JauiPlaY wrote:

Hi~
Some suggestions:

[General]
Use 1024x768 background please. I don't know why we have to but rules are rules. Ok

[Easy]
No major problems, but there're lots of useless timing point. Check and remove them.

[Normal]
No major problems, but there're lots of useless timing point. Check and remove them.
And to be honest I felt no different between Easy and this one...both are easy enough.

[Hard]
00:42:483 - Add a note. Ok
00:48:717 - ^ Ok
01:15:211 (6,7,8) - Impressive. ^^
01:28:587 (8) - The overlapping looks bad imo. Ok
01:31:704 (2) - Repeat 1 more time. Ok
02:18:458 (6) - ^ Ok
02:34:302 (4,5) - Extremely weird... fixed
02:37:159 (2) - ^ ^
02:40:535 (2,3) - ^ ^

[Insane]
00:42:224 - Add a note. Ok
00:43:393 (7,8,9,10) - Sounds weird. fixed
01:21:315 (6) - Ctrl+R. Ok

I think that's all. Good luck.

Loctav wrote:

As requested by Ylinestra44

[General]

Taiko uses another kiai time than the default diffs. Think about removing the Kiai from the taiko or adding the kiai times as used in the taiko diff. In general, the standard diffs lack of kiai (just use of this fountains D: ) I won't change it

[Yli's Taiko Oni]

Slider tick rate of 0,5 is unrankable Changed

00:26:639 (3) - don Disaggree
00:26:769 (1) - remove Not removed, but moved to 00:26:899 - and made it a kat
00:34:561 (3) - move to 00:34:432 and make it a don Moved; it is already a don
00:43:912 (2) - move to 00:43:782 Moved
00:47:159 - add don Added
00:47:289 (2) - kat Done
00:57:159 (1) - remove Done
00:57:289 - add kat Done
00:57:548 (1) - remove Done
00:57:678 - add kat Done
00:58:587 (1) - remove finish Done
00:59:367 (1) - ^ Done
00:59:756 (2) - ^ Done
01:00:146 (1) - ^ Done
01:00:535 (1) - ^ Done
01:00:146 (1) - ^ You just wrote that
01:00:535 (1) - ^ ^
01:00:795 (1,1,2,3,1) - remove the 1/6 triplet, do dkkkd ...Done
01:01:704 (1) - remove finish Done
01:04:432 (1) - ^ Done
01:05:211 (3) - unsnapped slider end. end it on 01:05:795 Done
01:05:990 - http://puu.sh/sV19 DDK Done
01:07:159 - http://puu.sh/sV1w Done
01:08:328 - http://puu.sh/sV29 dkkdkkD D K Done
01:12:224 (2) - K K D on the white ticks http://puu.sh/sV3v Done
01:14:302 (1) - remove Done
01:15:341 (1) - D D K on the white ticks http://puu.sh/sV46 Done
01:17:678 (3) - end it on 01:18:263 Done
01:18:458 (4) - D D K on the white ticks http://puu.sh/sV4P Done
01:20:146 (1) - remove Disaggree
01:20:535 (1) - remove Done
01:21:574 (1) - same D D K pattern as before please. Done
01:23:198 (2,3) - remove Done
01:24:691 (1) - D D K Done
01:26:315 (2,3) - remove Done
01:26:769 (1) - remove Done
01:27:808 (1) - do D K K here Done
01:29:432 (2,3) - remove Done
01:30:146 (1) - end it on 01:30:730 Done
01:30:925 (2) - D D [(1/6)kkk]kkddd is fine here Changed
01:34:042 (3) - D D K Done
01:37:159 (1) - D D K Done
01:40:276 (1) - D K K Done
01:42:613 (1) - end it on 01:43:198 Done
01:43:880 (3) - what is that? snap it properly It is snapped with 1/8 snap. For that beat (and the following) 1/8 Snap is required.
01:44:691 (2) - ^ See above
01:45:600 (2) - remove Done
01:46:509 (1) - D D K Done
01:49:626 (3) - D D K Done
01:51:704 (5) - remove Done
01:52:743 (3) - K K D Done
01:55:081 (2) - end it on 01:55:665 Done
01:58:782 (2) - move to 01:58:847 No changes for the moment
02:01:899 (2) - move to 02:01:964 ^
02:07:256 (2) - move to 02:07:289 This and the following is snapped on 1/8, because beat lands there
02:08:035 (1) - move to 02:08:068 ~
02:08:328 (3) - kat Done
02:12:354 (1) - remove Done
02:18:652 (2) - move to 02:18:717 Again no changes for the moment
02:23:717 (2) - move to 02:23:782 ^
02:24:886 (1) - move to 02:24:951 ^
02:26:834 (2) - move to 02:26:899 ^
02:31:120 (1) - move to 02:31:185 ^
02:34:302 (1,1,1,2,3,1) - here, your 1/6 stuff fits, imo D: Finally...
03:01:315 (1) - finish Done
03:01:445 (2) - remove Done
03:01:704 (1) - finish Done
03:02:094 (1) - ^ Done
03:02:873 (1) - D D K Done
03:03:652 - add kat Well, there is already a Kat
03:03:782 - ^ We decided not to do this xD
03:03:912 - add don Done
03:04:042 (1) - kat Disaggree
03:04:951 (1) - remove Done
03:05:990 - D D K Done
03:09:107 - ^ Done
03:10:146 (2) - remove Done
03:11:185 (1) - remove Done
03:12:224 - D K K Done
03:15:341 - D D [(1/6)kkk]kkddd Done
03:18:458 - D D K Done
03:21:574 - D D K Done
03:23:198 (2,3) - remove Done
03:23:782 - add kat Done
03:24:691 - D K K Done
03:25:730 (1) - remove Done
03:25:925 (2) - remove Done

