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Starry_old
Thanks to all mods,

I fixed alot of things,

and DS should be really really really correct now. ._.

Pm sent to Aoko
Topic Starter
Aoko
Finally able to update Starry's diff! Moved to pending once again~ <'3
Kanari
Yay ~
Milkshake

Easy

00:26:214-
00:26:881- add two notes here. u can put them on 10% vol.
00:42:881- this note overlaps a bit. move it a bit upper.
00:43:547- you know, i wonder why you did a spinner here. you could map it like this-
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473052 [spinner came after 00:42:881- ]
00:59:548- this slider looks ugly to me, and too long.
make it shorter to 01:02:881 and add note on 01:03:548.
01:07:548- RNC
01:10:881- ^
01:11:548- NC
01:14:881- RNC
01:59:548- looks kinda ugly..?
01:34:811- finish
01:35:548- remove finish
01:42:214- this clap feels random, change to whistle or just remove it
01:47:548- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473065 make better shape like this. copy paste it for the next one,
both looks kinda weird
^also finish on the spinner after that
01:56:881- remove finish
01:57:548- finish
01:59:548- finish here and in the end of the slider
02:22:881- add note.
02:34:881- RNC
02:35:548- NC
02:39:548- finish
02:42:881- feels kinda early for me. try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473075
1 is stacked with 2
02:56:881- clap
02:57:548- remove clap
03:00:881- clap
03:01:548- remove clap
03:06:881- clap
03:16:881- remove finish put clap
03:17:548- put finish
03:21:548- ^
03:27:548- the fuck is that long spinner. end it here.

Normal

you threw lot of random claps in the start, i don't get why. i get what you tried to do but everything sounds pretty random and makes no sense, at least to me.
00:38:881- rnc
00:39:547- NC
01:38:214- remove clap.
01:38:548- remove whistle, put on 5
01:47:548- How about following rhythm like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473091 this
01:53:548- whistle.
02:24:214- remove clap
02:30:881- blanket is not good and overlaps the slider. move to x:116 y:108
02:31:548- remove clap and put whistle on 02:30:881
02:36:548- remove clap put on 5. also remove the clap from 6 and put it on 7.
02:40:214- remove clap put on 5.
02:43:548- why suddenly whistle? same goes to 4. you used lot of claps before afterall.

i'll probably continue later, wait for my edit. but yeah. idk why but the hitsounds disturbed me.

Hard

you threw lot of whistles in the start..
00:23:547(1,2)- remove hitsounds from both. i think it's better with less whistles
00:27:547(1,2,3)-^
00:31:547- better to put the whistle in the end of the slider. same goes to 3.
00:35:547- put the whistle in the repeat instead of the start.
00:39:547- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473665 how about making this slider with 3 points?
00:41:214- make it looks like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473669 ? 1 dot for the slider design.
00:43:547- whistle on the end instead plz.
00:45:214- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473672 maybe like this.?
00:47:547- whistle in the repeat instead. same goes for 00:49:547
01:04:548- put whistle on 2 instead of here.
01:08:548- follow rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/1iSgX not much to change, if you do that don't forget to fix hitsounds too anc placement
01:31:214- move to x:232 y:292
01:32:548- make look like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473679 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473680
01:43:048- remove note. feels very forced stack
01:48:318- remove this too. why
02:35:548- overlaps and stuff. how about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473686 ? (fix the slider and circle placement too.)
03:12:214- how about following rhythm and placement like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473692
03:31:548- end spinner here
gl.
Topic Starter
Aoko

Milkshake wrote:

