1. Frostmourne's Normal (2.89 stars, 321 notes)
2. Hard (4.93 stars, 600 notes)
3. Hello, Good-bye (5 stars, 822 notes)

SPOILER

1. There is only 1627 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
   Song Setup→Audio→Music Track→Lead-in (try to move over 2)
   
   
2. umm..You should add 1 another red timing line at 00:15:109 .
   and change the 1st red timing line Bpm 232 to Bpm 116 since the rhythm is so soft at the beginning
   
3. ok...there is no tags ...so you'd better add something about this map,anything is ok so long as it's related

Try this > <

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]

1. There is only 1627 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. ok
   Song Setup→Audio→Music Track→Lead-in (try to move over 2)
   
   
2. umm..You should add 1 another red timing line at 00:15:109 . No. I don't want change the BPM to half.
   and change the 1st red timing line Bpm 232 to Bpm 116 since the rhythm is so soft at the beginning
   
3. ok...there is no tags ...so you'd better add something about this map,anything is ok so long as it's related ummm.........there is no another tag because this song just record in one album which name is "Wonderful World". And I can't find any other information.

[Hello, Good-bye]
00:00:627 - Q.Q this part is a bit loud, try to lower the volume by 20%-30% ok
In my opinion,this part shouldnt use whistle hitsound, a lowish hitsound may do better here It's just because whistle suit for me.
00:06:833 (1) - try to make the slider tail stack with 00:05:540 (4) ? ok
00:25:454 (11) - newcombo ok
00:38:514 (3) - spacing.. should be about 1.30x not 1.39x ok
01:15:109 (9) - newcombo no
01:48:213 (7) - ^ no
02:13:558 (6) - ^? ok
01:56:359 (2) - move to this place? (x:284 y:288) (better for me) then fix the spacing of (3) ok move
02:36:704 (5,6,7) - ummm,not so good...and ↓ ok, but try another sorry

Try this > <

02:41:876 - useless whistle, remove it ok
03:24:420 (7) - ctrl+r no, it's my intention
03:35:670 (1) - 03:35:540 should move to this time,and remove the newcomo ,give the newcombo to the next note ok, changed
03:48:342 (1) - the same thing as above no
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Mapping tips:try to use ctrl+1 (over the "q" key) to get the more serried gridding. I know the grid 1 but just I want to map in 2, just my selfish....but using gird 1 somewhere
Good!
Excellent Mapset <3333333

Patchouli wrote:

見るとこ無いからビジュアルを重視してみました

1. 00:00:627 (1) - 少し形を綺麗に?
   
   Code

   224,96,627,2,2,B|274:116|330:86|339:34,2,150,2|2|2

2. 00:04:247 (2) - これくらいが綺麗かも？
   
   Code

   293,197,4247,2,0,B|242:180|226:116|261:69,1,150,2|2

3. 00:08:902 (1) - スプーンを意識して
   
   Code

   160,120,8902,6,2,B|160:176|112:216|56:200,1,150

4. 00:15:626(×) - ブレイク入れてもいいかも？ no
5. 00:19:764(×) - こっちも入れてもいいかもしれないけど短いからお好み？ no,勝手に雰囲気重視（？）
6. 00:23:385 (3) - New Combo! 前が寂しくなるので.....
7. 00:24:420 (7) - 倍率ドン!(New Combo!!) ok
8. 00:25:454 (11) - さらに倍!(New Combo!!!) ok
9. 00:39:937 (1,2) - くびれ具合の調整
   
   Code

   408,312,39937,6,0,B|368:280|368:208|416:176,1,150,2|8
   475,128,40325,2,0,B|451:176|383:180|345:146,1,150,2|0

10. 00:40:713 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Suggestion!カーブを綺麗にしてみた系
    
    Code

    296,79,40713,1,8
    225,36,40842,1,0
    143,46,40971,2,0,B|103:62|87:102,1,75,2|0
    87,178,41230,1,8
    140,240,41359,2,0,B|172:272|164:312,2,75,2|0|2
    58,254,41747,5,8
    83,332,41876,1,0
    157,367,42006,2,0,B|191:389|229:375,1,75,2|0
    289,320,42264,1,8
    366,291,42394,1,0
    433,338,42523,2,0,B|345:354|305:282,1,150,2|8
    317,200,42911,2,0,B|347:122|295:49,1,150,2|0

