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Topic Starter
Midasmens
Add Easy diff~
Fixed many things~
ToGlette
[Easy]
AR-1 or -2 (I guess it's too fast for Easy) HP-1 OD-1 (Bit Harsh I guess?)

00:19:550 (3,4) - How about stacking the (3) with (2) and put (4) in the place of (3) to align with (1) http://puu.sh/zDie <- It looks better +_+

Have my star ~
Topic Starter
Midasmens

ToGlette wrote:

[Easy]
AR-1 or -2 (I guess it's too fast for Easy) HP-1 OD-1 (Bit Harsh I guess?) AR3 HP2 OD2 >3<

00:19:550 (3,4) - How about stacking the (3) with (2) and put (4) in the place of (3) to align with (1) http://puu.sh/zDie <- It looks better +_+ OK~

Have my star ~ Thanks~
X333
Kanari
Haiii ~
Love this song <3



[Easy]
00:57:753 (4) - Delete this note and add a slider starting from 00:57:753 and end it at 00:58:222 ?
01:12:050 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:12:988
01:11:581 - Start a slider here and end it at 01:12:050 and reverse. Or, start a slider at 01:12:050
01:20:488 (3) - The whistle feels strange to me.. ><
01:27:988 (5) - ^
01:35:488 (5) - ^
01:43:222 - Add a spinner to the end and silence it?



[Normal]
00:33:613 (2) - Delete.
00:41:113 (2) - ^
00:55:409 (4) - Add a note?
01:43:222 - Add a spinner to the end and silence it?


[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1
- Maybe use slider tick rate 2 to match the other diffs?
01:19:550 (4) - Line with (1)
01:21:073 (9,10) - Line with (6)
01:43:222 - Add a spinner to the end and silence it?



Well mapped ~
Good luck and star ! >w<
Topic Starter
Midasmens

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haiii ~
Love this song <3



[Easy]
00:57:753 (4) - Delete this note and add a slider starting from 00:57:753 and end it at 00:58:222 ?
01:12:050 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:12:988
01:11:581 - Start a slider here and end it at 01:12:050 and reverse. Or, start a slider at 01:12:050
01:20:488 (3) - The whistle feels strange to me.. ><
01:27:988 (5) - ^
01:35:488 (5) - ^
01:43:222 - Add a spinner to the end and silence it?



[Normal]
00:33:613 (2) - Delete.
00:41:113 (2) - ^
00:55:409 (4) - Add a note?
01:43:222 - Add a spinner to the end and silence it?


[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1
- Maybe use slider tick rate 2 to match the other diffs?
01:19:550 (4) - Line with (1)
01:21:073 (9,10) - Line with (6)
01:43:222 - Add a spinner to the end and silence it?



Well mapped ~
Good luck and star ! >w<
Thanks for modding & star~ ;)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue

这歌前面那段的声音好刺耳o.o

Easy

  1. 00:06:898 (1) - 好像spacing不对._.
  2. 00:24:238 (2,3) - 新人可能会看成2 repeats, 建议往下放reverse arrow
  3. 01:42:051 (4) - 同normal
Normal

  1. 00:34:784 (4) - 感觉这样新人会看成2 repeats
  2. 00:49:081 (2) - 可以的话建议和(1)形状一样, 对称一下, 比较美观
  3. 00:53:300 (2) - ^
  4. 00:55:409 (4) - add note
  5. 01:02:675 - slider一个repeat就好了, 这里加个叠note 因为音乐是ding一下, 有个打击感比较好
  6. 01:20:019 (4) - 和(2)对称一下吧._.
  7. 01:42:988 (4) - 这fin太违和 建议s:c1
Hard

  1. 00:06:429 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不对称么
  2. 00:09:711 (2,5) - 下面的往上移一格 上面的往下
  3. 00:45:800 (3) - hard难度不建议放半屏跳...
  4. 01:17:675 (6,7) - 换成slider? 稍违和了
  5. 01:31:738 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/341605 这样摆好像好点._. 这里跳的有些random._.
that's all

Good luck~
Behon
I like the custom hitsounds.

Easy:
00:05:023 (4) - I think this sounds better without the whistle.
00:15:800 - Maybe add a hitcircle here? This part feels empty.
01:10:175 (3,4) - Claps sound better than whistles here IMO.
01:15:097 - Again, this part feels empty.

Normal:
01:01:503 - Add a hitcircle here?

Hard:
00:15:800 (3) - Putting this on the same horizontal plane as 2 makes it look tidier.
01:27:050 (3,4,5) - Same deal with the horizontal plane regarding these three.
_lolipop
呼......

[General]
没有找到什么, 只是发现Hard的Stack Leniency是0.7其他的是0.5...(不用改)

[Hard]
00:36:425 (7) - slider最后的whistle有些多余
00:46:972 (2) - slider末端只要clap就够了, 其实擦片的声音其实在00:47:323 这个位置
(其实一直不知道这个whistle的声音想对应什么 想对应擦片只是我的猜测)
00:50:722 (2,3,4,5) - 建议改成这样 音效是WF-WF (注意时间轴的变化)
00:54:472 (5) - slider末端改成clap
01:02:206 (7) - slider末端的声音更像Soft-Default的whistle, 此外还有01:03:613 (2) - 也是这样
01:31:972 (2) - 第一个折返点加finish, 最后改成clap
01:41:816 (2) - 头部加finish
01:42:988 (4) - new combo

