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GamerX4life
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Joined January 2010
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GamerX4life
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Loctav wrote:

As requested by Ylinestra44

[General]

Taiko uses another kiai time than the default diffs. Think about removing the Kiai from the taiko or adding the kiai times as used in the taiko diff. In general, the standard diffs lack of kiai (just use of this fountains D: )

[Easy]

Many spacings are messed up to due to low grid level. Feel free to perfect this one by rising the grid level and/or deactivating grid snap. Please review the whole diff. A variety beteen 0,98 and 1,05 shouldn't be.

00:52:354 (2,3) - line it up. Ok
01:05:990 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing. Ok
01:09:107 (1,2,3) - ^ Ok
01:19:237 (2,3) - do a 1/1 slider instead? Ok
01:29:367 (1) - the space between the spinner and the prev/next hitobjects is too small. Due to the low AR, the upcoming hitobject is seen too early and appears to be confusing for newcomers. Also, the spinners are WAY TOO short. fixed
01:34:042 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing. fixed
01:40:665 (5,6,7) - ^ fixed
01:43:393 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:54:302 (1) - same issue as before no its fine
01:55:860 (3) - NC Ok
02:00:535 (3,4,6,1) - inconsistent spacing. fixed
02:06:769 (3,4,5,6) - do this: http://puu.sh/sUB3 Ok
02:09:886 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing. fixed
02:13:003 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ fixed
02:20:406 (5,6) - stack them? no
03:01:315 (5,1) - inconsistent spacing. I won't point it up anymore. These should be enough examples. ^^
03:13:782 (1) - spinner issue ^^
03:26:250 (1) - spinner issue ^^

[Normal]

Please fix the spacings in the running-parts (multiple hitcircles in a row). The spacing varies between 0,79 and 0,83.
The same issue with the spinners appears here too, please fix it.

00:28:587 (1) - this one looks messy shaped. Do this: http://puu.sh/sUsj
440,184,27808,1,8
408,256,28198,1,0
351,312,28587,6,0,B|321:343|240:355|187:292|186:248,1,200,0|8
120,224,29756,1,0
80,160,30146,1,0
Ok
01:02:873 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing. fixed
01:05:211 (2) - move 1 grid up Ok
01:11:055 (4,5) - do this: http://puu.sh/sUtU Ok
01:48:068 (1,2) - do this: http://puu.sh/sUuN Ok
02:02:094 (1) - move a bit up Ok
02:35:600 (5,1,2,3,4) - spacing fixed
02:48:068 (5,6) - do this: http://puu.sh/sUvM no
02:56:639 (3,4,5,6) - ^ Ok
03:20:016 (3,4,5,6) - spacing Ok


[Hard]

I liked this one pretty much. :'D Not much to suggest here.

00:31:704 (1,2) - line them up. Ok
02:14:042 (8) - add a clap. Ok
02:20:665 (3) - do two hitcircles instead? Ok


[Insane]

Okay. Some stuff is pretty drastic here. Let's go ahead.

00:28:587 (7) - this looks not symmetric. fixed
01:06:769 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - pretty high spacing due to SV x1,2 x_x reduce it no
01:08:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is way too drastic imo. Ok
01:14:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - very hard to read. the indicated movement feels stupid imo. ok
01:20:016 (4,5,6) - do this instead: http://puu.sh/sUO9 Ok
01:27:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - as said before, I won't point this up anymore. ^^
01:33:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - okay, THIS is totally meh. The spacing is inconsistent, the movement sucks and I can't even read it in the hectic AR. Do something better, urgently. xD ok
01:37:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing. fixed
02:01:315 (1) - not symmetric. i tried to fix this
02:02:483 (3) - ^ fixed

I think this diff needs more mods. D: I disliked many patterns and many spacings are inconsistent, too. agree

thx for mod!
those
3,136 posts
Joined November 2010
those
From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
If you would like, you can delete all your bookmarks to decrease the size of your .osz file by a little since you won't be needing them by the time this gets put on the server.
No source? That's fine too, but see what fits as a source first.
Offset is off. I have (+10) from you, at 25481.

[Yli's Taiko Oni]
You really need someone who focuses on Taiko modding to mod this. There's so much wrong with it I can't even begin.

[Insane]
01:33:532 (3,4) - This is unreasonable.

Unfortunately there's only so much noise I'm willing to mod. Good luck.
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.
[General]
If you would like, you can delete all your bookmarks to decrease the size of your .osz file by a little since you won't be needing them by the time this gets put on the server. Ok
No source? That's fine too, but see what fits as a source first.
Offset is off. I have (+10) from you, at 25481. Ok

[Insane]
01:33:532 (3,4) - This is unreasonable. Ok

Unfortunately there's only so much noise I'm willing to mod. Good luck.

thx for mod
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
Hey :3

Insane
00:46:263 - add note
00:50:808(1) - make volume this note 35%
00:51:198(2) - volume 25% and on 00:51:587 make 15%
00:51:977 - this put usual 45%
01:09:899 - this slider make so http://puu.sh/to6j looks better
01:10:289 - add note
01:20:548 - ^
01:20:678 - ^
01:48:730 - make so http://puu.sh/to8x sound better
01:49:509 - add note
01:55:873 - here better use volume 25% sounds more softly and more pleasantly
02:10:029 - add note
02:33:276 - here put volume 30%
02:34:315 - make this slider shorter to white tick
02:36:782 - here put volume 35%
02:39:899 - put volume 40%
02:40:548 - make this slider shorter to white tick
02:46:133 - volume 45%
02:46:133(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use soft sound volume 70%
02:48:860 - here start normal sound
03:27:432 - make end spinner volume 15%


that is connected with loudness change you should make it on all diff's it really sounds better)

Hard
AR -1 >< 8 very fast for hard
check NC in some places they are placed incorrectly

nice mapset anything for me)


Easy
in 1 combo color should be no more 5 ccombo's

00:39:509 - add note
00:52:756 - ^
01:32:107 - ^

It's all for me ^^ good map but experiment loudness of a sound)) ;) star for you <3 good luck~~
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

Katty Pie wrote:

Hey :3

Insane
00:46:263 - add note Ok
00:50:808(1) - make volume this note 35% Ok
00:51:198(2) - volume 25% and on 00:51:587 make 15% Ok
00:51:977 - this put usual 45% Ok
01:09:899 - this slider make so http://puu.sh/to6j looks better Ok
01:10:289 - add note Ok
01:20:548 - ^ Ok
01:20:678 - ^ No it doens't fit to the music
01:48:730 - make so http://puu.sh/to8x sound better Ok
01:49:509 - add note Ok
01:55:873 - here better use volume 25% sounds more softly and more pleasantly Ok
02:10:029 - add note no that would be overmapped
02:33:276 - here put volume 30% Ok
02:34:315 - make this slider shorter to white tick Ok
02:36:782 - here put volume 35% Ok
02:39:899 - put volume 40% Ok
02:40:548 - make this slider shorter to white tick Ok
02:46:133 - volume 45% Ok
02:46:133(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use soft sound volume 70% Ok
02:48:860 - here start normal sound Ok
03:27:432 - make end spinner volume 15%


that is connected with loudness change you should make it on all diff's it really sounds better)

Hard
AR -1 >< 8 very fast for hard
check NC in some places they are placed incorrectly[/color]

nice mapset anything for me) thx


Easy
in 1 combo color should be no more 5 ccombo's

00:39:509 - add note Ok
00:52:756 - ^ no
01:32:107 - ^no

It's all for me ^^ good map but experiment loudness of a sound)) ;) star for you <3 good luck~~

thx for mod!
Twice_old
Twice_old


[General]

Close the countdown?

