This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21 Mei 2012 at 0:43:51

Artist: KOTOKO
Title: unfinished (TV Size)
Source: Accel World
Tags: ending Yasora-chan Star Stream Kuroyukihime -Sekai- Sekai
BPM: 146
Filesize: 12626kb
Play Time: 01:14
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,71 stars, 68 notes)
2. Hard (4,83 stars, 213 notes)
3. Normal (3,56 stars, 95 notes)
4. S.S (5 stars, 302 notes)
5. Yasora's Insane (5 stars, 307 notes)

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size)
Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Redownload please if you download before 12/05/2012 because i added new BG

Ending theme of Accel World. Enjoy~

-------------------Credit------------------------
Me
Star Stream (Thanks for making Insane)
Yasora (Thanks for making 2nd Insane)
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Sekai has made a taiko diff. You can download it here > http://www.mediafire.com/?oh6prk6gt43rfwt
Go!

some irc mod with BrokenArrow :3

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Sekai's Taiko-Fly].osu

broken arrow should post into this thread then >.<. Okay, updated~

\owo/

Hai, from my queue ~

Easy

1. 00:13:527 (1) - This spinner is short for an easy >w< You could move it to 00:12:294 removing the slider and finish it at 00:14:760. Just a suggestion ~
2. Nothing to say here ><

Hard

1. 00:34:692 (1) to 00:37:363 (6) - This part doesn't fit the song, fix in this way?
   
2. 00:35:719 (7) - New combo
3. 00:36:541 (1) - Remove new combo

Yasora

1. 00:57:500 (1) - Remove new combo
2. 00:57:089 (6) - Add new combo
3. 00:58:322 (1) - Remove new combo
4. 00:58:733 (2) - NC
5. 00:59:144 (1) - Remove new combo
6. 01:03:664 (1) - ^

S.S

1. 00:47:842 (2,3,4) - I don't like this antijump, since you used jump everywhere, so I suggest you to fix this.
2. 01:00:788 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Good luck >w<

thanks~

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

Thank you for the mod

I don't understand what you mean little stream. So no change >.<
But thank you for the mod

Request from queue~

[Easy]
00:20:514 (1) - Add finish on end?
00:50:925 (3) - Remove clap on end?

[Normal]
00:52:568 (5) - NC? To show that the beat has changed
01:05:719 (5) - ^

[Hard]
00:11:473 (4) - NC here instead to show beat has changed
00:12:705 (5) - Maybe here too and your choice to remove or keep on 00:13:116 (1)
00:37:363 (5) - Move red point 2 grids up for better blanket.
00:39:007 (4) - NC for beat change
I feel that all 5-note streams can use lower spacing.

[S.S]
Hi star~ :>
00:16:404 (5) - Move first red point 3 grids up for better symmetry?
00:55:034 (6) - NC?
01:08:185 (6) - ^

[Yasora]
00:08:596 (2) - I feel this fits better on the next white tick
00:10:240 (2) - ^
00:28:527 (3,4) - Please add a note between these and move 4 to 00:28:733

Modded all 5 diffs because Star is a friend :>
GL~

thank you~

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

here comes my mod.

[S.S]
00:16:404 (5) - a little ugly to see
00:47:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - anti here not a ggod choice um.cause your higt sv
00:51:336 (2) - it's better not to hide it um
01:00:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:04:486 (2) - ^

[Yasora]
00:53:390 (6) - who about rhyme like this?
It seems that you can use more note to make changes.

Good map.

request from in-game

[overall]:

1. Fine

[Yasora]:

1. 00:08:493 (2) - doesn't fit music start slider 00:08:596 end is same
2. 00:10:137 (2) - ^ 00:10:240 end is same
3. 00:20:514 (4) - New combo
4. 00:41:062 (1) - Add whistle

[S.S]:

1. 00:14:760 (1) - end whistle
2. 00:15:993 (3) - whistle
3. last spinner volume I like Yasora diff Green line

[Hard]:

1. 00:11:781 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think Hard diff too Hard this suggestion change slider
2. 00:27:500 (9) - why slider waypoint have? maybe delete this also end finish

[Normal]:

1. Fine

[Easy]:

1. 01:06:541 (2) - Dont stack this easiest diff I dont like stack Beginner player too hard stack read
2. 01:13:938 (3) - ^
   

I like Accel world :3
Fight~

Modding from my queue.

Things that I think are important and need to be changed will be in red.
Things I think that are not necessary, but that I think make the map easier to read or more fun to play will be in blue.

Easy:

Normal:

Hard:

S.S:

Yasora diff seems like it will take a while, I'll come back and mod that one later when I have more time available.