[Easy]
没什么好挑的 建议把slider tick rate降低到1...
Topic Starter
Midasmens
Almost fixed~
Thanks~ for all who mod this map >3<
Flower
iroseka's modding from the queue
总的来说还好啦~ 歌也挺好听
打问号为个人认为比较脑残的建议,不喜欢可无视
[Easy]
没什么问题……
01:12:050 (1) - Spinner的结尾正好在Kiai头略违和?
01:42:051 (4) - Clap
[Normal]
00:35:722 (5) - 略违和……容易看错,建议将之前的那个回头Slider增加一次Repeat
00:53:300 (2) - 建议将形状改成之前一个Slider翻转180°或者完全水平
01:00:800 (2,3) - 建议:
01:04:550 (2,3) - ^
01:30:331 (1) - 在此之后的每个双连击都在白线缺一个Clap……个人意见。
[Hard]
00:21:425 (6) - 缺乏节奏感 增加一些Clap
00:36:425 (7) - DS
00:37:363 (1) - ^
00:54:472 (5) - 奇怪的Jump……建议改到4#
01:17:675 (6) - NC?
01:18:378 (1) - NC off?
01:20:488 (6) - NC
01:25:409 (7) - NC?
01:25:878 (1) - Delete NC?
01:40:878 (5) - 建议移开一点
[其他]
我喜欢SB,求指导
Topic Starter
Midasmens

iroseka wrote:

iroseka's modding from the queue
总的来说还好啦~ 歌也挺好听
打问号为个人认为比较脑残的建议,不喜欢可无视
[Easy]
没什么问题……
01:42:051 (4) - Clap fix~

[其他]
我喜欢SB,求指导 這個是SB是sherrie__fay做的~~瓦自己做的不是很好看啦~~多多指教咯!
Thanks~ Mod
Prostosuza
Hi ~ :)

(Short ver.) --> (Short Ver.)

Change the title please. :3

Very nice map :3 ~ Good Luck ;)
Topic Starter
Midasmens

Prostosuza wrote:

Hi ~ :)

(Short ver.) --> (Short Ver.)

Change the title please. :3

Very nice map :3 ~ Good Luck ;)
Thanks~ ;)
raririn
加油~~~
Flask
看到raririn喊了加油就來了 (原因不明啊~

random mod :P

[General]
Add "dateken" in tags . 這裡的tags只好抄上來
Kiai Time 在 01:29:863 - 結束
(可改可不改的建議)Source : Nico Nico Douga

[Easy]
00:00:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 太空了吧 volume可以提高30%左右 (我調高後才發現有whistle所以分兩條寫)
00:00:336 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - (小建議)可以在長白線上+ whistle就好 其於都去除
00:06:429 (x) - 音樂開始不放東西?
00:14:863 (x) - 到slider出來有點空 ;_; 可以+些note
00:57:988 (4) - 太空了 可以上finish
01:06:894 (5) - 怎麼有finish 而且最後那邊突然變S很詭異
01:15:097 (x) - 好歹kiai time了啥都不放?

排版啥的都很好 :D

[Normal]
說真的前面同Easy一點聲音都聽不出來 - -
00:00:336 (1,2,3,4) - (建議)別重疊
00:02:211 (6,7) - (6)可能會看不出兩次折返 (6)(7)都折返如何? (若有動到spacing要注意)
00:09:711 (2,3) - ^ (一樣的就不提了)
00:12:875 (x) - 其實可以塞break
00:27:870 (x) - ^
00:46:738 (4) - 能和(2)平行嗎
00:55:644 (4) - nc
01:42:284 (3) - 轉S:C2有啥意義
01:42:988 (1) - 去nc

排版啥的都很好 :D

[Hard]
00:25:409 (7,8) - 怎麼看都覺得太近 雖然spacing沒有問題但醜啊~_~建議遠點
00:35:488 (1) - (建議) 可以放遠一點變一個跳
00:40:409 (1,2) - 跟前面一樣 把(1)往右邊一格如何? (gird level4)
00:45:331 (2,3) - (吐槽) 很突然的跳呢ww
01:04:081 (3) - 感覺應該要放的更遠
01:12:284 (1) - 對齊(8)
01:35:722 (6,7,8,9,10) - spacing要統一啊

非常好的圖喔 :D 加油 !
arien666
[General]
00:14:863 - I wonder why this red line exists... I don't know what's the difference for second part... Just delete this red line? If you delete this line, make sure there's no unsnapped notes :3

[Hard]
00:50:488 (1,2) - This spacing is shorter than others on same color orz
01:40:409 (4) - meow since return mark covers next note :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345145



meow :3
Topic Starter
Midasmens

arken1015 wrote:

[General]
00:14:863 - I wonder why this red line exists... I don't know what's the difference for second part... Just delete this red line? If you delete this line, make sure there's no unsnapped notes :3 The rule says that "All uninherited sections must be on the downbeat of the measure." >< So I think it must be a red line here.

[Hard]
00:50:488 (1,2) - This spacing is shorter than others on same color orz fix~
01:40:409 (4) - meow since return mark covers next note :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345145 Nice idea fix~



meow :3
Thanks~ Mod
Need bubble >.<
meow~ X3
Minty Gum
Wow... such pretty map. It looks very nice with that background and the storyboard. I love this song, I hope to see it ranked. No stars, but good luck :D
Topic Starter
Midasmens

Minty Gum wrote:

Wow... such pretty map. It looks very nice with that background and the storyboard. I love this song, I hope to see it ranked. No stars, but good luck :D
Thanks~ :3
Kenezz
Mimu u3u
Kenezz's Bakamod~

[General]
01:29:863 - The kiai time should be end here 01:29:863 (in a downbeat).