11. 00:59:075 (2) - なんだっけ？(ぇ
    
    Code

    287,280,59075,2,2,B|335:267|391:292|411:339,1,150,2|8

12. 00:54:161 (1) - New Combo? ok
13. 01:05:023 (1) - これをRemove New Comboして、01:04:764 (1) - と01:05:282 (1) - NC足すだけにしました
14. 01:13:040 (×) - ピアノが飛びたがってるから折り返しスライダーじゃなくて単発にするとbyuuuuuuuuuuun no byuuuuuuuuuuuun
15. 01:15:109 (9) - New Combo? no
16. 01:16:014 (12) - Remove New Combo? no
17. 01:16:920 (1) - New Combo? ok
18. 01:18:213 (1) - New Combo? ummmmmmmmmm,,,ok
19. 01:40:971 (7) - New Combo? ok
20. 01:44:980 (7) - New Combo? ok
21. 01:56:489 (3) - x278 y354くらいがバランスいいかも ok
22. 01:59:075 (2) - Remove New Combo ok
23. 01:58:558 (1) - New Combo ok
24. 02:08:902 (1) - 終点をちょっと重ねる感じに形の調整
    
    Code

    216,280,128902,6,0,B|161:266|144:200|178:157,1,150,0|8

25. 02:13:558 (1) - New Combo? ok
26. 02:21:316 (5) - ピアノが飛びたがってる。またはスタック 前を大事にします
27. 02:38:902 (1) - New Combo? ok
28. 02:49:764 (5) - このスライダーはこっち向きのほうがきっと流れに合う
    
    Code

    335,162,169764,2,0,B|304:137|265:138,1,75,2|0

29. 03:24:678 (×) - ここはノート欲しい。単発 ok
30. 03:31:920 (4) - これくらいの形が綺麗だと思うけどどうかな
    
    Code

    395,13,211920,2,0,B|350:83|400:162,1,150,8|8

31. 04:27:523 (1) - ちょっとだけ広めの単発４つのほうが最後が締まると思うけどどうかな いい形が思いつかなかったのと、悲しみを生みたくなかったので..........やさしい

slider all fixed

絶対指摘されそうなスライダーあったけどあれ面白いから他の人に指摘されても突き通していこ
気合いを入れな......

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi wring
here is my mod~

Hello, Good-bye
In the first part of this song ,and this part 01:06:833 (1) - I think it's better to use soft whistle instead , (the current normal whistle is odd for me to hear it =.=) , also the rest you can use Normal custom 2 or default which actually sounds same as normal whistle is. ok, I change
here it is custom normal-whistle which sounds same as soft-whistle http://puu.sh/GJTx
about New combo placement , I see Patchouli already pointed out so I won't touch them
00:21:704 (1) - this slider should end at 00:21:790 (2) - (1/6 beat) sorry no, I feel this better
00:31:661 (1) - finish is better than whistle I think added
00:35:799 (3) - change to slider ? , end at (4) , slider actually follows the vocal well no, it's not follow vocal, yea somewhere is following vocal but these points.....sorry
00:37:221 (8) - move this slider to 00:37:351 (8) - so it will follow the vocal like (7)
00:40:454 (2) - same above ^
00:43:040 (7) - ^
01:21:316 (9) - add note ? no
01:25:842 (3) - move this slider to 01:25:971 (3) -
01:39:937 (3) - finish ok
01:56:489 (3) - finish or whistle ? , I prefer finish to whistle ok
02:46:532 (3) - move this to 02:46:661 (3) -
03:17:178 (1) - finish ok
03:21:316 (3) - ^ ok
03:48:342 (1) - from previous note , maybe player will hit it early so it will make missing here = =' ok, changed previous slider

that's all !! Good Luck , this is awesome xD xD

1. Should this song source : Soshite Ashita no Sekai Yori ?? because
   
   SPOILER

   http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fU8doUljoZ8
2. better use 2 BPM , 116 and 232 , because some part of song have too much slider tick rate
3. i prefer SV = 1.60
4. i really want look SB for this map lol

1. 00:31:144 (5) - move
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:34:247 (5) - move to right, dont hide in (3) slider body
3. 00:38:385 (2) - move,stack with (2)
4. 00:42:523 (6) - avoid hitburst, rotate 60 degrees, then move
5. 00:56:489 (2) - NC start from here, look previous flow ( 00:48:213 (1) - )
6. 01:15:109 (9) - NC, because ( 02:35:799 (1) - )
7. 01:56:359 (2) - move far from (6) hit burst
8. 03:43:816 (7) - NC
9. 04:02:695 - 04:05:669 - evil !, my combo break here

zeroclover wrote:

Hello

General

1. Should this song source : Soshite Ashita no Sekai Yori ?? because No, that's the movie source, not this song's source.
   
