SkyDevil wrote:

Sakuya's Insane
01:10:265 (3,4,5) - Claps at the slider's end of 3 and at 4 and 5 :3 Fixed

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[Sakuya's Insane]

02:24:515 (1) - move here 02:24:408 and end 02:27:408 Fixed

Shulin wrote:

[Sakuya's Insane]

00:41:550 (1,2,3) - Use a 1/2 slider here? It's a better rhythm imo and then just continue the stream. Fixed
00:56:872 (8) - Delete this note? Sounds better without it. Fixed
01:25:586 (3) - Delete this? No drum sound here so it sounds odd. Obviously respace 01:25:693 (4) - if you do this. Fixed
01:21:300 (2,3) - Maybe space these out so it's something like 01:13:050 (7,8,9) - think it has better flow. Fixed
02:06:836 - Note? Drum here and I think it'll play better ^_^ I was following vocals =v=
02:10:908 (2,3) - Stack this on 02:11:122 (4) - ? it looks neater. If not align it like 02:10:050 (5,6,7) - Fixed
02:17:550 (1,2,3,4) - Start 02:17:550 (1) - in the same position as the start of 02:16:265 (2) - and then respace the stream a bit? It looks much neater when playing. What
02:27:622 (1) - Add a return to follow the drum. Fixed

those wrote:

[Insane]

1. Can umbrella save me now? ヽ｀、ヽ(ノ；Д；)ノ ｀、、ヽ｀☂ヽ｀
2. Recommend slider tick rate 2 for the same reason as Hard. ヽ｀、ヽFixedヽ｀、ヽ
3. 01:22:479 (6,1) - Almost never a fan of this kind of stacking, in your free time I can explain to you why I begin to point these out more than ever. ヽ｀、ヽFixedヽ｀、ヽ
4. 01:41:122 (8,9,1) - Let's get these to equivalent spacing. Fixed
5. 02:07:158 (1) - Remove new combo spinner since it's a continuation of 02:07:050 (8) - .Fixed
6. 02:22:479 (15,1) - Best if this was also 1.3x spacing, since you've got the syncopated (2,3,4), it's important to keep a good enough spacing so that it's completely readable. Fixed
7. 02:27:622 (1) - 1/6 would be more appropriate, from red to white ticks.

1. 00:40:265 (2,3) - odd to ignore the drums here suddenly
2. 01:01:693 (3) - make 01:02:122 this heavy beat a sliderend is a bad choice. consider another pattern to make it something can be hit.
3. 01:17:550 (1) - out of music. the reverse is too early
4. 01:36:622 (1,2,3) - considering the spacing next, make the order right, left, up?
5. 02:24:408 (1) - missing new combo, if this is not intented

1. 02:14:122 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - out of music.
2. 02:24:193 (4) - make this a slider and ends at 02:24:300.
3. 00:43:693 ~ 01:10:265 - claps on this part is all wrong place. 00:46:265, 00:48:193 are how it should go. 4th white tick, 4th red tick, 4th white tick, 4th red tick...
4. 01:10:693 - normal default claps after this is not a good choice. refer to how Insane done.

1. the clap things mentioned in Hard and 02:24:193 (4) - slider.
2. 00:55:479 (1) - lost new combo on spinner.

1. 01:05:550 (2) - ugly slider, copy (1) can be easier and better.
2. and the clap things

Colin Hou wrote:

M4M/

[Hard]

1. 02:14:122 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - out of music. I think it's fitting the high notes
2. 02:24:193 (4) - make this a slider and ends at 02:24:300. fix
3. 00:43:693 ~ 01:10:265 - claps on this part is all wrong place. 00:46:265, 00:48:193 are how it should go. 4th white tick, 4th red tick, 4th white tick, 4th red tick... fix
4. 01:10:693 - normal default claps after this is not a good choice. refer to how Insane done.

fix

[Normal]

1. the clap things mentioned in Hard and 02:24:193 (4) - slider.Not sure what you mean by slider
2. 00:55:479 (1) - lost new combo on spinner.

fix

[Easy]

1. 01:05:550 (2) - ugly slider, copy (1) can be easier and better.fix
2. and the clap things

fix

need more work on hitsounds and use more fun patterns.

Colin Hou wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:40:265 (2,3) - odd to ignore the drums here suddenly Fixed
2. 01:01:693 (3) - make 01:02:122 this heavy beat a sliderend is a bad choice. consider another pattern to make it something can be hit.Fixed
3. 01:17:550 (1) - out of music. the reverse is too early Fixed
4. 01:36:622 (1,2,3) - considering the spacing next, make the order right, left, up? Fixed
5. 02:24:408 (1) - missing new combo, if this is not intented There's already one

1. You need add a SliderBorder for the skin, add a white default in all diffs like this. http://puu.sh/ZFws

• Settings

1. Don't make the super difference but HP and OD+1 is best because the settings between [Normal] and this is a bit huge.
   Hitsound
2. 00:46:265 (1) - Add clap, fits perfectly with the track, if you agree, add this in [Normal] & [Hard].
3. 00:46:693 (2) - Same as before but here at the end of the slider.
4. 00:49:693 (1) - Here at the start, check the track and add the missing claps.
5. 00:52:693 (4) - Well I don't want make a longer mod of claps then only check the parts when a claps sounds in the track and put the clap, here in the repeat, you know what I mean.
6. 02:01:693 (1) - Missing finish at the end.
7. 02:14:122 (1) - Add a finish like the others diffs at the start.
   Beatmap Suggestions
8. 00:53:979 (5) - New combo time.
9. 01:24:408 (2) - According with your pattern, the new combo should start here and not here 01:23:550 (1). After this if you want add a new combo in 01:22:265 (5). 01:51:836 (1) Check this part to rectify.

