1. ERT's Easy (2.72 stars, 215 notes)
2. Hard (4.96 stars, 588 notes)
3. Normal (3.76 stars, 278 notes)

liudeye wrote:

娘娘威武，神图出炉

胡乱给你MOD= =

Hard
00:47:341 (1) - 这里这个滑条再增加一个回转会好点，跟人声走了
00:48:705 (2) - 同上

后面感觉没问题，神麻婆不解释

120,40,25858,2,4,B|180:13|246:57|269:124|228:184,1,240,8|8

ertyukjh010 wrote:

早安微風

[General]

我想您需要1個Easy難度0.0 雖要Easy的話就密我，專門接Easy GD，對做Easy有一定的經驗

[Normal]

01:25:534 - Useless inherited point 删掉了
00:25:858 (2) - 包圍得不工整，這個如何：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/300548 这里其实主要是让结尾和前面重叠

120,40,25858,2,4,B|180:13|246:57|269:124|228:184,1,240,8|8

01:19:737 (3) - 結尾沒有重疊好 改了下
01:21:101 (5) - 在這裡重疊稍稍有點混亂，特別新手比較會錯誤
01:30:308 (3) - 向上移移動1格 (Grid Lv4) 这里是故意的, 不往下放一格因为stack leniency的关系玩的时候这里会偏差更大
01:33:036 (3) - ^
01:35:082 (1) - RM NC
01:36:446 (2) - NC
01:43:948 (6) - 減少兩次折返，01:44:630~01:45:312 add note 这里是连续鼓声感觉回转slider更适合
02:05:261 (1) - 作為最簡單的難度，這個轉盤的長度實在很短..... 3拍以上了应该不算难
02:27:597 (2,3,4) - Normal不要做這種重疊比較好0.0 難讀.... ...新手真的会觉得这个很难么...
02:32:371 - Useless inherited point 删了
02:47:716 (1) - 新手不知道甚麼時候結束折返.....
02:54:195 (1,2,3,4) - 不要....真的不要Orz 這Another才會用到QQ 應該還有其他處理方法比較適合新手玩吧？
03:01:015 - NC bug fixed
03:09:370 (1) - 同02:05:261 (1)

[Hard]

Lead-In 調到2 1500ms够了啊 :/
00:59:106 (1,2,3) - 這個稍稍包圍得有點難看 还好吧
01:12:576 (1,2) - Ctrl+R k

就這樣吧

JauiPlaY wrote:

[ERT's Easy]
01:21:442 (1) - 结尾消音 而且说实话我觉得这spinner略短 Done, 長度的話沒問題，只是180bpm您才感到略快
01:28:262 - 无用绿线 Done
02:29:643 (1) - 结尾消音 Done
03:10:223 (4,5) - 这clap超违和的 Done
03:40:572 (1) - 在03:40:402这里开始 Done
combo数平衡一下 最好维持在3-5 還好lol

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hi
一些建议

[General]
a perfect day的a可以从tags中移去因为搜索关键字符要3个或以上 此外day出现了2次 要移去其中一个 的确网页搜索是不能显示3个字符以下的搜索, 但是游戏内可以达到, 而且游戏内搜索还有位置要求, 如果不在may后面加一个day的话, 那搜"may day"就搜不到
貌似要添加一个reverse arrow k

[Normal]
00:20:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - 后面的就算了 起码第一个用slider先让人熟悉下节奏吧 这个应该没问题吧
00:26:881 (3,4) - 略违和 感觉上(4)应该拉到00:27:222 做了点改动
01:17:520 (5) - 拉前面长白线 k
01:25:534 - 无用绿线 删!
01:36:446 (1,2) - 略违和 咦还好啊
01:44:971 - 感觉上加个圈比较好 k

[Hard]
我觉得开头时间统一点好
00:15:798 - 加个圈好玩点
00:17:162 - ^
00:18:526 - ^
00:19:890 - ^ 让我再考虑下...加了好像略难啊...
00:26:369 (4) - 头尾反转好玩点 k
00:59:106 (1,2,3) - 没对齐巨难看的... 这里速度不一样嘛
01:25:534 - 无用绿线 删
01:39:174 (1) - 在01:40:197结束挺好 k, 加了clap
02:06:454 (4,1,2,3,4) - 应该把(4)去掉然后把4个slider每个往前拉1/2拍 最后在02:07:818加个圈 节奏一样感觉不一样的 02:06:625开始加速刚好4个1/2拍的

中间有句听起来很像“把洗衣机都吵醒”囧

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. 看起來貌似沒有...不過SB我倒是覺得有點怪怪的... 我知道你是把四個角的circle.png 下在重音. 重音到了才開始閃... 可是我覺得重音的才開始會有點慢... 这个是clap的触发器SB, 应该不会有太多延迟吧

