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GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
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GamerX4life
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Hinsvar wrote:

\:D/

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General
  1. Wanna remove the .osb? Completely fine if you don't want to, though.
ok

>Easy
  1. 01:43:406 (1) - Place the first anchor point @ (48,208) and the second one at (64,280)? The current curve doesn't look good, and I'm sure this isn't intentional.
I fixed it with other Sliders

>Normal
  1. 02:18:081 (2,3) - This... doesn't really look good. Make it so that (2) encircles (3)?
I tried to do it

>Insane
  1. AR-1? AR8 makes this diff FAR more playable, IMO. Ok
  2. 01:09:509 (2) - This slider is covered by 01:08:471 (2,3)'s hitbursts and made it pretty hard to read this. Fine with it?
Ok it tried to make it better

Wow. I thought that your previous mapset is already great enough, but this one is AWESOME \:D/ Also, Hard's fine in my eyes. wow thank you :)

thx for mod!
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Ylinestra44

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
(lol the combo showing d/k is completely wrong but that doesn't matter for me...)

-remove countdown Done
-remove letterbox during breaks Done

00:32:756 - the tone of vocal sounds like kdkdk Done
00:37:432 - dkkkd Done
00:45:224 - kdkdk like 0:32 Done
00:49:899 - dkkkd like 0:37 Done
00:58:990 - no accent here so remove finish Done
01:05:224 - remove slider because 1) streams does not fit with long vocals. 2) This is a 1/3 beat based song and 1/4 based slider does not fit with it. 3) 1/6 slider is not suitable too. Removed
01:17:691 - ^ ^
01:30:159 - ^ [remove all slider and I won't repeat again] Done
01:32:886 - this duplet sounds odd without any supporting rhythm from the music. Removed
01:56:847 - this section you mixed 1/3 and 1/2 quite a lot, but sometimes their connection is not so good, i.e. it's empty and odd between the two parts Now I know it's bad. As this is my first Mapset-Taiko-Diff and I can't play Taiko at all, I would prefer some constructive criticism, because things like that don't help me at all, sorry
02:07:172 - such mixing is totally discouraged and does not sounds well with music orz Deleted the the 1/8 notes
03:17:302 - similar to 1:32 Done
03:25:094 - sounds like at the same tone with the previous note so D. Done

In overall, note sticks to the tone well but there're several problems: 1/6 are not really necessary for me, and they're not likely in the right position too. Also you might want a better connection between different phrases to deliver a smooth taiko diff.
Download: Tristam - Follow Me (GamerX4life) [Yli's Taiko Oni].osu
Loctav
Popcorn Fairy
4,496 posts
Joined February 2009
Loctav
As requested by <strong>GamerX4life</strong>
No kds for this!

Taiko BG
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life

Loctav wrote:

As requested by <strong>GamerX4life</strong>
No kds for this!

Taiko BG
Vielen Dank!
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Cygnus
  • General
  1. Inconsistent Kiai. Not a huge problem, but I think it's better to make them all consistent.

  2. Check "Letterbox During Breaks" on Taiko to make it consistent with the other diffs.

  • Easy
  1. Seems fine. But I'd bump OD, AR, and HP +1 if i we're you.

  • Normal
  1. 00:37:951 (3) - Try to make this slider more wavy for better gameplay. (:

  2. 00:59:769 (1,3) - These slider too. Fix the wave.

  3. 01:24:704 (3) - One grid up. Nazi ~

  4. bump AR and OD +1.

  • Hard
  1. 00:27:432 (6) - I don't know if you're trying to make a blanket here, but fixing this little blanket would do.

  2. HP Drain, OD +1.

  • Insane
  1. You got some Unsnapped Slider Ends.
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

Philippines wrote:

  • General
  1. Inconsistent Kiai. Not a huge problem, but I think it's better to make them all consistent.

  2. Check "Letterbox During Breaks" on Taiko to make it consistent with the other diffs.
I will disable it on all other diffs

  • Easy
  1. Seems fine. But I'd bump OD, AR, and HP +1 if i we're you.
All - Ok

  • Normal
  1. 00:37:951 (3) - Try to make this slider more wavy for better gameplay. (: Ok

  2. 00:59:769 (1,3) - These slider too. Fix the wave. Ok

  3. 01:24:704 (3) - One grid up. Nazi ~ Ok

  4. bump AR and OD +1.
No

  • Hard
  1. 00:27:432 (6) - I don't know if you're trying to make a blanket here, but fixing this little blanket would do. No

  2. HP Drain, OD +1.
HP Drain - ok, OD - no

  • Insane
  1. You got some Unsnapped Slider Ends.
fixed

thx for mod!
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Disable countdown in all diffs?

