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One Direction - One Thing [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on August-03-12 at 5:48:14 PM

Artist: One Direction
Title: One Thing
Tags: Death_the_Kid Beuchi-chan
BPM: 127
Filesize: 5982kb
Play Time: 03:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.85 stars, 163 notes)
  2. Hard (4.4 stars, 281 notes)
  3. Normal (3.35 stars, 223 notes)
  4. Taiko (4.83 stars, 810 notes)
Download: One Direction - One Thing
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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♪ Shot me out of the sky
You're my Kryponite ♪
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Another English song for you!
This song is awesome. I don't care if you don't like boy bands, I don't either! But you WILL fall in love with these five talented young guys.
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Progress/Credit:
Easy: 100%!
Normal: 100%
Hard: 100%!
Taiko: 100%!
SB: 100% By Beuchi-chan
Skin: Given to me by Krisom!
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Enjoy!
Elly-chan
Nice, Kiddo. <3

I Hate This Band Because All Of My Friends Want To Marry Every Single Member. Otherwise, I Think Their Music Is Fine. I Don't Like Boybands, Either. XD
Aurele
...
1D .
Mystyk
Hey! Here's my mod, dunno if it will be helpful, but whatever:

Easy:
SPOILER
00:36:553 (5,6,1,2,3) - I don't like the placement of these, it could be nicer, and isn't (2) a bit too far from (1)?
01:00:175 - add hit circle (?) there is a big beat there >.< but you would proably have to replace that part
01:02:537 (4) - put the end point two grids right?
01:19:073 - same as 01:00:175
01:46:002 (1) - why not put the end point to the middle? like this - http://puu.sh/rMkf (and not only here)
01:49:309 - bit beat again
01:53:088 - ^
02:44:585 (3) - make it equal - http://puu.sh/rMmr
03:04:899 - bit beat? (I think you used the same pattern as before)

Hard:
SPOILER
00:19:073 (1,2) - I think these sliders have strange shape
00:37:025 (6) - this could be placed better, it's not so nice like this imo
00:39:860 (5) - this slider doesn't look equal to me? I think the upper part has a bigger curve, but it might be just me
00:49:545 (2,3) - the shape could be nicer
00:57:813 (3) - make it equal? http://puu.sh/rMqq
01:01:356 (3) - two grids up? (and then place 01:02:065 (4) according to it)
01:02:537 (5) - the end point of the slider - one grid down? and also add clap to the end
01:04:427 (1) - add clap to the end
01:16:711 (3) - ^
01:22:144 (6) - make it equal (or how to explain..) http://puu.sh/rLWu
01:25:214 (3) - add clap to the middle
01:28:049 (3) - add clap to the end
01:28:994 (5) - ^ plus the shape doesn't seem to be symmetrical? I mean the 4th point is a bit more to the right than the second point? well I hope you understand what I mean
01:35:372 - add hit circle
01:37:970 (11) - add clap
01:41:750 - add hit circle (?)
01:47:892 (6) - this shape could be nicer (or more symmetrical)
02:01:829 (3) - put it somewhere else, it's not so nice there
02:12:459 (3) - place this somewhere else?
02:27:577 (1) - why don't you end the break here and edit?
02:31:356 (1) - I think this would fit better to the music - http://puu.sh/rM4f
02:35:136 (1,2,3) - this pattern could be nicer
02:44:585 (5) - the shape could be nicer
02:50:254 (2) - add clap to the end and put the first red point one grid down
02:55:923 (4) - add clap to the end
02:57:812 (2) - this fits much better to the music imo :3 http://puu.sh/rM9G
02:58:757 (4) - add clap to the end
03:06:080 (3) - two grids down
03:06:789 (4) - two grids left
03:07:261 (5) - this doesn't seem to be equal and add clap to the end
03:08:679 (7) - add clap
03:09:151 (1) - add clap to the end
03:12:458 (6) - this doesn't sound good, either remove note, or at least remove finish (but it doesn't sound good without finish either..so I would suggest removing the hit circle)
Good luck with it! I like this song! *.*
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Fixed some. Thank you.
Frozen Child
Mercurial
Going on Mod4Mod :)

DROP IT

General

AIBat wrote:

