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Galileo Galilei - Aoi Shiori (TV Size)
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Topic Starter
hi~ 
M4M from #modreq
my map this
[Hard]
00:02:840 (4) remove whistle
00:03:294 (4) add whistle
00:06:476 (5) remove whistle
00:06:931 (6) change to whistle
00:18:635 (2) move to 00:18:749
00:26:249 (3) How about this? 00:59:203 (1)~(8) How about this? 01:27:385 (6) remove note
[Normal]
01:07:158 (5) It is very hard to read.
01:07:840 (1) I think a little hard for beginner to change slider velocity.
01:27:385 (5) remove note
[Easy]
00:03:294 (3) ~ 00:06:931(3) I think it is better that in parallel.01:13:749 (x) remove Kiai. Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset.
01:14:203 (4) add New combo
That's all.
I wish your map is Ranked.
bye~
M4M from #modreq
my map this
[Hard]
00:02:840 (4) remove whistle
00:03:294 (4) add whistle
00:06:476 (5) remove whistle
00:06:931 (6) change to whistle
00:18:635 (2) move to 00:18:749
00:26:249 (3) How about this? 00:59:203 (1)~(8) How about this? 01:27:385 (6) remove note
[Normal]
01:07:158 (5) It is very hard to read.
01:07:840 (1) I think a little hard for beginner to change slider velocity.
01:27:385 (5) remove note
[Easy]
00:03:294 (3) ~ 00:06:931(3) I think it is better that in parallel.01:13:749 (x) remove Kiai. Kiai should be consistent throughout difficulties of your mapset.
01:14:203 (4) add New combo
That's all.
I wish your map is Ranked.
bye~
Topic Starter
Fixed, thanks :3
kawaii_uguu
Here's what I got. If it's fine with you I'll add hitsounds and work on making it more prettier.
Tough I'm totally fine with you rejecting it since even I think I overmapped it :/
Download: Galileo Galilei - Aoi Shiori (TV Size) (Mok) [kawaii_uguu's Insane].osu
Tough I'm totally fine with you rejecting it since even I think I overmapped it :/
Download: Galileo Galilei - Aoi Shiori (TV Size) (Mok) [kawaii_uguu's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Sorry, rejected and moved to pending D:
Topic Starter
EHI BIAGIO.
ykcarrot gave me some suggestions about hitsounds. Thanks <3
Uppa questa ale :3
Download: Galileo Galilei - Aoi Shiori (TV Size) (Mok) [Chew N' Sane].osu
Uppa questa ale :3
Download: Galileo Galilei - Aoi Shiori (TV Size) (Mok) [Chew N' Sane].osu
Topic Starter
I which one? Since every diffs has a spinnero owo~
Easy:
00:03:749 (1,2) - Shift right 1 unit.
00:22:840 (2,3) - Make these parallel?
00:26:476 (3,4) - ^
00:29:203 (6) - NC here, don't NC on next note.
00:47:385 (1) - Long spinner is long. Try mapping some circles 'n stuff instead?
01:04:658 (3) - Shift the red anchor down 1 unit.
01:06:476 (1,2,3) - I don't really understand why you put in a sudden slow-down. Beginners will most likely break combo on that.
01:25:113 (1) - Resnape the anchors to the grid, and make it symmetrical.
Normal:
00:46:476 - Place a linking note here? (Sounds a bit awkward without it)
01:06:022 (4,5) - Fix the spacing. ._.
01:07:840 (1) - Still don't get why you want to slow-down
Hard:
00:47:613 (3,4) - Uhh.. try placing 4 somewhere else?
00:50:340 (1) - More slow-downs!
01:06:931 (1,2,1,2) - Slow-downs are real combo-shatterers.
I personally don't like small circles, but in your case I recommend makign them size 4 becuse of Chewin's guest diff. (Hard -> Insane shouldn't get bigger? xD)
That's all for now. Good luck with this map. <3
P.S. Sorry for being a Nazi. <3
00:03:749 (1,2) - Shift right 1 unit.
00:22:840 (2,3) - Make these parallel?
00:26:476 (3,4) - ^
00:29:203 (6) - NC here, don't NC on next note.
00:47:385 (1) - Long spinner is long. Try mapping some circles 'n stuff instead?
01:04:658 (3) - Shift the red anchor down 1 unit.
