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Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
Hi/

[General]
add preview point
remove .osb
BG size 800X600 or 1024X768
BPM 126
add hard diff
add some hitsounds
OPEN AIMOD change DS

[Easy]
00:22:510 (X) - add note
00:22:986 (X) - add slider end at 00:23:462
02:10:603 (X) - add note
02:11:555 (1) - move to 02:11:079 end at 02:12:031
02:12:507 (X) - add note
02:13:460 (2) - move to 02:12:984 end at 02:13:936
02:25:364 (X) - add note
02:26:317 (X) - ^
02:28:221 (X) - ^
02:28:936 (X) - ^
02:29:174 (X) - ^
02:29:412 (X) - ^
02:29:888 (X) - ^
02:30:126 (X) - ^
02:30:364 (X) - ^
03:10:601 (1) - remove NC

[Normal]
00:31:081 (X) - add note
00:39:652 (X) - ^
01:17:270 (1) - end at 01:17:747
01:18:223 (3) - end at 01:18:699
01:41:079 (X) - cut down one turn,end at 01:41:556
02:21:555 (X) - add note
02:33:935 (2) - remove to 02:33:935
02:34:769 (4) - remove to 02:34:888
02:35:721 (6) - remove to 02:35:840
02:47:269 (9) - add one turn
03:10:125 (10) - ^
03:18:220 (X) - add note
03:18:696 (X) - ^
03:34:410 (1) - end at 03:34:887
03:35:363 (3) - end at 03:35:839

GL
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728
from mod req in game

[General]
  • Offset - 15405
    delete OSB file
    consider add Kiai Time
    set preview point
[Easy]
  • 00:15:438 - delete green line
    00:22:986 - add note
    00:23:938 (1,2,3) - why suddenly the spacing become so large? this is an Easy diff. such jump will be confuse beginner player.
    00:38:224 (1,2,3,4) - continual circles may be confusing for beginners, too. consider replace them with two sliders.
    00:39:652 (4,1) - spacing
    00:42:509 - add note and replace them(00:42:509 - (2,3,4,5)) with two sliders.
    01:06:794 (3,4) - ^
    01:29:651 (3) - covered with 01:29:175 (2).
    01:32:508 (1,2,3) - spacing
    01:36:794 - add note and ~~
    01:44:889 (7) - be symmetry like
    SPOILER
    152,312,104889,2,0,B|248:312|296:392|344:312|448:312,1,300
    01:58:222 (5) - covered with 01:55:365 (3)
    01:58:222 (5,1) - spacing (too narrow. be wider)
    02:11:555 - delete green line
    02:11:555 (1) - end at 02:12:031
    02:12:507 - add slider from here to 02:12:984
    02:40:126 (1) - be symmetry
    02:48:697 (5) - remove note and start break time at 02:47:745
    03:06:792 (4) - be symmetry
    03:06:792 (4) - 1 grid right
    03:45:839 (3) - be symmetry
about combo
SPOILER
  • 00:40:128 (1) - remove NC
    00:42:985 (2) - NC
    00:43:938 (5) - NC
    01:20:127 (5) - NC
    01:35:365 (4) - NC
    01:37:270 (5) - rmNC
    01:39:175 (7) - NC
    01:44:889 (5) - NC
    02:15:364 (4) - NC
    02:28:697 (6) - NC
    02:38:221 (1) - rmNC
    03:10:601 (1) - rmNC
    03:16:316 (4) - NC
    03:20:125 (5) - NC
    03:21:077 (1) - rmNC
    03:37:744 (4) - NC
    03:39:172 (1) - rmNC
    03:41:077 (6) - NC
    03:42:505 (1) - rmNC