Easy

00:26:214- you said to add note here right? done~
00:26:881- add two notes here. u can put them on 10% vol. done
00:42:881- this note overlaps a bit. move it a bit upper. done
00:43:547- you know, i wonder why you did a spinner here. you could map it like this-
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473052 [spinner came after 00:42:881- ] done, made some changes here
00:59:548- this slider looks ugly to me, and too long.
make it shorter to 01:02:881 and add note on 01:03:548. done, made some changes here too
01:07:548- RNC done
01:10:881- ^ nope
01:11:548- NC ^
01:14:881- RNC done
01:59:548- looks kinda ugly..? looks okay to me
01:34:811- finish done
01:35:548- remove finish done
01:42:214- this clap feels random, change to whistle or just remove it i like its sound, so no
01:47:548- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473065 make better shape like this. copy paste it for the next one,
both looks kinda weird
^also finish on the spinner after that done
01:56:881- remove finish done
01:57:548- finish done
01:59:548- finish here and in the end of the slider done
02:22:881- add note. done
02:34:881- RNC done
02:35:548- NC done
02:39:548- finish okay
02:42:881- feels kinda early for me. try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473075
1 is stacked with 2 it's okay to me ;w; no change
02:56:881- clap ok
02:57:548- remove clap ok
03:00:881- clap done
03:01:548- remove clap done
03:06:881- clap done
03:16:881- remove finish put clap done
03:17:548- put finish okay i guess
03:21:548- ^ okay
03:27:548- the fuck is that long spinner. end it here. OMG what happened here done fixed

gl.
Thanks for the mod! Made a lot of changes on my diff <3 Kds to you~
Edit:

Fixed Crystal's Diff
Saten
owo

[General]
I think you can do a better job on the edges on the comboburst~

o.o

[Crystal]
use 10-15% on the silent intro
00:46:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - move these 2 grids up so it becomes completely symmetrical
00:56:881 (1,2) - nothing wrong really but this might look like a 1/4 pattern
01:00:547 (1,2,3) - same as above
01:03:547 (1,2,3) - ^ yeah, you don't have to change, but slow sliders plus high spacing (no jump-like spacing) works nice imo
01:34:548 (9) - can you move this 2 grids right (custom stack)? the regular stacking makes the previous one go up a bit
01:38:548 (7) - 2 grids up
01:52:548 (2,3,4) - this part looks exactly like 01:33:881 (6,7,8) -
02:51:548 (1) - whistle instead of finish
02:58:548 (7) - 2 grids left
03:00:547 (2,3) - 1 grid down
03:02:548 (7) - 2 grids down
03:14:548 (6) - whistle
03:29:048 (1) - silence it from the start instead and move it to 03:28:881 -

[Starry]
The hitsounds on the intro is kinda loud compared to the song, lower the volume to 10-15%
02:27:214 (1) - what's with the NC here? it should be on (2) or (6)
02:30:881 (1) - 2nd point 3 grids down, 3rd point 2 grids right
03:01:881 (4,5) - visible spacing error
03:07:547 (1,1) - a spinner, then a note on a 1/2 beat. That might be a bit harsh, but it's up to you
03:13:548 (5) - move the tail away from the next object

[Easy]
like the other diffs, you should lower the volume to 10-15%
00:29:548 (6) - move it to x:256 y:212 aka middle-line
00:32:881 (1) - stack this with previous object
01:31:548 (1) - remove the finish from the end
01:33:548 (2) - ^
01:35:548 (3) - add finish on start
01:55:548 (1) - remove the finish from the first repeat and add finish on the beginning as well
01:59:548 (3) - not completely symmetric. But then again, no one would notice that while playing :P
02:55:547 (1) - add finish on start
03:07:548 (5) - whistle on tail
03:13:547 (4,1) - try avoid letting them touch each-other
03:15:547 (1) - finish on start
03:17:547 (2) - remove finish from both sides


