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AKB48 - Beginner

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Topic Starter
Pink Agate
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年11月13日 at 19:29:16

Artist: AKB48
Title: Beginner
Tags: Breeze j-pop Jurina&Mayuyu
BPM: 160
Filesize: 18023kb
Play Time: 02:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Breeze's Hard (4.74 stars, 257 notes)
  2. Normal (3.23 stars, 140 notes)


Download: AKB48 - Beginner
Download: AKB48 - Beginner (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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thanks for Breeze guest diff
Sat Oct 13 delete the skin,new combo
skin by Pink Agate & Master_Gs,I hope you can use them






Breeze
Topic Starter
Pink Agate
哇,真速度!辛苦了。thanks
HonDon
Hi~

General
-Cut off the mp3 file

Normal
-You can't just use one combo for the whole map. Consider breaking it.

AKBreeze

00:49:712-00:50:962 Maybe you can just rewind the sliders
00:56:753 New Combo

Insane
-Some have too long combos. Maybe the combos in 3 hit streams could be broken up.
Breeze

HonDon wrote:

AKBreeze

00:49:712-00:50:962 Maybe you can just rewind the sliders :arrow: seems no need
00:56:753 New Combo :arrow: k
Download: AKB48 - Beginner (liudeye) [AKBreeze].osu
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

HonDon wrote:

Hi~

General
-Cut off the mp3 file

Normal
-You can't just use one combo for the whole map. Consider breaking it.

AKBreeze

00:49:712-00:50:962 Maybe you can just rewind the sliders
00:56:753 New Combo

Insane
-Some have too long combos. Maybe the combos in 3 hit streams could be broken up.
:arrow: 我的那部分还没做完,没做完一般不接受MOD的,不过还是谢谢你了。部分意见已经采纳,下次说中文吧英文看着累 :roll:
Topic Starter
Pink Agate
Everything has been done,need someone modding
Silivren
[AKBreezel]

You have 1 unsnapped inherite section here.
00:27:722 - snap to 00:27:712 -

I suggest moving 01:51:337 (2) - to 01:51:150 - OR 01:49:837 (2) - to 01:50:025 - (i prefer 1st variant). Because as it is now it ruins the rythm of the music imo.

[Origin]

00:40:650 (7) - add NC. Fits the music.
00:52:650 (1) - You should place NC here
01:03:900 (1) - remove NC
01:04:650 (1) - add NC
01:13:650 (5) - maybe NC?
02:15:150 (4) - touches hp bar
02:30:712 (3) - place it somewhere according to your distance spacing. e.g. like this? http://puu.sh/LOn6

[Rebirth]

Unsnapped inherite sections: 01:19:653 - snap to 01:19:650

00:20:025 (1) - touches hp bar
00:27:900 (1) - I think it will be more interesting if you reverse this slider. (ctrl+R)
00:53:400 (4) - touches hp bar
00:56:025 (3) - try to end this slider at 00:56:400 -
00:58:650 (8) - NC
01:09:150 (10) - add NC
01:09:337 (1) - remove NC
01:09:900 (1) - remove NC
01:18:150 (7) - add NC
01:18:712 (1) - remove NC
01:30:150 (11) - NC
01:33:150 (3) - touches hp bar
01:38:962 (1) - try to stack it with 01:38:775 (2) -
01:40:650 (4) - NC
02:25:650 (1) - add NC
02:26:025 (3) - remove NC
02:28:650 (1) - fix it. Because now it can't be understood where the slider goes - left or right. Unrankable.
02:31:087 (1,2,3,4) - maybe turn it into some jump pattern? Just a suggestion.

I like this song a lot and your map is really nice!! Good Luck ^ ^
Topic Starter
Pink Agate
:arrow:

Silivren wrote:

[AKBreezel]

You have 1 unsnapped inherite section here.
00:27:722 - snap to 00:27:712 -

I suggest moving 01:51:337 (2) - to 01:51:150 - OR 01:49:837 (2) - to 01:50:025 - (i prefer 1st variant). Because as it is now it ruins the rythm of the music imo. :arrow:
I think this diff don't need to do change 8-)
[Origin]

00:40:650 (7) - add NC. Fits the music. :arrow: fix
00:52:650 (1) - You should place NC here :arrow: fix
01:03:900 (1) - remove NC :arrow: fix
01:04:650 (1) - add NC :arrow: fix
01:13:650 (5) - maybe NC? :arrow: have no use for
02:15:150 (4) - touches hp bar :arrow::shock: What mean?
02:30:712 (3) - place it somewhere according to your distance spacing. e.g. like this? http://puu.sh/LOn6 :arrow: fix

[Rebirth] :arrow: this diff remaping!