[Easy]

no problem

[Normal]

HP-1
AR-1

03:05:613-(4) overlap with 03:06:003-(1)

[Hard]

HP+1?

[Insane]

I think you should check the ds one more times by yourself.
the ds is confusion.


Sorry for this short mod，except Insane diff have some problem，the other diffs are good :)
DarkDunskin
1,874 posts
Joined April 2009
DarkDunskin
Yli hat nach nem Taiko mod gefragt~

[Yli's Taiko Oni]

Make sure Kiai Time is equal to the other diffs.

Center Circle Size and Approach Rate, because otherwise it leads to a higher star rating and gives more score which gives players
of this map an advantage to other Oni's etc. I believe it's also written in the Taiko mapping Rules.

- 00:25:484 (1) - Add finish.
- 00:50:419 (2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I'd suggest to remove those finishs and turn them into k's since there's no need for that in the Background drum.
This d K Pattern is nice idea but causes a bit trouble in the 5-beat-streams. d K d d D - is a no go and d k d k K isn't beautiful too. You could make it better playiable in deleting 00:50:159 (1) - and 00:51:717 (1) - though. If you choose this way you should the clap on 00:50:289 (1) - too.
- 00:59:769 (2) - Remove finish.
- 01:01:328 (1) - ^
- 01:12:237 (2,3,1) - Stay on D D K here please.
- 01:31:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be 1/6 actually (listen to the song on 25%) but you can keep 'em when you remove the clap from (4).
- 01:32:496 (3) - If you do this, add a clap here too.
- 01:41:587 (1,1,1) - d k d -> k d k. It should look like kkk d k in the end.
- 01:43:406 (1) - Add finish.
- 01:55:873 (1) - ^
- 01:58:081 (1,1,1,1,2,1) - This doesn't sound good, better try d k k d d d k
- 02:01:198 (1) - same here, you can variate it with d k k k d d k if you want.
- 02:17:821 (1) - delete note, sounds off.
- 02:21:393 (2) - sounds off, move it on the red tick before it.
- 02:21:977 - 02:33:276 - This section is a mess. Reduce you pattern to the simpliest you can think of here. This part is slow and the Instrument in the background pretty dominant. Follow its Rhythm and better ignore the the voice singing then it should be much better~
- 02:34:704 (2,3,1) - Better change to kkk if you want to keep 1/6 here.
- 02:36:263 (1,2,1) - like above just to ddd.
- 02:37:821 (2,3,1) - kkk~
- 02:39:120 (2,3,1) - ^
- 02:40:938 (2,3,1) - ^, change the following to kkk too.
- 02:55:094 (1) - add finish
- 02:57:951 (2,1,2) - change to ddd
- 03:16:393 (4) - change to d

Cool das war alles~

Eine kleine Daumenregel für das Benutzen von 1/6 in Taiko Maps:
Am besten super einfach halten das heißt schön einfarbige Combos benutzen nicht sowas wie kdk ddk kkd etc.
Dann spielt es sich auch immer wesentlich besser wenn darauf ein Farbwechsel kommt, so wie kkk d - k ddd k oder d kkkk d.

Außerdem:
Auch wenn es offiziel erlaubt ist Finish's in 1/3 Streams zu stecken ist das trotzdem immer noch ungern gesehen. Sowas kann man aber immer geschickt vermeiden indem man entweder umliegenden Noten entfernt. Klingt meistens ganz gut, so mach ich das immer wenn ich meine das da unbedingt einer Hingehört.

Insgesamt eine ganz nette Taiko, mit einigen Ecken und Kanten zwar, aber durchaus spielbar.
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Ylinestra44

DarkDunskin wrote:

Yli hat nach nem Taiko mod gefragt~

[Yli's Taiko Oni]

Make sure Kiai Time is equal to the other diffs. Isn't taiko an exception?

Center Circle Size and Approach Rate, because otherwise it leads to a higher star rating and gives more score which gives players
of this map an advantage to other Oni's etc. I believe it's also written in the Taiko mapping Rules. Done

- 00:25:484 (1) - Add finish. Done
- 00:50:419 (2,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I'd suggest to remove those finishs and turn them into k's since there's no need for that in the Background drum. Done
This d K Pattern is nice idea but causes a bit trouble in the 5-beat-streams. d K d d D - is a no go and d k d k K isn't beautiful too. You could make it better playiable in deleting 00:50:159 (1) - and 00:51:717 (1) - though. If you choose this way you should the clap on 00:50:289 (1) - too.
- 00:59:769 (2) - Remove finish. Done
- 01:01:328 (1) - ^ Done
- 01:12:237 (2,3,1) - Stay on D D K here please. Done
- 01:31:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be 1/6 actually (listen to the song on 25%) but you can keep 'em when you remove the clap from (4). Done
- 01:32:496 (3) - If you do this, add a clap here too. Done
- 01:41:587 (1,1,1) - d k d -> k d k. It should look like kkk d k in the end. Done
- 01:43:406 (1) - Add finish. Done
- 01:55:873 (1) - ^ Done
- 01:58:081 (1,1,1,1,2,1) - This doesn't sound good, better try d k k d d d k Tbh, I don't get it.
- 02:01:198 (1) - same here, you can variate it with d k k k d d k if you want. Same here
- 02:17:821 (1) - delete note, sounds off. Done
- 02:21:393 (2) - sounds off, move it on the red tick before it. Done
- 02:21:977 - 02:33:276 - This section is a mess. Reduce you pattern to the simpliest you can think of here. This part is slow and the Instrument in the background pretty dominant. Follow its Rhythm and better ignore the the voice singing then it should be much better~ Decreased the count of notes as much as possible - maybe too less now, but well.
- 02:34:704 (2,3,1) - Better change to kkk if you want to keep 1/6 here. Done
- 02:36:263 (1,2,1) - like above just to ddd. Done
- 02:37:821 (2,3,1) - kkk~ Done
- 02:39:120 (2,3,1) - ^ Done
- 02:40:938 (2,3,1) - ^, change the following to kkk t Doneoo.
- 02:55:094 (1) - add finish Done
- 02:57:951 (2,1,2) - change to ddd Done
- 03:16:393 (4) - change to d Done

Cool das war alles~

Eine kleine Daumenregel für das Benutzen von 1/6 in Taiko Maps:
Am besten super einfach halten das heißt schön einfarbige Combos benutzen nicht sowas wie kdk ddk kkd etc.
Dann spielt es sich auch immer wesentlich besser wenn darauf ein Farbwechsel kommt, so wie kkk d - k ddd k oder d kkkk d.