01:06:476 (1,2,3) - I don't really understand why you put in a sudden slow-down. Beginners will most likely break combo on that.
01:25:113 (1) - Resnape the anchors to the grid, and make it symmetrical.
Normal:
00:46:476 - Place a linking note here? (Sounds a bit awkward without it)
01:06:022 (4,5) - Fix the spacing. ._.
01:07:840 (1) - Still don't get why you want to slow-down
Hard:
00:47:613 (3,4) - Uhh.. try placing 4 somewhere else?
00:50:340 (1) - More slow-downs!
01:06:931 (1,2,1,2) - Slow-downs are real combo-shatterers.
I personally don't like small circles, but in your case I recommend makign them size 4 becuse of Chewin's guest diff. (Hard -> Insane shouldn't get bigger? xD)
That's all for now. Good luck with this map. <3
P.S. Sorry for being a Nazi. <3
Topic Starter
Thanks <3
Easy
Abassa di un poco gli hitsounds normal nel ritornello, prendi esempio da quella di chewin
00:07:385 (1) - Aggiungi Finish
00:14:658 (5) - Hitsound normal (come 00:07:385 (1) - ) per seguire il ritmo (sempre con finish)
00:21:931 (1) - ^
00:29:203 (1) - ^
00:43:749 (2) - ^
01:17:385 (1) - Aggiungi Finish
Normal
Abassa di un poco gli hitsounds normal nel ritornello, prendi esempio da quella di chewin
OD -1 (?)
Per gli hitsounds stessa roba della Easy al posto dei finish soft metterei i normal con finish
00:46:476 (5) - Aggiungerei un beat qua e 00:46:931 (7) - qua, da senso di completezza
00:59:203 (1) - Aggiungi Finish
01:10:113 (1) - ^
Hard
Abassa di un poco gli hitsounds normal nel ritornello, prendi esempio da quella di chewin
Sessa storia anche qua come la easy se ti suona meglio
00:56:476 (2,3,4) - Personalmente questo pezzo non mi ha fatto impazzire, avrei preferito un semplice 1\2 che seguiva il ritmo
00:59:203 (1) - Finish
01:00:113 (3,4) - Stessa storia qua per l'1\2
01:10:113 (1) - Finish
01:11:703 (1) - ^
Insane
Anche qua li vedo bene, come nella easy asd
Quell'hitsound normal-hitclap lo trovo carino per l'inizio o la fine, ma per tutta la mappa non mi piace sto granchè
00:02:840 (1,1,1) - Why 3 new combo?
00:06:476 (1,1,1) - ^
01:27:385 (1,1,1) - same
:3
Abassa di un poco gli hitsounds normal nel ritornello, prendi esempio da quella di chewin
00:07:385 (1) - Aggiungi Finish
00:14:658 (5) - Hitsound normal (come 00:07:385 (1) - ) per seguire il ritmo (sempre con finish)
00:21:931 (1) - ^
00:29:203 (1) - ^
00:43:749 (2) - ^
01:17:385 (1) - Aggiungi Finish
Normal
Abassa di un poco gli hitsounds normal nel ritornello, prendi esempio da quella di chewin
OD -1 (?)
Per gli hitsounds stessa roba della Easy al posto dei finish soft metterei i normal con finish
00:46:476 (5) - Aggiungerei un beat qua e 00:46:931 (7) - qua, da senso di completezza
00:59:203 (1) - Aggiungi Finish
01:10:113 (1) - ^
Hard
Abassa di un poco gli hitsounds normal nel ritornello, prendi esempio da quella di chewin
Sessa storia anche qua come la easy se ti suona meglio
00:56:476 (2,3,4) - Personalmente questo pezzo non mi ha fatto impazzire, avrei preferito un semplice 1\2 che seguiva il ritmo
00:59:203 (1) - Finish
01:00:113 (3,4) - Stessa storia qua per l'1\2
01:10:113 (1) - Finish
01:11:703 (1) - ^
Insane
Anche qua li vedo bene, come nella easy asd
Quell'hitsound normal-hitclap lo trovo carino per l'inizio o la fine, ma per tutta la mappa non mi piace sto granchè
00:02:840 (1,1,1) - Why 3 new combo?