[Normal]
The diff is good, not much to say.
01:18:471 (1) - the reverse arrow is partly hidden under spinner-osu, try to avoid this

[Insane]
In Kiai section, normal slider body whistle fit the song imo.
00:51:198 (2) - use 30% here and 00:51:587 (3) - use 25% here? 15% is too weak
01:07:561 (9) - add body whistle?
01:13:795 (6) - ^
01:15:354 (6,7) - ^
01:26:263 (6) - ^
01:19:250 (2,3,4) - ^ and many other sliders
02:00:012 (5,6) - unsnapped sliders

That's all I can find. GL~
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Disable countdown in all diffs? Ok you are the third person, who say that so: fixed

[Normal]
The diff is good, not much to say.
01:18:471 (1) - the reverse arrow is partly hidden under spinner-osu, try to avoid this Ok

[Insane]
In Kiai section, normal slider body whistle fit the song imo.
00:51:198 (2) - use 30% here and 00:51:587 (3) - use 25% here? 15% is too weak Ok
01:07:561 (9) - add body whistle? ok
01:13:795 (6) - ^ Ok
01:15:354 (6,7) - ^ Ok
01:26:263 (6) - ^ Ok
01:19:250 (2,3,4) - ^ and many other sliders Ok
02:00:012 (5,6) - unsnapped sliders fixed

That's all I can find. GL~

thx for mod!
Kokatsu
504 posts
Joined August 2011
Kokatsu
Taikomod from my queue~

Songsetup:
Increase drain to 6
Increase od to 6

Timing:
Maybe add speedup for the kiaipart?
SPOILER
03:02:886 - Velo to x1.04

Notes:
using 1/6-BSD is allowed, however, i would not recommend you to use 1/6 at all
01:25:743 (1) - remove
01:28:211 (1) - why is this kat? should be don
01:37:042 (3) - most players won't be able to get this big don (3), either make (2) kat or (3) small
01:43:795 (3,4) - why do you swap to 1/4? 1/3 still fits the part and isn't that confusing, change it.
01:44:574 (1,2) - ^
01:39:250 (2) - remove?
01:42:496 (1) - move to 01:42:626 -
01:43:016 - add kat (feels quiet empty if you leave that part out all the time..)
01:43:276 - ^
01:44:672 (2) - on 1/4 again, pls change
01:49:509 (2,3) - don, bigdon, as mentioned above
01:52:756 (1,2,1) - the kat's should be don's and vice versa
01:58:795 (2) - move to 01:58:860 -
02:01:912 (2) - move to 02:01:977 -
02:18:665 (2) - move to 02:18:730 -
02:24:509 (1) - kat would fit better here
02:33:146 (1,2) - don, bigdon, as mentioned above
02:45:678 (1,2) - ^
02:51:847 (2,3) - ^
03:12:626 (1) - should be big don
03:16:782 (2,3) - don, bigdon as mentioned above
03:21:458 (2,3) - ^

Hope I could help~
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Ylinestra44

Kokatsu wrote:

Taikomod from my queue~

Songsetup:
Increase drain to 6
Increase od to 6
I was told to center all settings

Timing:
Maybe add speedup for the kiaipart?
SPOILER
03:02:886 - Velo to x1.04 Done

Notes:
using 1/6-BSD is allowed, however, i would not recommend you to use 1/6 at all
01:25:743 (1) - remove Done
01:28:211 (1) - why is this kat? should be don Done
01:37:042 (3) - most players won't be able to get this big don (3), either make (2) kat or (3) small Done
01:43:795 (3,4) - why do you swap to 1/4? 1/3 still fits the part and isn't that confusing, change it. I swapped to 1/8, and the bass needs 1/8, not 1/3
01:44:574 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:39:250 (2) - remove? Done
01:42:496 (1) - move to 01:42:626 - Done
01:43:016 - add kat (feels quiet empty if you leave that part out all the time..) Done
01:43:276 - ^ Done
01:44:672 (2) - on 1/4 again, pls change Same here
01:49:509 (2,3) - don, bigdon, as mentioned above Done
01:52:756 (1,2,1) - the kat's should be don's and vice versa Disaggree
01:58:795 (2) - move to 01:58:860 - Disaggree
02:01:912 (2) - move to 02:01:977 - ^
02:18:665 (2) - move to 02:18:730 - ^
02:24:509 (1) - kat would fit better here Done
02:33:146 (1,2) - don, bigdon, as mentioned above Done
02:45:678 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:51:847 (2,3) - ^ ^
03:12:626 (1) - should be big don Done
03:16:782 (2,3) - don, bigdon as mentioned above Done
03:21:458 (2,3) - ^ ^