   SPOILER

   http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fU8doUljoZ8
2. better use 2 BPM , 116 and 232 , because some part of song have too much slider tick rate umm...but keep this BPM would be able to realize where is x0.5 and x0.75 imo
3. i prefer SV = 1.60
4. i really want look SB for this map lol I also want to look but I have no skill lol

Mod
sorry im shorted some mod lines
use 2 different bpm is acceptable for slider tick rate changes the same reason

1. 00:31:144 (5) - move no, I want this keep the position for previous sliders.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:34:247 (5) - move to right, dont hide in (3) slider body no
3. 00:38:385 (2) - move,stack with (2) no
4. 00:42:523 (6) - avoid hitburst, rotate 60 degrees, then move changed the end
5. 00:56:489 (2) - NC start from here, look previous flow ( 00:48:213 (1) - ) ok
6. 01:15:109 (9) - NC, because ( 02:35:799 (1) - ) oh no, everyone say this, ok I changed
7. 01:56:359 (2) - move far from (6) hit burst no
8. 03:43:816 (7) - NC ok
9. 04:02:695 - 04:05:669 - evil !, my combo break here yeah, it's difficult point

try avoid hitburst when placing some notes( especially slider) I keep that because this is for APP imo

goodbye~ Good-bye<3

Mythol wrote:

good map~

mod

12:12 wring: : hi, could you test play?
12:12 Mythol: : yeah~
12:12 wring: : thx ^^
12:12 : *wring is listening to (Shintani Ryoko - Wonderful World)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50371]
12:12 wring: : yeah~
12:18 wring: : pro!
12:19 Mythol: : ><
12:19 Mythol: : just a few confusing parts o.o
12:19 Mythol: : i'll point them out..
12:19 wring: : oh
12:20 Mythol: : 00:38:902 (5,6) -
12:21 wring: : umm..
12:21 Mythol: : i expect just 1 repeat on 5
12:21 Mythol: : because next note is to the right >>
12:22 Mythol: : confusing ;_;
12:22 Mythol: : do you understand? ><
12:23 wring: : yeah...but the 6 is same slider, and you have played, you would play perfectly imo
12:23 wring: : sorry my slow type><
12:23 Mythol: : yes 6 is same
12:23 Mythol: : but 5 is unexpected 4 repeat
12:23 Mythol: : 3 repeats*
12:23 Mythol: : so miss on 5
12:23 Mythol: : 5 is the problem o.o
12:23 Mythol: : 2 repeats**
12:23 Mythol: : ;__;
12:24 wring: : I want 2 repeats>< and after another point I used same slider too TT
12:24 Mythol: : if you must use 2 repeats..
12:24 Mythol: : change direction of 5
12:24 Mythol: : so it will lead in to next note
12:24 Mythol: : right now 5 ends <<
12:24 Mythol: : and 6 starts >>>>
12:25 wring: : ummm......I want these three slider finish same direction ends, and I want a little jump for these...
12:26 Mythol: : ;_;
12:26 wring: : only I can say 4 and 5,6 is same kind >< sorry
12:29 Mythol: : 04:02:695 (1) - this
12:29 Mythol: : so hard.... o_o
12:30 wring: : ><
12:30 Mythol: : you must keep this too? ;_;
12:30 wring: : u-mm
12:31 wring: : I think this is the most important and hardest points in this map
12:31 Mythol: : agree
12:31 Mythol: : but same pattern for 24 notes
12:31 Mythol: : ._.
12:32 Mythol: : just suggestion
12:32 Mythol: : you can get more opinion before change o.o
12:32 Mythol: : or not change
12:32 wring: : but I don't do this, the slider is too many for me><
12:32 wring: : thanks!
12:33 Mythol: : 00:38:902 (5) - i think you shold atleast nc
12:33 Mythol: : to give some warning o.o
12:33 wring: : truely I think this is for app, so I can map harder ww
12:34 wring: : hmm
12:35 wring: : Don't player fell odd the only 5,6 are another color?
12:35 wring: : *feel
12:36 Mythol: : what about this 00:37:739 (1,2) - ww
12:36 wring: : ww
12:36 Mythol: : i think it fits with the song
12:36 wring: : okay I changed!
12:37 Mythol: : \^^/
12:37 Mythol: : 01:00:626 (10) - should nc be here instead?
12:38 Mythol: : instead of next note
12:38 Mythol: :
12:38 wring: : ok!
12:39 Mythol: : ok i dont want to nc mod
12:39 Mythol: : just stop here~

