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IOSYS - Ribbon and Catnip and Me (Short Ver.)

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crabovan
236 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
crabovan

Madball wrote:

Первый раз модю ;)

Relax:
01:41:662 (1,2,3,4) - Не очень сходиться со словами, попробуй поменять местами как-нибудь. сделано

Hard:
01:05:257 (1,2,3,4,5) - <3 я не понял, что это означает
01:09:976 (10,11) - Как-то не интуитивно. Попробуй поставить на 9кой. Или 8ку (и 9, 10 и 11) сдвинь под 7ку. Или придумай что-нибудь покрасивее. сделано
01:38:966 (1,2,3,4) - С первого раза трудно понять. Подальше что ли сделай. сделано
02:27:843 (3) - Конец не сходиться со словами, можно сделать на 1/2 покороче. сделано
02:29:192 (3) - ^ сделано

Izayoi: моддить будет владелец карты
00:06:605 (3) - Под 300кой от спиннера не видно, что это слайдер.
01:01:550 (3,4) - Плохо видно.
02:07:620 (3,4) - ^
01:44:866 (4,5) - Слишком далеко. Кажется, что между ними 1/1 времени.
01:25:315 (1,1,1,1,1), 02:31:384 (1,2,3,4,5) - Почему сначала комбо меняется, а потом нет? Просто интересно.

В общем, прикольно :) спасибо :3
Kudosu \o/
Madball
14 posts
Joined July 2011
Madball
Hard:
01:09:302 (8,9,10,11) - Отдели от 7ки. Как в 01:13:347 (1,2,3,4). Можешь комбо новое сделать.
01:38:966 (1,2,3,4) - Слишком далеко, да к тому же после спиннера. Сократи расстояние в два раза (между концами слайдеров) или сделай задом наперед. Или придумай что-нибудь покрасивее.

<3 - это ❤
crabovan
236 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
crabovan

Madball wrote:

Hard:
01:09:302 (8,9,10,11) - Отдели от 7ки. Как в 01:13:347 (1,2,3,4). Можешь комбо новое сделать. готово
01:38:966 (1,2,3,4) - Слишком далеко, да к тому же после спиннера. Сократи расстояние в два раза (между концами слайдеров) или сделай задом наперед. Или придумай что-нибудь покрасивее. готово

<3 - это ❤ так зачем красным цветом написал? :С
буду считать за продолжение прошлого мода, окай?
Madball
14 posts
Joined July 2011
Madball
Окай, считай за продолжение.
Красным написал потому что сердечко. Ну да, зря.

Hard:
01:38:966 (1,2,3,4) - Как в крокодил играю :| . Сравни расстояние с 01:41:662 (1,2,3,4) и 01:44:359 (1,2,3,4), оно в 2 раза больше и труднее. Под "Задом наперед" имел в виду каждый слайдер в отдельности, чтобы получилось как в 01:44:359 (1,2,3,4).
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Elly-chan
//PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS IS A HITSOUND/COMBO MOD ONLY ((EXCEPT FOR EASY)) AND IT NEEDS MORE MODDING BEFORE I CAN GIVE OUT ONE OF MY REGULAR MODS.// ┗┃・ ■ ・┃┛

Cute, Cute Chen! // ran nosebleed.
[General]
  1. Why is your BPM '177.995'?! Switch it to 178.000 BPM, please. It sounds almost identical but it's the true BPM. It's very rare that somebody would use a BPM like the current one you have to make a song.
  2. There are two .osb files in the folder when at maximum there should only be one. Delete one of them, or even better, both since you don't even use a storyboard.
  3. The second combo color in your pattern is le very awkward, for it has no relation to either ran or chen's character designs, nor the current background you have. Remove it, please? It's starting to hurt my eyes >:
  4. Remove 'Project' from the tags. Yes, I understand this is a remix of a song from the Touhou Project, but just having Touhou as the source is good enough. Also, if you could find the singer of this song and/or anybody related to making this song, perhaps add them in the tags?
  5. I am very confused about your difficulty names. Please stick with something simple; please! Currently you're mashing up three different ways to name difficulties in one and it looks pretty bad. How to improve it, you say? Rename relaxing to normal, and then rename Izayoi's difficulty to something that at the least uses his/her username in it. If not, at least make it something related to the song, like 'Chen!' (( Only use that as a last resort, though! ))
  6. 00:00:536 - Seeing that BonkuraChan starts her timing point here, may you concider doing so for all of your other difficulties? Look, I notice how his/hers starts earlier then yours, but still, it's nice to have consistency.
  7. The MP3's fadeout is pretty rough.. I suggest re-editing the MP3 and making the fadeout AT LEAST five seconds, or from where the final spinner is till the end (( where it fades out from 100% to nothing )).
[Relax]

