1. Climbb's Taiko Oni (4,83 stars, 527 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 285 notes)
3. Melo's Easy (2,16 stars, 84 notes)
4. S o r d a's Normal (4,04 stars, 105 notes)
5. Vicho's Hard (4,98 stars, 202 notes)

Vicho-kun wrote:

Wait for me a bit more baka! ><

1. You need to add "s_o_r_d_a" into the tags.

1. 00:23:751 (2) - Remove the clap at the end of this slider for consistency with 00:25:984 (3) and 00:28:216 (3).
2. 00:53:333 (2) - Add a finish. It's in the music.

1. Looks nice. Good job!

1. 00:42:170 (6) - Reverse this. It flows a lot better.
2. 01:13:984 (1) - Add a whistle to the beginning of this slider along with the finish.

popner wrote:

[Normal]
00:05:333 (1) - close to previous spinner end, so move it to center?Ok fixed

-Gamu- wrote:

[S o r d a's Normal]

●00:15:937 (5) - これがいいかも http://puu.sh/uqPc 混乱しちゃうかもしれんから。Not fixed
●00:55:007 (3) - 最初にfinish?他のDiffには指摘してないのにNormalだけFinish指摘はおかしいと思います Not fixed
●01:09:519 (3) - Add NC?Fixed
●01:11:751 (1) - 最初にfinish?00:55:007と同じ理由Not fixed

Megurine Luka wrote:

[Normal]

00:06:309 (2) - try x=376 y=184 and move 00:07:007 (1) - down a little bit. It can avoid overlap popner mod I fixed after placement bit changed >_< I cant fix this
00:47:193 (2) - try x=360 y=96ok fixed

Star Stream wrote:

Easy
00:31:007 - finish doesnt fit at all imo
00:42:728 (1) - (nazi)end point tick y=83 fixed
00:49:426 (1,2) - too simple imo, like this? http://puu.sh/t33c continuity of a slider with a repeat makes pattern boring imo, so no changes =3=
00:57:240 - finish nah
01:03:937 - same as Insane i dont like it ><
01:08:403 - ^ ^
01:12:868 - ^ ^

1. 00:26:403 (6,7) - Doing something like this to have the sliders blanket eachother would look really nice.
2. 00:58:147 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:58:356. It makes more sense because that's where the vocals begin.

1. Doing some research, I found artist to be "i.o.sound". See if you can agree with this.
2. I find "galge" a more appropriate tag than "eroge" for this. Or maybe include both (not too familiar with this). Anyway, you may want to include the common vn tags like "vn", "visual novel", "opening", "game", etc.
3. Tag "ad:lib". The official site for this game is here: http://www.adlib-software.com/aorio/
4. I've only been doing this recently, and I'm not sure how effective it is, but have a look at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ibtbOyJ-0Uc. At the end, the chorus plays again to provide more information. I've done to two of my maps by adding a part of the chorus as applause.wav. See if you like the idea :3

1. SliderMultiplier:0.699999999999999 should just be 0.7; fix in .osu.
2. 00:10:356 (2) - I'd cave this in the other direction; seeing how 00:12:589 (3,2) - and 00:15:937 (1,2) - cave in different directions, I just feel 00:09:240 (1,2) - should be the same.
3. 00:28:216 (3) - Your first straight slider out of so many curved sliders. Since this is following the rhythm pattern of 00:23:751 (2) - and 00:25:984 (3) - , I don't see why you aren't using a curved slider here (The next 3 3/2 sliders are curved as well).
4. 01:06:170 (2) - I'd cave this in the other direction: something like this http://puu.sh/uuNs.

1. 00:07:007 (1,2) - Because of the obvious rhythm change, maybe you want to use something more than just a three point curved slider for these two.
2. 00:52:914 (5) - This doesn't represent the drum roll too well. What I'd do is kickback 00:51:658 (4) - once more, then add place a circle at 00:53:333 - .

1. The end of the "i" gets cut off at the bottom of the background, as seen here: http://puu.sh/uuUy. Perhaps you can shift that layer a slight bit towards the top? Or you can always grab a different picture to use as the banner.
2. Though it's so fast and you can't really make much out of it, 00:03:798 (4,5,6,7) - is actually 1/4 (see if you agree with me when you listen at 50%).
3. 00:04:216 (9) - Make this k.
4. 00:06:030 (15,16,17,18) - Same with this. I'd just use kkd 1/4.
5. 00:31:007 (174,178) - I expected both of these to be k. For 00:31:007 (174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - I'd use kkddkkddd.
6. 00:44:263 (261) - Replace this at 00:43:426 -, or just add a d at 00:43:426 - .

1. 00:00:310 (1) - Surely this was meant to be symmetrical?
   

   152,124,310,2,0,B|168:68|208:40|256:36|304:40|344:68|360:124,2,280,4|0|4

2. Man why can't I ever find anything with your maps?

1. 00:00:310 (1,2,3,4) - Direct variation of Hard, except with faster sv and lesser spacing...
2. 00:09:240 (9) - NC here instead of 00:09:519 (1) - ; guitar is more prominent.
3. 00:23:751 (4) - NC if you're going to keep 00:25:984 (1) - NC. Otherwise, 00:25:984 (1) - RNC.
4. 00:25:007 (2) - NC here instead of 00:24:589 (1) - ; "shite" is part of the same verse so 00:24:170 (6,1) - should be same combo.
5. 00:26:821 (4,5) - Looks kinda flat because you're using 0.90x spacing. You should be able to make this have a rounder arc so that players aren't moving so much in a straight line. In addition, it's a new line in the song, so a new slider curve might be nice.
6. 00:27:240 (5) - NC here instead of 00:27:937 (1) - .
7. 00:29:333 (5) - NC here.
8. 00:29:891 (7) - I'd either anchor the slider at 00:30:030 - or 00:30:100 - , but not in between.
9. 00:43:007 (1,2) - You've just used these sliders for 00:41:612 (4,6) - . You're now a pitch higher, even flipping them vertically would make the change evident enough.
10. 00:49:077 (5) - Seeing how from here to 00:49:426 (1) - is a straight stream, that should also be so for 00:48:589 (2,3,4,5) -. Also, I'd bend the stream at (6) instead of (5).
11. 00:49:426 (1) - Looks too similar to 00:48:589 (2) - . Perhaps anchor the slider so that you can make out the guitar strumming on the way back from the kickback. Something like this, perhaps, but you'll have to make look pretty after you apply changes to the previous point about the stream:
    

    104,72,49426,6,0,B|157:109|157:109|205:108|205:108|256:160,2,180,4|8|0

12. 01:00:030 (5) - Since HP is 8, maybe NC here to be more forgiving. This stream is (12) and bpm is 215, so it's just a suggestion.