[Normal]
  • 00:15:438 - delete green line
    00:16:795 (3,4) - should not stack
    00:22:986 (1,2,3) - spacing
    00:24:414 (4,5) - should not stack
    00:26:319 (1,2,3) - spacing
    00:28:462 (3,4) - ^
    00:30:129 (6,7,8) - ^
    00:31:795 (3,4) - ^
    00:32:033 (4,1) - ^
    00:33:462 (3,4) - ^
    00:35:367 (6,1) - should not stack
    00:36:795 (2,3) - spacing
    00:37:986 (4,5) - ^
    00:38:224 (5,6) - should not stack
    00:39:652 - add note
    00:41:081 (4) - I can't find the path of this slider clearly.
    00:41:081 (4,1) - spacing
    00:43:462 (3,4,5) - ^
    00:44:414 (6,7,8) - ^
    00:49:652 (1,2,3) - ^
    00:50:604 (3,1) - ^
    00:51:080 (1,2,3) - ^
    01:05:842 (1,2) - ^
    01:06:556 (2,3,4) - ^
    01:16:199 - delete green line
    01:17:270 (1,2,3) - the rhythm of these notes may be confuse beginners
    01:41:079 (6,7,8) - spacing
    01:43:936 (2,1) - ^
    01:52:032 (3,4,5) - ^
    01:59:174 (6,7,8) - ^
    02:09:389 - unsnapped green line. snap to 02:09:412
    02:09:650 (5) - sudden speed up is not recommended.
    02:11:555 - delete green line
    02:30:602 (1,2) - spacing
    02:33:816 (2,4,6) - don't put notes on bule line. it's too hard to read rhythm. replace them with sliders.
    02:39:173 (1,2,3) - spacing
    02:41:078 (5,6,7) - ^
    02:42:507 (1,2) - ^
    02:46:792 (8,9) - ^
    03:10:601 - add note
    03:13:458 (3,4,5) - spacing
    03:31:553 (1,2) - ^
    03:34:410 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
    03:32:794 - unsnapped green line. snap to 03:32:744
about combo
SPOILER
  • 00:17:272 (4) - NC
    00:18:700 (1) - rmNC
    00:19:176 (2) - NC
    00:25:843 (6) - NC
    00:26:319 (1) - rmNC
    00:38:224 (5) - NC
    00:40:128 (1) - rmNC
    00:41:081 (1) - rmNC
    00:44:414 (6) - NC
    01:16:318 (3) - NC
    01:17:270 (1) - rmNC
    01:41:079 (6) - NC
    02:09:650 (5) - NC
    02:39:173 (1) - rmNC
    02:40:602 (4) - NC
    02:42:507 (1) - rmNC
    02:43:935 (3) - NC
    03:06:792 (4) - NC
    03:15:363 (6) - NC
    03:16:316 (1) - rmNC
    03:46:791 (5) - NC
    03:48:696 (1) - rmNC

overall, I think you should use correct spacing, especially in these for- beginners-diffs.
but if these problems were fixed, your maps will be more better! good luck.
DeeN
380 posts
Joined July 2008
DeeN
we can fly~!

SPOILER
[General]

almost problems other modder point out so i dont say it again orz.

[easy]

00:59:771 - move this green line to 01:00:961
01:23:937 (1) - end at 01:27:270
01:33:937 (3) - change it to other silder start at 01:34:413 and end at 01:34:889
01:36:794 - add a circle
02:08:698 (2,3,4) - delete these and add a silder start at 02:08:460 and end at 02:09:650
02:11:555 (1) - this silder broken :o
02:47:745 (4) - close the distance snap and rigt move 1 in gird level 3
03:37:744 (1) - new combo
03:39:172 (4) - cancel new combo
03:41:077 (1) - new combo
03:42:505 (1) - cancel new combo

