUS> : yea insane easy normal and hard have 7
18:07 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : I don't know what is AudioLeadIn
18:07 <AcceleratorRUS> : lol
18:07 <AcceleratorRUS> : in osu notepad
18:07 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : So.. How to fix that
18:07 <AcceleratorRUS> : http://puu.sh/D3dl
18:08 <AcceleratorRUS> : http://puu.sh/D3du
18:08 <AcceleratorRUS> : you not use audioleadin
18:09 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : hmm
18:09 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : so change to 0?
18:09 <AcceleratorRUS> : YES
18:09 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:09 <AcceleratorRUS> : its not rankable
18:09 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : 7 is not rankable?
18:10 <AcceleratorRUS> : yes
18:10 <AcceleratorRUS> : because you not use it
18:10 <AcceleratorRUS> : you dont know what is it
18:10 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : oh I got it
18:10 <AcceleratorRUS> : ?
18:10 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : I know
18:10 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
18:10 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : mp3's lead in
18:10 <AcceleratorRUS> : mabye yea
18:10 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : hmm
18:11 <AcceleratorRUS> : remove?
18:11 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ?
18:11 <AcceleratorRUS> : 7
18:11 <AcceleratorRUS> : D:
18:11 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : change to 0
18:11 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
18:12 <AcceleratorRUS> : lets check normal diff
18:12 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:13 <AcceleratorRUS> : lol and remove LetterboxInBreaks: 1
18:13 <AcceleratorRUS> : i mean change 0
18:13 <AcceleratorRUS> : you not use SB
18:13 <AcceleratorRUS> : all diff
18:13 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:13 <AcceleratorRUS> : fix it
18:13 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : fixed
18:14 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
18:14 <AcceleratorRUS> : lets check normal
18:15 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : hmm
18:15 <AcceleratorRUS> : ?
18:16 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ？
18:16 <AcceleratorRUS> : why hm?
18:16 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : uh? hmm just means ok
18:16 <AcceleratorRUS> : lol
18:16 <YuZuKi_Kenny> :
18:17 <AcceleratorRUS> : not will use soft-sliderslide?
18:18 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : where
18:18 <AcceleratorRUS> : hitsound
18:18 <AcceleratorRUS> : silence slider
18:18 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : uh
18:18 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : I didn't put it
18:19 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok later put it
18:19 <AcceleratorRUS> :
18:19 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : I don't have that hitsound D:
18:19 <AcceleratorRUS> : i give you
18:20 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : oh ok
18:20 <AcceleratorRUS> : http://puu.sh/D3iG
18:20 <AcceleratorRUS> : sliderslide
18:21 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : thanks
18:21 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
18:21 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : Should I full upload?
18:21 <AcceleratorRUS> : maybe no
18:21 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : why
18:21 <AcceleratorRUS> : lol delete osb
18:21 <AcceleratorRUS> : if you not use it
18:21 <AcceleratorRUS> : and full submit
18:22 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:22 <AcceleratorRUS> : and keep going further
18:22 <AcceleratorRUS> :
18:23 <AcceleratorRUS> : tell me when you finish
18:23 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:23 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : upload now?
18:24 <AcceleratorRUS> : yea if you delete osb and put soft-sliderslide and feix audioleadin and letterbox
18:24 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
18:24 <AcceleratorRUS> : you can full submit
18:26 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:27 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : I full submitted it
18:27 <AcceleratorRUS> : finish?
18:27 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : yup
18:27 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
18:28 <AcceleratorRUS> : wait
18:30 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : I fix the AudioLeadIn and Letter ,but it didn't change :C
18:31 <AcceleratorRUS> : you save it?
18:31 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : of course
18:31 <AcceleratorRUS> : and not change?
18:32 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : yea :C
18:32 <AcceleratorRUS> : wait
18:33 <AcceleratorRUS> : try it
18:33 <AcceleratorRUS> : http://puu.sh/D3o0
18:33 <AcceleratorRUS> : citrl+S
18:34 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : wait
18:34 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
18:34 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : full upload?
18:34 <AcceleratorRUS> : no
18:34 <AcceleratorRUS> : wait
18:35 <AcceleratorRUS> : just open osu notepad fix audioleadin and leterrbox save
18:35 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:35 <AcceleratorRUS> : and again check it
18:35 <AcceleratorRUS> : if not fix
18:35 <AcceleratorRUS> : i give you
18:35 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok it fixed
18:35 <AcceleratorRUS> : fix?
18:35 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : yea
18:35 <AcceleratorRUS> : when fix all diff
18:36 <AcceleratorRUS> : and just submit not full
18:36 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:36 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok tell me
18:36 <AcceleratorRUS> : when you finished
18:38 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok I finished
18:38 <AcceleratorRUS> : finished submit?
18:38 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : yup
18:38 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok i redownlioad
18:38 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:40 <AcceleratorRUS> : 10 sek
18:40 <AcceleratorRUS> : :3
18:40 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : i see
18:41 <AcceleratorRUS> : lol
18:41 <AcceleratorRUS> : you not fix insane
18:41 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ！？
18:41 <AcceleratorRUS> : audioleadin
18:41 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : oh
18:41 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok i fixed it
18:41 <AcceleratorRUS> : http://puu.sh/D3r2
18:42 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : i know
18:43 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
18:44 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:07:254 (1) - 1 grid left?
18:44 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:45 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:13:476 (4) - add clap end slider
18:45 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:46 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:15:698 (4) - add clap beginer slider
18:46 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:46 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:16:365 (5) - add clap repeating the slider
18:47 <AcceleratorRUS> : undestand it?
18:47 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : yup
18:49 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:23:254 (4) - add NC and remove clap beginer slider?
18:49 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:52 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:30:365 (3) - add NC? and remove clap beginer slider and add clap end slider?
18:53 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:30:810 (2) - remove clap beginer slider and add clap end slider
18:54 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:31:254 (3) - remove clap beginer and end slider and add whistle end slider?
18:54 <AcceleratorRUS> : i think its sound better
18:55 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : hmm
18:55 <AcceleratorRUS> : not good? ;w;
18:55 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : well ,good
18:55 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
18:57 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:00:587 why break time?
18:57 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : not good?
18:58 <AcceleratorRUS> : yes
18:58 <AcceleratorRUS> : only normal diff have break time
18:59 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : hmm
18:59 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
18:59 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : I will map here later
18:59 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
19:01 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:36:143 (4) - add NC and whistle
19:01 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:37:032 (3) - whistle too
19:02 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
19:02 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:29:476 (5) - and too whistle repeat slider, i miss it
19:02 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:37:921 (1) - add finish?
19:03 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : wait
19:03 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
19:03 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : what did you mean this 01:29:476 (5) -
19:03 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : I can't understand
19:03 <AcceleratorRUS> : http://puu.sh/D3zY this place add whistle
19:03 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:29:476 (5) -
19:03 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
19:04 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : You might improve your grammer >m<
19:04 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
19:04 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : Maybe you should say and whistle too at the repeat slider
19:05 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
19:05 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:32:587 (3) - maybe add whistle beginer slider?
19:05 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:33:476 (4) - ^ whistle
19:05 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:34:365 (1) - ^
