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yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou

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Cilvery
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Topic Starter
Cilvery
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年6月8日 at 23:11:02

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Vidro Moyou (TV Size)
Source: Ano Natsu de Matteru
Tags: fumis azuraer O n L y _ Amule Yanagi Nagi Ending
BPM: 131
Filesize: 14202kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Amule's Easy (2.19 stars, 104 notes)
  2. azuraer's Hard (4.81 stars, 212 notes)
  3. fumi's Insane (4.97 stars, 242 notes)
  4. Insane (4.95 stars, 224 notes)
  5. O n L y _'s Normal (2.63 stars, 99 notes)
Download: yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size)
Download: yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#6

Easy - Amule
Normal - O n L y _
Hard - azuraer
Insane - Cilvery
Insane - fumis
Last edited by Cilvery , edited 49 times in total.
NewRulerNA
1,301 posts
Joined December 2010
NewRulerNA
hai

[azuraer's Hard]
Enable Countdownのチェックを外してください

00:01:194 (3) - 綺麗に一直線に並んでおらず見た目が悪いです x112 y252に移動してみては？
00:09:896 (2,3,4) - 00:08:064 (2,3,4)をコピペ+角度調節したものを使用で
00:58:903 (1) - newcomboをこれに無理に入れる必要はないように思えます
01:13:331 (9,10,1) - この連打からのスライダーの形が綺麗ではありません
スライダーの角度をもう少し調節して綺麗に一直線になるようにするべきだと思います


[Insane]
Lead-inがこれだけ1996msです、他の難易度と統一してください

00:14:018 (8,9) - スタックされていて(9)が少し見にくいかも
00:29:132 (7) - この配置ならもう1回ターンを増やしてもいいように思えます


[fumis's Insane]

指摘はありません


good map~
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

NewRulerNA wrote:

hai

[azuraer's Hard]
Enable Countdownのチェックを外してください

00:01:194 (3) - 綺麗に一直線に並んでおらず見た目が悪いです x112 y252に移動してみては？
00:09:896 (2,3,4) - 00:08:064 (2,3,4)をコピペ+角度調節したものを使用で
00:58:903 (1) - newcomboをこれに無理に入れる必要はないように思えます
01:13:331 (9,10,1) - この連打からのスライダーの形が綺麗ではありません
スライダーの角度をもう少し調節して綺麗に一直線になるようにするべきだと思います


[Insane]
Lead-inがこれだけ1996msです、他の難易度と統一してください　変えるの忘れてました･･･

00:14:018 (8,9) - スタックされていて(9)が少し見にくいかも
00:29:132 (7) - この配置ならもう1回ターンを増やしてもいいように思えます　Fixed　


[fumis's Insane]

指摘はありません


good map~
modありがと！！
Last edited by Cilvery , edited 2 times in total.
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
General:
Hard has countdown and the others don't! Take it off hard ^^.
Hard has letterbox and others don't! Take it off hard ^^.
Your mapset might need a normal diff >w<

Insane:
00:29:132 (7) - Maybe add 1 more repeat?
-s u i r e n-
237 posts
Joined May 2011
-s u i r e n-
(～*´д｀*)～ hi~Cilvery~ :) MODリクありがとー！




[General]
✩SBを使わないならフォルダの中の.osb削除
✩あれ・・これって動画あるのかな？あったら入れてー！




azuraer's Hard
✩00:03:713(4)-Add NC?
✩00:58:674(1)-Remove New Combo

普通にいいMAPだった～！



Insane
✩00:03:255(8)-Add NC~?
✩00:27:529(9)-^
✩00:32:110(8)-^

もう少しInsaneなら3連打あってもいいと思った（※小学生みたいなコメント）




fumis's Insane
✩見つからなかった...orz



いい曲だよね～！あずちゃん、しるべりーRanked目指して頑張って<3

star~
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

General:
Hard has countdown and the others don't! Take it off hard ^^.
Hard has letterbox and others don't! Take it off hard ^^.
Your mapset might need a normal diff >w<

Insane:
00:29:132 (7) - Maybe add 1 more repeat?　Fixed
　

yyy mod arigato~♥
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

suirenn05 wrote:

(～*´д｀*)～ hi~Cilvery~ :) MODリクありがとー！




[General]
✩SBを使わないならフォルダの中の.osb削除　忘れてた・・・
✩あれ・・これって動画あるのかな？あったら入れてー！　探してみるｗ




azuraer's Hard
✩00:03:713(4)-Add NC?
✩00:58:674(1)-Remove New Combo

普通にいいMAPだった～！



Insane
✩00:03:255(8)-Add NC~?　Fixed
✩00:27:529(9)-^　Fixed
✩00:32:110(8)-^　

もう少しInsaneなら3連打あってもいいと思った（※小学生みたいなコメント）　入れるのが難しいT^T




fumis's Insane
✩見つからなかった...orz



いい曲だよね～！あずちゃん、しるべりーRanked目指して頑張って<3　頑張る～ありがと！

star~
modありがと！
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from ingame.