Hope I could help~
Download: Tristam - Follow Me (GamerX4life) [Yli's Taiko Oni].osu
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
01:55:873 (1) - I feel like this note should make a louder noise than it is
Overall, several of these notes could use at least enough volume to give feedback on whether or not I hit them. Barely detectable is fine, but I can't detect half of them at all X.X The one place I could hear you using whistles and claps was exquisite and I'd really like to see more of that

[Normal]
01:18:471 (1) - too soon after too short a spinner for this difficulty level
01:55:873 (1) - ^
03:15:354 (1) - ^
03:02:886 - 03:13:406 nice overall pattern

[Hard]
01:15:354 (7) - this slider shape is just weird rather than attractive or fitting
01:28:600 (8) - stack under fading 5. Honestly it's kind of hidden and if you'd rather move it out from under all the combobursts that'd work too
01:58:211 (5) - nice
02:02:886 (4) - again, the slight turn at the beginning feels weird rather than fitting
Overall, you've done a fairly good job of using slider shape to capture the mechanical tone of the music, just a few places where you missed the feeling. Very nice map.

[Taiko]
**disclaimer: I am still learning to mod Taiko maps**
01:05:224 - I feel like there should be a hit here
01:06:977 - ^
01:17:691 - ^
01:30:159 - ^
I guess it boils down to, you seem to be really good at not having a note on the downbeat at the end of a stream and I feel like that is unintuitive
01:31:717 (1,2,3) - this feels forced. Both this and the gap 4 combos later.
01:58:081 (1) - was this intended to be a clap?
02:34:704 (1,2,3) - also feels forced

[Insane]
00:50:808 (1,2,3) - D: you're evil!
01:04:445 (1,2,3,4) - wow. Really really well done on the placement here. Mind = blown
01:33:276 (1) - either stack under 5 or unstack completely from 5
01:34:055 (1,2,3,4) - xO so evil omg
02:46:522 (2) - feels like it should be farther away from 1
03:08:990 (8) - line this up with 7 please


This map is fucking beautiful. If this map were a person I'd be asking it for its number. I might seek a faster re-BATship just to bubble this map.

Seriously, once you look over my map talk to me or to a BAT asap about getting it ranked.
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Ylinestra44

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Taiko]
**disclaimer: I am still learning to mod Taiko maps**
01:05:224 - I feel like there should be a hit here There was earlier a slider, but he was "supposed" to be deleted. Either way, added a note
01:06:977 - ^ ^
01:17:691 - ^ ^
01:30:159 - ^ ^
I guess it boils down to, you seem to be really good at not having a note on the downbeat at the end of a stream and I feel like that is unintuitive
01:31:717 (1,2,3) - this feels forced. Both this and the gap 4 combos later. The 1/6-Triplet stays, but the gap got filled
01:58:081 (1) - was this intended to be a clap? Not sure. I messed a bit with the colours~ Kept it as a Don
02:34:704 (1,2,3) - also feels forced Same as before
Download: Tristam - Follow Me (GamerX4life) [Yli's Taiko Oni].osu
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
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Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
01:55:873 (1) - I feel like this note should make a louder noise than it is
Overall, several of these notes could use at least enough volume to give feedback on whether or not I hit them. Barely detectable is fine, but I can't detect half of them at all X.X The one place I could hear you using whistles and claps was exquisite and I'd really like to see more of that I tried to fix that

[Normal]
01:18:471 (1) - too soon after too short a spinner for this difficulty level fixed
01:55:873 (1) - ^ fixed
03:15:354 (1) - ^ fixed (delete a note)
03:02:886 - 03:13:406 nice overall pattern thx

[Hard]
01:15:354 (7) - this slider shape is just weird rather than attractive or fitting Ok i create a round slider instead
01:28:600 (8) - stack under fading 5. Honestly it's kind of hidden and if you'd rather move it out from under all the combobursts that'd work too Ok i stack them
01:58:211 (5) - nice thx
02:02:886 (4) - again, the slight turn at the beginning feels weird rather than fitting
Overall, you've done a fairly good job of using slider shape to capture the mechanical tone of the music, just a few places where you missed the feeling. Very nice map. yay

