Aoba Ringo - Asgardh (Short Ver.) [Taiko|Osu]

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Sekai
fixed one spacing, thanks for modding :3

http://puu.sh/yTyB
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Hi

Sekai's Easy

00:06:864 - The green timing is useless,you ought to use previous red timing point to adjust volume.
00:47:201 - The timing is useless.

Other seems fine to me.

Imo,01:10:107~01:13:350 - like shown below

http://puu.sh/yVxg


Normal

fine.


Miya's Hard

01:16:796 - remove finish,I don't think there needs a loud hitsound.At least,turn the volume down.

Insane

fine.

Good luck!
Kurokami

General

  1. - [Insane] : 0
    - [i_k's Taiko] : 1000
    - [Miya's Hard] : 0
    - [Normal] : 0
    - [Sekai's Easy] : 0

Sekai's Easy

  1. OD +1
  2. 00:27:945 (3) - 1 grid right [nazy]
  3. 00:35:647 (1) - 1 grid up [nazy]
  4. 00:44:161 (3) - 1 grid up [nazy]

Normal

  1. OD +1
  2. seems good~

i_k's Taiko

  1. The taiko is okay, but here are some suggestions.
  2. 00:18:620 (1) - Why the big note? I think a normal one is better here.
  3. 00:37:674 (1) - Big don?
  4. 00:44:161 (1) - ^
  5. 01:20:445 (3) - Kat?
  6. 01:21:863 (2) - ^

Miya's Hard

  1. 00:26:222 (9) - maybe delete? I tried several times, but I always just click here 2 times. ._.
  2. 00:58:553 (5) - slider until 00:58:755? sounds better to me

Insane

  1. 00:29:566 (1) - 1 grid down, this ways it will be stacked with 00:28:350 (2)
Since its too good to me, I give you a star too. :3
jossieP

Kurokami wrote:

i_k's Taiko

  1. The taiko is okay, but here are some suggestions.
  2. 00:18:620 (1) - Why the big note? I think a normal one is better here. but double big don with 00:18:215 (1), then normal dons 00:19:026 (1,2) and again big don 00:19:836 (1), has a nice effect I think <:
  3. 00:37:674 (1) - Big don? why not, nice effect, thanks
  4. 00:44:161 (1) - ^ want to keep this 00:44:161 (1,2,1,2), as normal notes
  5. 01:20:445 (3) - Kat? oh that guitar accord, thanks
  6. 01:21:863 (2) - ^ also applied to next note
Edit:
- [Insane] : 0
- [i_k's Taiko] : 1000
- [Miya's Hard] : 0
- [Normal] : 0
- [Sekai's Easy] : 0
xD taiko diffs can have different lead-in

>udpate<
Topic Starter
merchat7
Athena Tennos

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~

[Normal]
♪~

[Insane]
01:15:985 (4) - this rhythm have a little worry~i think~
maybe u can make like this~ I agree, this slider is off, change in another way
or change SV~just this slider~xD~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~just suggestion~

Nice~song!~and mapst~
Star~~
Good Luck~ Thanks!
@TTTTTTTTTTTT
Thanks for modding, I'll give kudos if they are change in Easy/Hard

Kurokami

Kurokami wrote:

General

  1. - [Insane] : 0
    - [i_k's Taiko] : 1000
    - [Miya's Hard] : 0
    - [Normal] : 0
    - [Sekai's Easy] : 0
Taiko and osu standard diff starts at different time so should be fine

Normal

  1. OD +1 Hmm, a bit too high compare to Easy, also wants star rating to be a little lower.
  2. seems good~

Insane

  1. 00:29:566 (1) - 1 grid down, this ways it will be stacked with 00:28:350 (2) Alright
Since its too good to me, I give you a star too. :3 Ty :D

Ty for stars Athena Tennos & Kurokami and ty for mods all!