General
cancel the countdown and letterbox on hard diff to make it the same with insane diffs.

[azuraer's Hard]
Hitsound
kiai part is lack of finish sound compared to the other part of this diff imo, so I would suggest to add some finish.
01:06:232 (1) - maybe finish on the head of this slider, sounds good.
01:20:888 (1) - ^
01:22:720 (1) - ^
01:24:552 (1) - ^
just personal suggestions, feel free to ignore them.


[Insane]
Issues
Hp drain -1? HP8AR8OD8 so high #_#
00:12:415 (X) - 2 timing sections at the same time o.o delete the unuse one.

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:29:132 (7) - I think add 1 more repeat feel better.
01:28:102 (5,6) - feel a little weird about this trible hits, imo only 4 with a finish sound on it is enough.


[fumis's Insane]
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:28:102 (5,6) - same as Insane.
Thite
1,043 posts
Joined April 2010
Thite
azuraer's hard
00:09:896 (2,3,4) - 00:08:064 (2,3,4) - ここみたいにちょっと間隔開けておいて見たらきれいかも
SPOILER
00:30:048 - のーとついかしてみては？
00:40:583 (1) - スライダーのスタートにfinish
00:44:934 (1) - ^
00:53:636 (3,4) - スペーシングが少しだけ気になります
00:58:674 (1) - このnew comboはいらないかも
01:12:644 (8) - 少し歪んでるので、綺麗にしたらいいかも


Insane
00:06:003 (2) - こういうふうにしてみたらきれいかも
SPOILER
00:21:575 (3) - こっからnew comboにしてみては？
00:34:629 (5) - (2)のスライダーの始点とすたっくさせるために1gridさげてみてはー


fumis's Insane
good for me~~

ふぁいとー :)
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery
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Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from ingame.

General
cancel the countdown and letterbox on hard diff to make it the same with insane diffs.

[azuraer's Hard]
Hitsound
kiai part is lack of finish sound compared to the other part of this diff imo, so I would suggest to add some finish.
01:06:232 (1) - maybe finish on the head of this slider, sounds good.
01:20:888 (1) - ^
01:22:720 (1) - ^
01:24:552 (1) - ^
just personal suggestions, feel free to ignore them.


[Insane]
Issues
Hp drain -1? HP8AR8OD8 so high #_#　OK..
00:12:415 (X) - 2 timing sections at the same time o.o delete the unuse one.

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:29:132 (7) - I think add 1 more repeat feel better.　Fixed
01:28:102 (5,6) - feel a little weird about this trible hits, imo only 4 with a finish sound on it is enough.　Fixed


[fumis's Insane]
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:28:102 (5,6) - same as Insane.
Nymph chan thanks mod!
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

Thite wrote:

azuraer's hard
00:09:896 (2,3,4) - 00:08:064 (2,3,4) - ここみたいにちょっと間隔開けておいて見たらきれいかも
SPOILER
00:30:048 - のーとついかしてみては？
00:40:583 (1) - スライダーのスタートにfinish
00:44:934 (1) - ^
00:53:636 (3,4) - スペーシングが少しだけ気になります
00:58:674 (1) - このnew comboはいらないかも
01:12:644 (8) - 少し歪んでるので、綺麗にしたらいいかも