calm song~

good luck♪
Kanari
Thankyou ~

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340,340,157547,2,0,B|324:384|212:384|192:332,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,192,158881,6,0,B|96:152|136:135,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,208,159547,2,0,B|247:174|281:94,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,24,160547,2,0,B|216:40|199:80,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,148,161214,1,0,0:0:0
144,184,161381,1,0,0:0:0
124,220,161547,2,0,B|90:246|84:289,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,340,162881,5,2,0:0:0
300,352,163047,1,0,0:0:0
336,340,163214,1,2,0:0:0
416,340,163547,2,0,B|416:268|356:260|356:260|276:260,2,160,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
456,340,165047,1,2,0:0:0
468,300,165214,1,0,0:0:0
480,260,165381,1,2,0:0:0
484,220,165547,6,0,B|484:60,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
408,80,166547,1,0,0:0:0
332,104,166881,1,2,0:0:0
256,132,167214,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,167547,12,0,170881,0:0:0
256,192,171547,12,2,174881,0:0:0
180,84,175547,6,0,B|124:27|34:21,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,100,176547,1,0,0:0:0
112,128,176881,2,8,B|169:186|259:192,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,192,177881,1,2,0:0:0
376,188,178047,1,0,0:0:0
416,180,178214,1,0,0:0:0
336,192,178548,1,2,0:0:0
112,32,179547,6,0,B|112:196,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,236,180547,2,8,B|69:265|114:268,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
183,236,181214,2,8,B|155:265|110:268,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,180,181881,1,0,0:0:0
112,140,182048,1,0,0:0:0
112,100,182214,1,0,0:0:0
112,180,182548,1,2,0:0:0
404,36,183547,6,0,B|348:94|258:100,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,100,184547,1,0,0:0:0
116,148,184881,2,0,B|145:177|190:180,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,180,185547,2,0,B|402:166|420:252|362:303|294:252|308:166|448:180,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
456,216,187047,1,0,0:0:0
476,248,187214,1,2,0:0:0
256,192,187547,12,0,190881,0:0:0
472,348,191547,6,0,B|472:280|396:280|396:204,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,212,192547,1,0,0:0:0
292,180,192714,1,0,0:0:0
268,212,192881,2,0,B|228:228|184:208,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,140,193547,2,0,B|228:106|190:106|190:68,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
190,210,194548,1,2,0:0:0
152,280,194881,1,0,0:0:0
28,32,195547,6,0,B|28:196,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
28,272,196547,1,2,0:0:0
108,300,196881,1,0,0:0:0
188,272,197214,1,0,0:0:0
268,300,197548,2,0,B|268:340,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,268,198214,2,0,B|384:252|427:266,2,80
388,336,199547,6,0,B|464:388,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
480,304,200214,1,0,0:0:0
480,224,200547,1,2,0:0:0
404,248,200881,2,0,B|328:200,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,124,201547,1,8,0:0:0
268,168,201881,1,0,0:0:0
200,124,202214,1,2,0:0:0
24,176,202881,6,0,B|24:244|80:256|80:256|160:256,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,324,203881,1,0,0:0:0
208,344,204047,1,0,0:0:0
244,364,204214,1,0,0:0:0
256,244,204547,5,0,0:0:0
360,184,204881,1,0,0:0:0
256,244,205214,1,0,0:0:0
152,184,205547,2,0,B|152:116|96:104|96:104|16:104,2,160,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,184,207214,2,0,B|312:184,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,207881,12,0,211548,0:0:0
Topic Starter
Aoko

Saten wrote:

owo

[General]
I think you can do a better job on the edges on the comboburst~


I couldn't find a better one and I think it looks okay ;w; It's part of the render. If it look so bad then.. I'll try my best to find a person who can render off the edges of the comboburst.
o.o

[Easy]
like the other diffs, you should lower the volume to 10-15% fixed
00:29:548 (6) - move it to x:256 y:212 aka middle-line moved to x:256 y:216 if it's fine, still middle-line part
00:32:881 (1) - stack this with previous object fixed and made some changes
01:31:548 (1) - remove the finish from the end fixed
01:33:548 (2) - ^ this one has no finish?
01:35:548 (3) - add finish on start fixed
01:55:548 (1) - remove the finish from the first repeat and add finish on the beginning as well okay
01:59:548 (3) - not completely symmetric. But then again, no one would notice that while playing :PSorry about that xD If could make it more symmetric, please help me then ;w;
02:55:547 (1) - add finish on start removed clap and changed to finish
03:07:548 (5) - whistle on tail done
03:13:547 (4,1) - try avoid letting them touch each-other fixed
03:15:547 (1) - finish on start removed clap and changed to finish
03:17:547 (2) - remove finish from both sides fixed


calm song~

good luck♪ Thank you Saten <3
Note:
Fixed Crystal's Diff
Kanari
Aoko, I can render the comboburst for you ~
But i'll do it when I get home xD


Edit: Done ~ Theres a light glow around it ~
Topic Starter
Aoko
Yey! Thank you Crystal <3 ily~
R e v i v e
Hi from my FB modding queue ~

