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Strawberry

Shulin wrote:

"I'm living out my life until the day I die..." that made me lol. Anyway I have some suggestions for you ~

General:

  1. Move "This is the one" from source and put it in tags. Album should never be the source =P Fixed~
  2. Slider velocity changes on [Hard] and [On-And-On] seem random at times, but I guess it's playable.
Easy:

00:00:415 (1) - Seems too loud, try 25-35% volume, or gradual volume increase. Also add finish? Fixed~
00:06:861 - Add note with clap?
00:10:828 - ^
00:49:975 (1) - to 01:02:867 (3) - whistle tick is too loud. 50-60% seems like a good volume for these. Fixed~
01:21:710 (1) - to 01:41:545 (1) - ^ Fixed~
01:37:578 (1) - Move this left a bit? It makes 01:39:561 (2) - looks better. Fixed~
01:53:446 (6) - Delete? Fixed~


Normal:

00:00:415 (1) - Too loud, try 25-35% volume or maybe gradually increase the volume? Also add finish? Fixed~
00:51:710 (3) - Lower the volume to around 50-60% on that whistle tick? It sounds strange right now. Fixed~
00:55:677 (3) - ^ Fixed~
00:59:644 (5) - ^ Fixed~
00:59:644 (5) - ^ Fixed~
01:27:413 (3) - ^ Fixed~
01:30:388 (3) - ^ Fixed~
01:31:379 (4) - Add whistle to the start? And same thing about tick volume. Fixed~
01:34:355 (3) - Same about tick volume. Fixed~
01:47:495 (1) - Remove clap from the return?
01:52:950 (5) - Remove the return? Also move it down a little, looks ugly so close to the hp bar. Fixed~

Hard:

  1. + 1 HP Drain and Overall difficulty?
Fixed~

00:23:472 (5,6,7,1) - Looks clustered. Increase the spacing? i think this maybe a bit strange?
00:32:646 (1) - Clap the start. Fixed~
00:49:629 (3,4,5,1) - Maybe use another returning slider here, it feels too similar to [On-And-On] right now. Fixed~
01:53:446 (9) - Delete? Also right now the stacking looks strange. Fixed~

Nice.

On And On:

00:00:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think this is a pretty bad way to start a map. The jumps aren't really intuitive and are unexpected. I suppose it's technically fine but I think it'd be better if you came up with a new pattern. I'm thinking the better pattern. thx~
00:24:092 (6) - Stack under 00:23:720 (5) - ? I think it looks and plays better. Fixed~
00:49:134 (1,2,3) - Why not make this part of a stream instead of stacking? changed to a returning slider
01:04:975 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Why's the 1/4 spacing bigger than 00:49:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 01:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the music is exactly the same! Fixed~
01:28:156 (1,2) - These sliders ruin the flow of the stream, imo it would be better as all circles. Fixed~
01:29:148 (1,2) - This jump makes no sense to me. Fixed~
01:53:446 (8) - Delete? Fixed~

I like this difficulty but at parts it seems you've decided "it's not hard enough, time to make it harder!" And these things ruin the flow for me.

That's all from me, good luck with this. ^_^
Poggo
HAI~~ :oops:

On-and-On

00:10:084(5,1) - stack better
00:11:076(3,5)- ^
00:18:762(2,4) - ^
00:23:720(5,7) - ^
00:25:332 - add note here
00:25:208(1,3,4,6) - put clap on this notes
00:32:088 - unsnapped grin line correct it
00:32:150(1,2) - i think better make so http://puu.sh/zKPd bcz slider 2 hides tick on slider 1 and it is difficult to notice change of speed
00:36:117 - this slider touch HD line correct it
00:51:462(5,6,7) - correct spacing
01:01:875 - remove 1 repeat and add 2 notes on red and blue ticks

Hard

00:07:357 - add note
00:50:222 - NC
01:09:809 - put here speed 1.0 and make sliders double. really sound better
01:50:966(5,3) - stack better

Normal and Easy good ^^ it's all for me good luck :P
Flask
Hi :3 Request From CLANNAD Mod queue~

終於有中文mod了 = =" (?)