00:06:476 (1,1,1) - ^
01:27:385 (1,1,1) - same
:3
hello I saw this on your queue but as I dont like m4m you dont need to see none of my maps~
if you want that parts on green colous, maybe just make this:
that is all, again is not a m4m, sorry if you dont requested this but since I saw this anime a few days ago and I like the song I really wanted to mod it
[General]
- well, I dont think that this custom soft clap fits to the song, I mean is really annoying D: why dont use a normal-hitnormal.wav from template skin as custom soft clap? I saw that you tried to use some soundset changes at the begining but I know that is a lot of work, using a custom clap save a lot of work, plus in my opinion fits better to the song
[Easy]
- 00:07:385 (1) - its really obvious that this need a whistle on the end, and there is a painful lack of whistles incoming, why dont use the common hitsounding pattern, this beautiful song will sound better if the map have moar hitsounding
00:08:294 (2) - and if you had used the custom clap with the file normal-hitnormal.wav at the star of this slider can start the clap common pattern, one hitsound every 2 white ticks, that may leave a nice pattern of clap - whistle - clap - whistle~ its sounds so nice >_< - 00:11:022 (2,3) - hmm, this formation is not a bit hard for beginers? maybe like SPOILER
the almost touching sliders looks great o.o - 00:14:203 (5,1) - again o:
- 00:17:385 (1) - I think this blanket can be a bit better with just 3 control points SPOILER
340,148,17385,6,0,B|320:204|264:228|200:212|176:156,2,200,2|0|0
- 00:34:658 (3,4) - the soundset change feels a bit better if its at 60% volume and then then back to 90% at the end of 00:34:658 (3,4)
- 00:47:385 (1) - oh god a 9 seconds spin xD I think that this is the one that doesnt fit, is tooooo long, maybe you can fill this with long sliders like then some circles on 00:51:022, 00:51:931 and start the spinner on 00:52:840 to the original end
- 00:54:544 - 5% volume sections are not unrankable? I know that the lowest volume was 15% or something
- 00:55:567 - hmm decrease the volume of all normal soundset section to 55%~ is moar soft to the ears and for the song also
- 00:56:931 (4) - improve blankets with 00:56:476 (3) - screen SPOILER
440,236,56931,2,0,B|432:168|368:144|368:144|364:96|328:72,1,200
- 00:58:294 (5) - this had a weird flow with previous slider, maybe rotate the repeat and curve it a bit since the previuos slider has a curved section
- 01:03:294 (1) - this slider really has not an important sound on the song in my opinion, delete it will leave the silent vocal part, and start with the next circle that is very predictable
- 01:06:476 - slowdowns on an [Easy] diff, are you serious?
- 01:14:203 (1,2) - the follow points between this 2 gets covered by previous 01:13:294 (3)
- 01:17:385 (1,1) - again, too long sliders >_< please use long sliders, are moar funny and not so tyring as 2 sliders of this sort long
- 01:27:385 (4) - and this note shouldnt be here, it should be here 01:27:158, but since 1/2 snaping is hard for beginners, maybe just use a short slider
[Normal]
- 00:32:840 (8) - finish?
- 00:47:158 (1) - so long slider >v<
- 01:06:476 - between this and 01:07:158 (5) - can you make a slider, for see on a better way the slowdown, you know
- 01:27:385 (5) - really not necesary note
no significative problems here, just the same disagree with the custom clap, lack of hitsounds and some soundset change and volume sections
[Hard]
- 00:59:203 (1,2,3) - why dont use blue and red ticks as you used on 00:56:476 (2,3,4), sounds very nice >_<
- 01:11:703 (1) - long spin
- 01:20:794 (1) - this slider should start 01:21:022, have no much sense to me here, explain me please why start currently here?
- 01:27:385 (6) - note as pointed up
[Chew N' Sane]
I just have to say some stuff to this diff, again I dont like the custom hitclap, aproach rate should be 7, a 132 bpm song is not this fast and the last thing spaming new combo on some parts xDif you want that parts on green colous, maybe just make this:
SPOILER
use the new combo colour change tool, its less annoying that currently
use the new combo colour change tool, its less annoying that currently
that is all, again is not a m4m, sorry if you dont requested this but since I saw this anime a few days ago and I like the song I really wanted to mod it
Le new combo sono sexy in questo modo, lascio.lesslunatic wrote:
Insane
Anche qua li vedo bene, come nella easy asd
Quell'hitsound normal-hitclap lo trovo carino per l'inizio o la fine, ma per tutta la mappa non mi piace sto granchè
00:02:840 (1,1,1) - Why 3 new combo?
