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[Approval, Standard + Taiko] SAVE THE QUEEN - EX-Termination

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lolcubes
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lolcubes
[Taiko]
02:19:542 (56,57,58) - kdd is usually harder to play, but okay it doesnt really sound bad.
02:21:299 (72,73,74) - I wouldn't agree on kdk for this one. That's a really advanced pattern and it complicates things because of 256 bpm and super intense part. Have you tried ddk or kkk here? Those would be better in my opinion.
02:30:557 (1) - Extend your spinner to here and remove this note. Spinners work differently on taiko so the things you hear in edit mode are completely different than to what's actually happening. That note alone complicates things because if a person ends the spinner too fast he will lose the rhythm.

I like how you handled the streams in standard.
No kd please.
Jenny
2,200 posts
Joined November 2010
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Jenny
Changed the thingies you suggested to:

  • 1.) kkd, suits better and is not any hard to play to me here
    2.) dkk, fits the vibe better imo
    3.) I extended the spin even a bit further since the ending point itself doesn't matter too hard but the point on where the spin gets completed in taiko (or in other words, "spincount") - now it ends 1/4 before the note that starts the next part but that sounds just right in taiko mode as by the amount of hits required to complete it.
Hope you agree on this.
lolcubes
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lolcubes
Okay lets see how this goes.
The taiko looks much better now.

Bubble #1.
Loctav
Popcorn Fairy
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Joined February 2009
Loctav
[Taiko Oni]

01:57:628 (4) - Unsnapped circle
01:57:980 (7) - ^
01:58:214 (8) - ^
02:10:753 (91) - ^
02:14:855 (22) - ^
02:25:753 (111) - ^
02:27:041 (123) - Unsnapped slider end
02:27:978 (124) - ^
02:28:916 (125) - ^

01:29:619 (153) - move to 1:29:502 as kat
01:56:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - do d k d kkk (x) D
02:21:298 (72,73,74) - ddk
This guitar solo is far beyond help:
02:19:541 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70) - d k k k d k k k d k k k d k k
02:21:298 (71,72,73,74,75,76) - kdd k k k
02:21:884 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - d kkk d d kkk
02:22:706 (86,87,88,89) - d d k k

Popped for messy guitar solo + unsnapped stuff. Call me back when fixed.
Jenny
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Jenny
Hope this fixed everything you were pointing out.
Loctav
Popcorn Fairy
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Loctav
Alright.

#1
Jenny
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Jenny
Isn't that #2 then? :<
Loctav
Popcorn Fairy
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Loctav
No. The bubble was popped for unrankable stuff.
fartownik
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Joined December 2008
fartownik
100th #1
Jenny
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Jenny
#1 -> #2 -> #pop -> #1 -> #pop -> #1 -> #pop -> ?
Loctav
Popcorn Fairy
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Loctav
Well, it's the #2 by him. I guess he tries to troll. Unsuccessfully, lol
Jenny
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Jenny
is it #yolo yet?
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
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Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
Thought so.
Ulysses
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Joined September 2010
Ulysses
Go now!Time to go!
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Yeah :D Go Go get ranked x3
Rizumu Tenshi
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Joined May 2011
Rizumu Tenshi
Nobody noticed the timing sections? Two of them make me feel like I want to delete them because they kinda ruin the rhythm

Here are the two:
00:38:292
01:32:666

That's all I can say for now. If you want to keep them, keep them, just pointing that out. Well, this is bubbled already, soo...?
Good luck on approving this. This is the REAL fun map :)
Jenny
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Jenny
...these timing sections are metronome resets and follow exactly what the song says <_<
also, how would they ruin any rhythm...
Cygnus
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Cygnus
Our hands will be ruined not the rhythm. :D
Tenacious J
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Joined September 2010
Tenacious J

Jenny wrote:

...these timing sections are metronome resets and follow exactly what the song says <_<
also, how would they ruin any rhythm...
They don't ruin the rhythm but are those metronome resets really necessary? You could've used inherited points instead for small changes to them so why timing points? (Was it for easier editing?) While it's certainly not offbeat, I personally I don't think the metronome is following the song's suggested beat. And the whole song must run on ONE consistent beat. (which I think is what Baka Tenshi has been trying to say)

What if someone were to play this song with Nightcore on? (unlikely, but still...) The song would fall apart due to those resets.

You aren't entirely in the wrong though. Timing points at 00:23:410 and 01:17:784 fit perfectly. I wanna see this throughout the whole song though.