19:06 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:40:587 (6) - whistle
19:07 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:41:476 (1) - finish
19:07 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:44:810 (6) - maybe remove clap?
19:07 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
19:08 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:53:921 (3) - finish beginer slider
19:08 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:55:698 (1) - ^
19:09 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:57:476 (3) - ^
19:09 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:58:143 (4) - remove clap
19:10 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:58:810 (5) - ^ and add finish end slider
19:10 <AcceleratorRUS> : its all
19:10 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
19:10 <AcceleratorRUS> : now your line
19:10 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : line?
19:11 <AcceleratorRUS> : green lines
19:11 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
19:13 <AcceleratorRUS> : fine
19:13 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok finish normal diff
19:13 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : thx!
19:14 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok now hard
19:14 <AcceleratorRUS> : wait
19:14 <AcceleratorRUS> : 5 min
19:14 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
19:22 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok
19:22 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
19:26 <AcceleratorRUS> : i think 00:23:254 (1) - remove clap?
19:26 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:23:698 (3) - remove clap beginer slider?
19:26 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:24:587 (5) - remove clap?
19:26 <AcceleratorRUS> : what you think about it?
19:27 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : hmm, not bad
19:27 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:23:698 (3) - and this slider remove whistle end slider
19:28 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:19:698 (1) - add whistle beginer slider?
19:29 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:25:032 (1) - remove whistle and add finish beginer slider
19:29 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:26:810 (1) - ^
19:30 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:28:587 (1) - ^
19:31 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:30:810 (3) - remove clap
19:31 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:31:698 (8) - remove clap and add whistle?
19:32 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : how about finish?
19:32 <AcceleratorRUS> : i think no
19:32 <AcceleratorRUS> : whistle better i think
19:32 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : hmm, fine
19:34 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:38:365 (3) - remove clap
19:34 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:38:365 (3) - and add whistle
19:35 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:41:921 (3) - ^
19:37 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:48:810 (3) - add whistle at the repeat slider
19:38 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:51:698 (1) - whistle beginer slider
19:38 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:52:587 (4) - ^
19:39 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:54:365 (5) - add NC?
19:39 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:56:143 (3) - whistle
19:40 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:57:032 (1) - ^
19:40 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:57:921 (4) - ^
19:40 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:59:698 (3) - remove clap
19:40 <AcceleratorRUS> : and add whistle
19:41 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:00:142 (5) - remove finish
19:41 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:06:810 (3) - remove clap
19:42 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:16:587 (1) - remove clap
19:43 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:20:143 (1) - remove finish?
19:43 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:23:698 (1) - ^?
19:43 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
19:44 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:29:032 (1) - remove clap?
19:44 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:29:921 (5) - ^?
19:44 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
19:44 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:30:365 (6) - ^ remove clap end slider
19:45 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:29:921 (5) - add finish begienr slider?
19:45 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:30:810 (1) - remove clap
19:46 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:32:587 (1) - whistle?
19:46 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:33:476 (3) - ^?
19:46 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:34:365 (1) - remove finish and add whistle?
19:47 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:40:587 (3) - whistle?
19:48 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:58:810 (5) - remove clap
19:48 <AcceleratorRUS> : its all hard diff
19:48 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
19:48 <AcceleratorRUS> : i go eat
19:48 <AcceleratorRUS> : wait
19:48 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
19:48 <AcceleratorRUS> : i am hungry xD
19:49 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : go ahead
20:06 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok sorry for wait
20:06 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : oh
20:08 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : insane?
20:08 <AcceleratorRUS> : ues
20:08 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : okai
20:08 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:17:254 (3) - add repeat slider
20:08 <AcceleratorRUS> : clap
20:09 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:23:698 (3) - remove clap?
20:09 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
20:09 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:24:587 (7) - remove clap?
20:10 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:25:032 - remove whistle
20:11 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:26:810 (1) - remove whistle and add finish
20:11 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:28:587 (1) - ^
20:12 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:30:587 (2) - add clap beginer slider
20:12 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:31:032 (4) - ^
20:13 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:31:698 (7) - remove clap and finish and add whistle?
20:13 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:34:254 (2) - lol
20:13 <AcceleratorRUS> : you wanted stack it? or no?
20:13 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ?
20:14 <AcceleratorRUS> : look not good
20:14 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : how to make it better?
20:16 <AcceleratorRUS> : http://puu.sh/D48b its looks fine if you make it
20:16 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : hmm ok
20:16 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:34:365 (x) add note
20:17 <AcceleratorRUS> : if you add
20:17 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:34:254 (2) - remove clap
20:17 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:34:365 (2) - and add clap
20:17 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:34:587 (3) - remove clap
20:17 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:34:810 (5) - remove clap
20:19 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:36:365 (3,4,5) - remove clap
20:19 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:38:254 (5) - add clap
20:19 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:38:365 (6) - remove clap
20:19 <AcceleratorRUS> : 00:38:476 (7) - add clap
20:20 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:16:587 (1) - remove clap
20:20 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:18:365 (1) - ^
20:21 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:23:698 (1) - ^
20:21 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:29:921 (5) - add finish
20:22 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:32:587 (1) - whistle
20:22 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:33:476 (5) - ^
20:22 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:34:365 (1) - ^
20:22 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:36:143 (1) - finish?
20:22 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:37:032 (3) - ^?
20:22 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : start?
20:23 <AcceleratorRUS> : yea
20:23 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : slider begin?
20:23 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
20:23 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:37:921 (1) - ^ Finish
20:25 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:41:476 (1) - remove clap add finish
20:25 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:48:587 (1) - finish?
20:25 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:52:143 (1) - ^
20:26 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:53:921 (1) - ^
20:26 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:55:698 (1) - ^
20:26 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:57:476 (1) - ^
20:27 <AcceleratorRUS> : 01:58:810 (3) - remove clap
20:28 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok finish insane
20:28 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
20:28 <AcceleratorRUS> : its all?
20:29 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : up to you if you want to mod yuzuki's style
20:29 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok i check it
20:32 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : if it's fine and then I upload
20:32 <AcceleratorRUS> : wait
20:32 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
20:32 <AcceleratorRUS> : ok fine too me
20:33 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : hmm
20:33 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : upload now?
20:33 <AcceleratorRUS> : yes
20:33 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : ok
20:33 <YuZuKi_Kenny> : thx for modding

