Ayakura Mei wrote:
Source:Cytus
Tags:Mozarc
毕竟这不是mozarc的原声ost而是cytus里的
所以把mozarc放到tag里比较好
再说我sanctity也这么写的
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再说我sanctity也这么写的
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[quote="jamjamjam616"][Beatmap General]
[u]Background Size: 780 x 767 OK (but better to find one of 1024 x 768)[/u]
[u]Mp3 Size: 320 kbps Try to find one within 128 - 192 kbps [/u](As i know maps with 320 kbps mp3 can't be ranked)
Preview point time: All the same - OK
Kiai time and break:- I can't see any kiai time section in your map... did you intentionally do that?
Better to add kiai time. They should be consistent in both diff. when you add.
[u]One diff. < 3 star: Better to add one diff. with difficulty under 3 stars. Otherwise unrankable...
[/u]
Combo Colour Consistency: OK
Tag consistency: OK
tick rate: = 1; Also OK
[Hard]
00:08:316 (1,2,1,1) - Remove NC
00:33:972 (1) - Remove new NC (include it in the previous combo set);
00:34:179 (2) - NC
「EXPERT]
00:27:144 (6,7,8) - Better not to put notes in a reverse style for non-slider notes, maybe it will cause a bit confusion to players (like me
). There are some also in the later part, just fix it by any style will be fine. 
ty!
and thx Clique and B u B B L e
fixed some of them
[u]Background Size: 780 x 767 OK (but better to find one of 1024 x 768)[/u]
[u]Mp3 Size: 320 kbps Try to find one within 128 - 192 kbps [/u](As i know maps with 320 kbps mp3 can't be ranked)
Preview point time: All the same - OK
Kiai time and break:- I can't see any kiai time section in your map... did you intentionally do that?
Better to add kiai time. They should be consistent in both diff. when you add.[u]One diff. < 3 star: Better to add one diff. with difficulty under 3 stars. Otherwise unrankable...
[/u]Combo Colour Consistency: OK
Tag consistency: OK
tick rate: = 1; Also OK
[Hard]
00:08:316 (1,2,1,1) - Remove NC
00:33:972 (1) - Remove new NC (include it in the previous combo set);
00:34:179 (2) - NC
「EXPERT]
00:27:144 (6,7,8) - Better not to put notes in a reverse style for non-slider notes, maybe it will cause a bit confusion to players (like me
). There are some also in the later part, just fix it by any style will be fine. ty!
and thx Clique and B u B B L e
fixed some of them
hi
[General]
->This map has 2 mp3. Please delete one.
->This BG pixels is 780x768. Please edit 1024x768(4:3) or 1366x768(16:9).
Well, maybe it goes without saying because it was already pointed out.
[Expert]
00:13:350 (1,4) - Add soft-hitclap2 (It seems like finish sound lol)
00:28:247 - You may have forgotten something...? 00:28:557 - Unnatural unused green line.
00:28:453 (2) - finish?
00:32:178 (1,2,3) - Player wouldn't think this is triple when first play.
Also, 00:32:798 (5,7) - isn't symmetry.
For these reasons and considering flow, I suggest this ~
00:57:833 (11) - hmm...stack to (8)? I think good flow.
00:59:074 (5,7) - symmetry?
00:59:074 (5,6,7) - whistle
01:17:074 (1) - To my mind, these fit to music.
01:19:971 - snap green line
01:43:350 (3) - snap
[Hard]
HP-1
00:21:833 (2) - Avoid hit burst. well, maybe it is no ploblem.
00:28:453 (2) - finish to start?
00:54:316 (2) - Since this music is low bpm, I think some degree of jump is permissible.
However, this jump is too big...
00:58:567 - snap green line
01:21:212 (1,2,3,4) - move to x272: y:136.(01:21:626 (3) - stack to 01:19:764 (7) - )
01:27:833 (1,2,3,4) - Change to this?
01:43:350 (3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing is too wide...DS1.0x is better.
01:49:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:51:626 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
I think this diff is defficult for Hard player(Some big jump).
But my pointed out would break your mappingstyle, so I respected your style.
[Normal]
->Preview Time should be 34782.
HP and OD -1
00:13:557 (2) - clap to reverse. or 00:13:350 (5,1) - swap rhythm?
00:20:385 (2,3,4) - x:96 y:248, x:256 y:294, x:416 y:248. make symmetry
00:58:489 - snap green line
01:47:695 (1,1) - This spinner is short for Normal player.
And, 01:51:005 (1) - too close to end of spinner. Please place at intervals of two beat or more.
01:52:867 (1) - Change rhythm?
[Easy]
00:13:350 (3) - Add soft-hitclap2 to startpoint and reverse.
good easy.
There may be a few mistakes because offset was changed.
good luck.
[General]
->This map has 2 mp3. Please delete one.
->This BG pixels is 780x768. Please edit 1024x768(4:3) or 1366x768(16:9).
Well, maybe it goes without saying because it was already pointed out.
