General

1. 很OK...

Hard

1. 00:51:632 (1,1) - 這明明就是兩個音，前一個note根本不需要加NC做強調效果，所以把後面那個NC刪掉吧
2. 總覺得後面那個part可以多加一些soft-whistle，那樣會更合適

Normal

1. 01:01:072 (2) - 把這slider往負方向轉20度後放回原位，以避免01:01:072 (2)的尾部與01:00:038 (1)相碰，不好看
2. 唔，soft-whistle放得不對路呢lol
   
   

1. combo colours 6 and 7 look almost identical. even without looking through each combo colour individually, it was hard to tell the difference. either remove one of them or adjust the shade.
2. keep the breaks consistent maybe? just a suggestion.

• Song Setup
  (Suggestions for appropriate difficulty based on the song to offer more fluent and comfortable playing.)
  

1. Circle Size +1?
2. OD -1?

1. 01:33:141 (1) - no. just, no. please do not change the slider velocity in the middle of the song where it isn't indicated or called for. it might not be totally unrankable, however it is completely uncalled for and it definitely needs to be changed because it will confuse beginner players. Adjust it so it's x1.00 again, and make sure you use slider velocity changes sparingly. fix the slider lengths once you change it after this.
2. 02:52:796 (2) - very questionable. it's close to the lifebar, try moving it around so it's not as close.

1. use either a bigger spacing like x1.1 so that the spacing looks much cleaner or x0.8 so that the overlaps aren't ugly on it.
2. 00:05:210 (3) - curve this more like (1) and (2)?
3. 00:09:348 (4) - flip it around so it faces upwards. (1) and (3) faced down, so (4) should fit like (2) to be consistent.
4. 00:13:486 (4) - ^
5. 00:16:589 (1) - this spinner feels a bit random... maybe try mapping it like the previous phrases?
6. 00:19:175 (1) - this is sort of close to the center of the spinner... from fast spinning to small spacing, move it away so that it's not as confusing to hit.
7. 00:33:658 (4,5) - spacing here flows kind of poorly, maybe bring the (5) out more, move it away so it doesn't look somewhat similar to the pattern of (3,4).
8. 00:36:503 (2) - maybe flip it upward so it plays less awkwardly.
9. 00:37:279 (3,4) - flip these so they face the opposite way.
10. 00:40:641 (2,3,4) - ^ same thing.
11. 00:46:589 (4) - even though it's slightly touching the previous slider, it won't be read as the same spacing. therefore make sure it's not completely touching.
12. 00:47:624 (1,2,3) - what are you following? sounds like you're making your own beat, please fix this. here's an example
13. 00:49:693 (1) - maybe this shouldn't end on a downbeat, try 00:51:244. that gives enough time for the player to recover for a note or 1/1 slider you place where the spinner used to end.
14. 00:59:003 (4) - avoid using 3/4 sliders that don't follow any rhythm whatsoever. it's hard to read for new players.
15. 01:00:038 (1) - blanket (2).
16. 01:02:624 (3,4) - keep it consistent with (1,2), so instead, make (3) a 1/1 slider; fix spacing here after change.
17. 01:22:796 (1) - don't start the spinner here, it doesn't fit at all. start it at 01:23:313.
18. 01:27:969 (3) - blanket (1).
19. 01:30:555 (2,3,4) - you stopped following the rhythm, try doing something like this.
20. 01:36:244 (4) - move it so it starts on the previous red tick, then replace where it used to end with a note.
21. 01:37:020 (1) - try not to end sliders on downbeats... really this should be moved to start at the downbeat it ends on (the big white tick), and place a note where it used to start. reminding you to also fix spacing with suggestions here.
22. 01:47:623 (3) - good place to use a 3/4 slider instead, the 1/2 slider plays terribly.
23. 01:46:589 (x) - a note would work well here.
24. 01:46:848 (3) - move it so this starts on the white tick where it right now ends at. space everything accordingly.
25. 01:47:882 (4) - move it to the previous downbeat (big white tick) and make it a 1/1 slider instead. all in all, here's what a good example should look like.
26. 01:50:727 (2) - you should know since I listed it previously: it doesn't follow anything. fix this.
27. 01:52:796 (4) - follow the rhythm, don't just stop halfway during a phrase. try a 1/1 slider here.
28. 01:54:865 (2,3,4,5,6) - okay, lets fix this so it's not like we're making up our own rhythm. make sure to fix spacing while making this: place a note at 01:55:641, make the now slider (4) a 1/1 slider, and make (5) a note where it starts to emphasize that loud sound. an example.
29. 01:57:193 (6,7) - make (6) a repeat and place a note on that downbeat, where (7) ends to emphasize the heavy riddled sound here.
30. 02:02:106 (1,2) - a repeat 1/1?
31. 02:09:348 (4) - you were consistent with following the melody at the end of the previous phrases, and now it's ruined...please follow the melody to keep rhythm by making it a note and a 1/2 repeat slider, like this.
32. 02:10:382 (1) - a 1/1 please, the 1/2 fits nothing.
33. 02:11:158 (2,3) - replace (2) with just a note and move (3) back to the previous red tick. make it a repeat.
34. 02:21:762 (4) - 3/4, make it a 1/2 repeat because the 3/4 seems to just be there to confuse people... it's unnecessary.
35. 02:42:451 (1) - I think this should be removed... if you want to break, make sure it fills the phrase (for example, the whole section of the guitar here). the only exception should be the spinner to introduce the next one.
36. 02:48:658 (1) - the next part should be consistent to be fun, so lets make this just a single 1/1 and not a repeat to help this.
37. 02:49:689 (x) - fill with a 3/4 repeat.
38. 02:50:210 (3) - remove based on previous suggestion.
39. 02:55:124 (4) - move this to the previous white tick and make this a triple 1/2 repeat to fit the disc scratching noise.
40. 03:02:106 (1) - after here, you used the 3/4 sliders perfectly. it works wonderfully, so consider this an example to fix the rest of this diff.

