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Nanako - Ura mo Karada mo Rakkamijin [Osu|Taiko]

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Megurine Luka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月26日 at 0:40:47

Artist: Nanako
Title: Ura mo Karada mo Rakkamijin
Source: jubeat knit APPEND
Tags: BEMANI KONAMI Philosophy2 spboxer3 Mura_77
BPM: 158
Filesize: 3950kb
Play Time: 01:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (3.1 stars, 138 notes)
  2. Another (4.87 stars, 362 notes)
  3. Basic (2.18 stars, 108 notes)
  4. Extreme (5 stars, 481 notes)
  5. Sp3's Jubiko (4.83 stars, 673 notes)
Download: Nanako - Ura mo Karada mo Rakkamijin
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我感受到了来自世界的恶意
论没有高强度连打高BPM怎么搞死你们。
Advanced - Mura_77
Another - Philosophy2
うらもからだも落花微塵
BG is 蓬莱山 辉夜 Houraisan Kaguya 结果他妈的是灵梦,服了
ArzatoRx
zhe
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Philosophy2 wrote:

zhe
ni xiang shuo shen me =_=
ArzatoRx

Megurine Luka wrote:

Philosophy2 wrote:

zhe
ni xiang shuo shen me =_=
dangranshishafa
tutuhaha
taoyannimendeshurufadouaojiaoleme o——o/~?
Pokie
(´ ▽ ` )ノ dageyouyouxinkeng
_Kiva
CSY the corrupt
spboxer3
其實說實話感覺沒有挺好
你看看~就收著吧
喜歡就上傳 如果傳了要跟我說喔^^

Download: Nanako - Ura mo Karada mo Rakkamijin (Megurine Luka) [Sp3's Jubiko].osu
Mura_77
wei shen me wo de shu ru fa da bu liao zhong wen le ?!
Basic tuo le xu jiu zhong yu zuo hao le,
http://puu.sh/y9Y0
DeeN
我看见一个叫newlegsound的东西然后不见了.....恍惚了?
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

DeeN wrote:

我看见一个叫newlegsound的东西然后不见了.....恍惚了?
确实有这么一个东西...图书卡做的带音效版本,被我一不小心上传了O_O
Axey
Extreme

感觉一开始的soft-clap有点响..嘛音量调低点好了lol

00:01:286(3,4,5)-add clap on (4) remove (3,5)
00:03:944(2)-remove clap

聋了..为啥我觉得音效不是很配..orz

Another

00:22:172(1)-这个意义不明的nc...
00:24:925(5)-nc 后面slider nc cancel 后面几个1个slider的nc..想改就改吧orz
音效这样就可以了吗

Basic

00:00717(1,2,3)-时间间距不一样..但是打击间距一样 这是不对滴 所以把(1)放在后面的红线上
00:02:425(3,4,5,6)-这样拜访不好看 我建议放在上面 <http://puu.sh/BHTw>
00:03:754(1)-放后面红线上
00:05:653(1)-这个肯定不科学的呀..换成slider吧
00:10:590(1,1)-nc cancel 从前面的(4)-nc
00:16:666(1)-nc cancel
00:29:957(1)-^
01:40:210(1,1)-^
01:46:286(1)-^ 最后那个也是 :D nc意义不大哦

^^ good luck
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue

Maps that you should check out:
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/35643 tsuka's ver
触卡蛋疼删了 /.\

Basic

  1. 00:03:754 (1,2) - 间距不对 其实我觉得 00:03:944 - 这里add note更好 或者slider 这音空着感觉不好
  2. 00:05:653 (1) - 自重 这新人能打?
  3. 01:27:299 (3,1) - 最好不要用这种很多reverse的slider, 2x1/1不就好了...
Another

  1. 00:13:438 (5) - 这个我打的时候都会当成连打打下去断掉, 能不能改了
  2. 00:15:432 (1) - WHY
  3. 00:25:210 (1) - 滑条底下的三连去掉, 这个往前比较好, 00:25:400 空着
  4. 00:27:868 - add note
  5. 00:46:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - ._.坑爹
  6. 00:54:641 (3) - 自重啊
  7. 01:10:590 (1) - ^ unrank
  8. 01:08:122 (1) - 叠到(2)头上舒服点
  9. 01:29:672 (3) - 这个也不太好... 换成circle...
  10. 01:32:995 (3) - 这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345071
  11. 挺有想法的diff
Extreme