[General]
有些沒snap的綠線 建議修改-^-
[Easy]
00:23:720 (2) - 這spacing怪怪 建議往左一格 (level4)
00:49:010 (4) - nc?
00:52:454 (3) - 壓到(1)了 有點醜
01:09:313 (5) - spacing飄好遠
01:36:586 (4,1) - 醜

[Normal]
00:16:282 (3,4) - 這樣怎麼樣
288,120,16282,2,0,B|232:88|152:128,1,120,2|8
104,224,17274,2,0,B|160:248|248:216,1,120,0|8
形狀可以再條一下 >_<
00:20:249 (5) - nc如何
00:23:224 (3,4,5) - 能用個折返的slider取代麼 ? 八顆note連續不覺的player太可憐了麼
01:43:280 (4,5) - 能跟(3)的尾巴平行嗎
01:43:652 (x) - 塞break

[Hard]
00:00:415 (1,2,3,4) - 诶 這裏不是應該要有幾條綠線o.o ? 算了沒加就沒加吧
00:49:134 (2) - nc 就讓變速獨立出來
00:52:950 (3,4,5,6) - 怎麼看都覺得這四角型不對勁 你自己看看吧我也不會調x_x
01:42:536 (1) - 這樣怎麼樣
228,264,102536,6,0,B|92:196|44:368,1,204.000004863739,0|0
01:51:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 有點亂亂的


最後一個難度回家在看 ...
[On-And-On]
00:33:638 (3) - nc (建議而已)

沒了 :D

加油!
Topic Starter
Strawberry
Thx Katty Pie's and Flask's mod >w< Fixed mostly!!update~
Sun Rainbow
Yo~
[on-and-on]
00:17:274 (1,2,3,4) - 连打?
00:54:313 加个NOTE?
01:09:809 节奏不慢啊?为什么减速?

[Easy]
00:26:200 (1,3) - 可能有点难读图

[Normal]
01:31:379 (4,5,6,7,8) - 虽说是NORMAL……但也太过了……

【HARD】
:)
Lizellota
Hi~ Mod from our q~
I love this map! >A<

[On-And-On]

00:25:208 (1) - remove clap
00:25:952 (6) - ^
00:30:167 - remove whistle and add finish

[Hard]

Fine ~

[Normal]

00:32:646 (4) - add clap
00:52:454 - ^
00:53:446 - ^

[Easy]

00:02:398 - remove whistle and add finish
01:02:371 (2) - add clap

Star~ and good luck~ add as favorite >w<
Flower
iroseka's mod from tha queue
总体来说……不错吧【pia


[Easy]
01:33:611 (1) - DS

[Normal]
这个难度好多不按DS的spacing……不过可以打吧。
间架结构上来说感觉歪歪斜斜的,建议重新排列note,声音还不错

[Hard]
00:17:274 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个Stream对Hard来说不推荐有 可以改成repeat5次的1/4条
00:49:134 (1,2) - 起在这里比较奇怪 往后移一格
01:11:049 (4) - 连续三个在这比较难看
01:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 把Stream换掉 理由同上

[Insane]
00:00:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 跳的略猎奇……不推荐这种1/4跳当然你喜欢的话也没有问题
00:22:729 (2) - Ctrl+R?
00:49:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - 后移一格,理由同hard
Topic Starter
Strawberry

KersiTyan wrote:

Hi~ Mod from our q~
I love this map! >A<

[On-And-On]

00:25:208 (1) - remove clap They're intentional.It sounds better I think..sry..
00:25:952 (6) - ^
00:30:167 - remove whistle and add finish nope...I will consistent with other diff.