[Insane]
00:50:808 (1,2,3) - D: you're evil! I think it fits to the music :D
01:04:445 (1,2,3,4) - wow. Really really well done on the placement here. Mind = blown thx
01:33:276 (1) - either stack under 5 or unstack completely from 5 Ok
01:34:055 (1,2,3,4) - xO so evil omg xD
02:46:522 (2) - feels like it should be farther away from 1 Ok
03:08:990 (8) - line this up with 7 please I tried to fix this


This map is fucking beautiful. If this map were a person I'd be asking it for its number. I might seek a faster re-BATship just to bubble this map. Oh thank you :)

Seriously, once you look over my map talk to me or to a BAT asap about getting it ranked.

thank you for your mod!
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani


Insane:
00:37:172 (6) - The slightest of unsymmetricals
02:42:626 (7) - ^

Hard:
00:47:302 (1) - Maybe raise the last sliderpoint and move the 3rd one a bit down?~
01:31:717 (2) - Add clap on beginning of slider
01:58:211 (5) - ^
02:18:471 (6) - ^

Normal:
01:18:471 - add note?
03:15:354 - ^

Easy:
01:30:947 - Add note?
01:31:328 (1) - Add clap on end of slider

Moe! >3<~
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

CDFA wrote:


xD

Insane:
00:37:172 (6) - The slightest of unsymmetricals fixed
02:42:626 (7) - ^ fixed

Hard:
00:47:302 (1) - Maybe raise the last sliderpoint and move the 3rd one a bit down?~ Ok
01:31:717 (2) - Add clap on beginning of slider Ok
01:58:211 (5) - ^ Ok
02:18:471 (6) - ^ Ok

Normal:
01:18:471 - add note? I think so, but other modders say that the time between Spinner and note is too short
03:15:354 - ^ ^

Easy:
01:30:947 - Add note? would be too hard for easy
01:31:328 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Ok

Moe! >3<~

thx for mod!
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
Sorry, I was going to mod this ...
But the song ... was really hurting my ears
So I couldn't mod this, sorry ;_;
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
Caution ! Something in this post has been typoed. LOL

[General]
Nothing !

[Easy]
OD-1 ? I'm very unsure as it soes not realyl look good.

You use too much kiai imo, if you use it on the second part , starting at 01:30:938 and finishing at 01:54:315
00:28:600 (1) - Down by 1 grid ? Small spacing issue.
00:29:769 (2) - This should be moved as well.
00:31:717 (1) - (136,164) - As 00:29:769 (2,3,1) - will be evenly spaced.
00:39:120 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - Keep only odd numbers' circles ?
00:46:133 (4,5,6) - I would've placed them like 00:43:406 (1,2) - but it's up to you
00:52:367 (2) - NC ?
01:25:484 (3,1) - (1,2), NCs
01:33:665 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Odd numbers
01:55:873 - More volume please ?

[Normal]
CS-1, OD-1
Same as Easy about Kiai.

01:16:912 (1,1) - PLEASE. Make these things closer please. It's a easy miss/break.
Some of your sliders aren't that good-looking, I mean they're not very symmetrical.
01:55:873 - More volume please ?

[Hard]
Kiai, Volume.

02:40:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This combo is longer than the two others. Actually it's as long as the two others combined.

[Insane]
Kiai, Volume.

01:26:263 (6) - Why don't you just put a inherited section to slow it down ?

[Yli's Taiko]
I played it and felt the non 1/3 multipliers and some 1/6s slightly bad though overall this is a nice diffs.
01:30:938 - Kiai start
01:31:782 (2) - Delete
01:38:795 (2,3) - ^ , it doesn't really fit at all
01:41:328 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - {1/3}dkkkd
01:43:795 (2,3,4,1) - 1/3(Musically wise it's not really hearable that it's the same as the next)
01:48:146 (2) - ^
01:50:678 (2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - {1/3}kddkddkd
01:55:094 - +d
01:58:795 (2) - next purp. tick
02:01:912 (2) - next purp. tick
02:01:912 (2,1) - {1/3}kd
02:04:315 (3,4,1,1,2,1) - {1/3}kk_dd_kd
02:11:328 - +k
02:16:003 (2,1) - {1/3}kd
02:18:665 (2) - next purp. tick
02:24:509 (4) - d
02:21:393 (2) - ^
02:22:951 (2) - ^
02:26:068 (2) - ^
02:27:626 (2) - ^
02:29:185 (2) - ^
02:32:886 - +k?
02:54:964 (3,1) - {1/3}kd
02:58:016 (2) - delete
02:57:691 (1,1,1,2,1) - {1/3}kdkkd
03:16:198 (2) - del
03:17:302 - +note?

tbh your mapping style reminds me of mine. Nice taiko overall as I said, but some of the 1/6s that don't fit makes it weird.
The BG is fine o/
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Ylinestra44
Fixed everything in my diff~

Download: Tristam - Follow Me (GamerX4life) [Yli's Taiko Oni].osu
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

_Gezo_ wrote:

Caution ! Something in this post has been typoed. LOL

[General]
Nothing !

