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NicoNico Chorus - Matryoshka

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Meru
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Meru
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, July 18, 2012 at 6:22:35 PM

Artist: NicoNico Chorus
Title: Matryoshka
Source: Nico Nico Douga
Tags: nicovideo niconico douga vocaloid
BPM: 205
Filesize: 18411kb
Play Time: 02:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.43 stars, 185 notes)
  2. Hard (4.94 stars, 355 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 524 notes)
  4. Normal (4.31 stars, 260 notes)
Download: NicoNico Chorus - Matryoshka
Download: NicoNico Chorus - Matryoshka (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd Beatmap
If it possible, Please download with the video >,<
LAST FULLSUBMIT, 18/07/2012 GMT+7

All mapset was made by me


Just need taiko diff and it'd perfect :P

etc
log:
- 24/04 fix a very minor problem
- 26/04 fix offset and some timing on [Easy]
- 28/04 added [Normal] diff
- 13/05 added [Hard] diff & moved to pending section
- 18/05 added Eremes's mod
- 01/06 added my own mod (lol)
- 17/06 added [Insane] diff
- 19/06 fix some (not whole) pattern and distance spacing in [Insane]
- 22/06 fix some spacing and pattern in [Insane]
- 26/06 fix little changes in [Easy] & [Normal]
- 28/06 applied Yu-Izanagi-'s mod and kyuten's mod
- 08/07 FullSubmitted, please redownload
- 09/07 Fix unsnapepd kiai times and some spacing
- 18/07 Fix a lot of things, and FS again due walp and osb

Credits & Thanks to:
gowww
NatsumeRin
Lolicore Flandre
popner
Nymph
Last edited by Meru , edited 21 times in total.
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
BPM and Offset check ;)

BPM : 205 (no change)
Offset : 1337 (yes, im not joking)

8-)

also the tags again

Heres a tip : You dont need to have the source, artist and title in the tags, its unneeded.
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
[Timing]

bpm: 205
offset: 1315

(I tried 1337 and it is wrong)
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
good enough.
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Hi req~ for the queue :3

General

  1. Delete the osb file if you dont need it
  2. Remove the Letter box since you have a video

Easy

HP -1? to make it easier to play ~
  1. 00:08:632 (5) - NC? since the Combo went too long
  2. 00:13:315 (5) - Same above^
  3. 00:18:290 (6) - use grip size (3) and move it one grip down? to make it better while playing
  4. 00:39:949 (4) - NC? it's better~
  5. 00:44:632 (4) - ^
  6. 00:59:778 (6) - ^
  7. 01:24:436 (1,1) - remove the NC on those two, i dont think you really need them here~
  8. 01:36:144 (4,6) - add NC on (4) or the (6) it's up to you ._. both of them seems ok to me~
  9. 02:14:778 (5) - NC coz the combo went to long and i dont think it's fit in easy diffs
  10. 02:19:461 (5) - ^
  11. 02:24:437 (4) - ^
  12. 02:29:412 (4) - ^
  13. 02:35:558 (7) - ^
  14. 02:40:827 (5) - ^
  15. 02:45:217 (5) - ^

I think i'll skip Normal and hard because they really need more work :c
Eremes 111
217 posts
Joined November 2011
Eremes 111
don't kudosu this post. since i already got your kudos. if you know what i mean ( ._.)
moved from here.
====================================================================================
hmm. your siggy catch my eyes :d
Easy
  • 00:10:095 (8,1) - Remove this jump
    00:48:144 (1,2) - spacing
    00:59:778 (6,7,8) - hard to read for beginner i think.
    01:25:607 (1,2,3) - overlap. but i don't know this is a problem or not
    01:30:290 (1,1) - a note exist too early for easy map.
EDIT = try play easy map with mouse only (it mean without keyboard ;) ) it will help you know "is my easy diff is easy enough for beginner?" :)

Normal
  • 00:11:705 (4,5,6) - i think normal player can't see it. and so do i in my first testplay.
    00:16:534 (4,5) - Spacing
    00:38:193 (5,1) - not sure if this is readable or not :? it's like spacing error :d
    00:50:485 (1,2,3,4) - i think normal player will see it as a stream.
    01:00:436 (2,3) - overlap?
    01:58:095 (5,1) - a jump? umm.. maybe no for normal diff.
    02:22:095 (1,2) - spacing
Hard
  • 2EDIT = 00:28:827 (1) - ninja spinner?
yeah. that's all. a random mod :D
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Meru

Eremes 111 wrote:

hmm. your siggy catch my eyes :d really? o_0
Easy
  • 00:10:095 (8,1) - Remove this jump Fixed
    00:48:144 (1,2) - spacing ^
    00:59:778 (6,7,8) - hard to read for beginner i think. ^
    01:25:607 (1,2,3) - overlap. but i don't know this is a problem or not No, I liek this part and will keep it :)
    01:30:290 (1,1) - a note exist too early for easy map. Fixed.
EDIT = try play easy map with mouse only (it mean without keyboard ;) ) it will help you know "is my easy diff is easy enough for beginner?" :) Okay, since I've never (or maybe just too lazy) play mouse only >_>