[Hard]

Fine ~ Thx~

[Normal]

00:32:646 (4) - add clap Fixed~
00:52:454 - ^ Fixed~
00:53:446 - ^ Fixed~

[Easy]

00:02:398 - remove whistle and add finish Fixed~
01:02:371 (2) - add clap Fixed~

Star~ and good luck~ add as favorite >w<



iroseka wrote:

iroseka's mod from tha queue
总体来说……不错吧【pia


[Easy]
01:33:611 (1) - DS Fixed~

[Normal]
这个难度好多不按DS的spacing……不过可以打吧。
间架结构上来说感觉歪歪斜斜的,建议重新排列note,声音还不错

[Hard]
00:17:274 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个Stream对Hard来说不推荐有 可以改成repeat5次的1/4条 nope...
00:49:134 (1,2) - 起在这里比较奇怪 往后移一格 Fixed~
01:11:049 (4) - 连续三个在这比较难看 Fixed~
01:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 把Stream换掉 理由同上 nope.. sry...

[Insane]
00:00:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 跳的略猎奇……不推荐这种1/4跳当然你喜欢的话也没有问题
00:22:729 (2) - Ctrl+R? Fixed~
00:49:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - 后移一格,理由同hard Fixed~
Fixed many points from your mods>w< Thx for modding&star~
Leorda
Hiii

[General]
* Combo colour no.1 and no.3 are very similar. Find something different


[Easy]
01:05:842 (1) - Make a slider like this to make a blanket combo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346450


[Normal]
00:02:894 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for them


[Hard]
00:49:505 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)


That's all I got, good luck
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Leorda wrote:

Hiii

[General]
* Combo colour no.1 and no.3 are very similar. Find something different


[Easy]
01:05:842 (1) - Make a slider like this to make a blanket combo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346450


[Normal]
00:02:894 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for them


[Hard]
00:49:505 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)


That's all I got, good luck
ALLLLLfixed~ thx~
Kokatsu
Mod from my queue~
I was too lazy to mod this earlier, sorry for that.

[Easy]
00:49:505 (5) - unsnapped circle

[Normal]
00:48:018 (4) - unsnapped slider (end)

[Hard]
00:47:956 - shouldn't this be at 00:48:018 ?
00:48:983 - two timingsections, one with kiai one without..?

[On-And-On]
Guess it should be named "On-and-On" or "On and On", similar to the Title of the song.
00:25:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the claps don't really fit the way you used them. My sugestion would be to put claps on 3,4,5 and 6.
01:09:809 (1,2,1,2) - this slowdown is so unexpected and even after several retries I won't get this right as I see the pattern appear. Also, the music doesn't really suggest a slowdown :/ Could you stick to normal SV here and go for another shape as well?
01:25:678 (1,3) - use normal 3waypoint curved slider here? The ones you use atm are not really fitting, because I think they break the flow of curved/even sliders in this part.
01:43:529 (8) - silence the sliderticks here? They are..meh :x

Sorry that there are so few things I mentioned, but the mapset is really good, I enjoyed playing it alot. o__O

Because of this and the fact that I didn't have to mod that much, you'll get a star :)

I would recommend you to apply the latest mods and then start searching for a MAT, this map is ready to be ranked. :)
Topic Starter
Strawberry
Fixed mostly~ thx for modding
pimp
hi there


general

offset 400 bpm 121...and offset 49966 (<<<IMO.. its following the same mainbeat as the previous timeline) bpm 121
..........................................
or use only offset 400 bpm 121,015


Easy

00:12:315 (4) - make this slider curve a bit more ?
01:39:561 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 1 grid up 1 grid left? (that makes 01:39:561 (2) a bit more close from the previous slider, just like you was using in the same patterns before)


Normal

00:48:018 (4) - slider end is right after the new timeline, make the slider end at the previous red divisor and a circle at 00:48:983 ?
00:55:677 (3,4,5) - move (5) away from (3)
01:23:445 (3,4,5) - (3) is overlaping (4)
01:27:412 (3,4,5) - ^


Hard

00:17:770 (7,1) - this overlap is a bit strange (IMO)
00:19:505 (4,5,6) - strange (IMO), try to use the same as 00:23:472 (5,6,7)
00:36:117 (1,2) - overlap
00:40:084 (1,2) - ^


