1. Last (4.92 stars, 856 notes)
2. S.Nagi's Remote Taiko- Type (4.94 stars, 1533 notes)

Kotek- wrote:

Hello. I saw your map in #modreqs.
So. I can give you right timing. (How I think it's really better.)

1. 93 BPM - 887 offset
2. 186 BPM - 21523 offset

Also BG in-game and on website different. (Maybe I have lag. Idk.)
And you can add a Preview Point.

Good luck with map!

suirenn05 wrote:

yo Gloria Guard mod request thx



Last
✩00:42:006(14)-Add NC? ok!
✩01:02:490~ kore doudesuka? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/322918 ok!


Ranked화이팅~

B-1B wrote:

[General]
Tick Rate : 3
동방지령전 엑스트라 스테이지의 중간보스는 사나에지만, 곡의 분위기, 멜로디, 느낌은 코이시를 가리키고 있습니다. 따라서 BG는 코메이지 코이시로.
추천 BG :

SPOILER

http://gelbooru.com//images/1138/0b4262b184a71276fab06349b17a3a2c.jpg

SPOILER

[Last]
00:03:307 (2) - 휘슬 제거?
00:05:887 (2) - ^
00:11:048 (2) - ^
00:12:500 (1,3) - ^
00:14:113 (2,5) - ^
00:16:532 (2,4) - ^
00:17:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:13:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 처럼 곡선미를 주는건 어떨까요? 그리고, 도입부 느낌을 끊는다는 느낌으로 끝에 1노트 추가?
00:17:984 (2,4,6,8) - 휘슬 제거?
00:21:201 (1) - 피니쉬?
00:21:523 (1) - 휘슬?
00:21:846 (3) - 클랩?
00:22:168 (1) - 휘슬?
00:22:491 (2) - 클랩?
00:22:813 (1) - ^
00:23:136 (2) - 휘슬?
00:23:459 (1) - 클랩?
00:23:781 (3) - 휘슬?
00:24:426 (2) - 클랩?
00:25:071 (2) - 휘슬?
00:25:717 (2) - 클랩?
00:26:039 (1,2) - 휘슬?
00:26:523 (4) - 클랩?
00:26:684 (1) - ^
00:27:652 (3) - ^
00:28:297 (2) - 휘슬?
00:28:620 (1,2,4) - 클랩?
00:29:426 (2) - ^
00:30:233 (5) - 휘슬?
00:30:636 (2,8,12) - 클랩?
00:30:797 (4,6,14) - 휘슬?
00:31:846 (1) - ^
00:32:491 (2) - ^
00:33:136 (1,5) - 클랩?
00:33:459 (3,7) - 휘슬?
00:34:749 (3,6,7) - 클랩?
00:36:200 (10) - 휘슬?
00:36:362 (1) - 클랩?
00:36:523 (2,4) - 휘슬?
00:37:007 (1,3,5) - 클랩?
00:38:297 (1) - ^
00:38:620 (3) - 휘슬?
00:38:942 (1) - 클랩?
00:39:265 (3) - 휘슬?
00:39:910 (3) - 클랩?
00:40:555 (5) - 휘슬?
00:40:717 (6) - 클랩?
00:40:959 (2,6,7,9,10,12) - ^
00:41:200 (5,8) - 휘슬?
00:42:168 (1,3,4) - 클랩?
00:43:459 (1,4,5,8) - ^
00:44:749 (1,3,4) - ^
00:46:039 (1,2,4,5,6,8) - ^
00:47:330 (1,3,4) - ^
00:48:620 (1,3) - ^
00:49:909 (1,4,5,7) - ^
00:51:200 (1,3,6) - ^
00:52:491 (1,2,4,6) - ^
00:53:136 (1,2) - ^
00:54:104 (5,6,8,10) - 클랩 추가, 5는 피니쉬 제거?
00:55:071 (1,2,4) - 클랩?
00:55:555 (1,2) - ^
00:56:039 (4) - 피니쉬?
00:56:362 (5,7,10) - 클랩?
00:57:652 (1,3) - ^
00:58:942 (1,3) - ^