Normal
  • 00:11:705 (4,5,6) - i think normal player can't see it. and so do i in my first testplay. No, I like this part too & I think it's okay o3o
    00:16:534 (4,5) - Spacing Not sure, but fixed
    00:38:193 (5,1) - not sure if this is readable or not :? it's like spacing error :d Fixed.
    00:50:485 (1,2,3,4) - i think normal player will see it as a stream. and I think it's not xD *kidding
    01:00:436 (2,3) - overlap? Still doesn't have the best way to fix it, but fixed.
    01:58:095 (5,1) - a jump? umm.. maybe no for normal diff. yea it's 'normal' jump I guess :v
    02:22:095 (1,2) - spacing I think it's enough
Hard
  • 2EDIT = 00:28:827 (1) - ninja spinner? maybe? lol I like this way >_>
Meru
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Topic Starter
Meru
added [Insane] \:D/
Frizz
4,131 posts
Joined April 2011
Frizz
Random mod

[General]
  1. Background image format is PNG. Change it to JPG/JPEG, it's kind of useless to use PNG for a background and it's a waste of space.
[Insane]
Quite liking this diff, it's quite jumpy.

Difficulty: DR-1, OD-1, AR+1 perhaps?

00:07:022 (1) - NC here
00:09:363 (1) - ^
00:14:046 (1) - ^
00:15:510 (1) - ^
00:17:558 (1) - ^
00:23:412 (1) - ^
00:35:119 (7,8,9) - Kind of confusing here, change it perhaps?
00:50:485 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing is rather confusing, make it like this http://puu.sh/CxSP and perhaps make 00:50:632 (2,3) stacks
00:51:071 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:58:534 (4) - Burai slider, not good
00:59:412 (6,7,8) - Make it like this? http://puu.sh/CxTC
00:59:851 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:50:485 (1,2,3,4) the spacing is rather confusing, make it like this http://puu.sh/CxUo
01:46:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:50:485 (1,2,3,4)

Haven't checked the other diffs, sorry.
Good luck now :)
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Meru

Frizz925 wrote:

Random mod

[General]
  1. Background image format is PNG. Change it to JPG/JPEG, it's kind of useless to use PNG for a background and it's a waste of space. eh really? okay (too lazy for FS lol)

[Insane]
Quite liking this diff, it's quite jumpy. :D

Difficulty: DR-1, OD-1, AR+1 perhaps? DR and OD accepted, but AR will considered, if people ask me to do the same thing perhaps I'd >_>

00:07:022 (1) - NC here done
00:09:363 (1) - ^ done
00:14:046 (1) - ^ done
00:15:510 (1) - ^ done
00:17:558 (1) - ^ done
00:23:412 (1) - ^ done
00:35:119 (7,8,9) - Kind of confusing here, change it perhaps? overlap? maybe, fix~
00:50:485 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing is rather confusing, make it like this http://puu.sh/CxSP and perhaps make 00:50:632 (2,3) stacks stacks? lol I'm still lack of experience about this thing.
00:51:071 (5,6,7,8) - ^ anyway fixed
00:58:534 (4) - Burai slider, not good done
00:59:412 (6,7,8) - Make it like this? http://puu.sh/CxTC seems better :D
00:59:851 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:50:485 (1,2,3,4) the spacing is rather confusing, make it like this http://puu.sh/CxUo done
01:46:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:50:485 (1,2,3,4) done

Haven't checked the other diffs, sorry.
Good luck now :) thanks!
sorry for late reply orz
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
Hi~
Sorry for delay~

General:
Should be "NicoNico Chorus"... imo
Add in source "Nico Nico Douga"

Easy:
Oh... You should consider in re-map this diff... Imo
See notes to go with the beat.... Use sliders, is a Easy...
Reduces combos, the easy can't carry more of 5-6 notes in one combo.
00:05:412 (2) - Spacing
00:06:290 (1) - ^
00:28:241 (1,2,3) - Hard for a Easy

Normal:
Oh... You should consider in re-map this diff... Imo
Reduces combos, the Normal can't carry more of 5-6 notes in one combo.
Some things are too difficult for a normal, fix this...
00:05:120 (2,3,4) - Is a Normal, spacing e.e
00:06:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - WAT? Reduce this combo, god D:

sorry, but... I feel the map lacks work D:
Sorry for my bad English, Good luck.
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Meru

Fenya wrote:

Hi~
Sorry for delay~

General:
Should be "NicoNico Chorus"... imo well, I check a few of them too, most of them are "NicoNico Chorus" so, I think I'd change it in next FS >_>
Add in source "Nico Nico Douga"

