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athiota33

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue

[Easy]
  1. SliderTickRate 2 may be not suitable...i suggest 1 But,slider at 00:30:199 needs tick sound. If I change it to 1,it sounds awkward ><
  2. 00:54:995 (2) - move NC to here? fixed
[Normal]
  1. 01:20:403 (2,3) - (nazi) blanket it? fixed
[Hard]
  1. fine
that's all, solic mapset~~ good luck with rank
Thanks for mod! :D
Hinsvar

Scorpiour wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]
  1. 00:18:260 (4) - i'd like to remove this note for better sense~ ...Why would I?
  2. 00:23:158 (1,2) - to this pattern, i may choose slider first and then note due to the vocal Done.
  3. 00:28:056 (1,2) - ^ ^
  4. 00:32:852 (2,3) - combine them to a whole slider? just my thought..... Don't really see any reason to do it.
  5. 00:36:015 (2,3,4,5) - here: a long jump between (2) & (3), but low spacing between (3) & (4), and maybe a suitable spacing between (4) & (5). I don't care about long jump from slider to slider, but the fluctuant spacing changing is awful. so, move (4) to 248:176 may make better sense imo ...I guess I'll remap this part.
  6. 00:45:709 (7) - this kinda stack may break your flow so i suggest to move them away Don't think so; played this part and didn't think even a bit to change it.
  7. 00:49:689 (5,6) - ^, kick sliders may be a better choice imo ...Damn it guys. *sigh* I guess I'll remap this part to follow Hard's rhythm.
  8. 00:57:036 (3) - highly recommend to remove it For what? This one goes well with the song.
  9. 01:09:587 (6) - no stack here? I'd like to keep it for now.
  10. 01:16:322 (2) - ^ ^
Thanks ;)

*Was a bit too late because I have to mod stuff.

http://puu.sh/11UiM
BeatofIke
Ask a MAT already XD! Your map should be ready for bubble with that much mods and star priority. Awyway, here are some minor things I've found:

General

Easy
-> Increase Approach rate +1? It feels a bit slow imo.
00:28:056 (3,1) - Bad Polarity here! Beginners might miss the next slider. To fix this, try adding a hit circle at 00:29:893 (4).

Normal
-> Pretty Solid!

Hard
-> I recommend to Decrease the Overall Difficulty -1. It's a bit too harsh for a Hard Difficutly. It also keeps a constant difficulty spread (2, 4, 6, 8).
00:14:587 (3) - New Combo? Due to spacing change.

Hinsvar's Insane
-> All Clear!

This map is ready to go. Should try asking a MAT now! Good Luck with bubble. :D
Hinsvar

BeatofIke wrote:

Ask a MAT already XD! :D
A MAT AND BAT member were here, but I basically blew the chance for this mapset to get bubbled because of my shitty diff.

I hate myself ):
Topic Starter
athiota33
@BeatofIke : Will update later. My sister is using the computer now xD Thanks for mod! :D
@Hinsvar : Don't say that ;_; That's not your fault. My map quality is bad too, that's why MAT can't give a bubble. Besides, I like your diff. So please,don't blame yourself. ;A;
Hinsvar

athiota33 wrote:

@Hinsvar : Don't say that ;_; That's not your fault. My map quality is bad too, that's why MAT can't give a bubble. Besides, I like your diff. So please,don't blame yourself. ;A;
The problem is: My diff almost always has the longest mod and those rants calling me to make my diff better since the modders think that really needs some work :P

nvm; I guess I'll let people judge by themselves.
cmn_891127
Hi, athiota33 & Hinsvar

[Easy]
00:50:097 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pentagon is not regular...
you code
216,260,50097,5,4
156,192,50709,1,8
192,108,51322,1,0
280,132,51934,1,8
296,220,52546,2,0,B|372:192|364:108,1,135,2|2
my code
212,268,50097,5,4
146,206,50709,1,8
184,125,51322,1,0
273,136,51934,1,8
290,224,52546,2,0,B|340:216|372:168|360:120,1,135,2|2

[Normal]
Really good!