Insane
00:06:003 (2) - こういうふうにしてみたらきれいかも　Fixed
SPOILER
00:21:575 (3) - こっからnew comboにしてみては？
00:34:629 (5) - (2)のスライダーの始点とすたっくさせるために1gridさげてみてはー　Fixed


fumis's Insane
good for me~~

ふぁいとー :)
がんばります！ありがとー！！
azuraer
50 posts
Joined August 2009
azuraer

NewRulerNA wrote:

hai

[azuraer's Hard]
Enable Countdownのチェックを外してください

00:01:194 (3) - 綺麗に一直線に並んでおらず見た目が悪いです x112 y252に移動してみては？ Fixed
00:09:896 (2,3,4) - 00:08:064 (2,3,4)をコピペ+角度調節したものを使用で Fixed
00:58:903 (1) - newcomboをこれに無理に入れる必要はないように思えます Fixed
01:13:331 (9,10,1) - この連打からのスライダーの形が綺麗ではありません Fixed
スライダーの角度をもう少し調節して綺麗に一直線になるようにするべきだと思います Fixed


[Insane]
Lead-inがこれだけ1996msです、他の難易度と統一してください

00:14:018 (8,9) - スタックされていて(9)が少し見にくいかも
00:29:132 (7) - この配置ならもう1回ターンを増やしてもいいように思えます


[fumis's Insane]

指摘はありません


good map~

modありがとうございます！
azuraer
50 posts
Joined August 2009
azuraer

suirenn05 wrote:

(～*´д｀*)～ hi~Cilvery~ :) MODリクありがとー！




[General]
✩SBを使わないならフォルダの中の.osb削除
✩あれ・・これって動画あるのかな？あったら入れてー！




azuraer's Hard
✩00:03:713(4)-Add NC?　次の1がFinishだからこのままで・・・
✩00:58:674(1)-Remove New Combo Fixed

普通にいいMAPだった～！ ありがと！(´っω＜`)



Insane
✩00:03:255(8)-Add NC~?
✩00:27:529(9)-^
✩00:32:110(8)-^

もう少しInsaneなら3連打あってもいいと思った（※小学生みたいなコメント）




fumis's Insane
✩見つからなかった...orz



いい曲だよね～！あずちゃん、しるべりーRanked目指して頑張って<3

star~

すいれんちゃんmodありがとー！

しるべりーの足引っ張らないように頑張る…！
azuraer
50 posts
Joined August 2009
azuraer

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from ingame.

General
cancel the countdown and letterbox on hard diff to make it the same with insane diffs.

[azuraer's Hard]
Hitsound
kiai part is lack of finish sound compared to the other part of this diff imo, so I would suggest to add some finish.
01:06:232 (1) - maybe finish on the head of this slider, sounds good.
01:20:888 (1) - ^
01:22:720 (1) - ^
01:24:552 (1) - ^
just personal suggestions, feel free to ignore them.　　 add finish! sounds good! XD


[Insane]
Issues
Hp drain -1? HP8AR8OD8 so high #_#
00:12:415 (X) - 2 timing sections at the same time o.o delete the unuse one.

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:29:132 (7) - I think add 1 more repeat feel better.
01:28:102 (5,6) - feel a little weird about this trible hits, imo only 4 with a finish sound on it is enough.


[fumis's Insane]
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:28:102 (5,6) - same as Insane.

thanks mod!
azuraer
50 posts
Joined August 2009
azuraer

Thite wrote:

azuraer's hard
00:09:896 (2,3,4) - 00:08:064 (2,3,4) - ここみたいにちょっと間隔開けておいて見たらきれいかも Fixed
SPOILER

00:30:048 - のーとついかしてみては？ add note
00:40:583 (1) - スライダーのスタートにfinish add finish
00:44:934 (1) - ^ add finish
00:53:636 (3,4) - スペーシングが少しだけ気になります Fixed
00:58:674 (1) - このnew comboはいらないかも delete new combo
01:12:644 (8) - 少し歪んでるので、綺麗にしたらいいかも Fixed


Insane
00:06:003 (2) - こういうふうにしてみたらきれいかも
SPOILER
00:21:575 (3) - こっからnew comboにしてみては？
00:34:629 (5) - (2)のスライダーの始点とすたっくさせるために1gridさげてみてはー


fumis's Insane
good for me~~

ふぁいとー :)

Thiteさんmodありがとうございます！
fumis
43 posts
Joined May 2010
fumis
[fumis's Insane]
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:28:102 (5,6) - same as Insane.[/quote] No change

Thank you mod~
azuraer
50 posts
Joined August 2009
azuraer
ここまでのmod全て完了したので.osu貼っておきます！

皆さんmodありがとうございます！ (thanks mod!)