00:06:476 (1,1,1) - ^
01:27:385 (1,1,1) - same
:3
I think ar 7 is very slow for an insane diff, also if it's 132 bpm.ikari_kyon wrote:
[Chew N' Sane]
I just have to say some stuff to this diff, again I dont like the custom hitclap, aproach rate should be 7, a 132 bpm song is not this fast and the last thing spaming new combo on some parts xD
if you want that parts on green colous, maybe just make this:SPOILER
use the new combo colour change tool, its less annoying that currently
that is all, again is not a m4m, sorry if you dont requested this but since I saw this anime a few days ago and I like the song I really wanted to mod it
And as I wrote above, I keep the combo colour in this way
Mercurial
Lazy ass here.
See ya.
General
aoi shiori (tv size) bg.jpg is 1044x768... I dunno if this is allowed or not.
Please, Turn down the volume on "Normal Hitsounds" section, same volume as Chew N' Sane, also, I don't like the lack of hitsounds on Easy, Normal and Hard.
Please, Turn down the volume on "Normal Hitsounds" section, same volume as Chew N' Sane, also, I don't like the lack of hitsounds on Easy, Normal and Hard.
Easy
00:17:385 (1) more symmetrical?
Normal
00:11:703 (2) Circles under sliders in Easy/Normal Diffs could be messy for new players
00:16:931 (4) ^
00:21:476 (6) ^
00:40:113 (4) ^
00:57:158 (3) ^
01:00:794 (3,4) ^
And many more.
00:16:931 (4) ^
00:21:476 (6) ^
00:40:113 (4) ^
00:57:158 (3) ^
01:00:794 (3,4) ^
And many more.
Chew N' Sane
I like how flows perfectly this diff with the song ♥
See ya.
Topic Starter
Fix'd Easy. For the hitsounds, i like them as their are in my difficulty :3
quick check~
[Hard]
00:22:385 (2) - try this slider shape
http://puu.sh/IhNT
00:52:613 (4,5) - they arent stacked correctly
00:54:658 (1) - dont use 5% volume, its really confusing
[Insane]
00:25:340 (2) - finish at the repeat sounds nice to me
00:29:203 (6) - add finish at the beginning and remove it from the end
00:36:476 (6) - volume is tooooo loud, please reduce it
00:40:794 (3) - i suggest to add finish at the end since i can hear it in the music
00:41:703 (5) - shorten this by 1/2 beat to follow emphasis on the downbeat
00:43:749 (1) - add finish at the beginning
00:48:522 (5,1) - lower spacing after a jump is kinda hard to read imo, i thought it was 1/2 rhythm
01:02:613 (1,2) - switch these newcombos because of a downbeat
01:11:931 (5) - add finish at the beginning
01:17:385 (1) - ^
01:26:248 (4,6,1,1,1) - remove (6) and move (1,1,1) backward by 1/2 beat because 01:27:840 - follows nothing.
[Hard]
00:22:385 (2) - try this slider shape
http://puu.sh/IhNT
00:52:613 (4,5) - they arent stacked correctly
00:54:658 (1) - dont use 5% volume, its really confusing
[Insane]
00:25:340 (2) - finish at the repeat sounds nice to me
00:29:203 (6) - add finish at the beginning and remove it from the end
00:36:476 (6) - volume is tooooo loud, please reduce it
00:40:794 (3) - i suggest to add finish at the end since i can hear it in the music
00:41:703 (5) - shorten this by 1/2 beat to follow emphasis on the downbeat
00:43:749 (1) - add finish at the beginning
00:48:522 (5,1) - lower spacing after a jump is kinda hard to read imo, i thought it was 1/2 rhythm
01:02:613 (1,2) - switch these newcombos because of a downbeat
01:11:931 (5) - add finish at the beginning
01:17:385 (1) - ^
01:26:248 (4,6,1,1,1) - remove (6) and move (1,1,1) backward by 1/2 beat because 01:27:840 - follows nothing.
I still can't like the Custom Clap.
(non riesco a farmi piacere il Custom Clap)
(non riesco a farmi piacere il Custom Clap)
Topic Starter
I haven't changed anything, waiting for Chewin v.v
Topic Starter
Update: fix'ed some things.