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:47:341 (1,2,3,4,1) - 這個是建議 不如把這個作成星星吧~ 現在是這樣↓ 改了下
   
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2. 01:11:894 (6) - 超出視窗了._. 建議改掉吧... 玩的时候还好吧...
3. 01:18:373 (1,2,3,4) - slider尾沒有完全stack... 卧槽这个太难完全stack了饶了我吧
4. 01:28:262 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 開頭 stack? 因為太久了 這樣人工SL也看不太出來... 这里倒是全部stack的话偏移蛮大的
5. 01:53:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - 間距有點悲劇>_> 還有這星形形狀有點跑掉了...
6. 02:22:652 (4) - [nazi]尾部的弧度好像變掉了 應該是第2個node的問題 然後我建議的是讓02:22:993 - 這個時間點位置的slider ball剛好在slider轉折處↓ ...其实没太特意去拉弧度...
   
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7. 02:29:643 (1,2,3) - 這個間距是故意拉大的嗎? 这里还是常规spacing啊

[Hard]

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:03:136 (8,1,2) - stack. 用DSx0.0 + 關掉gird來調吧 done
2. 00:04:027 (3,4,5) - ^
3. 00:07:143 (4,5,7) - 沒有對稱? 如果本來就是沒有藥對稱的就ign吧 对称了
4. 00:26:369 (4,5) - 給個建議 讓(5)的開頭與結尾和(4)的開頭用同樣的間距(視覺感) 没懂这句什么意思...
5. 00:28:586 (2,5) - 弧度沒有做的很好. 至少我看起來是有點偏的 done
6. 00:30:291 (2,3) - stack. 同樣方法. 調一下吧 这儿我觉得没问题啊

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

好中文歌 需頂
star!!

crabovan wrote:

Hello. I am from #modreqs

Hard

00:03:581 (1,2) - poorly located when you hidden this map you will find it's not
00:07:588 (6) - add nc k
00:35:065 (4) - move on 4 tiles up k
00:41:885 (4) - move on 2 tiles right k
00:59:106 (1) - delete nc
00:59:788 (2) - add nc k
01:08:483 (6) - place with symmetry about 01:10:188 (3) done
01:14:281 (7) - move on 2 tiles right and 5 tiles up
01:15:304 (9) - move on 1 tile right and 1 tile up k
01:59:634 (4) - move on 2 tiles right yup
02:10:888 (5,6) - why that placed so far from tile-web? changed a bit
02:18:049 (1) - maybe better replace with symmetry about 02:17:026 (6) ? sure
02:18:219 (2) - why that placed so far from tile-web? This one would be fine imo
02:20:095 (7) - ^ ^
02:47:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe better do little stream or repeat-slider? As a part start, I don't want to make it too hard :s
02:55:559 (6) - add nc k
03:11:246 (1,2) - maybe better do decelerating slider? there is speed up after this, so slow donw here...confused

Normal

00:27:563 (4,2) - where is symmetry? I didn't make them symmetry on purpose here :/
00:43:249 (4) - strange slider Eh, seems others fine with this
00:55:525 (7) - ^ Yup, I agree with this
01:13:258 (3) - where is symmetry about 01:13:940 (4,5) ? k, fixed
01:20:419 (4) - maybe better do reverse selection? good idea
01:33:036 (3) - move on 1 tile up that's on purpose, or it would be overlaped here
01:36:446 (1) - it goes around? I didn't get what you mean this..
01:50:086 (1) - strange slider
02:11:740 (4) - ^ I'm okay with them
02:18:049 (1,3) - are this rankable? why not
02:22:652 (4) - very strange slider Hmm, why?
02:26:915 (1,2,3,4) - I don`t understand it Because of stack?
02:50:785 (6,1,2,3) - move on 2 tiles left why?
03:11:928 (1) - strange slider
03:29:489 (3) - ^ idk what's strange for you then, most sliders I used should be fine to players :s

Good luck with map :3

Underflow wrote:

[ERT's Easy]
- 02:28:279 (3) New Combo Well, I will do

stickmeister wrote:

Hahaha! Oh man, everything about this map is so much fun to play. The storyboard is quite nice and the everything about it is just refreshing. I really like it! In that case, I apologize if I'm not able to find much, but I'll help as much as I can.

I think my only problem (if it is even a problem) is that your hitcircles are pretty, but I feel like they don't fit the storyboard. In fact, you really could make a whole skin to coincide with your storyboard. Personally, I would love to create one for you, if you can give me a week or so. It seems like the skin would be something vectorized and circular, matching the storyboard's mix or vectors, and absolute reds and blacks and whatnot.

The skin in my signature is outdated, and I'm currently redoing it so here's a better representation of what I can do.

I'm going to bed in a few minutes here, and I'll properly mod this tomorrow when I get the chance. Just wanted to ask that before I get off. Nice job so far though, I love it.