[Expert]
00:13:350 (1,4) - Add soft-hitclap2 (It seems like finish sound lol)
00:28:247 - You may have forgotten something...? 00:28:557 - Unnatural unused green line.
00:28:453 (2) - finish?
00:32:178 (1,2,3) - Player wouldn't think this is triple when first play.
Also, 00:32:798 (5,7) - isn't symmetry.
For these reasons and considering flow, I suggest this ~
00:57:833 (11) - hmm...stack to (8)? I think good flow.
00:59:074 (5,7) - symmetry?
00:59:074 (5,6,7) - whistle
01:17:074 (1) - To my mind, these fit to music.
112,272,76867,1,2,0:0:0:0:01:18:936 (4,5,6) - Add soft-hitclap? about 50%.
224,272,77074,6,0,L|176:272,2,40
320,272,77695,2,0,L|400:272,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,78522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,272,78936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,272,79350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:19:971 - snap green line
01:43:350 (3) - snap
[Hard]
HP-1
00:21:833 (2) - Avoid hit burst. well, maybe it is no ploblem.
00:28:453 (2) - finish to start?
00:54:316 (2) - Since this music is low bpm, I think some degree of jump is permissible.
However, this jump is too big...
00:58:567 - snap green line
01:21:212 (1,2,3,4) - move to x272: y:136.(01:21:626 (3) - stack to 01:19:764 (7) - )
01:27:833 (1,2,3,4) - Change to this?
01:43:350 (3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing is too wide...DS1.0x is better.
01:49:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:51:626 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
I think this diff is defficult for Hard player(Some big jump).
But my pointed out would break your mappingstyle, so I respected your style.
[Normal]
->Preview Time should be 34782.
HP and OD -1
00:13:557 (2) - clap to reverse. or 00:13:350 (5,1) - swap rhythm?
00:20:385 (2,3,4) - x:96 y:248, x:256 y:294, x:416 y:248. make symmetry
00:58:489 - snap green line
01:47:695 (1,1) - This spinner is short for Normal player.
And, 01:51:005 (1) - too close to end of spinner. Please place at intervals of two beat or more.
01:52:867 (1) - Change rhythm?
[Easy]
00:13:350 (3) - Add soft-hitclap2 to startpoint and reverse.
good easy.
There may be a few mistakes because offset was changed.
good luck.
hello (:
both easy and normal are clean
Hard:
the jumps in this diffs are too over, try to minimize them just a little bit..
1. 00:20:798 (1,2,3,4) - patterns like these for Hard difficulty are quite hard to read imo, change into something like this?
(so that it wouldn't be too hard to catch with the 00:21:626 (1) - )
2. 00:37:971 - awkward pause @ @ add circle maybe?
3. 01:43:350 (3,4,5,6,7) - .....this is too hard for 'Hard' ..reduce distance for better performance, especially because low AR and this is Hard, not Expert
4. 01:49:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
5. 01:51:626 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Expert:
1. 01:04:453 (1) - best part
2. 01:25:557 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - even though this is Expert, imo repeated circles like this are quite hard to read, put 01:25:557 (1) - to 01:25:971 (3) - and vice versa and do the same to 01:26:178 (1,2,3) - would be better (:
that's all. good luck tsuka!osu! needs more cytus.
both easy and normal are clean
Hard:
the jumps in this diffs are too over, try to minimize them just a little bit..
1. 00:20:798 (1,2,3,4) - patterns like these for Hard difficulty are quite hard to read imo, change into something like this?
(so that it wouldn't be too hard to catch with the 00:21:626 (1) - )
2. 00:37:971 - awkward pause @ @ add circle maybe?
3. 01:43:350 (3,4,5,6,7) - .....this is too hard for 'Hard' ..reduce distance for better performance, especially because low AR and this is Hard, not Expert
4. 01:49:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
5. 01:51:626 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Expert:
1. 01:04:453 (1) - best part
2. 01:25:557 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - even though this is Expert, imo repeated circles like this are quite hard to read, put 01:25:557 (1) - to 01:25:971 (3) - and vice versa and do the same to 01:26:178 (1,2,3) - would be better (:
that's all. good luck tsuka!
[Expert]
01:43:350 (3) - Object isn't snapped
01:31:763 (3) - Object's end isn't snapped
01:35:073 (3) - ^
00:25:143 (2) - this circle is placed too high. It touches the score-points.
00:32:178 (1,2,3) - spacing. Make it as u made all previous triples. Place this circles closer to each other so players can recognize it as a triple.
01:40:247 (1,3) - how about trying to unstack 1 and 3? Since now this pattern is really hard to read with such spacing and approach. Something like this? http://puu.sh/26Gjd
01:48:109 (3,4,5,6,7) - and 01:49:764 (3,4,5,6,7) - maybe place some hitsounds on these streams?
Nice butterfly slider btw! :3
[Hard]
01:43:350 (3,4,5,6,7) - how about reducing spacing on this streams and making it as here 01:35:281 (5,6,7) - ?
