Chewin wrote:

[Scorpiour]

00:10:133 This missed sound could be confusing çç add a circle?
choose to add a slider here for completeness of vocal :>

00:34:049 (6) - 1 grid right for 1.22x spacing consistency okay
00:34:469 (1,2,3) - I'd avoid this antijump :\ It breaks the flow. What about to move these elements in this way? I think it'd be much better

SPOILER

432,308,34469,5,0
432,308,34574,1,0
432,308,34679,2,0,B|428:268|398:248,1,72,8|0

should say it's better than mine , accept~~~ not very same to yours (due to the direction of music) but based on that :>

00:51:042 (1) - Finish with 50% volume would be perfect here, to fit cymbals of the song ahh.. seems forget the finish here >_< add it and also adjust 00:44:329 (1) - 02:08:245 (1) - & 02:14:958 (1) -
00:56:497 (2) - Remove this clap, it fits nothing and it sounds really bad imho i think it's okay because 1. here's a stress of vocal, 2. keep the hitsound consistant :>
00:57:755 (1) - Same of Normal it's okay
01:41:182 (8) - Mh overlap with 01:40:553 (5)? oh.....it's intended pattern... sorry no change
01:48:105 (1) - Finish fixed
02:10:133 (1,2,3) - Whisles on these circles? They would sound good imo nice~~
02:20:413 (2) - Same of 00:56:497 (2)
02:21:672 (1) - Same of 00:57:755 (1) same :>
03:17:056 (3) - Finish on this slider's start to keep consistency with 03:16:217 (3)? here has a finish already >.<
03:18:734 (1) - Same of Same of 00:57:755 (1) fixed~~
Nice diff scorpiour :3 thanks =v=

Chewin wrote:

[Collab]
02:09:923 (1) - You should use this rhythm to fit the vocal sound:

02:13:280 (1) - ^

- Still confirm using melody synced
02:21:672 (1) - Same of 00:57:755 (1)
03:18:734 (1) - ^
- Current pattern sounds better for me