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kazumikos

Bobo wrote:

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[Hard]

Seems like a pretty big difficulty hike in comparison to [Normal], perhaps you should tone down the difficulty settings a little bit. Especially the AR. no.. cant use ar 7

02:39:484 (4,5,6) - 3 notes stacked underneath a slider endpoint, was a little hard for me to read. How about spacing them out like you have in previous patterns like this such as 01:27:192 (2,3,4,5)? fixed

That's all for this diff, the only thing that really bothers me is the difficulty curve. This feels more like a light Insane.
thx for modding
http://www.mediafire.com/?i54by3whpxb3fr4
alacat
Hi ~~~ :3

let mod ></

[General]

● add tags → techno , trance

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/30581

[Lalala's Easy]
●overall diffculty +1 ?
I think low ...

●00:21:880 (1) - I think too high spacing , change to 1.00x

●00:27:713 (5) - move to x:128,y:168

●00:35:213 (1,2) - I think too high spacing , like this ? →
and,00:35:213 (1) - add clap on the slider end

●00:41:046 - add note?

●01:04:796 (2) - I think too diffcult about a beginner move to like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/333550

●01:06:880 (1) - remove clap on the slider repeat

●01:18:546 (3) -^ slider head

●02:14:796 (2) - 1grid move to right

●02:39:796 - add note?
●02:43:130 - ^

[Damnae's Normal]
●00:21:880 (3) - add NC ?

●00:28:546 (1) - add Finish?

●00:35:213 (3) - add NC ?

●00:46:046 (2) - 00:44:588 (3) - don't slider end snaping

[Kazumi's Hard]
●Approach Rate and overall diffculty -1 ?
AR 8 ,OD 7 same Insane diff

●02:54:692 - add note?

●03:14:588 - ^

good map set :3

[Insane]
●01:05:630 (3,4,5,6,7) - It slips off a little same 01:10:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - mapping?

nice diff :oops:

poor english... sorry><

SB is Beautiful and good map ^^ good luck :3
kazumikos

alacat wrote:

[Kazumi's Hard]
●Approach Rate and overall diffculty -1 ? nah
AR 8 ,OD 7 same Insane diff

●02:54:692 - add note? done

●03:14:588 - ^ k

good map set :3
thx for modding
http://uploaded.to/file/xutbmb1v
Topic Starter
Poggo
CDFA, Bobo, alacat Very big thx for mod~~ you very much helped me :oops: corrected many places ^.^
-kevincela-
Hi :D

[Lalala's Easy]

  1. 00:15:213 (1) - 1 grid right+slight curve down to make a blanket with 00:16:046 (2) - ?
  2. 00:50:213 (1) - Remove the New Combo to make this pattern like the others
  3. 01:01:463 (4,5) - Change the slider 4 like this,to make a better looking blanket with the note 5
  4. 02:02:296 (5) - 4 grids down to make this match with 02:00:630 (2) - ? (you can eventually change the sliders' shapes/positions to make the spacing right)
  5. 02:16:046 (1,2) - Allign the slider 2 with 1
  6. 03:10:213 (1) - Put this here?
  7. 03:28:546 (2) - 1 grid down and left to make the blanket better?
[Damnae's Normal]

  1. 00:33:754 (4) - Manual stack this?
  2. 01:09:796 (4) - 3 grids down and left,just to make 01:08:963 (2,3,4) - a better triangle pattern,and to make this alligned with 01:08:963 (2) - ?
  3. 02:19:380 (1,2) - I think a pattern like this would be better here (if you want,you can put a note like now instead of a repeat with the slider 2)
  4. 02:23:963 (2) - I know this could be considered as a "jump",but I suggest you to move this slider 2 grids right,just to make this encircle in a better way
  5. 02:23:546 (1) -
  6. 03:27:297 (2) - Make this slider stacked with the end of 03:25:630 (2) - ?
[Kazumi's Hard]

  1. 01:02:504 (4) - Put the last waypoint of this slider 4 grids up and 2 left,just to make the blanket with 01:02:192 (2) - better?
  2. 02:17:296 (1) - Put the 2nd waypoint 2 grids down for the same reason as above?
[Insane]

  1. 00:33:338 (2) - Remove the clap at the begnning?
  2. 00:49:588 (8,9) - Why don't you curve this in opposite sides?
  3. 02:32:713 (3) - Allign this with 02:32:505 (2) - by moving it 1 grid right (nazi,fix only if you really want :3)
  4. 03:15:942 (1) - I don't really see the reason on why you used a NC here... Even if it fits with the pattern,it doesen't fit really well with the song's rythm. Remove this?
  5. 03:21:880 (5) - NC here and remove NC on 03:22:505 (1) - to follow the previous patterns?
-kevincela-
Oh,and there is an unsnapped green point too in the Normal (00:41:800,resnap into 00:41:775)
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thx -kevincela- :oops: you very help me. Correct many places ^.^
My Angel Kitteh
Requested mod.

