BeatofIke wrote:

Request from modding queue. Here's what I've found!

General
-> Your slider shapes and hitsounds could use some improvement. >.<
-> Source should be "THE IDOLM@STER" not "Idolmaster" or "Idol Master." Also, make sure to change it in ALL of your difficulties, not just in one of them.
-> Your tags are useless. Delete those tags. Your tags should NEVER be the name of artist, title, source, genre, beatmap creator (you), or difficluty. Again, make sure to remove those tags in ALL of your difficulties and not just in one of them.
-> Your hitsound volumes are kinda random. Make your hitsound volumes consistent in multiples of 5. For example, change 34% to 35%Done

Newbie
-> There's no background on this difficulty! Every difficulty must have a background unless it's unrankable. Should be there now
-> Approach Rate +1? Done
Pro
-> This difficulty looks rankable, so I'll skip this difficulty.

Star
-> This difficulty looks rankable, so I'll skip this difficulty.

Idol Master
-> Your combo colors are different on this difficulty. It must be the same in ALL difficulties, unless it's unankable. Done

Map has potental, but it has some unrankable issues. This map needs more mods.

• where is the BG of Jayel's Newbie? and I think you should be the BG name more simple.
  specify the color of sliderborder.

Jayel wrote:

You should have at least informed me if you changed the name of my guest diff
Anyways, good luck.

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Yu-Izanagi-12

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Kiai time are different, please fix it is 01:20:810 - 01:34:928 all diff. done
2. Combo colours in Idol diff is different, please fix it as well follow this.done and thanks
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 128,0,128
   Combo2 : 128,128,192
   Combo3 : 255,128,192
   Combo4 : 255,32,32

Jayel's Newbie

1. Nice diff

Pro

All Done

1. 00:34:487 (2) - Add whistle or clap.
2. 00:37:134 (4) - ^
3. 00:38:457 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
4. 01:15:516 (3) - ^
5. 00:41:987 (1,2) - Spacing is too far.
6. 00:39:340 (2,3) - Spacing is too close
7. 00:57:428 (2) - Move to x:352 y:188, because same as 00:39:340 (2,3) -.
8. 01:14:634 (2,3) - Same as 00:41:987 (1,2) -.
9. 01:31:399 (1,2,5) - Stack it.
10. 01:32:060 (3,4) - Same as 00:41:987 (1,2) -.

Star

1. 00:15:296 (1) - I suggest try it doesn't stack anything.done
2. 00:34:928 (1) - Add a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.done
3. 00:38:457 (5,1) - Add NC in (5), but remove it in (1).done
4. 01:09:119 (6,2) - Stack it.done
5. 01:32:722 (5,7) - ^done
6. 01:48:825 (9) - Add NC?

no change

Idol

1. I don't find the problem.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~

Leorda wrote:

[Jayel's Newbie]
00:27:869 - Remove this timing section. Sudden loud hitsound is bad
01:40:222 (3) - Why silence this slider? It's useless
01:47:722 (2) - Overlapped by head slider is pointless. Move further away from it?

Jayel wrote:

Leorda wrote:

[Jayel's Newbie]
00:27:869 - Remove this timing section. Sudden loud hitsound is bad
01:40:222 (3) - Why silence this slider? It's useless
01:47:722 (2) - Overlapped by head slider is pointless. Move further away from it?

Fixed everything. Thanks.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9yx3tr86gf4fd ... bie%5D.osu

EDIT: Now you can try it again.

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.
That music was awesome ^^ Thanks, I didn't know it. What a great 3D animation.

[Normal]
Kiai Time should end at 01:34:928 Done
01:15:516 (3) - Good job ^^

That's all, you did a very great job ^^ thanks

Good luck

pimpG wrote:

hi there o/

i'm random modding this, again

general

Video contains noiseless audio track, proof (muting the audio is not enough, sooner or later someone will force you to remove the audio track to reduce video's filesize)There is a 24MB limit on map folders anything beyond that can't be uploaded so the fact that I can upload it means its fine
inconsistency in combo coloursdone
osb file is empty remove and full submit done
imo, no need to end kiai at 01:34:928 ... better end it at 01:49:046[/color]done

good luck

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. too many sliders let me feel "it is casually pulled" , maybe you can spend more time to improve much pretty in my eyes