[Easy]
00:06:898 (1) - This slider should be start 1/1 before (just check the track), ok then move this slider 1/1 backward and shorten by 1/2, now add a circle in 00:07:836. http://puu.sh/CpL1
00:12:992 (1) - Check the end of this spinner is unsnapped.
00:57:988 (4) - The circle sound too off because you follow the vocal before and in this part the vocal stay in a red tick, My Solution: remove this circle and add a 1/2 slider in 00:57:753. http://puu.sh/CpQf Optional: add a repeat to follow the cute rhythm of the track. http://puu.sh/CpRP
01:15:800 - Add a circle here

[Normal]
00:06:429 (1) - Maybe remove the new combo, is too short.
00:09:476 (1) - Remove the new combo to be consistent with the before pattern 00:01:976 (5).
00:50:956 (4) - Imo the slider is needless, don't follow the voice or the track, [url]My Sugestion[/url]: remove this slider and add a 1/2 repeat slider in 00:51:425. http://puu.sh/Cq2H
00:55:644 (4) - The slider should be start 1/2 (red tick) before to follow properly the voice, considers move it.
01:33:144 (6) - Hmm this could be best because here the clap stay in the blue tick 01:33:027, My Sugestion: remove this slider and a repeat of 01:31:972 (5), now add a 3/4 slider in 01:32:675, finally add a circle in 01:33:613. http://puu.sh/Cq8a
01:40:644 (6) - Same as before here.

[Hard]
-Maybe OD+1
00:18:613 (6) - The new combo should be start here like 00:22:363.
00:26:113 (9) - Same as before.
01:18:027 (7) - Not is my case but this circle in that blue tick could be are a bit confusing because you use in all the diff two circles in parts like this, 00:39:472 (6), 00:47:909 (4), 01:25:409 (7), etc., then considers add a cirlce here 01:17:909.
01:41:581 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - These combos are too short, maybe remove the new como here 01:42:284 (1) or here 01:42:988 (4). If you remove the new combo of 01:42:988 (4), be consistent and remove the same new combo of the [Normal] diff.

I hope to helps you
Good luck~
Fuuko
Just a Mimu fanboy making a quick appearance.

Change the source to DATEKEN, since he's the producer of the song.
The song's title is *tear*, the t isn't capitalized.

*flies away*

Oh, and obviously, do not kudosu this post.
Topic Starter
Midasmens

Kenezz wrote:

Mimu u3u
Kenezz's Bakamod~ lol

[General]
01:29:863 - The kiai time should be end here 01:29:863 (in a downbeat). fix~

[Easy]
00:06:898 (1) - This slider should be start 1/1 before (just check the track), ok then move this slider 1/1 backward and shorten by 1/2, now add a circle in 00:07:836. http://puu.sh/CpL1 fix~
00:12:992 (1) - Check the end of this spinner is unsnapped. fix~
00:57:988 (4) - The circle sound too off because you follow the vocal before and in this part the vocal stay in a red tick, My Solution: remove this circle and add a 1/2 slider in 00:57:753. http://puu.sh/CpQf Optional: add a repeat to follow the cute rhythm of the track. http://puu.sh/CpRP fix~
01:15:800 - Add a circle here X
[Normal]
00:06:429 (1) - Maybe remove the new combo, is too short. fix~
00:09:476 (1) - Remove the new combo to be consistent with the before pattern 00:01:976 (5). fix~
00:50:956 (4) - Imo the slider is needless, don't follow the voice or the track, [url]My Sugestion[/url]: remove this slider and add a 1/2 repeat slider in 00:51:425. http://puu.sh/Cq2H I think it's ok~
00:55:644 (4) - The slider should be start 1/2 (red tick) before to follow properly the voice, considers move it. um...no change
01:33:144 (6) - Hmm this could be best because here the clap stay in the blue tick 01:33:027, My Sugestion: remove this slider and a repeat of 01:31:972 (5), now add a 3/4 slider in 01:32:675, finally add a circle in 01:33:613. http://puu.sh/Cq8a fix~
01:40:644 (6) - Same as before here. fix~

[Hard]
-Maybe OD+1 fix~
00:18:613 (6) - The new combo should be start here like 00:22:363. fix~
00:26:113 (9) - Same as before. fix~
01:18:027 (7) - Not is my case but this circle in that blue tick could be are a bit confusing because you use in all the diff two circles in parts like this, 00:39:472 (6), 00:47:909 (4), 01:25:409 (7), etc., then considers add a cirlce here 01:17:909. It's ok~ imo.
01:41:581 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - These combos are too short, maybe remove the new como here 01:42:284 (1) or here 01:42:988 (4). If you remove the new combo of 01:42:988 (4), be consistent and remove the same new combo of the [Normal] diff. fix~

I hope to helps you
Good luck~
Thank you so much~ It's so helpful for me!!
Hope you can do a recheck~ X3

Fuuko wrote:

Just a Mimu fanboy making a quick appearance.