[Normal]

spacing not good do further works in it

00:43:938 (5) -delete
00:44:176 - add a circle
01:41:079 (6) - this rhythm not fit here change it
01:50:127 (1) - move it to 01:50:365
01:51:079 (2) - ^ to 01:51:317
02:09:650 (5) - new combo
02:09:389 - move the green line to 02:09:412
02:23:936 (4) - end at 02:24:888
02:41:078 (1) - new combo
03:06:792 (4) - ^
03:15:363 (1) - ^
03:16:316 (2) - cancel new combo
03:18:935 (1) - move it to 03:19:173
03:31:153 - move the green line to 03:31:434
03:32:794 - ^

need do more works especially sounds and spacing
never give up good luck!
Thite
1,043 posts
Joined April 2010
Thite
Easy
00:26:319 (4) - this note is bit close from previous note
00:44:414 (5) - try to make this slider looks better
01:05:842 (2) - add clap like you did?
01:07:747 (4) - bit far from previous one
01:35:365 (4) - this note is bit close from previous note
01:37:270 (1) - try to make this slider looks better
01:44:889 (7) - ^
02:30:602 (1) - add finish this spinner?
02:46:792 (3,4,5) - put these notes like symmetry
02:59:292 (1) - start this spinner from 02:59:292 - ?
03:03:935 (1,2,3) - move these notes following center line?
03:10:601 (1) - remove new combo


Normal
00:17:272 (4) - stack this note exactly
00:23:938 (3) - adjust the spacing
00:32:033 (4) - ^
00:41:081 (4) - try to make this slider looks better
00:45:366 (8) - add finish this slider's end
00:52:033 (3,4) - adjust the spacing
01:08:223 (5,6) - ^
01:14:413 (1) - reduce repeats and add notes?
02:02:031 (9) - adjust the spacing

this Normal needs more effort i thought :o

good luck|
kosiga
1,548 posts
Joined May 2011
kosiga
Hi~ kratoz :)

thank you for the request ~ :D

here my mod~

[General]
  1. Song Setup - Storyboarding - Enable countdown - Remove the check. (or You really need this?
  2. Song Setup - combo colors - easy'diff no setting? (normal'diff is set) so It is recommended that you also unified easy to normal
  3. Song Setup - Set Preview Point - Easy:69681, Normal:69691. so it is better to unify it ( maybe 69691 @@?
  4. KIAI TIME - Why do you not put kiaitime in normal? I recommend that you match it with easy. and i suggest KIAI TIME move to↓
    1st 01:16:357~01:31:595. 2nd 02:32:548~02:47:786. 3rd 03:33:500~03:48:738 ( easy and normal diff )
[Easy]
SPOILER
  1. HD,OD +1. AR+1 or 2 ( Setting is too low :? because this song is not fast. There is not the problem even if you make it hard a little imo )
  2. 00:23:976 (1,2,3,4) - it is better aligned with the DS0.8x
  3. 00:28:738 (3) - use copy 00:26:834 (1) is better. http://puu.sh/D0vx 
    100,156,28738,2,0,B|183:72|279:144,1,200,0|0
  4. 00:32:548 (4) - add NC and 00:34:453 (7) - add NC. ( too long NC in easy diff )
  5. 00:43:976 (4) - add NC
  6. 01:04:929 (1) - remove NC and 01:05:881 (2) - add NC is better
  7. 01:04:929 (1,2) - spacing too far. ( use DS0.8x is better)
  8. 01:09:214 (6) - add NC ( too long NC in easy diff )
  9. 01:20:167 (5) - ^
  10. 01:29:214 (1) - add NC
  11. 01:23:976 (1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/D0Fj and http://puu.sh/D0Fq (because it is in kiai time, put more note is interesting.
  12. 01:35:405 (5) - add NC and 01:37:310 (1) - remove NC and 01:39:214 (3) - add NC
  13. 01:36:357 (7,1) - spacing too far. ( plz use DS0.8x)
  14. 01:44:929 (7) - add NC
  15. 01:49:691 (4,5) - spacing too far. ( plz use DS0.8x)
  16. 01:51:119 (5) - add NC
  17. 01:55:405 (3,1) - spacing too far. ( plz use DS0.8x)
  18. 02:00:643 (5) - add NC
  19. 02:11:555 - Unnecessary green line
  20. 02:10:643 (1,2) - spacing too far. ( plz use DS0.8x)
  21. 02:14:453 (5) - add NC ( too long NC )
  22. 02:26:834 (4) - ^
  23. 02:28:738 (7) - ^
  24. 03:06:834 (5) - ^
  25. 03:11:595~03:12:072 - Better to put something
  26. 03:18:262 (6) - add NC. and touch HP bar. ( You should put it not to touch it because it is easy diff ><
  27. 03:25:881~03:33:500 - Better to put something.
  28. 03:35:881 (5,6) - Rhythm has difficult this for a beginner imo. so add repeat. The rhythm is easier than now
  29. 03:39:214 (1) - remove NC and 03:41:119 (3) - add NC and 03:42:548 (1) - remove NC