• Settings

1. Just like a suggest, check the SV here and in [Easy] woah is really huge compared with this and [Hard], try to be consistent because is too notable the jump in spacing and velocity of the slider between the most easy diffs.
   Hitsound
2. 00:39:836 (1) - Missing finish at the start.
3. 01:01:693 (8) - Rememeber the suggestion about the claps in [Easy], here at the end.
4. 01:44:979 (4) - Missing finish at the repeat.
   Beatmap Suggestions
5. 00:46:693 (6) - New combo timee.
6. 01:00:408 (6) - Maybe new combo and remove the new combo in 01:02:122 (1).
7. 01:14:550 (6) - Just if you want add a new combo here, delete this 01:16:693 (1) and finally add a new combo in 01:17:979 (4). Imo is best because fits with the patterns of sliders and the voice.
8. 01:41:550 (4) - New combo time.
9. 01:42:408 (2) - I prefer a Ctrl+R here for the sequence of the sliders, or well the directions, to right, left, to up, down, you know, if you agree then Ctrl+r this 01:43:265 (3).
10. According with the before point (obviously if you agree) then stack this circle 01:44:122 (1) in the start of the next slider, plus: move the slider and circle to the start of this slider 01:42:408 (2). Here the shoots http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416903 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416904, imo looks great.
11. 01:51:836 (3) - Maybe new combo.
12. 02:13:265 (2) - I prefer this here http://puu.sh/ZZi6.
13. 02:24:193 (5) - This slider should be shorten by 1/4 and end in the blue tick, just listen the track, after this move the spinner 1/4 backward and extend by 1/4. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416914, The same thing in [Hard].

• Hitsound

1. Just to remind the point about the hitounding 00:46:265 (2) at the start here.
2. 00:48:193 (3) - And here, etc etc.
   Beatmap Suggestions
3. 01:30:836 (1) - This new combo no sense here, maybe for the voice but is too short, try this: 01:29:765 (6) Add new combo here and delete the new combo 01:30:836 (1).
4. 01:48:836 (1) - Please remove this new combo.
5. 01:52:908 (4) - This slider sound a bit weird here, imo this should start after the first slider (just check the voice), look my suggestion http://puu.sh/100bm, I prefer change other things like the next 1/1 slider, Shoot 1 Shoot 2 & Shoot 3, try it!
6. 01:58:158 (1) - The new combo not is neccesary, remove it.
7. 02:08:979 (5) - Imo the new combo should start here, if you agree then make the same here 02:12:408 (5).
8. 02:24:193 (4) - Same as [Normal].

• Hitsound

1. 01:08:979 (1,3) - Maybe whistle at the start.
2. 01:17:550 (1) - Missing finish at the start.
   Beatmap Suggestions
3. 02:07:158 (1) - Add a new combo.

Kenezz wrote:

[Sakuya's Insane]

• Hitsound

1. 01:08:979 (1,3) - Maybe whistle at the start. Fixed
2. 01:17:550 (1) - Missing finish at the start. lol shit
   Beatmap Suggestions
3. 02:07:158 (1) - Add a new combo.Fixed

Kataliis wrote:

its so beautifull i like it

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Easy]
00:31:265 (1) - maybe try to find a better way to place it, and blanket with the previous slider better. Sure
01:17:550 (1) - a bit nazi but you may like to place it without grid snap. sure
02:06:836 (1) - make this 1/2 earlier. Yeah
02:08:979 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/1xJwG I think you could try to make the flow better. Current is really good imo
Not bad but i hope you could pay more attention to minor things like slider shape etc. They won't be a big deal when you check certain places, but may affect the feeling in general.

[Normal]
00:39:836 (1) - this part sounds a bit strange to me, maybe try sure http://puu.sh/1xJzc
00:53:550 (1) - honestly i feel it's ugly = =||| Actually like this shape
00:53:550 (1) - add a beat? How is this possible?
01:43:693 (5,6,7) - keep them in a more organized shape... Fixed
01:49:908 (4,5) - just make them a 3/2 slider. done

[Hard]
00:29:550 (1) - I'd try beats like this, more fit with the rhythm done http://puu.sh/1xJCQ
00:53:550 (4) - ...in fact this is not good looking (because of spacing), you should try to get a balance between spacing and the slider shape, not just force it there. done
01:08:979 (1,3) - clap at the beginning may fits well. done, also added one more
02:02:765 (2,3,4) - the spacing is strange here... fixed
02:14:122 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1xJEY or whatever, but it seems too short to draw a crossed slider. fixed