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Hello

SPOILER

1. 00:30:627 (4,5) - sounds better without this finishes, since there is no cymbal sound in BG music o.o (remove them or change to clap) ok
2. 00:37:609 (9,1,2,1,2,3,4) - dont understand rhytm and spacing here ~.~ (mb smth like this.... I know you mean, but I needn't so many jumps for these so I changed another
   

   168,40,37609,5,8
   56,80,37739,1,0
   120,180,37868,2,0,B|136:140|120:84,1,75
   28,196,38126,5,8
   124,272,38256,1,0
   208,188,38385,2,0,B|221:150|213:114,1,75
   124,272,38644,2,0,B|112:308|124:368,1,75
   208,336,38902,6,0,B|244:320|284:324,3,75,10|0|8|0
   352,372,39420,2,0,B|389:375|425:359,3,75,10|0|8|0
   424,276,39937,6,0,B|384:244|384:172|432:140,1,150,2|8
   491,92,40325,2,0,B|467:140|399:144|361:110,1,150,2|0
   300,56,40713,1,8
   224,28,40842,1,0

3. 00:48:213 (1) - finish here ok
4. 00:49:764 (6) - hmm......remove whistles from arrow and tail and add whistle here 00:50:023 (7) - fixed remove
5. 00:51:575 (4) - removing repeat and adding note sounds better for me o.o no, it's good for me
6. 00:56:489 (1) - finish ok
7. 00:59:075 (2) - a bit close....mb move it ? http://puu.sh/HkCF ok
8. 01:21:058 (8,1) - hmm........if i wanted to stop here i would do it like this http://puu.sh/HkEt (there is a cymbal sound on downbeat, i think pattern should play it
   + add finish on #1 note umm....sorry I don't change, I want one on the red line, and finish don't suit this.
9. 01:27:523 (6) - finish can be added here ok
10. 01:29:592 (1) - RNC and NC at 01:30:109 (3) - just added
11. 01:30:109 - mb end kiai here ? ok
12. 01:31:661 (1) - http://puu.sh/HkFV move break time a bit, should be like this http://puu.sh/HkGg ok
13. 01:39:420 - why not start pattern here with drumm sound ? ok
14. 01:48:859 - jump note here http://puu.sh/HkHM no, I know the point have sound, but I don't think every sound should be put.
15. 02:08:902 (1) - missed whistle ? oops
16. 02:09:420 (2,3,4) - imo use head whistles here like before (but replace ur green lines, to reduce volume for next whistle by 10% like this http://puu.sh/HkJg ) only reduce
17. 02:31:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - increase SV for each slider manually, imo fits great with music I know but 0.9x seems weird, so I changed max 0.7x
18. 02:31:144 (1) - 0.5x
19. 02:31:661 (2) - 0.6x
20. 02:32:178 (3) - 0.7x
21. 02:32:695 (4) - 0.8x
22. 02:33:213 (5) - 0.9x
23. 02:41:747 (8,1) - same stop pattern here ^
24. 02:44:075 (1) - finish ok
25. 02:47:049 (1) - whistle ok
26. 02:49:247 (3,4) - both can be *whistled* here no, just because I don't want that
27. 02:50:799 (3) - finish and NC and this remove NC 02:50:282 (1) - added finish and NC, but the 1 remain I think it's better.
28. 02:51:833 (5) - whistle no
29. 02:52:351 (1) - same issue with break time, i think you need to move it like before ok
30. 03:08:902 (1) - finish ummm...ok
31. 03:20:799 (1) - RNC 03:21:316 (3) - NC only NC
32. 03:24:678 (8) - change to slider o.o ? http://puu.sh/HkQI no
33. 03:29:333 (1) - finish arrow here o.o so loud oh, ok
34. 03:31:920 (4,1) - hmm.....mb this ? http://puu.sh/HkW8 no
35. 03:33:730 (1) - finish ok
36. 03:39:937 (1,1,1,1) - hmm....for me increasing spacing fits better then reducing it http://puu.sh/HkWA ( also NC spam here) I want to keep this dicreasing and the NC is readable imo
37. 03:42:006 (1) - finish ok
38. 03:47:954 (6,1) - same stop ^
39. 03:50:282 (1) - finish ? ok
40. 03:51:187 (6) - ^^^ ok
41. 03:58:558 (1) - finish ok
42. 04:06:316 (3) - remove tail finish and add at 04:06:833 (1) - ok
43. 04:21:316 (1) - finish ? ok

Good-bye<3

abalee wrote:

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/84012

check this

Frostmourne wrote:

star rating 2.9