Inconsistency on Tags: http://puu.sh/t4pv
Inconsistency on Kiai Times: http://puu.sh/t4pP
Hard diff hasn't Letterbox.
74f67wj.png is unused.
This mp3 is on 320 kbps, you know what you must do it. http://puu.sh/t4qG Sorry, My OS is in Spanish :P

Easy
00:37:025 (6) Not Unrankable, but this circle is touching the Hp-Bar
01:07:970 (T) This break could start on 01:08:207 http://puu.sh/t4sB. Anyway, I really don't know why the break ends 2 seconds before the next circle, is this intentional?
01:19:545 (1,2) Same as 00:37:025
02:39:860 (3,4) ^

Frozen
Frozen's Normal? Maybe?
00:31:829 (2) Yeah, I know why (SV) but seems awkward that circle so far from previous slider... I dunno, really.
00:36:789 (6,7) Not Unrankable, but this slider and circle are touching the Hp-Bar
02:02:065 (3) Curious Slider, I like it.
02:10:569 (3) If you put HardRock with this slider, it could be off-screen. You know.

Hard
00:39:860 (5) This "3 form" slider is curious, 'cuz the Album is called "1D", just for fun :)
01:59:230 (4,5) Same factor "Hp-Bar" from Easy.
02:10:569 (1) ^

Good Luck! /o/
Suimya
Mod4Mod owo/

Do you need this .osb file, if not then delete it and full submit ~
Add at least 1 or 2 sec's Audio Line ._.
Add Frozen Child in the tags
Plz add a sliderslider muter.

Easy

AR -1?
  1. 00:09:624 (3) - 2nd slider point maybe at (x:424 y:188)
  2. 00:19:073 (1) - finish sound is too loud maybe lower it down ._.
  3. 00:20:962 (3) - this slider don't look really perfect maybe like this?
  4. 00:31:829 (3) - 2 grips left looks better~
  5. 00:34:191 (1) - same as 00:19:073 (1) -
  6. 00:37:498 (1,2) - replace those two notes with a slider 1/1 slider, feels much better with the vocal
  7. 00:45:529 (1,1) - i think it's too hard to have this in easy diff ._. imo
  8. 00:54:978 (5) - add a finish in slider start, sound much better o.o
  9. 01:13:876 (4) - i really dislike this slider ._. maybe change it to something more nicer like this? and add a whistle to slider end~
  10. 01:18:600 (5) - Add a Whistle~
  11. 01:35:608 (3) - 2nd slider point at (x:128 y:208)
  12. 01:38:443 (2,1) - same as 00:45:529 (1,1) -

Frozen

OD -1 ? AR -1?
is this normal? o.o it's too hard to be normal imo

  1. 00:23:797 (3,4) - maybe like this?
  2. 00:43:876 (5) - NC and remove NC on 00:44:112 (1) -
  3. 00:45:529 (4) - NC
  4. 00:49:309 (1,3) - maybe like this o.o
  5. 00:59:466 (6) - what is this?! .___."
  6. 01:28:049 (3,5) - this?
  7. 01:36:553 (7) - like this looks nicer ._.
  8. 02:02:065 (3) - same as 00:59:466 (6) -
This diff really needs more work at spacing and sliders ._.

Hard

  1. 00:20:018 (2) -5 or 4 grips down looks nicer and prettier ~
  2. 00:32:301 (4) - NC?
  3. 00:39:860 (5,1,2) - I JUST LOVE THOSE THREE SLIDERS <33 >w</
Nice Diff and the sliders are just so sexy >A</

Nice map over all Good luck :3
Low
Mod for mod request from #modreqs.

General

- Some of these things may or not have been done by the time you use this mod.
- mp3 bitrate is 320 kb/s. Please find someone to re-encode that for you.
- You need a reversearrow.png in your folder to go along with the approach circle.
- Tags inconsistency. Add "Frozen Child" to all of your difficulties' tags. Also, add "1D" to Frozen's difficulty.
- Inconsistency in letterboxing throughout difficulties.