[Easy]
OD-1 ? I'm very unsure as it soes not realyl look good. Ok

You use too much kiai imo, if you use it on the second part , starting at 01:30:938 and finishing at 01:54:315 I think its ok like it is
00:28:600 (1) - Down by 1 grid ? Small spacing issue. Ok
00:29:769 (2) - This should be moved as well. I tried
00:31:717 (1) - (136,164) - As 00:29:769 (2,3,1) - will be evenly spaced. Ok
00:39:120 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - Keep only odd numbers' circles ? I don't know what you mean...
00:46:133 (4,5,6) - I would've placed them like 00:43:406 (1,2) - but it's up to you agree
00:52:367 (2) - NC ? Ok
01:25:484 (3,1) - (1,2), NCs Ok
01:33:665 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Odd numbers same
01:55:873 - More volume please ? Ok

[Normal]
CS-1, OD-1 CS no - OD ok
Same as Easy about Kiai. I will give it some thought

01:16:912 (1,1) - PLEASE. Make these things closer please. Oh man every modder says something other about it -.-
It's a easy miss/break.
Some of your sliders aren't that good-looking, I mean they're not very symmetrical.I will try to make some of them better
01:55:873 - More volume please ? Ok

[Hard]
Kiai, Volume. ^

02:40:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This combo is longer than the two others. Actually it's as long as the two others combined. Oh i forgot to add new combo

[Insane]
Kiai, Volume. ^

01:26:263 (6) - Why don't you just put a inherited section to slow it down ? agree

The BG is fine o/ thx

thx for mod!
kosiga
1,548 posts
Joined May 2011
kosiga
Hi~ GamerX4life :)

from my queue~ ( sorry for late..orz

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. fine
[Easy]
  1. 00:25:484 (1) - Does not fit a little whistle of the beginning to me o.o so add finish instead to whistle to start of the slider is better imo.
  2. 00:32:886 (2) - spacing too far.(1.17x) plz use DS1.0x
  3. 00:43:406 (1) - remove NC and 00:44:185 (3) - add NC
  4. 00:58:211 (1) - The beginning of the slider, finish is more fit than the whistle x.x
  5. 01:04:445 (4) - add NC and remove whistle to start of the slider. dose not fit a little imo
  6. 01:16:912 (1) - add finish
  7. 01:29:380 (1) - Spinner is a little short in easy and 01:30:938 - Here had better put something. because you put kiaitime here. so http://puu.sh/yv9C
    ( I think enough in the same pattern 01:16:912 (1,1,2) )
  8. 01:52:756 (4) - add NC ?
  9. 02:21:198 - Unnecessary green line
  10. 02:36:393 (5) - add NC ?
  11. 02:45:743 (1) - same 00:58:211 (1)
  12. 02:48:860 (1) - ^
  13. 02:58:211 (5) - add NC and 02:58:990 (1) - remove NC and 02:59:769 (2) - add NC
  14. 03:18:471 (4) - add NC and 03:20:029 (1) - remove NC and 03:21:587 (3) - add NC and 03:22:367 (1) - remove NC
[Normal]
  1. OD +1 or 2 ( too low imo )
  2. 00:25:484 (1) - same easy
  3. 00:31:717 (5) - add NC and 00:33:276 (1) - remove NC and 00:34:834 (3) - add NC and 00:36:393 (1) - remove NC and 00:37:951 (3) - add NC. ( It is recommended that you put the NC to the rhythm rather than the number of combo :P
  4. 00:44:185 (5) - add NC and 00:45:743 (1) - remove NC and 00:47:691 (4) - add NC and 00:48:860 (1) - remove NC and 00:50:419 (3) - add NC.
  5. 00:51:977 (1) - remove whistle
  6. 00:58:990 (6) - add NC and 00:59:769 (1) - remove NC
  7. 01:12:237 (5) - add NC and 01:13:016 (1) - remove NC
  8. 01:18:471 (1) - add finish
  9. 01:29:380 (6) - add NC ?
  10. 01:30:938 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
  11. 01:43:406 (1) - ^
  12. 01:46:522 (5) - add NC and 01:48:081 (1) - remove NC and 01:49:639 (3) - add NC
  13. 01:55:873(x) - Here had better put something. because you put kiaitime here.
  14. 02:33:276 - Unnecessary green line
  15. 02:36:782 - this green line maybe move to 02:36:393 ?
  16. 02:45:743 (1) - The beginning of the slider, finish is more fit than the whistle x.x
  17. 03:15:354 (1) - add finish
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:484 (1) - same easy
  2. 00:51:977 (1) - remove whistle
  3. 00:58:211 (3) - finish is more fit than the whistle >:(
  4. 01:09:120 (5) - add NC and 01:10:548 (1) - remove NC and 01:12:237 (5) - add NC and 01:13:406 (1) - remove NC and 01:15:224 (6) - add NC
  5. 01:27:821 (7) - add NC
  6. 01:59:380 (6) - add NC ?
  7. 02:03:535 (5) - ^
  8. 02:36:393 (7) - add NC and 02:36:782 (1) - remove NC
  9. 02:36:782 - this green line maybe move to 02:36:393 ?
  10. 02:39:509 (6) - add NC and 02:40:289 (1) - remove NC
  11. 02:43:406 (7) - end has better 02:43:795. so my suggestion: http://puu.sh/yvGQ ( same rhythm 02:42:496 (5,6) )
[Insane]
  1. HD +1 or 2 ( it is better higher than hard diff )
  2. 00:25:484 (1) - same easy
  3. 00:28:600 (7) - add NC and 00:29:639 (1) - remove NC
  4. 00:31:717 (8) - add NC and 00:32:496 (1) - remove NC
  5. 00:34:445 (7) - add NC ?
  6. 00:51:977 (1) - remove whistle to start of the slider
  7. 01:41:847 (5) - add NC and 01:43:016 (1) - remove NC and 01:43:276 (2) - add NC ?
  8. 02:18:471 (1,2,3) - Does not match the rhythm a little. Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/yvN5
  9. 02:45:743 (8) - remove whistle
The rhythm is almost no problem ;)