Unsnapped inherite sections: 01:19:653 - snap to 01:19:650

00:20:025 (1) - touches hp bar
00:27:900 (1) - I think it will be more interesting if you reverse this slider. (ctrl+R)
00:53:400 (4) - touches hp bar
00:56:025 (3) - try to end this slider at 00:56:400 -
00:58:650 (8) - NC
01:09:150 (10) - add NC
01:09:337 (1) - remove NC
01:09:900 (1) - remove NC
01:18:150 (7) - add NC
01:18:712 (1) - remove NC
01:30:150 (11) - NC
01:33:150 (3) - touches hp bar
01:38:962 (1) - try to stack it with 01:38:775 (2) -
01:40:650 (4) - NC
02:25:650 (1) - add NC
02:26:025 (3) - remove NC
02:28:650 (1) - fix it. Because now it can't be understood where the slider goes - left or right. Unrankable.
02:31:087 (1,2,3,4) - maybe turn it into some jump pattern? Just a suggestion.

I like this song a lot and your map is really nice!! Good Luck ^ ^
:arrow: very thank you for mod
Silivren

liudeye wrote:

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02:15:150 (4) - touches hp bar :arrow::shock: What mean?
It means that this slider is placed too high. So it touches the hp bar. Like here does the beat #2, you see? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/382714
It's unrankable. You should place this slider a bit lower ;)
Nemis
[Origin]
OD -1
This is the easiest diff? It seems Normal+/Hard :E

00:41:962 (3) - Distance it more from 00:41:400 (2) -

[AKBreeze]
Nothing :P

[Rebirth]
One suggestion: use a distance spacing under x1.0 for streams, they are too spaced

01:15:150 (3,4) - Change this sliders' form
01:40:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It looks strange...
02:18:150 (6) - Fix this slider's form like all other, it looks more better

I like this map, sliders are perfect *-* Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

Nemis wrote:

[Origin]
OD -1
This is the easiest diff? It seems Normal+/Hard :E

00:41:962 (3) - Distance it more from 00:41:400 (2) - :arrow: fix
[AKBreeze]
Nothing :P

[Rebirth]
One suggestion: use a distance spacing under x1.0 for streams, they are too spaced

01:15:150 (3,4) - Change this sliders' form :arrow:fix01:40:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It looks strange...
02:18:150 (6) - Fix this slider's form like all other, it looks more better :arrow:fix
I like this map, sliders are perfect *-* Good luck :)
:arrow:thank you very much :)
Leorda
Yo


[General]
* Remove the Source for all diff, it seems your current source are album, I guess?
* Your dif name makes people confuse which is Normal or Hard diff. Please change your diff name into difficulty names (e.g. "Breeze's Hard", "Insane")


[Origin]
* AR +1 or +2?

00:52:650 (1) - New combo, since this note is after spinners. You probably forgot....
00:53:400 (2) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. It can be hidden for beginners while gameplay (sometimes, beginners are slow to read)
01:13:650 (3) - New combo?
01:49:462 (5) - ^
02:29:775 (1) - Same issue as 00:53:400 (2)


[Rebirth]
00:40:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - These streams are not fit to the song. Change the pattern?
00:43:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:09:712 (7) - I don't like if this slider is place at the same place as the previous one
01:35:775 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it can be hidden for players
01:41:212 (3,4) - This jump is exactly same as previous one, and they thought this would be a 1/2 clicks, but it's not. Consider to change the pattern?
01:42:337 (6,7,8) - These jump are pretty unbalanced....


Good luck~
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

Leorda wrote:

Yo


[General]
* Remove the Source for all diff, it seems your current source are album, I guess?
* Your dif name makes people confuse which is Normal or Hard diff. Please change your diff name into difficulty names (e.g. "Breeze's Hard", "Insane")

:arrow: changed
[Origin]
* AR +1 or +2? :arrow: +1

00:52:650 (1) - New combo, since this note is after spinners. You probably forgot.... :arrow: fix
00:53:400 (2) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. It can be hidden for beginners while gameplay (sometimes, beginners are slow to read) :arrow: fix
01:13:650 (3) - New combo? :arrow: fix
01:49:462 (5) - ^ :arrow: fix
02:29:775 (1) - Same issue as 00:53:400 (2) :arrow: fix


