1. Delete spinner-background.jpg if you're not use.
2. Inconsistency in Tags:

   ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (i_k's Normal)
   ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Clara Alice (lucyfly's Hard)
   ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (Happy Birthday!)

1. AR-1

1. 00:09:500 (1) - Use the same slider velocity with 00:07:860 (5) ?

1. 04:22:625 (1) - Asymmetric. Make sure it's symmetry of all the point.

1. I feel that the two are about the same difficulty for lucyfly's Hard and Happy Birthday!, I think that can enhance the Happy Birthday!'s diff. or make a really insane.

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Request from Game-pm/Forums-pm/Modding Queue

[General]

1. Delete spinner-background.jpg if you're not use. this is bug....fix~
2. Inconsistency in Tags:

   ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (i_k's Normal)
   ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Clara Alice (lucyfly's Hard)
   ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (Happy Birthday!)

~fix~

[Happy Birthday!]

[Layout]

1. 04:22:625 (1) - Asymmetric. Make sure it's symmetry of all the point.

ORZ.....吐槽again~FIX~
[Opinion]

1. I feel that the two are about the same difficulty for lucyfly's Hard and Happy Birthday!, I think that can enhance the Happy Birthday!'s diff. or make a really insane.

这个。。。。。呜呜呜。。。现在改觉得会。。。orz~MAT说不行的话我就remap去。。或者开个新diff好了。。。orz加难什么的。。。>~<~><><><><><~

that all

Athena Tennos wrote:

kyuten wrote:

oh god that avatar x_x
[i_k's Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:08:563 (2) - 这个放在中线上吧ww1和3都是对称的 【maybe u can put this one in centre line~wwwww~because 1 & 3 is symmetrical each other~ unconcistant spacing www

00:51:453 (1) - start here 00:51:102 其实差不多...orz 【i think no more change...orz~ no, moar soft spinner for beginners ;3

01:10:672 (6,1,2,3) - 这里的话....6上面减少一个reverse，然后01:11:610 - 这里开始的节奏也和之前的一样会不会更好一些？【this one ....over the 6, less a reverse~, than 01:11:610 - this start rhythm as same as in front,~it is more good?~ wuut?

01:15:828 (4,1) - 感觉有点断了ww 【feel a bit no consistent~ so what is this? 01:18:641 (2) -

03:35:985 - 这里开始不是也和03:32:235 - 一样的节奏/歌词嘛..倾向于和前面那个一样的patten ww 【maybe this a start part also can as 03:32:235 - ,because they r same rhythm/song work~~~more like that a patten in front~~~www~ Ill think about this if its pointed later

=_=let me practise english again~.....

Flask wrote:

[i_k]
00:20:985 (5) - move to 00:21:219 - there is no sound where you are pointing 3:
01:05:046 (2) - move left 1 gird (gird level 4)
01:16:766 (x) - add a note , and ctrl+R (1)
01:32:703 (2,3,4) - a little bit messy ._>. try this looks the same

01:39:266 (4) - finish
02:53:211 (1) - remove whistle (blue tick)
02:54:149 (2) - ^ what blue tick?
03:40:438 (1) - move to 03:40:203 - then try this no *3*

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested in game ~
ClariS ! >w<


[General]
- Remove the bookmarks. ~I think no necessary, but fix~xD~~~
- At the end of the SB, its " beatmap " not " bestmap ". ~~~~wait rainbow done his exam~then, fix it~
- You should add Lucyfly to the SB credit as well since the person helped make it ~ ^~
- Add Sun Rainbow to the tags for the SB. ~FIX~
- Kadono Toshikazu composed the song so maybe add that to the tags as well ? ~FIX~

[Happy Birthday!]
- HP Drain +1 FIX~
01:21:219 (1) - End spinner at 01:23:328 ? I think rhythm is good, now~xD
01:29:891 (3) - Place under 01:28:485 (1) properly ~ fix~
01:37:860 (7) - Place under 01:36:688 (3) fix~
02:38:563 (2) - Place under previous note properly ~fix~
03:38:094 (2) - Watch your placement. xDfix~
04:22:625 (1) - Such a nice slider. >w< thx~xD