И так, посмотрим О:

[Easy]

00:20:421 нота здесь не к месту, да и нубов введет в заблуждение, перенеси её на 00:20:630
00:24:171 добавь ноту на начало слайдера
00:51:463 пустое место, добавь ноту, можно на конец слайдера
01:53:963 ^ куда-нибудь
02:03:546 - 02:06:255 ↓
03:26:463 удлинни слайдер, он должен закончиться на 03:26:880
03:28:963 пустое место, добавь ноту

[Normal]

00:15:213 вместо этой ноты добавь слайдер с 00:15:005 - 00:15:213
00:19:796 уменьши слайдер до 00:20:005
00:20:213 добавь ноту

Все остальное отлично.

[Hard]

00:43:338 empty place, add circle
01:00:005 ^
02:10:421 ^
02:15:630 ^
It's a quite hard, i guess it must be easier - decrease approach rate.

[Insane]

01:53:338 добавь ноту

Больше не к чему придраться.

Отличная карта, удачи О:
kazumikos

hichman wrote:

Requested mod.
SPOILER
[Hard]

00:43:338 empty place, add circle
01:00:005 ^
02:10:421 ^
02:15:630 ^
It's a quite hard, i guess it must be easier - decrease approach rate.
urhmm sorry but no change =/

-kevincela- wrote:

SPOILER
Kazumi's Hard

01:02:504 (4) - Put the last waypoint of this slider 4 grids up and 2 left,just to make the blanket with 01:02:192 (2) - better?
02:17:296 (1) - Put the 2nd waypoint 2 grids down for the same reason as above?
fixed

thx for modding ^^
http://uploaded.to/file/j9vef0pd
Topic Starter
Poggo
hichman спасибо за мод :3 на изи и нормале исправила всё, инс не трогала :P :P :P
Lizellota
Mod from #modreqs
Hi ~~ ;)
Insane

00:15:213 - на начало я бы поставила финиш, но не знаю как ты, просто совет ^^
00:26:463 (4) - на конце поставь хлопок :о
00:28:546 (1) - а здесь убери хлопок и поставь финиш
00:28:963 (3) - хлопок
00:29:380 (6) - убери хлопок
00:29:588 (7) - на конце слайдера хлопок
00:30:005 (8) - на конце слайдера убери хлопок
00:31:880 (1) - сюда бы вистл ^^
00:32:296 (3) - хлопок
00:32:713 (5) - убери хлопок
00:33:130 (1) - хлопок
00:33:755 - убери хлопок
00:34:171 - поставь вистл, звучит лучше :3
00:34:380 - и сюда тоже, а еще на конец слайдера
00:35:213 (1) - сюда бы финиш :о
00:35:630 - хлопок
00:36:046 - убери хлопок
00:36:463 (4) - хлопок
00:36:880 - убери хлопок
01:03:546 - я бы вместо хлопка финиш поставила :о
01:16:880 (2) - ^
02:00:213 - ^
02:06:880 - ^
02:06:880 - как то не очень здесь звучит хлопок..убери его ^^
02:36:880 - вместо хлопка финиш :3
02:38:963 (4) - передвинь сюда 02:38:859 ну и сделай чтоб красиво смотрелось ;3
02:40:005 - как то не звучит тут финиш :с
02:40:213 (1) - вместо хлопка финиш
02:43:338 (8) - тоже как то не очень :с
02:43:546 (1) - вместо хлопка финиш
02:45:213 (1) - ^
02:56:880 (1) - ^
03:10:213 (1) - ^
03:16:880 - ^
03:23:546 - ^

Kazumi's Hard

02:06:880 - maybe finish?
02:56:880 - ^

Damnae's Normal
01:53:546 - whistle+finish? :o
02:36:880 - ^
02:45:213 - ^
03:03:963 - remove clap and add finish?
03:10:213 (1) - maybe finish?
03:16:880 - finish?
03:23:546 - finish?