01:00:233 (1,2,4,5,8) - ^
01:01:523 (1,4,5,7,9,10) - ^
01:07:330 (1,5) - ^
01:07:491 (3,7) - 휘슬?
01:07:975 (1) - 클랩?
01:08:620 (3) - 휘슬?
01:09:265 (1) - ^
01:09:910 (3) - 클랩?
01:10:555 (1,4,6,7) - ^
01:12:007 (3,4,6,7,9,11) - ^
01:12:975 (1,3,5) - ^
01:14:426 (1) - 휘슬?
01:14:749 (2,4,5,7) - 클랩?
01:16:039 (2,4,6) - ^
01:17:007 (1,2,3,4,6) - ^
01:18:136 (1) - 피니쉬?
01:18:297 (2) - 휘슬?
01:18:942 (4,7) - 클랩?
01:20:071 (2,3,6) - ^
01:22:168 (1,3,4,6) - ^
01:22:813 (7) - 휘슬?
01:23:055 (10) - 클랩?
01:23:297 (1,2) - 휘슬?
01:23:620 (3,5) - 클랩?
01:24:104 (6) - 피니쉬?
01:24:588 (1,2,6) - 휘슬?
01:25:394 (4) - 클랩?
01:26:039 (1) - ^
01:27:329 (1,2,8,11) - ^
01:27:571 (4,6,10,12) - 휘슬?
01:28:620 (1,3) - 클랩?
01:30:233 (2,4) - ^
01:31:523 (3,5,7,8) - ^
01:32:491 (1,4,6) - ^
01:33:781 (1,4) - ^
01:34:104 (2) - 피니쉬?
01:35:071 (1,4) - 클랩?
01:35:717 (3) - 피니쉬?
01:36:684 (2,5) - 클랩?
01:36:846 (3,6) - 피니쉬?
01:37:652 (1,3,6,7,9,12) - 클랩?
01:38:620 (11) - 피니쉬?
01:38:942 (1,4) - 클랩?
01:39:588 (3) - 피니쉬?
01:40:233 (1) - ^
01:40:555 (2,3) - 클랩?
01:41:846 (3,4,6) - ^
01:42:813 (1,4,5,6) - 클랩?
01:44:104 (1,4,6) - ^
01:44:749 (5) - 피니쉬?
01:45:555 (2,4,5) - 클랩?
01:46:362 (7) - 피니쉬?
01:47:007 (3,5,7,8) - 클랩?
01:48:055 (2,4,6,8,9,11) - ^
01:48:781 (10) - 피니쉬?
01:49:265 (1,3) - 클랩?
01:50:878 (2,4) - ^
01:51:846 (1,4,6,8) - ^
01:53:136 (1,4) - ^
01:53:781 (3) - ^
01:54:426 (1,4,7,8) - ^
01:55:717 (1,2,5,8) - ^
01:57:007 (1,3,5,6,8,9,11,12) - ^
01:58:298 (1,3,5,8,11) - ^
01:59:426 (1,3,5) - ^
01:59:588 (2,4,6) - 피니쉬?
02:01:362 (1,3,5) - 클랩?
02:02:168 (1,4,6,7) - ^
02:03:459 (1,2,4,6) - ^
02:04:104 (5) - 휘슬?
02:04:749 (1,4) - ^
02:05:233 (3) - 클랩?
02:05:878 (1,3) - 휘슬?
02:07:007 (4) - 클랩?
02:07:330 (1,2,5,6,9,10,13,14) - ^
02:07:491 (3,7,11,15) - 휘슬?
02:08:620 (1,4) - ^
02:08:942 (2,3) - 클랩?
02:09:910 (5) - 브레이크 타임 진입을 강조하기 위해 중앙을 향하는 수평 슬라이더로 대체?, 피니쉬?
02:20:233 (1,3) - 클랩?
02:21:200 (4) - 피니쉬?
02:21:523 (1,3) - 클랩?
02:22:491 (4) - 피니쉬?
02:22:813 (1) - 클랩?
02:23:459 (1) - ^
02:24:104 (1) - ^
02:24:749 (1) - ^
02:25:394 (1,3,6,7,9) - ^
02:25:878 (5) - 피니쉬?
02:26:684 (1,4) - 클랩?
02:27:330 (3) - 피니쉬?
02:27:975 (1,4) - 클랩?
02:28:781 (6) - 피니쉬?
02:28:942 (1,3) - 클랩?
02:30:233 (5) - 휘슬?
02:30:555 (1) - 피니쉬?
02:31:039 (2,3) - 휘슬?
02:31:523 (3) - 클랩?
02:32:168 (1) - 피니쉬?
02:32:652 (2) - 클랩?
02:33:136 (1) - 휘슬?
02:33:620 (2) - 클랩?
02:34:104 (3) - 휘슬?
02:34:426 (5) - 클랩?