Loctav wrote:

As requested by Ylinestra44

[General]

Taiko uses another kiai time than the default diffs. Think about removing the Kiai from the taiko or adding the kiai times as used in the taiko diff. In general, the standard diffs lack of kiai (just use of this fountains D: )

[Easy]

Many spacings are messed up to due to low grid level. Feel free to perfect this one by rising the grid level and/or deactivating grid snap. Please review the whole diff. A variety beteen 0,98 and 1,05 shouldn't be.

00:52:354 (2,3) - line it up. Ok
01:05:990 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing. Ok
01:09:107 (1,2,3) - ^ Ok
01:19:237 (2,3) - do a 1/1 slider instead? Ok
01:29:367 (1) - the space between the spinner and the prev/next hitobjects is too small. Due to the low AR, the upcoming hitobject is seen too early and appears to be confusing for newcomers. Also, the spinners are WAY TOO short. fixed
01:34:042 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing. fixed
01:40:665 (5,6,7) - ^ fixed
01:43:393 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:54:302 (1) - same issue as before no its fine
01:55:860 (3) - NC Ok
02:00:535 (3,4,6,1) - inconsistent spacing. fixed
02:06:769 (3,4,5,6) - do this: http://puu.sh/sUB3 Ok
02:09:886 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing. fixed
02:13:003 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ fixed
02:20:406 (5,6) - stack them? no
03:01:315 (5,1) - inconsistent spacing. I won't point it up anymore. These should be enough examples. ^^
03:13:782 (1) - spinner issue ^^
03:26:250 (1) - spinner issue ^^

[Normal]

Please fix the spacings in the running-parts (multiple hitcircles in a row). The spacing varies between 0,79 and 0,83.
The same issue with the spinners appears here too, please fix it.

00:28:587 (1) - this one looks messy shaped. Do this: http://puu.sh/sUsj

440,184,27808,1,8
408,256,28198,1,0
351,312,28587,6,0,B|321:343|240:355|187:292|186:248,1,200,0|8
120,224,29756,1,0
80,160,30146,1,0

Ok
01:02:873 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing. fixed
01:05:211 (2) - move 1 grid up Ok
01:11:055 (4,5) - do this: http://puu.sh/sUtU Ok
01:48:068 (1,2) - do this: http://puu.sh/sUuN Ok
02:02:094 (1) - move a bit up Ok
02:35:600 (5,1,2,3,4) - spacing fixed
02:48:068 (5,6) - do this: http://puu.sh/sUvM no
02:56:639 (3,4,5,6) - ^ Ok
03:20:016 (3,4,5,6) - spacing Ok


[Hard]

I liked this one pretty much. :'D Not much to suggest here.

00:31:704 (1,2) - line them up. Ok
02:14:042 (8) - add a clap. Ok
02:20:665 (3) - do two hitcircles instead? Ok


[Insane]

Okay. Some stuff is pretty drastic here. Let's go ahead.

00:28:587 (7) - this looks not symmetric. fixed
01:06:769 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - pretty high spacing due to SV x1,2 x_x reduce it no
01:08:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is way too drastic imo. Ok
01:14:691 (1,2,3,4,5) - very hard to read. the indicated movement feels stupid imo. ok
01:20:016 (4,5,6) - do this instead: http://puu.sh/sUO9 Ok
01:27:029 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - as said before, I won't point this up anymore. ^^
01:33:263 (1,2,3,4,5) - okay, THIS is totally meh. The spacing is inconsistent, the movement sucks and I can't even read it in the hectic AR. Do something better, urgently. xD ok
01:37:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing. fixed
02:01:315 (1) - not symmetric. i tried to fix this
02:02:483 (3) - ^ fixed

I think this diff needs more mods. D: I disliked many patterns and many spacings are inconsistent, too. agree

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.
[General]
If you would like, you can delete all your bookmarks to decrease the size of your .osz file by a little since you won't be needing them by the time this gets put on the server. Ok
No source? That's fine too, but see what fits as a source first.
Offset is off. I have (+10) from you, at 25481. Ok

[Insane]
01:33:532 (3,4) - This is unreasonable. Ok

Unfortunately there's only so much noise I'm willing to mod. Good luck.