Lalala's Easy

00:16:880 - зачем здесь финиш? звучит как то не очень :с
00:21:046 (4) - убери финиш, поставь его лучше сюда 00:21:880
00:26:880 - убери финиш, поставь его лучше сюда 00:26:671
может лучше сюда 00:40:213 - хлопок?
00:40:630 (2) - а здесь убери
01:03:546 - финиш?
01:19:796 - убери финиш :о
01:53:546 - финиш?
02:16:046 (1,2) - может посимметричней сделаешь? :о
03:28:546 (2) - убери финиш, он тут вообще никак не звучит :с

Awesome diffs, good luck with rank nyashi >w<~/
Надеюсь хоть чем то помогла :3
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thx for mod ^^
Come[Back]Home
Damnae's Normal.

00:15:630->Slider till 00:15:838
00:16:046->Slider till 00:16:255
00:16:463->Hit Circle

00:17:713-00:18:546->Do the same like by 00:15:630 till 00:16:463

Kazumi's Hard

00:15:005 Hit Circle
The Rest is cool

Insane

00:15:005-> Hitcircle
00:15:213->Slider till 00:15:630
00:15:838-> HitCircle
00:15:046->Hitcircle
00:16:880->Hitcircle
00:17:088->Slider till 00:17:296

1:28:546 till 1:36:463 OMG i love this Part *O*

It was my second mod, so dont be angry. :3

Sry for my bad english
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thx for mod ^^
Raimon
If I am bored can I do a Taiko for you? :3
Topic Starter
Poggo

raimoncortese wrote:

If I am bored can I do a Taiko for you? :3
yeah ^^ if you want) :oops:
Raimon
http://puu.sh/ADxI two minor changes, and btw you dont have me on the creators words D__:
BCI
[General]
  1. -lalala- сменила ник => следует переименовать ее диффу на YunBora's Easy/прочие вариации этого ника (тут уже как мапперша решит) и (или) добавить этот ник в теги
  2. ты уверена, что ekowraith remix именно? в смысле, здесь может все начинаться с большой буквы
  3. удали техно из тегов, потому что при ранке техно поставят в жанр
  4. в таги желательно добавить Kazumi, но это уже на усмотрение маппера этой дифы
понимаешь, о чем я \:'D/

тайко маппер должен быть в тегах в каждой диффе, да

моддить лень, заглянула одним глазком, так что no kd и все такое \о
Topic Starter
Poggo

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

[General]
  1. -lalala- сменила ник => следует переименовать ее диффу на YunBora's Easy/прочие вариации этого ника (тут уже как мапперша решит) и (или) добавить этот ник в теги <---- Переименовала, добавила))
  2. ты уверена, что ekowraith remix именно? в смысле, здесь может все начинаться с большой буквы <---- тут я уверена, на всех сайтах и даже на радио пишут с маленькой))
  3. удали техно из тегов, потому что при ранке техно поставят в жанр <--- удалила))
  4. в таги желательно добавить Kazumi, но это уже на усмотрение маппера этой дифы
<---- не думаю, полный же ник есть, если часть набирать всё-равно найдётся))
понимаешь, о чем я \:'D/

тайко маппер должен быть в тегах в каждой диффе, да
<--- ох уж эти лаги >.< добавила ещё раз))

моддить лень, заглянула одним глазком, так что no kd и все такое \о
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested

(tag -lalalala-)

[Taiko]
well mention who made this diff in the thread...

-remove letterbox during breaks, flashy warning
-N 40% would be a bit too soft, make it at least audiable. Try 60%

00:01:880 - you can actually start slowing down here to make the first note as fast as the rest
00:06:046 - the note is as high as the note 1 beat later so I think k here is more suitable
00:57:400 - the melody reach the highest at the 4th tick try dddkdk?
01:00:734 - kkkkdk
01:02:400 - kkdddk
01:52:713 - the drum pattern in the music comes 4 in a group so kkkdddkkk (repeats every 3, i.e 3/4 beats) don't fit the song well. Try kkddddddk Also start the faster section a bit later, the note 01:53:546 - should be slower
02:20:213 - this one belongs to the last sentence so it should follow last sentence's speed
03:29:275 - better use a 6-plet like what you do for the whole diff, and changing SV here is a bit misleading since the last note is a bit covered.

6-plet is nothing bad but you can use a pattern that is closer to the melody like the suggestion in 0:57~1:02. There are some good idea but it needs more polishing.
Raimon

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

(tag -lalalala-)

[Taiko]
well mention who made this diff in the thread...