02:34:749 (6) - 휘슬?
02:35:233 (7) - 클랩?
02:35:717 (1,5) - 휘슬?
02:36:200 (2,3) - 클랩?
02:37:007 (4) - 피니쉬?
02:38:297 (1) - ^
02:38:781 (2,4,6) - 휘슬?
02:40:555 (9) - 클랩?
02:40:717 (10) - 피니쉬?
02:40:878 (1) - 휘슬?
02:41:200 (3,5,8) - 피니쉬?
02:41:523 (4,6,7) - 휘슬?
02:42:813 (1) - 피니쉬?
02:43:136 (3) - 휘슬?
02:43:459 (1,3) - 클랩?
02:43:781 (2,4,5) - 휘슬?
02:44:749 (1,5) - 클랩?
02:45:071 (3,6) - 휘슬?
02:46:039 (1,5) - 클랩?
02:46:362 (3,6) - 휘슬?
02:46:684 (5) - 피니쉬?
02:47:330 (1,4) - 클랩?
02:47:652 (3,6,7) - 피니쉬 제거후 휘슬?
02:48:620 (1) - 클랩?
02:50:071 (1) - 피니쉬?
02:51:846 (2) - ^
02:52:491 (1,3) - 휘슬?
02:53:781 (1,2) - ^
02:54:104 (3) - 클랩?
02:54:426 (5,6) - 휘슬?
02:54:749 (7) - 클랩?
02:55:071 (1,3) - 휘슬?
02:56:523 (1,3,5) - ^
02:57:007 (2,4) - 클랩?
02:57:330 (6) - 피니쉬?
02:57:975 (2,4,6) - 클랩?
02:58:136 (1,3,5,7,8,9) - 휘슬?
02:59:910 (10) - 클랩?
03:00:071 (11) - 휘슬?
03:01:523 (1,6) - 클랩?
03:01:684 (3,4,7,8,9,10,13) - 휘슬?
03:02:168 (7,12) - 클랩?
03:04:104 (1,2,4,5,6,8,9) - 휘슬?
03:04:426 (3,7) - 클랩?
03:05:394 (1,3) - 휘슬?
03:05:878 (2,4) - 클랩?
03:06:684 (1,2,4,5,6,8) - 휘슬?
03:07:007 (3,7) - 클랩?
03:07:975 (1) - 피니쉬?
03:08:459 (2) - 휘슬?
03:09:265 (4,6) - 클랩?
03:10:233 (9) - 휘슬?
03:10:555 (1) - 피니쉬?
03:13:136 (1,3) - 휘슬?
03:13:620 (2,4) - 클랩?
03:14:426 (1,3) - 휘슬?
03:14:749 (2,4) - 클랩?
03:15:717 (1,3) - 휘슬?
03:16:200 (2,4) - 클랩?
03:17:007 (1,3) - 휘슬?
03:17:330 (2,4) - 클랩?
03:18:297 (1,3,4) - 클랩?
03:18:781 (2) - 휘슬?
03:19:588 (1,6) - 클랩?
03:19:749 (3,4) - 휘슬?
03:20:233 (7,9) - 클랩?
03:20:394 (8,10) - 휘슬?
03:20:878 (1) - 피니쉬?
03:22:813 (3,7) - 클랩?
03:22:974 (5,9) - 휘슬?
03:23:459 (1,3) - ^
03:23:942 (2,4) - 클랩?
03:24:749 (5,7) - 휘슬?
03:25:071 (6,8) - 클랩?
03:26:039 (1,3) - 휘슬?
03:27:330 (5,7) - ^
03:27:652 (6,8) - 클랩?
03:28:620 (1,3) - 휘슬?
03:29:910 (4,5,7) - 클랩?
03:30:071 (6,8) - 휘슬?
03:30:555 (1,6) - 클랩?
03:30:717 (3,4) - 휘슬?
03:31:200 (1) - 피니쉬?
03:32:491 (1,5) - 클랩?
03:32:652 (3,7) - 휘슬?
03:33:378 (9) - 1개로 묶기보다는 2개로 나누시고 둘다 휘슬?
03:33:781 (1,2,5) - 휘슬?
03:33:942 (3) - 클랩?
03:34:426 (1,2,5) - 휘슬?
03:35:071 (1,5,9,13) - 클랩?
03:35:233 (3,7,11) - 휘슬?
03:45:394 (1,2,4,5) - ^
03:45:717 (3,6) - 클랩?
03:46:684 (1,4,5) - ^
03:47:813 (1,2,4,5) - 휘슬?
03:48:297 (3,6,7) - 클랩?
03:49:265 (1,4,9) - ^
03:49:426 (3,6,7,10,12) - 휘슬?
03:50:555 (1,2,3,4) - 곡이 끝나는걸 강조하기 위해 피니쉬 추가?
03:51:845 (1,3,7,9) - 휘슬?
03:52:168 (4,8) - 피니쉬?
03:52:330 (5) - 클랩?
03:52:894 (1) - ^