Easy:
Oh... You should consider in re-map this diff... Imo
See notes to go with the beat.... Use sliders, is a Easy...
Reduces combos, the easy can't carry more of 5-6 notes in one combo.
00:05:412 (2) - Spacing
00:06:290 (1) - ^
00:28:241 (1,2,3) - Hard for a Easy

Normal:
Oh... You should consider in re-map this diff... Imo
Reduces combos, the Normal can't carry more of 5-6 notes in one combo.
Some things are too difficult for a normal, fix this...
00:05:120 (2,3,4) - Is a Normal, spacing e.e
00:06:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - WAT? Reduce this combo, god D:

sorry, but... I feel the map lacks work D:
Sorry for my bad English, Good luck.
ah sorry, I'll check it all later, I was in hurry >_>
Yu-Izanagi-12
314 posts
Joined March 2012
Yu-Izanagi-12
Hi from my queue
Good song by the way
Everything looked good to me however for both Hard and Insane the area between 00:24:875 and 00:28:095 should have a few more notes/sliders because of the diffs bar drainage some may end up failing if they miss a few notes at the beginning before this part
Good Luck :D
kyuten
171 posts
Joined August 2008
kyuten
Hi~Request from my queue

[General]
offset +4 or you choose the idea ww


[Easy]
-Beatmap-
00:15:510 (1) - move it to 00:15:363 for a easy diff ?
00:20:193 (1) - ^
00:25:022 - no break time here OAO???
00:34:241 (1) - also white line
00:38:778 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part is too hard for easy...
00:52:827 (1,2,3) - the distance is kinda weird...
00:55:607 (2,3) - also here...you'd better use DS for this
01:27:949 (4) - maybe unrankable...
01:35:705 (3) - no....
01:38:339 (3) - still white line
02:14:193 (4) - DS
02:23:266 (3) - DS
02:27:949 (3) - ^
02:41:997 (3,4) - stack here?

[Normal]
-Beatmap-
01:38:339 (4) - i prefer white line ._.

ohh...you should use distance snap for the whole map
the rhythm and the patten is too hard for a normal diff...

[Hard]
-Beatmap-
00:09:949 (5,6) - its hard to read and unrankable maybe...
00:23:851 (1) - map something instead of a spin?
00:41:266 (1) - i prefer white line
00:50:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - noooo...the distance..this patten is really not a 1/4 stream ??? why not follow the distance just like the one in the timeline?
SPOILER
01:27:071 (3) - add a reverse
01:43:754 (3) - distance
01:46:680 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:49:900 (1,2) - its not symmetric

[Insane]
-Difficulty-
AR+1 HD-1
-Beatmap-
00:54:290 (5) - why slow here 0 0?
01:01:022 (1) - ^
01:20:778 (4) - jump a little
02:25:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - use this patten?
SPOILER
02:33:656 (2,3,4) - jump a little

[Overall]
well...follow the lyric makes the map a bad flow...need more improvement.
Meru
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Topic Starter
Meru
SPOILER

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

Hi from my queue
Good song by the way really?? :o
Everything looked good to me however for both Hard and Insane the area between 00:24:875 and 00:28:095 should have a few more notes/sliders because of the diffs bar drainage some may end up failing if they miss a few notes at the beginning before this part
Good Luck :D Ah.. I guess I'll chose to put breaks on it since I don't have any idea about put more notes/sliders on there xD


omgwtfbbq

kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from my queue

[General]
offset +4 or you choose the idea ww just how great your ears are o.0 considered.


[Easy]
-Beatmap-
00:15:510 (1) - move it to 00:15:363 for a easy diff ?I guess it'd be more hard if I do that :)
00:20:193 (1) - ^ ^
00:25:022 - no break time here OAO??? I guess you're right. done
00:34:241 (1) - also white line also same like before, besides the the rythm would not good and it sounds bad for me
00:38:778 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part is too hard for easy... kay >w< will find a better pattern to fix it
00:52:827 (1,2,3) - the distance is kinda weird... fixed >w<
00:55:607 (2,3) - also here...you'd better use DS for this fixed >w<
01:27:949 (4) - maybe unrankable...(((( ;°Д°))))
01:35:705 (3) - no.... get it...
01:38:339 (3) - still white line will think about it ;)
02:14:193 (4) - DS fixed >w<
02:23:266 (3) - DS fixed >w<
02:27:949 (3) - ^ fixed >w<
02:41:997 (3,4) - stack here? okay

[Normal]
-Beatmap-
01:38:339 (4) - i prefer white line ._. done

ohh...you should use distance snap for the whole map
the rhythm and the patten is too hard for a normal diff... ((((；゜Д゜)))

