Add Easy diff~
Fixed many things~
Fixed many things~
X333ToGlette wrote:
[Easy]
AR-1 or -2 (I guess it's too fast for Easy) HP-1 OD-1 (Bit Harsh I guess?) AR3 HP2 OD2 >3<
00:19:550 (3,4) - How about stacking the (3) with (2) and put (4) in the place of (3) to align with (1) http://puu.sh/zDie <- It looks better +_+ OK~
Have my star ~ Thanks~
Thanks for modding & star~xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:
Haiii ~
Love this song <3
[Easy]
00:57:753 (4) - Delete this note and add a slider starting from 00:57:753 and end it at 00:58:222 ?
01:12:050 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:12:988
01:11:581 - Start a slider here and end it at 01:12:050 and reverse. Or, start a slider at 01:12:050
01:20:488 (3) - The whistle feels strange to me.. ><
01:27:988 (5) - ^
01:35:488 (5) - ^
01:43:222 - Add a spinner to the end and silence it?
[Normal]
00:33:613 (2) - Delete.
00:41:113 (2) - ^
00:55:409 (4) - Add a note?
01:43:222 - Add a spinner to the end and silence it?
[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1
- Maybe use slider tick rate 2 to match the other diffs?
01:19:550 (4) - Line with (1)
01:21:073 (9,10) - Line with (6)
01:43:222 - Add a spinner to the end and silence it?
Well mapped ~
Good luck and star ! >w<
Thanks~ Modiroseka wrote:
iroseka's modding from the queue总的来说还好啦~ 歌也挺好听
打问号为个人认为比较脑残的建议,不喜欢可无视
[Easy]
没什么问题……
01:42:051 (4) - Clap fix~
[其他]
我喜欢SB,求指导 這個是SB是sherrie__fay做的~~瓦自己做的不是很好看啦~~多多指教咯!
Thanks~Prostosuza wrote:
Hi ~
(Short ver.) --> (Short Ver.)
Change the title please. :3
Very nice map :3 ~ Good Luck
Thanks~ Modarken1015 wrote:
[General]
00:14:863 - I wonder why this red line exists... I don't know what's the difference for second part... Just delete this red line? If you delete this line, make sure there's no unsnapped notes :3 The rule says that "All uninherited sections must be on the downbeat of the measure." >< So I think it must be a red line here.
[Hard]
00:50:488 (1,2) - This spacing is shorter than others on same color orz fix~
01:40:409 (4) - meow since return mark covers next note :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345145 Nice idea fix~
meow :3
Thanks~ :3Minty Gum wrote:
Wow... such pretty map. It looks very nice with that background and the storyboard. I love this song, I hope to see it ranked. No stars, but good luck
Thank you so much~ It's so helpful for me!!Kenezz wrote:
Mimu u3u
Kenezz's Bakamod~ lol
[General]
01:29:863 - The kiai time should be end here 01:29:863 (in a downbeat). fix~
[Easy]
00:06:898 (1) - This slider should be start 1/1 before (just check the track), ok then move this slider 1/1 backward and shorten by 1/2, now add a circle in 00:07:836. http://puu.sh/CpL1 fix~
00:12:992 (1) - Check the end of this spinner is unsnapped. fix~
00:57:988 (4) - The circle sound too off because you follow the vocal before and in this part the vocal stay in a red tick, My Solution: remove this circle and add a 1/2 slider in 00:57:753. http://puu.sh/CpQf Optional: add a repeat to follow the cute rhythm of the track. http://puu.sh/CpRP fix~
01:15:800 - Add a circle here X
[Normal]
00:06:429 (1) - Maybe remove the new combo, is too short. fix~
00:09:476 (1) - Remove the new combo to be consistent with the before pattern 00:01:976 (5). fix~
00:50:956 (4) - Imo the slider is needless, don't follow the voice or the track, [url]My Sugestion[/url]: remove this slider and add a 1/2 repeat slider in 00:51:425. http://puu.sh/Cq2H I think it's ok~
00:55:644 (4) - The slider should be start 1/2 (red tick) before to follow properly the voice, considers move it. um...no change
01:33:144 (6) - Hmm this could be best because here the clap stay in the blue tick 01:33:027, My Sugestion: remove this slider and a repeat of 01:31:972 (5), now add a 3/4 slider in 01:32:675, finally add a circle in 01:33:613. http://puu.sh/Cq8a fix~
01:40:644 (6) - Same as before here. fix~
[Hard]
-Maybe OD+1 fix~
00:18:613 (6) - The new combo should be start here like 00:22:363. fix~
00:26:113 (9) - Same as before. fix~
01:18:027 (7) - Not is my case but this circle in that blue tick could be are a bit confusing because you use in all the diff two circles in parts like this, 00:39:472 (6), 00:47:909 (4), 01:25:409 (7), etc., then considers add a cirlce here 01:17:909. It's ok~ imo.