Edit:@Katty Pie
Np, thanks for checking
Kurokami

ikari_kyon wrote:

xD taiko diffs can have different lead-in
Good to know. o.o Well, I'm still an inexperienced modder. >.< Oh, and these are not my suggestions, I'm noob in taiko.They are my friends, but we not want to wrote 2 post for one mod. :o
jossieP
its ok <: thanks to your friend, nice suggests
Miya
umm, Sorry, nothing changed >.<
@TTTTTTTTTTTT : I like that finish, it match for the music imo.
@Kurokami :
  1. Triplet fits there. Nope
  2. Adding slider there doesn't follow anything.
Sekai
Thanks for modding >w<

http://puu.sh/z6pY
Fenya
Hi~

Sekai's Easy:
00:11:728 (3) - 1 grid up?

Normal:
00:14:363 (2) -(IMO) I find it a bit odd... If you remove slider and add circle in 00:14:566 - (because there ends the voice...)
00:15:985 (4) - ^ but add circle in 00:16:188
00:35:445 (1,3) - Overlap ugly... Maybe so http://puu.sh/zfSE be better... Or you can change your way. x:

Miya's Hard:
Nothing, good diff :3

Insane:
00:19:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I feel I do not have the same distance between them... imo e_e
01:13:350 (1) - 1 grid left?

That's all... Sorry for my poor mod :c
I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English, good luck~ :)
S o r d a
from queue

[overall]:
  1. Nothing wrong here.


[Insane]:
  1. you should be volume up I really cant hear hitsound like Miya's Hard
  2. 00:42:539 (1,2) - ctrl+j? maybe you like this jump


[Hard]:
  1. 00:33:012 ~ 00:47:607 you use sc1 clap better imo
  2. 00:18:418 - add note its good flow
  3. 00:59:161 (6) - new combo looks good
  4. 01:10:512 (2,5,7) - add sc1 clap
  5. 01:12:742 (9) - ^ end clap


[Normal]:
  1. good


[Sekai's Easy]:
  1. good again


Nice map overall~
Good luck ranked soon
Miya

S o r d a wrote:

[Hard]:
  1. 00:33:012 ~ 00:47:607 you use sc1 clap better imo Umm, i don't like the sc1 clap. So, no change here.
  2. 00:18:418 - add note its good flow for what purpose? I don't see any rythim on this spot.
  3. 00:59:161 (6) - new combo looks good hmm, okay
  4. 01:10:512 (2,5,7) - add sc1 clap ^
  5. 01:12:742 (9) - ^ end clap ^
Thank you for the mod Sorda :3
http://puu.sh/ztY6
Sekai
thanks for modding but no changes >A</
Topic Starter
merchat7
Fenya

Fenya wrote:

Hi~

Normal:
00:14:363 (2) -(IMO) I find it a bit odd... If you remove slider and add circle in 00:14:566 - (because there ends the voice...) If you listen at 0.25x, you can her say "aa" here. The main reason through is I want to keep the rhythm 1/1 (simple). 3/2 rhythm is not too nice to play especially if you do hit circles.
00:15:985 (4) - ^ but add circle in 00:16:188 ^
00:35:445 (1,3) - Overlap ugly... Maybe so http://puu.sh/zfSE be better... Or you can change your way. x: Alright fixed, but I think this is only noticeable in editor.

Insane:
00:19:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I feel I do not have the same distance between them... imo e_e Spacing is pretty consistent here, but I think I understand what you mean, adjust a bit.
01:13:350 (1) - 1 grid left? Alright

That's all... Sorry for my poor mod :c
I did everything I could >_<
Sorry for my bad English, good luck~ :)

S o r d a

S o r d a wrote:

from queue

[overall]:
  1. Nothing wrong here.


[Insane]:
  1. you should be volume up I really cant hear hitsound like Miya's Hard I have even higher volume in this diff then Miya I think like 100% in kiai compare to 75% in Miya's diff, I just use the custom hitsound. The whistle sound a bit like the soft-hitnormal, but much louder so maybe you thought there weren't hitsound on the note because of this. I use this custom whistle because I don't think high pitch whistle fit well with this song. As for clap, it follow kick drum, I just want the clap to compliment the kick drums. I've test with higher volume custom clap and thanks to higher volume, the drum sound really overpowers the song (sound too bassy). I may consider raising the volume of the clap a bit through.
  2. 00:42:539 (1,2) - ctrl+j? maybe you like this jump Hm, I think current pattern lead better to (3) and spread the mapping around a bit more. Feel like too many notes at top right.