[Hard]
-Beatmap-
00:09:949 (5,6) - its hard to read and unrankable maybe... ah yeah... forget to fix those lol
00:23:851 (1) - map something instead of a spin? kay
00:41:266 (1) - i prefer white line considered
00:50:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - noooo...the distance..this patten is really not a 1/4 stream ??? why not follow the distance just like the one in the timeline? D: fixed >w<


SPOILER
01:27:071 (3) - add a reverse feels better >w<
01:43:754 (3) - distance fixed >w<
01:46:680 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed >w<
02:49:900 (1,2) - its not symmetric fixed >w<

[Insane]
-Difficulty-
AR+1 HD-1 uguu another AR+1 o.0 I think it's okay >,<
-Beatmap-
00:54:290 (5) - why slow here 0 0? just trap pattern ;)
01:01:022 (1) - ^ ^
01:20:778 (4) - jump a little only a little... okay
02:25:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - use this patten? exactly what I mean >,<
SPOILER
02:33:656 (2,3,4) - jump a little only a little... okay

[Overall]
well...follow the lyric makes the map a bad flow...need more improvement. It was because I don't have any idea about mapping this song >,<

really sorry for the late reply orz
jesse7419
405 posts
Joined March 2011
jesse7419
Hi
M4M from A-tan's mod queue

[General]
  1. If no make SB,please delete .osb file in your folder.
  2. Your Inherited should remake because more not in blunt.
[Easy]
  • Oh..I think this diff. will more work ><
    Because it's very hard for newbie...
    Tell you the Easy diff. need to follow~
  1. The distance must be to consistency in every note. I look your DS is set 0.5x.but more part are not 0.5x EX:00:47:559 (5,1) and more amd more.
  2. Set note in white and red blunt not change frequently plz. EX:01:22:680 (3,4,5)
    But you can use slider to solve this problem EX:01:44:339 (1,2) and nxet note should set in red blunt.
[Normal]
  • This diff.'s problem is the same with Easy!!
    Just the distance must be to consistency in every note,despite you can set 1/2 in Normal,but this diff. is more 1/2 note.... (very hard ><)
[Hard]
  • 00:21:071 (5,6) - 5 stack pretty in prev slider end.
    00:21:656 - add note?
    00:21:802 (7) - distance fix prev & next consistency.
    00:39:217 (2) - stack pretty in prev slider end.
    00:59:266 (5) - move right 1 gird.
    02:14:046 (8,2) - the distance should consistency.
    02:50:632 (1) - finish
[Insane]
  • 00:10:680 (1) - add finish in slider head.
    00:10:680 (1,2) - 0.5x speed change 1.5x speed is very not smooth.
    00:18:583 (1) - move to x:416 y:136
    00:19:168 (3) - Ctrl + R.
    00:19:680 - add note?
    00:38:339 (1,1,1) - change smae color.
    00:42:290 - there have no note I think will affact 00:42:436 (4,5) - to read.
    00:54:290 (5) - suddenly to the 0.5x speed. 00:56:924 (6) - this use low speed is more better.
    01:01:022 (1) - ^
    01:17:412 (8) - NC
    01:17:705 (1,1,1,2) - I think use the same color is better.
    02:03:071 - Berak move to this.
    SPOILER
    02:48:875 (5) - fix this distance with prev in 1.2x (you can move to x:96 y:64)
That's all I can find.
GL~
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Meru
reply

jesse7419 wrote:

Hi
M4M from A-tan's mod queue

[General]
  1. If no make SB,please delete .osb file in your folder.ah, I always forget to do that lol
  2. Your Inherited should remake because more not in blunt.actually, I don't get it >,<
[Easy]
  • Oh..I think this diff. will more work >< thx, already fix almost distance and map
    Because it's very hard for newbie...
    Tell you the Easy diff. need to follow~
  1. The distance must be to consistency in every note. I look your DS is set 0.5x.but more part are not 0.5x EX:00:47:559 (5,1) and more amd more.
  2. Set note in white and red blunt not change frequently plz. EX:01:22:680 (3,4,5)
    But you can use slider to solve this problem EX:01:44:339 (1,2) and nxet note should set in red blunt.
[Normal]
  • This diff.'s problem is the same with Easy!! kay, will re-map it soon
    Just the distance must be to consistency in every note,despite you can set 1/2 in Normal,but this diff. is more 1/2 note.... (very hard ><)
[Hard]
  • 00:21:071 (5,6) - 5 stack pretty in prev slider end. lol
    00:21:656 - add note? done.
    00:21:802 (7) - distance fix prev & next consistency. done
    00:39:217 (2) - stack pretty in prev slider end. done
    00:59:266 (5) - move right 1 gird. done
    02:14:046 (8,2) - the distance should consistency. done
    02:50:632 (1) - finishdone
[Insane]
  • 00:10:680 (1) - add finish in slider head. done
    00:10:680 (1,2) - 0.5x speed change 1.5x speed is very not smooth. just some trap passing by :P
    00:18:583 (1) - move to x:416 y:136 done
    00:19:168 (3) - Ctrl + R. done
    00:19:680 - add note? no, it should be okay :P
    00:38:339 (1,1,1) - change smae color. I can't make these 3 notes's color being same
    00:42:290 - there have no note I think will affact 00:42:436 (4,5) - to read. just assume it's some trap ;)
    00:54:290 (5) - suddenly to the 0.5x speed. another trap, lol
    00:56:924 (6) - this use low speed is more better. done
    01:17:412 (8) - NC I already put (1,1,1) after it
    01:17:705 (1,1,1,2) - I think use the same color is better. done
    02:03:071 - Berak move to this. done
    SPOILER
    02:48:875 (5) - fix this distance with prev in 1.2x (you can move to x:96 y:64) done
That's all I can find. thank you for your mod :D
GL~
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,393 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
Matoryoshika map Matryoshka.. uheuheuheuheuheuheuheu Sorry for the bad joke. orz

