Byakugan249 wrote:

[kosiga's Easy]
00:11:286 (2) - maybe do Ctrl+H to make the path smoother? this is the beginning of the song so it's more like an introduction to the song. no change ><
00:28:404 (2,3,4) - i'm not sure about this rhythm. beginners might feel uncomfortable with this although it's following the instrumental correctly. I suggest that you do this: a 1/1 repeat slider and a circle. i think this kind of rhythm is easier than the current one. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to what i said. I look at the state of other mod without changing it. If I change it, the order of the Circle⇒repeatslider.
00:35:992 (1) - extend the repeat to the red tick. it'll flow a lot smoother in vocals if you do this. no change.
00:39:521 (3) - maybe add a finish at the end with the clap? idk about you but i think it matches with the instrumental pretty nicely. I do not like putting finish and clap together =x= and I think people will not hear the difference between it
00:46:580 (1,2) - add finishes to match the vocals. it'd sound empty without it since the tone of the vocals are high. Putting a finish to match the vocal is not my style. I feel it does not fit...orz Instead i put the whistle
00:47:639 - orz 60% might be distracting for players from here. remove this line and increase the volume at 00:47:198 to 60%. it'll sound a lot better. like i said, the sudden increase in the volume might bother players the most. ok. removed.
01:09:874 (1) - replace this for a 2/1 slider to follow the vocals accurately. no change
01:13:404 (3) - add a finish at the end. same reason as 00:46:580.　I have intentionally stopped the momentum here
01:32:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - whistles at every 2nd and 4th downbeat. IMO i find it unfitting to the song and i don't hear anything upbeat.　no change.
01:52:227 (5) - why does it end at the blue tick? it sounds bad and it doesn't fit with the song at all. i think you want this to extend to the red tick, but i guess something happened when you submitted the diff. This is a serious mistake x.x fixed
01:54:345 (1,2) - same as 00:46:580.
01:55:404 - here too. not only that might bother players, but when i play this and i still hear this, it'll bother me and it might ruin my combo since i feel a bit uncomfortable hearing that. little changed~
02:17:639 (1) - same as 01:09:874.
02:23:286 (1) - extend this till 02:26:109 for consistency with the normal diff. ok. changed
other than that, this is a good easy diff.

Yasora wrote:

Easy

1. 00:27:521 (1) - why not add finish sound in the end? that's fit with music background imo '3' added
2. 00:29:462 (4) - also, this clap sound should change into finish sound too since the I think the music sound similar with 00:28:756 (3) - ^
3. 01:54:345 (1,2) - (1,2) - I guess in here is too empty, maybe add whistle in the both? the sound good to me '~' ok. added
4. 01:45:874 (3) - (4) - na..nazi ;_; 1 grid left? that make more looked linear with (3) what nazi o.o? I do not think the problem x.x
5. 00:58:933 (2,3) - also, I guess slider (2) is a bit hard to follow, I knew you want to following vocal, but this is a bit hard to following (because in red tick) '~' I suggest to change the rhythm like this? no change. I do not mean that 100% tailored vocal. If i change 00:59:815 - Because sound can not be taken here, I feel strange
6. 01:03:168 and 01:03:433 (timing point) - delete both timing point in here. during gameplay, that's not comfortable if suddenly lower the volume like this. beside that the song isn't change to "lower" part ok. change it
7. 01:35:286 (1) - same with 00:27:521 fixed
8. 01:37:227 (4) - same with 00:29:462 ^
9. 01:45:874 (3) - nazi again ;_; 2 grid right? similar reason with 01:45:874 (3) -
10. 01:52:227 (5) - why slider's end stopped in the blue tick? that's off-beat spot.. end this on red tick, more accurate following vocal This is a serious mistake x.x fixed
11. 01:54:345 (1,2) - same with 01:54:345 (1,2) -
12. 02:00:345 (1) - this slider feel weird imo because before this slider the vocal still already running then in here nothing sound can be fit with the beginning slider. so, my suggestion is delete this slider, then add a circle in downbeat. that's more good to hear instead like this.. also add a note in very beginning kiai is better, instead add slider but end in kiai beginning　Thats not bad. But dare I made ​​a difference. Look at the other mod, this may be changed
13. 02:10:933 and 02:11:198 (timing points) - same as 01:03:168 and 01:03:433　fixed

Fenya wrote:

cRyo:
Do you use distance snap? Fix spacing~ random spacing \o.o/
00:10:404 (2) - Remove finish at the beginning of slider
00:16:051 (3) - ^ both finish fine actually, not fit with BG finish a bit but its ok xD
00:38:462 (3) - 1 grid right its ok o.o!
01:09:521 (4) - Put like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341891
02:11:639 (4,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341893 ? u completely wrong here, because this slider ends on arrow not on the head of slider, so ur sugestion making huge jump between sliders ww

-Gamu- wrote:

[cRyo><] Gamuuuuuuu o(>< )o

●Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s). This is very many lol
00:19:052 (snap to 00:19:050)
00:20:199 (snap to 00:20:197)
00:21:434 (snap to 00:21:432)
00:21:787 (snap to 00:21:785)
00:22:846 (snap to 00:22:844)
...etc
●00:41:639 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
●01:26:815 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
●01:49:404 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
●00:13:051 (4) - Change the orientation. http://puu.sh/Bwi6 all kicksliders placed like that, so i think its better too keep it ><
●01:14:109 (1) - Move to the end 01:15:168 changed this a bit \o.o/

Laurier wrote:

cRyo
00:11:638 (5,1) - move(5) and make little jump? http://puu.sh/C1Qb changed a bit o.o!
00:27:521 (1,2) - nazi (1) and (2) have a little overlapping. maybe (2) move more left? its 3rd or 4-th mod about this overlap www, ok Laurier won changed ==!

S o r d a wrote:

[cRyo]:

1. 00:19:050 - useless this line removed ^^
2. love this diff<3 :3~