[Rebirth]
00:40:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - These streams are not fit to the song. Change the pattern? :arrow: fix
00:43:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ :arrow: fix
01:09:712 (7) - I don't like if this slider is place at the same place as the previous one :arrow: fix
01:35:775 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it can be hidden for players :arrow: fix
01:41:212 (3,4) - This jump is exactly same as previous one, and they thought this would be a 1/2 clicks, but it's not. Consider to change the pattern?
01:42:337 (6,7,8) - These jump are pretty unbalanced.... :arrow: fix


Good luck~
:arrow: thank you,hope you can like it :)
-[A]-
时间匆忙,只看了一下insane,水平有限╮(╯_╰)╭
01:30:712 加一个note
01:37:275 同上
00:33:171(4,5) 删除
不方便上传图,所以就直接放代码了
把296,256,143400,2,0,B|312:304|264:336,3,84.9999952316285,10|0|0|0
建议改成
296,256,143400,2,0,B|312:304|264:336,2,84.9999952316285
271,330,143962,1,0
其他的,感觉皮肤在有的地方使note混淆,建议把皮肤改一下

以上,个人的全部渣mod :o
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

-[A]- wrote:

时间匆忙,只看了一下insane,水平有限╮(╯_╰)╭
01:30:712 加一个note :arrow:我认为这里01:31:462 (9) - 加更加合适
01:37:275 同上 :arrow:加了
00:33:171(4,5) 删除 :arrow:删了
不方便上传图,所以就直接放代码了
把296,256,143400,2,0,B|312:304|264:336,3,84.9999952316285,10|0|0|0
建议改成
296,256,143400,2,0,B|312:304|264:336,2,84.9999952316285
271,330,143962,1,0 :arrow:改了
其他的,感觉皮肤在有的地方使note混淆,建议把皮肤改一下 :arrow:没必要
以上,个人的全部渣mod :o
:arrow:谢谢MOD :)
DakeDekaane
Hi, mod time~ :3

[Normal]
01:14:400 (3) - This is a bit far from previous note, you should consider move it closer or make a pattern like 00:30:150 (3,4) , or something like this
01:46:275 (1) - This gets hidden by hitburst from 01:44:400 (2) , you should re-arrange this a bit.
01:46:650 (2) - Shorten this slider by 1/4 (make it a 1/1 slider) and/or try this

01:50:212 (1,2) - You can add a repeat for these sliders
02:22:087 (1) - You should move this slider to make 02:22:650 (2) more visible, maybe like this

[Breeze's Hard]

00:19:087 (6) - You can delete the last reverse arrow and put a circle instead
00:22:087 (4) - ^

[Insane]
A nice diff, you could increase HP drain or OD by 1 for make it a bit more insane.

That's all from my part, good luck c:
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time~ :3

[Normal] :arrow:all fixed01:14:400 (3) - This is a bit far from previous note, you should consider move it closer or make a pattern like 00:30:150 (3,4) , or something like this
01:46:275 (1) - This gets hidden by hitburst from 01:44:400 (2) , you should re-arrange this a bit.
01:46:650 (2) - Shorten this slider by 1/4 (make it a 1/1 slider) and/or try this

01:50:212 (1,2) - You can add a repeat for these sliders
02:22:087 (1) - You should move this slider to make 02:22:650 (2) more visible, maybe like this

[Breeze's Hard] :arrow: I think it is ok
00:19:087 (6) - You can delete the last reverse arrow and put a circle instead
00:22:087 (4) - ^

[Insane] :arrow: fixed
A nice diff, you could increase HP drain or OD by 1 for make it a bit more insane.

That's all from my part, good luck c:
:arrow: thanks for your mod
Topic Starter
Pink Agate
delete my diff [Insane] ,new upload
Deni

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General

Did you create the skin? If not, why don't you mention the skin creator in your first post?

Delete "Beginner" from the tags since it's already in the title.

Inconsistency in source:

Normal:
Source:AKB48 18th Beginner Jurina&Mayuyu Ver

Breeze's Hard:
Source:
Normal

00:52:650 (1) - This cirlce is too close to the spinner before for Normal. ( AiMod )
01:09:150 (4) - Move this slider to 01:08:962 ?
01:48:150 (4) - Move to 01:47:962 and end it at 01:48:900
01:49:087 to 01:52:462 : Why so empty here?!
02:02:775 (3,1) - Overlapping. Not so pretty <.<
02:26:962 (2) - Move 1 grid to the right..
02:28:650 (1) - End it at 02:31:650 because that's the final end of the song, just like Breeze did in Hard.

Breeze's Hard

Nothing to say here, good difficulty :)
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