별다른 문제점은 없어보입니다. 그런데 중간에 피곤해서 몇부분 어긋났을듯..

한땀 한땀 장인 정신이 깃든 모딩이닷







EDIT: ;;..여기다가 쿠도스를 주시면 ..;

Ryu wrote:

[Last]
maybe AR +1? maybe~ no change
02:08:619 - 02:09:506 - do somethin with dat streams, it looks not good orz ok
03:26:684 - circle no change
03:26:926 - ^ no change
03:27:168 - ^ no change
03:27:329 - ^ no change
03:27:652 - 03:28:297 - slider 3 repeat no change


Good luck !! >w</

DarkDunskin wrote:

[Last]

Generell:

- Set Audio Lead-In to 1000 ms in .osu file manually. (open .osu in notepad) ok


Hitsound:
- 00:26:684 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart, remove Whistle. ok
- 00:37:006 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart, remove Whistle. ok
- 00:51:200 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add Finish on (1,3,5), remove other Hitsounds like usual. ok

From here on starts a rather more complicated Finish Pattern, I hope I didn't forget one but you will notice it by yourself:ok

New Hitsound Finish Pattern

- 00:52:652 (3) - Add Finish on Sliderend, remove Clap.ok
- 00:53:458 (6) - Add Finish, remove Clap. ok
- 00:54:103 (2) - Add Finish, remove Clap. ok
- 00:54:426 (3) - Add Finish on Sliderend.ok
- 00:55:232 (3) - Add Finish on Sliderend, remove Clap.ok
- 00:56:039 (6) - Add Finish, remove Clap. ok
- 00:56:684 (2) - Add Finish on Sliderstart, remove Clap.ok
- 00:57:006 (3) - Add Finish on Sliderend.ok
- 00:57:813 (3) - Add Finish on Sliderend.ok
- 00:58:619 (6) - Add Finish on Sliderstart, remove Clap.ok
- 00:59:264 (3) - Add Finish, remove Clap. ok
- 00:59:748 (6,7) - Add Finish on both.ok
- 01:00:393 (3) - Add Finish on Sliderend.ok
- 01:01:200 (6) - Add Finish on Sliderstart, remove Clap.ok
- 01:01:845 (3) - Add Finish, remove Clap.ok
- 01:02:328 (3,4) - Add Finish on both.