1. 00:00:296 (1) - obvious finish much... you forgot it ;w;
2. 00:02:624 (1) - whistle I think you forgot.
3. 00:35:210 (1) - finish at beginning?
4. 00:59:003 (4) - remove the clap at the end?
5. 01:25:900 (1) - whistle on the end maybe?
6. 01:26:934 (2) - a clap at the end would sound nice, otherwise try a whistle, up to you.
7. 01:27:969 (3) - whistle at beginning?
8. 01:29:003 (1) - ^
9. 01:32:106 (4) - whistle on all ends.
10. 01:33:141 (1) - clap or whistle on end.
11. 01:34:175 (2) - whistle on repeat?
12. 01:35:210 (3) - clap or whistle on end.
13. 01:36:244 (4) - clap if you've chosen to be consistent with claps up till here, if not, keep the whistle.
14. 01:48:658 (4) - remove clap at the end.
15. 01:49:692 (1) - finish at the beginning.
16. 01:50:727 (2) - clap on repeat.
17. 02:06:244 (1) - remove whistle.
18. 02:09:348 (4) - remove the clap on the repeat, remove clap on end.
19. 02:21:762 (4) - remove clap on end.
20. 02:22:796 (1) - finish at the beginning, and remove the whistle. you can barely hear it.
21. 02:42:451 (1) - clap on the repeat.
22. 02:50:727 (3) - remove clap on the end.
23. 02:55:124 (4) - are the whistles used to follow that really low disc scratching? if so, use them on all parts of the slider here, or use whatever you use to follow this sound here for this slider.
24. 02:55:900 (1) - remove whistle at the beginning and replace with a finish.
25. 03:08:313 (3) - whistle on repeat.
26. 03:11:417 (2) - ^
27. 03:12:451 (3) - whistle at the beginning.
28. 03:18:658 (1) - ^
29. 03:19:693 (2) - whistle on the repeat.
30. 03:22:796 (1) - whistle on the spinner to emphasize the end of the melody (high-pitch).

1. 01:33:141 (1) - make sure to adjust this, at least the SV to x1.00.
2. 03:04:175 - can't you combine the two timing points here?

1. 02:30:038 (4) - new combo?

• Issue/unrankable stuff
  (Problems that must be fixed because of its unrankability, something you should take care of.)
  

1. 03:00:813 (3) - slider velocity change is not called for... I assume you read my other message previously on the normal so you know what to do.