Change the source to DATEKEN, since he's the producer of the song. added~ thanks
The song's title is *tear*, the t isn't capitalized. I find the rank map title is *Tear* so no change 0.0

*flies away*

Oh, and obviously, do not kudosu this post.
Thanks~
Fuuko
Uh, I'm the mapper of the ranked version, and at the time I didn't realize the t wasn't capitalized. Took me some research on DATEKEN's works to find that out.
Even in the video you can notice it, on the first seconds.
lovhin456
Hello, sorry for the huge delay

[General]
- Change the title as Fuuko points out the correct one is *tear* with the not capitalized t
- Try these colors ?
[code]Combo1 : 36,89,155
Combo2 : 220,126,150
Combo3 : 150,98,179
[/combo]
[Easy]
- I'm going to focus on the looks of the diff because as far as I see the diff itself is fine
- 00:00:336 (1,2) ~ Place like this http://puu.sh/CIq3 this way it will look better and give a better feeling
- 00:04:086 (3,4) ~ Then to follow my previous suggestion, placing these notes like this http://puu.sh/CIqW would be nice. Also new combo on (3) maybe ?
- 00:07:836 ~ New combo
- 00:08:773 (3,4,5) ~ This would look better imo http://puu.sh/CItW
- 00:27:988 ~ Maybe lower the volume of this note to 20% ?
- 01:09:238 (2,4) ~ Remove whistle otherwise there are too many whistles which sound kinda bad
- You could do much better with the formations, right now it's just ok

[Normal]
- 00:01:976 ~ New combo
- 00:09:476 ~ ^
- 00:55:409 ~ Add a note
- 01:12:050 ~ I think that removing a repeat and moving this to the next red tick then adding a note here would be way better, it suits the music more imo
- 01:25:644 ~ New combo ?

[Hard]
- 00:48:144 ~ Add a note ?
- 01:20:488 ~ New combo

I can't say that this is ready yet, I think you should get more mods
Topic Starter
Midasmens

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello, sorry for the huge delay

[General]
- Change the title as Fuuko points out the correct one is *tear* with the not capitalized t alright
- Try these colors ? pretty nice than I set~ so use it X3
[code]Combo1 : 36,89,155
Combo2 : 220,126,150
Combo3 : 150,98,179
[/combo]
[Easy]
- I'm going to focus on the looks of the diff because as far as I see the diff itself is fine
- 00:00:336 (1,2) ~ Place like this http://puu.sh/CIq3 this way it will look better and give a better feeling X I don't want to map like that
- 00:04:086 (3,4) ~ Then to follow my previous suggestion, placing these notes like this http://puu.sh/CIqW would be nice. Also new combo on (3) maybe ? X
- 00:07:836 ~ New combo fix~
- 00:08:773 (3,4,5) ~ This would look better imo http://puu.sh/CItW X
- 00:27:988 ~ Maybe lower the volume of this note to 20% ? ok~
- 01:09:238 (2,4) ~ Remove whistle otherwise there are too many whistles which sound kinda bad fix~
- You could do much better with the formations, right now it's just ok

[Normal]
- 00:01:976 ~ New combo no~
- 00:09:476 ~ ^ no~
- 00:55:409 ~ Add a note no~
- 01:12:050 ~ I think that removing a repeat and moving this to the next red tick then adding a note here would be way better, it suits the music more imo great~ fix
- 01:25:644 ~ New combo ? no~

[Hard]
- 00:48:144 ~ Add a note ? I follow the beat not vocal. no change
- 01:20:488 ~ New combo no~

I can't say that this is ready yet, I think you should get more mods :?
Thanks~ Mod :D
Evil_Twilight
[Hrad]
00:14:164 (1) - 這前面的音效可以拿掉,20%幾乎聽不太到。真的要加音效的話把音量條大一些,建議用內建的whistle
00:18:378 (5) - 拿掉whistle ?
00:28:222 (1,2,3) - 讓這三顆小聲一點
00:31:269 (5) - 拿掉whistle ? 下在這邊聽起來怪怪的
00:39:941 (7) - 加whistle
00:55:409 (1) - 頭尾拿掉whistle
00:59:628 ~ 01:12:988 的音量可以條小一點
01:21:659 (1) - 拿掉whistle
01:31:738 (1) - 我覺得這顆跳得有點遠
01:33:378 (5) - 拿掉whistle
01:40:878 (5) - ^

[Normal]
00:14:863 (1) - 這前面的音效可以拿掉,20%幾乎聽不太到。真的要加音效的話把音量條大一些,建議用內建的whistle
00:15:331 (2) - 拿掉whistle
00:18:378 (5) - ^
00:22:831 (1) - ^
00:50:956 (4) - ^
01:20:956 (5) - ^
01:37:128 (1) - ^
01:42:284 (3) - 加whistle ?

[Easy]
01:06:894 (5) - 拿掉whistle
01:15:800 (x) - 加顆note ?