Download: Yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (Cilvery) [azuraer's Hard].osu
Darksonic
Global Moderator
2,794 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Okay m4m here~

General:

Fine.

azuraer's Hard:

00:31:881 (6): Clap instead Whistle here feels better imo.
00:34:400 (5,6): What about deleting these notes and making a slider?, I think it will fit better with the voice.
00:49:743 (1): Remove NC.
01:16:079 (2): x:228 as the previous one, to make a better pattern.

Insane:

00:11:270 (6): NC
00:12:186 (1): Remove NC.
00:13:102 (6): NC
00:32:110 (8): A Whistle instead Clap at the end of this slider feels better.
00:36:003 (1): ^
00:47:682 (1): This NC here doesn't fit, remove it.
00:48:598 (3): NC here fits better with vocal.
00:52:262 (7): ^
00:53:865 (1): Remove NC.
01:14:934 (1): To make it like 01:00:507, remove NC here.
01:16:995 (5): NC

fumis's Insane:

00:18:598 (1): Finish only when slider starts.
00:22:262 (1): ^
00:25:010 (1): Remove NC.
00:25:926 (3): NC and add Finish at the start.
00:31:652 (1): Remove NC.
00:37:835 (3): Stack with 00:36:461 (6).
00:39:896 (1): Remove NC, 3 combos only feels a little empty.
00:41:728 (5): Remove Clap.
00:41:957 (1): Remove NC, add Clap at the start and remove it at the end.
00:57:758 (1): Remove NC.
01:11:041 (4): Remove Clap.
01:11:270 (6): Remove Clap at the end and add it at start.
01:28:102 (2): Add Clap.

Ok, that's all for me. Good luck~ :D
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

Darksonic wrote:

Okay m4m here~

General:

Fine.

azuraer's Hard:

00:31:881 (6): Clap instead Whistle here feels better imo.
00:34:400 (5,6): What about deleting these notes and making a slider?, I think it will fit better with the voice.
00:49:743 (1): Remove NC.
01:16:079 (2): x:228 as the previous one, to make a better pattern.

Insane:

00:11:270 (6): NC　Fixed
00:12:186 (1): Remove NC.　Fixed
00:13:102 (6): NC　Fixed
00:32:110 (8): A Whistle instead Clap at the end of this slider feels better.　Fixed
00:36:003 (1): ^　Fixed
00:47:682 (1): This NC here doesn't fit, remove it.　Fixed
00:48:598 (3): NC here fits better with vocal.　Fixed
00:52:262 (7): ^　Fixed
00:53:865 (1): Remove NC.　Fixed
01:14:934 (1): To make it like 01:00:507, remove NC here.　Fixed
01:16:995 (5): NC　Fixed

fumis's Insane:

00:18:598 (1): Finish only when slider starts.
00:22:262 (1): ^
00:25:010 (1): Remove NC.
00:25:926 (3): NC and add Finish at the start.
00:31:652 (1): Remove NC.
00:37:835 (3): Stack with 00:36:461 (6).
00:39:896 (1): Remove NC, 3 combos only feels a little empty.
00:41:728 (5): Remove Clap.
00:41:957 (1): Remove NC, add Clap at the start and remove it at the end.
00:57:758 (1): Remove NC.
01:11:041 (4): Remove Clap.
01:11:270 (6): Remove Clap at the end and add it at start.
01:28:102 (2): Add Clap.

Ok, that's all for me. Good luck~ :D
thanks mod!
azuraer
50 posts
Joined August 2009
azuraer

Darksonic wrote:

Okay m4m here~

General:

Fine.

azuraer's Hard:

00:31:881 (6): Clap instead Whistle here feels better imo. Fixed
00:34:400 (5,6): What about deleting these notes and making a slider?, I think it will fit better with the voice. No change
00:49:743 (1): Remove NC. Fixed
01:16:079 (2): x:228 as the previous one, to make a better pattern. Fixed

Insane:

00:11:270 (6): NC
00:12:186 (1): Remove NC.
00:13:102 (6): NC
00:32:110 (8): A Whistle instead Clap at the end of this slider feels better.
00:36:003 (1): ^
00:47:682 (1): This NC here doesn't fit, remove it.
00:48:598 (3): NC here fits better with vocal.
00:52:262 (7): ^
00:53:865 (1): Remove NC.
01:14:934 (1): To make it like 01:00:507, remove NC here.
01:16:995 (5): NC

fumis's Insane:

00:18:598 (1): Finish only when slider starts.
00:22:262 (1): ^
00:25:010 (1): Remove NC.
00:25:926 (3): NC and add Finish at the start.
00:31:652 (1): Remove NC.
00:37:835 (3): Stack with 00:36:461 (6).
00:39:896 (1): Remove NC, 3 combos only feels a little empty.
00:41:728 (5): Remove Clap.
00:41:957 (1): Remove NC, add Clap at the start and remove it at the end.
00:57:758 (1): Remove NC.
01:11:041 (4): Remove Clap.
01:11:270 (6): Remove Clap at the end and add it at start.
01:28:102 (2): Add Clap.