Außerdem:
Auch wenn es offiziel erlaubt ist Finish's in 1/3 Streams zu stecken ist das trotzdem immer noch ungern gesehen. Sowas kann man aber immer geschickt vermeiden indem man entweder umliegenden Noten entfernt. Klingt meistens ganz gut, so mach ich das immer wenn ich meine das da unbedingt einer Hingehört.

Insgesamt eine ganz nette Taiko, mit einigen Ecken und Kanten zwar, aber durchaus spielbar.
Download: Tristam - Follow Me (GamerX4life) [Yli's Taiko Oni].osu
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

Twice wrote:



[General]

Close the countdown? No

[Easy]

no problem

[Normal]

HP-1
AR-1 its easy enough

03:05:613-(4) overlap with 03:06:003-(1) fixed

[Hard]

HP+1? No

[Insane]

I think you should check the ds one more times by yourself.
the ds is confusion. ok


Sorry for this short mod，except Insane diff have some problem，the other diffs are good :) thanks

thx for mod
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi~

Easy
You need more system in mapping
00:30:548 (3) - remove clap from the end
00:33:665 (3,1) - 2 grids left
01:19:250 (1,2,3) - ^
01:30:938 - miss note there, prolong spinner i think
02:19:639 (4) - little hard rythm, remove this circle, add reverse there 02:18:471 (3) - and spacing
03:13:795 - soft sounds there
03:21:587 (3) - finish

Normal
AR = 4
01:25:484 (4,5,1,2,3) - try this:
SPOILER
01:29:380 - soft sounds
01:30:938 (1,2,3,4) - try this:
SPOILER
03:05:613 (4) - stack it with 03:06:003 (1) - this slider, it will be better for difficulty
03:21:587 - finish there

Hard
Whistles in the beginnin' sounds ugly, if i woud be on your place i will be remove them, buut..do the volume lower, okay
01:04:834 - add green section with 20% volume and 01:05:224 - 35% there
01:24:704 (1,2) - try this:
SPOILER
01:50:808 (7) - new combo
01:54:315 - soft
01:56:263 - same problem with the whistles, but there they sounds more ugly, remove them
03:13:893 - soft

Insane
Whistle sounds, yeah
01:04:834 - 20%
01:05:224 - 35%
01:12:107 (9) - new there and 01:13:016 (1) - remove there
01:16:912 - soft
01:20:029 (4) - will be better if you:
  • 01:20:419 (5) - remove it
    01:20:029 - section with 0.75 speed
    prolong this slider to 01:20:678 and add section with 1.20 speed
01:37:042 (8,9) - it must be symmetrical in center
01:38:730 (7) - same thing with the slider speed
01:41:847 - soft
01:51:198 (5) - slider speed
01:54:315 - soft
01:55:873 - whistles...
03:01:717 (1,2,3) - volume
03:10:678 (4) - slider speed

Good luck
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
Mod

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

Easy
You need more system in mapping
00:30:548 (3) - remove clap from the end Ok
00:33:665 (3,1) - 2 grids left Ok
01:19:250 (1,2,3) - ^ Ok
01:30:938 - miss note there, prolong spinner i think would be to hard
02:19:639 (4) - little hard rythm, remove this circle, add reverse there 02:18:471 (3) - and spacing Ok
03:13:795 - soft sounds there Ok
03:21:587 (3) - finish Ok

Normal
AR = 4 Ok
01:25:484 (4,5,1,2,3) - try this: Ok
SPOILER
01:29:380 - soft sounds Ok
01:30:938 (1,2,3,4) - try this: Ok
SPOILER
03:05:613 (4) - stack it with 03:06:003 (1) - this slider, it will be better for difficulty Ok
03:21:587 - finish there Ok

Hard
Whistles in the beginnin' sounds ugly, if i woud be on your place i will be remove them, buut..do the volume lower, okay
01:04:834 - add green section with 20% volume and 01:05:224 - 35% there Ok
01:24:704 (1,2) - try this: Ok
SPOILER
01:50:808 (7) - new combo Ok
01:54:315 - soft Ok
01:56:263 - same problem with the whistles, but there they sounds more ugly, remove them i removed them
03:13:893 - soft Ok

Insane
Whistle sounds, yeah ^^
01:04:834 - 20% Ok
01:05:224 - 35% Ok
01:12:107 (9) - new there and 01:13:016 (1) - remove there Ok
01:16:912 - soft Ok
01:20:029 (4) - will be better if you:
  • 01:20:419 (5) - remove it
    01:20:029 - section with 0.75 speed
    prolong this slider to 01:20:678 and add section with 1.20 speed
I just prolonged the slider and delete the circle
01:37:042 (8,9) - it must be symmetrical in center fixed
01:38:730 (7) - same thing with the slider speed no
01:41:847 - soft Ok
01:51:198 (5) - slider speed No
01:54:315 - soft Ok
01:55:873 - whistles... i removed them
03:01:717 (1,2,3) - volume Ok
03:10:678 (4) - slider speed No

Good luck thx

thx for mod!
jabberwockey
396 posts
Joined July 2011
jabberwockey
Hi! From my modqueue
Okay first of all state this is a fantastic map :D ~ Star because it's so awesome.
Suggestions are in blue.

[General]
Okay for starters, it's really not recommended by a lot of people to use so many Kiai Times on after another, but since yours is used to great effect, I'm not really sure about this. Ask around about this maybe?
I'm not really sure about using a countdown for this song...
Try out an Offset of 25,480?

[Easy]

02:20:017 - Consider adding a note here?

Honestly there's not much wrong here.

[Normal]

Couldn't find anything wrong.

[Hard]

02:44:171 (8) - This slider doesn't really flow with the song.Consider changing it with a different pattern of notes/sliders?

[Insane]

Intense and awesome diff
Just a question, why are there whistles in this diff but not in any other? It feels odd it's only in this diff.

Sorry for the noob mod but I really couldn't find much wrong at all...

That's all >u< Good luck with this map!
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

Shoily wrote:

Hi! From my modqueue
Okay first of all state this is a fantastic map :D ~ Star because it's so awesome.
Suggestions are in blue.