-remove letterbox during breaks, flashy warning
-N 40% would be a bit too soft, make it at least audiable. Try 60%

00:01:880 - you can actually start slowing down here to make the first note as fast as the rest
00:06:046 - the note is as high as the note 1 beat later so I think k here is more suitable
00:57:400 - the melody reach the highest at the 4th tick try dddkdk?
01:00:734 - kkkkdk
01:02:400 - kkdddk
01:52:713 - the drum pattern in the music comes 4 in a group so kkkdddkkk (repeats every 3, i.e 3/4 beats) don't fit the song well. Try kkddddddk Also start the faster section a bit later, the note 01:53:546 - should be slower
02:20:213 - this one belongs to the last sentence so it should follow last sentence's speed
03:29:275 - better use a 6-plet like what you do for the whole diff, and changing SV here is a bit misleading since the last note is a bit covered.

6-plet is nothing bad but you can use a pattern that is closer to the melody like the suggestion in 0:57~1:02. There are some good idea but it needs more polishing.
Changed everything.
Checked all 6-plets and changed some for kkdddk and kkkkdk to make it fit better.
http://puu.sh/ByFh
Topic Starter
Poggo
wmfchris Thank you for mod :3 Update
mancuso_JM_
Hi Katty! Mod Requested from my Queue :P

[General:]

-Difficulties Names: You have the Guests Mappers name on the Guest Difficulties but it doesn't appear on the Taiko Difficulty. For Consistency between difficulties you should add his name in the Difficulty and Would be Raimoncortese's Taiko Oni. (Or Cortese's Taiko Oni, Raimon's Taiko Oni, or something else :P)
- Letterbox During Breaks: Since you have a Storyboard, this Option is unnecesary and doesn't look fine on any aspect. Disable this option in all difficulties.

[YunBora's Easy:]

00:19:796 (2,3): This two notes should be rearranged a bit because they don't follow the music properly. In this case I saw that you want to follow the Vocal (since it's the higher thing in the music in this case), I suggest you a change of pattern something like this: (It's not weird since I checked that you use another Sliders in Red Ticks)
00:41:880 (1): I don't recommend this kind of Sliders with this weird Curve at the end, especially on an Easy difficulties. This kind of Sliders cause confusion in New Players (In the visual to be more concret), it's better to do Cleaner Slider without any kind of weird Curve to be more Readable to New Players. You have a lot of this kind of Sliders, I would like to replace all of the to simple Sliders with notorial Curves (If you want to make a Curve Slider)
01:02:921 (5,6): Don't Stack notes on an Easy difficulty, this cause confusion in New Players too, because the will thought that it's just a note because it is one of the first beatmap played, so, Unstack these notes. (A suggestion: Move (6) to x:176 y:288 and you will not have any Spacing Problem)
01:54:380 (1): Move this note a bit to the middle because it's a bit far after to the Spinner and it's hard to New Players do the Spinner and then go to one of the Corner. I also suggested that here because you will not have to do a lot of changes.
02:02:296 (5): You are missing a Clap in this Note. I can listen a Clap in the song and you always add Clap where appear in the Song
02:06:880 (1,2): You don't have a Stop in the Vocal, It's unnecesary make this as a Slider and then a Note. Simple, sounds better if you make this Slider in 2/1 (The Slider finish where is it (2) in 02:07:713) and after that Remove the Note (2)
02:17:713 (3): And for the same reason as 02:02:296, Add a Clap at the end of this Slider
02:20:213 (Spin): Listening the Change in the Vocal at the end of this Spinner, makes a good sound if you add a Finish here.
02:47:713 (1,2): In the music appear like a Finish Sounds, you need to emphatisize that adding a Finish in these Notes like the music and in (2) Remove the Clap, it doesn't following nothing and sounds really bad.
02:56:046 (2): (NAZI)- Try to play with a bit of symetry, works better and have a better flow. Align this Slider with the Previous Slider (2), to make that move this Slider to x:368 y:256. After that Rearrange a bit the next Slider (1) to don't have Spacing Problem
02:58:338 (2,3): This pattern doesn't follow the music properly and also it's inconsistent looking your other patterns in this Kiai. You Should replace the position in the Timeline and do something like that:
03:12:713 (4): Do you really think that this long fit perfect with the song? Or you just do that to keep the Symetry? To be sincere, you should reduce this Slider in 1/1 and after that add a Note (with Clap) in 03:13:963. Try to do it and you will see that it's better, here is an Screenshoot:
03:26:880: Here is a blank Space but it's totally mapable, I think that you did that because we're on an Easy Difficulty, The Solution to doesn't have a Hard pattern is adding a Reverse Arrow on the Previous Slider (4), sounds much better really.