It is all my suggestion. Please do not throw the kudosu if useless ;)

Good map & Star~☆ :)
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ GamerX4life :)

from my queue~ ( sorry for late..orz no problem

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. fine
[Easy]
  1. 00:25:484 (1) - Does not fit a little whistle of the beginning to me o.o so add finish instead to whistle to start of the slider is better imo. Ok
  2. 00:32:886 (2) - spacing too far.(1.17x) plz use DS1.0x agree
  3. 00:43:406 (1) - remove NC and 00:44:185 (3) - add NC agree
  4. 00:58:211 (1) - The beginning of the slider, finish is more fit than the whistle x.x agree
  5. 01:04:445 (4) - add NC and remove whistle to start of the slider. dose not fit a little imo agree
  6. 01:16:912 (1) - add finish agree
  7. 01:29:380 (1) - Spinner is a little short in easy and 01:30:938 - Here had better put something. because you put kiaitime here. so http://puu.sh/yv9C agree
    ( I think enough in the same pattern 01:16:912 (1,1,2) )
  8. 01:52:756 (4) - add NC ? agree
  9. 02:21:198 - Unnecessary green line delete
  10. 02:36:393 (5) - add NC ? agree
  11. 02:45:743 (1) - same 00:58:211 (1) agree
  12. 02:48:860 (1) - ^ agree
  13. 02:58:211 (5) - add NC and 02:58:990 (1) - remove NC and 02:59:769 (2) - add NC agree
  14. 03:18:471 (4) - add NC and 03:20:029 (1) - remove NC and 03:21:587 (3) - add NC and 03:22:367 (1) - remove NC agree
[Normal]
  1. OD +1 or 2 ( too low imo ) ok +1
  2. 00:25:484 (1) - same easy agree
  3. 00:31:717 (5) - add NC and 00:33:276 (1) - remove NC and 00:34:834 (3) - add NC and 00:36:393 (1) - remove NC and 00:37:951 (3) - add NC. ( It is recommended that you put the NC to the rhythm rather than the number of combo :P agree
  4. 00:44:185 (5) - add NC and 00:45:743 (1) - remove NC and 00:47:691 (4) - add NC and 00:48:860 (1) - remove NC and 00:50:419 (3) - add NC. agree
  5. 00:51:977 (1) - remove whistle No
  6. 00:58:990 (6) - add NC and 00:59:769 (1) - remove NC agree
  7. 01:12:237 (5) - add NC and 01:13:016 (1) - remove NC agree
  8. 01:18:471 (1) - add finish agree
  9. 01:29:380 (6) - add NC ? agree
  10. 01:30:938 (1) - add finish to start of the slider agree
  11. 01:43:406 (1) - ^ agree
  12. 01:46:522 (5) - add NC and 01:48:081 (1) - remove NC and 01:49:639 (3) - add NC agree
  13. 01:55:873(x) - Here had better put something. because you put kiaitime here. i prolonged the spinner and add a circle instead of the slider
  14. 02:33:276 - Unnecessary green line delete
  15. 02:36:782 - this green line maybe move to 02:36:393 ? fixed
  16. 02:45:743 (1) - The beginning of the slider, finish is more fit than the whistle x.x agree
  17. 03:15:354 (1) - add finish agree
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:484 (1) - same easy same
  2. 00:51:977 (1) - remove whistle No
  3. 00:58:211 (3) - finish is more fit than the whistle >:( I suck at hitsounds so pls don't be angry :(
  4. 01:09:120 (5) - add NC and 01:10:548 (1) - remove NC and 01:12:237 (5) - add NC and 01:13:406 (1) - remove NC and 01:15:224 (6) - add NC agree
  5. 01:27:821 (7) - add NC agree
  6. 01:59:380 (6) - add NC ? agree
  7. 02:03:535 (5) - ^ agree
  8. 02:36:393 (7) - add NC and 02:36:782 (1) - remove NC agree
  9. 02:36:782 - this green line maybe move to 02:36:393 ? agree
  10. 02:39:509 (6) - add NC and 02:40:289 (1) - remove NC agree
  11. 02:43:406 (7) - end has better 02:43:795. so my suggestion: http://puu.sh/yvGQ ( same rhythm 02:42:496 (5,6) ) ok i used your rhytm
[Insane]
  1. HD +1 or 2 ( it is better higher than hard diff ) +1 ok
  2. 00:25:484 (1) - same easy same
  3. 00:28:600 (7) - add NC and 00:29:639 (1) - remove NC agree
  4. 00:31:717 (8) - add NC and 00:32:496 (1) - remove NC agree
  5. 00:34:445 (7) - add NC ? agree
  6. 00:51:977 (1) - remove whistle to start of the slider No
  7. 01:41:847 (5) - add NC and 01:43:016 (1) - remove NC and 01:43:276 (2) - add NC ? agree
  8. 02:18:471 (1,2,3) - Does not match the rhythm a little. Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/yvN5 I used your rhytm
  9. 02:45:743 (8) - remove whistle No
The rhythm is almost no problem ;)