Easy

00:35:136 (3) - Remove the seemingly random whistle here.
01:07:262 (5) - Extend the break after this note to 01:08:207.
01:57:813 (1) - Move this two grids to the right for a better blanket.
02:12:459 (1) - Extend the break after this spinner to 02:16:238.
02:35:136 (1) - The volume change at this slider is really drastic and out of place.

Frozen

00:05:844 (3) - Spacing.
00:58:758 (5) - Seems like you forgot to remove the finish from the beginning of this slider when copying and pasting it.
00:59:466 (6) - This is technically a burai slider, so it needs to be changed.
01:04:427 (1) - Remove the finish from the end of this slider.
01:36:553 (7) - I think that you could do something more interesting than a repeat slider here.
02:01:120 (1) - Remove the finish from the beginning of this slider.
02:15:766 (6) - Extend the break after this note to the end of the kiai.
02:40:805 (4) - Asymmetrical. Take all of the slider points and snap them. Take the end anchor and put it directly at the end of the slider as so.
02:50:254 (1) - ^
02:52:144 (4) - ^
02:55:923 (4,1) - Odd overlap between these two sliders.

Hard

00:11:514 (1) - Move the last slider point one grid to the right for perfect symmetry.
00:19:073 (1,2) - It would look way sexier if these were normally curved sliders that blanketed each other.
00:26:159 (6) - Move the last slider point two grids to the right.
00:39:860 (5) - Suddenly, a wild 3 appeared!
00:45:529 (1) - Whistle like you did in Easy.
00:55:687 (6) - Move this a grid to the right for a perfect blanket.
01:07:734 (7) - Extend the break after this note to where the kiai ends.
01:18:600 (7) - http://puu.sh/t5uA Is this just me..?
01:38:561 (1) - Whistle on this spinner.
02:05:844 (3) - It seems as if you're having trouble with symmetrical sliders. Move the last slider point (not the slider end) three grids to the right.
02:10:569 (1) - The sexy factor of this slider is ruined by the fact that it is touching the HP bar.
02:15:766 (1) - Extend the break after this circle to the next large white tick.
02:35:136 (1) - Drastic volume change.
02:51:907 (1) - Start this spinner at 02:52:144.
02:54:033 (1,2,3) - This blanket could look better and you know it.
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Love you all~
I'll get to your maps as soon as possible.
Why does everyone mention my "3 slider".
Mercurial
3333333333333!
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
D:
Realazy
271,68,39860,2,0,B|333:4|437:56|431:155|382:192|382:192|431:228|437:327|333:379|271:315,1,540,0|8
280,244,41514,6,0,B|232:228|204:268|204:268|176:228|120:244,1,180
144,316,42222,2,0,B|88:320|64:288,1,90,8|0
52,216,42695,2,0,B|26:156|94:88|153:114,1,180,0|8
359,114,43640,2,0,B|418:88|486:156|460:216,1,180,0|8
328,268,44585,1,0
256,268,44821,1,0
184,268,45057,1,8
256,144,45529,5,2
256,192,45648,12,2,48364

Surprise~
Copy paste this in your Hard .osu, HitObject part \:D/
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
OOO~ Thanks :D~
Miya
Omg, when Sekai told me to look at your map, i found this > http://puu.sh/u6qQ
Are you kidding? 4mb is just for a bg? orz

Here, i have compress that bg from 4mb to just 200kb
L_P
love this song and map
Katsuri
frozen child :D
GamerX4life
Mod4Mod:

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:624 (3) cut the slider to and add note at 00:11:041
  2. 00:32:301 (4) prolong the slider to 00:33:010 ,delete (5) and add note at 00:33:718
  3. 01:18:128 (4,5) (2) instead (from 01:16:711) with Ctrl+H and Ctrl+R
  4. 01:19:073 add note
  5. 01:53:561 try this: http://puu.sh/xjux
  6. 02:37:970 (4) two circles would fit better
[Frozen]
  1. 00:22:616 delete note
  2. 00:37:734 better this: http://puu.sh/xkBS and this pattern: http://puu.sh/xkCf
  3. 01:52:616 add note or prolong (5) to this point
  4. 02:10:569 this slider hits my health bar: http://puu.sh/xkEP
  5. 02:47:183 add note
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:403 (1,2) try this: http://puu.sh/xkHV
  2. 00:44:939 add note
  3. 01:44:737 (6,7) try this: http://puu.sh/xkJv
  4. 02:32:065 add note
  5. 02:42:603 (1,2) same like at 00:13:403 and 01:44:737
I hope it helps
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun

GamerX4life wrote:

Mod4Mod:

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:624 (3) cut the slider to and add note at 00:11:041
  2. 00:32:301 (4) prolong the slider to 00:33:010 ,delete (5) and add note at 00:33:718
  3. 01:18:128 (4,5) (2) instead (from 01:16:711) with Ctrl+H and Ctrl+R
  4. 01:19:073 add note
  5. 01:53:561 try this: http://puu.sh/xjux
  6. 02:37:970 (4) two circles would fit better
[Frozen]
  1. 00:22:616 delete note
  2. 00:37:734 better this: http://puu.sh/xkBS and this pattern: http://puu.sh/xkCf
  3. 01:52:616 add note or prolong (5) to this point
  4. 02:10:569 this slider hits my health bar: http://puu.sh/xkEP
  5. 02:47:183 add note
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:403 (1,2) try this: http://puu.sh/xkHV
  2. 00:44:939 add note
  3. 01:44:737 (6,7) try this: http://puu.sh/xkJv
  4. 02:32:065 add note
  5. 02:42:603 (1,2) same like at 00:13:403 and 01:44:737
I hope it helps
Good Luck!
Sorry, I didn't accept any of these. If you're curious about any, message me.
Also, no M4M because you didn't tell me before hand.
Beuchi
Hello! :)

I'm soooo sorry for the delay >.< Lack of free time and creativity are harsh partners D:
But here's the storyboard! I hope you like it :)

http://puu.sh/y1zU

I'd disable letterboxes, the head of the guy at the very left gets cut off x:
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Wooo~ Amazing work Beuchi. Thanks a ton :D
mancuso_JM_
Hi! Kiddo. Let's do that.

[General:]

- Tags: --> A little thing that I didn't understand. Frozen Child's diff is Still in the mapset? If not you should remove his Username from here and if his difficulty is in the mapset is better if you add his name on the difficulty name (e.g Frozen's Normal) to avoid any kind of confusion.
--> I don't understand why you didn't add your previous name in tags (Death_the_kid) because you have Ranked maps with this name. At the hour to find your Ranked maps is easier to know that you were Death_the_kid. Consider that please.
- Why is it One Direction - One Thing [Osu|Taiko] the Thread's name xD?? (I can't see any Taiko in the mapset :P)

[Easy:]

Settings:
--> In my opinion, the Approach Rate doesn't fit at all looking the Slider Velocity and the BPM that they are not to high. You should reduce it by 1 Tick in the Approach Rate, fit better in my opinion (AR-1)

01:08:152: Drag this Break to 01:08:507, fit better with the music, and also this Break is still in the Kiai Section
01:38:270 (1): This New Combo looks unnecesary, the change in the Vocal is perceived at the Beginning of the Spinner, so makes this Combo unnecesary and out of any elements in the song. Remove it please
02:00:948 (4): (NAZI)- Looks better if you align this note with the previous note (2), also you will not have any kind of problems with the Spacing. Try to move this note to (x:312 y:148)
02:16:184: This Break should be dragged to 02:16:538. There is a sound in the music that fit perfectly with this suggestion, try to do it please xD

[Normal:]

Settings:
--> Same as Easy Difficulty, I think that this Approach Rate is a bit high. Reduce it by 1 Tick (AR-1)

00:34:018 (8): This Slider doesn't fit at all here, because this doesn't need to be an unified pattern since the Vocal start after to the Instrumental. To follow better this in the music, you should change this to a note and the would be the Slider. In this case, you should add a note here and then you have to do an Slider in 1/2, this Slider have to Start in 00:34:255 and have to finish in 00:34:491, this fit more with the Vocal (Also if you do that you should add a New Combo in this Slider). Here an Screenshoot:
00:45:948 (Spin): This Spinner fit better with Vocal if starts 1/4 back, also it's more consistent with your Easy diff. Try to move it 1/4 back and then make it 1/4 bigger
01:08:152: Same as Easy about this Break
01:30:239 (5): The end of this Slider is touching the HP Bar and this is really bad at the hour to play the map. You really have to move that below because this Overlap looks aesethics too.
02:16:184: Same as Easy diff. About this Break
03:12:522 (4,5): I think that the Stack is not the best end on this song. In general, you only used stacks in 1/2 patterns and some other exceptions. Remark better the Overall map if you unstack these Notes.