    overall
  30. Volume is too big. especially normalhitsound :? use all 100% is not recommended.
  31. Please use the hitsound more. too few now :o

[Normal]
SPOILER
  1. OD +2 ( too low. plz higher than easy.) and HD +1
  2. 00:15:367 (1) - Object isn't snapped. plz resnap
  3. 00:15:438 - Unnecessary green line
  4. 00:17:310 (4) - stack after the slider is difficult in normal diff. I do not recommend this ><
  5. 00:23:024 (1,2,3) - plz align the DS
  6. 00:24:929 (5) - add NC and 00:26:357 (1) - remove NC
  7. 00:28:500 (3,4) - spacing too close. plz use DS0.8x
  8. 00:29:214 (4) - add NC
  9. 00:30:643 (8,1) - spacing too close. plz use DS0.8x
  10. 00:32:072 (4,1) - ^
  11. 00:33:500 (3,4) - ^
  12. 00:36:834 (2,3) - spacing too far. plz use DS0.8x
  13. 00:38:024 (4,5) - ^
  14. 00:39:214 (6) - same 00:17:310 (4)
  15. 00:40:167 (1,2,3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/D18k
  16. 00:44:453 (6) - add NC
  17. 00:49:691 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - remove. This place is not much sense. I think that it does not need it
  18. 01:05:881 (1,2,3,4) - spacing too far. plz use DS0.8x
  19. 01:09:214~01:14:214 - Better to put something
  20. 01:14:453 (1,2) - spacing too far. plz use DS0.8x
  21. 01:16:199 - Unnecessary green line
  22. 01:17:310 (1,2,3,4) - plz align the DS. and 01:17:310 (1,3) - Is it intentional to use the blue line? I recommend rhythm not to push the blue line in normal. so http://puu.sh/D1dI
  23. 01:23:024 (6,7) - note after kickslider are difficult in normal diff.
  24. 01:27:786 (1) - remove and 01:27:786~01:31:595 - You should put some note to here
  25. 01:41:119 (6) - add NC
  26. 01:52:072 (3) - ^ ( too long NC )
  27. 01:53:976 (7,1) - spacing too close.
  28. 01:59:214 (6) - add NC and 01:59:214 (6,7,8,9) - This pattern is very difficult in normal
  29. 02:05:841~ - Do you want to really change slider speed? I do not recommend the slider speed change in normal. but If you want to really use it , 02:09:691 (5) - This should slow slider speed, too.
  30. 02:09:214 (4,5) - add NC and spacing too far.
  31. 02:11:555 - Unnecessary green line
  32. 02:24:929~02:30:405 - Better to put something
  33. 02:30:643 (1,2,3) - This pattern is very difficult in normal
  34. 02:33:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same suggestion 01:17:310 (1,2,3,4)
  35. 02:42:548 (1,2) - spacing too close.
  36. 02:45:881 (6) - add NC ( too long NC )
  37. 02:46:834 (8,9) - spacing too close. and slider end 02:47:786 is better
  38. 02:55:405 (1,2,3) - This place is not much sense. I think that it does not need it
  39. 03:06:834 (4) - add NC ( too long NC )
  40. 03:10:643 - add note is better
  41. 03:13:500 (3,4,5) - spacing too far.
  42. 03:18:262 - add note is better
  43. 03:18:738 - ^
  44. 03:23:024 (1) - spinner end 03:25:881. and 03:26:834~03:31:119 - Better to put something
  45. 03:34:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - same suggestion 01:17:310 (1,2,3,4)
  46. 03:40:167 (6,7) - note after kickslider are difficult in normal diff.
  47. 03:46:834 (5) - add NC and 03:48:738 (1) - remove NC
  48. better to align the end. easy:03:50:643. but normal end:03:48:738