Hitsound Mods

  1. Where are your hitsounds?! Silly, hitsounds are one of the big things that makes osu!.. well, osu! I would HIGHLY recommend that you AT LEAST add in finish hitsounds whenever you hear a finish in the BGM like at 00:05:929 -, 00:16:716 -, and 00:31:548 -. Or, if you want to give your beatmap some character and spice it up, I suggest that you should add a custom hitsound and use it at the beginning of the map whenever you hear a sound like the one at 00:06:604 -. (( 00:07:952 -, 00:09:300 -, etc etc. )) Here, i've got one right here for you! Just drag it into the beatmap's folder, turn on 'custom 1', and then add a clap hitsound to whenever you hear that noise. If you would like any other tips, chat me in-game. I'd love to help you improve your hitsound patterns.

Combo Mods

  1. 00:36:942 (1) - Your combo pattern during the kiai is a bit confusing. I can't tell if you're trying to add a new combo every time 'Ran' talks or not. Either way, I will put both suggestions out here. If you want to place new combos whenever ran talks in this kiai section, and this is most likely your best option, add a new combo at 00:34:245 - and 00:39:638 - since there is already one at 00:36:942 -. If you really don't want to do this, and I mean with all your heart, then remove the new combo at 00:36:942 -. Yes, I am highly suggesting the first option.
  2. 01:14:864 (5) - Perhaps add a new combo here? This slider is following the only thing possible, the BGM video game-like music, and since you're not following Ran's vocals anymore, this is a good place to add one.
  3. 01:18:740 (4) - This combo pattern is a bit confusing. You're adding a new combo so early.. but I can work with this. If you add a new combo at 01:18:740 -; for there is a pitch change within the singer's voice (( it gets lower )) and it's on the downbeat.
  4. 02:23:461 (5) - Add a new combo here? It's a downbeat, and you placed almost the same exact combo pattern as i'm suggesting at 01:18:740 -. Plus, the combo's getting pretty long.

I suggest for you to remap most parts just to space it out a bit more and use 1.00x distance spacing. (( You Currently Have 0.80x ))

[Hard]

Hitsound Mods

  1. As I mentioned in Relaxing, (( which is pretty hard to miss since it's the only thing i've put there in the Hitsound Mods )), may you please replace the default clap for the beginning section with the one I gave you? It sounds much better. To adjust it so that it can work for this difficulty (( considering that you are using the soft hitsound instead of normal through most of this difficulty )), just copy the mp3 file and then type in exactly this: 'soft-hitclap' .
  2. 00:32:897 (1) - Add a finish to accompany this whistle since there's one in the BGM?
  3. 00:32:897 (1) - I get what you're trying to do with this current hitsound pattern, but trust me, by doing this you're overusing the whistles and it is going to get extremely agitating to the player. I suggest that you only add them on in this kiai when chen actually says the 'uu' noises. For example, I would only add a whistle on 00:32:897 -, 00:33:234 -, 00:33:571 -, and 00:33:908 - and I would remove the whistles at 00:33:065 -, 00:33:739 -, 00:36:436 -. Get what i'm saying by remove the excess whistles?
  4. 00:40:987 (1) - Another missing finish as indicated in the BGM~ Add one?
  5. 00:42:335 (4) - ANOTHER missing finish as indicated in the BGM..~ Add one?
  6. 00:44:020 (1) - Your clap hitsound pattern is way off. Instead of what you have currently, you should be adding claps at places like 00:44:020 -, 00:44:695 - and 00:45:369 - (( etc etc. )) I suggest using the custom clap for this part. It sounds way more fitting then the default.
  7. 00:48:403 (5) - I personally think you should add a finish here instead. Why, you may ask? Well, it's because you're currently placing all of your finishes to that weird sample in the BGM. Right here, there are two of them in the music, so yeah. add one?
  8. 00:49:751 (2) - Same thing as I mentioned above.. but this time it's your choice. You can either replace it with a whistle or a finish. ^^
  9. 00:59:189 (6) - The same thing as I've mentioned at 00:48:403 -.
  10. 01:00:538 (2) - Same thing as I've mentioned at 00:49:751 -, too.
  11. 01:09:302 (1, 2, 3, 4) - These all should be finishes instead of claps, as indicated in the BGM. Add them in and replace the claps, please?
  12. 01:13:347 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - "These all should be finishes instead of claps, as indicated in the BGM. Add them in and replace the claps, please?"
  13. 01:15:370 (8) - Add a finish as indicated in the BGM, please?
  14. 01:16:044 (1) - Add a finish as indicated in the BGM again. >v<
  15. 01:25:314 (6) - Uwah, how many finishes are you missing? Add one more in here, please.
  16. 01:30:876 (4) - I'm getting kinda tired of saying this.. Finish as indicated in the BGM, please. ah, screw this, i'm making a list since it seems as if you're missing quite a few. ^^
    SPOILER
    1. 01:32:224 -
    2. 01:36:269 -
    3. 01:38:966 -
    4. 01:44:359 -
    5. 01:48:404 -
    6. 01:49:753 -
    7. 02:08:629 -
    8. 02:09:809 -
    9. 02:15:371 (6, 7, 8, 9) -
    10. 02:16:720 -
    11. 02:18:068 -
    12. 02:19:416 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 8) -
    13. 02:31:383 -
    14. 02:32:900 -
    15. 02:36:945 -
    16. 02:38:293 -
    17. 02:42:338 -
  17. 01:57:843 - This mod is directed twoards this whole blue combo: The whistles in the slider paths sound very awkward. I suggest removing them and placing whistles where you forgot to on ran's vocal part right here.