  • General ~
  • • Add "Departures" in your tag. (This album)
  • • Need more Hitsound and sound volume orz :(
  • Unrankable ~


My suggestion ~

Easy ~

I'll focus only this diff because other diff it's fine okay ? (but need more hitsound)

I highly recommend use all "25% Hitsound volume" in this difficulty, coz it's easy to listen for new player. (Some note Finish and Whistle sound it's look silence)

00:27:548 (4) - Remove whistle.
00:29:548 (6) - Add whistle start.
00:43:547 (3) - ^
00:47:547 (6) - Add whistle start & end.
00:58:214 (1) - Feel weird end finish, I suggest you remove it.
00:59:548 (2) - Add whistle end.
01:22:881 (3) - Add whistle.
01:26:881 (1,2) - Feel weird again, it's miss 01:26:214 (x) note, maybe move spinner end to 01:26:214
01:31:548 (1,2,3) - Add whistle end all these slider.
01:40:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe arrange this note like this ?
01:40:881 (2,5) - Add whistle.
01:56:881 (1) - Add Whistle this time.
01:58:881 (2) - Add whistle.
02:19:548 (1) - Whistle end.
02:22:881 (3) - Add whistle.
02:28:881 (2) - Whistle start & end.
02:32:881 (5) - Whistle start.
02:34:881 (6) - Whistle.
02:35:548 (1,2) - Whistle end.
02:42:881 (1,2) - Whistle start.
02:46:881 (3) - Whistle.
02:55:547 (1,2,1,2) - Whistle end.
03:05:547 (4) - ^
03:12:881 (3) - Whistle.
03:13:547 (4) - Finish end.
03:15:548 (1,2) - Whistle end. (If you have other finish sound remove it.)
03:19:547 (1,2) - Whistle end.

Good luck >3
Topic Starter
Aoko

R e v i v e wrote:

Hi from my FB modding queue ~

  • General ~
  • • Add "Departures" in your tag. (This album) Fixed~
  • • Need more Hitsound and sound volume orz :(Easy diff has now 25% volume, thanks to your mod. xD Idk with the other diffs.
  • Unrankable ~
  • • Silence "soft-sliderslide" is Unrankable from Ranking Criteria. OMG ;w; If it's really unrankable for this map, i'll find a sliderslide that is softer and has a sound. The slider would really sounds bad if it has sounds =w=


My suggestion ~

Easy ~

I'll focus only this diff because other diff it's fine okay ? (but need more hitsound) Okay sure, it would help me improve my skills since I'm still a newbie mapper >w<

I highly recommend use all "25% Hitsound volume" in this difficulty, coz it's easy to listen for new player. (Some note Finish and Whistle sound it's look silence) Okay fixed, except for one part only 10% volume bec. it is like an extra note. It wouldn't sound good if it's too loud.

00:27:548 (4) - Remove whistle. No. It has a bg sound and sounds like whistle at that part.
00:29:548 (6) - Add whistle start. It sounds weird? So no.
00:43:547 (3) - ^ Okay.
00:47:547 (6) - Add whistle start & end. Fixed
00:58:214 (1) - Feel weird end finish, I suggest you remove it. Okay
00:59:548 (2) - Add whistle end. done
01:22:881 (3) - Add whistle. okay
01:26:881 (1,2) - Feel weird again, it's miss 01:26:214 (x) note, maybe move spinner end to 01:26:214 i'm just following the beat of the song. If i move the spinner to 01:26:214, it doesn't make sense and doesn't follow the rhythm so no. If I also add a note there, the newbie players will find it hard to readjust their cursors and stuff.
01:31:548 (1,2,3) - Add whistle end all these slider.okay
01:40:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe arrange this note like this ?
no change, looks okay to me
01:40:881 (2,5) - Add whistle. ok
01:56:881 (1) - Add Whistle this time. Okay
01:58:881 (2) - Add whistle. okay
02:19:548 (1) - Whistle end. done
02:22:881 (3) - Add whistle. okay
02:28:881 (2) - Whistle start & end. ok
02:32:881 (5) - Whistle start. ok
02:34:881 (6) - Whistle. fixed
02:35:548 (1,2) - Whistle end. done
02:42:881 (1,2) - Whistle start. okay
02:46:881 (3) - Whistle. done
02:55:547 (1,2,1,2) - Whistle end. okay~
03:05:547 (4) - ^ okay
03:12:881 (3) - Whistle. fixed
03:13:547 (4) - Finish end. fixed
03:15:548 (1,2) - Whistle end. (If you have other finish sound remove it.) Fixed but I didn't remove the finish in (1)
03:19:547 (1,2) - Whistle end. done