Anyway, here's my mod.
[Combustion]
00:23:410 - SUGGESTION It's lonely here... owo Add something. The music suggests it imo.
00:27:511 (2) - Remove this circle. I don't think it blends well with the music. It's an "unexpected" circle, an extra.
01:18:135 (2) - ^ same for this circle
01:21:885 (2) - ^ and this one
01:10:167 - I don't think the music is soft enough at this point to have the hitsound volume low. Raise it a little.
02:04:541 - ^ here too
Timing Points/The House-cleaning
00:00:910 - Add a timing point here. 00:00:793 will serve as a downbeat.
00:06:428 - Remove this timing point. It's unnecessary.
00:23:410 - Remove this timing point too. The inherited point at 00:26:222 makes this one unnecessary.
00:38:292 - Replace this timing point with an inherited point. (Create the inhereted point first then delete the timing point. Saves time.)
01:32:667 - ^ here too
01:17:784 - Remove the timing point here. You already have an inherited point there.

All you really need is 2 timing points throughout the whole song.
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Jenny
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Jenny
You should pay attention to previous mods - all these things were already talked about and justified and are perfectly fine.
mrk_old
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mrk_old
Rank this shit immediately.

Unlike all the other peeps posting here I know what i'ma talking about. SO BUBBLE!
Loctav
Popcorn Fairy
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Loctav

mrk wrote:

Rank this shit immediately.

Unlike all the other peeps posting here I know what i'ma talking about. SO BUBBLE!
You made me laugh. Srsly
Jenny
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Jenny

Loctav wrote:

mrk wrote:

Rank this shit immediately.

Unlike all the other peeps posting here I know what i'ma talking about. SO BUBBLE!
You made me laugh. Srsly
Goal achieved!
Kurai
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Kurai
[Combustion]
  1. 00:05:480 (4,5,6,7,8) - I dont like the placement of these notes, it isn't intuitive to me (especially since 00:05:480 (4) returns at the same spot as where 00:04:777 (2) was, and because the spacing between (7) and (8) kills the flow you got with the jmps).
    Thus, instead of your current pattern, I would ctrl+R (4,5) and (6,7) to get something like this :
    SPOILER
  2. 01:18:135 (2) - It looks like you were trying to follow the drums in this part (since you put a little break when they stop), so why is this note here, there is no drum at this spot, it is superfluous to have something there then in my opinion, and it doesn't make sense with what (I suppose) you were trying to do. If it was not what you were trying to do, I think the break is more emphasized if you removed this circle.
    Therefore, remove this it ?
  3. 01:21:885 (2) - Same thing here ?
  4. 00:27:511 (2) - ^
Call me back after this ~
Jenny
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Jenny
Changed first thing - about the 3 drum stuffs, these are also lower-volumed to give a better transition and lie on the background instrumental; can change that though, if you see this as necessary but I'd prefer keeping.
Kurai
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Kurai
Ok, Approved ~
Zare
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Zare
Congratz Jenny ><

Finally :)
Jenny
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Jenny
'Cause I couldn't live without
Sunsets that dazzle in the dusk
So I'll drag the anchor up
And rest assured, 'cause dreams don't turn to dust

Dreams don't turn to dust
Nemis
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Nemis
Congratz Jenny <3
Jenny
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Jenny
>6300 pageviews before approval

~1 month of highest priority bubble/popped
Chewin
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Chewin
Hi, gratz =D
vipto
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vipto

Jenny wrote:

>6300 pageviews before approval

~1 month of highest priority bubble/popped

Gangster!

Gratz
Michi
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Michi
about fucking time
Jenny
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Jenny
Oppan Fuck-My-Rating-And-Hate-Me-As-Usual Style!
Stefan
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Stefan

Jenny wrote:

'Cause I couldn't live without
Sunsets that dazzle in the dusk
So I'll drag the anchor up
And rest assured, 'cause dreams don't turn to dust

Dreams don't turn to dust
Love this. <3
Anyways, congrats for Approval owo
Suimya
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Suimya
Gratz =3=
Jenny
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Jenny
Still way worse rating than any animu TV bullcrap.
Stefan
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Stefan
Haters gonna hate.
Seriously, who cares about Map Rating? It's broken due the hater/random Voters.
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Jenny
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Jenny
And likers will forget liking as usual
Garven
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Garven
Armpit, heh. Anyway, gratz~
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