Insane

00:16:282 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - i think it should be reverse sliders or streams (but its just IMO)
00:38:100 (1) - consider moving it away from the previous (3)


nice map : ) ★
Chewin
[General]
Add "Bakemonogatari" in the source and remove from tags.
Inconsistency in Kiai Times. You should to set Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:974, ends on 01:05:842 in the "Easy" and "Normal"
Remove Letterbox during breaks since the video already has got it
I suggest you to add the epilepsy warning cuz this video starts with some flashes

[Easy]
00:22:233 (1) - Improve the blanket: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353679
56,176,21241,2,0,B|144:176,1,80,0|8
01:05:842 (1) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353698
56,116,65842,6,0,B|56:40|140:20|216:40|216:124,1,240,6|8
01:19:727 (4) - without distance snap move the 1st waypoint to x:332 y:296

[Normal]
00:48:018 (4) - Unsnapped slider's end
01:31:379 (4,5) - These elements touch hp bar. Just move it
01:37:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - Since this is a Normal I'd delete these circles and would fix in this way:

It fits better imo

[Hard]
00:49:974 (3) - I'd use NC here and remove it from 00:50:222 (1)
01:01:379 (5) - You could do this more curved, I think it flows better with 01:00:883 (4) in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353704
01:53:197 (8) - Nazi, improve the overlap with 01:51:958 (3)
Nice

[Insane]
00:46:034 (1) - You could overlap the slider's tail with 00:45:538 (7)
01:20:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Some players will hate you for these streams o: Including me. <3

Nice mapset, I think you should to call a MAT.
Good luck with this ;3
BeatofIke
Request from modding queue.

General
-> Disable Countdown. It's not needed.
-> You could disable letterbox during breaks since it has a video, but it's not necessary since the video itself is already letterbox'ed.
-> Is this a AMV (Anime Music Video) or an anime opening/ending? If it is an anime opening/ending add "Bakemonogatari" in source (not in tags). In addition, you could also add "opening" or ending in tags depending whether if it's an opening or an ending.

Easy
-> Nothing found.

Normal
-> HP Drain +1?
-> Overall Difficulty +1?

Hard
-> Nothing found.

On-and-On
-> Nothing found.

Good Map.
Topic Starter
Strawberry

pimpG wrote:

hi there


general

offset 400 bpm 121...and offset 49966 (<<<IMO.. its following the same mainbeat as the previous timeline) bpm 121 ummm..I think the offset is change since 00:48:018 - ~00:48:983 - , so I'd like add the bpm line here00:48:983 -
..........................................
or use only offset 400 bpm 121,015


Easy

00:12:315 (4) - make this slider curve a bit more ? Done~
01:39:561 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 1 grid up 1 grid left? (that makes 01:39:561 (2) a bit more close from the previous slider, just like you was using in the same patterns before) ok~


Normal

00:48:018 (4) - slider end is right after the new timeline, make the slider end at the previous red divisor and a circle at 00:48:983 ? Follow your idea~.
00:55:677 (3,4,5) - move (5) away from (3) umm...not necessary imo
01:23:445 (3,4,5) - (3) is overlaping (4) ^
01:27:412 (3,4,5) - ^


Hard

00:17:770 (7,1) - this overlap is a bit strange (IMO) maybe?x3
00:19:505 (4,5,6) - strange (IMO), try to use the same as 00:23:472 (5,6,7)
00:36:117 (1,2) - overlap sry no change~
00:40:084 (1,2) - ^


Insane

00:16:282 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - i think it should be reverse sliders or streams (but its just IMO) no change~
00:38:100 (1) - consider moving it away from the previous (3) ><


nice map : ) ★
Thx to mod and star~ :)

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from modding queue.

General
-> Disable Countdown. It's not needed. Fixed~
-> You could disable letterbox during breaks since it has a video, but it's not necessary since the video itself is already letterbox'ed. Fixed~
-> Is this a AMV (Anime Music Video) or an anime opening/ending? If it is an anime opening/ending add "Bakemonogatari" in source (not in tags). In addition, you could also add "opening" or ending in tags depending whether if it's an opening or an ending. It's AMV. so I won'y add the anime's name in source.

Easy
-> Nothing found.

Normal
-> HP Drain +1? umm..nope
-> Overall Difficulty +1? nope

Hard
-> Nothing found.