  1. 00:35:273 (4) - 这里有点不美观233 把(3)改成0.75x的速度后面加个三连怎么样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345077
  2. 00:40:020 - 这里加note? 或者00:39:830 (9) - 改成1/2 slider 因为就这spacing+后面的节奏打起来不爽
  3. 00:52:742 (1) - 大哥你太善良了/.\
  4. 00:57:679 (1,2) - 这两个1.25感觉有点不合适...不像那种加速段
  5. 01:06:318 (2) - 往下移一格
  6. 01:14:387 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345043 我觉得这样比较好玩/.\ (slap
  7. 01:16:951 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不堪入目... 这摆的也太乱了吧 3/4建议摆得稍微规则一点, 1/2的间距一半左右就能看出来了, 前面是slider的话读图应该没问题, 没必要摆的到处都是._. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345038
  8. 01:23:596 (1) - 提前1/4._.
  9. 01:28:438 (5) - new combo?
Sp3's Jubiko

  1. 虽然我不打太鼓但是01:30:717 (1) - 是不是放错地方了
that's all

Good luck~
ArzatoRx
BakaHuang's mod

BakaHuang wrote:

Another

00:22:172(1)-这个意义不明的nc...
00:24:925(5)-nc 后面slider nc cancel 后面几个1个slider的nc..想改就改吧orz 这些1slider的nc曲里都是没vocal又有音效的地方 所以都是和前后走向不太相同再nc 不是unrankable的话保留希望
音效这样就可以了吗 音效舍呢么的 还没下啊哈哈

^^ good luck



[box=[CSGA:c8330]Ar3sgice's mod]

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue
Another

  1. 00:13:438 (5) - 这个我打的时候都会当成连打打下去断掉, 能不能改了 诶好多这样的阿…… 我自己觉得还可以 保留意见
  2. 00:15:432 (1) - WHY 这里音效明显不同了 感觉slider挺带感的就 至于nc的话 不行再改
  3. 00:25:210 (1) - 滑条底下的三连去掉, 这个往前比较好, 00:25:400 空着
    这些1slider的nc曲里都是没vocal又有音效的地方 所以都是和前后走向不太相同再nc 不是unrankable的话保留希望
  4. 00:27:868 - add note 做的时候感觉"会不会放太密"什么的就留点空当休息 而且感觉也不违和 保留意见
  5. 00:46:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - ._.坑爹 啊哈哈 也是配合曲子音效的蛋疼产物
  6. 00:54:641 (3) - 自重啊 ,,,好吧
  7. 01:10:590 (1) - ^ unrank 服 2条slider改成4个circle
  8. 01:08:122 (1) - 叠到(2)头上舒服点 好评
  9. 01:29:672 (3) - 这个也不太好... 换成circle... 只是觉得slider挺带感(?) 保留意见
  10. 01:32:995 (3) - 这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345071 好下了音效顺便改
  11. 挺有想法的diff

Good luck~

:)

http://puu.sh/CshV
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
Extreme

  1. 00:35:273 (4) - 这里有点不美观233 把(3)改成0.75x的速度后面加个三连怎么样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345077 三连打起来有停滞感,没有现在slider滑出去的感觉了:P
  2. 00:40:020 - 这里加note? 或者00:39:830 (9) - 改成1/2 slider 因为就这spacing+后面的节奏打起来不爽 故意要的停滞play
  3. 00:52:742 (1) - 大哥你太善良了/.\ 啊啊啊这里我原来是放在正下方的可是严寒说太坑了我我我我就...... 为了更坑我就换回去吧 (slap
  4. 00:57:679 (1,2) - 这两个1.25感觉有点不合适...不像那种加速段 其实我也考虑过,不过这个前面也有,为了slider的形状(远目)反正这BPM1.25和1.00相差也不大也不算坑
  5. 01:06:318 (2) - 往下移一格 fixed
  6. 01:14:387 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345043 我觉得这样比较好玩/.\ (slap 确实不错,不过没啥根据,我得考虑一下~
  7. 01:16:951 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不堪入目... 这摆的也太乱了吧 3/4建议摆得稍微规则一点, 1/2的间距一半左右就能看出来了, 前面是slider的话读图应该没问题, 没必要摆的到处都是._. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345038 故意要跳的丫。而且跳的都是三角形也不算不规则lol 这里我还问过几个人据打图的说跳的都是锐角所以蛮顺问题不大
  8. 01:23:596 (1) - 提前1/4._. 你用25%听
  9. 01:28:438 (5) - new combo? added