01:41:581 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - These combos are too short, maybe remove the new como here 01:42:284 (1) or here 01:42:988 (4). If you remove the new combo of 01:42:988 (4), be consistent and remove the same new combo of the [Normal] diff. fix~
I hope to helps you
Good luck~
Thanks~Fuuko wrote:
Just a Mimu fanboy making a quick appearance.
Change the source to DATEKEN, since he's the producer of the song. added~ thanks
The song's title is *tear*, the t isn't capitalized. I find the rank map title is *Tear* so no change 0.0
*flies away*
Oh, and obviously, do not kudosu this post.
Thanks~ Modlovhin456 wrote:
Hello, sorry for the huge delay
[General]
- Change the title as Fuuko points out the correct one is *tear* with the not capitalized t alright
- Try these colors ? pretty nice than I set~ so use it X3
[code]Combo1 : 36,89,155
Combo2 : 220,126,150
Combo3 : 150,98,179
[/combo]
[Easy]
- I'm going to focus on the looks of the diff because as far as I see the diff itself is fine
- 00:00:336 (1,2) ~ Place like this http://puu.sh/CIq3 this way it will look better and give a better feeling X I don't want to map like that
- 00:04:086 (3,4) ~ Then to follow my previous suggestion, placing these notes like this http://puu.sh/CIqW would be nice. Also new combo on (3) maybe ? X
- 00:07:836 ~ New combo fix~
- 00:08:773 (3,4,5) ~ This would look better imo http://puu.sh/CItW X
- 00:27:988 ~ Maybe lower the volume of this note to 20% ? ok~
- 01:09:238 (2,4) ~ Remove whistle otherwise there are too many whistles which sound kinda bad fix~
- You could do much better with the formations, right now it's just ok
[Normal]
- 00:01:976 ~ New combo no~
- 00:09:476 ~ ^ no~
- 00:55:409 ~ Add a note no~
- 01:12:050 ~ I think that removing a repeat and moving this to the next red tick then adding a note here would be way better, it suits the music more imo great~ fix
- 01:25:644 ~ New combo ? no~
[Hard]
- 00:48:144 ~ Add a note ? I follow the beat not vocal. no change
- 01:20:488 ~ New combo no~
I can't say that this is ready yet, I think you should get more mods
Evil_Twilight wrote:
[Hrad]
00:14:164 (1) - 這前面的音效可以拿掉,20%幾乎聽不太到。真的要加音效的話把音量條大一些,建議用內建的whistle X
00:18:378 (5) - 拿掉whistle ? X
00:28:222 (1,2,3) - 讓這三顆小聲一點 ok~
00:31:269 (5) - 拿掉whistle ? 下在這邊聽起來怪怪的 X
00:39:941 (7) - 加whistle ok~
00:55:409 (1) - 頭尾拿掉whistle X
00:59:628 ~ 01:12:988 的音量可以條小一點 ok~
01:21:659 (1) - 拿掉whistle X
01:31:738 (1) - 我覺得這顆跳得有點遠 唔....之前還有比這個跳的更遠的說~~ >.<
01:33:378 (5) - 拿掉whistle X
01:40:878 (5) - ^ X
[Normal]
00:14:863 (1) - 這前面的音效可以拿掉,20%幾乎聽不太到。真的要加音效的話把音量條大一些,建議用內建的whistle X
00:15:331 (2) - 拿掉whistle X
00:18:378 (5) - ^ X
00:22:831 (1) - ^ X
00:50:956 (4) - ^ X
01:20:956 (5) - ^ X
01:37:128 (1) - ^ X
01:42:284 (3) - 加whistle ? ok~
[Easy]
01:06:894 (5) - 拿掉whistle ok~
01:15:800 (x) - 加顆note ? X
我覺得有些whistle下的地方不是很好
聽起來像硬塞的感覺。゚(゚′ω‵゚)゚。
Thanks~ >.<Yume wrote:
Plz remove the Short Ver from the title list >.< it's new rule~
no kd~
感謝Mod~ & Star!-Baby Strawberry- wrote:
mod~!