On-and-On
-> Nothing found.

Good Map.
Thank you for mod~

Chewin wrote:

[General]
Add "Bakemonogatari" in the source and remove from tags. the song has no relation with Bakemonogatari, the video is a AMV,,so..
Inconsistency in Kiai Times. You should to set Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:974, ends on 01:05:842 in the "Easy" and "Normal" oh yes.I forget it! fixed~!
Remove Letterbox during breaks since the video already has got it done
I suggest you to add the epilepsy warning cuz this video starts with some flashes um..

[Easy]
00:22:233 (1) - Improve the blanket: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353679 done~
56,176,21241,2,0,B|144:176,1,80,0|8
01:05:842 (1) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353698 done~
56,116,65842,6,0,B|56:40|140:20|216:40|216:124,1,240,6|8
01:19:727 (4) - without distance snap move the 1st waypoint to x:332 y:296 fixed in another way~

[Normal]
00:48:018 (4) - Unsnapped slider's end fixed!
01:31:379 (4,5) - These elements touch hp bar. Just move it done~
01:37:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - Since this is a Normal I'd delete these circles and would fix in this way: done~

It fits better imo

[Hard]
00:49:974 (3) - I'd use NC here and remove it from 00:50:222 (1) yes~ fixed
01:01:379 (5) - You could do this more curved, I think it flows better with 01:00:883 (4) in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353704 ok~ fixed
01:53:197 (8) - Nazi, improve the overlap with 01:51:958 (3) XD
Nice thx~

[Insane]
00:46:034 (1) - You could overlap the slider's tail with 00:45:538 (7) done~
01:20:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Some players will hate you for these streams o: Including me. <3 uh. I added a NC here01:21:215 (1) - and there01:05:347 (1) - . Then I think it must be more easy to read.

Nice mapset, I think you should to call a MAT.
Good luck with this ;3
Thanks alot!
NatsumeRin
[General]
00:49:974 - add a red line here to keep the downbeat right.
Easy's first kiai starts 1ms later, don't know why but plz fix.

[Easy]
Don't want to be nazi, except for some 1/1 stacks i don't really like... nice diff.

[Normal]
01:03:115 (3) - would it be better if the beat is at 01:03:611 - ?
01:27:412 (3) - the drums are kinda hurry here... it's a bit waste to just map a long slider imo.

[Hard]
01:27:660 (1) - same thing with Normal, is this pattern too simple?

[Insane]
00:00:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i tried..i think it's still too far and meaningless to me... maybe you have a reason?
00:25:208 (1,6) - remove clap?
01:31:876 (2,3,4) - a bit too... straight here? not so fun. Also though you follows distance snap, but in a Insane 2-3-4 looks more strange = =
Topic Starter
Strawberry

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
00:49:974 - add a red line here to keep the downbeat right. k fixed~
Easy's first kiai starts 1ms later, don't know why but plz fix. fixed~

[Easy]
Don't want to be nazi, except for some 1/1 stacks i don't really like... nice diff. THANKS~~

[Normal]
01:03:115 (3) - would it be better if the beat is at 01:03:611 - ? um..yes. I'd change 01:02:866 (2) - and 01:03:858 (4) - to sliders then add a circle at 01:03:610 (3) - . :D
01:27:412 (3) - the drums are kinda hurry here... it's a bit waste to just map a long slider imo. Umm...since it's normal there, I think now is ok..so no change.:P

[Hard]
01:27:660 (1) - same thing with Normal, is this pattern too simple? 因为前面这种地方有很多连打或者1/4repeat了,所以想换种方式:P

[Insane]
00:00:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i tried..i think it's still too far and meaningless to me... maybe you have a reason? I fixed. Changed all (3,4) to a 1/4 slider, then it will be easy to read and beat imo...
00:25:208 (1,6) - remove clap? ok~
01:31:876 (2,3,4) - a bit too... straight here? not so fun. Also though you follows distance snap, but in a Insane 2-3-4 looks more strange = = umm..fixed
Thanks~ NTR~
HelloSCV
Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this


