• 01:08:232 (1) - this one is very hard to read and the overlap is ugly, place it somewhere where it does not overlap
  01:10:472 (2,3,4) - sounds as if you should use kicksliders here (but that'd require to scale the jumps down)
  01:27:542 (1,2,3,4,5) - I find this part of the stream too straight compared to the rest of its shape
  
  Also, 6% unused .mp3 at the end is not really a thing I could bitch about for ages but even though, you could reduce it to 2% or smth while you're doing this

• 00:22:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - the star-shape (if it's meant to be one) is a little messy imo
  00:25:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  01:05:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this whole part is much harder than the rest of the map, don't really know it that's a good idea, might get people by surprise and just rape them
  01:20:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is messed up

Philippines wrote:

Idk. I'm just following what people think was right, If that's how they see it. D:

16:17 <Philippines> : what do you mean 100 - 95 %...
16:17 <Philippines> : ?
16:18 <theowest> : well
16:19 <theowest> : let's show you
16:19 <theowest> : 00:00:473 
16:19 <theowest> : (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,
16:19 <theowest> : 4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this is baby easy
16:19 <theowest> : but WOAH
16:19 <theowest> : here comes some crazy shit
16:19 <theowest> : (still not as hard for me)
16:19 <Philippines> : i see D:
16:19 <theowest> : and then it continues with this much harder difficulty 00:19:956 
16:19 <theowest> : (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,
16:19 <theowest> : 8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - 
16:20 <theowest> : and WOAH even harder!
16:20 <Philippines> : yeah, that's quite intentional
16:20 <Philippines> : gets harder and harder.
16:20 <theowest> : boom boom boom! 00:39:266 
16:20 <theowest> : (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,
16:20 <theowest> : 2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -  so 
16:20 <theowest> : many hard strearms! D:
16:20 <Philippines> : 5 5 3 streams
16:20 <theowest> : 001:00:818 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) -  continues crazy hard
16:21 <theowest> : now this
16:21 <theowest> : THIS
16:21 <theowest> : 01:05:818 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 
16:21 <theowest> : WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
16:21 <theowest> : boom
16:21 <theowest> : 90% fails
16:21 <theowest> : right there
16:21 <theowest> : out of all places
16:21 <theowest> : I had 99% after one try before that
16:21 <theowest> : after it
16:21 <theowest> : 93%
16:21 <Philippines> : lol
16:22 <theowest> : after that
16:22 <theowest> : it gets back to the previous pretty difficulty difficulty 01:10:990 
16:22 <theowest> : (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3) - 
16:22 <theowest> :  0and then
16:22 <theowest> : BOOM BOOM BOOM again and again 01:16:852 
16:22 <theowest> : (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 
16:22 <theowest> : so HAAAAARD
16:22 <Philippines> : I hope  that's not a bad thing.
16:22 <theowest> : and then gets back in difficulty 01:21:852 
16:22 <theowest> : (7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,
16:22 <theowest> : 2,1) - 
16:23 <theowest> : sadly, I see it as a bad thing
16:23 <Philippines> : i'll shut up now then :o
16:23 <theowest> : the difficulty in this map is going from hard to insane to hard to insane to CRAAZY insane to insane to CRAAZY insane and then insane
16:23 <theowest> : it's very
16:24 <theowest> : inconsistent
16:24 <Philippines> : just like DeltaMax
16:24 <Philippines> : oh i forgot, i need to shut up. D:
16:24 <theowest> : ...but this isn't any higher BPM or anything like that
16:24 <theowest> : and the music stays pretty much the same
16:24 <theowest> : and this is getting RANKED
16:24 <theowest> : not graveyarded
16:24 <theowest> : you see??????
16:24 <theowest> : :v
16:25 <theowest> : stuff has to be done. 
16:26 <theowest> : the other maps are better in consistency
16:27 <theowest> : difficulties*

Garven wrote:

Alright then.

[Easy]
00:02:714 (2) - I still don't see why this note is there.
It fits the music, but that's just me.

00:39:956 (1) - Eh, I'd still say it's too soon after a spinner for this level of difficulty.
I have moved the slider in the center so players can hit it right after they spin.

00:46:852 (2) - I also still worry about this from the IRC mod. The doubling back slider in an Easy diff is just plain confusing. Especially when the players are usually still trying to figure out how the slider works.
It feels okay for me though. Also, I think two (1/1) is enough to tell players that they should hit the note on the right part.

01:11:680 (1) - Same thing about the notes soon after spinners.
it's near on the center so i won't change this one. :O


[Normal]
You didn't change any of those rhythm switches that I mentioned. Why? That's one of my biggest problems with this difficulty. Fix them please.
The difficulty overall is still really bland with a samey feeling throughout the entire play. I know you can do better, as you had stated earlier that you had put more efforts into your harder difficulties instead of the easier ones. This is your chance to rectify that.
WIP for a moment, will update this post later.