Oh nice Mok ♥
I will check my diff later :3
I will check my diff later :3
Topic Starter
Ma non ho cambiato niente nella tua? LOL.
Melophobia wrote:
[Insane]
00:25:340 (2) - finish at the repeat sounds nice to me I don't like it, also because it sounds too loud
00:29:203 (6) - add finish at the beginning and remove it from the end I want to keep the clap on the head so I just removed finish from the end
00:36:476 (6) - volume is tooooo loud, please reduce it True, reduced till 50%
00:40:794 (3) - i suggest to add finish at the end since i can hear it in the music Why not! I like 50% finish here
00:41:703 (5) - shorten this by 1/2 beat to follow emphasis on the downbeat Following vocal
00:43:749 (1) - add finish at the beginning awesome
00:48:522 (5,1) - lower spacing after a jump is kinda hard to read imo, i thought it was 1/2 rhythm It's ok imo :\
01:02:613 (1,2) - switch these newcombos because of a downbeat Oh yes
01:11:931 (5) - add finish at the beginning yes
01:17:385 (1) - ^ ^
01:26:248 (4,6,1,1,1) - remove (6) and move (1,1,1) backward by 1/2 beat because 01:27:840 - follows nothing. Nah but I fixed this part in an other way
Thank you for the helpful mod ♥
Here is my diff mok:
SPOILER
osu file format v9
[General]
AudioFilename: Aoi Shiori (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
[Metadata]
Title:Aoi Shiori (TV Size)
Artist:Galileo Galilei
Creator:Mok
Version:Chew N' Sane
Source:Ano Hi Mita Hana no Namae wo Bokutachi wa Mada Shiranai
Tags:Chewin AnoHana Menma
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:1
[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Aoi Shiori (TV Size).flv"
0,0,"Aoi Shiori (TV Size) BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255
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112,336,26022,1,8
224,308,26249,2,0,B|324:280,1,95
424,316,26703,2,0,B|472:232|448:120,1,190
380,44,27385,5,8
268,68,27613,1,0
284,180,27840,2,0,B|213:194|153:142|157:74,1,190,0|8
52,32,28522,1,0
24,144,28749,2,0,B|72:168|80:232,1,95,0|0
20,316,29203,2,0,B|74:357|150:336|177:270,1,190,8|0
400,324,30113,6,0,B|436:232,1,95,8|0
404,52,30567,2,0,B|368:144,1,95,0|0
296,228,31022,2,0,B|312:304|244:364|164:336,1,190,8|0
188,228,31703,2,0,B|115:256|45:200|58:116,1,190,8|0
172,120,32385,1,8
172,120,32840,1,4
172,120,33976,6,0,B|248:56,2,95,0|8|0
80,188,34658,2,0,B|48:264|100:352,1,142.5,0|2
232,240,35340,1,0
312,324,35567,1,8
428,200,35908,2,0,B|456:124|416:48,1,142.5,0|2
336,136,36476,1,4
256,192,38067,5,0
256,192,38295,2,0,B|192:268,1,95,8|0
128,356,38749,1,0
40,284,38976,2,0,B|100:192|32:96,1,190
116,56,39658,1,8
180,120,39885,6,0,B|224:132|284:116,1,76,0|8
440,52,40340,2,0,B|392:44|348:56,1,76,0|8
364,256,40794,2,0,B|372:208|360:164,1,76,0|4
232,216,41363,1,0
112,280,41703,2,0,B|156:360|256:344,1,152
448,296,43067,6,0,B|484:336,2,47.5,0|0|8
364,220,43522,1,0
320,116,43749,6,0,B|244:184|116:156,1,190,4|8
72,72,44431,1,0
16,172,44658,2,0,B|-44:260|24:356,1,190,0|8
88,256,45340,1,0
192,308,45567,6,0,B|240:320|292:308,1,95
456,172,46022,2,0,B|409:164|361:172,1,95,8|0
412,276,46476,1,0
244,208,46703,1,0
56,52,47158,6,0,B|36:100|64:164,1,95,0|4
168,316,47613,2,0,B|184:264|160:212,1,95,0|8
48,272,48067,1,0
160,96,48294,1,0
48,272,48522,1,0
260,192,48976,6,0,B|332:284,1,95
496,324,49431,2,0,B|432:244,1,95,0|8
372,156,49885,1,0
160,72,50340,2,0,B|108:52|52:64|16:104|8:160,1,190
120,172,51022,1,4
256,192,51931,12,0,54431
256,188,54658,5,2
256,188,55567,6,0,B|224:256|136:284,2,142.5,4|0|0
148,148,56476,2,0,B|180:80|268:52,2,142.5