[Damnae's Normal:]

00:53:546 (1): You should add a Finish at the beginning and at the end of this Slider. Appear in the music like a Finish and it's a good idea if you add one to emphatisize this section, and since you added a Finish at the beginning of the previous Slider (1), this is more consistent
01:01:880 (1): (NAZI)- Disable the Option Grid Snap in the right of your screen, and move this Slider to x:369 y:153 to Stack it properly with the previous Slider (1), this provide a better gameplay.
01:13:546 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4): 8 notes without any Slider in the middle, in some point this is difficult to play to 'Normal' players, especially if they start to play this kind of difficulties recently. Following the music would be an unity in (3,4) and (3,4). In these case replace the notes to Sliders
01:20:213 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4): Same as above, in this case the music change on the second (1,2,3,4), so it's better if you do a difference here. Try to add Sliders in this place
01:35:630 (2,4): Why you don't add Whistles (Soft Custom 1- 60% in Volume) in these Notes? Make a good sound following the previous pattern (1,2,3,4), so you will have Finishes in all Notes (I also saw the 1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4 but you can keep it here :P, since it's the last pattern before the Break and can be Harder than the whole difficulty)
01:52:713 (3,4): The Note (4) in 01:53:338 sounds bad because there isn't any Stop in the music to do the Slider and then a Note. To follow the Vocal properly you should Remove (4) and then expand the Slider to the place where were the note (4)
02:05:005 (2): Only emphatisize the higher in the song, it's a Normal difficulty please. Remove this Kick Slider and then add a Note in 02:05:213
02:12:296 (2,4): (NAZI)- Disable the Grid Snap and move these notes to x:367 y:174 to Stack it properly with the Slider (4), I'm preety sure that you wanted to do that and this looks better. On another hand is not a problem have a Note Out of Grid
02:18:546 (6): The Vocal continue here but you started to follow the Instrumental in this Slider. For this reason you should add a New Combo here and then Remove it from the next note
02:23:546 - 02:36:880: To be Sincere I don't like how to play this Section, the Sliders are too Overlapped and look bad at the hour to play the map. Anyways I don't have any good Suggestion to make it better :(
02:50:213 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3): Well, If I pointed out the (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4), this is absolutley Hard on a Normal Difficulty and also don't work fine a lot of notes on a consistent pattern. Add Sliders on Somewhere please to make the map more enjoyable and also to reduce the difficulty of that.
03:08:546 (1,2): You have to rearrange a bit that, to explain me better you should change the position of that in the Timeline. The Unity in the Song (in the Instrumental to be more concrete) It's at the beginning of this pattern, so you need a Slider in 1/1 here and then is separated rhythm, so, you don't need a Slider to unify anything, just add a Note in 03:09:380. Here is a Screenshoot with the Rhythm and with the position of notes to don't have any kind of Spacing Problem.
03:16:671 (3): This note doesn't work at all, you don't have a high rhythm in the music to have a Note in this place. It would be better if you Remove this note from here
03:18:338 (3): (^)
03:20:838 (2): (^)

[Kazumi's Hard:]

00:16:880 (5): I think that you don't need Whistle in all notes because don't sound at the same form in these 3 places. If you Remove this Whistle, you make a good difference in the music
00:20:213 (4): (^)
00:55:005 (1,2): The shape of these Sliders (at the beginning) make a bad flow, really. They doesn't fit at all and when you have to play they cause confusion to follow properly. You should rearrange a bit these Sliders to have a better flow in the map
00:55:838 (3,4): This patterns would have a better flow if you exchange their position. In concrete you have to put (3) where is it (4) already and (4) where is it (3)
01:09:484: If you want to follow the rhythm properly (Like you said with (2) and (3)) you have to Remove (4) and add another Kick Slider that Start here and finish in 01:09:588 (Where was (4)).
01:22:400 (2,3): I think that this pattern doesn't follow the music properly especially when appear the Repetition, here the music sounds like off rhythm in some aspect and doesn't follow the music very well. Try to change that to something like this, works better in my opinion:

02:19:171 (5): I can't listen any sound here, for this reason this note is unnecesary. Remove it, Please
02:39:796 (x): I can listen the Instrumental in this point but you don't have nothing to remark that. You should add a note to complement the 5-plet
02:42:817 (3): And for the same reason as above, you should add another Repetition in this Slider
02:50:838 (1): This New Combo is not necesary because there is not any change in the music/stanza to do this a New Combo and also it's inconsistent with your combo'ing in the whole of the map. So, Remove this New Combo
02:54:796 (8): This note Stacked with the previous 3-plet make a good flow, you have to stop at the hour to play the map on an unnecesary place. Also, cause confuse this kind of things and they are boring to play. Try to unstack this to note to the other ones
03:23:546 (4): Move this Slider to x:108 y:360 because the Reverse Arrow is almost covered to the hitburst of (2) and this is relative unrankable. Try to move the Slider to avoid the problem

-Well, Is not bad but this is Harder than a common Hard. This difficulty has a lot of Jumps and Streams that make this difficulty Harder.