Ok, that's all for me. Good luck~ :D
thanks mod!

.osu貼っておきます。

Download: Yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (Cilvery) [azuraer's Hard].osu
fumis
43 posts
Joined May 2010
fumis
fumis's Insane:

00:18:598 (1): Finish only when slider starts.
00:22:262 (1): ^
00:25:010 (1): Remove NC. ok
00:25:926 (3): NC and add Finish at the start. NC only change
00:31:652 (1): Remove NC.
00:37:835 (3): Stack with 00:36:461 (6).
00:39:896 (1): Remove NC, 3 combos only feels a little empty. keep it
00:41:728 (5): Remove Clap.
00:41:957 (1): Remove NC, add Clap at the start and remove it at the end.
00:57:758 (1): Remove NC.
01:11:041 (4): Remove Clap.
01:11:270 (6): Remove Clap at the end and add it at start.
01:28:102 (2): Add Clap.

Sorry. Almost no change><
Thank you mod!

Download: yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (Cilvery) [fumis's Insane].rar
KeigoClear
98 posts
Joined September 2010
KeigoClear
azuraer's Hard

good Relaxing map !


Insane

very good map !


fumis's Insane

Happiness map ♪
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery
thx(´･∀･ `)
Goisuke_old
67 posts
Joined August 2010
Goisuke_old
CilveryのInsane

全部俺の意見だけ！

00:27:529 (1) - NCをここにする？こっちがいきなり距離変わったからｗ
00:40:354 (6) - （5）との距離同じ1.28ｘにしたほうがよさそうｗ
00:41:270 (8) - 　（8）を（6）に重なってそんで (9) をちょっと下に移動する。こんな感じ http://puu.sh/qnBv
00:54:781 (8) - 　この角度の方が綺麗に見える！（多分俺の気のせい）こんな感じ　http://puu.sh/qnCM
01:16:766 (8) - を01:17:453 (2) - に重なって
01:27:300 (1,2,3,4) - 　この配置みたいで置くとか～？こんな感じhttp://puu.sh/qnyS
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

Goisuke wrote:

CilveryのInsane

全部俺の意見だけ！

00:27:529 (1) - NCをここにする？こっちがいきなり距離変わったからｗ　Fixed
00:40:354 (6) - （5）との距離同じ1.28ｘにしたほうがよさそうｗ
00:41:270 (8) - 　（8）を（6）に重なってそんで (9) をちょっと下に移動する。こんな感じ http://puu.sh/qnBv　Fixed
00:54:781 (8) - 　この角度の方が綺麗に見える！（多分俺の気のせい）こんな感じ　http://puu.sh/qnCM　Fixed
01:16:766 (8) - を01:17:453 (2) - に重なって　Fixed
01:27:300 (1,2,3,4) - 　この配置みたいで置くとか～？こんな感じhttp://puu.sh/qnyS
modありすけ！
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Kanari
Hallowww~
I love this songg<3

[Insane]
00:03:026 (7) - New combo.
00:03:484 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:04:629 (6) - New combo.
00:05:774 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:690 (7) - New combo.
00:07:377 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:08:293 (7) - New combo.
00:25:926 (6) - ^
00:31:423 (7) - ^
00:32:797 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:04:858 (7) - New combo.