[Hard:]

Settings:
--> The HP Bar Reduce quickly to be a Hard Difficulty, try to reduce it by 1 Tick (HP-1)

00:26:459 (6): I can't listen any support in the red Tick (at the end of this Slider) to have a note or something in this point. If you have this, the previous Whistle patterns on (4,5) and at the beginning of (6) doesn't sounds really well. Since you don't have a support at the end of this Slider, I suggest you to change this Slider to a Note instead
00:36:144 (x): Here you started to map the Instrumental but in this place sounds empty because there isn't any stop in the Instrumental section. Sounds better if you add a Note here
01:03:546 (6): Sounds really fine if you add a Whistle at the end of this Slider, makes a good sense with the next note (7)
01:08:152: Same as previous difficulties about this Break
01:15:121 (5): You should add a Whistle at the end of this Slider, I like how to sound with the beginning of the next Slider (6)
01:28:231 (2,3): You have to don't respect the spacing in this suggestion (I think that it's not a big problem), looks better if you move the note (2) to the middle exactly of the Slider (3), plays really fine and also is a known pattern
01:34:609 (1,2): (^)
02:04:018 (7): Add a Whistle at the end of this Slider
02:12:050 (x): I really expected a note here, because I listen the drums. To follow better it, you should add a Note here
02:16:184: Same as previous difficulties about this Break

And That's all for now
Really nice map, I have to shoot a Star.
Best of luck with this map Kiddo ;)
Beuchi
I just noticed there's something missing on the sb code. Add this code on the Background layer to fade out the background at the beginning and reduce the load by 1x~

Sprite,Background,Centre,"blackandwhite.jpg",320,240
S,0,0,,0.625
F,0,19073,,1
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Added in the code~

mancusojuanmattos' Mod

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hi! Kiddo. Let's do that.

[General:]

- Tags: --> A little thing that I didn't understand. Frozen Child's diff is Still in the mapset? If not you should remove his Username from here and if his difficulty is in the mapset is better if you add his name on the difficulty name (e.g Frozen's Normal) to avoid any kind of confusion. I thought I fixed that already...Anywho, fixed~

--> I don't understand why you didn't add your previous name in tags (Death_the_kid) because you have Ranked maps with this name. At the hour to find your Ranked maps is easier to know that you were Death_the_kid. Consider that please. Why not, I added Beuchi too~

- Why is it One Direction - One Thing [Osu|Taiko] the Thread's name xD?? (I can't see any Taiko in the mapset :P) ...I failed at making taiko...Will fix xD

[Easy:]

Settings:
--> In my opinion, the Approach Rate doesn't fit at all looking the Slider Velocity and the BPM that they are not to high. You should reduce it by 1 Tick in the Approach Rate, fit better in my opinion (AR-1) Done.

01:08:152: Drag this Break to 01:08:507, fit better with the music, and also this Break is still in the Kiai Section Asdf! I thought I...Aw well... Fixed - All.

01:38:270 (1): This New Combo looks unnecesary, the change in the Vocal is perceived at the Beginning of the Spinner, so makes this Combo unnecesary and out of any elements in the song. Remove it please You're right.

02:00:948 (4): (NAZI)- Looks better if you align this note with the previous note (2), also you will not have any kind of problems with the Spacing. Try to move this note to (x:312 y:148) Done.

02:16:184: This Break should be dragged to 02:16:538. There is a sound in the music that fit perfectly with this suggestion, try to do it please xD

[Normal:]

Settings:
--> Same as Easy Difficulty, I think that this Approach Rate is a bit high. Reduce it by 1 Tick (AR-1)

00:34:018 (8): This Slider doesn't fit at all here, because this doesn't need to be an unified pattern since the Vocal start after to the Instrumental. To follow better this in the music, you should change this to a note and the would be the Slider. In this case, you should add a note here and then you have to do an Slider in 1/2, this Slider have to Start in 00:34:255 and have to finish in 00:34:491, this fit more with the Vocal (Also if you do that you should add a New Combo in this Slider). Here an Screenshoot:
I actually like the slider the way it is, it leads into the next part really well, sorry.