    overall:
  49. volume and hitsound:same easy diff

Good luck~ :)
Banana
794 posts
Joined October 2010
Banana
Hi~ Banana here from in-game PM

General

suggestions on kiai or disstance snap are mentioned in previous mods, so i'll skip that parts

Easy

seems you only use whistle and finish hitsound, maybe you can add clap on each note at the white ticks between the long white ticks
00:23:976 (1) - you used whistle over the former section, make sure the consistency of hit sound,
02:30:881 - spinner begins at here?
03:48:500 - ^ same issue

Normal

00:18:976 - add a note in consistancy with 00:16:834 (3,4) ?
00:23:738 (2) - same reason as above, i think this note is not necessary, if you really want to add a circle, try 00:22:786
00:31:119 (1) - i think there are some unreasonable break, and this is one of them, maybe you can map some of them
01:24:453 (1) - i don't think here to be a good place to use spinner
01:31:119 - make the spinner end here
02:02:786 - spinner starts at here and ends at 02:04:453 then add a circle at 02:05:405
02:12:310 - spinner starts at here
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
Hi from chat in-game
General
I think you can use more hit sounds. it's clearly when it to hit the notes.
you should set the same timing of KIAI TIME in all diffs.

on Easy and Normal, you should set same spacing with Distant Snap.
Easy
slider tick rate 2→1 is better
00:15:405(1) add whistle
00:23:024(5)^
00:30:643(1,2) not overlapped is better
00:33:500(2,3)^
01:47:786(1,2)^
03:26:834(1,2,3,4)^
03:30:643(1,2,3)^
00:38:262(1) add whistler at the beginning of slider
01:29:214(1) Distant error
01:37:310(4)^
01:56:834(1)^
01:32:548(1) remove crap and add whistle
02:30:881(1) add finish
02:47:786(5)^

Normal
umm... weird hit sounds. try to set two and four rythem. it means
00:26:595(4) remove crap
00:28:500(3)^
00:38:024(4)^ and more...
01:04:929(5) remove whistle
01:43:976(2) ctr+J?
02:33:024(1,2,3,4,5,6) try this rythem
02:39:691(3) add finish at the end of slider
03:10:643(2) add finish
03:33:500(2)^

ok.
I think your map is good for 1st map :D
GL
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
hi ^.^

• Where Hard??? you should make Hard diff///
• kiai times should be identical on all diffs
• plz remove all last red points on sliders

Normal

00:22:072(5) - make this slider more symmetric
00:23:024(1) - 2 grigs down http://puu.sh/E1qh
00:26:357(3,4,5) - correct spacing (here should be 0.8 too)
00:41:119(5) - this slider very ugly and unranked/ make so http://puu.sh/E1sz looks better
00:43:500 - same on 00:26:357
01:03:500(3) - last point on sliders will be white/ and make this slider symmetric http://puu.sh/E1uu
01:06:834(2) - ^
01:08:262 - make this slider double and add finish on big white tick (remove on red)
01:09:691(1) - this slider touch score it's bad. Make this slider horizontal http://puu.sh/E1w9
01:15:881 - remove NC and put NC on start kiai time
01:20:643(4) - make so http://puu.sh/E1x1
01:27:786(4,6) - remove last red point
01:43:024(1,2) - ^
01:42:072(2,3) - correct spacing
01:48:738(3) - remove last red point
01:51:119(2) - make this slider more symmetric http://puu.sh/E1Ad
01:56:357(2) - this slider very confusing. batter make so http://puu.sh/E1Br
02:21:119(5) - 1 grid down
02:39:214(1,2,3) - correct spacing (should be 0.8)
02:41:119(1,2,3) - ^
02:46:834(3,4) - ^
03:07:310(2,3,4) - 1 grid up
03:15:405 - NC on next note remove