[General]
This god damn tooth.. seriously..
You don't think that "Nico Nico Douga" is the source, or?
Please fix the Kiai Times, some are inconsistent.

[Easy]
I personally would say you should decrease the SV by 0,8 or at least at 0,9. But this is just my opinion.
They are many unsnapped inherited timing points. These are:

Please fix them.

00:04:827 (1,2) - You could delete (2) and extend (1) for two reverse arrows.
00:06:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - It feels weird, even it sounds okay with the rhythm. Please move them to the white tick.
00:21:217 (2) - bad Idea. I also used them sometimes at Easy Diffs, but many people means that Beginners gets confused from this Slider. You can use this for a Normal Diff, but not for a Easy.
00:32:924 (5) - Strg+H it and move it away from 00:31:168 (3) since it overlaps with this Slider. http://puu.sh/Fosu
00:34:680 (2) - If you follow the suggestion above, move this to avoid overlap. Like here: http://puu.sh/FotP
00:38:778 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Except of the Taiko Claps it is very hard to hear the Hitsounds out.
00:55:168 (1) - Same as 00:21:217 (2)
01:21:510 (2) - ^
01:25:607 (3) - I don't feel that this Slider is so good like at the moment. There should be more space between the radius of (1) and (2).
01:27:949 (4) - This looks awful and I can bet that beginner might be irritated by this "second Circle". Try to move it away from (1). About the Idea that it lays under (1), you should not do this.
01:38:485 (3) - Same as 00:21:217 (2).
01:52:534 (2) - ^
01:59:558 (3) - This looks better. http://puu.sh/FoCg
02:17:120 (1) - This feels too fast for a Easy Diff since 02:17:705 (2) is very close to this object.
02:18:290 (3,4) - Spacing error.

[Normal]
The Difficult got many many bad overlaps which makes the overall view confusing. Some are quite okay, but things like the Overlap of 00:40:680 (5) with 00:41:997 (4) are things that you should avoid. You might change the Distance Spacing if the things stays to close.
00:06:290 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as Easy, but I also have to say that the Overlapping is very ugly. Sorry, but I really would say that you should re-map this part.
00:24:729 (6) - Add there Finish.
01:27:949 (6) - Please add there a NC.
01:42:583 (3,5) - I already wondered where (3) was. You should move it away.
01:54:290 (2,3) - Don't stack it like you do it here.
01:55:314 (5,6) - ^
01:58:095 (5,1) - Spacing Error.
02:45:217 (6) - Add NC here.

[Hard]
Please fix the same inherited timing points like in Easy.
Set the HP Drain for +1.
00:20:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels too hard to play.
00:28:827 (1) - The Spinner is way too short.
00:40:534 - Do you have any reasons for this bookmark?
00:46:973 (1) - Also too short.
02:12:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels too fast for a Hard Diff.
02:21:802 (1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1) - Err.. this would be fine for a Insane Diff, but not here..

[Insane]
00:13:314 (4,5) - The SV makes this Slider very ugly. Change them into normal Sliders.
00:38:047 (1) - Remove the NC.
00:50:119 (2,3) - If you really want to stack, stack it correctly.
00:57:510 (1,3,2,4) - Timing Error, (1) goes over (3). http://puu.sh/Fp8q Add at 00:57:510 a inherited Point with 1.0x.
01:17:851 (1,1,1) - Remove the NCs.

Well, it needs more Work IMO. Easy was ok, but as far not ready. Normal needs alot of more Work. Hard is okay. Same as to Insane.
Good luck!
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Meru
first, I want to say sorry because I'll skip easy & normal mod because I re-map it and forget to tell it in 1st post... sorry sorry ;_;, and recently I'm really in bad mood even for playing osu orz . __ . please don't hate me to do this orz

anyway, you're the first person who tells that joke to me lol

eh?