[fumis Insane]
- 1.6 Distance spacing? OAO
00:03:942 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:04:629 (8) - New combo.
00:06:232 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:461 (7) - New combo.
00:07:606 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:08:293 (5) - New combo.
00:09:438 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:10:125 (6) - New combo.
00:11:270 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:11:957 (7) - New combo.
00:47:224 (6) - ^
00:47:911 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:48:369 (4) - New combo.
00:54:094 (7) - ^

There only suggestions~
Everything is well mapped^^
I'll give this 2 stars~ ;D
Good luck!
Ryafuka
840 posts
Joined May 2010
Ryafuka
from Cilvery's request
just all suggestion~


[General]
･曲名をVidro Moyou (TV Size)に変更しましょう。
･preview pointは58445のほうがいいかも？


[azuraer's Hard]
00:09:438 (1) - finish削除？
00:15:392 - ここに音がほしいかも。単純にnoteを追加するか、またはこんな感じにしてみては？ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/296533
00:42:873 (2) - whistleの代わりにfinish？
00:44:247 (9,1) - ncをチェンジ？
00:44:934 (1) - 始点のfinish削除？
00:47:911 (10,1) - ncをチェンジ？
00:51:575 (10,1) - ^
00:55:239 - ここにnoteがほしいのでspinnerの始点を00:55:354 - にずらして、note追加。変更した場合、追加したnoteにfinishをつけるのと、spinnerの終点を00:57:071 - に合わせて縮めるのを忘れないでください。
00:58:674 (1) - バグでnc消えちゃってるので追加しましょう。
01:02:568 (1) - 始点にfinishを追加？
01:17:224 (1) - ^
01:27:300 (4) - nc追加？
01:28:216 - ここに音がほしいです。単純にnoteを追加するか、こんな感じはどうでしょう？ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/296544 変更した場合、01:28:216 - の位置にfinishをつけ、ちょっと音が大きいと思うので緑線を追加してボリュームを40%くらいにしましょう。


[Insane]
OD-1?
00:12:300 (4,6) - whistleを削除して00:12:415 (5) - 代わりにこっちにwhistle追加？
00:20:201 (6) - nc追加して、00:21:117 (1) - のncを削除して、00:22:033 (4) - にnc追加？
00:25:010 (4) - 終端のclapを削除？
00:25:468 - このボリューム変更はいらないかも。
00:25:926 (6) - nc追加？
00:28:674 (6) - ^
00:38:293 (6) - ^
00:40:583 (7) - ^
00:44:705 - ここでボリューム90%はちょっと煩すぎるかも。
00:51:575 (6,1) - ncをチェンジ？
00:52:262 (1,2,3,4) - ちょっと配置を変更する必要があるけど、こっちのほうが音取り的にしっくりくるかも http://puu.sh/qFFR もし変更した場合、00:53:865 - ここにnc追加。
00:55:239 - ちょっと音がうるさいかな。65%くらいでいいかも。
01:00:507 (6) - nc追加。
01:04:171 (5) - ^
01:08:522 (8) - ここにnc追加して、01:08:980 (1) - このncを削除して、01:09:896 (5) - ここにncを追加。
01:28:216 - ここに音がほしいです。追加した場合、ボリューム40%くらいでfinishも。

静かな曲なのにちょっと全体的にヒットサウンドが大きすぎる印象でした。10~15%くらい下げたほうがいいかも。


[fumis' Insane]
00:14:018 - ここに音がほしいような。00:13:560 (4) - これを折り返し？
00:41:957 (1) - nc削除？
00:46:766 (5) - nc追加？
00:54:552 (8) - ^
01:02:568 (3) - 始点にfinishを追加？
01:04:400 (1) - finishを削除？
01:17:682 (4) - 終点のfinish削除して代わりにwhistleを追加？


yanaginagi <3
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Hallowww~　halo :)
I love this songg<3　me too<3

[Insane]
00:03:026 (7) - New combo.　Fixed
00:03:484 (1) - Remove new combo.　Fixed
00:04:629 (6) - New combo.　Fixed
00:05:774 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:690 (7) - New combo.　
00:07:377 (1) - Remove new combo.　
00:08:293 (7) - New combo.　Fixed
00:25:926 (6) - ^
00:31:423 (7) - ^　
00:32:797 (1) - Remove new combo.　Fixed
01:04:858 (7) - New combo.

[fumis Insane]
- 1.6 Distance spacing? OAO
00:03:942 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:04:629 (8) - New combo.
00:06:232 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:06:461 (7) - New combo.
00:07:606 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:08:293 (5) - New combo.
00:09:438 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:10:125 (6) - New combo.
00:11:270 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:11:957 (7) - New combo.
00:47:224 (6) - ^
00:47:911 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:48:369 (4) - New combo.
00:54:094 (7) - ^

There only suggestions~
Everything is well mapped^^
I'll give this 2 stars~ ;D　thx ;D
Good luck!
thanks mod!
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