感谢><
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod for request~

[General]
  1. 背景图还是用jpg格式吧。。这1MB的png感觉略蛋疼…………
  2. 另外这背景真的是太花了严重影响读图………………
  3. Another的kiai怎么没了………………
[Basic]
  1. 00:05:653 (1) - Spinner太短了(开始前后面的note就出现了),这个是Unrankable的,而且spinner本身也太短了,所以改成slider吧
  2. 00:06:792 (1) - 建议结束在前面的白线上……
  3. 00:16:666 (1) - 感觉这个NC没必要……
  4. 00:17:425 (2,3) - slider建议,否则可能太难了……
  5. 00:21:982 (1) - 这个slidertick上的clap是原本用意么?感觉多余了……然后后面还有大量的slidertick上有clap,真心建议重新整理一下,感觉应该是弄音效的时候给忽略了吧
  6. 00:25:590 (2,3,4,5) - 这种地方也是依然建议slilder...后面的类似不重复说了……
  7. 01:27:299 (3) - 这个蓝线折返真的太别扭了…………强烈建议做两个1/1的slider就好……
[Another]
  1. 00:17:425 (1) - 这个这个这个加速………………建议把弧度做大一些这样不会太坑
  2. 00:17:425 (1) - 感觉这里可以加个note
  3. 00:47:046 (1) - 这个藏的也太…………那啥了……
  4. 01:37:172 (3) - 轨道几乎完全被分数遮挡了,强烈建议别这么弄……
[Extreme]
  1. 01:00:717 (3) - 考虑ctrl+r下?
  2. 01:08:691 (5,6) - 这两个建议换位置,然后把01:08:311 (3,4,5,6,1) - 整个排成五角星吧~
  3. 01:23:691 (1) - 去掉NC?
差不多就这些啦~~Star&GL~
ArzatoRx
Scorpiour's mod

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod for request~

[General]
  1. Another的kiai怎么没了……………… 我作图好像都没有大段kiai过 如果需要统一舍呢么的再添
[Another]
  1. 00:17:425 (1) - 这个这个这个加速………………建议把弧度做大一些这样不会太坑 这个感觉还好吧 标的都是another了(其实是我懒得改)
  2. 00:17:425 (1) - 感觉这里可以加个note ^
  3. 00:47:046 (1) - 这个藏的也太…………那啥了…… 诶嘿嘿 我自己每次都全300呀(其实是除了叠想不到放哪里好)
  4. 01:37:172 (3) - 轨道几乎完全被分数遮挡了,强烈建议别这么弄…… 好吧改了更蛋疼点的排列

:)
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod for request~

[General]
  1. 背景图还是用jpg格式吧。。这1MB的png感觉略蛋疼………… 还会改的大胶布
  2. 另外这背景真的是太花了严重影响读图………………
  3. Another的kiai怎么没了………………等捞比adv来了之后统一一下o3o

[Extreme]
  1. 01:00:717 (3) - 考虑ctrl+r下?想要来回感所以算了~
  2. 01:08:691 (5,6) - 这两个建议换位置,然后把01:08:311 (3,4,5,6,1) - 整个排成五角星吧~我不喜欢五角星o3o喜欢梯形
  3. 01:23:691 (1) - 去掉NC?不行,为了提示spacing梗o3o
差不多就这些啦~~Star&GL~
谢谢啦~~
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
BUMP
Konei
Hi ~ :3


must fix

should fix

think about it

suggestion

[General]

* You don't have a SB, so you can delete the osb.file. I don't know if it regenerated often for you, but you can try to delete~



[Basic]

* Overall I think this diff sounds really hitsound empty :< You may want to add some whistles
* OD +1? Current is pretty low for me
* Just my opinion but AR +1 plays really better for me. It's a bit slow like this imo.
00:02:046 (2,3,2,3) - They sound a bit empty, sure you don't want to add some whistles?
00:12:109 (3,1) - The spacing of them is a bit strange. While pattern like http://puu.sh/1e7NA have some gap, it's not here in this place. This doesnt look really good imo and I think it can be fixed :3
00:17:425 (1) - Use finishes as you did in later parts?
00:37:172 (3) - Maybe NC? Is a bit strange but fits quite well imo
01:21:982 (1) - For easier diffs, it is not a good idea to place a note in the mid of the map, because the approachcircle and the note will be hidden by the Spinner's hitburst
01:22:742 (2) - NC? I think KIAI should always start with NC, but having a combo from one note isn't good aswell. Maybe, to solve this problem and the one above it could be good to delete 1.
01:33:375 (1) - You may want to Add a note here with finish and start the Spinner at 01:33:565


[Advanced]

00:03:944 - add note?
00:05:653 (1) - I think this Spinner is too short :<
00:06:792 (1) - And if you set a note right in the mid of such a short Spinner, beginners may have many problems~
00:54:451 (1,2) - This mid placing is still not good imo, but I guess it's fine here
01:31:856 (4,5) - This doesn't flow really good imo~ Something like http://puu.sh/1e8kU Would be better imo o3o


I don't have any problems with the rest currently :3

Nice beautiful map, Star and good luck o/

EDIT: How can I be stupid enough mixing source and tags nrggggr
alacat
Hi:3 from My queue.