我覺得有些whistle下的地方不是很好
聽起來像硬塞的感覺。゚(゚′ω‵゚)゚。
Topic Starter
Midasmens
SPOILER

Evil_Twilight wrote:

[Hrad]
00:14:164 (1) - 這前面的音效可以拿掉,20%幾乎聽不太到。真的要加音效的話把音量條大一些,建議用內建的whistle X
00:18:378 (5) - 拿掉whistle ? X
00:28:222 (1,2,3) - 讓這三顆小聲一點 ok~
00:31:269 (5) - 拿掉whistle ? 下在這邊聽起來怪怪的 X
00:39:941 (7) - 加whistle ok~
00:55:409 (1) - 頭尾拿掉whistle X
00:59:628 ~ 01:12:988 的音量可以條小一點 ok~
01:21:659 (1) - 拿掉whistle X
01:31:738 (1) - 我覺得這顆跳得有點遠 唔....之前還有比這個跳的更遠的說~~ >.<
01:33:378 (5) - 拿掉whistle X
01:40:878 (5) - ^ X

[Normal]
00:14:863 (1) - 這前面的音效可以拿掉,20%幾乎聽不太到。真的要加音效的話把音量條大一些,建議用內建的whistle X
00:15:331 (2) - 拿掉whistle X
00:18:378 (5) - ^ X
00:22:831 (1) - ^ X
00:50:956 (4) - ^ X
01:20:956 (5) - ^ X
01:37:128 (1) - ^ X
01:42:284 (3) - 加whistle ? ok~

[Easy]
01:06:894 (5) - 拿掉whistle ok~
01:15:800 (x) - 加顆note ? X

我覺得有些whistle下的地方不是很好
聽起來像硬塞的感覺。゚(゚′ω‵゚)゚。

感谢Mod~~
Yume_old_old
Plz remove the Short Ver from the title list >.< it's new rule~

no kd~
Topic Starter
Midasmens

Yume wrote:

Plz remove the Short Ver from the title list >.< it's new rule~

no kd~
Thanks~ >.<
-Baby Strawberry-
mod~!

Hard
SPOILER
整体没什么问题,我就说说形状之类的吧
00:04:789 (3) - 这个我觉得有点生硬。可以改一改如果你想的话【我osu出什么问题了我也不知道,点一个白色点都能出直角拐弯,奇了怪了,所以不能上图了】
00:06:429 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个的形状吧也不大好看其实。。。开着DS摆的稍微整齐一点就会好很多
整体感觉摆放有点直,挺柔美的曲子感觉还是弯弯的才好。个人见解啦,你的风格也是不错的~!

normal
SPOILER
01:36:425这里需要加点东西比如circle

easy
SPOILER
00:15:800加东西~
怎么说呢,中规中矩,但是没什么自己的风格,不过对新人mapper来说已经相当不错了,星星支持~!
Topic Starter
Midasmens

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

mod~!

Hard
SPOILER
整体没什么问题,我就说说形状之类的吧
00:04:789 (3) - 这个我觉得有点生硬。可以改一改如果你想的话【我osu出什么问题了我也不知道,点一个白色点都能出直角拐弯,奇了怪了,所以不能上图了】
00:06:429 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个的形状吧也不大好看其实。。。开着DS摆的稍微整齐一点就会好很多
整体感觉摆放有点直,挺柔美的曲子感觉还是弯弯的才好。个人见解啦,你的风格也是不错的~!

normal
SPOILER
01:36:425这里需要加点东西比如circle

easy
SPOILER
00:15:800加东西~
怎么说呢,中规中矩,但是没什么自己的风格,不过对新人mapper来说已经相当不错了,星星支持~!
感謝Mod~ & Star! ;)
DarknessAngel
request from in-game ~ :)




Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice



StoryBoard

  1. 歌詞好像都延遲了些 ... 歌手唱了之後才出現 ... 一般不是提早出現麼
    由於FADE(淡入)的效果,應該要把整個部分提前好幾秒的,要不然就會變成上述那樣
  2. 01:07:597 ~ 01:13:925 - 這裡的歌詞一下就消失了要給誰看啊/.\
    嘛,雖然可讀但是如果在遊戲中就堪稱不可能了啊/.\
  3. 歌詞的效果的想法很好,就是上述那些可惜了點lol

Hard

  1. 強烈建議AR7或6;HP5;OD5或6,原有設定值無疑太高,這難度本身也不難,所以很不適合
  2. 00:28:222 (1,2) - ctrl + R。00:27:519 (4,1)之間的間距有些小了(將近1/2拍的間距),這麼做能拉大一些
  3. 00:36:425 (7) - 移到(240,224)才會是在00:35:722 (2,3,4,5,6)的正中間
  4. 00:45:800 (3) - 沒意義的大跳,而且夠坑,nonono
    間距拉小點,像這樣 ? 做個對稱也美觀點
  5. 00:51:425 (1) - 這轉盤對Hard來說太短了 ... auto才勉強轉出個3000
    把它換成00:50:488 (1,2,3,4,5)相同的節奏,00:52:363再補個note這樣
  6. 01:12:988 (1) - 換成5個notes好多了 ... 還能跳一下呢 ...
    說真的這短spinner還不如不存在,我差點轉個100出來orz
    後面若還有我就不挑了,自行考量啊
  7. 01:18:027 (7) - 這節奏稍微難掌握了。如果是我,我會在01:18:144加個note跟人聲
    然後把01:17:675 (6,7,1)之間的間距都調成一樣
  8. 01:32:909 (4) - 因為你前面用了個折返3次的短slider,後面那個卻用個1折返
    這對「玩得起」這難度的人來說,有些難判斷了點;對技術強點的人來說,也有點不舒適
    所以把這個換成3連我覺得會好點
  9. 01:40:409 (4) - 同上
  10. 唔...我看不出妳NC想要跟什麼耶,歌詞也不是,重音也不是/.\
  11. 音效方面我的想法跟妳完全不同呢,我覺得多用預設的2種whistle會有不錯的效果,但你的也不錯就是了:3