Nice song and well mapped !
Good luck and 2 stars ~ ;D

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Unused Image Files
sb\bg01.jpg
sb\bg08.png
sb\bg09.png
spinner-background.jpg fix~


kiai不同...由于乃用了一堆线....所以...自己检查orz （↓找不同）
fix~

[Happy Birthday!]
00:20:750 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个摆的不好看...至少感觉不顺 fix~
01:02:235 (1) - 换成粉色的 否则(2)根本看不见嘛=-= fix~？有点不明白0.0~
01:28:485 (1) - ctrl+r fix~
01:49:110 (1) - slider的头建议不要被遮住 呜呜呜。。。感觉skin的原因没完全挡住吧~xD~其实我不知道怎么改orz
02:45:360 (8) - 开头finish fix~
02:45:828 (1) - spacing fix~
04:11:610 (7) - 总感觉ctrl+r更好点 fix~
--------------------------------------------------
Wonderful Mapset
SB挺给力
给星

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\BS.png",320,240
M,0,264735,,206,248
S,0,264735,264759,0.8975999
F,0,264735,266610,0,1
F,0,266610,270360,1
F,0,270360,272235,1,0

Snowy Dream wrote:

[i_k's Normal]
00:19:813 (4) - delete finish
00:50:047 (2) - ^
I feel that you abuse finish a bit :< some can use whistle instead I love finishes, what a shame that you dont
01:16:766 (5) - add a note? there is an object here
01:31:297 (4) - try ctrl+r? why? spacing is perfect
01:49:813 - delete finish
02:03:641 (3) - end at the next red tick and then add a slider at 02:04:110 (a return at 02:04:461)
03:46:297 (3,5) - use whistle instead finish

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there, sorry for late~

General:

-offset +10? this..idk..let XBT check it...orz

Happy Birthday!:

01:10:672 (1) - remove NC ~fix！~
01:35:985 (1) - add finish on start to be consistent with previous part?
01:43:485 (1) - add finish on start?
01:47:235 (3) - add finish on start?
01:52:860 (8) - add finish?
02:52:860 (1) - add finish on start?
02:56:610 (3) - add finish on start?
03:00:360 (1) - add finish on start?
03:07:860 (1) - add finish on start?
03:11:610 (3) - add finish on start?
03:15:360 (1,2) - add finish on start?
04:09:735 (1) - add finish on start?
04:13:485 (5) - add finish on start?
04:21:688 (2,3) - add finish?
04:22:625 (1) - hm, mute the sliderticks on this slider? sounds a lot better IMO

almost fix~

nice map~

eikkaleyd wrote:

来太晚了抱歉~
话说ClariS那个声音比较成熟的，声音辨识度好低噗

——看上去配置不错哈~看到skin和SB我就忽然懒得mod了觉得很漂亮……

[Happy Birthday!]
00:11:610 (2) - 第二个点往里收点，x112 y260这样 ~fix！~
00:44:422 (9) - 这个形状也很奇怪啊 ~fix！~
01:14:656 (5) - ^，我就挑我一眼看去很别扭的好了 ~fix！~
01:26:375 (4) - CTRL+R，理由有，和12的flow相同（相反方向）以及因为音高是从高到低的（sore-zore这句） ~fix！~
01:47:235 (3,4) - 推荐先是往下凹的拖条，再是往上凸的（因为12都是往下凹的） ~fix！~
02:50:281 (5) - CTRL+R，也是跟音高（modo是从低到高） ~fix！~
——我的跟音高拖条习惯，主要集中在重音上面，不过不知道A碳认不认可;_; ~才不会！~表示学习了！~下次我也注意一下@！

For normal, looked through it, but found nothing special~
In fact I think you have got enough mods, just check some sliders' shape and New combo if you like.
It's a reaaaaaaaally good map. Must be ranked soon~!

jesse7419 wrote:

多了美美的SB 又更讚了
加油!!快rank吧 >w<

cx040156 wrote:

教练我来了，您的教导真是令我内牛满面感动涕零，我现在就把第一颗星射给你><

1. Inconsistency in Tags:

   Happy Birthday! : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
   i_k's Normal : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
   lucyfly's Hard : ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara
   Rainbow's Easy : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu

1. Ar+2

1. 00:13:485 (3,4) - 疊起來了, 分開它們
2. 00:54:735 (1) - 同樣是不同顏色重疊，這個節拍比 00:37:391 (1,1) 慢了一倍，新玩家容易混淆它們
3. 01:02:703 (3,4,1) - ^
4. 01:26:610 (3) - 距離
5. 01:34:110 (1) - Ez裡不要用折返兩次以上的滑條，新玩家會miss掉最後一下
6. 02:11:610 (2) - 向下移動2格 Grid Lv4
7. 02:20:985 (1) - 它跟 02:19:110 (2) 重疊了
8. 02:22:391 (2) - 重疊在 02:20:516 (3) 的位置會比較好