[Taiko]
The difficulty name changed. Are you sure you want it this way without the Platinum in there?
Sounds good otherwise, though.
Keeping current name now. :O


[Edm]
00:38:921 (5) - Maybe you forgot to read this, but you need to extend this slider more please. It's too squished right now.
You really should see what you can do to tone this down a little bit too. It's still really close in difficulty to Chrome when the lower spread is what really needs to be addressed.
Fixed the slider.

Others are okay, I guess.

Philippines wrote:

I've finally decided some things around for this map.

1. If you are complaining about the Difficulty of [Gold], [Platinum], please keep in mind, these diffs are labeled as "Insane" and "Expert". Do not expect me to make an easy to FC difficulty like all other maps out there. I did not do this to give threat to people, I am just trying to define what "Insane" really means. So if you're here to tell me to make these diffs easier, please try to understand me as much as possible if i don't happen to agree on any of your suggestions.

1. 00:29:266 (9,10) - Why is this not the same as 00:30:646 (9) - , or the other way around? Each of your six combo endings sound the same and thus should have the same rhythm pattern. It's inconsistent of you to have a kickback slider for some and two sliders for others.
2. 00:42:283 (4) - As I mentioned before, nothing's here. This is an overmapped stream which can be broken down. Otherwise, you're asking people do play a 65-stream at 174bpm when it's not even the end, which I feel is asking too much.
3. 00:50:301 (1) - This stream as well. I recommend you break this section down to what you did with 00:11:680 (1) - .
4. 01:27:714 (3) - Starting from here your stream looks ugly, mainly because the loop for (6,16) is flat compared to the previous loop.

those wrote:

12:09 <Philippines> : If people can't face the challenge of 65-stream part, I'll add a bit of a challenge in Jumps.

• Changelog

1. Followed all those's mod except the 1st one.
2. Remapped the whole [Bronze].

Philippines wrote:

Followed all those's mod except the 1st one.

Philippines wrote:

I am so tired of this, I've never gotten any good response from now, lemme fix that those. -_____-

This unrank is just too much of a pain.

Makar8000 wrote:

[Rust]

1. Overall, this SV is pretty fast. This is supposed to be the easiest diff of the set. If you feel like putting in the effort to change the SV, it will help.
   It seems fine for me.
   
   
2. 00:44:783 (1,2) - The flow from (1) to (2) is really bad, it seems like you are only doing this because the notes wont fit on the screen any other way. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/328117 here is just a simple suggestion, and yes this means you have to do some adjustments to the patterns after.
   I didn't follow your suggestion but I did a new one, hoping this one is better.
   
   
3. 00:50:301 (1,2) - Same thing here that I mentioned above.
   Done
   
   
4. 01:01:335 (1,2) - I find these pretty hard to hit with good accuracy. You have two notes by themselves with a huge gap in the timing between them. Newer players will have a hard to understanding when to hit these exactly because they don't have enough experience to read by looking at the approach circles, and the timing gap is just too high for them to understand that it is one-per-measure. My suggestion is to just do a slider like 01:04:094 (3)
   Done
   
   
5. 01:16:508 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part, is a major problem. The ends of the sliders are so much stronger than the starts of it. Then, at the end you start on the 2nd and 4th beats with circles (in otherwords, changing the timing of when the player clicks). Please, shift 01:16:508 (1,2,1,2) forward to the next white tick, and add a note at 01:16:508 like so http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/328123. This makes the next part 01:19:611 (1,2,1,2) much less awkward to play.
   Well, this was really intentional. But I fixed it. I don't know If I got it right.

[Bronze]

1. 00:09:956 (2,1) - As I mentioned in Rust, it seems like you just did this due to the amount of room you have. THe flow here is bad and would look and play much better if this was flipped liked 00:10:990 (2)
   Fixed
   
   
2. 00:19:956 (1,2,1,2) - This timing pattern is what bothered me the most about this diff before it got unranked. It's inconsistent when the patterns like 00:15:818 (1,2,1,2,1,2) and so (2) is always going to be hit early.
   Changed (2) into a reverse and moved somewhere below the two sliders between this one.
   
   
3. 00:46:163 (1,2) - Same here as mentioned above.
   Changed to kick slider.
   
   
4. 00:48:921 (1,2) - Same here as mentioned above.
   ^.
   
   
5. 01:02:714 (1,2,1,2) - Again, same as mentioned above. I really hope you adjust this. It will make the map much more readable.
   ^
   
   
6. 01:13:749 (1,2) - Same as above.
   ^

Garven wrote:

I think this difficulty could use a slight toning down since this is only slightly easier than Chrome. Maybe use more sliders instead of circles in your 1/2 runs except for the really powerful parts that you accentuate with the kiai fountains.

val0108 wrote:

omg