256,188,57385,2,0,B|336:156|336:156|424:188,1,142.5
408,188,57840,1,8
484,272,58067,2,0,B|404:308|404:308|296:264,1,190
212,328,58749,1,8
36,180,59203,6,0,B|24:104|40:24,2,142.5
148,212,60113,2,0,B|172:288|144:368,2,142.5
164,100,61022,2,0,B|260:68|364:100,1,190,0|8
460,64,61703,2,0,B|488:148|404:208,1,142.5
408,208,62158,1,8
408,320,62385,1,0
308,264,62613,1,0
212,320,62840,6,0,B|104:328|44:244,1,190,4|8
36,132,63522,1,0
132,68,63749,2,0,B|244:44|320:128|320:132,1,190,0|8
408,60,64431,1,0
452,164,64658,6,0,B|504:260|452:348,1,190,0|8
340,344,65340,2,0,B|289:258|341:162,1,190
232,128,66022,1,8
156,44,66249,1,0
76,128,66476,2,0,B|16:208|60:324,1,190,0|8
160,264,67158,2,0,B|192:328|264:352|340:304,1,190
428,360,67840,5,8
496,264,68067,1,0
388,224,68294,2,0,B|428:128|384:36,1,190,0|8
272,44,68976,2,0,B|232:140|276:232,1,190
336,324,69658,1,8
108,336,70113,6,0,B|128:216|12:160,1,190,4|8
72,64,70794,1,8
176,112,71022,2,0,B|244:196|376:148,1,190,8|0
412,60,71703,1,0
476,156,71931,2,0,B|524:256|468:368,1,190,4|0
396,264,72613,2,0,B|296:248|216:316,1,190
112,352,73294,1,0
40,264,73522,1,0
148,224,73749,6,0,B|112:120|156:20,1,190,4|8
260,68,74431,1,0
236,180,74658,2,0,B|348:176|380:76,1,190,0|8
484,32,75340,1,0
484,144,75567,2,0,B|412:232|456:336,1,190,0|8
344,284,76249,1,0
240,336,76476,2,0,B|144:368|28:328,1,190,0|8
140,188,77385,6,0,B|124:152|144:120|168:100|140:52|128:28,2,142.499995753169,4|8|0
292,112,78749,1,8
300,284,79203,2,0,B|336:268|368:288|388:312|436:284|460:272,2,142.499995753169,0|8|0
292,112,80567,1,8
256,192,81022,12,0,84203
300,72,84658,2,0,B|420:32|484:128,1,190,4|0
372,164,85339,1,0
444,252,85567,2,0,B|324:292|260:196,1,190
168,256,86248,1,0
156,144,86476,2,0,B|72:152|32:248|72:312,1,190
168,256,87158,5,0
180,272,87385,5,2
192,288,87612,5,2
204,304,87839,5,2
Hi ~ m4m ^^
Easy
00:11:022(2,3) - stack it better~ and I think what this a little overlap, it can confused beginners~
00:14:203(5,1) - ^
00:23:749(3,4) - if you remove note 4 and make slider 3 double, it will be better follow the vokal~
00:40:567(3,4) - correct spacing~
01:06:476 - I think speed 0,5 on easy very very confused~ better remove it
01:24:658 - very close to note for easy~ try this http://puu.sh/12cze
Normal
00:39:203(3,4) - stack better
00:40:567 - NC
00:42:385 -remove NC and add on slider 2
00:57:613(4,5) - stack better
01:00:794 - this note better put on 01:02:158, it sounds better
Hard
00:01:022(2,3) - stack better
00:10:567(1) - make more symmetric http://puu.sh/12cBL
00:44:431 - add note here~ sounds better
00:57:385(5) - http://puu.sh/12cCF
01:27:385(6) - NC here
Not bad map~ good luck~
Easy
00:11:022(2,3) - stack it better~ and I think what this a little overlap, it can confused beginners~
00:14:203(5,1) - ^
00:23:749(3,4) - if you remove note 4 and make slider 3 double, it will be better follow the vokal~
00:40:567(3,4) - correct spacing~
01:06:476 - I think speed 0,5 on easy very very confused~ better remove it
01:24:658 - very close to note for easy~ try this http://puu.sh/12cze
Normal
00:39:203(3,4) - stack better
00:40:567 - NC
00:42:385 -remove NC and add on slider 2
00:57:613(4,5) - stack better
01:00:794 - this note better put on 01:02:158, it sounds better
Hard
00:01:022(2,3) - stack better
00:10:567(1) - make more symmetric http://puu.sh/12cBL
00:44:431 - add note here~ sounds better
00:57:385(5) - http://puu.sh/12cCF
01:27:385(6) - NC here
Not bad map~ good luck~
Random mod \o/
[General]
[General]
- Sbaglio o non è settato nessun preview point? Dovresti aggiungerne uno!