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Matoryoshika map Matryoshka.. uheuheuheuheuheuheuheu Sorry for the bad joke. orz

[General]
This god damn tooth.. seriously..
You don't think that "Nico Nico Douga" is the source, or?
Please fix the Kiai Times, some are inconsistent.


[Hard]
Set the HP Drain for +1. done
00:20:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels too hard to play. have any suggestion? but you're right.
00:28:827 (1) - The Spinner is way too short. argh, you're right, fixed.
00:40:534 - Do you have any reasons for this bookmark? well, I even didn't know why I put that bookmark xD[/color
00:46:973 (1) - Also too short. fixed.[/color
02:12:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels too fast for a Hard Diff.
02:21:802 (1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1) - Err.. this would be fine for a Insane Diff, but not here.. you think so? well I'll keep it for a while...

[Insane]
00:13:314 (4,5) - The SV makes this Slider very ugly. Change them into normal Sliders. ahaha lol okay.
00:38:047 (1) - Remove the NC. done~
00:50:119 (2,3) - If you really want to stack, stack it correctly.
00:57:510 (1,3,2,4) - Timing Error, (1) goes over (3). http://puu.sh/Fp8q Add at 00:57:510 a inherited Point with 1.0x.
01:17:851 (1,1,1) - Remove the NCs. ahh... how should I say it >_> it was some kind of 'heal' for gaining HPbar :P

Well, it needs more Work IMO. Easy was ok, but as far not ready. Normal needs alot of more Work. Hard is okay. Same as to Insane.
Good luck!
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
ohaaa M4M ~
Pake bahasa Indo aja ya ane males pake bhsa inggris -_-"v
Item = saran

[General]
tambah Vocaloid di tags?
timing mulai kiai sama selesai kiai masih belum di snap (semuanya harus di garis putih)

[Easy]
- karena BPMnya super kenceng, coba deh SVnya 0.8 T w T
- 00:08:632 : nc?
- 00:13:314 : nc?
- 00:35:266 : kejauhan ._. beda sama hit pertama ke hit kedua
- 01:20:924 : hapus circle?
- 01:27:949 : slidernya sembunyi, jadi susah nebaknya, coba diputer ato dipindah :3

[Normal]
- 00:10:680 : finish?
- 01:34:388 : pindah slider tailnya ke hit 4? keliatan gak rapi /maaf -.-

[Hard]
- 00:23:119 : bikin hit 5 sembunyi di slider tail hit 1 ?
- 00:32:046 : tambah note?
- 01:47:851 : bikin distance-nya sama kea hit 2 ke hit 3 ?
- 01:52:095 : nc? krn kecepatan slidernya berubah

[Insane]
- 00:11:119 : nc? kecepatan slidernya berubah
- 00:24:729 : finish?
- 00:54:290 : nc? kecepatan slidernya berubah
- 00:56:924 : ^
- 02:18:290 : bikin distancenya sama?
- 02:47:558 : finish?
- 02:51:071 : buat jump? c:

itu aja deh, good luck buat ranknya :)
lain kali M4M lagi yuk ~ hohoho :D
Mikan
244 posts
Joined January 2011
Mikan
hi

English is poor. I'm sorry

Insane
00:08:632 (2) - 2grid→
01:17:705 (1,1,1,1) - Unnatural just here
01:16:973 (1) - NC?
01:17:558 (1) - NC
01:17:705 (1,1,1,1) - ReNC
01:34:095 (4) - NC
01:34:388 (7) - NC
01:34:680 (10) - NC

normal
00:30:583 (1) - NC
01:27:949 (1) - NC?
01:29:119 (1) - NC?
01:44:924 (3,4) - Too far away
01:54:875 (5) - NC
02:40:534 (5) - NC?
02:49:900 (1) - ReNC?

All suggestions
Ignore it is ok



gl
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Meru
SPOILER

- t e n n y a - wrote:

ohaaa M4M ~
Pake bahasa Indo aja ya ane males pake bhsa inggris -_-"v
Item = saran

[General]
tambah Vocaloid di tags? iya juga yak, lupa lol
timing mulai kiai sama selesai kiai masih belum di snap (semuanya harus di garis putih) ah dampak abis remap lupa betulin lagi -_-)v

[Easy]
- karena BPMnya super kenceng, coba deh SVnya 0.8 T w T yang ini kupertimbangkan dulu yak lol soalnya kurasa ga terlalu kecepetan sih slidernya
- 00:08:632 : nc? ndak usah
- 00:13:314 : nc? ^
- 00:35:266 : kejauhan ._. beda sama hit pertama ke hit kedua done~
- 01:20:924 : hapus circle? ndak usah, mau mau combo baru di downbeat soalnya
- 01:27:949 : slidernya sembunyi, jadi susah nebaknya, coba diputer ato dipindah :3 nah, yang ini udah konsultasi dikit, bakal aku tanya-tanya lagi nanti ( ._.)v