1. most important thing I can tell you: this is really messy. there are a lot of bad overlaps and some really pointless slider shapes, but I'll keep the pointing to a minimum as to not drown you.
2. keep the spacing between the note streams and note follow ups to sliders and between the same. it's hard to read.
3. 00:02:365 (1) - you sure you want this this close to the spinner?
4. 00:03:658 (4) - you might as well make this straight.
5. 00:07:150 (4,5,6,7) - bad flow. (5) to (6) plays bad because (5) is going in the opposite direction of (6).
6. 00:09:348 (3) - don't touch the slider, it looks really bad.
7. 00:10:770 (2) - what is this... fix the shape or make it straight because those slider points make absolutely no sense.
8. 00:14:779 (1) - pointless spinner break. maybe you should remove the spinners altogether and map it, it seems almost like laziness to include them. the last spinner should end on the previous white tick to begin with.
9. 00:21:115 (2) - this shape should be fixed, or remove the points.
10. 00:21:503 (3) - this note isn't needed, it's not following anything.
11. 00:23:313 (2) - move this back to start on the blue tick, I think that's where you wanted it to be? where it is now doesn't fit at all and is completely random. fix placement.
12. 00:25:641 (4) - remove? no need for this extra sound.
13. 00:27:451 (2,3) - after following the melody this whole time, switching to the background sounds isn't the smartest idea...continue the consistency by mapping to the melody. you could try this.
14. 00:29:779 (4) - remove and reposition the pattern here.
15. 00:39:994 (3,4) - this should be flipped around ; the note should come after the slider...
16. 00:40:641 (5) - ugly overlap.
17. 00:42:063 (3,4,5) - spacing hard to read, please fix.
18. 00:43:874 (x) - at least put a note in here so it flows better and follows the melody correctly.
19. 00:45:943 (x) - ^
20. 00:47:882 (2,3,4) - really really ugly overlap, I suggest you fix this so it's easier to read.
21. 00:50:210 (3) - remove and replace with a note on the blue tick? it follows the song better rather than just having a slider for the sake of it. sounds really off that way, really.
22. 00:50:598 (1) - ends awkwardly and is really short, consider removing and mapping.
23. 00:51:632 (1) - a little close to the center of the spinner...
24. 00:52:408 (x) - fill in with a note so there's no pauses. there shouldn't be nothing here.
25. 00:54:089 (2) - bad overlap.
26. 00:58:874 (4,5,6,7) - from slider jumping to small-spaced notes... this flows bad. please make the jumps a big bigger to accommodate the transition, or at least between (4) and (5).
27. 01:05:986 (3) - fix the overlap.
28. 01:06:632 (4,5) - keep consistent. don't place these notes on the blue ticks. at least highlight them and move them over a tick while keeping in mind spacing.
29. 01:07:150 (1) - spinner problem again, please map this section instead. the spinner isn't really called for.
30. 01:08:184 (1) - why not just a note on the big white tick where the slider ends? this will help emphasize the sound here.
31. 01:23:055 (2) - stack on the previous (2)?
32. 01:23:313 (3,4,5) - stack on previous combo? turn (5) into a 1/2 slider, sort of like how it was in the previous combo. I think it would look nice, like this. copy/paste the previous (5) and paste it at the time of (5) here, 01:23:831. you can extend it to the blue tick if you'd like to follow the melody perfectly.
33. 01:24:606 (x) - a note here? don't leave a pause where there's something to map while following the melody :<
34. 01:25:382 (x) - now that you're following the background, a note here would suffice as to not break the flow.
35. 01:31:848 (3,4,5,6) - maybe use 1/2 sliders? this plays really horribly... try turning (3) and (4) into a 1/4 repeat slider, remove (6) and make (5) a 1/2 slider, adding a note at the next red tick or making the (5) a 1/2 repeat slider.
36. 01:35:469 (2,3,4) - the slider jump from (2) to (3) makes (4) hard to read. please fix this, maybe try spacing out (4) a bit further so it's not so close.
37. 01:37:020 (1,2,3) - really ugly overlap ._. also fix (3) and the points on it.
38. 01:40:124 (5) - a good place to use a 1/4 repeat slider if you want. it fits the music better, I'd think.
39. 01:41:805 (2) - move away, this is far too much hidden under the previous slider.
40. 01:47:106 (5,6,1) - the positioning of this is really awkward to play and read... make it a bit smoother, like this.
41. 01:49:693 (1,2,3) - again, same thing as ^. try something like I had suggested, move it around so it's not so awkward to play.
42. 01:54:477 (3,4) - now that you're following the main melody again, remove (4) and elongate (3) so that it's a 1/2 slider.
43. 01:56:417 (2) - if you were following the sounds correctly, if I'm right, this should be moved over the right a tick to start on the blue one... fix spacing too here.
44. 02:00:813 (3) - to follow the song better, move this to the blue tick and adjust spacing.
45. 02:06:115 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing here I believe is increased. it's ugly and it plays terribly. please fix this up so it isn't hard to follow.
47. 02:09:219 (x) - a note here so you continue with flow. having no note here breaks it.
48. 02:09:736 (5,6) - follows nothing. you could try removing (6) and moving (5) so that it starts on the white tick and elongate it so that it's a 1/2 slider. adjust the spacing and flow.
49. 02:20:469 (6) - flip it around. this whole phrase we were heading towards the right, it's time to head back to the left, otherwise the flow will start to crumble.
50. 02:22:408 (6,7,1) - fix ugly and not to mention bad spacing.
51. 02:27:969 (5) - flows better if it heads toward the left instead. reflects the (1,2) of the same phrase perfectly. like this.
52. 02:30:038 (4) - in reflection of (1,2), you should probably place this on the opposite side of the end of (3).
53. 02:38:313 (1) - sort of weird to enter the next part of the map after a break with a slider + spinner combo... maybe remove this? it should start on the downbeat anyways.
54. 02:49:693 (1,2) - okay not only is this ugly, but it's really awkward to play... something like this, for example, might be better.
55. 02:52:020 (1,2) - fix the aesthetics, it's hard on the eyes.
56. 02:59:003 (6) - doesn't fit the part. maybe you should make it part of the stream or replace with a repeat?
57. 03:04:175 - 03:06:244 - insert a break here if you're going to have one.
58. 03:14:520 (3,4,1) - spacing from (3,4) does not contrast (4,1). fix either or so it isn't so hard to read the first playthough through.
59. 03:16:589 (1) - move out a bit more?