Good luck >3 Thank you for the mod >w< Made a lot of changes. #whistle♫
NoEvA
revise
yurunneram
OMS so many posts?! O_O Ok, might be hard find errors... Oh! Found one ^^ lol~

Design, Timing and General
Nice storyboard and skin~

Easy
00:47:547 (6) - It's blocking your storyboard...
Er... not much for easy.

Normal
No Prob

Hard
er... nothing T-T

Sorry! my mod is terrible... You can don't give me Kudosu. OAO sorry...
Topic Starter
Aoko
OAO~ Its Okay! Thank you for the veryyy tinyyyy mod xD~
I moved the note, so after the note is played, the lyric is visible but a lil' hidden at the beginning. xD

AWtheSHiNOBi wrote:

revise
What do you mean? =w=
Breeze
[General]

  1. I was expected a better custom soft-hitclap which fit this song more, maybe you can use this
    http://puu.sh/1vYhz


[Easy]

  1. 00:51:547 (1) - Hmm, I feel end this spinner at 00:54:881 would be better
  2. 01:26:881 (2) - NC this note since it's after a spinner
  3. 02:55:547 (1) - I think you can raise volume to 40% to the head of this slider


[Starry's Normal]

  1. 03:10:547 (2) - NC due to spinner
  2. 01:47:548 (1) - Slider head, 40%-50% volume better imo
  3. 02:55:547 (3) - ^


[Crystal's Hard]

  1. 00:35:547 - Why here 0.5x BPM?
  2. 01:41:548 (4) - Try this code for a better curve, if you change this, remember to adjust the notes after this slider
    248,184,101548,2,0,B|124:200|88:120|160:56|232:120|196:200|72:184,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  3. 01:58:881 (1,5) - It's weird that in a same combe, 1 is 0.5x BPM but 5 is 1x BPM, maybe just change 1 to 1x BPM?
  4. 02:55:547 (1) - Slider head, 40%-50% volume maybe?
  5. 03:05:547 (4) - If you changed 01:41:548 (4), change this, too


Call me back when you have reply
Topic Starter
Aoko

Breeze wrote:

Hi Breeze! >w< [General]

  1. I was expected a better custom soft-hitclap which fit this song more, maybe you can use this
    http://puu.sh/1vYhz
I will fix this later, puush site seems to be down :/

December 3- Fixed and Added! It sound okay~ xD

[Easy]

  1. 00:51:547 (1) - Hmm, I feel end this spinner at 00:54:881 would be better Okay, sure. Fixed. ;)
  2. 01:26:881 (2) - NC this note since it's after a spinner Okay Fixed~
  3. 02:55:547 (1) - I think you can raise volume to 40% to the head of this slider Sure, fixed.


[Starry's Normal] I'm going to be the one to fix Starry's diff since she is hiatus at the moment~

  1. 03:10:547 (2) - NC due to spinner Fixed~
  2. 01:47:548 (1) - Slider head, 40%-50% volume better imo Fixed~
  3. 02:55:547 (3) - ^ Fixed~


Awaiting Crystal's response for her diff~

Fixed Crystal's Diff!

Call me back when you have reply Okay! Thanks for the mod and for the ✰ <'3 Sent a reply ~ x)
Breeze
Bubbled
I love your SB design
Topic Starter
Aoko
Yey! Thank you very much Breeze! <3
MMzz
[Easy]
01:27:548 (2) - There needs to be a break after this note.

[Normal]
02:27:548 (2) - Put the NC here instead of 02:27:214 (1) - . Follow the downbeat like you have been.

Just these two small things, call me back when it's fixed!
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