[Insane:]

00:16:671 (4,1): This pattern is not following the music at all.The note (4) sounds bad where is it and the Slider sounds of Rhythm especially following the Vocal. To make a better pattern, Remove the Note (4) and then move the Slider (1) to the position (in the Timeline) where was (4), follow the music on a better way, and then (but this is optional) if you want to keep the difficult you can add a Note in 00:17:296
00:33:338 (2): This Slider doesn't work fine here, because it doesn't covered all the things in the song and also are not following the music completely. For a better Rhythm, try to make this Slider in 1/2 (+ Repeat) and then add another Slider in 1/2 in 00:33:963. Here is an Screenshoot if you didn't understand me:
00:44:692 (x): I think that you can enforce this Vocal Remix adding a Note in this place
00:48:546: Listening the music, the Stream would start here, at the end of this Slider. So, I suggest you to add a Note in 00:48:650 to follow the Instrumental properly
02:05:838 (2): If I were you, I would follow the Instrumental and I would do a Slider in 1/4 (Finish in 02:05:942) and then add a Repetition
02:12:296 (4): It's an Insane, you can play more with the Rhythm and with the notes. This Slider in 1/1 works fine but in a Normal difficulty for example because don't covered all the stuff in the music (Especially in the middle with the Slider Tick). In this difficulty works better if you Reduce this Slider by 1/2 (finish in 02:12:505) and then add a Note in 02:12:713

In some places I think that you can covered a bit more the music but it's not bad in General. With some more mods you can polish that.

Well, I have to Sleep, if I found something else in your Insane I'll contact you in-game, this time I'll skip the Taiko difficulty.
In General, this map needs some more work especially in Easy and Normal.
Put all your effort on it! And Good Luck ;)
kazumikos

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

SPOILER
[Kazumi's Hard:]

00:16:880 (5): I think that you don't need Whistle in all notes because don't sound at the same form in these 3 places. If you Remove this Whistle, you make a good difference in the music ok
00:20:213 (4): (^)
00:55:005 (1,2): The shape of these Sliders (at the beginning) make a bad flow, really. They doesn't fit at all and when you have to play they cause confusion to follow properly. You should rearrange a bit these Sliders to have a better flow in the map oh, i just tried to come up with smth that can replace 3 notes stream there :| if u think it's unnecessary i'll fix then
00:55:838 (3,4): This patterns would have a better flow if you exchange their position. In concrete you have to put (3) where is it (4) already and (4) where is it (3) fixed
01:09:484: If you want to follow the rhythm properly (Like you said with (2) and (3)) you have to Remove (4) and add another Kick Slider that Start here and finish in 01:09:588 (Where was (4)). ok sound good to me
01:22:400 (2,3): I think that this pattern doesn't follow the music properly especially when appear the Repetition, here the music sounds like off rhythm in some aspect and doesn't follow the music very well. Try to change that to something like this, works better in my opinion sorry i cant change this, there must be a note at blue tick. I could have used stream here but it would be harder so..
02:19:171 (5): I can't listen any sound here, for this reason this note is unnecesary. Remove it, Please k
02:39:796 (x): I can listen the Instrumental in this point but you don't have nothing to remark that. You should add a note to complement the 5-plet i remember i added it before O_o weird
02:42:817 (3): And for the same reason as above, you should add another Repetition in this Slider o_O
02:50:838 (1): This New Combo is not necesary because there is not any change in the music/stanza to do this a New Combo and also it's inconsistent with your combo'ing in the whole of the map. So, Remove this New Combo why did i put a new combo here @@
02:54:796 (8): This note Stacked with the previous 3-plet make a good flow, you have to stop at the hour to play the map on an unnecesary place. Also, cause confuse this kind of things and they are boring to play. Try to unstack this to note to the other ones stacked with 1 then
03:23:546 (4): Move this Slider to x:108 y:360 because the Reverse Arrow is almost covered to the hitburst of (2) and this is relative unrankable. Try to move the Slider to avoid the problem uhm.. but by the time u reach 4 combo burst of 2 has disappeared, or it's just a blur, so i think it's still readable?
-Well, Is not bad but this is Harder than a common Hard. This difficulty has a lot of Jumps and Streams that make this difficulty Harder. thx i'll note this
thx for modding ^^
http://www.mediafire.com/?11l1p07lvxo3atq
Topic Starter
Poggo
Very big thanks
mancusojuanmattos correct many places ♥ update
spboxer3
from Kawayi Rika's mod queue.

