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IOSYS - Tera Zukkyun! Ai no Ryohoji! (Short Ver.)

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DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, June 23, 2012 at 7:24:54 PM

Artist: IOSYS
Title: Tera Zukkyun! Ai no Ryohoji! (Short Ver.)
Source: Ryohoji
Tags: BeatofIke _HydeSama_
BPM: 185
Filesize: 10371kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. BeatofIke's Hard (4.93 stars, 319 notes)
  2. HydeSama's Insane (4.84 stars, 361 notes)
  3. Normal (3.71 stars, 155 notes)
Download: IOSYS - Tera Zukkyun! Ai no Ryohoji! (Short Ver.)
Download: IOSYS - Tera Zukkyun! Ai no Ryohoji! (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal: Me
Hard: BeatofIke

I DID add a BG to this beatmap but I'm having thumbnail problems! So I really like to get this fixed soon.
Last edited by DerekMcD , edited 6 times in total.
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
[Timing]
bpm: 185
offset: 18233 (or 5261)
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
[General]
-> Add some tags.
-> I recommended that you disable letterbox during breaks, since this map has a video.
-> Make sure to add a Background in your map unless, it is unrankable.

[Normal]
00:51:962 (7) - New combo.

This map is better than the last one.
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Hard Difficulty finished! Enjoy!

http://puu.sh/zHSS
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue


Hard

  1. kind of too hard as a Hard diff orz stuff like 01:14:016 (1,2,3,4,5) at 185 bpm is too hard imo
  2. 01:30:719 (1,2,3) - would be better if you don't overlay slider end/start here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349267
  3. 00:23:746 (3,4,6,1) - this looks better id you put (4) directly top of (3) etc http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349269
  4. 01:47:584 (7) - remove this, sounds better...
  5. 00:22:773 (5) - 1grid down w
Insane

  1. 00:27:151 - add 2 notes
  2. 00:34:935 (1) - imo stack here breaks the flow ._. how about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349302 make this pattern earlier and add triplet at 00:36:070
  3. 01:02:989 (3,4,5,6) - what's this ._. make it square plz
  4. 01:18:232 (5) - can't see this,,, it's so obscured orz move to (320,288)?
  5. 01:20:016 (1,2) - good
  6. orz stress it's not finished
Normal

  1. 00:22:124 (4,1,2,3,4) - try to make symmetrical?
  2. 00:40:935 (6) - ctrl+c+v+h+j+r slider (5),,, and make slider blanket is better,,,
  3. 01:06:881 (4) - it may be very hard for beginners this note because this rhythm in music is 1/2,,, plz change to something else
  4. 01:14:016 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - add claps on 2nd and 4th white tick this part,,,
  5. 01:23:422 (3,4) - clap
  6. 01:31:368 (4) - end at 01:31:854 and add clap,,,
  7. 01:35:746 (9) - whistle,,, fits pretty well
  8. 01:54:070 (3) - this is off from music,,, delete repeat and add circle at 01:54:881
  9. needs an easy diff,,, also it's recommended that you map a harder diff yourself
I like IOSYS songs :3

Good luck~
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
cRyo[iceeicee]
Hi~


[General]
Offset should be placed earlier - 7854 here
Why not add claps same with N diff, sounds great.
You need to add 1 more diff below 3 stars to fit ranking criteria



[BeatofIke's Hard]
01:49:692 (5,6) - changing this to long slider fits better imo



[HydeSama's Insane]
00:47:908 (1,2) - NC should starts at downbeat here, cause rhytm changes there
00:49:854 - 00:58:124 why not use 0.75x SV section here ?
01:11:422 (6) - weird antijump here, mb move it to http://puu.sh/FsDw , also remove NC here
01:18:962 (4) - for me its better without this note
01:20:016 (1,2) - claps ? same with BG music (soft/normal on ur choise)
01:24:232 (1) - weird NC, better to remove it
01:27:314 (3,4,5) - this one sounds bad, mb this ? http://puu.sh/FsHf #2,3 stack here
01:31:043 (5) - sounds better if u keep same rhytm http://puu.sh/FsI3
01:33:151 (3) - remove few repeats here and add note, should be like this http://puu.sh/FsIH
01:36:070 (1,1,1,1) - not good NC spam, better to keep same combo color for them
01:51:151 (1) - RNC and add NC at 01:51:476 (3) -
01:52:449 (1) - RNC and add NC 01:52:773 (3) -
01:54:070 (6) - NC



[Normal]
00:36:395 (1,1) - too early after spinner, end spinner at 00:38:341 probably best solution here
01:18:881 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern confusing and sounds not good, try 1 of them http://puu.sh/FsOa http://puu.sh/FsTv
01:26:989 (1) - clap tail
01:29:908 (2,3,4) - hmm, try this http://puu.sh/FsXj
01:34:449 (7) - remove this note somewhere here http://puu.sh/FsY2 , cause its rly confusing now
01:36:070 (1,1) - too early after spinner, end spinner at 01:38:665 + note 01:39:314
01:49:692 - hmm note here i think
01:53:584 (2,4) - claps ?