[Jayel's Newbie]

1. Useless green line:
   01:41:987 -
   
   
2. 00:32:281 (3,4) - Crtl+G ?
3. 01:13:751 (5,1) - swap NC
4. 01:27:428 (3,4) - crtl+G
5. 01:47:722 (2) - how about this

[Normal]

1. Useless green line:
   01:34:928 -
   
   
2. 00:24:340 (5) - NC

[Hard]

1. 00:11:546 (6) - overlap is not a good method
2. 00:31:398 (5) - NC and 00:32:943 (1,2) - swap NC ?
3. 00:43:090 (3) - overlap is not a good method
4. 01:06:693 (4,5,6,1,2) - these are i see the best typesetting in this diff , because flow is smooth
5. 01:29:193 (3) - distance may let player press too fast

[Insane]

1. BPM only 136 , you use ar 9 ... , what you think ? ;w; , ar 7 maybe more acceptable
   
   
2. 00:54:340 (5) - move it away 00:53:898 (4) - , instead of stacking it ?~
3. 01:41:987 (1) - overlap

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww ~
You requested in my queue ~


[General] Done
- Try to get a louder mp3? This one sounds a bit soft.
- Comboburst 1 and 2 look... a bit off.. their squished. ;w;
Also, in the 4th comboburst, theres a little something on the top left corner. owo
- The idol who sings this is Akidzuki Ryou? So add it into the tags? ~
- Since it came from the album THE iDOLM@STER DREAM SYMPHONY 02, maybe add it to the tags as well?


[Jayel's Easy]Done
01:49:046 - Add a circle there to end off at the same point as all the other diffs.


[Normal]Done
00:15:957 - Add a circle?
01:11:546 (4) - Make this line with (2)
01:11:987 (1) - Make this line with 01:10:222 (1)
01:20:810 (1) - Reverse?
01:27:869 (1) - ^
01:29:193 (3) - ^
01:36:913 - Add a circle.
01:37:354 - ^
01:45:516 (1) - Place at x:320 y:96


[Hard]Done
00:24:781 (1) - Make this slider blanker around the next note better. Dont forget to make this change to (4) as well ~
01:15:516 (1) - Start this at 01:15:296 and end at the same place.
01:27:649 (7) - Line this with (4)
01:28:310 - Add a circle?
01:34:928 (1) - Make this blanket around the previous note better, do the same change for the next slider too ~
01:44:634 (8) - New combo.


[Insane]Done
- Approach Rate -1
00:12:207 (6) - New combo?
00:14:634 (5) - ^
00:23:457 (4) - ^
00:42:428 (2) - Make the spacing the same.
00:43:751 (4) - Line with the previous note.
00:54:781 (7) - Stack properly.
01:29:193 (4) - Stack with 01:27:428 (9)
01:47:943 (8) - New combo.
- For an insane diff, this feels kind of easyy D:
Maybe try to add some jumps?


Overall the mapset is nicely done ~
Good luck with your map ~ >w<

l1106188 wrote:

Hi~
M4M from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. too many sliders let me feel "it is casually pulled" , maybe you can spend more time to improve much pretty in my eyes

[Jayel's Newbie]

• Done

1. Useless green line:
   01:41:987 -
   
   
2. 00:32:281 (3,4) - Crtl+G ?
3. 01:13:751 (5,1) - swap NC
4. 01:27:428 (3,4) - crtl+G
5. 01:47:722 (2) - how about this

[Normal]

• Done

1. Useless green line:
   01:34:928 -
   
   
2. 00:24:340 (5) - NC

[Hard]

1. 00:11:546 (6) - overlap is not a good method Done
2. 00:31:398 (5) - NC and 00:32:943 (1,2) - swap NC ?Done
3. 00:43:090 (3) - overlap is not a good methodno change
4. 01:06:693 (4,5,6,1,2) - these are i see the best typesetting in this diff , because flow is smooth
5. 01:29:193 (3) - distance may let player press too fast

no change

[Insane]

1. BPM only 136 , you use ar 9 ... , what you think ? ;w; , ar 7 maybe more acceptableChanged to 8
   
   
2. 00:54:340 (5) - move it away 00:53:898 (4) - , instead of stacking it ?~Done
3. 01:41:987 (1) - overlap