Normal



  • 關於這diff,我就提幾點我認為重要的
  1. 00:02:211 (6,7) - 折返2次後馬上接著1/2 slider,這對新手來說相當棘手,normal難度別這麼放
  2. 空著的地方盡量用slider帶過,這是簡單難度的慣例模式,像00:06:429 (5,1,2,3,4)
    如果只用幾個note填充,不是不行,就是感覺不好打,這種情形在我玩2009年的圖看到挺多
    但是大空檔當然就不用裡它了 ~
  3. 這難度多次出現1/2拍和1/4拍的重疊,如果真要重疊就選擇其一,不要兩個一起用,會讓新手confused
    EX : 00:27:519 (3,4) and 00:44:863 (1,2)
  4. 00:44:159 and 00:44:394 - 這兩個明顯的音還是別空著好,slider連接建議

Easy

  1. 相較之下這diff好多了,我看不出什麼大問題(嘛,也許是我不擅長mod Easy)
    就是這難度有些太簡單了,BPM也才128,白線上可以再填多點,偶爾紅線也無訪
    因為你這難度跟normal之間難度跳躍太大
    然後Hard和Normal又過於接近
    導致diff spread挺差的,這點也要注意一下


大致上就這樣了 ~
有什麼問題in-game密我
加油!
Topic Starter
Midasmens
SPOILER

DarknessAngel wrote:

request from in-game ~ :)




Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice



StoryBoard

  1. 歌詞好像都延遲了些 ... 歌手唱了之後才出現 ... 一般不是提早出現麼
    由於FADE(淡入)的效果,應該要把整個部分提前好幾秒的,要不然就會變成上述那樣
  2. 01:07:597 ~ 01:13:925 - 這裡的歌詞一下就消失了要給誰看啊/.\
    嘛,雖然可讀但是如果在遊戲中就堪稱不可能了啊/.\
  3. 歌詞的效果的想法很好,就是上述那些可惜了點lol

Hard

  1. 強烈建議AR7或6;HP5;OD5或6,原有設定值無疑太高,這難度本身也不難,所以很不適合
  2. 00:28:222 (1,2) - ctrl + R。00:27:519 (4,1)之間的間距有些小了(將近1/2拍的間距),這麼做能拉大一些
  3. 00:36:425 (7) - 移到(240,224)才會是在00:35:722 (2,3,4,5,6)的正中間
  4. 00:45:800 (3) - 沒意義的大跳,而且夠坑,nonono
    間距拉小點,像這樣 ? 做個對稱也美觀點
  5. 00:51:425 (1) - 這轉盤對Hard來說太短了 ... auto才勉強轉出個3000
    把它換成00:50:488 (1,2,3,4,5)相同的節奏,00:52:363再補個note這樣
  6. 01:12:988 (1) - 換成5個notes好多了 ... 還能跳一下呢 ...
    說真的這短spinner還不如不存在,我差點轉個100出來orz
    後面若還有我就不挑了,自行考量啊
  7. 01:18:027 (7) - 這節奏稍微難掌握了。如果是我,我會在01:18:144加個note跟人聲
    然後把01:17:675 (6,7,1)之間的間距都調成一樣
  8. 01:32:909 (4) - 因為你前面用了個折返3次的短slider,後面那個卻用個1折返
    這對「玩得起」這難度的人來說,有些難判斷了點;對技術強點的人來說,也有點不舒適
    所以把這個換成3連我覺得會好點
  9. 01:40:409 (4) - 同上
  10. 唔...我看不出妳NC想要跟什麼耶,歌詞也不是,重音也不是/.\
  11. 音效方面我的想法跟妳完全不同呢,我覺得多用預設的2種whistle會有不錯的效果,但你的也不錯就是了:3


Normal



  • 關於這diff,我就提幾點我認為重要的
  1. 00:02:211 (6,7) - 折返2次後馬上接著1/2 slider,這對新手來說相當棘手,normal難度別這麼放
  2. 空著的地方盡量用slider帶過,這是簡單難度的慣例模式,像00:06:429 (5,1,2,3,4)
    如果只用幾個note填充,不是不行,就是感覺不好打,這種情形在我玩2009年的圖看到挺多
    但是大空檔當然就不用裡它了 ~
  3. 這難度多次出現1/2拍和1/4拍的重疊,如果真要重疊就選擇其一,不要兩個一起用,會讓新手confused
    EX : 00:27:519 (3,4) and 00:44:863 (1,2)
  4. 00:44:159 and 00:44:394 - 這兩個明顯的音還是別空著好,slider連接建議

Easy

  1. 相較之下這diff好多了,我看不出什麼大問題(嘛,也許是我不擅長mod Easy)
    就是這難度有些太簡單了,BPM也才128,白線上可以再填多點,偶爾紅線也無訪
    因為你這難度跟normal之間難度跳躍太大
    然後Hard和Normal又過於接近
    導致diff spread挺差的,這點也要注意一下


大致上就這樣了 ~
有什麼問題in-game密我
加油!

Fix many thing on Hard
Update StoryBoard
Thanks~ Mod :)
alacat
Hi :3 from my queue.
Sorry for the delay.


[General]
●delete to "Mimu - Tear (Short ver.) (Midasmens).osb" file ? Is this necessary?