00:45:948 (Spin): This Spinner fit better with Vocal if starts 1/4 back, also it's more consistent with your Easy diff. Try to move it 1/4 back and then make it 1/4 bigger Done.
01:08:152: Same as Easy about this Break Done.
01:30:239 (5): The end of this Slider is touching the HP Bar and this is really bad at the hour to play the map. You really have to move that below because this Overlap looks aesethics too. Done.
02:16:184: Same as Easy diff. About this Break Done.
03:12:522 (4,5): I think that the Stack is not the best end on this song. In general, you only used stacks in 1/2 patterns and some other exceptions. Remark better the Overall map if you unstack these Notes. Done.


[Hard:]

Settings:
--> The HP Bar Reduce quickly to be a Hard Difficulty, try to reduce it by 1 Tick (HP-1)

00:26:459 (6): I can't listen any support in the red Tick (at the end of this Slider) to have a note or something in this point. If you have this, the previous Whistle patterns on (4,5) and at the beginning of (6) doesn't sounds really well. Since you don't have a support at the end of this Slider, I suggest you to change this Slider to a Note instead I like this slider because of the build in flow. Also, just leaving a note there is kinda bland IMO. No change.
00:36:144 (x): Here you started to map the Instrumental but in this place sounds empty because there isn't any stop in the Instrumental section. Sounds better if you add a Note here
01:03:546 (6): Sounds really fine if you add a Whistle at the end of this Slider, makes a good sense with the next note (7)
01:08:152: Same as previous difficulties about this Break
01:15:121 (5): You should add a Whistle at the end of this Slider, I like how to sound with the beginning of the next Slider (6)
01:28:231 (2,3): You have to don't respect the spacing in this suggestion (I think that it's not a big problem), looks better if you move the note (2) to the middle exactly of the Slider (3), plays really fine and also is a known pattern It leads to some ugly overlapping with (1), no change :U
01:34:609 (1,2): (^) ^
02:04:018 (7): Add a Whistle at the end of this Slider Done.
02:12:050 (x): I really expected a note here, because I listen the drums. To follow better it, you should add a Note here Done.
02:16:184: Same as previous difficulties about this Break Done.


And That's all for now
Really nice map, I have to shoot a Star.
Best of luck with this map Kiddo ;)

Thanks for the mod~
Shohei Ohtani


Hard:
00:14:411 (2) - Move this so (1)'s endpoint is on (2)'s slidertick?
01:45:356 (7) - ^

Normal
00:08:507 (2) - Add whistle on beginning of slider
00:08:979 (3) - Add whistle on end of slider
00:08:979 (3) - Is there any way to make this not overlap?~
02:45:593 (5,6) - Make this centered with (4) and (3)?

Easy:
02:31:656 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - People might complain about how quiet these are

kawaii :D
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Done All~
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Double posting to let everyone know that I submitted my first legitimate Taiko difficulty!
Mercurial
Also, bump.
Aurele
Another bump. hahano.

Your Taiko starts too quickly, srsly.
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Whoops! I added in a couple seconds of audio lead it...Silly me.
Also, got MMzz to look at it and he approves
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
Double post...
those
Eh...