Good luck

frans_niko wrote:

here we go
EDITED sorry T_T
General
Tags who create the Guest diff in your beatmap
this is like TV Size >w< maybe change the title

Easy (guest diff)
AR4 thats ok just give suggest for -1

Normal
AR6? maybe its too fast just give suggest -1
HP 3 its ok *suggest +1

Hard
OD+1 maybe
AR8 so fast T_T -1 maybe

YuZuKi style
good job nothing to mod <3
and nice jumping

Insane
nothing to mod

good song <3

rui wrote:

from Irc mod reqs very very late sorry
In my mod. You can ignore me
[L18's Easy]
nothing nice diff!
[Normal]
Why Is there a break Normal diff only? It it very strange imo :<
00:17:254 ( ) - add note
00:23:921 ( ) - add note
01:37:254 ( ) - ^
01:44:587 ( ) - ^
[Hard]
01:26:587 (5) - this note was confused. please separate note
01:41:698 (1,2,3) - ^
[YuZuKi's style]
00:45:476 (5) - add clap slider end
[Insane]
00:36:143 ( ) - add note and add clap
00:37:032 ( ) - ^
00:37:921 ( ) - ^
00:39:810 (4) - move back 1/4 and add clap
00:40:699 (9) - ^
00:42:810 (1) - this slider 1/4 longer
00:53:476 (1) - ^
01:37:254 (4,5,6,) - this part want to jump imo

That's all Good luck ~

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~


[General]
- Remove Short Ver. from the title.
- You can remove the bookmarks.


[L18's Easy]
- Approach Rate -1


[Normal]
00:17:254 (6) - New combo ?
01:00:587 (1,2,3) - Watch your spacing ~
01:07:698 (1,2,3) - ^
01:44:365 (5) - New combo?


That's it ~
2 Stars and good luck! >w<