HardSPOILER整体没什么问题,我就说说形状之类的吧
00:04:789 (3) - 这个我觉得有点生硬。可以改一改如果你想的话【我osu出什么问题了我也不知道,点一个白色点都能出直角拐弯,奇了怪了,所以不能上图了】
00:06:429 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个的形状吧也不大好看其实。。。开着DS摆的稍微整齐一点就会好很多
整体感觉摆放有点直,挺柔美的曲子感觉还是弯弯的才好。个人见解啦,你的风格也是不错的~!
normalSPOILER01:36:425这里需要加点东西比如circle
easySPOILER怎么说呢,中规中矩,但是没什么自己的风格,不过对新人mapper来说已经相当不错了,星星支持~!00:15:800加东西~
DarknessAngel wrote:
request from in-game ~Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to noticeStoryBoard
- 歌詞好像都延遲了些 ... 歌手唱了之後才出現 ... 一般不是提早出現麼
由於FADE(淡入)的效果,應該要把整個部分提前好幾秒的,要不然就會變成上述那樣- 01:07:597 ~ 01:13:925 - 這裡的歌詞一下就消失了要給誰看啊/.\
嘛,雖然可讀但是如果在遊戲中就堪稱不可能了啊/.\- 歌詞的效果的想法很好,就是上述那些可惜了點lol
Hard
- 強烈建議AR7或6;HP5;OD5或6,原有設定值無疑太高,這難度本身也不難,所以很不適合
- 00:28:222 (1,2) - ctrl + R。00:27:519 (4,1)之間的間距有些小了(將近1/2拍的間距),這麼做能拉大一些
- 00:36:425 (7) - 移到(240,224)才會是在00:35:722 (2,3,4,5,6)的正中間
- 00:45:800 (3) - 沒意義的大跳,而且夠坑,nonono
間距拉小點,像這樣 ? 做個對稱也美觀點- 00:51:425 (1) - 這轉盤對Hard來說太短了 ... auto才勉強轉出個3000
把它換成00:50:488 (1,2,3,4,5)相同的節奏,00:52:363再補個note這樣- 01:12:988 (1) - 換成5個notes好多了 ... 還能跳一下呢 ...
說真的這短spinner還不如不存在,我差點轉個100出來orz
後面若還有我就不挑了,自行考量啊- 01:18:027 (7) - 這節奏稍微難掌握了。如果是我,我會在01:18:144加個note跟人聲
然後把01:17:675 (6,7,1)之間的間距都調成一樣- 01:32:909 (4) - 因為你前面用了個折返3次的短slider,後面那個卻用個1折返
這對「玩得起」這難度的人來說,有些難判斷了點;對技術強點的人來說,也有點不舒適
所以把這個換成3連我覺得會好點- 01:40:409 (4) - 同上
- 唔...我看不出妳NC想要跟什麼耶,歌詞也不是,重音也不是/.\
- 音效方面我的想法跟妳完全不同呢,我覺得多用預設的2種whistle會有不錯的效果,但你的也不錯就是了:3
Normal
關於這diff,我就提幾點我認為重要的
- 00:02:211 (6,7) - 折返2次後馬上接著1/2 slider,這對新手來說相當棘手,normal難度別這麼放
- 空著的地方盡量用slider帶過,這是簡單難度的慣例模式,像00:06:429 (5,1,2,3,4)
如果只用幾個note填充,不是不行,就是感覺不好打,這種情形在我玩2009年的圖看到挺多
但是大空檔當然就不用裡它了 ~- 這難度多次出現1/2拍和1/4拍的重疊,如果真要重疊就選擇其一,不要兩個一起用,會讓新手confused
EX : 00:27:519 (3,4) and 00:44:863 (1,2)- 00:44:159 and 00:44:394 - 這兩個明顯的音還是別空著好,slider連接建議
Easy
- 相較之下這diff好多了,我看不出什麼大問題(嘛,也許是我不擅長mod Easy)
就是這難度有些太簡單了,BPM也才128,白線上可以再填多點,偶爾紅線也無訪
因為你這難度跟normal之間難度跳躍太大
然後Hard和Normal又過於接近
導致diff spread挺差的,這點也要注意一下
大致上就這樣了 ~
有什麼問題in-game密我
加油!
alacat wrote:
Hi :3 from my queue.
Sorry for the delay.
[General]
●delete to "Mimu - Tear (Short ver.) (Midasmens).osb" file ? Is this necessary?
[Easy]
●00:07:836 (1) - add whistle
●00:12:992 (1) - it doesn't follow the music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.like this?→http://puu.sh/GLxM
●00:15:800 - add note? and add clap.
●00:18:613 (2,3) - not stack better imo
●00:22:363 (1) - spacing too close (1.10x) it is better to use DS0.8x
●00:42:988 (4,5) - same, above
●01:05:488 (4) - delete note? it doesn't follow the Lyrics. 01:03:613 (3) - add reverse? follow the Lyrics imo o.o
●01:06:425 (5) - remove whistle on the slider's reverse.
[Normal]
●00:55:644 (4) - add clap on the slider's end ?