It is all my suggestion. Please do not throw the kudosu if useless ;)

Good map & Star~☆ :)

thx for mod!
Minato_old
7 posts
Joined May 2012
Minato_old
i love this song <3333 >:(
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
01:31:717 (1,2) - line these up please

[Normal]
lookin good

[Hard]
wonderful~

[Taiko]
good

[Insane]
02:36:263 (5) - feels weird
02:37:821 (5) - ^
02:40:938 (3) - ^
02:44:055 (4) - ^
03:13:665 (4) - line this up with 2,3


:o get back to me on this as soon as you can and i will blow bubbles at you!
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
01:31:717 (1,2) - line these up please

[Normal]
lookin good

[Hard]
wonderful~

[Taiko]
good

[Insane]
02:36:263 (5) - feels weird
02:37:821 (5) - ^
02:40:938 (3) - ^
02:44:055 (4) - ^
03:13:665 (4) - line this up with 2,3


:o get back to me on this as soon as you can and i will blow bubbles at you!
fixed everything~
thx for mod :)
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
Before you bubble this -

Insane

01:09:899 (3) - This type of slider has questionable rankability as of recently.
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
Good call, I'd thought it was 2 frames but apparently its only 1. You'll need to increase the amplitude of the squiggle a bit. Sorry.
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life

Jacob wrote:

Before you bubble this -

Insane

01:09:899 (3) - This type of slider has questionable rankability as of recently.
fixed / i changed it to a normal slider with one corner
(kds because it's very hard to find something in a map with 4 sites or more)
Yuukari-Banteki
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Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
^0^ bubbles!
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
Thank you ! :)
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Oh man,already bubbled D:
Sorry, I didn't mod your map in time >_<
Anyway,good luck with ranking your map~
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
bump
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
This bubble seems a bit old. So here's my random mod. (:

Easy

Hitsounds
00:58:211 - Add a whistle to keep the consistency.
01:02:886 (2) - Delete the whistle

Normal

Circle emplacement
01:23:146 (1) - You could stack this slider with 01:21:198 (5) -
01:42:237 (5) - Instead of having a curved slider, you could copy/paste the previous slider. (01:40:289 (1) - ) to make it symetrical.

Hitsounds
01:21:198 (5) - Delete the clap, it doesn't sounds good at all.