Combo Mods

  1. 00:15:368 (1) - Remove this newcombo in order for you to keep your combo pattern consistent. If you want another reason, it doesn't belong there because of ran continuing to finish up her sentence, 'kawaii kawaii' referring to 'chen-een-uu~'.
  2. 00:42:335 (4) - Mmm.. add a new combo? The singer is currently speaking as ran and suddenly changed from addressing chen to addressing her master, Yukari. Plus, it starts on the downbeat!
  3. 01:03:572 (7) - This combo is getting awfully long.. I suggest that you try to shorten it by adding a new combo here since the singer took a quick pause.
  4. 01:08:628 (4) - There's an emphasis on this note in the BGM. Plus, I don't know why exactly but this combo pattern (( blue combo )) feels too awkward for me as it is long. Add in a new combo to fix things? <3
  5. 01:14:864 (6) - Yet again, it seems as if you're following the video game-like BGM music! Add in a new combo?
  6. 01:25:314 (6) - There is an emphasis in the BGM that lands within this pattern. It doesn't exactly feel correct to add it in with the previous combo pattern, so hows' about you add a new combo here?
  7. 01:59:022 (3) - Oh, fun, more emphasis found within the BGM. New combo for all of the reasons i've said before on some of the emphasis mods i've listed above?~
  8. 02:15:371 (6) - This combo pattern doesn't exactly fit with the previous combo it's currently attached to. Add in a new combo here for emphasis reasons, it being on the downbeat and it simply looking better?
  9. 02:42:338 (5) - The pitch of the singer's voice suddenly changes, and there's a downbeat here. You must know what i'm thinking.. new combo, please!