Awesome diff! :3
Sorry, i can't find anything to mod in Normal and Easy. I think they're made fine.
Overall your mapset is really good! Good luck! :3
01:43:350 (3) - Object isn't snapped
01:31:763 (3) - Object's end isn't snapped
01:35:073 (3) - ^
00:25:143 (2) - this circle is placed too high. It touches the score-points.
00:32:178 (1,2,3) - spacing. Make it as u made all previous triples. Place this circles closer to each other so players can recognize it as a triple.
01:40:247 (1,3) - how about trying to unstack 1 and 3? Since now this pattern is really hard to read with such spacing and approach. Something like this? http://puu.sh/26Gjd
01:48:109 (3,4,5,6,7) - and 01:49:764 (3,4,5,6,7) - maybe place some hitsounds on these streams?
Nice butterfly slider btw! :3
[Hard]
01:43:350 (3,4,5,6,7) - how about reducing spacing on this streams and making it as here 01:35:281 (5,6,7) - ?
Awesome diff! :3
Sorry, i can't find anything to mod in Normal and Easy. I think they're made fine.
Overall your mapset is really good! Good luck! :3
m o s
hi modding~
[Normal]
01:09:419 (5) - Add NC
01:10:040 (1) - remove NC
01:53:074 - add Note
[Hard]
00:09:626 (4) - add NC
00:09:833 (2) - remove NC
00:15:005 (1) - remove NC
00:59:281 - add Note
[Expert]
00:32:178 (1,2,3) - I think, three notes was unpredictable when played for the first time.
nice map and song~
[Normal]
01:09:419 (5) - Add NC
01:10:040 (1) - remove NC
01:53:074 - add Note
[Hard]
00:09:626 (4) - add NC
00:09:833 (2) - remove NC
00:15:005 (1) - remove NC
00:59:281 - add Note
[Expert]
00:32:178 (1,2,3) - I think, three notes was unpredictable when played for the first time.
nice map and song~
Topic Starter
thx m o s Silivren WVS and MerryGate 's modding
some of them has been fixed , sry about that i have not point out the unnecessary parts
some of them has been fixed , sry about that i have not point out the unnecessary parts
Hi.
[General]
Maybe can make BG size into 800 600. try this one?
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 34867
- [Expert] : 34867
- [Hard] : 34867
- [Normal] : 34782
maybe try using silence slider-slide?
[Hard]
01:43:350 (3,4,5,6,7) - maybe reduce spacing like these in hard diff?(后面同01:49:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - 01:51:626 (2,3,4,5,6) - )
01:44:798 (2) - I think normal spacing is better here.
01:45:626 (1) - ^
01:46:453 (3) - ^
[Expert]
00:19:971 (1,1,1,1) - combos seem unnecessary here.
call me back when you have reply.
[General]
Maybe can make BG size into 800 600. try this one?
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 34867
- [Expert] : 34867
- [Hard] : 34867
- [Normal] : 34782
maybe try using silence slider-slide?
[Hard]
01:43:350 (3,4,5,6,7) - maybe reduce spacing like these in hard diff?(后面同01:49:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - 01:51:626 (2,3,4,5,6) - )
01:44:798 (2) - I think normal spacing is better here.
01:45:626 (1) - ^
01:46:453 (3) - ^
[Expert]
00:19:971 (1,1,1,1) - combos seem unnecessary here.
call me back when you have reply.
Topic Starter
thx for your moddingNymph wrote:
Hi.
[General]
Maybe can make BG size into 800 600. try this one?
fixed
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 34867
- [Expert] : 34867
- [Hard] : 34867
- [Normal] : 34782
fixed
maybe try using silence slider-slide?
it's unnecessary in this song imo but thx for your advise
[Hard]
01:43:350 (3,4,5,6,7) - maybe reduce spacing like these in hard diff?(后面同01:49:971 (2,3,4,5,6) - 01:51:626 (2,3,4,5,6) - )
01:44:798 (2) - I think normal spacing is better here.
01:45:626 (1) - ^
01:46:453 (3) - ^
all fixed
[Expert]
00:19:971 (1,1,1,1) - combos seem unnecessary here.
sry i wanna keep it for artistically
call me back when you have reply.
Ok good work as always.
Bubbled
Bubbled
irc mod with mapper~~change several sliders' shapes in Expert and Hard, everything looks fine for me now~~
Ranked~~~
Ranked~~~
Yay, a Rabpit song! :3
congratz~~~~~
Congratz~ 不愧是神麻婆出卡
AngelHoney wrote:
AngelHoney wrote:
AngelHoney wrote:
I really like Expert diff *..*
Congratz
Congratz
觸卡啊
Gratz tsuka 
恭喜啊...
Sorry that I didn't get to mod it ;(... I get too much requests so my modding speed isn't fast...
恭喜~
congraz tsuka ^_^
anyway my name is B u B B l E, not B u B B L e(.....
)
anyway my name is B u B B l E, not B u B B L e(.....
)出卡啊
好！
Topic Starter
thx all瞎了几天不见就rank了