●01:01:972 (3) - like this? http://puu.sh/GLL5
●01:05:722 (3) - ^
●01:11:113 (5) - add new combo
[Hard]
●00:06:898 (3,4) - sorry for my nazi mod. like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/364851
●01:11:347 - add note?
nice diff :3
good song and good map!
gl~
感謝音效大師S h i a大大的幫助~~S h i a wrote:
[Overall]
cool. 排列。。恩。。。
mod精力集中在Hitsounds 我觉得整体hitsounds 音量偏小了点?
[Easy]
00:27:988 (4) - sc2 whistle here? fix~
00:35:488 (5) - 加个Finish在slider头?fix~
01:12:050 (1) - 从这里到01:15:800 作为KIAI开始 而且是比较精彩的转接部分。虽然是EASY但一个spinner就带过还是略显的不够完善呐。感覺要和別的難度協調~~這裡就放了Spinner :3
[Normal]
00:17:675 (5) - slider尾换成finish你觉得怎样? fix~
00:54:238 (3) - finish加在最开头 fix~
01:12:284 (3) - 折返加whistle fix~
01:12:988 (1) - Normal这里可以尝试Map而不是用spinner了呀 同上~
[Hard]
00:21:425 (6) - 倒数第一和第三的地方加finish? 感覺不錯呢~~好棒! fix~
00:24:589 (2) - Add finish plz fix~
00:38:300 (4) - whistle? fix~
01:17:675 (6,7) - 合并为slider吧。 做为Relax的hard没必要出现这样的Note组合 fix~
01:31:972 (2) - 最后改为finish符合一些 fix~
Nicely done.
Philippines wrote:
hi Midasmens! I guess your map is awesome so lemme do you a full mod ^^ I would love to see a reason if you do not agree with my suggestions.Easy
- 00:04:086 (3) - I prefer a new combo for this one. If you follow this suggestion, please remove the new combo on 00:06:429 (1).
- 00:08:773 (2) - This slider is not symmetrical. Move 2nd point one grid right and one up then move 3rd point one grid up so that it's on the center. fix~
Normal
- 01:05:722 (3) - This kick slider feels out of place. I highly suggest you follow the vocals here instead of the music itself.
- 01:25:644 (5) - I think a new combo should be marked here so the combo won't reach up to 7. 7 is too long i believe for a Normal Diff.
- 01:36:659 (1) - I think a new combo here is not necessary. I'll remove it if I were you.
- 01:42:988 (4) - This note is overlapping with the previous slider. Please try to avoid this one for better gameplay.
Hard
- 00:06:429 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - Why is the spacing here suddenly becomes 1.0 from 1.2?
- 00:14:164 (1,2) - Too hard for a Hard Diff. I suggest use x2.0 spacing instead.
- 00:30:331 (2,5) - These sliders overlap a little. Try to avoid this one please.
- 00:34:784 (1) - I'll remove this new combo if I were you to maintain the combo count.
- 00:39:472 (6) - This slider doesn't fit with the music at all. Please replace this one with a 1/2 slider instead. Don't forget to maintain your spacing.
- 00:44:628 (1,2,3) - This part is completely unreadable. At least try to make the spacing consistent here so players won't be confused.
- 00:51:425 (1) - I don't think this is a good place to place a spinner. Please map this section instead.
- 00:54:003 (3,4,5) - Watch your spacing here too. Make them consistent.
- 01:10:644 (7) - A new combo fits this note in my opinion. If you followed this one, please remove the new combo on 01:12:284 (1).
- 01:12:988 (1) - This spinner is just too short. I would highly suggest you map this section instead.
- 01:21:659 (1,2,3,4) - I think this little curve pattern could still be improved. Just try moving 2 and 3 and I think it'll be good now.
- 01:42:753 (3,4) - Move 3 one grid up and a grid more to the right then move 4 one grid up to maintain a symmetrical pattern. fix~
End of my Mod | Nice map! (: Call me back for a little recheck ^^
pieguy1372 wrote:
hi there
General:
-umm, I'm fairly sure you can't put SBer's name in tags maybe I'm wrong though..
Easy:
00:15:800 - add note?
01:15:800 - add note?
Normal:
00:00:336 (1,3) - hm, I think regular soft whistle would sound nice here... and you also used it at the end. perhaps try it?
00:04:086 (1,3) - ^
00:07:836 (1,3) - ^
00:11:586 (1,4) - ^
00:55:409 - add note?
Hard:
00:00:336 (1,3) ~ 00:11:586 (1,4) - same as Normal
00:41:581 (4) - add whistle on start?
01:12:519 (2) - add whistle?
01:21:894 (2) - maybe add whistle here?
nice map, good luck =w= hitsound fix~ Thanks