SPOILER
Easy
00:34:134 (1,2,3,4) - try other pattern ( beginners can confuse this part i guess )
01:31:627 (3,4,5) - ^

Normal
01:00:635 (6,8) - delete note ( becuase this pattern looks hard for Normal diff )


Hard
00:07:109 (2,3,4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/EiFw
00:17:274 (3,4,5,6) - changing like 00:16:778 (2) - this slider
00:50:222 (2,3) - how about delete these notes and add 1/2 slider here?
00:52:949 (3,4,5,6) - i think square pattern is not good on this part try http://puu.sh/EiIC this patter
or change other pattern?
00:57:660 (6) - 1.2 distance is your purpose?
01:22:949 (5,6) - replace to 1/2 slider?
01:29:644 (1) - add finish

Insane
01:17:496 (6) - how about reduce distance same as 01:16:752 (3,4,5) - this notes ( becuase this these notes have simliar song sound )
01:52:455 (4,5,6) - I think this square pattern have so long distance how about reduce a little?

lol beautiful song! xD good luck for rank!
Topic Starter
Strawberry

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this


SPOILER
Easy
00:34:134 (1,2,3,4) - try other pattern ( beginners can confuse this part i guess )
01:31:627 (3,4,5) - ^

Normal
01:00:635 (6,8) - delete note ( becuase this pattern looks hard for Normal diff )


Hard
00:07:109 (2,3,4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/EiFw
00:17:274 (3,4,5,6) - changing like 00:16:778 (2) - this slider fixed~
00:50:222 (2,3) - how about delete these notes and add 1/2 slider here? fixed~
00:52:949 (3,4,5,6) - i think square pattern is not good on this part try http://puu.sh/EiIC this patter fixed~
or change other pattern?
00:57:660 (6) - 1.2 distance is your purpose? fixed~
01:22:949 (5,6) - replace to 1/2 slider? um..nope
01:29:644 (1) - add finish fixed~

Insane
01:17:496 (6) - how about reduce distance same as 01:16:752 (3,4,5) - this notes ( becuase this these notes have simliar song sound )
01:52:455 (4,5,6) - I think this square pattern have so long distance how about reduce a little? fixed~


lol beautiful song! xD good luck for rank!
thanks for modding~XD fixed mostly. update
kyuten
Hi~Request from my queue

[General]
fine~

[Easy]
-Beatmap-
00:42:563 (2) - 这样的和之前的1对齐好好摆嘛...一样的nazi就不说啦(ノ´∀`*)
01:02:867 (3) - 稍微有一点挡住之前的01:00:884 (3),摆在两个中间的位置吧w

[Normal]
fine~

[Hard]
有用了四个slider speed...不知道会不会过关...
-Difficulty-
OD-1吧w
-Beatmap-
00:05:125 (2) - 这样的节奏也蛮好...可以参考一下ww01:11:792 (1) - 这个0.5好像有点不自然...0 0

[Insane]
同样是四个slider speed...
好像需要resnap一下..?

-Beatmap-
00:00:415 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 打起来手感好像稍微有点不好...
00:27:191 (5,6,7,1) - 这个好像没有之前方形的好看...或者是nazi...


[Overall]
战场原荡漾ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛和音乐配合好好ww
给颗星~☆加油
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue


Easy

  1. ._.看不出什么问题 不会mod简单难度...
Normal

  1. 00:24:216 (6) - this is confusing for beginners._.
  2. 01:32:619 (6,7,8,1) - 这里不好看啊._. 要不要考虑用reverse slider 然后blanket一下
Hard

  1. 00:50:718 (3) - 拆成slider+repeat+note好点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357471
  2. 01:07:701 (5) - ._.hard难度别这么放
  3. 01:54:188 (8) - 同ins
Insane

  1. 00:22:233 (1,2) - 形状做一样的._.
  2. 00:25:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 下stack stream干嘛._. 其他的都没叠这里不是很奇怪
  3. 00:45:043 (5,6,7,8) - 不对准? ._.
  4. 01:53:198 (7) - 好像多了一个._.
  5. 其实没什么好mod的就是感觉太量产._.
that's all