ok

- 01:13:135 (2) - Add Finsih.ok
- 01:18:297 (1) - Add Finish, remove Whistle.ok
- 01:23:458 (3) - Add Finish, remove Whistle.ok
- 01:33:781 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Whistle.ok
- 01:38:942 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Whistle.ok
- 01:44:103 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Whistle.ok
- 01:49:264 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Whistle.ok
- 01:54:426 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Whistle.ok
- 02:04:748 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Clap.
- 02:08:619 (1) - Add Finish.ok
- 02:09:910 (11) - Add Finish ok

- 02:20:232 - 02:30:555 - I won't list up every Hitsound again, its basically the same as mentioned in the box.ok

- 02:30:555 - 02:39:587 - Basically every note should have a Finish Hitsound here <-< ok

- 02:40:877 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Clap.ok
- 02:43:458 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Clap.ok
- 02:46:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Add Finish on every second Sound, remove Claps~ok
- 02:49:910 (1) - Add Note + Finish here, move the slider a few ticks to the right.ok
- 02:51:845 (2) - Add Finish on Sliderend.ok
- 02:57:652 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Whistle.ok
- 03:07:974 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Whistle.ok
- 03:11:845 (1) - Add Finish.ok
- 03:18:297 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Whistle.ok
- 03:23:458 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Whistle.ok
- 03:28:619 (1) - Add Finish, remove Whistle.ok
- 03:33:781 (1) - Add Finish.ok
- 03:38:941 (1) - Add Finish, remove Whistle.ok
- 03:44:103 (1) - Add Finish at Sliderstart, remove Whistle.ok
- 03:49:264 - 03:51:845 - Please add Finishs on every white Tick.ok
- 03:52:813 (9,10) - Add Finish on both notes.ok

[Other]
- 01:47:974 - Try to make a better Spiral shape or use this Code:

Code: Don't forget to fix spacing afterwards

256,216,107974,5,0
272,248,108055,1,0
304,240,108136,1,0
320,208,108216,1,0
312,176,108297,1,0
288,152,108378,1,0
256,144,108458,1,0
224,152,108539,1,0
200,184,108620,1,0
192,224,108700,1,0
200,256,108781,1,0
224,280,108861,1,0
256,296,108942,1,0
296,296,109023,1,0
328,272,109103,1,0

Okay that was all.
Please adjust these Hitsound Suggestions, you're really missing good Opportunitys to use some Finish Hitsounds.
And try to make streams like the one mentioned above a bit prettier
Everything else was good I believe, good luck~

Mystica wrote:

Get a little lazy..Just look through the map.here some suggestions.

1.some patterns get a little stack..Really It not very well for look.
2.some nazi distance.you could make it better to pay more attention on that.leave a space make it feel weill.

Good map yeh.Star.

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod from Challenge Queue (round #1 started).

[General]
Delete .osb file in song folder if not using it
PreviewTime should not be set to a point which is near the end of the song.

[Last]
the music is not soft, so i think u should increase the volume by at least 10%
00:31:281 (6) - use two green lines here like this: http://puu.sh/xP9n
00:37:652 (3) - ctrl+r? Also do same thing to 00:37:974 (4)
00:40:878 (1,2) - use green line like 00:31:281 (6)
00:42:249 (2) - detete this? the triple sounds weird
00:44:426 (6,3) - make a symmetry?
00:44:829 (2) - same as 00:42:249 (2)
00:49:990 (2) - ^
01:07:329 (2,3) - same as 00:31:281 (6) make all stream like this
01:32:490 (1,2) - move them like this so they are not overlap http://puu.sh/xPdf
01:35:393 (2) - move it like this? http://puu.sh/xPdH
01:38:297 (7,8,9,10,11) - put them in consistent spacing
01:48:377 (6,7,8,9,10) - ^
02:48:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^ also put them in a line
03:39:587 (1,2,3) - hidden under hit300 so they are hard to read

