1. Hard (4,48 stars, 159 notes)
2. Loli's Normal (2,36 stars, 180 notes)

commupony wrote:

Normal or Easy, since this track probably isn't cool enough for some kick-ass Insane. But eh, your pick.

Yuu-Chii wrote:

Loli's normal
01:01:925 (1,1,1,2,3) - These notes feels a bit boring maybe u can arrange them in a different way maybe like this? http://puu.sh/wV66 - 'u'
01:32:862 (6) - maybe u can replace this slider with three stacking notes like the one right before this. The beat sounds better that way imo - Actually the music itself sounds trimming a bit at this part, but okay.
01:35:675 (1) - the spinner feels forced.. imo >w< - Because there's another beat at 01:36:378 that replaced by spinner. However, changing the spinner to another thing may ruin the pattern because spacing problem and slider length.
02:24:425 (1,1,1,2,3) - these notes same as the 5 notes on top... try rearranging them - rearrange it may ruin the pattern like the one I explain above (5 notes can make a star / flower pattern, but it doesn't fit and may cause spacing problem), so I change it to slider repeat.

Stickie wrote:

Hard Difficulty
00:56:306 that slider seems very awkward especially since the rhythm afterwards is different, so its confusing.
01:10:602 since the timing between those notes are the same it might be better to make this not have a spacing in the middle rather than more towards the fourth note, it confuses reading. A I'll just say that the four sliders that come afterwards could be made a bit more fun with a different spacing.
02:00:524 this spinner seems way out of place. Just awkward.
02:04:626 this note's timing is off/awkward.
02:07:790 this break seems awfully long, you sure you couldnt do anything to cut this down?
02:45:046 if you plan on ending it on this note that would be a wierd ending. You should add more

Yuu-Chii wrote:

commupony's hard
00:54:431 (2) - add a note here maybe and adjust the next 3 notes after it. Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/wUW7
00:56:306 (5) - This slider feels really off.. try adjusting it
01:10:368 (4,5,6) - These notes feel wierd when testplayed... I suggest moving it like this so that they stack... http://puu.sh/wUZY
02:04:040 (1,2) - - These slider doesnt sound right
Is the map finished? cuz it doesnt feel like a good end at the end

Pure Force wrote:

Well I just started modding so don't know if its gonna usefull but i will try my best.

SPOILER

Loli's normal
Spacing is too high I recommend 1,0x for distance space - I'm pretty sure I use DS 1.0x
00:37:550 (1) - what about a spinner here? - I prefer slider because the music doesn't fit with spinner.
00:53:487 (1,2,3,4) - sliders looks to ugly and weird for normal diff - Agree. Fix'ed. (I'm not sure about spacing here, but eh, there's nothing I can do)
01:07:550 - try to put kiai in here. - I'll discuss it with commupony.
01:20:675 (3,4,5,6) - what about making a square? or a plus? (+) - Square, yes.
01:57:237 (3,4) - this two is weird too. - Agree, Fix'ed
02:43:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - this jump is can be hard for normal player, confusing. - I afraid no, but I'll fix it.
03:28:175 (4,5,6) - spread them, too much confusing. - Triangle, fix.
03:30:050 (1) - soft whistle for ending may be good. - 'u'