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Strawberry

kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from my queue

[General]
fine~

[Easy]
-Beatmap-
00:42:563 (2) - 这样的和之前的1对齐好好摆嘛...一样的nazi就不说啦(ノ´∀`*)
01:02:867 (3) - 稍微有一点挡住之前的01:00:884 (3),摆在两个中间的位置吧w fixed

[Normal]
fine~ :D

[Hard]
有用了四个slider speed...不知道会不会过关... :3没关系吧?
-Difficulty-
OD-1吧w done
-Beatmap-
00:05:125 (2) - 这样的节奏也蛮好...可以参考一下ww no.
01:11:792 (1) - 这个0.5好像有点不自然...0 0 有吗:P

[Insane]
同样是四个slider speed...
好像需要resnap一下..?
why resnap?
-Beatmap-
00:00:415 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 打起来手感好像稍微有点不好... 没梗._.
00:27:191 (5,6,7,1) - 这个好像没有之前方形的好看...或者是nazi... 其实主要是因为下面的silider拉不下去了。所以只能考上扁一点的


[Overall]
战场原荡漾ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛和音乐配合好好ww
给颗星~☆加油thanks~!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


Easy

  1. ._.看不出什么问题 不会mod简单难度...


Normal

  1. 00:24:216 (6) - this is confusing for beginners._. 怎么?
  2. 01:32:619 (6,7,8,1) - 这里不好看啊._. 要不要考虑用reverse slider 然后blanket一下 done.
Hard

  1. 00:50:718 (3) - 拆成slider+repeat+note好点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357471 changed,但有点变化
  2. 01:07:701 (5) - ._.hard难度别这么放 k.stack
  3. 01:54:188 (8) - 同ins what?
Insane

  1. 00:22:233 (1,2) - 形状做一样的._. ._.感觉没影响
  2. 00:25:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 下stack stream干嘛._. 其他的都没叠这里不是很奇怪 会吗:P
  3. 00:45:043 (5,6,7,8) - 不对准? ._.
  4. 01:53:198 (7) - 好像多了一个._.
  5. 其实没什么好mod的就是感觉太量产._. ......
that's all
Good luck~
thanks!~~
Low
Hey! This is a pretty nice map for someone who doesn't have any ranked yet. In fact, this map is just really good in general.

General

You should use tick rate 2 for ALL of the difficulties. Here's a tip for future maps - always use tick rate 2 if they aren't in 1/3. It fits well for most maps and should generally be used.[/list]

Easy

01:19:727 (4) - Move this one grid down in order to make a better looking slider blanket.
01:35:098 (2) - Due to the stacking with this note, it looks like it overlaps (1) during gameplay. Please unstack it with the next slider, (3).[/list]

Normal

00:14:299 (1) - Perhaps you could make the curve on this slider a little curvier upwards. I think that it would compliment the previous pattern nicely.
00:55:677 (3,4,5) - The pattern near the endpoint of (3) is a little clustered in my opinion. Doing something like this could be much more intuitive.
01:20:718 (1) - Curving this slider the other way would be very nicely flowing. It leads into the next slider smoothly.
01:24:437 (4) - Please try to avoid hiding circles partially under slider tracks in a normal difficulty.
01:47:495 (1) - Put a clap at the end of this slider to follow your hitsound pattern.

Hard

Add +1 to the Overall Difficulty. On a hard difficulty, 5 for any stat is a bit too low.
00:49:974 (1) - I wouldn't stack circles under short repeat sliders. They may be hard to see.
01:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Such a long stream doesn't belong in a hard difficulty. It also is different as to how you mapped the rest of the difficulty and doesn't really fit.
01:43:528 (3) - Add a new combo to this slider to show that the speed of the slider changes.

Insane

Please resnap all notes! There are a lot of unsnapped beats and sliders.
01:43:529 (8) - Add a new combo here to show that the slider speed changes.

A very nice mapset. I wish you luck!
kyuten

这里写的unsnap...应该是需要resnap一下0 0???
Topic Starter
Strawberry

kyuten wrote:


这里写的unsnap...应该是需要resnap一下0 0???