So far good map, and good luck to you^^

thanks all

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

Thank you for the mod and the star guys. Fixed some

hello~:3

in game request.

General

I think credit yourself in creator's word is weird lol, i think no need to do that just guess diff's mapper is enough.

SS.

00:16:404 (5) - this shape is not perfect. just use only 1 red not 2.

00:28:938 (4,5) - ctrl r?
00:33:048 (2,3) - ctrl r?
00:47:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - at least new combo at 5 to warn player for split anti jump and non anti jump section
01:00:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:11:164 (4) - I guess this is overmap note . delete it or If you want to overmap you should add All 1/4 stream start form 01:10:651 (1) -
and end at 01:13:938 (1) -
01:13:938 (1) - Zigzag or curve slider suit more than straight slider


Yasora

00:42:294 (1,2) - NC 2 ?
01:13:938 (1) - extend this 1 return and use spinner same as SS diff?

Hard

00:31:610 (1,3) - how long you made this slider ? it look nice.but it's not perfect yet
to fix just delete 1 and copy 3 , ctrl H , rotate 90 anticlockwise , ctrl r , done.
01:06:336 (2,3) - why just note keep it circle at 2 and 3 start of slider?. even current is still not hard.
01:10:856 miss note?
01:13:938 (1) - i think this note no need to nc at all. it's very easy to read.

Normal

00:14:760 (1) - Curve slider more suit for soft vocal here.
01:10:240 add note

Easy

01:10:651 (2) - move 1 beat backward and add return then ctrl +r

Taiko

00:38:493 k?
01:13:425 k?

GL ranking.

Thank you for the mod regenz :3
Fixed some.
Hhe.. Don't worry about credit. Credit means the person that make that beatmap. So it including me. :3

And, Chata, thank you for the star, i will mod your map asap.

nothing fix in my diff ;_;
but thanks for mod /w\

[General]

Looks fine


[Easy]

No big problem


[Normal]

00:52:671-(4) move to x:256 y:88

00:52:568-(1) move to x:256 y:244

00:53:390-(2) ^


[Hard]

00:12:089-(2) move to x:256 y:168

00:12:397-(3) move to 00:12:294

00:12:705-(4) move to 00:12:603


[S.S]

Why the slider velocity is 2.50.

00:16:404-(5) a little ugly...

00:19:692-(5) ^


[Yasora]

00:21:644-(2) I think you don't need to start the slider on the blue line,
you can change the slider same as 00:21:336-(1)

00:30:993-(6) to 00:31:199-(1) you don't think this big jump is strange?

00:33:459-(2),00:33:664-(1),00:33:870-(2) correct the ds.

00:37:586-(1) change to a note and no newcombo.

00:37:774 to 00:37:979 change to a slider.

01:01:199-(4) ctrl R ?

I think this diff's ds are chaos, please think it again.

Thank you for the mod. :3

Twice wrote:

I think this diff's ds are chaos, please think it again.

play it lol just using 1.7x ds :p that's still playable~
thanks

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

[General]
Please change the MP3 to better one. My ears are bleeding...
Its volume was raised too much.


[Yasora]
00:21:233 (7) - Delete? This circle doesn't fit music.
00:34:486 (1,2) - Could you change the rhythm? They are really awkward.
00:36:130 (1,2,3) - ^
01:13:938 (1) - Add whistles?


[S.S]
00:39:007 (5) - Should be NC. Spacing was changed from this time. Or you have to fix spacing next note. It seems very confused.


[Hard]
Fine


[Normal]
00:07:363 (4,5,6) - Maybe they are a bit hard for normal skilled player to read the rhythm.
00:12:089 - Delete this offset
01:05:719 (5) - NC to be consistent with 00:52:568 (1). You'd better move position, if you add NC.


[Easy]
Fine


Good luck ;D

As requested, mod starts 16:25

[General]

- The mp3 is way too loud or I'm getting a different mp3. I have my volume quite low so when I say it's loud, it's very loud. Notice no modder mentions this so I'm slightly confused. Also the mp3 is clipping by atleast 11 decibels http://puu.sh/tMIQ Audacity is pretty accurate so far for clipping and just incase, notice that I didn't check the box, allow clipping so that's why audacity suggestion -11.2 dB on volume because that is when the audio doesn't clip anymore.

Just wondering about the mp3, can't mod hitsound because of this. 16:32

[Easy]

01:04:486 (3) - Copy 01:03:664 (2) - , ctrl+J & R and paste it here?

Nothing significant to mention 16:36, 4 mins

[Normal]

+1 hp/od for nicer difficulty jump to Hard?