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. [suggestion] Umm... remove all letterbox if you have SB

YunBora's Easy



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. Yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 02:14:796 (2,2) -
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:51:463 (4) - sound you should add clap because you used clap at 00:49:796 (2) - and it's in the same part.

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:31:880 (2) - It's look a awkward slider shape. suggest used 00:30:630 (4) - and Flip Horizontal it.
  2. 01:10:213 (1) - let the second node up 1 grid (size 4 ) to make symmetrical slider (notice: this slider rhythm will be delay.).
  3. 01:11:880 (1) - same as 01:10:213 (1) -
    code
    56,224,71880,6,0,B|168:224|168:224|184:208|184:208|184:236|184:236|200:220|200:220|264:220,1,240,4|0
  4. 01:16:880 (1) - awkward slider shape. you can make the layout better~
    photo and code

    338,93,76880,6,0,B|305:36|305:36|279:58|232:58|206:36|206:36|173:93,1,240,0|0
  5. 01:18:546 (3) - ^ used 01:16:880 (1) - and rotate 180∘
  6. 01:58:546 (4) - It's not a good slider shape.
    photo and code

    89,281,118546,2,0,B|204:324|204:324|224:296|288:296|308:324|308:324|422:281,1,360,4|8
  7. 03:02:296 (2,1) - Umm... you should stack it ~ It's looks like a bit off

Damnae's Normal



  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:21:880 (1) - It's have a kinda off if you used "reverse selection ". I try to help you fix it↓
    photo and code

    64,216,21880,6,0,B|8:176|12:104|44:56,1,180,2|0
  2. 00:44:588 (3,2) - it should be stack. fix it please~
  3. 00:57:296 (2,1) - ^
  4. 01:16:880 (1,2,3,4) - It's not a pretty pattern imo. but whatever~:P
  5. 01:33:546 (1,2,3,4) - Umm... It's not a square.↓ I just move (3,4) and stack on the (1,2)

Kazumi's Hard


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. duplicated timeline:
    01:36:880
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:03:129 (5,3,5) - It should be stack. please fix it.

Insane


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line (It doesn't affect to player. but I suggest you to remove it):
    01:40:109
    01:40:317
    01:51:775
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:25:005 (5,3) - Umm...I think it still need stack~ if you change this. please used "Flip Horizontal" to fix 00:25:630 (2) -


Raimon's Taiko Oni


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. remove "display epilepsy warning" in Taiko diff
  2. 01:53:546 - kiai should start at here and end at 02:20:213 -
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:08:546 - [suggestion] add note
  2. 00:38:546 (158,159,160,161,162) - sound dkddd/kdkkk is better.
  3. 03:29:796 -

    you must fix it~
well~that's all. good luck~ :P
Raimon

spboxer3 wrote:

from Kawayi Rika's mod queue.

Raimon's Taiko Oni


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. remove "display epilepsy warning" in Taiko diff ouuuch fixed~
  2. 01:53:546 - kiai should start at here and end at 02:20:213 -
It used to start and finish there but wmfchris told me to change it because of the bpm change but now is all 1xbpm (except from the initial part wich is 0,90xbpm) so ill change it again, thanks~

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:08:546 - [suggestion] add note It sounds a bit forced so I will leave it how it is now
  2. 00:38:546 (158,159,160,161,162) - sound dkddd/kdkkk is better. Changed but to kdddk (dkddd doesnt sound good in that part for me)
  3. 03:29:796 - What do you mean with this? LOL

    you must fix it~ Changed to all 1xbpm except from the starter part (its 0,9xbpm) because it is A LOT slower in comparison with the song
Thanks for the mod ~ ^w^

http://puu.sh/Ega7
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thx for mod spboxer3:3 fixed almost all :P :P :P
kazumikos
fixed! thx for modding ^^
http://puu.sh/EgKd
RikiH_
Hi! I'm here for m4m

YunBora's Easy

01:02:713 (5,6) - Please avoid to stak objects in easy diffs, it's very hard for a newbie player
01:13:546 (3) - New Combo
01:36:046 (4) - x:20 y:360
02:16:880 (2) - Make this slider symmetric with 02:16:046 (1)
02:17:713 (3) - NC
03:20:630 (1) - Make this slider symmetric with 03:19:796 (6)

Damnae's Normal

01:03:130 (3,4) - What about replacing these notes with a slider?
01:18:546 (3) - Add new combo
03:01:880 (1) - Overlaps with 03:01:046 (4)
03:05:213 (1) - Remove NC
03:10:213 (1) - ^
03:10:630 (2) - Add NC
03:25:213 (1) - Remove NC
03:25:630 (2) - Add NC

Kazumi's Hard

Nice!

