ClariS -Sayonara wa Iwanai

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Illumined
Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (・∀・)

General
  1. Storyboarding都在哪裡? .osb裡面有代碼, 但沒有看見文件夾內的檔案
  2. spinner-circle.png的大小需要正好在666x666 pixel
  3. Normal很明顯不能成為最低難度, 拍子取的太難了, 補上一個簡單點Easy?
i_k's Normal
  1. Hitsounds are too harsh D: Especially continuous finishs and Normal hitsounds. Try to reduce volume on non-kiai parts : soft by 10~15, Normal by 20.

00:42:078 (4) - Move the whistle from reverse to head
00:47:000 (3,4) - Spacing error
lucyfly's Hard
  1. 不錯的, 但相對Insane的jump有點多
  2. 音量太太太太太高了, Finish聽著十分刺耳, Soft hitsound 在非kiai部份至少要調低至75%, 尤其在這裡03:50:985 -

00:15:360 (1) - 這裡還是前奏部份, 應該繼續用0.50x/0.75x?
00:17:235 (5) - ^
01:05:047 (1,2,3) - 用個大點的jump
01:30:125 - 加上Whistle比較好聽
01:45:125 - ^
02:54:500 - ^
03:05:750 (5) - 或 03:07:156 (8) - New combo, 這裡的combo有點長了
03:09:500 - Whistle
04:11:375 - ^
Happy Birthday!
  1. 音量問題和Normal一樣, 但只需要將所有Normal下降至60%
  2. Kiai的whistle嚴重不足
  3. 作為最高難度, jump設置的不太足夠(相對Hard), 排版綁的太緊了

01:22:860 - Normal

01:00:360 (1,3) - 形狀有點難看
01:49:110 (1) - 不太需要new combo
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

Illumined wrote:

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (・∀・)

General
  1. Storyboarding都在哪裡? .osb裡面有代碼, 但沒有看見文件夾內的檔案 ~sor....我在和帮我做SB的修改中~还没确定。。。不小型传上去了吧。。sor~
  2. spinner-circle.png的大小需要正好在666x666 pixel ~~fix~~
  3. Normal很明顯不能成為最低難度, 拍子取的太難了, 補上一個簡單點Easy?
。。。没说一定要easy所以。。。orz~

Happy Birthday!
  1. 音量問題和Normal一樣, 但只需要將所有Normal下降至60%
  2. Kiai的whistle嚴重不足
  3. 作為最高難度, jump設置的不太足夠(相對Hard), 排版綁的太緊了

01:22:860 - Normal~~fix~~

01:00:360 (1,3) - 形狀有點難看 hmm~我也不知道怎样才好看了。。。orz~求pic~
01:49:110 (1) - 不太需要new combo ~~fix~~
thx~mod!话说我已近糊涂了。。。orz你到底会不会中文啊0.0!!!~这句话是褒义的。。别误会~。orz~~~
Illumined
簡體字看不太懂…平常習慣用英文>_<

至於Easy我認為還是需要補上的, 這個N的難度太高, 星數顯示2.66也只因為spacing跟SV開的十分低, 實際節奏比正常Easy要密集
(密集節奏加上低spacing...)

至於slider不用太在意, 習慣看平滑的而已!
Sun Rainbow

Illumined wrote:

簡體字看不太懂…平常習慣用英文>_<

至於Easy我認為還是需要補上的, 這個N的難度太高, 星數顯示2.66也只因為spacing跟SV開的十分低, 實際節奏比正常Easy要密集
(密集節奏加上低spacing...)

至於slider不用太在意, 習慣看平滑的而已!
那EASY由我补上吧
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Illumined wrote:

簡體字看不太懂…平常習慣用英文>_<

至於Easy我認為還是需要補上的, 這個N的難度太高, 星數顯示2.66也只因為spacing跟SV開的十分低, 實際節奏比正常Easy要密集
(密集節奏加上低spacing...)

至於slider不用太在意, 習慣看平滑的而已!
那EASY由我补上吧
謝謝彩虹君!~
xD....不過果然還是覺得不太需要吧。。。~

hmm~~~果然還是XAT們說的算吧~。。。orz~
Hinsvar
Yo.

ClariS \:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General
  1. You might want to cut the last 30 seconds of the .mp3...
  2. Weird... I got ~30ms early when playing all diffs. Don't know; might be just me.


>i_k's Normal
  1. 02:32:235 (1) - I've known and am respecting your somewhat frequent (can't really use occasionally here) usage of stylized sliders, but this one... making it similar to 02:49:110 (1) should do, IMO.