Katty Pie wrote:

Hey :3

Insane

00:46:263 - add note Ok
00:50:808(1) - make volume this note 35% Ok
00:51:198(2) - volume 25% and on 00:51:587 make 15% Ok
00:51:977 - this put usual 45% Ok
01:09:899 - this slider make so http://puu.sh/to6j looks better Ok
01:10:289 - add note Ok
01:20:548 - ^ Ok
01:20:678 - ^ No it doens't fit to the music
01:48:730 - make so http://puu.sh/to8x sound better Ok
01:49:509 - add note Ok
01:55:873 - here better use volume 25% sounds more softly and more pleasantly Ok
02:10:029 - add note no that would be overmapped
02:33:276 - here put volume 30% Ok
02:34:315 - make this slider shorter to white tick Ok
02:36:782 - here put volume 35% Ok
02:39:899 - put volume 40% Ok
02:40:548 - make this slider shorter to white tick Ok
02:46:133 - volume 45% Ok
02:46:133(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use soft sound volume 70% Ok
02:48:860 - here start normal sound Ok
03:27:432 - make end spinner volume 15%


that is connected with loudness change you should make it on all diff's it really sounds better)

Hard

AR -1 >< 8 very fast for hard
check NC in some places they are placed incorrectly[/color]

nice mapset anything for me) thx

Easy

in 1 combo color should be no more 5 ccombo's

00:39:509 - add note Ok
00:52:756 - ^ no
01:32:107 - ^no

It's all for me ^^ good map but experiment loudness of a sound)) star for you <3 good luck~~

Twice wrote:

[General]

Close the countdown? No

[Easy]

no problem

[Normal]

HP-1
AR-1 its easy enough

03:05:613-(4) overlap with 03:06:003-(1) fixed

[Hard]

HP+1? No

[Insane]

I think you should check the ds one more times by yourself.
the ds is confusion. ok


Sorry for this short mod，except Insane diff have some problem，the other diffs are good thanks

Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi~

Easy
You need more system in mapping
00:30:548 (3) - remove clap from the end Ok
00:33:665 (3,1) - 2 grids left Ok
01:19:250 (1,2,3) - ^ Ok
01:30:938 - miss note there, prolong spinner i think would be to hard
02:19:639 (4) - little hard rythm, remove this circle, add reverse there 02:18:471 (3) - and spacing Ok
03:13:795 - soft sounds there Ok
03:21:587 (3) - finish Ok

Normal
AR = 4 Ok
01:25:484 (4,5,1,2,3) - try this: Ok

SPOILER

01:29:380 - soft sounds Ok
01:30:938 (1,2,3,4) - try this: Ok

SPOILER

03:05:613 (4) - stack it with 03:06:003 (1) - this slider, it will be better for difficulty Ok
03:21:587 - finish there Ok

Hard
Whistles in the beginnin' sounds ugly, if i woud be on your place i will be remove them, buut..do the volume lower, okay
01:04:834 - add green section with 20% volume and 01:05:224 - 35% there Ok
01:24:704 (1,2) - try this: Ok

SPOILER

01:50:808 (7) - new combo Ok
01:54:315 - soft Ok
01:56:263 - same problem with the whistles, but there they sounds more ugly, remove them i removed them
03:13:893 - soft Ok

Insane
Whistle sounds, yeah ^^
01:04:834 - 20% Ok
01:05:224 - 35% Ok
01:12:107 (9) - new there and 01:13:016 (1) - remove there Ok
01:16:912 - soft Ok
01:20:029 (4) - will be better if you:

• 01:20:419 (5) - remove it
  01:20:029 - section with 0.75 speed
  prolong this slider to 01:20:678 and add section with 1.20 speed

I just prolonged the slider and delete the circle
01:37:042 (8,9) - it must be symmetrical in center fixed
01:38:730 (7) - same thing with the slider speed no
01:41:847 - soft Ok
01:51:198 (5) - slider speed No
01:54:315 - soft Ok
01:55:873 - whistles... i removed them
03:01:717 (1,2,3) - volume Ok
03:10:678 (4) - slider speed No

Good luck thx