Done

good song & good luck~
and sorry to my poor English

dragonxcz wrote:

Hi from your modding queue

M4M

[General]

Since there is "Romanised Artist" and "Romanised Title" function, use 三瓶 由布子 for artist and keep Romanised Artist how it's now.
Really... we must use it if it's here. If we won't use this, it's non-sense to keep it there.I don't understand this romanised process I find it useless

[Insane]
All Done
Well... let's improve this a bit.
I like more CS -1. I don't recommend small circle size, if you're not making awesomely perfect shapes.
00:13:751 (3) - NC or swap NC with 00:12:869 (1)
00:11:987 (5,1) - Swap NC, it's unnecessary on (1)
00:12:869 (1,2) - They're not symmetrical, copy 00:12:869 (1) and flip it.
00:13:751 (3) - All of these shapes are bad. Try to move center point on 392;276. Of course you could do it on all these sliders
00:15:075 (1) - ^..
00:24:560 - 00:51:913 - This part calls to be snapped in 1,0 distance snap, because this part is so calm. Also decrease volume by 10-20%. Btw. you unnecessary combinated distance snap in this part..
01:08:237 (3) - Something called "symmetrical sliders" exists. And this really isn't symmetrical, fix it.

Well... small mod, because you're doing the same wrongs.

[Hard]
All done
00:13:751 (5,1) - Swap NC
00:17:722 (3,5) - Symmetry
00:48:384 (1,2,3,4) - Use CTRL+SHIFT+D and make perfect square from this.
01:00:075 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:06:693 (4) - Move center point one grid left to make it symmetrical.
01:07:575 (6) - ^

[Normal]

01:15:516 (3) - Symmetry, good luck.done
01:21:472 (2,3) - Easy to miss for newbies, because it's on red line.No change
01:22:796 (5,6) - ^no change

[Jayel's Newbie]
All Done
01:27:869 (4,1) - Swap NC for consistency with 01:23:898 (5,1)
01:34:928 - Kiai is missing here.

1. better hit300/300k/300g/100/100k/50/0.png to use different colours :3

1. 01:39:781 (3) - +whistle?

1. slider shape need to be improved
2. 00:15:296 - add note
3. 00:51:913 (6) - +clap
4. 01:28:972 - add note

1. slider shape need to be improved
2. 00:11:325 (4) - remove whistle in sliderbody
3. 00:21:913 (2) - ^
4. 00:22:796 (3) - ^
5. 00:37:354 (6) - ^
6. 00:57:648 (6) - ^
7. 01:08:237 (3) - ^
8. 01:16:619 (7) - ^
9. 01:43:090 (5) - ^
   
10. 00:11:325 (4) - clap at start
11. 00:12:428 (8) - clap
12. 00:17:060 (5) - finish at end
13. 00:25:443 (3,4,5,6) - try place like this
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:29:193 (4,5) - ctrl+G
15. 01:36:031 (3) - clap at start
16. 01:43:090 (5) - ^
17. 01:49:046 (10) - NC

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req randomly pick from scorpiour's baka queue for new mappers 0v0☆

[General]

1. better hit300/300k/300g/100/100k/50/0.png to use different colours :3

[Normal]Done

1. 01:39:781 (3) - +whistle?

[Hard]Done

1. slider shape need to be improved
2. 00:15:296 - add note
3. 00:51:913 (6) - +clap
4. 01:28:972 - add note

[Insane]Done

1. slider shape need to be improved
2. 00:11:325 (4) - remove whistle in sliderbody
3. 00:21:913 (2) - ^
4. 00:22:796 (3) - ^
5. 00:37:354 (6) - ^
6. 00:57:648 (6) - ^
7. 01:08:237 (3) - ^
8. 01:16:619 (7) - ^
9. 01:43:090 (5) - ^
   
10. 00:11:325 (4) - clap at start
11. 00:12:428 (8) - clap
12. 00:17:060 (5) - finish at end
13. 00:25:443 (3,4,5,6) - try place like this
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:29:193 (4,5) - ctrl+G
15. 01:36:031 (3) - clap at start
16. 01:43:090 (5) - ^
17. 01:49:046 (10) - NC

take it easy guy sco never add new mapper who break rules into blacklist
because he's a baka