[General and SB]
  1. You have not set a Background, which is a problem for your storyboard at times like 19373, 136538, and 192286.
[Easy]
  1. 01:08:507 - Makes no sense for the Kiai to last til here just to be consistent with the other diffs. Move to 01:08:034 - . Kiai should end on an object.
  2. 02:53:861 - Makes no sense for the Kiai to last til here just to be consistent with the other diffs. Move to 02:53:388 - .
[Normal]
  1. Is this diff supposed to use 0.80x, 0.90x, or 1.00x spacing? I've seen all three, but I can't tell how it relates to the music.
  2. 01:00:948 (1,2) - Blanket is wider at the top than at the bottom.
  3. 01:08:507 - Makes no sense for the Kiai to last til here just to be consistent with the other diffs. Move to 01:08:034 - .
  4. 01:17:955 (4) - Somehow not too fond of this rotated wave; perhaps it's the fact that you had built it to be parallel to the y-axis, so it feels weird seeing it rotated just so you have a diagonal wave.
  5. 01:42:522 (1,2) - Blanket is wider at the top than at the bottom.
  6. 01:48:192 (4) - Symmetrical across the y-axis seems intended, but is not the case.
  7. 02:10:869 (3) - Would be great if you could reshape this so you can see a teardrop-like hole in the middle of the loop.
[Hard]
  1. 00:45:947 (1) - Remove the new combo spinner; it is obvious it belongs to 00:45:828 (1) - .
  2. 01:08:507 - Makes no sense for the Kiai to last til here just to be consistent with the other diffs. Move to 01:08:034 - .
[Taiko]
  1. 00:15:593 (1) - Spinner is meaningless at this time in the song. Should map with dk's.
  2. Then I realize I don't understand what you're trying to map with this Taiko at all. It appears that you went through it once with objects just to note where you're going to have an object, then you went through a second time in the editor, applying claps to objects in an improvised pattern (this is very evident in the chorus when you're in the editor: you can hear the x x xxx xxx xxx in claps very clearly). I'm not too sure what you're trying to achieve with this, but at this rate it won't play very well.
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
All fixed!

As for Taiko, I put the speed at 25% and found something to follow during the kiai (a fairly loud drum beat). I changed the map up and it's a tad less predictable, but there is still a lot of kdk patterns.
wmfchris
- note that "1D" would not be searched (the string has to be at least 3 characters), and it has no relation with other tags so remove it?

Taiko checking:

[Taiko]
- note that sliderborder is useless
- I would say the drum hitsound at the beginning is not clearly audiable. Try 50/60%?
00:41:814 - considering drums/vocals are very similar in beats and the tone of vocal is higher, I'll suggest a k here
00:49:609 - considering this is the beginning of kiai time and sounds like an accent in the music, add a finish?
01:42:522 - ^
02:39:215 - ^

This is suitable as a intermediate taiko diff, but just a bit boring since it lacks variation. In case you're still following the musical beat closely, you can consider kkd instead of some of the kdk, and kdddk instead of kdkdk (in the kiai time I can often hear the beat on white tick heavier than the middle one, and kdddk sounds well with it).

Good luck!
Regou
Hi Kiddo~ M4M? (I just found this in your user page)
Of cource, I am going to mod your map first :3
I will give a try~

Most of them are just suggestions!

[General]
00:00:475 - The beginning of this song is quiet, use 25% volume sounds better!

[Hard]
SPOILER
00:09:450 (4) - Remove the whistle at the end of this slider?
00:10:395 (5) - Whistle?
00:10:632 (6) - Remove whistle?
00:13:231 (4,5,6,7) - Try something like this?

00:45:828 (1) - 2 grid up
00:59:057 (4,5) - Whistle?
01:12:285 (1) - 1 grid left?
01:33:073 (4) - Ctrl+R? Of course, you will have to fix the spacing after this.
01:38:742 (1) - Same, two grids up
01:46:537 (3,4,5) - Spacing :<
02:01:183 (1) - Last slider point 1 grid right, 02:01:183 (1,2) is not perfectly parallel :o
02:02:128 (3) - ^
02:37:324 (3) - End this at 02:38:152, there obviously a beat.
02:38:270 - Add note
03:12:757 (6) - Delete?
03:11:576 (5) - Add finish at the end of this slider? The song ends at there.

[Normal]
00:08:507 (2) - Use circle instead of slider? Looks better
00:59:058 (4) - Whistle?
02:54:333 to 03:12:286 - Ctrl+H? Just coping note from 1st kiai time is boring imo :<
03:12:286 (4,5) - Do something same as Hard diff :3

[Easy]
00:35:908 (4) - (Nazi) See, the end of this slider is not parallel with 00:34:491 (1). Try to tweek this to make them look awesome!

Very nice mapset >< Good luck!
Shohei Ohtani
I want to meet the guy who played cowbell for this song >w<
Topic Starter
Kiddo-Kun
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