1. 01:43:485 (1) - 對我來說 01:43:953 折返比較適合
2. 01:47:235 (3) - ^
3. 01:50:985 (1,1) - 組合成1個轉盤，因為第2個轉盤長度太短，不合符標準
4. 02:24:735 (1) - 同樣地在 02:25:203 折返
5. 02:51:922 (5) - 在 02:52:391 折返
6. 02:54:735 (1) - 在 02:55:203 或者 02:55:672 結束，不然不合符Voice
7. 03:08:797 (2) - 03:09:266 折返；我不懂為甚麼要Easy用藍線，既不合Voice也不合難度要求
8. 03:15:360 (1) - 跟著"Yo~~" 所以結束在 03:20:985
9. 03:47:235 (1) - 同樣地 03:46:531 開始比較適合
10. 04:22:860 (1) - 對我來說 04:26:610 結束會比較好，只是這會浪費了 04:24:735 這個Finish；我的做法會刪掉這個轉盤，用Note、Sliider取替，然後到 04:24:735 之後繼續做下去

1. 01:24:735 (1) - Finish代替；就像您的 02:49:110 這樣
2. 04:05:985 (1) - ^

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

SB挺美的0.0

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Request from Game-pm

[General]

1. Inconsistency in Tags:

   Happy Birthday! : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
   i_k's Normal : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu
   lucyfly's Hard : ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara
   Rainbow's Easy : ikari_kyon lucyfly Sun Rainbow BIRTHDAY Alice Clara Kadono Toshikazu

fix！~

要吃午餐去, 而且還有GD趕著做QQ
所以只是很隨便mod了~ That all

Mystica wrote:

some random checks.

[I]
00:07:860 (1,2) - 對稱放多好看現在真心搓 瞎~我不知道怎么对称。。。orz~
01:31:063 - 倒是沒覺得這三連意義很大 fix~
01:31:297 (1,2,3) - 以後注意下design現在擺放真心不好看 fix~
01:49:110 - 這段還是填充點3/4更符合rhyme fix~
02:16:766 - 這個五連感覺是硬塞進去的 有鼓点的说~
02:21:922 (2) - 往上拉幾個grid可以更好看 fix~
02:35:047 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這兩串沒看出感覺 fix~
後面偷懶了大概就是對rhyme還是有些掌握不夠不過作為新手很好了 thx~

閃人睡覺

Mystica wrote:

[IK]
00:51:453 (1) - spinner a little short....um...but ok here wut? xD
01:32:703 (2,3,4) - place not very beauty to see..consider it's place? suggest? ;3?
03:15:360 (2) - make it symmetrical. blanketing attemp, cant make symmetrical pattern

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

简单mod一下~

Insane

SPOILER

00:39:735 (6) - 歪啦 fix~
00:52:860 (3) - ^ ^
01:21:219 (1) - 我觉得从这里01:21:102开始感觉比较好 fix~
01:28:485 (1) - 修型 fix~
01:50:047 (4) - 有点歪 fix~
02:19:110 (4) - 说实话形状。。。好扭曲的赶脚，能看得出来是跟之前拉条重叠，但是确实不好看。。。要不要试试这样？ fix~
02:43:485 (3,6) - 这两个完全可以尾压尾的 fix~
02:50:281 (5) - 形状修修好 fix~
03:11:610 (3,5) - 这两个压着点感觉不太好其实。。。这种好些没？ fix~
大问题没有，拉条形状需要在自己仔细拉拉形状，对称才好~ 嗯^ ^~

大家继续加油~迟早会rank的不要太着急~ Good luck guys~

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Normal
01:22:156 (1) - better start at 01:21:922 long space for beginners 3;
01:31:297 (4) - maybe whistler instead of finish at the tail? nope
02:45:360 (3) - maybe do it like this dunno, mine is moar simple

03:11:141 (5) - i think finish is better than whistler here
03:47:235 (5) - after this i suggest this:, all circles added have a finish hitsound other 3 circles? but there is no sound after that D:
others are good~

ts8zs wrote:

Normal
……
02:23:211 (4) - 既然那么在意压线的话=3=
其他的槽点还是懒得吐槽

raririn wrote:

