Envi wrote:

speed mod

LOL

and ...

this guy...

Insane

rage!

this is not insane, this is hard mapset lol

1. use AR/OD+1 for this diff, waaay more fun that way no
2. 04:00:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why you not using N:C2 for this part? i think it was much better since the rest of the end part of the song are mostly bass voice.
   if you wanna keep that, at least make the 04:03:795 (1,2,3,4,5) with N:C2 too since they were in the same beats pacing and this part i will keep a different hit sound in this part, nothing changes04:10:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are also using N:C2 :3
3. 04:07:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same reason as above

k, i think that's it for now, since i just saw it at a glance :3
long live zeroclover with your superflow diff \o/

EDIT: maybe i'll help you to find a better encoded video later, this one are really have low quality orz if you can do it, dont give filesize above 10mb, it eat your hdd so much

wingman_dw wrote:

Hello~ from #modreqs

source "VRUSH UP!".....? wow ! its newest remix album
i got this song from genjitsu aesop

[Jumping]
00:13:653 (4,5) - this spacing annoy me... fix
02:04:653 (4) - add NC. same as 00:42:368 (1,2,3) fix
02:15:153 (1) - remove NC and 02:15:582 NC. follow your pattern fix
02:36:796 (4) - delete circle? nope
03:13:010 (1) - fix spacing or delete this nope, tricky jump part

GL~ nice mod

SPOILER

193,240,10010,2,0,B|224:207|281:198,1,90,8|0
272,200,10653,1,0
112,288,10868,1,2
273,292,11082,1,8
112,200,11296,1,0
192,332,11510,1,0
192,152,11725,2,0,B|172:112|128:92,1,90,8|0
192,240,12153,6,0,B|280:204|368:228,1,180,0|8

Gabe wrote:

Mod 4 Mod.

Instead of Jumping, you could change the difficulty title to Excited or something that match with Relax. Or even, replace Relax by Walking.

Unrankable/Issues
Important thing to fix
Suggestion

General
Everything looks great. The only thing you may look at it's the Kiai time, there's an inconsistency here. But it's not something unrankable, I guess. So if you want to take a look on it :

fixed some kiai time

Relax

New combos
00:03:582 - Add a new combo here as I mentionned on Jumping, it will fits with the song itself.
00:07:010 - New combo
00:10:439 - New combo
too sudden

Circle emplacement
03:48:153 (2) - Add a new combo here to prevent a spiner bug.
00:36:153 (1,2,3,4,5) - I had a little confusion while playing. Can you move these objects on the white tick instead of the red tick? It sounds weird and it's a bit hard for beginners. (Even If I am not a beginner, I got confused.)
fixed
00:07:010 (3,4) - You should replace these objects like this: like you did at 00:03:582
keep different flow, because combo colour
00:31:653 - You should align this slider with 00:30:796 (2) -
changed the pattern look

Jumping

New combos
00:03:796 - Add a new combo here. Having a 11 combos is long and it also match the song.
00:07:225 - Same as ^
00:10:653 - Same as ^^
00:14:082 - Same as ^^^
pink and red combo colour have a different flow

Circle emplacement
03:25:438 (5,6,1) - You should align these objects. All you have to do is to move (5) one grid at the left to be in the same x: axis. fix

Hitsounds
00:15:582 to 00:18:796 : It's better if you keep the consistency as you did for 00:18:796+. So :
00:15:582 - Delete the whistle.00:16:010 - Add a whistle00:16:439 - Delete the whistle00:16:868 - Add a whistle00:17:296 - Delete the whistle00:17:725 - Add a whistlefix whistle place

Or also, why don't you add claps like you did here? 01:37:868 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) -

because different flow, different hitsound sets

That's a pretty nice map, hope it gets Bubbled soon !
But, to get it bubbled you need 12 stars, so here's Stars!. Good luck!

1. Reducing Audio Lead-in to 500ms? i suppose it's enough due to the bpm is not high
2. Increase Stack Leniency to 5 (0.5) because the leniency between notes lower than 1/1 beat should be visible. So this is the lowest value of Stack Leniency you're allowed to choose.
3. The hit sounds is loud a bit i suppose...reduce approx 10% where you choose normal samples?
4. The combo colour 1&4 are not very clear with no-video.....
5. (nazi) I may choose Relaxing ~~ for consistence naming

1. 00:04:439 (6,7) - if it is possible, do not end a slider at downbeat -- especially the downbeat is the start of next bar~~so try to make here slider first and then note with a NC? emm...00:12:153 (1) - is perfect :>
2. 00:08:296 (5,1) - similar to above, note first and then slider with NC?
3. 00:55:439 (4) - another slider end at downbeat........ actually it is really just a suggestion which could improve your map i suppose~~...won't mention similar suggestions again~~
4. 00:57:153 (1,2) - maybe...stack? stack is not good, ignore that... but what i worry about is the difficulty...hmmmmm.....maybe confusing a bit for new players
5. 01:23:725 - i felt something my miss here and 01:23:939 -
6. 01:38:725 (1,3) - i should say... a slider with only three nods cannot blanket a note well with that length...u may need to add at least one more nod to make the slider shape more smooth~
   
   SPOILER

   
   01:44:725 (1) - is much better~
7. 02:05:296 (1,2,3) - try another beat here?
   
8. 02:36:796 (2) - move to next white tick (02:37:010 - ), more suitable i think~
9. 03:01:010 - because of slow speed, soft samples may be better ~~
10. 03:04:438 (1,2,3,4) - beats suggestion:
    
11. 03:51:581 - good break~~~
12. 04:01:438 (4,5,1) - difficulty issue...maybe a repeat slider?
13. 04:08:295 (4,5,1) - ^
14. 04:10:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

1. 00:17:082 - you may miss a note here?
2. 00:19:010 (1) - follow vocal like this?
   
3. 00:24:796 - add a note or something else?
4. 00:49:868 (1) - not very sure but the slidertrack is hidden by prev scoreburst...try to make this slider curved?
5. 00:52:010 (2) - ctrl+r for better flow?
6. 01:09:582 - i would like to leave a blank here for vocal~~but anyway~~up to u :>
   01:16:010 (2,4) - ctrl+r separately?
7. 01:37:868 (1,2,3,4) - hmm...i don't like the shape...try to make them more smooth?
8. 01:47:510 (6) - move to 200:320 ?
9. 01:47:939 (8,1) - er...this jmp is...unexpected....maybe...
10. 02:04:439 (3) - recommend to remove it~
11. 02:17:939 (4,1) - also an unexpected spacing....
12. 02:21:582 - leave a blank here?
    
13. 02:43:010 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a star shape or something similar?
14. 03:09:153 - you may miss a note :<
15. 03:09:581 (6) - and follow above, this could be remove ~

Scorpiour wrote:

Overall a good work for a new mapper, but in Jumping diff there may be too many 1/2 beats where u can make the rhythm more variously.

anyway, good luck with rank~~

zeroclover wrote:

My Map was SUCK and will NEVER get RANKED

Gabe wrote:

You must be kidding right?
Revive it!

zeroclover wrote:

go away
let my map rest in peace

just look map info, didnt you get it what it mean?