That's all I can find. GL~

1. I think title is wrong , The correct title is : Dark PHOENiX - Last Remote - Type γ
   Here is the thread which can teach you how to change the title and artist
   
   Youtube

   
2. Add Remix , Sound-0 Phase-11 to tags
   
   Photo

   

1. AR-1? I think AR 9 is for the map which the BPM is <200 , AR 9 isn't a good idea on this song
2. 00:13:467 (3) - Delete this sounds better , because there is no piano sound here , And if you delete it , change 00:13:306 (2) and 00:13:628 (3) to a slider to make player read it easily
3. 00:29:587 (2) - Make it stack with 00:29:748 (3) to have a better flow
4. 00:55:555 (4) - Remove whistle here , and add whistle 00:55:716 (5) 's start , like other whistle to put on 1st and 3rd white tick
5. 01:12:733 (10,11) - Move up 1 gird , In order to solve the Tiny Spacing issue
6. 01:42:974 (2) - Move left i grid , make it symmetry with 01:42:813 (1) -
7. 01:43:781 (7) - Same as above
8. 02:02:490 (3) - Move right 1 grid
9. 02:09:426 (1) - Add a NC because of spacing change?
10. 02:27:329 (3) - Add finish end like 02:22:168 (3) ?
11. 03:25:877 (12) - Move 9 grids up , to make the same parttern 03:24:748 (5,6,7,8) and 03:25:393 (9,10,11,12)
12. 03:32:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it isn't follow music correctly , try this rhythm ,May follow the music more xDD
    
13. 03:52:410 (6) - Add a circle here , and delete 03:52:571 (7) - to follow the music correctly

bossandy wrote:

Hi hi~
　

1. Red : I think you must to fix.
2. Blue : Need to discuss.
3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.

　
[ General]
　

1. I think title is wrong , The correct title is : Dark PHOENiX - Last Remote - Type γ
   Here is the thread which can teach you how to change the title and artist
   
   Youtube

   
2. Add Remix , Sound-0 Phase-11 to tags
   
   Photo

   

　
[ Last]
　

1. AR-1? I think AR 9 is for the map which the BPM is <200 , AR 9 isn't a good idea on this song
2. 00:13:467 (3) - Delete this sounds better , because there is no piano sound here , And if you delete it , change 00:13:306 (2) and 00:13:628 (3) to a slider to make player read it easily
3. 00:29:587 (2) - Make it stack with 00:29:748 (3) to have a better flow
4. 00:55:555 (4) - Remove whistle here , and add whistle 00:55:716 (5) 's start , like other whistle to put on 1st and 3rd white tick
5. 01:12:733 (10,11) - Move up 1 gird , In order to solve the Tiny Spacing issue
6. 01:42:974 (2) - Move left i grid , make it symmetry with 01:42:813 (1) -
7. 01:43:781 (7) - Same as above
8. 02:02:490 (3) - Move right 1 grid
9. 02:09:426 (1) - Add a NC because of spacing change?
10. 02:27:329 (3) - Add finish end like 02:22:168 (3) ?
11. 03:25:877 (12) - Move 9 grids up , to make the same parttern 03:24:748 (5,6,7,8) and 03:25:393 (9,10,11,12)
12. 03:32:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it isn't follow music correctly , try this rhythm ,May follow the music more xDD
    
13. 03:52:410 (6) - Add a circle here , and delete 03:52:571 (7) - to follow the music correctly

　
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QAQ I can't mod the map which is for App
Sorry for my very poor mod ~ ( and thanks for your mod )
This map looks good , I hope this map can get rank soon xDD
Good Luck! :3

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi, taken from #modreqs.

All these are suggestions, if you disagree, please explain why instead of just no.