[Normal]
- 00:10:680 : finish? boleh~
- 01:34:388 : pindah slider tailnya ke hit 4? keliatan gak rapi /maaf -.- iya bener juga lol

[Hard]
- 00:23:119 : bikin hit 5 sembunyi di slider tail hit 1 ? stack maksudnya? karena distance spacing juga sih jadinya gitu lol, fixed
- 00:32:046 : tambah note? boleh~
- 01:47:851 : bikin distance-nya sama kea hit 2 ke hit 3 ? inconsistency of spacing, sip!
- 01:52:095 : nc? krn kecepatan slidernya berubah ndak usah, emang sengaja kok di lambatin lol

[Insane]
- 00:11:119 : nc? kecepatan slidernya berubah ^
- 00:24:729 : finish? oke
- 00:54:290 : nc? kecepatan slidernya berubah cuma tricky speed slider doang kok
- 00:56:924 : ^ ^
- 02:18:290 : bikin distancenya sama? fixed~
- 02:47:558 : finish? bole juga
- 02:51:071 : buat jump? c: ndak usah lah kasian nanti *eh

itu aja deh, good luck buat ranknya :) sip situ juga lagu erogenya heuheuheu -,-)b
lain kali M4M lagi yuk ~ hohoho :D wkwkwk bole aja tapi peraturannya harus beda beatmap kalo ndak salah >_>

Overall: kalo mod kasih angka objectnya yak kayak misalnya 02:51:071 (1,2,3) ini brarti timeline sekian dan object yang dimaksud biar orang ga bingung juga hehe


SPOILER

Mikan wrote:

hi

English is poor. I'm sorry it's okay, sometimes I'm doing that too :(

Insane
00:08:632 (2) - 2grid→ done
01:17:705 (1,1,1,1) - Unnatural just here it's just for some kind of 'heal' part considered with below
01:16:973 (1) - NC?
01:17:558 (1) - NC
01:17:705 (1,1,1,1) - ReNC after read mods above, I think I'll make come change
01:34:095 (4) - NC
01:34:388 (7) - NC
01:34:680 (10) - NC

normal
00:30:583 (1) - NC is it already NC?
01:27:949 (1) - NC? done
01:29:119 (1) - NC? done
01:44:924 (3,4) - Too far away fixed
01:54:875 (5) - NC done
02:40:534 (5) - NC? not yet
02:49:900 (1) - ReNC? no, I'm following the vocal \:D/

All suggestions
Ignore it is ok



gl

even it's just suggestion but some of them is helpful for me
powpow9089
powpow9089
:c Tags must be NicoNicoDouga, because Nico Nico Douga already in source
EDIT: You forget to add tags "vocaloid" in Easy Diff
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
M4M

[General]

Nosense why MatryoshkaBG.png is in song folder.
Nosense why .osb is in song folder if you're not using it.

[Easy]

Add vocaloid to tags. Other difficulties contain this, just Easy not.
00:06:876 (2) - Unrankable! Overlap
00:17:119 (4) - Move it on x:200 y:180 for perfect blanketing
00:21:217 (2) - I think this would be unrankable it's very sudden in Easy diff
00:32:924 (5) - Same problem like 00:06:876 (2)
00:55:168 (1) - Same problem like 00:21:217 (2)
01:21:510 (2) - ^
01:27:949 (4,5) - Totaly unrankable. Slider under slider, overlap, start at almost same position, looks like note. You MUST remake this if you want rank it
01:43:168 (2,3,4) - We can count it like overlap
01:52:534 (2) - Same like 00:21:217 (2)
01:54:875 (2) - ^
02:17:705 (2,3,4) - Where is snap?
02:45:802 (2) - Overlap

[Normal]

00:09:949 (3) - Move perfectly on x:64 y:240
00:30:583 (1) - New combo is important here (after spinner)
00:33:217 (4) - I don't think that jumbled sliders are really good in Normal and Easy diffs.
00:39:217 (2) - Overlap
00:49:314 (4) - Same like 00:33:217 (4)
00:55:168 (1) - ^
00:56:632 (5) - Overlap
00:57:510 (1) - Move perfectly on x:388 y:116
00:59:851 (1) - Overlap
01:29:705 (3) - Delete this note and add repeat on 01:29:412 (2)
01:34:973 (1) - Overlap
01:35:705 (3) - ^
01:37:607 (2) - Move perfectly on x:282 y:218
01:38:193 (4) - Same like 00:33:217 (4)
01:51:071 (6) - Snap?
01:54:290 (2,3,4) - Don't stack in easy or normal diffs.
01:55:461 (2,3,4) - ^
02:22:095 (1) - Same like 00:33:217 (4)
02:22:680 (2) - ^
02:25:607 (3) - Overlap
02:29:997 (3) - Same like 00:33:217 (4)
02:34:388 (6) - NC (very long combo)
02:41:705 (6) - ^
02:44:339 (4) - Overlap
02:46:973 (5) - Same like 00:33:217 (4)