[General]
Okay for starters, it's really not recommended by a lot of people to use so many Kiai Times on after another, but since yours is used to great effect, I'm not really sure about this. Ask around about this maybe?
I'm not really sure about using a countdown for this song... but there is a long time before the song...
Try out an Offset of 25,480? I will ask some other people about it (i suck at timing)

[Easy]

02:20:017 - Consider adding a note here? Ok

Honestly there's not much wrong here.

[Normal]

Couldn't find anything wrong.

[Hard]

02:44:171 (8) - This slider doesn't really flow with the song.Consider changing it with a different pattern of notes/sliders? Ok

[Insane]

Intense and awesome diff
Just a question, why are there whistles in this diff but not in any other? It feels odd it's only in this diff. I will add them in the other ones

That's all >u< Good luck with this map! thx :)

thx for mod!
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,787 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
\:D/

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General
  1. Wanna remove the .osb? Completely fine if you don't want to, though.
>Easy
  1. 01:43:406 (1) - Place the first anchor point @ (48,208) and the second one at (64,280)? The current curve doesn't look good, and I'm sure this isn't intentional.
>Normal
  1. 02:18:081 (2,3) - This... doesn't really look good. Make it so that (2) encircles (3)?
>Insane
  1. AR-1? AR8 makes this diff FAR more playable, IMO.
  2. 01:09:509 (2) - This slider is covered by 01:08:471 (2,3)'s hitbursts and made it pretty hard to read this. Fine with it?
Wow. I thought that your previous mapset is already great enough, but this one is AWESOME \:D/ Also, Hard's fine in my eyes.

Good luck on the way 8-)
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
(lol the combo showing d/k is completely wrong but that doesn't matter for me...)

-remove countdown
-remove letterbox during breaks

00:32:756 - the tone of vocal sounds like kdkdk
00:37:432 - dkkkd
00:45:224 - kdkdk like 0:32
00:49:899 - dkkkd like 0:37
00:58:990 - no accent here so remove finish
01:05:224 - remove slider because 1) streams does not fit with long vocals. 2) This is a 1/3 beat based song and 1/4 based slider does not fit with it. 3) 1/6 slider is not suitable too.
01:17:691 - ^
01:30:159 - ^ [remove all slider and I won't repeat again]
01:32:886 - this duplet sounds odd without any supporting rhythm from the music.
01:56:847 - this section you mixed 1/3 and 1/2 quite a lot, but sometimes their connection is not so good, i.e. it's empty and odd between the two parts
02:07:172 - such mixing is totally discouraged and does not sounds well with music orz
03:17:302 - similar to 1:32
03:25:094 - sounds like at the same tone with the previous note so D.

In overall, note sticks to the tone well but there're several problems: 1/6 are not really necessary for me, and they're not likely in the right position too. Also you might want a better connection between different phrases to deliver a smooth taiko diff.
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

Hinsvar wrote:

\:D/

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General
  1. Wanna remove the .osb? Completely fine if you don't want to, though.
ok

>Easy
  1. 01:43:406 (1) - Place the first anchor point @ (48,208) and the second one at (64,280)? The current curve doesn't look good, and I'm sure this isn't intentional.
I fixed it with other Sliders

>Normal
  1. 02:18:081 (2,3) - This... doesn't really look good. Make it so that (2) encircles (3)?
I tried to do it

>Insane
  1. AR-1? AR8 makes this diff FAR more playable, IMO. Ok
  2. 01:09:509 (2) - This slider is covered by 01:08:471 (2,3)'s hitbursts and made it pretty hard to read this. Fine with it?
Ok it tried to make it better

Wow. I thought that your previous mapset is already great enough, but this one is AWESOME \:D/ Also, Hard's fine in my eyes. wow thank you :)

thx for mod!
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Ylinestra44

wmfchris wrote:

Taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
(lol the combo showing d/k is completely wrong but that doesn't matter for me...)

-remove countdown Done
-remove letterbox during breaks Done

00:32:756 - the tone of vocal sounds like kdkdk Done
00:37:432 - dkkkd Done
00:45:224 - kdkdk like 0:32 Done
00:49:899 - dkkkd like 0:37 Done
00:58:990 - no accent here so remove finish Done
01:05:224 - remove slider because 1) streams does not fit with long vocals. 2) This is a 1/3 beat based song and 1/4 based slider does not fit with it. 3) 1/6 slider is not suitable too. Removed
01:17:691 - ^ ^
01:30:159 - ^ [remove all slider and I won't repeat again] Done
01:32:886 - this duplet sounds odd without any supporting rhythm from the music. Removed
01:56:847 - this section you mixed 1/3 and 1/2 quite a lot, but sometimes their connection is not so good, i.e. it's empty and odd between the two parts Now I know it's bad. As this is my first Mapset-Taiko-Diff and I can't play Taiko at all, I would prefer some constructive criticism, because things like that don't help me at all, sorry
02:07:172 - such mixing is totally discouraged and does not sounds well with music orz Deleted the the 1/8 notes
03:17:302 - similar to 1:32 Done
03:25:094 - sounds like at the same tone with the previous note so D. Done

In overall, note sticks to the tone well but there're several problems: 1/6 are not really necessary for me, and they're not likely in the right position too. Also you might want a better connection between different phrases to deliver a smooth taiko diff.
Download: Tristam - Follow Me (GamerX4life) [Yli's Taiko Oni].osu
Loctav
Popcorn Fairy
4,496 posts
Joined February 2009
Loctav
As requested by <strong>GamerX4life</strong>
No kds for this!

Taiko BG
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life

Loctav wrote:

As requested by <strong>GamerX4life</strong>
No kds for this!

Taiko BG
Vielen Dank!
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Cygnus
  • General
  1. Inconsistent Kiai. Not a huge problem, but I think it's better to make them all consistent.

  2. Check "Letterbox During Breaks" on Taiko to make it consistent with the other diffs.

  • Easy
  1. Seems fine. But I'd bump OD, AR, and HP +1 if i we're you.

  • Normal
  1. 00:37:951 (3) - Try to make this slider more wavy for better gameplay. (:

  2. 00:59:769 (1,3) - These slider too. Fix the wave.

  3. 01:24:704 (3) - One grid up. Nazi ~

  4. bump AR and OD +1.

  • Hard
  1. 00:27:432 (6) - I don't know if you're trying to make a blanket here, but fixing this little blanket would do.

  2. HP Drain, OD +1.

  • Insane
  1. You got some Unsnapped Slider Ends.
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

Philippines wrote:

  • General
  1. Inconsistent Kiai. Not a huge problem, but I think it's better to make them all consistent.