[EXTRA STUFF + SOME EASY MODS]
Extra Stuff
[Izayoi]
  1. 00:07:953 (3) - Unsnapped note. Re-snap the slider end, please.
  2. 00:15:706 (2) - Unsnapped note. Re-snap the slider end, please.
[Some General Easy Mods]
  1. 00:08:626 (1) - By placing this repeat slider ever-so-close to the long slider that comes before it, it seems cramped up and it looses potential of having good flow. How about you space it out a bit? You know, to make it flow a bit better. Adjust spacing afterwards.
  2. 00:10:986 - This upcomming section (( Placement Of Notes )) Is Straight Out Weird/Awkward. Maybe you can make it better by placing a note where I expected ( 00:10:986 - ), removing the next beat, then move over the slider so that it starts at 00:11:323 -?
  3. 00:09:975 (2, 1, 2) - Try to not make this pattern so cluttered, please? Maybe you can try spacing out the second (2) from the original (2)'s sliderpath and adjust spacing? ^^
    SPOILER
    WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE CURRENTLY
  4. 00:18:065 (2, 3, 4) - First off, (3) and (4) overlap a bit of (2)'s sliderpath, resulting in the gameplay looking messy and yucky. I suggest for you to space these out AND add a note at 00:18:065 - to get a proper flow going on with both the vocal and the BGM.
  5. 00:19:413 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Add some curves to this pattern! Everything is so boxy the way how it flows, resulting in bad flow and not-so-good-looking gameplay (( think aesthetics! )). Perhaps you can re-do this pattern to follow those two items?
  6. 00:22:447 (2) - It's not necessarily good to do blankets if the spacing is too squished together, which it is in this case. Please space it out so that it doesn't look messy in gameplay.
  7. 00:23:627 - Why don't you add a note here? It's awkward with a gap right here because the tension in the music is building up.
  8. 00:24:469 (1, 2, 3) - This isn't quite a good transition. Perhaps curve (1), then adjust the pattern slightly before it and after it to get some decent non-linear or boxy flow?
  9. 00:25:818 (4) - Since this is supposed to be the easiest diff in the entire mapset, can you remove a repeat from the slider and then add a note where it would've originally ended? It currently, being passed off as the easiest difficulty, could be unreadable for easy/normal difficulty players.
  10. 00:32:897 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Perhaps you can retry positioning these notes into a somewhat less linear pattern that starts at the top left of the screen and curves down into the big slider (( Something Like This. ))
    SPOILER
  11. 00:35:593 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Like I said above about curving the 'stream'. (( Yes, technically this can still be considered a stream, I checked my music terms ;) )) Try something like it so you get a smoother curve and better looks in gameplay.
  12. 00:38:290 (1) - This looks extremely cluttered due to it being positioned directly near the last two slider's ends where their 300/100/50 hitbursts would be and you would see it appearing there while still playing those sliders (( 1 )). You don't exactly have to do this thing in the image, but try something like it. It's more appealing in gameplay.
    SPOILER
  13. --- FROM THIS POINT ON, YOU SHOULD KNOW EVERYTHING I'M GOING TO MENTION. BASIC AESTHETICS, PARTS THAT NEED BEATS FILLED IN, AND AWKWARD SLIDERS. SINCE THIS IS A GENERAL MOD, I JUST GAVE YOU A TASTE ON GENERAL THINGS YOU HAVE TO IMPROVE. ---
  14. 00:49:245 - Why is there a break here? It's in the middle of the section, there are still vocals identical to what you basically just mapped, and it's extremely awkward. I highly suggest that you remove it and map over it~ >v<
  15. 01:26:999 - Another break that has no reason whatsoever as to why it wasn't mapped over. Please correct this and map over it stat, please!
  16. 02:43:808 - Looks like here you have an unsnapped inherited timing point! Re-snap it, please? As insignificant as it may sound, it's very important.

not really even gonna mod izayoi.. if you have any questions, feel free to PM me in-game
Last edited by Elly-chan , edited 7 times in total.
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,812 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
Requested Taiko guest diff. finished. o/
Hope you like it.



Download: IOSYS - Ribbon and Catnip and Me (Short Ver.) (crabovan) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
716 Girl
716 Girl
Ну пиздец теперь у меня даже кудосок нету звезду дать
Ну ладно все равно удачки
STBlack_old
STBlack_old
Дам звезду :3
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
From #modreqs

IOSYS @w@ !

Normal

you have spacing problem :

00:10:986 (3) -
00:11:323 (1) -
00:18:064 (2,3) -
00:20:087 (2) -
00:23:121 (2,3) -
00:46:042 (6) -
00:47:390 (2) -
01:13:682 (2) -
01:16:042 (1,2,3) -
01:34:581 (1,2) -
01:46:042 (2) -
01:49:413 (4) -
01:56:491 (1) -
02:07:278 (1,2,3) -
02:20:087 (3,4)-
02:23:592 (1,2,3) -
02:39:974 (4) -

You use gird level 3 to map this map , you should choose gird level 4 to correct your spacing .
Yeah , you are using DS 1 , but you use gird level 3 so that's a big problem D:

01:41:660 (1) - remove nc




I think Hard diff need to remap D: !
Izayoi is good :D

good luck for you ~
Arian_old_1
Arian_old_1
Uhm... I'm realy that bored :roll:
Hi,again xD
Add "bonkurachan" to the tags and remove "ono" :P
no KDs
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Cygnus
  • General
  1. Inconsistent Kiai. Not a huge problem, but making them consistent would be better.

  2. Make your Lead-In 1,000 in Taiko and Izayoi.

  • Normal
  1. 00:26:828 (1) - I think putting a new combo here is not necessary. Please remove it.