[Easy]
●00:07:836 (1) - add whistle
●00:12:992 (1) - it doesn't follow the music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.like this?→http://puu.sh/GLxM
●00:15:800 - add note? and add clap.
●00:18:613 (2,3) - not stack better imo
●00:22:363 (1) - spacing too close (1.10x) it is better to use DS0.8x
●00:42:988 (4,5) - same, above
●01:05:488 (4) - delete note? it doesn't follow the Lyrics. 01:03:613 (3) - add reverse? follow the Lyrics imo o.o
●01:06:425 (5) - remove whistle on the slider's reverse.

[Normal]
●00:55:644 (4) - add clap on the slider's end ?
●01:01:972 (3) - like this? http://puu.sh/GLL5
●01:05:722 (3) - ^
●01:11:113 (5) - add new combo

[Hard]
●00:06:898 (3,4) - sorry for my nazi mod. like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/364851
●01:11:347 - add note?

nice diff :3

good song and good map!

gl~
Topic Starter
Midasmens
SPOILER

alacat wrote:

Hi :3 from my queue.
Sorry for the delay.


[General]
●delete to "Mimu - Tear (Short ver.) (Midasmens).osb" file ? Is this necessary?

[Easy]
●00:07:836 (1) - add whistle
●00:12:992 (1) - it doesn't follow the music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.like this?→http://puu.sh/GLxM
●00:15:800 - add note? and add clap.
●00:18:613 (2,3) - not stack better imo
●00:22:363 (1) - spacing too close (1.10x) it is better to use DS0.8x
●00:42:988 (4,5) - same, above
●01:05:488 (4) - delete note? it doesn't follow the Lyrics. 01:03:613 (3) - add reverse? follow the Lyrics imo o.o
●01:06:425 (5) - remove whistle on the slider's reverse.

[Normal]
●00:55:644 (4) - add clap on the slider's end ?
●01:01:972 (3) - like this? http://puu.sh/GLL5
●01:05:722 (3) - ^
●01:11:113 (5) - add new combo

[Hard]
●00:06:898 (3,4) - sorry for my nazi mod. like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/364851
●01:11:347 - add note?

nice diff :3

good song and good map!

gl~

Fix~ Easy & Normal
Thanks~ Mod :3
S h i a
[Overall]
cool. 排列。。恩。。。
mod精力集中在Hitsounds 我觉得整体hitsounds 音量偏小了点?




[Easy]

00:27:988 (4) - sc2 whistle here?
00:35:488 (5) - 加个Finish在slider头?
01:12:050 (1) - 从这里到01:15:800 作为KIAI开始 而且是比较精彩的转接部分。虽然是EASY但一个spinner就带过还是略显的不够完善呐。




[Normal]

00:17:675 (5) - slider尾换成finish你觉得怎样?
00:54:238 (3) - finish加在最开头
01:12:284 (3) - 折返加whistle
01:12:988 (1) - Normal这里可以尝试Map而不是用spinner了呀


[Hard]

00:21:425 (6) - 倒数第一和第三的地方加finish?
00:24:589 (2) - Add finish plz
00:38:300 (4) - whistle?
01:17:675 (6,7) - 合并为slider吧。 做为Relax的hard没必要出现这样的Note组合
01:31:972 (2) - 最后改为finish符合一些

Nicely done.
Topic Starter
Midasmens

S h i a wrote:

[Overall]
cool. 排列。。恩。。。
mod精力集中在Hitsounds 我觉得整体hitsounds 音量偏小了点?




[Easy]

00:27:988 (4) - sc2 whistle here? fix~
00:35:488 (5) - 加个Finish在slider头?fix~
01:12:050 (1) - 从这里到01:15:800 作为KIAI开始 而且是比较精彩的转接部分。虽然是EASY但一个spinner就带过还是略显的不够完善呐。感覺要和別的難度協調~~這裡就放了Spinner :3




[Normal]

00:17:675 (5) - slider尾换成finish你觉得怎样? fix~
00:54:238 (3) - finish加在最开头 fix~
01:12:284 (3) - 折返加whistle fix~
01:12:988 (1) - Normal这里可以尝试Map而不是用spinner了呀 同上~


[Hard]

00:21:425 (6) - 倒数第一和第三的地方加finish? 感覺不錯呢~~好棒! fix~
00:24:589 (2) - Add finish plz fix~
00:38:300 (4) - whistle? fix~
01:17:675 (6,7) - 合并为slider吧。 做为Relax的hard没必要出现这样的Note组合 fix~
01:31:972 (2) - 最后改为finish符合一些 fix~

Nicely done.
感謝音效大師S h i a大大的幫助~~ ;)
Cygnus
hi Midasmens! I guess your map is awesome so lemme do you a full mod ^^ I would love to see a reason if you do not agree with my suggestions.

Easy
  1. 00:04:086 (3) - I prefer a new combo for this one. If you follow this suggestion, please remove the new combo on 00:06:429 (1).

  2. 00:08:773 (2) - This slider is not symmetrical. Move 2nd point one grid right and one up then move 3rd point one grid up so that it's on the center.

Normal
  1. 01:05:722 (3) - This kick slider feels out of place. I highly suggest you follow the vocals here instead of the music itself.

  2. 01:25:644 (5) - I think a new combo should be marked here so the combo won't reach up to 7. 7 is too long i believe for a Normal Diff.

  3. 01:36:659 (1) - I think a new combo here is not necessary. I'll remove it if I were you.

  4. 01:42:988 (4) - This note is overlapping with the previous slider. Please try to avoid this one for better gameplay.