  2. Check "Letterbox During Breaks" on Taiko to make it consistent with the other diffs.
I will disable it on all other diffs

  • Easy
  1. Seems fine. But I'd bump OD, AR, and HP +1 if i we're you.
All - Ok

  • Normal
  1. 00:37:951 (3) - Try to make this slider more wavy for better gameplay. (: Ok

  2. 00:59:769 (1,3) - These slider too. Fix the wave. Ok

  3. 01:24:704 (3) - One grid up. Nazi ~ Ok

  4. bump AR and OD +1.
No

  • Hard
  1. 00:27:432 (6) - I don't know if you're trying to make a blanket here, but fixing this little blanket would do. No

  2. HP Drain, OD +1.
HP Drain - ok, OD - no

  • Insane
  1. You got some Unsnapped Slider Ends.
fixed

thx for mod!
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Disable countdown in all diffs?

[Normal]
The diff is good, not much to say.
01:18:471 (1) - the reverse arrow is partly hidden under spinner-osu, try to avoid this

[Insane]
In Kiai section, normal slider body whistle fit the song imo.
00:51:198 (2) - use 30% here and 00:51:587 (3) - use 25% here? 15% is too weak
01:07:561 (9) - add body whistle?
01:13:795 (6) - ^
01:15:354 (6,7) - ^
01:26:263 (6) - ^
01:19:250 (2,3,4) - ^ and many other sliders
02:00:012 (5,6) - unsnapped sliders

That's all I can find. GL~
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Disable countdown in all diffs? Ok you are the third person, who say that so: fixed

[Normal]
The diff is good, not much to say.
01:18:471 (1) - the reverse arrow is partly hidden under spinner-osu, try to avoid this Ok

[Insane]
In Kiai section, normal slider body whistle fit the song imo.
00:51:198 (2) - use 30% here and 00:51:587 (3) - use 25% here? 15% is too weak Ok
01:07:561 (9) - add body whistle? ok
01:13:795 (6) - ^ Ok
01:15:354 (6,7) - ^ Ok
01:26:263 (6) - ^ Ok
01:19:250 (2,3,4) - ^ and many other sliders Ok
02:00:012 (5,6) - unsnapped sliders fixed

That's all I can find. GL~

thx for mod!
Kokatsu
504 posts
Joined August 2011
Kokatsu
Taikomod from my queue~

Songsetup:
Increase drain to 6
Increase od to 6

Timing:
Maybe add speedup for the kiaipart?
SPOILER
03:02:886 - Velo to x1.04

Notes:
using 1/6-BSD is allowed, however, i would not recommend you to use 1/6 at all
01:25:743 (1) - remove
01:28:211 (1) - why is this kat? should be don
01:37:042 (3) - most players won't be able to get this big don (3), either make (2) kat or (3) small
01:43:795 (3,4) - why do you swap to 1/4? 1/3 still fits the part and isn't that confusing, change it.
01:44:574 (1,2) - ^
01:39:250 (2) - remove?
01:42:496 (1) - move to 01:42:626 -
01:43:016 - add kat (feels quiet empty if you leave that part out all the time..)
01:43:276 - ^
01:44:672 (2) - on 1/4 again, pls change
01:49:509 (2,3) - don, bigdon, as mentioned above
01:52:756 (1,2,1) - the kat's should be don's and vice versa
01:58:795 (2) - move to 01:58:860 -
02:01:912 (2) - move to 02:01:977 -
02:18:665 (2) - move to 02:18:730 -
02:24:509 (1) - kat would fit better here
02:33:146 (1,2) - don, bigdon, as mentioned above
02:45:678 (1,2) - ^
02:51:847 (2,3) - ^
03:12:626 (1) - should be big don
03:16:782 (2,3) - don, bigdon as mentioned above
03:21:458 (2,3) - ^

Hope I could help~
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Ylinestra44

Kokatsu wrote:

Taikomod from my queue~

Songsetup:
Increase drain to 6
Increase od to 6
I was told to center all settings

Timing:
Maybe add speedup for the kiaipart?
SPOILER
03:02:886 - Velo to x1.04 Done

Notes:
using 1/6-BSD is allowed, however, i would not recommend you to use 1/6 at all
01:25:743 (1) - remove Done
01:28:211 (1) - why is this kat? should be don Done
01:37:042 (3) - most players won't be able to get this big don (3), either make (2) kat or (3) small Done
01:43:795 (3,4) - why do you swap to 1/4? 1/3 still fits the part and isn't that confusing, change it. I swapped to 1/8, and the bass needs 1/8, not 1/3
01:44:574 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:39:250 (2) - remove? Done
01:42:496 (1) - move to 01:42:626 - Done
01:43:016 - add kat (feels quiet empty if you leave that part out all the time..) Done
01:43:276 - ^ Done
01:44:672 (2) - on 1/4 again, pls change Same here
01:49:509 (2,3) - don, bigdon, as mentioned above Done
01:52:756 (1,2,1) - the kat's should be don's and vice versa Disaggree
01:58:795 (2) - move to 01:58:860 - Disaggree
02:01:912 (2) - move to 02:01:977 - ^
02:18:665 (2) - move to 02:18:730 - ^
02:24:509 (1) - kat would fit better here Done
02:33:146 (1,2) - don, bigdon, as mentioned above Done
02:45:678 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:51:847 (2,3) - ^ ^
03:12:626 (1) - should be big don Done
03:16:782 (2,3) - don, bigdon as mentioned above Done
03:21:458 (2,3) - ^ ^

Hope I could help~
Download: Tristam - Follow Me (GamerX4life) [Yli's Taiko Oni].osu
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
01:55:873 (1) - I feel like this note should make a louder noise than it is
Overall, several of these notes could use at least enough volume to give feedback on whether or not I hit them. Barely detectable is fine, but I can't detect half of them at all X.X The one place I could hear you using whistles and claps was exquisite and I'd really like to see more of that

[Normal]
01:18:471 (1) - too soon after too short a spinner for this difficulty level
01:55:873 (1) - ^
03:15:354 (1) - ^
03:02:886 - 03:13:406 nice overall pattern

[Hard]
01:15:354 (7) - this slider shape is just weird rather than attractive or fitting
01:28:600 (8) - stack under fading 5. Honestly it's kind of hidden and if you'd rather move it out from under all the combobursts that'd work too
01:58:211 (5) - nice
02:02:886 (4) - again, the slight turn at the beginning feels weird rather than fitting
Overall, you've done a fairly good job of using slider shape to capture the mechanical tone of the music, just a few places where you missed the feeling. Very nice map.