>lucyfly's Hard
  1. 00:18:641 (6) - NC here and remove the one on 00:19:110 (1)?
  2. 01:18:875 (1,2,3) - Converting this triplet into a 1/4 slider that repeats once should do better.
  3. 01:19:813 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 02:43:250 (1,2,3) - ^
  5. 02:44:188 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 02:45:125 (1,2,3) - ^
  7. 03:41:375 (3) - NC?


>Happy Birthday!
  1. 01:01:297 (3) - Don't really think this is the best choice available. Use a shape similar to 01:02:235 (1)?
  2. 03:00:360 (1,2) - Eh... I think it's (1) that's supposed to have the repeat and not (2).
  3. 04:15:711 (2) - Use 1.2x DS? I'm serious; 3/4 stuff plays far better that way.
  4. 04:22:625 (1) - ...This is magic. Who made this?


Good mapset...

...and I really want to map this now. My God. I should really do it after I am finished with my current pending mapsets.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo.

ClariS \:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General
  1. You might want to cut the last 30 seconds of the .mp3... ~i think i dont need to cut mp3~because~my draining only 3:45 min~no more than 4 min~
    The maximum time for a map is 4 minutes. However, this is neither "Total" nor "Draining" time, but rather the time from the first note in the map until the last note. Thus, this is the "Total" time of the mp3 with intro and outro time excluded.
  2. Weird... I got ~30ms early when playing all diffs. Don't know; might be just me.


>Happy Birthday!
  1. 01:01:297 (3) - Don't really think this is the best choice available. Use a shape similar to 01:02:235 (1)? ~i change other form~fix~
  2. 03:00:360 (1,2) - Eh... I think it's (1) that's supposed to have the repeat and not (2). ~i change other form~fix~
  3. 04:15:711 (2) - Use 1.2x DS? I'm serious; 3/4 stuff plays far better that way. ~fix~
  4. 04:22:625 (1) - ...This is magic. Who made this?
~me~xD

Good mapset...

...and I really want to map this now. My God. I should really do it after I am finished with my current pending mapsets.

Good luck on the way 8-)
THX~ur mod!~
kyuten
Hi~Request from my queue

完成度很高了ww我就说一下自己的想法吧ww

[i_k's Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:08:563 (2) - 这个放在中线上吧ww1和3都是对称的
00:51:453 (1) - start here 00:51:102 其实差不多...orz
01:10:672 (6,1,2,3) - 这里的话....6上面减少一个reverse,然后01:11:610 - 这里开始的节奏也和之前的一样会不会更好一些?
01:15:828 (4,1) - 感觉有点断了ww
03:35:985 - 这里开始不是也和03:32:235 - 一样的节奏/歌词嘛..倾向于和前面那个一样的patten ww

[lucyfly's Hard]
-Beatmap-
01:07:860 - 这里也闪一下><

[Happy Birthday!]
-Beatmap-
04:20:047 (7) - 这个第一次没读出来...
04:22:625 (1) - XDDD 不过稍微有一点不对称ww调整一下ww

[Overall]
竟然还没rank╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭ 快找MAT吧ww
Flask
Request from IRC o.o~

[General]
.osb 不見了 (SB會用到)
Tags要不要考慮加上 'happy'

[i_k]
00:20:985 (5) - move to 00:21:219 -
01:05:046 (2) - move left 1 gird (gird level 4)
01:16:766 (x) - add a note , and ctrl+R (1)
01:32:703 (2,3,4) - a little bit messy ._>. try this
01:39:266 (4) - finish
02:53:211 (1) - remove whistle (blue tick)
02:54:149 (2) - ^
03:40:438 (1) - move to 03:40:203 - then try this

[lucyfly]
AR略高 -1 (反正下面還有最難的diff)
沒啥好挑剔的 ...

[你的diff]
01:20:985 (1) - 這裡應該要N然後上Finish
01:52:508 (5,6,7,8) - 這邊全clap有點吵又不適合 可能放(5)就好
02:13:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有點像在硬塞滿歌詞 支持(4,5)變slider
04:22:977 (x) - 為啥要5%

感覺滿不錯的 不過這diff一開始像Hard後面像Insane是什麼意思ˋˊ

Star ! 加油 !
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from my queue

[i_k's Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:08:563 (2) - 这个放在中线上吧ww1和3都是对称的 【maybe u can put this one in centre line~wwwww~because 1 & 3 is symmetrical each other~

00:51:453 (1) - start here 00:51:102 其实差不多...orz 【i think no more change...orz~

01:10:672 (6,1,2,3) - 这里的话....6上面减少一个reverse,然后01:11:610 - 这里开始的节奏也和之前的一样会不会更好一些?【this one ....over the 6, less a reverse~, than 01:11:610 - this start rhythm as same as in front,~it is more good?~