  2. 00:49:076 - This break feels weird to me. I don't think a break should be added here. Please try to map this break please.

  3. 01:07:952 (1) - This slider is overlapping with the previous slider, please try to avoid it for better gameplay.

  4. 01:32:896 (1) - Move the 4th point of this slider 3 grids down.

  5. 01:43:008 (4) - Try to avoid this overlap with the previous note please.

  6. 02:08:626 - The break here too feels strange. I highly suggest you map this break too.

  7. 02:20:087 (3) - This slider is overlapping the next note for a bit, please fix it.

  8. Since this is a Normal Diff, bump OD, AR, and HP +1.

  • Hard
  1. 00:07:278 (3,4) - Weird overlap, please try to avoid this. I see there are some more overlaps in this diff, I can't point them one by one, I think it's up to you to look for those. Please try to fix them. It's not much of a problem but It doesn't look good for me. I highly suggest you try to avoid these kind of patterns so you can maintain a good flow on your map.

  2. Also, the spacing is so low on some parts. You used x1 DS in Normal but you used x.8 here. D:

  3. 01:11:997 (3) - Would be better if you try to make this a slider blanket.

  4. 01:18:738 (1) - The spacing here feels weird. Try to make them more consistent.

  5. The rest seems fine. Don't forget to check all overlaps you have. Well overlaps like this should be fine. But keep an eye on some, they don't look good.

  • Izayoi
  1. 00:13:346 (3) - Unsnapped Slider End.

  2. 00:31:802 (2) - Put a new combo on this note. It's a new combo bug. It looks like it has a new combo, but It doesn't. Please click the new combo button on the right side of the editor, or press 'Q' on this note.

  3. 00:15:369 (1) - This overlap feels weird. Please avoid this too. I still can see a few overlaps like on 01:18:066 (3,4), avoid this one please.

  4. 01:20:931 (1,2,3,4) - Fix the spacing on these notes. They are inconsistent.

  5. 01:23:796 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as what I stated above.

  • Taiko
  1. A few Unsnapped Circle.
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
General
- Audio lead in for Normal and Hard is 0, Izayoi and Taiko is 1000, make them the same please

Normal
01:13:345 - You should map this break, this part of the song/vocals is different from the other breaks
01:32:896 (1) - Delete NC
01:44:356 (1) - Make this curve upwards instead, may be nicer to hit
02:15:705 (2) - Move this up a little so it's not touching the slider http://puu.sh/wLb7
02:19:413 - Map this break, same reason as before

Hard
00:19:413 (1) - Move up a bit so (4) makes a nice blanket http://puu.sh/wLdq
00:27:165 (1) - A finish sounds better than a clap imo
00:52:952 (1) - Bad spacing, move this farther away so people don't confuse rhythm
01:11:660 (2,3) - Too close, move apart
02:09:132 (2,1) - ^
02:20:592 (5) - NC, you did this before
02:43:682 (1) - Lower volume

Izayoi
00:16:717 (1) - Finish at beginning
00:21:773 (1) - Delete NC and put it on the next note
00:22:111 (2) - Finish at beginning
00:53:796 (4) - Ctrl + J and adjust
00:56:324 (3) - Slip this the opposite direction, less clumped http://puu.sh/wLl1
01:20:931 (1) - Style suggestion: http://puu.sh/wLnx, have some fun with the slider art lol
01:36:773 (1) - Delete NC
02:16:043 (3,4) - Make these 2 a separate stack from (1,2)?, might miss it on Hidden
02:20:594 (5) - NC
02:26:998 (1) - Same suggestion as before
02:31:717 (2) - NC
02:32:054 (3) - ^
02:32:391 (4) - ^ (you did these before)
02:42:841 (1) - delete NC
02:43:178 (1) - ^


Cute song xD GL :D
Kashim
41 posts
Joined November 2011
Kashim
Update:
Changed most of the things mentioned.
Removed all hitsounds.

Download: IOSYS - Ribbon and Catnip and Me (Short Ver.) (crabovan) [Izayoi].osu
TheVileOne
osu! Alumni
8,431 posts
Joined March 2010
TheVileOne
I'm back to finish my Mod

General

Having two orange combos consecutively can make it kind of hard to tell when the combo changes.