[Taiko]
**disclaimer: I am still learning to mod Taiko maps**
01:05:224 - I feel like there should be a hit here
01:06:977 - ^
01:17:691 - ^
01:30:159 - ^
I guess it boils down to, you seem to be really good at not having a note on the downbeat at the end of a stream and I feel like that is unintuitive
01:31:717 (1,2,3) - this feels forced. Both this and the gap 4 combos later.
01:58:081 (1) - was this intended to be a clap?
02:34:704 (1,2,3) - also feels forced

[Insane]
00:50:808 (1,2,3) - D: you're evil!
01:04:445 (1,2,3,4) - wow. Really really well done on the placement here. Mind = blown
01:33:276 (1) - either stack under 5 or unstack completely from 5
01:34:055 (1,2,3,4) - xO so evil omg
02:46:522 (2) - feels like it should be farther away from 1
03:08:990 (8) - line this up with 7 please


This map is fucking beautiful. If this map were a person I'd be asking it for its number. I might seek a faster re-BATship just to bubble this map.

Seriously, once you look over my map talk to me or to a BAT asap about getting it ranked.
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Ylinestra44

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Taiko]
**disclaimer: I am still learning to mod Taiko maps**
01:05:224 - I feel like there should be a hit here There was earlier a slider, but he was "supposed" to be deleted. Either way, added a note
01:06:977 - ^ ^
01:17:691 - ^ ^
01:30:159 - ^ ^
I guess it boils down to, you seem to be really good at not having a note on the downbeat at the end of a stream and I feel like that is unintuitive
01:31:717 (1,2,3) - this feels forced. Both this and the gap 4 combos later. The 1/6-Triplet stays, but the gap got filled
01:58:081 (1) - was this intended to be a clap? Not sure. I messed a bit with the colours~ Kept it as a Don
02:34:704 (1,2,3) - also feels forced Same as before
Download: Tristam - Follow Me (GamerX4life) [Yli's Taiko Oni].osu
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
01:55:873 (1) - I feel like this note should make a louder noise than it is
Overall, several of these notes could use at least enough volume to give feedback on whether or not I hit them. Barely detectable is fine, but I can't detect half of them at all X.X The one place I could hear you using whistles and claps was exquisite and I'd really like to see more of that I tried to fix that

[Normal]
01:18:471 (1) - too soon after too short a spinner for this difficulty level fixed
01:55:873 (1) - ^ fixed
03:15:354 (1) - ^ fixed (delete a note)
03:02:886 - 03:13:406 nice overall pattern thx

[Hard]
01:15:354 (7) - this slider shape is just weird rather than attractive or fitting Ok i create a round slider instead
01:28:600 (8) - stack under fading 5. Honestly it's kind of hidden and if you'd rather move it out from under all the combobursts that'd work too Ok i stack them
01:58:211 (5) - nice thx
02:02:886 (4) - again, the slight turn at the beginning feels weird rather than fitting
Overall, you've done a fairly good job of using slider shape to capture the mechanical tone of the music, just a few places where you missed the feeling. Very nice map. yay

[Insane]
00:50:808 (1,2,3) - D: you're evil! I think it fits to the music :D
01:04:445 (1,2,3,4) - wow. Really really well done on the placement here. Mind = blown thx
01:33:276 (1) - either stack under 5 or unstack completely from 5 Ok
01:34:055 (1,2,3,4) - xO so evil omg xD
02:46:522 (2) - feels like it should be farther away from 1 Ok
03:08:990 (8) - line this up with 7 please I tried to fix this


This map is fucking beautiful. If this map were a person I'd be asking it for its number. I might seek a faster re-BATship just to bubble this map. Oh thank you :)

Seriously, once you look over my map talk to me or to a BAT asap about getting it ranked.

thank you for your mod!
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani


Insane:
00:37:172 (6) - The slightest of unsymmetricals
02:42:626 (7) - ^

Hard:
00:47:302 (1) - Maybe raise the last sliderpoint and move the 3rd one a bit down?~
01:31:717 (2) - Add clap on beginning of slider
01:58:211 (5) - ^
02:18:471 (6) - ^

Normal:
01:18:471 - add note?
03:15:354 - ^

Easy:
01:30:947 - Add note?
01:31:328 (1) - Add clap on end of slider

Moe! >3<~
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

CDFA wrote:


xD

Insane:
00:37:172 (6) - The slightest of unsymmetricals fixed
02:42:626 (7) - ^ fixed

Hard:
00:47:302 (1) - Maybe raise the last sliderpoint and move the 3rd one a bit down?~ Ok
01:31:717 (2) - Add clap on beginning of slider Ok
01:58:211 (5) - ^ Ok
02:18:471 (6) - ^ Ok

Normal:
01:18:471 - add note? I think so, but other modders say that the time between Spinner and note is too short
03:15:354 - ^ ^

Easy:
01:30:947 - Add note? would be too hard for easy
01:31:328 (1) - Add clap on end of slider Ok

Moe! >3<~

thx for mod!
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
Sorry, I was going to mod this ...
But the song ... was really hurting my ears
So I couldn't mod this, sorry ;_;
Yuzeyun
7,622 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
Caution ! Something in this post has been typoed. LOL

[General]
Nothing !

[Easy]
OD-1 ? I'm very unsure as it soes not realyl look good.

You use too much kiai imo, if you use it on the second part , starting at 01:30:938 and finishing at 01:54:315
00:28:600 (1) - Down by 1 grid ? Small spacing issue.
00:29:769 (2) - This should be moved as well.
00:31:717 (1) - (136,164) - As 00:29:769 (2,3,1) - will be evenly spaced.
00:39:120 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - Keep only odd numbers' circles ?
00:46:133 (4,5,6) - I would've placed them like 00:43:406 (1,2) - but it's up to you
00:52:367 (2) - NC ?
01:25:484 (3,1) - (1,2), NCs
01:33:665 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Odd numbers
01:55:873 - More volume please ?

[Normal]
CS-1, OD-1
Same as Easy about Kiai.

01:16:912 (1,1) - PLEASE. Make these things closer please. It's a easy miss/break.
Some of your sliders aren't that good-looking, I mean they're not very symmetrical.
01:55:873 - More volume please ?

[Hard]
Kiai, Volume.

02:40:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This combo is longer than the two others. Actually it's as long as the two others combined.

[Insane]
Kiai, Volume.

01:26:263 (6) - Why don't you just put a inherited section to slow it down ?