The one diff:
00:48:619 (1) - Maybe space this farther? I think it plays better if you space it with 1.8x to 2x since it won't be like "jump jump jump normal spacing jump jump jump"
01:33:781 (1,2) - I think if you remove the repeats and continue with 1/2 slider pattern it might flow better. It seems weird that after moving a lot it comes to a sudden stop in flow since you have repeats which make your mouse stay there longer. :S
01:47:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Nothing wrong with this, but maybe make a curvy stream instead of a square one? I think it would look a lot better.
02:39:264 (3,4) - Space this one correctly? I pressed too early since it kinda tricked me thinking I have to click earlier.
03:22:813 (1) - Remove the NC? I don't think it's needed here since nothing significant changed. (Like music or pattern)
03:29:264 (1) - ^?
03:30:555 (1) - ^?

Maya-sama wrote:

Hello !
very nice map here :3
what is following is only what I think, I might be totally wrong e_e

-General-

There might be some lack of consistency in the managing of combo colours acording to some poeple... ( I'm often told about this in my maps ) But I don't think it's that important since it looks ok :3
Also,you shouldn't use grid snap for streams in your map: like here for example 01:47:974 (1) - or here 02:48:619 (1) -
smth round looks better :3


-Spacing-

00:59:426 (4,5) - is much shorter than 00:59:587 (5,6) - You could try to change the pattern's shape or swapping 00:59:587 (5) - and 00:59:748 (6) -
care about the spacing with the pattern whhich follows :3
same here; 01:01:684 (2,3) - is much shorter than 01:01:522 (1,2) - and 01:01:845 (3,4) - although they are in the same pattern
similar issue here: 01:07:974 (1) -
^ 01:16:361 (4,5,6,7) -
^ 01:17:652 (3,4,5,6) -
^ 01:40:232 (1,2,3,4) -
^ 01:42:168 (3,4,5,6) -
^ 03:14:426 (5,6,7,8) -
^ 03:16:845 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
^ 03:27:329 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

Maybe you should try to space 01:47:329 (5,6) - the same way as 01:46:684 (1,2) - it looks strange to me :S

01:54:426 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern looks strange next to 01:55:071 (5,6,7,8) -
try to put more consistency between those too battern the difference is too big between thos two, or add a new combo at 01:55:071 (5) - at least

02:02:168 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you should put the hardest jumps on the 5,6,7,8 and not on 1,2,3,4 since the melody is going up here. you can also add a combo on 5,

02:04:748 (1,2,3,4) - is longer than 02:06:361 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - although it's the same thing in the music, space them the same at least

from 02:30:555 (1) - to 02:40:877 (1) - I feel like this passage should be harder with more circles and jumps following the drum. It's a unique passage in the song I think it would be too bad not to stress it. You don't have to follow this, it's completely up to you.

why is 03:29:264 (1,2,3,4) - shorter than 03:28:619 (1,2,3,4) - ?

I think that stream should stop here 03:43:781 (13) -


I enjoyed playing your map very well anyway and once again, you don't have to follow all this, it's only suggestion as a pair :3 I didn't say anything about some jumpy patterns because I think they're ok acording to the song.
Good luck

haha5957 wrote:

[Nazi mods]

00:31:197(t) 이 타임라인 존재하는 이유가 있나요? 없다면 삭제해주셔야해요
00:42:165(t) ^
01:13:778 (9) - 두 슬라이더 (이전의 7)과 띄어져있다는걸 확실히 알수 있는 정도의 간격을 둬주세요. 지금은 슬라이더 보더라인을 조금 감싸는 느낌...
01:18:939 (3) - ^와 마찬가지.
03:46:036 (7) - 이거 Ctrl+H해서 저쪽으로 보내는게 더 재밌지 않을까요? 물론 뒤 배치들도 바꾸어줘야곘지만.. 걍 통째로 찝어서 ctrlH돌려도 될지도

긴 슬라이더 모양중에서 약~간 흠이 보이는것들이 있는 느낌이긴 하지만잘 모르겠어서 눈에 띄는것만..
좋은 맵이네요 화이팅~

Sanjenin Nagi wrote:

적어도 다음주까진 다만듬 요번주가 개학인지라; 내일이라도 버닝해야지뭐