3:45.. oh damn..
[General]
The Kiai Time of i_k and Happy Birthday looks pretty nice, the Hard Diff should also do this IMO.
Why is "BIRTHDAY" in your Tags? Does it makes sense in any way?
[i_k's Normal]
00:20:985 (5) - Add Finish?
00:51:453 (1) - I don't like the Spinner. They're two options: 1. Remove it and map this Part. 2. Delete 00:50:985 (3) - and move the Spinner to this Point.
01:02:235 (3) - The Kick (where the red Sliderpoint is) looks awful and could mislead the player.
01:14:422 (3) - Remove the Whistle at the Middle Point and set it at the Start Point.
01:45:360 (2,3,4,5) - This feels weird to play. You could try
this out.
01:50:985 (2,3,4) - The thing is that (3) stays really close to (2) and (4). I suggest to move (2) and (4) over Ctrl+H.
02:02:235 (2) - Same thing as on 01:02:235 (3) with the Kick.
02:07:860 (4,5,6,7) - It looks ugly and could confuse new player. Try something different here.
02:09:031 (7) - ^If you don't want, you should remove it and set where the Start and End point is a Circle.
03:01:766 (3) - Add on all except of the Start Point Finish (Like you did on 01:37:860 (1,2,3))
03:17:703 (1) - The Whistle sounds strange. You should remove it.
04:11:610 (1,2,3,4) - You could do something similar like I explained at 01:45:360 (2,3,4,5).
04:21:922 (2) - Remove Finish and set Whistle, sounds better.
04:22:860 (3) - Remove this and move the Spinner to this point. The Spinner would be not too short and it fits with the voice.
[lucyfly's Hard]
AR -1, it looks way too fast for the Diff.
The Spacing is very unconfortable and makes the Diff looks like a easy Insane.
The areas with the SV of x1,40 feels very fast and you should not use this SV in anywhere of the Map.
00:37:391 (1,2) - The jump is IMO too big.
00:50:985 (1) - Spinner seems very short and I think it's also unrankable. The minimum of a Spinner lenght must be 2000, yours is 1000.
01:21:688 (1) - Please extend the Spinner to 01:23:328.
01:23:797 (1,2,3,4) - Very big distance between of the circles..
01:30:125 (1) - The Slow feels strange if it comes suddenly.
01:38:797 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:23:797 (1,2,3,4)
01:41:375 (5) - Set NC
01:45:125 (1) - Same as 01:30:125 (1)
02:01:766 (1,2) - Too big jump.
02:15:360 (1) - Spinner's too short.
[Happy Birthday!]
00:44:422 (9) - You could make this Slider nicier.
00:52:860 (3) - ^ (Anyway, for this Slider you just have to do this like
here. It fits better with the shapes of other sliders.
01:00:360 (1,3) - This Kicks makes look this Slider ugly IMO.
01:47:235 (3,4) - For this Sliders you can make them nicier if you do them like
here.
02:03:172 (3) - The whistle sounds strange IMO.
02:59:422 (4) - Ths Slider looks awful. :<
03:05:750 (6) - You should remove the Clap from the Middle Point.
03:52:625 (5,6) - The patterns looks strange..
04:22:625 (1) - I love this Slider. <3
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