1. 00:43:486 (1) - finish on end?
2. 00:44:520 (3) - remove finish on end.
3. 00:45:555 (1) - remove finish at the beginning.
4. 00:46:072 (2) - remove finish at the end.
5. 00:47:624 (1) - finish not really called for, remove.
6. 00:48:658 (4) - ^
7. 00:49:693 (1) - ^
   01:13:486 (3) - whistle?
8. 01:14:003 (5) - move whistle to the end of the slider.
9. 01:15:555 (3) - whistle?
10. 01:15:813 (4) - move it from the repeat onto the end.
11. 01:17:624 (3) - whistle?
12. 01:18:141 (5) - move whistle onto the end instead of the beginning.
13. 01:19:693 (3) - whistle?
14. 01:19:951 (4) - whistle at the end ; remove repeat whistle.
15. 01:21:762 (3) - I'm sure you get the pattern by now.
16. 01:22:279 (5) - ^
17. 01:49:693 (1) - finish at the beginning?
18. 02:38:313 (1) - clap on repeat?
19. 02:42:451 (1) - ^
20. 02:51:244 (6) - clap on the beginning of the slider?
21. 02:55:770 (5) - replace end with a finish.
22. 03:04:175 (10) - remove whistle?
23. 03:07:279 (3) - whistle?
24. 03:07:796 (5) - whistle on end?
25. 03:09:348 (2) - whistle?
26. 03:09:606 (3) - remove the whistle on the end. it's inconsistent with the rest of this section.
27. 03:21:762 (3) - whistle?
28. 03:22:279 (5) - whistle at the end instead of the beginning.

1. 00:14:520 - 00:18:400 - most of the timing points between these times are not useful, so think about removing them.
2. 03:00:813 - adjust this timing point as stated before, or fix it so the slider velocity is x1.00.

1. try to keep consistent with these, I see you follow a pattern of making a new combo on every 2nd downbeat, so lets see how to fix this to make it more consistent and organized.
2. 00:35:210 (6,1) - new combo, remove new combo.
3. 00:51:632 (1,2) - ^?
4. 01:04:434 (4,1) - ^
5. 01:29:003 (6,1) - ^
6. 01:55:641 (7,1) - ^
7. 02:20:469 (6,1) - ^?
8. 02:30:038 (4) - ^
9. 02:31:072 (5) - new combo?
10. 02:45:813 (4) - new combo.
11. 02:51:762 (7,1) - new combo, remove new combo.
12. 02:55:770 (5,1) - ^
13. 03:00:038 (11,1) - ^
14. 03:04:175 (10) - new combo?
15. 03:08:313 (6,1) - new combo, remove new combo?
16. 03:12:451 (4,1) - ^?
17. 03:14:520 (3) - new combo.
18. 03:15:555 (1) - remove new combo.
19. 03:18:658 (4) - new combo.