Hard

Circle emplacement
03:00:159 (2,3,4) - You could move these circles like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/368125

Insane

New combos
01:15:354 (1) - Add a new combo here to fit with the vocal/song and the pattern.
01:23:146 - Add a new combo here, 01:24:185 - delete the new combo, 01:25:094 - Add a new combo.
01:48:730 (1) - Add a new combo here?
02:00:029 - Add a new combo, 02:01:328 - Delete the new combo, 02:02:107 - Add a new combo. It will fits with the beat.
02:08:341 (1) - Add a new combo, 02:09:380 (4) - Delete the new combo, 02:11:068 - Add a new combo.
03:08:990 (1) - Add a new combo here to fit with the song.

Circle emplacement
01:37:042 (8,9) - You should move these objects in the center of the playfield. Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/368110

Hitsounds
00:37:951 - You should add a whistle here to keep the consistency.
00:41:847 - Add a clap here and delete the clap at 00:42:237.
02:48:860 - Add a whistle like you did in the beginning?
02:51:977 - Same as ^
02:55:094 - ^
02:58:211 (1) - Add a Finish to keep the consistency and also add a whistle for the suggestion above.

Taiko

I suck at taiko, I don't think I could help for this, sorry.
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

Gabe wrote:

This bubble seems a bit old. So here's my random mod. (: >:(

Easy

Hitsounds
00:58:211 - Add a whistle to keep the consistency.
01:02:886 (2) - Delete the whistle

Normal

Circle emplacement
01:23:146 (1) - You could stack this slider with 01:21:198 (5) -
01:42:237 (5) - Instead of having a curved slider, you could copy/paste the previous slider. (01:40:289 (1) - ) to make it symetrical.

Hitsounds
01:21:198 (5) - Delete the clap, it doesn't sounds good at all.

Hard

Circle emplacement
03:00:159 (2,3,4) - You could move these circles like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/368125

Insane

New combos
01:15:354 (1) - Add a new combo here to fit with the vocal/song and the pattern.
01:23:146 - Add a new combo here, 01:24:185 - delete the new combo, 01:25:094 - Add a new combo.
01:48:730 (1) - Add a new combo here?
02:00:029 - Add a new combo, 02:01:328 - Delete the new combo, 02:02:107 - Add a new combo. It will fits with the beat.
02:08:341 (1) - Add a new combo, 02:09:380 (4) - Delete the new combo, 02:11:068 - Add a new combo.
03:08:990 (1) - Add a new combo here to fit with the song.

Circle emplacement
01:37:042 (8,9) - You should move these objects in the center of the playfield. Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/368110

Hitsounds
00:37:951 - You should add a whistle here to keep the consistency.
00:41:847 - Add a clap here and delete the clap at 00:42:237.
02:48:860 - Add a whistle like you did in the beginning?
02:51:977 - Same as ^
02:55:094 - ^
02:58:211 (1) - Add a Finish to keep the consistency and also add a whistle for the suggestion above.

Taiko

I suck at taiko, I don't think I could help for this, sorry.

I fixed the most things (sry i don't have much time so i won't write what i have changed)
thx for mod, although you popped my bubble :(
Musty
2,246 posts
Joined February 2010
Musty
Let's find someone else for rebubble this :]
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
looks good

[Normal]
looks good

[Hard]
looks good

[Insane]
rebubbled~
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
looks good

[Normal]
looks good

[Hard]
looks good

[Insane]
rebubbled~
thx
let's try to find somebody, who rank this...
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
SWAQ #thuglyfe #wubstep
Bass
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Joined January 2009
Bass
#YOLO #REALTALK #422
Breeze
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
Breeze
[Normal]

  1. 01:27:821 (3) - I guess you are not mean to put this clap here, it sounds a bit weird
  2. 01:54:315 (1) - Add finish?
[Hard]

  1. 02:14:055 (8) - Remove clap sounds better
  2. 02:32:367 - idk why but seems you've dragged break to here, it suppose to be meaningless, redo this break may solve this issue
That's all
Send me a forum PM when you have reply then
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life

Breeze wrote:

[Normal]

  1. 01:27:821 (3) - I guess you are not mean to put this clap here, it sounds a bit weird I remove it
  2. 01:54:315 (1) - Add finish? sounds great
[Hard]

  1. 02:14:055 (8) - Remove clap sounds better ok
  2. 02:32:367 - idk why but seems you've dragged break to here, it suppose to be meaningless, redo this break may solve this issue fixed
That's all
Send me a forum PM when you have reply then
thx for mod.
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