01:15:828 (4,1) - 感觉有点断了ww 【feel a bit no consistent~

03:35:985 - 这里开始不是也和03:32:235 - 一样的节奏/歌词嘛..倾向于和前面那个一样的patten ww 【maybe this a start part also can as 03:32:235 - ,because they r same rhythm/song work~~~more like that a patten in front~~~www~

=_=let me practise english again~.....
kyuten
∑O.O...忘记了看GD的国家Tv T
sorry...i forgot to use english for GDTv T
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

kyuten wrote:

∑O.O...忘记了看GD的国家Tv T
sorry...i forgot to use english for GDTv T
never mine~xD~
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

Flask wrote:

Request from IRC o.o~

[General]
.osb 不見了 (SB會用到)
Tags要不要考慮加上 'happy'

[你的diff]
01:20:985 (1) - 這裡應該要N然後上Finish ~FIX~
01:52:508 (5,6,7,8) - 這邊全clap有點吵又不適合 可能放(5)就好 ~FIX~
02:13:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有點像在硬塞滿歌詞 支持(4,5)變slider ~FIX~
04:22:977 (x) - 為啥要5% 0.0~xD~>_<~@_@~

感覺滿不錯的 不過這diff一開始像Hard後面像Insane是什麼意思ˋˊ @_@~0.0~xD~>_<~

Star ! 加油 !
THX!~STAR!~AND!~MOD!~


kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from my queue

[Happy Birthday!]
-Beatmap-
04:20:047 (7) - 这个第一次没读出来... XD~
04:22:625 (1) - XDDD 不过稍微有一点不对称ww调整一下ww 借某MAT的话~把想表达的表达给player就好了~xD~~~我也改了下~xD~~FIX~

[Overall]
竟然还没rank╮( ̄▽ ̄")╭ 快找MAT吧ww
THX~MOD~~~由于彩虹君的SB还没有fix~所以~~~~~祝彩虹君早点考完试!!!~
早点挂科吧~偶呵呵呵呵呵~~~~ 我黑了。。
ertyukjh010


Request from Modding Queue

[General]

  1. Delete spinner-background.jpg if you're not use.
  2. Inconsistency in Tags:
    ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (i_k's Normal)
    ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Clara Alice (lucyfly's Hard)
    ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (Happy Birthday!)


[lucyfly's Hard]

  1. AR-1

[Layout]
  1. 00:09:500 (1) - Use the same slider velocity with 00:07:860 (5) ?


[Happy Birthday!]

[Layout]
  1. 04:22:625 (1) - Asymmetric. Make sure it's symmetry of all the point.

[Opinion]
  1. I feel that the two are about the same difficulty for lucyfly's Hard and Happy Birthday!, I think that can enhance the Happy Birthday!'s diff. or make a really insane.


that all :)
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Request from Game-pm/Forums-pm/Modding Queue

[General]

  1. Delete spinner-background.jpg if you're not use. this is bug....fix~
  2. Inconsistency in Tags:
    ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (i_k's Normal)
    ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Clara Alice (lucyfly's Hard)
    ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (Happy Birthday!)
~fix~

[Happy Birthday!]

[Layout]
  1. 04:22:625 (1) - Asymmetric. Make sure it's symmetry of all the point.
ORZ.....吐槽again~FIX~
[Opinion]
  1. I feel that the two are about the same difficulty for lucyfly's Hard and Happy Birthday!, I think that can enhance the Happy Birthday!'s diff. or make a really insane.
这个。。。。。呜呜呜。。。现在改觉得会。。。orz~MAT说不行的话我就remap去。。或者开个新diff好了。。。orz加难什么的。。。>~<~><><><><><~

that all :)
thx ur mod!~
jossieP

Athena Tennos wrote:

kyuten wrote:

oh god that avatar x_x
[i_k's Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:08:563 (2) - 这个放在中线上吧ww1和3都是对称的 【maybe u can put this one in centre line~wwwww~because 1 & 3 is symmetrical each other~ unconcistant spacing www

00:51:453 (1) - start here 00:51:102 其实差不多...orz 【i think no more change...orz~ no, moar soft spinner for beginners ;3

01:10:672 (6,1,2,3) - 这里的话....6上面减少一个reverse,然后01:11:610 - 这里开始的节奏也和之前的一样会不会更好一些?【this one ....over the 6, less a reverse~, than 01:11:610 - this start rhythm as same as in front,~it is more good?~ wuut?

01:15:828 (4,1) - 感觉有点断了ww 【feel a bit no consistent~ so what is this? 01:18:641 (2) -

03:35:985 - 这里开始不是也和03:32:235 - 一样的节奏/歌词嘛..倾向于和前面那个一样的patten ww 【maybe this a start part also can as 03:32:235 - ,because they r same rhythm/song work~~~more like that a patten in front~~~www~ Ill think about this if its pointed later

=_=let me practise english again~.....
thanks Athena <3 <3

Flask wrote:

[i_k]
00:20:985 (5) - move to 00:21:219 - there is no sound where you are pointing 3:
01:05:046 (2) - move left 1 gird (gird level 4)
01:16:766 (x) - add a note , and ctrl+R (1)
01:32:703 (2,3,4) - a little bit messy ._>. try this looks the same
01:39:266 (4) - finish
02:53:211 (1) - remove whistle (blue tick)
02:54:149 (2) - ^ what blue tick?
03:40:438 (1) - move to 03:40:203 - then try this no *3*
asdfdfsdffd
Kanari
Haii ~
You requested in game ~
ClariS ! >w<


[General]
- Remove the bookmarks.
- At the end of the SB, its " beatmap " not " bestmap ".
- You should add Lucyfly to the SB credit as well since the person helped make it ~
- Add Sun Rainbow to the tags for the SB.
- Kadono Toshikazu composed the song so maybe add that to the tags as well ?


[i_k's Normal]
- Overall Difficulty -1
01:06:453 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:06:219 ?
01:22:156 (1) - Start this at 01:21:922
02:45:711 - Add a note ?
02:45:828 (1) - Start this spinner at 02:46:063 and end it at 02:48:172
03:47:703 (1) - Start this at 03:47:469


[lucyfly's Hard]
- HP Drain +1
02:34:813 (1) - Place under 02:32:938 (2) - properly.
03:06:688 (7) - Place under 03:05:281 (3)
03:13:250 (4) - Place where 03:10:906 (3) was?


[Happy Birthday!]
- HP Drain +1
01:21:219 (1) - End spinner at 01:23:328 ?
01:29:891 (3) - Place under 01:28:485 (1) properly ~
01:37:860 (7) - Place under 01:36:688 (3)
02:38:563 (2) - Place under previous note properly ~
03:38:094 (2) - Watch your placement. xD
04:22:625 (1) - Such a nice slider. >w<


Nice song and well mapped !
Good luck and 2 stars ~ ;D
jossieP
not moving spinners, also OV is low enough I think
Topic Starter
Athena Tennos

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested in game ~
ClariS ! >w<


[General]
- Remove the bookmarks. ~I think no necessary, but fix~xD~~~
- At the end of the SB, its " beatmap " not " bestmap ". ~~~~wait rainbow done his exam~then, fix it~
- You should add Lucyfly to the SB credit as well since the person helped make it ~ ^~
- Add Sun Rainbow to the tags for the SB. ~FIX~
- Kadono Toshikazu composed the song so maybe add that to the tags as well ? ~FIX~

[Happy Birthday!]
- HP Drain +1 FIX~
01:21:219 (1) - End spinner at 01:23:328 ? I think rhythm is good, now~xD
01:29:891 (3) - Place under 01:28:485 (1) properly ~ fix~
01:37:860 (7) - Place under 01:36:688 (3) fix~
02:38:563 (2) - Place under previous note properly ~fix~
03:38:094 (2) - Watch your placement. xDfix~
04:22:625 (1) - Such a nice slider. >w< thx~xD


Nice song and well mapped !
Good luck and 2 stars ~ ;D
\O/THX!ur star!!!~and mod~xD
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
Unused Image Files
sb\bg01.jpg
sb\bg08.png
sb\bg09.png
spinner-background.jpg

lighthole ←这个效果用的时候太边上了 没什么感觉..试着靠近中心


kiai不同...由于乃用了一堆线....所以...自己检查orz (↓找不同)



[i_k's Normal]
00:19:813 (4) - delete finish
00:50:047 (2) - ^
I feel that you abuse finish a bit :< some can use whistle instead
01:16:766 (5) - add a note?
01:31:297 (4) - try ctrl+r?
01:49:813 - delete finish
02:03:641 (3) - end at the next red tick and then add a slider at 02:04:110 (a return at 02:04:461)
03:46:297 (3,5) - use whistle instead finish


[lucyfly's Hard]
04:17:938 (2) - reduce a return and add a ntoe at 04:19:110
04:22:625 (6) - delete finish at the start


[Happy Birthday!]
00:20:750 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个摆的不好看...至少感觉不顺
01:02:235 (1) - 换成粉色的 否则(2)根本看不见嘛=-=
01:28:485 (1) - ctrl+r
01:49:110 (1) - slider的头建议不要被遮住
02:45:360 (8) - 开头finish
02:45:828 (1) - spacing
04:11:610 (7) - 总感觉ctrl+r更好点
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