Fixed ~thanks
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Jacob wrote:

Hey! This is a pretty nice map for someone who doesn't have any ranked yet. In fact, this map is just really good in general.

General

You should use tick rate 2 for ALL of the difficulties. Here's a tip for future maps - always use tick rate 2 if they aren't in 1/3. It fits well for most maps and should generally be used.[/list]

Easy

01:19:727 (4) - Move this one grid down in order to make a better looking slider blanket.
01:35:098 (2) - Due to the stacking with this note, it looks like it overlaps (1) during gameplay. Please unstack it with the next slider, (3).[/list]

Normal

00:14:299 (1) - Perhaps you could make the curve on this slider a little curvier upwards. I think that it would compliment the previous pattern nicely.
00:55:677 (3,4,5) - The pattern near the endpoint of (3) is a little clustered in my opinion. Doing something like this could be much more intuitive.
01:20:718 (1) - Curving this slider the other way would be very nicely flowing. It leads into the next slider smoothly.
01:24:437 (4) - Please try to avoid hiding circles partially under slider tracks in a normal difficulty.
01:47:495 (1) - Put a clap at the end of this slider to follow your hitsound pattern.

Hard

Add +1 to the Overall Difficulty. On a hard difficulty, 5 for any stat is a bit too low.
00:49:974 (1) - I wouldn't stack circles under short repeat sliders. They may be hard to see.
01:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Such a long stream doesn't belong in a hard difficulty. It also is different as to how you mapped the rest of the difficulty and doesn't really fit.
01:43:528 (3) - Add a new combo to this slider to show that the speed of the slider changes.

Insane

Please resnap all notes! There are a lot of unsnapped beats and sliders.
01:43:529 (8) - Add a new combo here to show that the slider speed changes.

A very nice mapset. I wish you luck!
fixed almostly~ thanks fo modding%star!
Wafu
I know that it is just bit change, but offset is bit out. 405 is better.
Nichiyouki
Hi, Strawberry

My mod from your request in nich95's modding / mod4mod Queue

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Fine

Easy

  1. 01:36:586 (4,1) - Overlap slightly. Try not to make overlap.

Normal

  1. Nice diff

Hard

  1. 01:42:535 (1,2,1) - Try not to make overlap.
  2. 01:52:949 (7,8) - Ctrl+R, would be able to play better.

Insane

  1. 00:53:445 (4) - Congruent with slider end of 00:54:684 (3).
  2. 01:42:535 (5) - Add NC?
  3. 01:52:453 (4,5,6) - Same as 01:52:949 (7,8) in Hard diff.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Strawberry
Fixed mostly~thanks~

edit:

dragonxcz wrote:

I know that it is just bit change, but offset is bit out. 405 is better.
I think it is so early from my ear o~o..
wmfchris
SPOILER
- 目測source應該有點東西 如果是人物歌的話順便tag character song之類

[Insane]
00:48:983 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/370749 move this slightly so that it's clearly a 1/4 separation

完全沒問題 把source/tag的問題解決可以泡

worth bubbling.
Topic Starter
Strawberry

wmfchris wrote:

SPOILER
- 目測source應該有點東西 如果是人物歌的話順便tag character song之類

[Insane]
00:48:983 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/370749 move this slightly so that it's clearly a 1/4 separation

完全沒問題 把source/tag的問題解決可以泡

worth bubbling.
thanks~wmf~ :)
-Baby Strawberry-
天啊好快!
bossandy
快rank 話說兩位/個草莓ava是一組的呢 :3
Andrea
[General]

Please change the Audio Lead-In to 2000 on all the difficulties.


[Hard]

01:07:825 (6) - I'd add a new combo here.

Pretty good map and song :3
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Andrea wrote:

[General]

Please change the Audio Lead-In to 2000 on all the difficulties.
FIXED

[Hard]

01:07:825 (6) - I'd add a new combo here. FIXED

Pretty good map and song :3
THANKS FOR MOD~ Andrea~
Andrea
Alright, time to go :3

Ranked~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好>.>
Kanari
Congrats ~
Nymph
宇多田光<3
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