00:22:157 (2) - Even through I said I can't really mod hitsound, this part, it's really noticeable that you didn't put hitsound at begin, should put whistle for the piano imo.
00:27:089 (3) - Miss this the first time, how about 1/1 repeating slider instead (remove two repeat, extend by 1/1)?

Don't see anything here iether 16:41 5mins

[Hard]

- Stream is really questionable due to low slider velocity(spacing for me is one thing that help me read stream and due to low slider velocity, the notes are closer together so I find myself almost always hitting stream too early and the approach rate doesn't help - I find it hard to stream in ar 7)and Normal wasn't very difficult. Consider removing. *Put my volume slightly higher and I can read it better, but still consider removing the longer stream since I don't think having stream when Normal isn't very hard will be good for difficulty spread.

00:11:781 (1,2,3) - Not a really nice rhythm to hit and for a Hard, don't think you should do this. Consider repeating slider instead
00:21:130 (5) - To be honest, I expected to see a repeat here

Nothing else, I guess. 16:51, 10mins

[S.S.]

Don't see anything 16:54 3mins

Recheck:
00:03:253 (1) - Jump here?
00:04:692 (7,8,1) - ^
00:24:931 (1,2,3) - I cannot agree with following the drum here when the song here is more vocal prominent, map with streams instead.
00:28:733 (3) - Should do jump on here too if you do it on (5)
00:31:199 (1) - Consider jump here
00:32:842 (1) - Same as 00:28:733
00:35:308 (3) - ^
00:38:082 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:24:931


I like how you did the part at kiai time, but cannot agree with the part (mention in my mod) where you follow the drum at all. 17:05, 8mins

[Yasora]

00:57:500 (1) - Do this? http://puu.sh/tMTZ

The overall idea is good, but if you really want to use 1.7x distant snap, why not just increase slider velocity. When you do this, every time you use a slider, it feel like there is a pause in the song and leads to an unnatural feeling when you transit from hit circle to slider. I really think you should readjust the map to a higher slider velocity. 16:57. 3mins

Cannot star yet due to a few questionable stuff and mp3, mp3 really affect quality of my mod, maybe a recheck is needed if you think it's necessary. Kept track of how long I mod each diff because trying to be lazier, but I guess not very accurate for this beatmap due to mp3.

Good luck, minor edit to not overlap with ykcarrot's mod. End 17:09, 44mins, 5 diffs, tv size. Not accurate due to mp3 quality

The mp3 is too loud? Sorry then >.<
I have reduced the volume of the mp3 by now. Thank you for mentioning this.
And yes, thank you for the mod. Fixed some of ykcarrot mod and merchat mod

lowered the volume a bit :3

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Sekai's Taiko-Fly].osu

thanks all =3=

Download: KOTOKO - unfinished (TV Size) (Miya) [Yasora].osu

hi owo/

Easy
01:04:486 (3) - spacing
01:19:486 - use soft sound?
01:19:692 - why timing point here?

Normal
00:07:671 (5,6) - change to slider? difficult to beginners
00:31:199 (6) - nazi 1grid down
01:15:386 -timing point...

Hard
nothing big problem
but it's too hard by hard diff
maybe OD-1 and HP-1?

S.S
00:21:027 (9) - delete. Does not meet the rhythm
01:19:486 - use soft sound
Yasora
00:21:027 (5) - delete.
00:32:226 (4) - use1/2 slider?
00:35:000 (2) - delete and 00:35:205 -00:35:308 add note?

thank you for the mod and the star Laurier <3
Most of them are fixed :3

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General
fine.

[Easy]
fine.

[Normal]
Beatmap design/suggestion
really big distance for a normal diff....
00:04:075 (4,5,6) - like these, I think this is a little difficult for a normal diff, but maybe just me.
others fine.

[Hard]
fine.

[Yasora]
fine.

[S.S]
fine. but seems I see a lot of copy and paste during the KIAI =_=


already good enough for me. of course no kudosu for my useless mod plz. good luck!

Hi there

[Easy]
00:56:678 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu and hitbursts. It makes more hidden for beginners while gameplay
01:10:240 (2) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts. So it's confusing for beginners while gameplay


[Normal]
* AR +1?

00:07:363 (4,5,6) - I think this pattern would be difficult for beginners who play this diff. Try replace with slider that repeating slider is snap at blue tick
00:27:089 (3) - Having too much repeating slider can makes confuse for beginners about when the slider is end


[Hard]
00:13:733 (2) - A slider with too much repeating slider can be boring for players. Consider to split into two slider


[Yasora]
00:35:205 - Add note here?


That's all I can find