Wow, overal great stuff here, moe song+good diffs, add some claps + 2~ star diff + some mods and go slap some MAT's for bubble \:D/

Good luck~
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
from PM e v e ) //~

[General]
Remove the "Short ver." on the tittle
NO BG? O 3 O"
Why hard diff are more difficult than Insane diff?

[Normal]
- 00:58:124 : change it to http://puu.sh/FJ3H to follow the vocal :3
- 01:05:908 : change it to http://puu.sh/FJ4M ?

[HydeSama's Insane]
- 00:18:557 : trap distance o v o"
- 00:23:097 : too far ?
- 00:45:476 : didn't overlap cutely, try x352 y268 or move it somewhere c:
- 01:55:205 : finish?

[BeatofIke's Hard]
- 01:55:205 : finish?

that's all I can found, kawaii song > w <
rank Good LUCK :3
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

responding to your PM

[General]

I checked the timing, and I think that Offset 7854 is just as good as 18233.
And about your BG problem try to full submit it again, the thumbnail will be fixed after awhile.

[Normal]

01:11:421 (1,2,3,4) - Can you make it like this?
There is an unsnapped section at: 01:14:130. snap it to 01:14:178.

[BeatofIke's Hard]

Why is this diff have a higher star difficulty than Insane?
And there's a lack of hitsounds in this difficulty.

but overall, there's no errors here.


[HydeSama's Insane]

Like Hard, there's a lack of hitsounds in this diff too.

00:45:475 (5) - Stack under (3)'s slidertail like this:
01:08:178 (3,4) - I think the spacing in this jump is a bit too much is it? consider on shortening the jump distance.

Well this is a decent mapset, so good lluck on ranking this.
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
SPOILER
[CSGA]Ar3sgice's Mod.
  1. kind of too hard as a Hard diff orz stuff like 01:14:016 (1,2,3,4,5) at 185 bpm is too hard imo Insane is worst XD.
  2. 01:30:719 (1,2,3) - would be better if you don't overlay slider end/start here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349267
  3. 00:23:746 (3,4,6,1) - this looks better id you put (4) directly top of (3) etc http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/349269
  4. 01:47:584 (7) - remove this, sounds better... Oh wow it does. Fixed! I also remove an extra note somewhere for consistency.
  5. 00:22:773 (5) - 1grid down w Fixed!

cRyo[iceeicee]'s Mod
  1. 01:49:692 (5,6) - changing this to long slider fits better imo Nah, it looks good as it is imo.

- t e n n y a - 's Mod
  1. 01:55:205 : finish? Nah.
Crimmi' Mod
  1. Why is this diff have a higher star difficulty than Insane? It's most likely a glitch.
    And there's a lack of hitsounds in this difficulty. That's how I map. I don't add the hitsounds until I first finish mapping the actual song. I tend to forget at times whether I added them or not XD. I added them now so fixed.

    but overall, there's no errors here. Ah Sweet! :D

Updated!
http://puu.sh/H8EW
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki


Hi, Koro McAlpine

M4M request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Remove Letterbox during break in HydeSama's Insane

Normal

  1. 00:58:124 (8) - I heard a vocal at 00:58:611 - May use slider end as above.
  2. 01:11:442 (1) - Add finish here
  3. 01:33:800 (4,5,6) - Use slider repeat style, be better.
  4. 01:36:070 (1,1) - After spun the spinner. It's start the circle is too quickly. I suggest that spinner end at 01:38:665 -
  5. 01:49:692 - Add a note here
  6. 01:25:935 (1) - Slider start at 01:52:773?
  7. 01:54:070 (3) - Slider end at 01:54:557 -

BeatofIke's Hard

  1. 00:54:557 (1) - Slider end at 00:55:043 (Same as 00:49:368 (1) -)

HydeSama's Insane

  1. I don't find the problem.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Kert
2,079 posts
Joined June 2009
Kert
[Normal]
01:35:746 (7) - Maybe unstack? Newbies tend to miss such things

[Hard]
01:48:070 (2,1) - This is spacing is weird
01:48:719 (2,1) - same
Either stack them or move away from each other, because it's not very readable, especially after 01:47:097 (5,6) -
I was expecting similar stacks

[Insane]
01:11:097 (5,1) - This is antijump is kinda of random for me
01:18:070 (4,1) - Whyyyy, please ctrl-r this 01:18:395 (1,2) -
It's flow killing like it is now
-Hyde
471 posts
Joined March 2011
-Hyde
Hey Koro, I've been ignoring the mods for several reasons. Now I pass an update of my difficulty and I apologize for not doing so in due time.

http://puu.sh/WSVF <--- I just updated to map 23% (00:28:287), will be finished in a few days, thanks.
-Hyde
471 posts
Joined March 2011
-Hyde
Update ---> http://puu.sh/YOsV
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Oh wow, I forgot about this map. Will update later.
Although, it's graveyarded!
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