Hi ,recheck
mod only Easy and the creator's diff
just nazi

[SB]
*Beatmap那里没有Sun Rainbow么？
*上下两个Lucyfly的'L'大小写不统一
*我觉得可能需要癫痫警告 找MAT/BAT确认一下
04:05:516 - 到 04:05:750 - 麻麻呀这里SB好可怕 让人以为突然FL了 强烈的建议删除

[General]
*开始部分的音量建议是50%-60%S 那个100%N建议80%N
*建议在01:04:110 - 01:05:047 - 01:05:985 - 01:06:922 - 加绿线让音量渐强 如果你开始音量改了的话就65% 70% 75% 80%这样

[Rainbow's Easy]
00:37:391 (1) - 这里没必要NC的啦
开始的部分我还是建议像其他难度一样下whistle clap显得略有些嘈杂
00:39:735 (2) - 这样的长度在Easy可能会造成误读 建议拉长
00:41:610 - 到 00:46:766 - 每两组NC建议合并 太短了
00:53:797 (2) - 如果你不去掉这里的whistle那么建议在00:54:735 (1) - 这个开头加whistle
01:08:094 - 强烈的不建议空着 空的多了确实会给新手造成影响
01:24:735 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 彩虹你什么意思 毫无理由的变NC是不行的O_O
01:47:235 (3) - 折返上不应该是whistle 改clap
02:02:469 - 意义不明的break
02:09:735 (1) - 第二个tick拉到(x=168,y=104) 第三个tick拉到(x=144,y=132)
02:19:110 (2) - 折返上去掉clap 听起来不好
02:28:485 (1) - 咋这么多tick 去掉2个
02:50:047 (3) - ^
02:56:610 (1) - 拉正点 显然不是个等腰梯形啥的
03:13:016 (2) - 建议改finish
03:32:235 - Easy强烈地不建议变速 很容易误读 而且这里的变速最重要的是你DSx2了 这样就很难读
03:58:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这段我建议下whistle
04:11:610 (5) - spacing
04:22:860 (3) - 头whistle

[Happy Birthday!]
01:21:102 (1) - 这里我不建议用转盘代替 可以在01:21:102 - 01:21:922 - 01:22:391 - 分别加1/2 1/4 1/8的折返滑条 不过这梗有人喜欢有人讨厌你自己看看吧
01:38:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这stream还是别减DS做成一串长连打好

fine.Good Luck with rank~

ts8zs wrote:

Normal
……
02:23:211 (4) - 既然那么在意压线的话=3=
其他的槽点还是懒得吐槽

@ikari_kyon
I can't totally understand that ts8zs said,but I think it's reallt a bit hard for a Normal diff,so I suggest you change it into two circles at02:23:328 - and 02:23:563 -

raririn wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

Normal
……
02:23:211 (4) - 既然那么在意压线的话=3=
其他的槽点还是懒得吐槽

@ikari_kyon
I can't totally understand that ts8zs said,but I think it's reallt a bit hard for a Normal diff,so I suggest you change it into two circles at02:23:328 - and 02:23:563 -

Athena Tennos wrote:

nice translate！im entangled with how to translate it think all the morning....orz...

ikari_kyon wrote:

what? ↑

1. Lucyfly's diff is missing the tags "Sun Rainbow Kadono Toshikazu",remember to add them!

1. 00:19:813 (4,5) - This is just a cosmetic thing,but it would be cool to change this slider and the note's position in this way?
2. 01:21:922 (1) - Move this 1/2 before its current beginning and make it longer by 1/2? Imho,something like this would fit better.
3. 01:48:875 (3) - Move this at x:256 y:88?
4. 02:20:047 (1) - Move the new combo on 02:19:110 (4) - and add a new combo at 02:20:985 (3) -? Imho,it fits better with the singer's voice.

1. 00:07:860 (5) - New combo here,to keep the consistency with the following patterns
2. 00:50:047 (4) - CTRL+R? Imho,it flows better in this way
3. 01:18:172 - Add a note here stacked with 01:17:235 (6) - and having a whistle?
4. 02:14:422 (4) - Same as 00:50:047 (4) -
5. 02:42:547 - Same as 01:18:172 -
   Good diff, I'm just a bit disappointed for the use of copy-paste but okay.

karenying wrote:

01:49:578 (2) - 少了個clap
路過 不用kd