Hard

Modder Comments

Slider velocity so slow for a hard mode :( - yet i can't go out and say I recommend you increase it. 1.0 is better than 0.8 snap but will ruin your patterns. This is just an annoying difficulty to mod in concept as all of the things that will make it better ruin something else. The difficulty grew on me after awhile and I got used to the speed but some sliders just still felt way too slow. Maybe this song would benefit from some moderate slider velocity increases here and there.

00:05:931 (1) - Seems kind of odd to have a crooked slider right at the start. Fix the spacing afterwards too.
00:18:066 (3,4) - Sliders are so slow :(
00:36:268 (3,4) - ^^
00:42:335 (1,2) - ^^Fix by deleting second slider and adding note here 00:43:009 -
01:03:740 - This shouldn't be in the middle of a slider.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/327476 my placement isn't important but i think this is more closer to the beat Actually I think you should remap this part with more 1/2th beat sliders. Just click click click makes it hard to keep beat.
01:14:526 (5,1) - 100'd several times on this.I can't really say it's wrong though
01:55:144 (1,2,3) - These notes are placed strangely. Perhaps they can be placed differently?
01:56:998 (3) - maybe make into a half beat slider?
02:17:729 - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/327483 < timeline
02:43:009 (2,3,4) - Spacing?

Izayoi

It was a bad attempt at modding this difficulty. I don't blame you for not taking it.


Recheck
Edit: Sorry if my mod wasn't very well. I was spending a long amount of time in the editor and by the time I decided to mod this, I was not thinking the clearest. Here's some general things that I think you should at least look at in Hard. I'm not touching Isayoi again...

1.0 works well for the fast parts of the map and makes the sliders I complained about being slow seem not so slow, which is an improvement. However the slow intro up to the spinner feels rushed. I think you should space a lot of the intro to 0.8 which will simulate a 0.8x section without actually having to slow your sliders any more than they already are.

00:24:133 (4,1,2) - You should fix this overlap.
01:02:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ugh I just have to make a comment that I feel there's too much clicking here.
01:05:257 (1,2,3) - Spacing is not equal
01:12:672 (4,5,6) - Perhaps a repeat slider. I don't think the single notes look the greatest and you don't have much area to place them. Also spacing with the next combo is unimportant. You don't need to keep it the same.
01:22:448 (1,2,3) - Spacing should be equal
01:30:537 (2,3,4) - Shouldn't it be placed proportionately to 1? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/328854
01:47:054 (1,2,3,4) - Ugh... sliders are too slow, and there's a lack of symmetry. I recommend that you remap with more single notes here.
02:05:931 (1,2,3) - Please straighten. It's crooked.
02:09:133 (2) - Move 1 grid to the right to fix the alignment
02:43:009 (2,3) - Move 1/2th back. Delete 02:43:346 (4) - You can then start the spinner there 02:43:346 -
Mara
4,906 posts
Joined November 2009
Mara
Finland reference gg
Lizellota
467 posts
Joined October 2011
Lizellota
Приветь ;3
Mod from #modreqs

[Normal]

00:35:931 (2) - убери хлопок
01:13:346 - может финиш?
01:30:875 - ^
02:11:324 - ^
02:14:021 - ^

[Hard]

00:45:032 (4) - убери финиш, он тут ни к чему :С
01:03:908 - ^
01:11:998 - ^
01:51:099 - ^
02:12:672 - ^
02:13:852 - ^
02:36:942 - ^
02:39:639 - финиш

[Izayoi]

Why not hitsounds?..

Вроде все, удачи ~~
crabovan
236 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
crabovan

KersiTyan wrote:

Приветь ;3
Mod from #modreqs

[Normal]

00:35:931 (2) - убери хлопок нет, это как раз под ритм подходит ИМХО
01:13:346 - может финиш? +
01:30:875 - ^ ^
02:11:324 - ^ ^
02:14:021 - ^ ^

[Hard]

00:45:032 (4) - убери финиш, он тут ни к чему :С +
01:03:908 - ^ +
01:11:998 - ^ -
01:51:099 - ^ -
02:12:672 - ^ +
02:13:852 - ^ +
02:36:942 - ^ +
02:39:639 - финиш +

[Izayoi]

Why not hitsounds?.. уже полдня как сделано

Вроде все, удачи ~~ спасибо ^_^
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
01:20:594 - this might be a good place for a note, the gap feels kind of awkward
01:33:234 (4) - please use proper spacing in a Normal difficulty
02:26:830 - this might also be a good place for a note

[Hard]
00:07:279 (3) - you might want to make this line up with 2 horizontally, I think it would help your map flow a bit better
00:15:369 (1) - the anti-jump here is a bit on the confusing side, you might want to place it under 4 instead to make the spacing more normal
01:07:785 (1) - there is a stronger melodic presence half a beat after where this slider starts that might be a better place to start it
01:15:369 (3) - this might look a little better if it were centered between 1 and 2, slightly higher than where it is right now
02:05:931 (1,2,3) - is it perhaps that you have these not lined up on purpose?