[Hard]
01:26:220 (5,1) - remove the reverse, and bring the spinner forward like insane

[Hinsvar's Insane]
Oh, I really love the style of your diff, so cute 1/6 slider~~~


This map is really follow bubble criteria, imo~~~ Good luck!!!!!!!!!
Topic Starter
athiota33
@cmn_891127: Fixed all!Will update later~ My net speed is too slow ;_; Updated~
spboxer3

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. looks all fine

Easy



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. ok~ it's your first map aim Ranked. Easy diff have enough quality imo. but some spacing (nazi) should be improve like 00:40:301 (1,2,3) - ,00:52:546 (5,6,1) - etc.

Normal



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:18:566 (1,3) -
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:02:648 (2,3,4) - [nazi] uneven spacing. fix it can make pattern more clean. so I point out this hope you can fix them. same as 01:15:505 (4,5,1) -
  2. 01:08:464 (3) - move this slider to x452,y320? I think you can make the equilateral triangle and it's pretty more imo.

Hard



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:31:424 (3) - unfit rhythm at 00:31:577 - because It's not lofty tone to enough appear rhythm imo.

Insane



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:14:281 (1,2,3) - perhaps used rotate 120∘ it's better then original one.


cell me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ athiota33 ~ :)

Mod time for my luck Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hinsvar's Insane]


  1. OD-1,really no fit slow bpm song.
  2. 00:32:954 - Remove clap and Add finish.
  3. 00:54:995 - ^
  4. 01:07:852 (3,4,5) - Try like this parttern,more funny.

Just few small thing ~ nice job your first map ~

Good luck with rank ~
;)
Hinsvar

spboxer3 wrote:

Insane


mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:14:281 (1,2,3) - perhaps used rotate 120∘ it's better then original one. Nope. I think the current design looks pretty good already.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]


  1. OD-1,really no fit slow bpm song. It will be too easy without OD8, but anyway... Fine, OD -1'd.
  2. 00:32:954 - Remove clap and Add finish. Done.
  3. 00:54:995 - ^ ^
  4. 01:07:852 (3,4,5) - Try like this parttern,more funny. Uh... I guess I'll redesign this part differently.
Thanks, you two ;) I also did some redesigning (can't really call them remapping; I basically moved some objects around) so my diff will be a little closer to a true Insane diff, and also to make it more fun.

http://puu.sh/15Z8j
Topic Starter
athiota33

spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. looks all fine

Easy



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. ok~ it's your first map aim Ranked. Easy diff have enough quality imo. but some spacing (nazi) should be improve like 00:40:301 (1,2,3) - ,00:52:546 (5,6,1) - etc.

Normal



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:18:566 (1,3) -
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:02:648 (2,3,4) - [nazi] uneven spacing. fix it can make pattern more clean. so I point out this hope you can fix them. same as 01:15:505 (4,5,1) -
  2. 01:08:464 (3) - move this slider to x452,y320? I think you can make the equilateral triangle and it's pretty more imo.

Hard



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:31:424 (3) - unfit rhythm at 00:31:577 - because It's not lofty tone to enough appear rhythm imo.

Really. for your first map I think it's have enough quality. cell me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
:arrow: go~
Fixed all~
Thanks for mod guys!
And... this is not my first map ;A;.....
spboxer3
It's your first map aim Ranked
anyway~ I think it's ok now
good luck~
Topic Starter
athiota33

spboxer3 wrote:

It's your first map aim Ranked
That makes sense~
Btw,thank you spboxer3! ><
Scorpiour
look forward the rank~~~
Armin
after a little jump on the insane, I can say that the map's quality is enough to be in the Ranked section.
Keep up with the good work
Suimya
Gratz~
pimp
congratulations for your 1st ranked map 8-)
meiikyuu
grats ^^
shikyu
gratz~ (and 50k will be mine~)
Topic Starter
athiota33
Thanks everyone ><
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Congratulation =D I am happy to see it ranked x3
Have fun =D
terametis
gratz 1st ranked :33
Cygnus
at last <3
BeatofIke
Well finally! Congrats!
Scorpiour
Happy first rank -v-
spboxer3
wow~ congratz^^
Hinsvar
Congrats on your first ranked map \:D/

Also to myself for another ranked GD \:D/
Nichiyouki
Congrats~
Dino99
Gratz First Ranked~ :D
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