[Yli's Taiko]
I played it and felt the non 1/3 multipliers and some 1/6s slightly bad though overall this is a nice diffs.
01:30:938 - Kiai start
01:31:782 (2) - Delete
01:38:795 (2,3) - ^ , it doesn't really fit at all
01:41:328 (1,1,2,3,1,1) - {1/3}dkkkd
01:43:795 (2,3,4,1) - 1/3(Musically wise it's not really hearable that it's the same as the next)
01:48:146 (2) - ^
01:50:678 (2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - {1/3}kddkddkd
01:55:094 - +d
01:58:795 (2) - next purp. tick
02:01:912 (2) - next purp. tick
02:01:912 (2,1) - {1/3}kd
02:04:315 (3,4,1,1,2,1) - {1/3}kk_dd_kd
02:11:328 - +k
02:16:003 (2,1) - {1/3}kd
02:18:665 (2) - next purp. tick
02:24:509 (4) - d
02:21:393 (2) - ^
02:22:951 (2) - ^
02:26:068 (2) - ^
02:27:626 (2) - ^
02:29:185 (2) - ^
02:32:886 - +k?
02:54:964 (3,1) - {1/3}kd
02:58:016 (2) - delete
02:57:691 (1,1,1,2,1) - {1/3}kdkkd
03:16:198 (2) - del
03:17:302 - +note?

tbh your mapping style reminds me of mine. Nice taiko overall as I said, but some of the 1/6s that don't fit makes it weird.
The BG is fine o/
Ylinestra44
547 posts
Joined December 2009
Ylinestra44
Fixed everything in my diff~

Download: Tristam - Follow Me (GamerX4life) [Yli's Taiko Oni].osu
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

_Gezo_ wrote:

Caution ! Something in this post has been typoed. LOL

[General]
Nothing !

[Easy]
OD-1 ? I'm very unsure as it soes not realyl look good. Ok

You use too much kiai imo, if you use it on the second part , starting at 01:30:938 and finishing at 01:54:315 I think its ok like it is
00:28:600 (1) - Down by 1 grid ? Small spacing issue. Ok
00:29:769 (2) - This should be moved as well. I tried
00:31:717 (1) - (136,164) - As 00:29:769 (2,3,1) - will be evenly spaced. Ok
00:39:120 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - Keep only odd numbers' circles ? I don't know what you mean...
00:46:133 (4,5,6) - I would've placed them like 00:43:406 (1,2) - but it's up to you agree
00:52:367 (2) - NC ? Ok
01:25:484 (3,1) - (1,2), NCs Ok
01:33:665 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Odd numbers same
01:55:873 - More volume please ? Ok

[Normal]
CS-1, OD-1 CS no - OD ok
Same as Easy about Kiai. I will give it some thought

01:16:912 (1,1) - PLEASE. Make these things closer please. Oh man every modder says something other about it -.-
It's a easy miss/break.
Some of your sliders aren't that good-looking, I mean they're not very symmetrical.I will try to make some of them better
01:55:873 - More volume please ? Ok

[Hard]
Kiai, Volume. ^

02:40:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This combo is longer than the two others. Actually it's as long as the two others combined. Oh i forgot to add new combo

[Insane]
Kiai, Volume. ^

01:26:263 (6) - Why don't you just put a inherited section to slow it down ? agree

The BG is fine o/ thx

thx for mod!
kosiga
1,548 posts
Joined May 2011
kosiga
Hi~ GamerX4life :)

from my queue~ ( sorry for late..orz

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. fine
[Easy]
  1. 00:25:484 (1) - Does not fit a little whistle of the beginning to me o.o so add finish instead to whistle to start of the slider is better imo.
  2. 00:32:886 (2) - spacing too far.(1.17x) plz use DS1.0x
  3. 00:43:406 (1) - remove NC and 00:44:185 (3) - add NC
  4. 00:58:211 (1) - The beginning of the slider, finish is more fit than the whistle x.x
  5. 01:04:445 (4) - add NC and remove whistle to start of the slider. dose not fit a little imo
  6. 01:16:912 (1) - add finish
  7. 01:29:380 (1) - Spinner is a little short in easy and 01:30:938 - Here had better put something. because you put kiaitime here. so http://puu.sh/yv9C
    ( I think enough in the same pattern 01:16:912 (1,1,2) )
  8. 01:52:756 (4) - add NC ?
  9. 02:21:198 - Unnecessary green line
  10. 02:36:393 (5) - add NC ?
  11. 02:45:743 (1) - same 00:58:211 (1)
  12. 02:48:860 (1) - ^
  13. 02:58:211 (5) - add NC and 02:58:990 (1) - remove NC and 02:59:769 (2) - add NC
  14. 03:18:471 (4) - add NC and 03:20:029 (1) - remove NC and 03:21:587 (3) - add NC and 03:22:367 (1) - remove NC
[Normal]
  1. OD +1 or 2 ( too low imo )
  2. 00:25:484 (1) - same easy
  3. 00:31:717 (5) - add NC and 00:33:276 (1) - remove NC and 00:34:834 (3) - add NC and 00:36:393 (1) - remove NC and 00:37:951 (3) - add NC. ( It is recommended that you put the NC to the rhythm rather than the number of combo :P
  4. 00:44:185 (5) - add NC and 00:45:743 (1) - remove NC and 00:47:691 (4) - add NC and 00:48:860 (1) - remove NC and 00:50:419 (3) - add NC.
  5. 00:51:977 (1) - remove whistle
  6. 00:58:990 (6) - add NC and 00:59:769 (1) - remove NC
  7. 01:12:237 (5) - add NC and 01:13:016 (1) - remove NC
  8. 01:18:471 (1) - add finish
  9. 01:29:380 (6) - add NC ?
  10. 01:30:938 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
  11. 01:43:406 (1) - ^
  12. 01:46:522 (5) - add NC and 01:48:081 (1) - remove NC and 01:49:639 (3) - add NC
  13. 01:55:873(x) - Here had better put something. because you put kiaitime here.
  14. 02:33:276 - Unnecessary green line
  15. 02:36:782 - this green line maybe move to 02:36:393 ?
  16. 02:45:743 (1) - The beginning of the slider, finish is more fit than the whistle x.x
  17. 03:15:354 (1) - add finish
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:484 (1) - same easy
  2. 00:51:977 (1) - remove whistle
  3. 00:58:211 (3) - finish is more fit than the whistle >:(
  4. 01:09:120 (5) - add NC and 01:10:548 (1) - remove NC and 01:12:237 (5) - add NC and 01:13:406 (1) - remove NC and 01:15:224 (6) - add NC
  5. 01:27:821 (7) - add NC
  6. 01:59:380 (6) - add NC ?
  7. 02:03:535 (5) - ^
  8. 02:36:393 (7) - add NC and 02:36:782 (1) - remove NC
  9. 02:36:782 - this green line maybe move to 02:36:393 ?
  10. 02:39:509 (6) - add NC and 02:40:289 (1) - remove NC
  11. 02:43:406 (7) - end has better 02:43:795. so my suggestion: http://puu.sh/yvGQ ( same rhythm 02:42:496 (5,6) )
[Insane]
  1. HD +1 or 2 ( it is better higher than hard diff )
  2. 00:25:484 (1) - same easy
  3. 00:28:600 (7) - add NC and 00:29:639 (1) - remove NC
  4. 00:31:717 (8) - add NC and 00:32:496 (1) - remove NC
  5. 00:34:445 (7) - add NC ?
  6. 00:51:977 (1) - remove whistle to start of the slider
  7. 01:41:847 (5) - add NC and 01:43:016 (1) - remove NC and 01:43:276 (2) - add NC ?
  8. 02:18:471 (1,2,3) - Does not match the rhythm a little. Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/yvN5
  9. 02:45:743 (8) - remove whistle
The rhythm is almost no problem ;)