- Ti consiglio di settare 2000ms come audio lead-in al posto di quello attuale
- 00:10:113 (1) - Muovi questo new combo su 00:11:022 (2) - ,ci sta meglio e delimita bene un nuovo pattern.
- 00:17:385 (1) - Vedo che hai avuto un po' di problemi a rendere questo slider simmetrico,se vuoi usa questo che ho fatto io:SPOILER
336,148,17385,6,0,B|312:200|256:220|200:200|176:148,2,200,2|0|0
- 00:19:658 (2) - Che ne diresti di copiare,flippare orizzontalmente e usare CTRL+R su 00:21:022 (4) - per fare questo slider? Ecco un esempio di come ti potrebbe venire
- 00:36:022 (4) - Un soft finish al posto di un normal finish alla fine di questo slider starebbe molto meglio,imho, ti consiglio di farlo
- 01:06:476 (1) - Non ho nulla contro questo slowdown,però usare un 0,50x sicuramente confonderebbe molti beginners. Ti consiglio invece di settare il slowdown a 0,75x,così che sia molto meno confuso da capire.
- 01:12:385 (2) - Che ne dici di aggiungere un clap alla fine dello slider per mantenere la consistenza col pattern indietro? Ci sta anche piuttosto bene!
- 01:25:113 (2) - Seppur ci sia il new combo,non risulta settato. Ciò accade qualche volte a causa di un bug nelle note che seguono gli spinner,perciò ti suggerisco di aggiungere un New Combo per far quadrare tutto
- 00:21:931 (1) - Potresti migliorare il blanket con 00:20:113 (5,6) - spostandolo a x:52 y:316. Inoltre,mi spieghi a cosa serve quel red point sullo slider? xD
- 00:38:294 (2,3,4) - Forse son solo io,ma credo che un ritmo come questo sia più adeguato qui:
- 00:46:931 (6) - Direi di aggiungere un whistle qui... che ne pensi?
- 00:47:158 (1) - Questo spinner non è che sia necessario: avrei preferito che tu l'avresti rimpiazzato con altre cose :\ Però se vuoi lasciarlo così,fai pure.
- 01:11:931 (6) - Che ne dici di aggiungere un clap qui?
- 01:19:885 (4) - ^
- 00:22:385 (2) - Che ne dici di modificare lo slider in questo modo?SPOILER
256,204,22385,2,0,B|272:240|240:300|280:336,2,130
- 00:24:203 (5) - Se vuoi creare una simmetria qui,posiziona questa nota a x:400 y:144
- 00:43:181 (x) - Che ne dici di creare una tripletta aggiungendo una nota qui che segue i tamburi? Ci sta piuttosto bene,imho
- 01:08:294 (1,2) - Inverti la loro posizione,così il flow migliorerà qui. Dovrebbe venire fuori una cosa del genere
- 00:32:385 (5,6) - (un po' nazi) Mettendole su x:168 y:112 miglioreresti il blanket con 00:31:703 (4) -
- 00:51:022 (5) - x:120 y:180 per gli stessi motivi di sopra
- 01:24:658 (1) - Seppur ci sia il new combo,non risulta settato. Ciò accade qualche volte a causa di un bug nelle note che seguono gli spinner,perciò ti suggerisco di aggiungere un New Combo per far quadrare tutto
Orz,per il resto è perfetta D: