KersiTyan wrote:

from my queue ;3

[Happy Birthday]

00:10:438 (6) - remove whistle
00:17:000 (3) - add whistle
00:17:000 (3) - remove whistle
00:41:141 (1) - ^
00:43:016 (6) - add whistle
00:43:836 - remove whistle
00:44:422 - ^
01:02:235 - add whistle
01:03:172 - remove whistle
01:03:641 (4) - add whistle
01:10:438 - remove whistle
01:12:547 - ^
01:12:781 - add whistle
01:13:953 - ^
01:14:422 - remove whistle
01:32:235 - add finish
01:34:813 - remove clap
01:35:281 - ^
01:35:985 - add finish
01:43:485 - ^
01:47:235 - ^
01:50:985 (1) - ^
02:25:906 (5) - remove whistle
02:27:781 (5) - ^
02:28:016 (6) - add whistle
02:34:461 - remove whistle
02:37:391 (3) - ^
02:43:485 (3,6) - maybe stack better?
02:46:063 (3) - remove clap and add whistle
02:46:531 (3) - remove clap
02:47:000 (3) - remove clap and add whistle
02:59:188 - remove clap
02:59:422 - ^
02:59:891 (5) - add clap
03:00:360 - remove clap
03:00:828 - add clap
03:01:414 - remove clap
03:01:766 (4) - add clap
03:02:235 - remove clap
03:02:586 - add clap owo
03:06:688 - remove clap
03:07:860 - add finish
03:11:610 - ^
03:13:485 - remove clap
03:13:836 - add clap
03:14:422 (2) - remove clap
03:14:891 - add clap
03:15:360 - remove clap and add finish
03:16:063 - remove clap and add whistle
03:46:297 (6) - remove whistle
04:13:485 - add finish
04:17:235 - ^
04:16:766 (1) - add clap
04:17:000 (2) - remove clap
04:17:703 - add clap
04:17:938 (2) - remove clap
04:18:882 - ^
04:20:985 - add finish

fix a lot of~thx~

That's all, Good luck~ nice song >w<

Pereira006 wrote:

I check another diff is fine for me anyway no kudosu pleasse
good luck and bye bye

Leorda wrote:

Oh hi there

[General]
* You need approachcircle.png, for completing set of hitcircle set~ok~i'll~

Good luck~

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~ recheck mod

[Happy Birthday!]
00:20:750 (1) - when you listen here like Pum is not make this song just this timing need change normal to Soft i mean this http://puu.sh/BQbd on this timing 00:20:750
00:43:016 (6) - I try understand you style hitsound so if you hitsound keep it consistency you need remove this whistle imo most better
00:43:485 (8) - remove whistle the end slider
01:14:656 (5) - remove whistle the end slider
01:18:172 (5,6) - change whistle i mean add whistle on (5) and remove (6) whistle if you keep consistency imo
01:34:110 (1) - IMO this slider on middle is not make sense and weird for me most better if remove
01:35:047 (2) - remove clap only end slider
01:37:860 (7) - same happened on 01:34:110 (1)
02:24:735 (4) - add whistle the end slider too
02:25:906 (5) - remove whistle
02:26:610 (4) - same happened on 02:24:735 (4)
02:27:781 (5) - same happened on 02:25:906 (5)
02:58:485 (3) - again weird for me remove clap on middle
03:00:360 (1) - remove clap only start
03:00:828 (2) - add clap on start and remove clap on end
03:01:766 (4) - add clap
03:02:235 (6) - remove clap only start slider
04:15:711 (2,3,4) - IMO not make sense clap for me just remove clap all
04:16:766 (1) - add clap

All fix!!!~

stuff cool, you hitsound was good and little consistency but is good for me keep it work ~of course...~
[]
I check another diff is fine for me anyway no kudosu pleasse
good luck and bye bye

raririn wrote:

mod as your PM Request
Just Suggestions

[Happy Birthday]
*开始时太多的绿线意义不明 对于单个物件Soft 60%和80%的变化并不明显
00:07:860 (1) - end去whistle
开始的地方如果实在是对不上note 可以试试13 可能效果也不错 但是2413乱的话就会有点难受 你自己看看吧
00:19:110 (3) - 放得对称点吧 最后一个tick和第一个在同一高度
00:19:813 (4) - 这个先按DS放在Ctrl+R？来点跳吧
00:20:750 (1) - 这个没有必要单独加两根绿线来创造NormalHit的效果 我觉得这里没必要下一个Normal 但是这样加线还不如把默认的Normal拉出来之后在这里放SC2的clap或者啥的 这样就可以省掉你后面一样放多条线
00:39:735 (4) - 第3个tick(140,192) ？
00:42:547 (4,5,6,7,8) - 不好看 自己看

SPOILER

试试这样

SPOILER

00:54:266 (5) - 反过来？
01:00:360 (1) - 这个也太丑了 把红点去掉最后一个换成红点吧
01:01:297 (3) - ^
01:02:235 (1) - 咋拉了这么多点
01:04:578 (2) - 头whistle？
01:19:110 (3) - 下normal
01:20:048 (6) - ^
01:20:985 (1) - whistle
01:38:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一串stream打得挺难受的 我建议全部换成1/4的短滑条
01:42:313 (3) - 打起来真的是怪怪的 这样的滑条给人的感觉是重复3次以上 所以换成和1、2一样的形状吧
01:43:016 (5,6) - 换个位置来创造jump
01:45:594 (7) - 反过来再和6对称？
01:50:047 (3) - 同01:42:313 (3)
01:50:516 (4,5,1) - 等腰三角形
01:51:453 (2,3,4) - 没法读 完全错误的spacing HD必掉 把4移开
02:13:016 (1,2,3) - 同01:50:516 (4,5,1) 这些在打的时候出的300就会显得很难看
02:19:110 (4) - 前面半段的形状和2一样
02:38:563 (2) - 尾stack到1的折返
02:40:672 (2) - stack 02:39:500 (4)
02:42:313 (6) - oh wtf yeah
02:59:422 (4,5) - overlap
03:02:000 (5,6) - overlap 而且这个很难看
03:50:047 (1,2,3,4) - 建议间距渐大
04:18:406 (3) - ...
04:20:750 (8) - 放得巨失败 换个位置
04:22:625 (1) - 跪

that's all
good luck :3
star~

Byakugan249 wrote:

I'll just get this out of the way. it has been bothering me for a while.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun

[General]
You need an approachcircle.png file to complete the circle set.~~fix~~

[Happy Birthday]
since this is the hardest diff in the song, increase the SV. the hard diff has the same SV as the one here....QAQ...
00:19:110 (3) - *nazi* move this a bit to the right so that the blanket would look perfect.~~fix~~
00:21:453 (1) - move the spinner at the blue and add a circle here. the flow would look weird if something like this happens, and i felt really uncomfortable when i reached this.~~fix~~
00:21:453 (1) - no finish? add it to match the cymbals and drums in the song.~~fix~~
00:42:547 (4,5,6,7,8) - if you're trying to do a star pattern make it nicer. it'll play bad and i'm not feeling the flow for this.~~fix~~
00:49:110 (2,3) - same as hard.~~fix~~
01:16:297 (2,3) - Make these sliders symmetrical. i'm not feeling the flow in this at all.~~fix~~
01:19:813 (4) - make this a NC. the lyrics change from here.~~fix~~
01:32:235 (3) - add a finish at the beginning to match the vocals.~~fix~~
01:34:110 (1) - remove the clap at the end. it sounds bad and it ruins the consistency in claps.~~fix~~
01:45:594 (7) - you got to add a clap at the end. add it to keep the consistency in claps.~~fix~~
01:50:985 (1) - add a finish to match the vocals in the song.~~fix~~
01:51:688 (3) - ^~~fix~~
01:52:625 (1) - same as above but to match the cymbals.~~fix~~
02:19:110 (4) - This slider can look a lot nicer. make it symmetrical so that it can flow a lot smoother to the next note.~~fix~~
02:21:922 (1) - remove the NC for this. the vocals are connected from the slider.~~fix~~
02:42:313 (6) - 1st time seeing a loop like this. make it look nicer for flow.~~fix~~
02:59:891 (5,2) - unrankable issue here. the repeat arrow is being covered by the hitburst and that's a no no. move these notes around so that the repeat arrow is fully visible to see for players.~~fix~~
03:14:891 (5) - since you have a clap at the beginning of (1), i think it'd sound a lot nicer if you can add a clap at the beginning. the clap pattern sounds nice to me and it fits with the song.~~fix~~
03:50:985 - 04:04:813 - there should be a slow down in this part. it's just vocals and not that much instrumental in this part. when i say instrumental, i mean the drums, guitar, etc...~~fix~~
04:07:625 (5,6) - same as 01:16:297.~~fix~~
04:13:250 (4) - align this to (2) so that it'd look like a diamond.~~fix~~
04:17:235 (1) - similar to 00:21:453.~~fix~~
04:20:047 (5,6,7,8) - i see what (1-4) are shaped like because that's a smooth flow, however, i don't feel the flow in this. make a different shape like a square, or a diamond like (1-4), etc...~~fix~~
04:20:985 (1) - a finish at the beginning to match the vocals.~~fix~~
hmm the hitsounds can be better, and the placement as well. oh well good job.......ok~thx ur suggestion!~

I guess that's it. GL

GiNa wrote:

[Happy Birthday!]
00:06:922 – useless green line here, delete this line and change the volume of 00:00:360 to 80%
00:45:008 (1) – move to x:288 y:288
00:45:125 (2) – x:276 y:248
00:57:547 (2) – Ctrl + R ?
01:00:008 – add a circle here
01:52:625 (1) – maybe try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/347778
02:19:110 (4) – the shape of this doesn’t look good
03:46:531 (1) – start this spinner at 03:46:414 (still end it at 03:48:172), sounds better like that
-I think hitsounds can be improved more too

all fix~
That’s all
Good luck

GiNa wrote:

[i_k's Normal]
-I think you should use soft-sliderslide.wav
-AR and OD +1 would be good
01:04:110 (1,2) – I don’t quite like how they are overlapping right now, consider moving them
-There are some more overlapping notes, well .. anyways, just saying overlap? where
01:22:156 (1) – I think you should start this spinner at 01:21:922 (still end it at 01:23:797), sounds better a spinner that start late is moar soft to beginners, Im not moving it
01:35:516 (1) – maybe finish at the end ?
01:53:328 (1) – 100% volume is too loud, change it to 90% Ill add moar 100% instead
02:04:344 (4) – this doesn’t fit, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/347759 no
02:23:211 (4) – since this is the easiest diff, I don’t think this is a good idea to have this kind of rhythm. Most beginners can’t read this well if this where a circle Ill be totally according to you, a person with a minimum musical sense and that obviously can listen the vocal will easily hit this slider
03:07:860 (2) – repeat might be a little cover by 03:05:985 (4) k, now this slider is the most booriing ever
03:40:438 (1) – this doesn’t fit, maybe http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/347766 cant listen the song?
04:04:461 (2) – same as 02:23:211 (4) god

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

SPOILER

jesse7419 wrote:

Hi
from m4m ~
依你要求就不mod Normal了

[General]
＞SB沒有用到吧? 沒用到的話.osb檔就刪了吧.hmm~老是会自动生成~~~QAQ~
＞有自製skin請在所有難度記事本加上這段

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

SPOILER

~fix~
＞combo顏色有些滿相近的 只用2個顏色的話也不錯啊~这个~。。。考虑下~xDfix！~

[Happy Birthday!]
00:08:563 (2) - 滑條頭上whistle?~~fix~~
00:13:250 (5) - 滑條尾上whistle~~fix~~
00:17:000 (3) - 排好一點 有點歪了~~fix~~
00:19:110 (3) - 移到x:364 y:196 比較整齊~~这个。。。上次就被鸠过~囧~
00:19:813 (4) - 感覺這滑條開頭加whistle比後面加還聽的順耳0.0 ~~fix~~
00:37:391 (x) - 綠線刪了吧 沒用到~~fix~~
00:37:860 (1) - 消NC~~fix~~
01:00:125 (7) - 01:01:063 (2) - 01:02:000 (5) - 01:02:938 (2) - 01:04:578 (2) - 01:05:047 (3) - 看要不要上whistle在鋼琴的音效上? (滑條是尾巴上) 如果覺得會打亂整首節奏就忽略吧~~~~hmm~~~nope~
01:18:641 (6) - 這個有點怪怪的說 01:18:172 (5) - 這個改成滑條到01:18:641 (x) - 結束代掉(6)改覺比較好 或者 01:18:641 (6) - 上whistle~~fix~~
01:19:110 (3) - 滑條頭上finish~~fix~~
01:20:048 (3) - ^ ^
01:20:750 (4) - 也挺怪的note單獨擺這裡 -0- 建議去掉 把spinner移到這邊吧~~fix~~
01:20:985 (1) - 結束在01:22:860 - ~~fix~~
01:31:063 (6,7,1) - 額..這也分太開了 整首只有這邊這樣擺 開的話以你01:52:508 (5,6,7,8) - 這種就OK了~~fix~~
01:51:453 (2) - 距離改1.4x~~fix~~
01:52:508 (5,6,7,8) - 加條綠線設定音量小一點 然後上clap音效上去吧 ~~fix~~
02:34:110 (4) - 滑條頭上whistle?~~fix~~
02:43:485 (3) - 滑條頭換成finish~~fix~~
02:44:423 (6) - ^ ^
02:46:297 (1,2,3) - 被滑條檔到了 會影響打圖 (我試的時候也只有這邊miss了)~~fix~~
03:03:172 (x) - 這條綠線我覺得應該是要消kiai的 但忘記消了 不然03:04:110 (x) - 這條多餘了~~fix~~
03:50:516 (3) - 上whistle~~fix~~
03:56:375 (5) - 尾上whistle~~fix~~
03:57:313 (7) - 上whistle~~fix~~
04:04:110 (1) - 整個都上whistle感覺不錯 總之這部分3個點最好有點音效~~~fix~~
04:17:235 (1) - 消NC~~fix~~
04:19:110 (5) - NC~~fix~~
04:22:977 (x) - 04:23:445 (x) - 這兩條綠線做什麼用的0.0?~~xD消掉第一个hitsound~。。。

嗯~好長的歌 mod到眼花了~thx！！！~。。。。辛苦了~
skin部分很有特色!!~xD~
That's all GL and have my star~☆

frans_niko wrote:

here we go from my mod queue

Happy Birthday
02:17:235 maybe remove kiai time *suggest~nope~because kiai time must be the same~
03:50:985 maybe remove kiai time *suggest ^
for timing like hard that no need in happy birthday because it was tripleting (in taiko called triplet)~just do easy~~pro map i still not ability make it~orz

because this is nice beatmap Star for you

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

3:45.. oh damn..xD...
[General]
The Kiai Time of i_k and Happy Birthday looks pretty nice, the Hard Diff should also do this IMO.
Why is "BIRTHDAY" in your Tags? Does it makes sense in any way?

karenying wrote:

put BIRTHDAY to tag,CD name can't be source

[Happy Birthday!]
00:44:422 (9) - You could make this Slider nicier.~~fix~~
00:52:860 (3) - ^ (Anyway, for this Slider you just have to do this like here. It fits better with the shapes of other sliders.~~fix~~
01:00:360 (1,3) - This Kicks makes look this Slider ugly IMO.~~fix~~
01:47:235 (3,4) - For this Sliders you can make them nicier if you do them like here.~~fix~~
02:03:172 (3) - The whistle sounds strange IMO.~~fix~~
02:59:422 (4) - Ths Slider looks awful. :<~~fix~~
03:05:750 (6) - You should remove the Clap from the Middle Point.~~fix~~
03:52:625 (5,6) - The patterns looks strange..~~fix~~
04:22:625 (1) - I love this Slider. <3~~thx~~>_<~

\o\

Illumined wrote:

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

General

1. Storyboarding都在哪裡? .osb裡面有代碼, 但沒有看見文件夾內的檔案 ~sor....我在和帮我做SB的修改中~还没确定。。。不小型传上去了吧。。sor~
2. spinner-circle.png的大小需要正好在666x666 pixel ~~fix~~
3. Normal很明顯不能成為最低難度, 拍子取的太難了, 補上一個簡單點Easy?

。。。没说一定要easy所以。。。orz~

Happy Birthday!

1. 音量問題和Normal一樣, 但只需要將所有Normal下降至60%
2. Kiai的whistle嚴重不足
3. 作為最高難度, jump設置的不太足夠(相對Hard), 排版綁的太緊了

01:22:860 - Normal~~fix~~

01:00:360 (1,3) - 形狀有點難看 hmm~我也不知道怎样才好看了。。。orz~求pic~
01:49:110 (1) - 不太需要new combo ~~fix~~

Illumined wrote:

簡體字看不太懂…平常習慣用英文>_<

至於Easy我認為還是需要補上的, 這個N的難度太高, 星數顯示2.66也只因為spacing跟SV開的十分低, 實際節奏比正常Easy要密集
(密集節奏加上低spacing...)

至於slider不用太在意, 習慣看平滑的而已!

Sun Rainbow wrote:

Illumined wrote:

簡體字看不太懂…平常習慣用英文>_<

至於Easy我認為還是需要補上的, 這個N的難度太高, 星數顯示2.66也只因為spacing跟SV開的十分低, 實際節奏比正常Easy要密集
(密集節奏加上低spacing...)

至於slider不用太在意, 習慣看平滑的而已!

那EASY由我补上吧

1. You might want to cut the last 30 seconds of the .mp3...
2. Weird... I got ~30ms early when playing all diffs. Don't know; might be just me.

1. 02:32:235 (1) - I've known and am respecting your somewhat frequent (can't really use occasionally here) usage of stylized sliders, but this one... making it similar to 02:49:110 (1) should do, IMO.

1. 00:18:641 (6) - NC here and remove the one on 00:19:110 (1)?
2. 01:18:875 (1,2,3) - Converting this triplet into a 1/4 slider that repeats once should do better.
3. 01:19:813 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 02:43:250 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 02:44:188 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 02:45:125 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 03:41:375 (3) - NC?

1. 01:01:297 (3) - Don't really think this is the best choice available. Use a shape similar to 01:02:235 (1)?
2. 03:00:360 (1,2) - Eh... I think it's (1) that's supposed to have the repeat and not (2).
3. 04:15:711 (2) - Use 1.2x DS? I'm serious; 3/4 stuff plays far better that way.
4. 04:22:625 (1) - ...This is magic. Who made this?

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo.

ClariS \:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. You might want to cut the last 30 seconds of the .mp3... ~i think i dont need to cut mp3~because~my draining only 3:45 min~no more than 4 min~
   
   SPOILER

   The maximum time for a map is 4 minutes. However, this is neither "Total" nor "Draining" time, but rather the time from the first note in the map until the last note. Thus, this is the "Total" time of the mp3 with intro and outro time excluded.
2. Weird... I got ~30ms early when playing all diffs. Don't know; might be just me.

>Happy Birthday!

1. 01:01:297 (3) - Don't really think this is the best choice available. Use a shape similar to 01:02:235 (1)? ~i change other form~fix~
2. 03:00:360 (1,2) - Eh... I think it's (1) that's supposed to have the repeat and not (2). ~i change other form~fix~
3. 04:15:711 (2) - Use 1.2x DS? I'm serious; 3/4 stuff plays far better that way. ~fix~
4. 04:22:625 (1) - ...This is magic. Who made this?

~me~xD

Good mapset...

...and I really want to map this now. My God. I should really do it after I am finished with my current pending mapsets.

Good luck on the way

kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from my queue

[i_k's Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:08:563 (2) - 这个放在中线上吧ww1和3都是对称的 【maybe u can put this one in centre line~wwwww~because 1 & 3 is symmetrical each other~

00:51:453 (1) - start here 00:51:102 其实差不多...orz 【i think no more change...orz~

01:10:672 (6,1,2,3) - 这里的话....6上面减少一个reverse，然后01:11:610 - 这里开始的节奏也和之前的一样会不会更好一些？【this one ....over the 6, less a reverse~, than 01:11:610 - this start rhythm as same as in front,~it is more good?~

01:15:828 (4,1) - 感觉有点断了ww 【feel a bit no consistent~

03:35:985 - 这里开始不是也和03:32:235 - 一样的节奏/歌词嘛..倾向于和前面那个一样的patten ww 【maybe this a start part also can as 03:32:235 - ,because they r same rhythm/song work~~~more like that a patten in front~~~www~

=_=let me practise english again~.....

kyuten wrote:

∑O.O...忘记了看GD的国家Tv T
sorry...i forgot to use english for GDTv T

Flask wrote:

Request from IRC o.o~

[General]
.osb 不見了 (SB會用到)
Tags要不要考慮加上 'happy'

[你的diff]
01:20:985 (1) - 這裡應該要N然後上Finish ~FIX~
01:52:508 (5,6,7,8) - 這邊全clap有點吵又不適合 可能放(5)就好 ~FIX~
02:13:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有點像在硬塞滿歌詞 支持(4,5)變slider ~FIX~
04:22:977 (x) - 為啥要5% 0.0~xD~>_<~@_@~

感覺滿不錯的 不過這diff一開始像Hard後面像Insane是什麼意思ˋˊ @_@~0.0~xD~>_<~

Star ! 加油 !

kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from my queue

[Happy Birthday!]
-Beatmap-
04:20:047 (7) - 这个第一次没读出来... XD~
04:22:625 (1) - XDDD 不过稍微有一点不对称ww调整一下ww 借某MAT的话~把想表达的表达给player就好了~xD~~~我也改了下~xD~~FIX~

[Overall]
竟然还没rank╮(￣▽￣")╭ 快找MAT吧ww

1. Delete spinner-background.jpg if you're not use.
2. Inconsistency in Tags:

   ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (i_k's Normal)
   ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Clara Alice (lucyfly's Hard)
   ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (Happy Birthday!)

1. AR-1

1. 00:09:500 (1) - Use the same slider velocity with 00:07:860 (5) ?

1. 04:22:625 (1) - Asymmetric. Make sure it's symmetry of all the point.

1. I feel that the two are about the same difficulty for lucyfly's Hard and Happy Birthday!, I think that can enhance the Happy Birthday!'s diff. or make a really insane.

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Request from Game-pm/Forums-pm/Modding Queue

[General]

1. Delete spinner-background.jpg if you're not use. this is bug....fix~
2. Inconsistency in Tags:

   ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (i_k's Normal)
   ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Clara Alice (lucyfly's Hard)
   ikari_kyon lucyfly BIRTHDAY Alice Clara (Happy Birthday!)

~fix~

[Happy Birthday!]

[Layout]

1. 04:22:625 (1) - Asymmetric. Make sure it's symmetry of all the point.

ORZ.....吐槽again~FIX~
[Opinion]

1. I feel that the two are about the same difficulty for lucyfly's Hard and Happy Birthday!, I think that can enhance the Happy Birthday!'s diff. or make a really insane.

这个。。。。。呜呜呜。。。现在改觉得会。。。orz~MAT说不行的话我就remap去。。或者开个新diff好了。。。orz加难什么的。。。>~<~><><><><><~

that all

Athena Tennos wrote:

kyuten wrote:

oh god that avatar x_x
[i_k's Normal]
-Beatmap-
00:08:563 (2) - 这个放在中线上吧ww1和3都是对称的 【maybe u can put this one in centre line~wwwww~because 1 & 3 is symmetrical each other~ unconcistant spacing www

00:51:453 (1) - start here 00:51:102 其实差不多...orz 【i think no more change...orz~ no, moar soft spinner for beginners ;3

01:10:672 (6,1,2,3) - 这里的话....6上面减少一个reverse，然后01:11:610 - 这里开始的节奏也和之前的一样会不会更好一些？【this one ....over the 6, less a reverse~, than 01:11:610 - this start rhythm as same as in front,~it is more good?~ wuut?

01:15:828 (4,1) - 感觉有点断了ww 【feel a bit no consistent~ so what is this? 01:18:641 (2) -

03:35:985 - 这里开始不是也和03:32:235 - 一样的节奏/歌词嘛..倾向于和前面那个一样的patten ww 【maybe this a start part also can as 03:32:235 - ,because they r same rhythm/song work~~~more like that a patten in front~~~www~ Ill think about this if its pointed later

=_=let me practise english again~.....

Flask wrote:

[i_k]
00:20:985 (5) - move to 00:21:219 - there is no sound where you are pointing 3:
01:05:046 (2) - move left 1 gird (gird level 4)
01:16:766 (x) - add a note , and ctrl+R (1)
01:32:703 (2,3,4) - a little bit messy ._>. try this looks the same

01:39:266 (4) - finish
02:53:211 (1) - remove whistle (blue tick)
02:54:149 (2) - ^ what blue tick?
03:40:438 (1) - move to 03:40:203 - then try this no *3*

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested in game ~
ClariS ! >w<


[General]
- Remove the bookmarks. ~I think no necessary, but fix~xD~~~
- At the end of the SB, its " beatmap " not " bestmap ". ~~~~wait rainbow done his exam~then, fix it~
- You should add Lucyfly to the SB credit as well since the person helped make it ~ ^~
- Add Sun Rainbow to the tags for the SB. ~FIX~
- Kadono Toshikazu composed the song so maybe add that to the tags as well ? ~FIX~

[Happy Birthday!]
- HP Drain +1 FIX~
01:21:219 (1) - End spinner at 01:23:328 ? I think rhythm is good, now~xD
01:29:891 (3) - Place under 01:28:485 (1) properly ~ fix~
01:37:860 (7) - Place under 01:36:688 (3) fix~
02:38:563 (2) - Place under previous note properly ~fix~
03:38:094 (2) - Watch your placement. xDfix~
04:22:625 (1) - Such a nice slider. >w< thx~xD


Nice song and well mapped !
Good luck and 2 stars ~ ;D