Hard
  1. 00:06:429 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - Why is the spacing here suddenly becomes 1.0 from 1.2?

  2. 00:14:164 (1,2) - Too hard for a Hard Diff. I suggest use x2.0 spacing instead.

  3. 00:30:331 (2,5) - These sliders overlap a little. Try to avoid this one please.

  4. 00:34:784 (1) - I'll remove this new combo if I were you to maintain the combo count.

  5. 00:39:472 (6) - This slider doesn't fit with the music at all. Please replace this one with a 1/2 slider instead. Don't forget to maintain your spacing.

  6. 00:44:628 (1,2,3) - This part is completely unreadable. At least try to make the spacing consistent here so players won't be confused.

  7. 00:51:425 (1) - I don't think this is a good place to place a spinner. Please map this section instead.

  8. 00:54:003 (3,4,5) - Watch your spacing here too. Make them consistent.

  9. 01:10:644 (7) - A new combo fits this note in my opinion. If you followed this one, please remove the new combo on 01:12:284 (1).

  10. 01:12:988 (1) - This spinner is just too short. I would highly suggest you map this section instead.

  11. 01:21:659 (1,2,3,4) - I think this little curve pattern could still be improved. Just try moving 2 and 3 and I think it'll be good now.

  12. 01:42:753 (3,4) - Move 3 one grid up and a grid more to the right then move 4 one grid up to maintain a symmetrical pattern.

End of my Mod | Nice map! (: Call me back for a little recheck ^^
pieguyn
hi there ;)

General:

-umm, I'm fairly sure you can't put SBer's name in tags :? maybe I'm wrong though..

Easy:

00:15:800 - add note?
01:15:800 - add note?

Normal:

00:00:336 (1,3) - hm, I think regular soft whistle would sound nice here... and you also used it at the end. perhaps try it?
00:04:086 (1,3) - ^
00:07:836 (1,3) - ^
00:11:586 (1,4) - ^
00:55:409 - add note?

Hard:

00:00:336 (1,3) ~ 00:11:586 (1,4) - same as Normal
00:41:581 (4) - add whistle on start?
01:12:519 (2) - add whistle?
01:21:894 (2) - maybe add whistle here?

nice map, good luck =w=
Topic Starter
Midasmens
SPOILER

Philippines wrote:

hi Midasmens! I guess your map is awesome so lemme do you a full mod ^^ I would love to see a reason if you do not agree with my suggestions.

Easy
  1. 00:04:086 (3) - I prefer a new combo for this one. If you follow this suggestion, please remove the new combo on 00:06:429 (1).

  2. 00:08:773 (2) - This slider is not symmetrical. Move 2nd point one grid right and one up then move 3rd point one grid up so that it's on the center. fix~

Normal
  1. 01:05:722 (3) - This kick slider feels out of place. I highly suggest you follow the vocals here instead of the music itself.

  2. 01:25:644 (5) - I think a new combo should be marked here so the combo won't reach up to 7. 7 is too long i believe for a Normal Diff.

  3. 01:36:659 (1) - I think a new combo here is not necessary. I'll remove it if I were you.

  4. 01:42:988 (4) - This note is overlapping with the previous slider. Please try to avoid this one for better gameplay.

Hard
  1. 00:06:429 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - Why is the spacing here suddenly becomes 1.0 from 1.2?

  2. 00:14:164 (1,2) - Too hard for a Hard Diff. I suggest use x2.0 spacing instead.

  3. 00:30:331 (2,5) - These sliders overlap a little. Try to avoid this one please.

  4. 00:34:784 (1) - I'll remove this new combo if I were you to maintain the combo count.

  5. 00:39:472 (6) - This slider doesn't fit with the music at all. Please replace this one with a 1/2 slider instead. Don't forget to maintain your spacing.

  6. 00:44:628 (1,2,3) - This part is completely unreadable. At least try to make the spacing consistent here so players won't be confused.

  7. 00:51:425 (1) - I don't think this is a good place to place a spinner. Please map this section instead.

  8. 00:54:003 (3,4,5) - Watch your spacing here too. Make them consistent.

  9. 01:10:644 (7) - A new combo fits this note in my opinion. If you followed this one, please remove the new combo on 01:12:284 (1).

  10. 01:12:988 (1) - This spinner is just too short. I would highly suggest you map this section instead.

  11. 01:21:659 (1,2,3,4) - I think this little curve pattern could still be improved. Just try moving 2 and 3 and I think it'll be good now.

  12. 01:42:753 (3,4) - Move 3 one grid up and a grid more to the right then move 4 one grid up to maintain a symmetrical pattern. fix~

End of my Mod | Nice map! (: Call me back for a little recheck ^^

SPOILER

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there ;)

General:

-umm, I'm fairly sure you can't put SBer's name in tags :? maybe I'm wrong though..

Easy:

00:15:800 - add note?
01:15:800 - add note?

Normal:

00:00:336 (1,3) - hm, I think regular soft whistle would sound nice here... and you also used it at the end. perhaps try it?
00:04:086 (1,3) - ^
00:07:836 (1,3) - ^
00:11:586 (1,4) - ^
00:55:409 - add note?

Hard:

00:00:336 (1,3) ~ 00:11:586 (1,4) - same as Normal
00:41:581 (4) - add whistle on start?
01:12:519 (2) - add whistle?
01:21:894 (2) - maybe add whistle here?

nice map, good luck =w= hitsound fix~ Thanks

Thanks~ Mod :)
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