[Taiko]
01:09:302 (1) - the sv change here is causing this note to overtake the previous notes, which might make it difficult to read. I'm also not entirely sure that the previous section needs to be quite as slow as you have it, so maybe you could make it better by speeding that up just a little bit?
02:15:369 (1) - ^

[Izayoi]
The whistles sound a little bit loud in here, you might want to reduce the total hitvolume or find a custom hitsound that isn't quite as loud
00:31:802 (1) - this pattern feels a little out of place here because its the first introduction of the pattern and coming off of a spinner at the same time
00:33:571 (4) - I'm not quite sure I understand why you have a jump here, it seems a little unnecessary to me
00:36:436 (8) - this is a little confusing because the hitburst from 3 is covering most of the note from the time that it fades in until the time you need to hit it
00:37:279 (3,4,5) - just as a warning some players might find this kind of zigzag deathstream to be frustrating and dislike your map because of it...nothing wrong with it except that players don't tend to like it
01:07:279 (4) - this might be a little prettier if you move it so that it isnt being partially covered by the hitburst of 3
crabovan
236 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
crabovan

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
01:20:594 - this might be a good place for a note, the gap feels kind of awkward done, really good idea :3
01:33:234 (4) - please use proper spacing in a Normal difficulty okay, it's my defect after selfmod :c
02:26:830 - this might also be a good place for a note I place note here 02:26:661 (3)

[Hard]
00:07:279 (3) - you might want to make this line up with 2 horizontally, I think it would help your map flow a bit better okay
00:15:369 (1) - the anti-jump here is a bit on the confusing side, you might want to place it under 4 instead to make the spacing more normal okay
01:07:785 (1) - there is a stronger melodic presence half a beat after where this slider starts that might be a better place to start it okay, it's really sounds better :O
01:15:369 (3) - this might look a little better if it were centered between 1 and 2, slightly higher than where it is right now done how could
02:05:931 (1,2,3) - is it perhaps that you have these not lined up on purpose? I forgot to make wave

[Taiko]
01:09:302 (1) - the sv change here is causing this note to overtake the previous notes, which might make it difficult to read. I'm also not entirely sure that the previous section needs to be quite as slow as you have it, so maybe you could make it better by speeding that up just a little bit?
02:15:369 (1) - ^

[Izayoi]
The whistles sound a little bit loud in here, you might want to reduce the total hitvolume or find a custom hitsound that isn't quite as loud
00:31:802 (1) - this pattern feels a little out of place here because its the first introduction of the pattern and coming off of a spinner at the same time
00:33:571 (4) - I'm not quite sure I understand why you have a jump here, it seems a little unnecessary to me
00:36:436 (8) - this is a little confusing because the hitburst from 3 is covering most of the note from the time that it fades in until the time you need to hit it
00:37:279 (3,4,5) - just as a warning some players might find this kind of zigzag deathstream to be frustrating and dislike your map because of it...nothing wrong with it except that players don't tend to like it
01:07:279 (4) - this might be a little prettier if you move it so that it isnt being partially covered by the hitburst of 3
Really big thanks for mod, Taiko and Izayoi creators will take your mod
Kashim
41 posts
Joined November 2011
Kashim
Izayoi
The whistles sound a little bit loud in here, you might want to reduce the total hitvolume or find a custom hitsound that isn't quite as loud
00:31:802 (1) - this pattern feels a little out of place here because its the first introduction of the pattern and coming off of a spinner at the same time
00:33:571 (4) - I'm not quite sure I understand why you have a jump here, it seems a little unnecessary to me
00:36:436 (8) - this is a little confusing because the hitburst from 3 is covering most of the note from the time that it fades in until the time you need to hit it
00:37:279 (3,4,5) - just as a warning some players might find this kind of zigzag deathstream to be frustrating and dislike your map because of it...nothing wrong with it except that players don't tend to like it
01:07:279 (4) - this might be a little prettier if you move it so that it isnt being partially covered by the hitburst of 3
Update:
-Changed most of the things suggested
-New Diff. Name
-Set AR 8 to AR 9 'cause it fits better imo
-Hitsounding will be done within this week
Last edited by Kashim , edited 1 time in total.
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
[General]

There are so many claps you have to deal with.