It is all my suggestion. Please do not throw the kudosu if useless ;)

Good map & Star~☆ :)
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life
SPOILER

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ GamerX4life :)

from my queue~ ( sorry for late..orz no problem

here my mod ~

[General]
  1. fine
[Easy]
  1. 00:25:484 (1) - Does not fit a little whistle of the beginning to me o.o so add finish instead to whistle to start of the slider is better imo. Ok
  2. 00:32:886 (2) - spacing too far.(1.17x) plz use DS1.0x agree
  3. 00:43:406 (1) - remove NC and 00:44:185 (3) - add NC agree
  4. 00:58:211 (1) - The beginning of the slider, finish is more fit than the whistle x.x agree
  5. 01:04:445 (4) - add NC and remove whistle to start of the slider. dose not fit a little imo agree
  6. 01:16:912 (1) - add finish agree
  7. 01:29:380 (1) - Spinner is a little short in easy and 01:30:938 - Here had better put something. because you put kiaitime here. so http://puu.sh/yv9C agree
    ( I think enough in the same pattern 01:16:912 (1,1,2) )
  8. 01:52:756 (4) - add NC ? agree
  9. 02:21:198 - Unnecessary green line delete
  10. 02:36:393 (5) - add NC ? agree
  11. 02:45:743 (1) - same 00:58:211 (1) agree
  12. 02:48:860 (1) - ^ agree
  13. 02:58:211 (5) - add NC and 02:58:990 (1) - remove NC and 02:59:769 (2) - add NC agree
  14. 03:18:471 (4) - add NC and 03:20:029 (1) - remove NC and 03:21:587 (3) - add NC and 03:22:367 (1) - remove NC agree
[Normal]
  1. OD +1 or 2 ( too low imo ) ok +1
  2. 00:25:484 (1) - same easy agree
  3. 00:31:717 (5) - add NC and 00:33:276 (1) - remove NC and 00:34:834 (3) - add NC and 00:36:393 (1) - remove NC and 00:37:951 (3) - add NC. ( It is recommended that you put the NC to the rhythm rather than the number of combo :P agree
  4. 00:44:185 (5) - add NC and 00:45:743 (1) - remove NC and 00:47:691 (4) - add NC and 00:48:860 (1) - remove NC and 00:50:419 (3) - add NC. agree
  5. 00:51:977 (1) - remove whistle No
  6. 00:58:990 (6) - add NC and 00:59:769 (1) - remove NC agree
  7. 01:12:237 (5) - add NC and 01:13:016 (1) - remove NC agree
  8. 01:18:471 (1) - add finish agree
  9. 01:29:380 (6) - add NC ? agree
  10. 01:30:938 (1) - add finish to start of the slider agree
  11. 01:43:406 (1) - ^ agree
  12. 01:46:522 (5) - add NC and 01:48:081 (1) - remove NC and 01:49:639 (3) - add NC agree
  13. 01:55:873(x) - Here had better put something. because you put kiaitime here. i prolonged the spinner and add a circle instead of the slider
  14. 02:33:276 - Unnecessary green line delete
  15. 02:36:782 - this green line maybe move to 02:36:393 ? fixed
  16. 02:45:743 (1) - The beginning of the slider, finish is more fit than the whistle x.x agree
  17. 03:15:354 (1) - add finish agree
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:484 (1) - same easy same
  2. 00:51:977 (1) - remove whistle No
  3. 00:58:211 (3) - finish is more fit than the whistle >:( I suck at hitsounds so pls don't be angry :(
  4. 01:09:120 (5) - add NC and 01:10:548 (1) - remove NC and 01:12:237 (5) - add NC and 01:13:406 (1) - remove NC and 01:15:224 (6) - add NC agree
  5. 01:27:821 (7) - add NC agree
  6. 01:59:380 (6) - add NC ? agree
  7. 02:03:535 (5) - ^ agree
  8. 02:36:393 (7) - add NC and 02:36:782 (1) - remove NC agree
  9. 02:36:782 - this green line maybe move to 02:36:393 ? agree
  10. 02:39:509 (6) - add NC and 02:40:289 (1) - remove NC agree
  11. 02:43:406 (7) - end has better 02:43:795. so my suggestion: http://puu.sh/yvGQ ( same rhythm 02:42:496 (5,6) ) ok i used your rhytm
[Insane]
  1. HD +1 or 2 ( it is better higher than hard diff ) +1 ok
  2. 00:25:484 (1) - same easy same
  3. 00:28:600 (7) - add NC and 00:29:639 (1) - remove NC agree
  4. 00:31:717 (8) - add NC and 00:32:496 (1) - remove NC agree
  5. 00:34:445 (7) - add NC ? agree
  6. 00:51:977 (1) - remove whistle to start of the slider No
  7. 01:41:847 (5) - add NC and 01:43:016 (1) - remove NC and 01:43:276 (2) - add NC ? agree
  8. 02:18:471 (1,2,3) - Does not match the rhythm a little. Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/yvN5 I used your rhytm
  9. 02:45:743 (8) - remove whistle No
The rhythm is almost no problem ;)

It is all my suggestion. Please do not throw the kudosu if useless ;)

Good map & Star~☆ :)

thx for mod!
Minato_old
7 posts
Joined May 2012
Minato_old
i love this song <3333 >:(
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
01:31:717 (1,2) - line these up please

[Normal]
lookin good

[Hard]
wonderful~

[Taiko]
good

[Insane]
02:36:263 (5) - feels weird
02:37:821 (5) - ^
02:40:938 (3) - ^
02:44:055 (4) - ^
03:13:665 (4) - line this up with 2,3


:o get back to me on this as soon as you can and i will blow bubbles at you!
GamerX4life
589 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
GamerX4life

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
01:31:717 (1,2) - line these up please

[Normal]
lookin good

[Hard]
wonderful~

[Taiko]
good

[Insane]
02:36:263 (5) - feels weird
02:37:821 (5) - ^
02:40:938 (3) - ^
02:44:055 (4) - ^
03:13:665 (4) - line this up with 2,3


:o get back to me on this as soon as you can and i will blow bubbles at you!
fixed everything~
thx for mod :)
Low
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Joined July 2011
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Before you bubble this -

Insane

01:09:899 (3) - This type of slider has questionable rankability as of recently.
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