Insane

Add some hitsounds like other diffs!

02:36:046 (5) - Why don't replace this with five circles?
02:36:671 - Add a note here


Very good map and storyboard, good luck!
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you for mod ^.^ correct some places :3
Stefan
I think the BG won't be fine since the new discussion about NSFW stuff.
Topic Starter
Poggo

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

I think the BG won't be fine since the new discussion about NSFW stuff.

BG is normal.
Tur00
[storyboard]

use your own advice.

[YunBora's Easy]

00:39:380 - i think that this overlap is a little hard of look by the newbies players. move it.
00:49:796 (2) - 1 grid up
01:20:213 (5) - better move here the spin and delete this note but that the spin end in 01:22:505
without sample.
02:08:130 (2,4) - same of 00:39:380.
02:37:713 (2) - is advisable dont use a note in this snap in a easy lvl better extend the slider of 02:36:880 to finish here.
02:41:046 (2) - same ^
02:44:796 (2) - i think that is better if you change this note for a hitcircle with clap.
02:45:630 (3) - move this slider to 02:45:213 and 1 grid up "finish in the 1st part of the slider and 2nd without sample
02:46:463 - make a hitcircle here.
03:26:463 (3,4) - same of 00:39:380

it is all.

[Damnae's Normal]

this diff is good! :D
Congratulations Damnae :)

[Kazumi's Hard]

00:23:755 (6) - this note dont sound good , you select wht make with it :P

only , this diff too is very good

srry for dont mod taiko or insane but me don't modding this diffs u_u
Really srry :C
thx for the mod4mod
wait that this is usefull for you
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you for mod ^.^ correct some places :oops:
Melophobia
M4M~ sorry for the delay :o

[Easy]
02:05:630 (3) - missing clap? i couldnt find any reason not to add.
02:40:213 (1) - shorten this by 1/2 beat because the slider end follows nothing
02:48:546 (3) - same reason as above, extend this by 1/2 or 1/1 beat. at least you should remove the clap from it
02:56:880 (1) - default finish sounds nice here

[Normal]
00:41:880 (1) - finish here?
00:46:463 (4) - add finish at the end? sounds better than whistle imo
00:56:880 (1) - finish
03:23:546 (1) - ^

[Hard]
AR-1 please, the current one is too fast for a Hard diff and the BPM.
00:19:588 (3,4) - they can be stacked better imo
01:03:338 (1,2) - switch these newcombos to follow downbeat
01:53:130 - unused green line
02:02:296 - add note? feels empty due to the lack of clap
02:06:880 (1) - add finish
02:51:463 (6) - missing clap?

[Insane]
00:33:338 (2) - add clap to the repeat? sounds nice to me
00:52:713 (5,6,7,8,9) - i'd suggest lower spacing for consistency with the previous streams,
00:54:796 (1) - the beginning of the spinner doesnt follow anything. so start this 1/1 later
01:20:734 - add a note here to make stream?
01:53:546 (1) - add finish
02:06:671 (4) - add finish at the end
02:43:546 (1) - add finish

not much to say, good luck!
kazumikos

Melophobia wrote:

[Hard]
AR-1 please, the current one is too fast for a Hard diff and the BPM. nope it's hard to read
00:19:588 (3,4) - they can be stacked better imo they r stacked o_O
01:03:338 (1,2) - switch these newcombos to follow downbeat fixed
01:53:130 - unused green line deleted
02:02:296 - add note? feels empty due to the lack of clap k
02:06:880 (1) - add finish done
02:51:463 (6) - missing clap? no it's not
thx for modding ^^
http://puu.sh/IvUW
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you
Melophobia
correct some places ^^
LQA20Ans
M4M. You can ignore my advice if you mind.

[YunBora's Easy]

00:51:880 (1,2,3,4) - how about this one?
http://puu.sh/LOJc
1,4 is stack.

01:33:546 (1,2,3,4) - ^
http://puu.sh/LOMk

02:51:046 (2) - I think clap is better than finish
and 02:52:296 (3) - remove the former clap

[Damnae's Normal]

nice map!

[Kazumi's Hard]

00:17:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - how about this one?
http://puu.sh/LOZZ
4,6 is stack.

00:27:921 (4,5) - Change the position each other.

01:11:463 (6,7) - ^

Very tricky map...


[Insane]
Nice map!


Nice song, Nice map!
Topic Starter
Poggo
thx for mod ^^ on Easy fixed all :3
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