[Normal]

There are so many claps you have to deal with.

Use this for the slidertick. http://puu.sh/CcEe , when you're using clap.

00:32:897 (1) - Finish is better...
00:33:234 (2) - Clap.
00:33:571 (3) - Remove clap.
00:34:245 (5) - ^
00:34:920 (6) - ^
00:34:582 (T) - You can add clap to it. (Suggestion.)
00:35:594 (1) - Remove clap.
00:35:594 (1) - ^
00:36:268 (3) - ^
00:36:605 (4) - Clap.
00:36:942 (5) - Clap at the end.
00:37:616 (6) - ^
00:38:290 (1) - Overlapped, remove clap and put the clap to 00:38:627 (2).
00:38:964 (3) - Clap at the start.
00:39:976 (T) - You should add clap on it. (Suggestion).
00:44:021 (2) - Clap.
00:44:695 (4) - Clap at the start.
00:45:369 (5) - ^ And (nazi) move one grid right.
00:45:369 (5) - Add the clap on the start and remove the clap on the end.
00:46:717 (T) - Add the clap on it. (Suggestion).
00:46:380 (1) - Remove clap at the end.
00:47:391 (2) - Clap.
00:47:729 (3) - ^
00:49:751 (T) - Add the clap on it. (Suggestion).
00:49:414 (2) - Remove clap at the end.
00:50:088 (3) - Remove clap.
00:54:470 (1) - Add clap on the first reserve and another one for the third reverse.
00:56:155 (T) - Add the clap on it. (Suggestion).
01:55:144 (1) - (Nazi) Move one grid down.
02:04:582 (2) - (Nazi) Move one grid up.
02:07:279 (2) - ^
02:17:729 (2) - (Nazi) Move 2 or 3 grids up or down.
02:21:268 (3,4) - Move one grid down.

[Lunatic]

01:18:403 (4) - Move two grids up.
crabovan
236 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
crabovan

Koro McAlpine wrote:

[General]

There are so many claps you have to deal with.

[Normal]

There are so many claps you have to deal with.

Use this for the slidertick. http://puu.sh/CcEe , when you're using clap.

00:32:897 (1) - Finish is better... DONE
00:33:234 (2) - Clap. NO
00:33:571 (3) - Remove clap. NO
00:34:245 (5) - ^ DONE
00:34:920 (6) - ^ DONE
00:34:582 (T) - You can add clap to it. (Suggestion.) NO
00:35:594 (1) - Remove clap. NO
00:35:594 (1) - ^ NO
00:36:268 (3) - ^ NO
00:36:605 (4) - Clap. NO
00:36:942 (5) - Clap at the end. DONE
00:37:616 (6) - ^ DONE
00:38:290 (1) - Overlapped, remove clap and put the clap to 00:38:627 (2). NO
00:38:964 (3) - Clap at the start. DONE
00:39:976 (T) - You should add clap on it. (Suggestion). NO
00:44:021 (2) - Clap. DONE
00:44:695 (4) - Clap at the start. DONE
00:45:369 (5) - ^ And (nazi) move one grid right. NO
00:45:369 (5) - Add the clap on the start and remove the clap on the end. DONE
00:46:717 (T) - Add the clap on it. (Suggestion). NO
00:46:380 (1) - Remove clap at the end. DONE
00:47:391 (2) - Clap. DONE
00:47:729 (3) - ^ DONE
00:49:751 (T) - Add the clap on it. (Suggestion). NO
00:49:414 (2) - Remove clap at the end. DONE
00:50:088 (3) - Remove clap. DONE
00:54:470 (1) - Add clap on the first reserve and another one for the third reverse. DONE
00:56:155 (T) - Add the clap on it. (Suggestion). NO
01:55:144 (1) - (Nazi) Move one grid down. NO
02:04:582 (2) - (Nazi) Move one grid up. NO
02:07:279 (2) - ^ NO
02:17:729 (2) - (Nazi) Move 2 or 3 grids up or down. NO
02:21:268 (3,4) - Move one grid down. DONE

[Lunatic]

01:18:403 (4) - Move two grids up. DONE


Thanks for mod :3
HakuNoKaemi
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Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
Stop using Short, Full, Cut ver. in song titles.

no kudosu.
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