[Normal]:
  1. good


Nice map overall~
Good luck ranked soon

Ty for mods both and Fenya for star!
Kokatsu
Taikomod from my queue, sorry for late mod x__x'

General:
You don't use any sliders/drumrolls in your diff, reduce Slidertickrate to 1?
Maybe add your name to the background?

Mapping:
00:08:282 - I dislike the rhythm here, maybe try something like this?
00:11:728 - as above, try this?
00:14:972 (1) - make it small?
00:18:215 (1) - ^
00:29:566 (1) - ^
00:31:188 (1) - ^
00:33:215 (2) - kat?
00:34:634 (2) - ^
01:25:512 (4) - ^

Only suggestions for all things mentioned, really not much to find, good job on that one :)
jossieP

Kokatsu wrote:

Taikomod from my queue, sorry for late mod x__x'

General:
You don't use any sliders/drumrolls in your diff, reduce Slidertickrate to 1? as Im not using any slider have sense decrease it?
Maybe add your name to the background? no, my username is already on difficulty name or my initials, also I dislike those type of bg, just fitting to taiko mode and the name of song is enough for me

Mapping:
00:08:282 - I dislike the rhythm here, maybe try something like this? both patterns dont follow anything Im just trying to give an easy pattern for the vocal extension
00:11:728 - as above, try this? 1/1 easy pattern
00:14:972 (1) - make it small? k
00:18:215 (1) - ^ highlight big don here
00:29:566 (1) - ^
00:31:188 (1) - ^ concicstant pattern here
00:33:215 (2) - kat? song on same scale
00:34:634 (2) - ^
01:25:512 (4) - ^ simple 1/1 dons to finish the song easyli /o/

Only suggestions for all things mentioned, really not much to find, good job on that one :)
> to merchat <
Flanster
Nyaho~
Heres my mawd~

[General]
Nice tags oowawawawawawawa--

[Sekai's Easy]
Sliders need fixing in this diff.

00:08:485 (2) - move the middle sliderpoint to x:208 y:236 :3
00:13:350 (1) - fix the middle sliderpoint :3
00:14:972 (1) - remove NC
00:16:188 (2) - NC
00:21:458 (1) - remove NC
00:24:701 (1) - ^
00:44:566 (4) - red sliderpoint to x:380 y:308
00:59:972 (1) - remove NC
01:00:377 (2) - NC
01:02:404 (1) - remove NC
01:03:620 (4) - NC
01:05:242 (4) - ^
01:06:863 (6) - ^
01:08:485 (1) - remove NC
01:10:107 (5) - NC
01:11:728 (1) - remove NC
01:12:945 (4) - NC
01:13:755 (1) - remove NC

[Normal]
clean

[Miya's Hard]
Sliders could use a bit of fixing.

00:12:539 (7) - sliderend to the center please (x:208 y:364)
00:13:350 (1) - same here^
00:17:809 (4) - ^
00:53:485 (8) - maybe NC here?
00:58:147 (3,4) - why not mirror 00:57:539 (1,2) correctly?
01:06:458 (8) - same suggestion for the NC on stream
01:11:728 (6) - NC?

[Insane]
How about lowering the volume to 40-45%? at the beggining until the timing point on 00:19:634?
01:04:836 (4) - how about Ctrl+R :3?
01:19:836 - maybe add a note with finish...end kinda bothers me o.o'

[]
Thats all from me, good luck ~~
Topic Starter
merchat7
Experiment with timing point at begin for Insane.
01:04:836 - Prefer current pattern
01:19:836 - Would be annoying to play imo, something like ninja hit circle at end of a song.

Ty for mod
Miya
No fix. Thank you Lolicore for modding >.<
Sekai
Thanks Lolicore for modding >w<

osu file format v9

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
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[Metadata]
Title:Asgardh (Short Ver.)
Artist:Aoba Ringo
Creator:merchat7
Version:Sekai's Easy
Source:Shirogane no Soleil -Successor of Wyrd-
Tags:Unmei no Keishousha soleil of silvery white marie MANYO littlewing skyfish hentai eroge game visual novel opening Miya -Sekai- Sekai ikari_kyon

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OverallDifficulty:1
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