[Hard]

00:06:290 (2,3,4,5) - Bad pattern
00:07:022 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:17:851 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:24:144 (2) - Jumbles are so small and move last red point on x:280 y:176
00:48:144 (1) - You killed flow because of low distance snap.
00:48:071 - Move kiai on 00:48:144 (unrankable)
01:01:022 (3) - Bad snap
01:25:022 (8) - ^
01:45:363 (4) - And at 01:45:802
02:18:297 (5) - (unrankable) Unsnapped. Move it on 02:18:290
02:36:436 (3) - What the....snap?

[Insane]

00:11:705 (3) - Follow patterns. NC here
00:11:851 (1) - Remove NC
00:48:071 - Note here
00:48:071 - Move kiai on 00:48:144 (unrankable)
00:54:390 - Move green point on 00:54:436 or 00:54:363 (unrankable)

Map still need some work.
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Meru
SPOILER

dragonxcz wrote:

M4M

[General]

Nosense why MatryoshkaBG.png is in song folder. done
Nosense why .osb is in song folder if you're not using it. done

[Easy]

Add vocaloid to tags. Other difficulties contain this, just Easy not. done
00:06:876 (2) - Unrankable! Overlap done
00:17:119 (4) - Move it on x:200 y:180 for perfect blanketing done
00:21:217 (2) - I think this would be unrankable it's very sudden in Easy diff have any idea?
00:32:924 (5) - Same problem like 00:06:876 (2) done
00:55:168 (1) - Same problem like 00:21:217 (2) done
01:21:510 (2) - ^ eh? I don't get it which is wrong o.o
01:27:949 (4,5) - Totaly unrankable. Slider under slider, overlap, start at almost same position, looks like note. You MUST remake this if you want rank it D: please don't say remake I was too lazy lol wkwk anyway done
01:43:168 (2,3,4) - We can count it like overlap done
01:52:534 (2) - Same like 00:21:217 (2) done
01:54:875 (2) - ^ done
02:17:705 (2,3,4) - Where is snap? done
02:45:802 (2) - Overlap done

[Normal]

00:09:949 (3) - Move perfectly on x:64 y:240 done
00:30:583 (1) - New combo is important here (after spinner) I don't get it :v
00:33:217 (4) - I don't think that jumbled sliders are really good in Normal and Easy diffs. lol have any preference?
00:39:217 (2) - Overlap done
00:49:314 (4) - Same like 00:33:217 (4) done
00:55:168 (1) - ^ done
00:56:632 (5) - Overlap done
00:57:510 (1) - Move perfectly on x:388 y:116 done
00:59:851 (1) - Overlap done
01:29:705 (3) - Delete this note and add repeat on 01:29:412 (2) done
01:34:973 (1) - Overlap done
01:35:705 (3) - ^ done
01:37:607 (2) - Move perfectly on x:282 y:218 done
01:38:193 (4) - Same like 00:33:217 (4) done
01:51:071 (6) - Snap? done
01:54:290 (2,3,4) - Don't stack in easy or normal diffs. done
01:55:461 (2,3,4) - ^ done
02:22:095 (1) - Same like 00:33:217 (4) done
02:22:680 (2) - ^ done
02:25:607 (3) - Overlap done
02:29:997 (3) - Same like 00:33:217 (4) done
02:34:388 (6) - NC (very long combo) done
02:41:705 (6) - ^ done
02:44:339 (4) - Overlap done
02:46:973 (5) - Same like 00:33:217 (4) done

[Hard]

00:06:290 (2,3,4,5) - Bad pattern considered
00:07:022 (1,2,3,4) - ^ considered
00:17:851 (2,3,4,5) - ^ considered
00:24:144 (2) - Jumbles are so small and move last red point on x:280 y:176 done
00:48:144 (1) - You killed flow because of low distance snap. done
00:48:071 - Move kiai on 00:48:144 (unrankable) done
01:01:022 (3) - Bad snap done
01:25:022 (8) - ^ done
01:45:363 (4) - And at 01:45:802 I don't get it
02:18:297 (5) - (unrankable) Unsnapped. Move it on 02:18:290 done
02:36:436 (3) - What the....snap? done

[Insane]

00:11:705 (3) - Follow patterns. NC here done
00:11:851 (1) - Remove NC done
00:48:071 - Note here no
00:48:071 - Move kiai on 00:48:144 (unrankable) done
00:54:390 - Move green point on 00:54:436 or 00:54:363 (unrankable) done

Map still need some work.

thanks for a lot hardwork o.o
Tur00
608 posts
Joined November 2011
Tur00
Srry i dont mod this song why i dont like ~
But i shot a
Star~
Then Srry .
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