Sorry for the delay. :o

[General]
●BGs' size are to big and one of them is in PNG format (use JPG to reduce its size)
Average size with good quality is around 300kb~500kb


[Basic]
●Approach Rate +1 ?
●00:01:666 - add note . like this your pattern at here .00:04:324 -
●00:08:311 - add whistle on the slider's reverse. put applause with constant rhythm.
●00:14:387 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:18:375 (2) - try to make slider ?
If you follow my suggestions, many player would prevent miss.
●01:28:818 (2) - bend slider to the opposite direction?
●01:32:615 (2,3) - switch these notes ?
●01:37:932 (4) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●01:43:628 (2) - add whistle on the slider's reverse.

you should put more hit sound ><

[Advanced]
●00:02:425 - 60% is fine.
●00:05:653 (1) - very very hard o.o I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●00:22:362 - volume down to 5% ? This slider tick doesn't follow the music well.
●00:29:957 (1,2,3) - gradually add volume?
●00:34:514 - same ,here 00:22:362 -
●00:56:349 - ^
●01:04:514 (3,4,1) - Make the spacing equal here . may be confusing many beginners
●01:40:970 - volume up to 40% ?


[Another]
●00:09:261 (7,8,9,10) - try this ? I think the flow is good :3
●00:13:058 (4) - add new combo? same as your pattern at here.00:06:792 (7,1) -
●00:57:109 (1) - may have the risk to touch the score
●00:59:862 (5) - try to put a note on this slider head ? 00:59:957 (1) -
●01:40:400 (3) - may have the risk to touch the HP bar.


[Extreme]
●00:09:830 (1) - remove new combo.Becouce you don't use new combo at here. 00:11:349 - 00:12:868 -
●00:15:717 (4) - try this ?
I like to bend slider to the opposite direction ><
●00:50:273 (1) - move to x:60 y:56
●01:00:717 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●01:07:077 - add note ?
●01:09:830 (1) - remove new combo.
●01:10:590 (3) - add new combo.same as your pattern at here.01:04:134 (5,1) -
●01:40:590 (3) - move to x:428 y:264
●01:42:679 (1) - try to tilt a slider? like this here .01:43:818 (1) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
●01:45:717 (5) - add new combo.same as your pattern at here.01:39:451 (4,1) -

Hope you fine this helpful :3

nice map set ></

good luck ~ :oops:
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
自挖


Fixed mostly from last two mods.
Melt
Hi :3
M4M
因为是新人,所以哪里说错了请不要在意=P

[Basic]
  1. 00:12:109(3)这一段试试改成这样呢
  2. 00:28:058(1)总感觉这个slider棱角分明的好违和orz 还有01:04:514(1)这个也是
  3. 00:35:653(1)这算出界了么,窝不太确定
  4. 01:31:856(1,2,3)往左一格
[Advanced]
  1. 00:02:425(3)打的时候这clap一出来吓一跳,是不是减小点音量
  2. 00:21:982(1)感觉这连着3个clap不太好听,后面那个也是(只是我觉得orz
  3. 01:33:375(1)这个finish没必要这么大声吧
[Another]
  1. 好像没看到kiai time
  2. 00:02:046(3)slider尾往上拉一点让它和后面几个slider平行
  3. 00:12:299(7,1,2,3)感觉滑条折一次后面放4个circle比较科学
  4. 00:16:666(8,9,10)没叠好._.
  5. 00:23:881(1,2,3)3个变速是不是考虑nc一下
  6. 01:15:147(1,2)这俩贴着感觉不好看
[Extreme]
  1. 00:04:324(3)总感觉这circle的位置好微妙,往右边拉点试试?或者2,3,4,5做个间距缩近o.o
  2. 00:37:172(1,3)依旧觉得这俩slider太尖了
  3. 01:22:362(3,4)这间距为啥突然小了,放到x:28 y:65左右比较好看
  4. 01:39:641(1)这开始这几个3连不弄个音量渐大么
  5. 01:43:248(3)删掉一个锚点拉标准点
  6. 01:44:387(3)^
差不多就这么多,能力有限
Star and good luck :3
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka
感谢\:D/

现在在学校,等回去了给你Mod -3-
Flask
湊數太鼓mod不要噴我

[Sp3's Jubiko]
  1. 00:13:248 (5) - 全是d有點單調 可以換k
  2. 00:22:172 (2) - d
  3. 00:38:881 (3) - remove
  4. 00:39:071 - 上一個k
  5. 01:05:653 (2) - k?
  6. 01:31:856 (2) - k?
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