Hitsounds

On couplet better put 1 clap between 2 bigs white ticks. for example : 00:15:881 , 00:17:786 , 00:19:691 and so on
On kiai time better put claps on white tick to big white tick and after. for example : here 01:16:834 and 01:17:786 and so on

Easy

00:16:357(3,5) - make this sliders more symmetric http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354163
01:09:214(4) - 1 grid up
01:18:262(3) - more symmetric http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354167
01:40:643 - add note
01:42:548 - add note with NC
01:59:214(4) - same on 01:18:262
02:34:453 - ^
02:40:167(1) - ^
02:42:072(1) - repeat very hides. for easy it's dificulty reading. change it

Hitsounds

The same on normal.

This map need more work~~ good luck)
ZekeyHache
3,316 posts
Joined October 2009
ZekeyHache
If you want I can make a Hard diff. for you kratoz, I love this song.
GreyWarrior
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
GreyWarrior
bueno ya casi termino la hard sorry :/
Mercurial
Mercurial
Va a ser interesante modear esto, dejame que me ocupe a la noche.
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
[General]

  1. ..you need rehitsound all diffs. your hitsound too less and cannot feel rhythm while playing.
  2. a easy hitsound way is to put clap at 2/4 short white line and finish at music part ends.
[Easy]

  1. 01:44:929 (1) - remove NC
  2. 02:38:262 (1) - ^
  3. ..why so much kiai times here..
[Normal]

  1. 02:33:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hard to read..dont put blue-lined notes in a [Normal] diff plz :>
[Hard]

  1. 00:22:548 - +note
  2. 00:30:643 (9) - NC
  3. 00:31:119 (1) - remove NC
  4. 00:32:548 (4) - NC
  5. 00:33:024 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:43:500 (1) - ^
  7. 00:43:976 (2) - NC
  8. 01:03:024 (5) - ^
  9. 01:03:738 (1) - remove NC
  10. 01:06:595 (1) - ^
  11. 01:06:834 (2) - NC
  12. 01:14:214 (1) - remove NC
  13. 01:14:453 (2) - NC
  14. ..try to set your NC to long white line plz
  15. 01:49:929 (9,10) - hard to read. move them out of stack.
  16. 02:17:310 (5) - NC here.
  17. 02:18:738 (1) - remove NC.
  18. 02:19:214 (3) - NC here.
  19. 02:20:405 (1) - remove NC.
  20. 03:21:357 (4) - make it stack with the end of 03:20:167 (1) -
  21. 03:25:881 (7) - NC
  22. 03:26:357 (1) - remove NC
  23. 03:28:976 (1) - ^
  24. 03:29:691 (4) - NC
  25. 03:31:595 (1) - remove NC
  26. 03:39:214 (7) - NC
  27. 03:39:929 (1) - remove NC
nothing serious mistake in placements. all diffs feeling well while playing ;)
so try to fix your hitsounds and NCs.
GL ♥
hibarirailwayz
446 posts
Joined June 2011
hibarirailwayz
from IRC chat~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]
Kiai mode's start ;
01:15:881→01:16:357,
02:32:072→02:32:548,
03:33:024→03:33:500
If you make long slider, I suggest you use more than 2 midpoint for visual of it.

[Easy]
01:13:500 (1) - start=01:12:786
01:42:548 (1) - 1 grid down
02:47:786 - delete kiai mode
03:48:500 (1) - fade out(volume down with inherited points)

[Normal]
00:35:643 - remove clap
00:35:881 - add clap
01:15:882 (1,2) - change NC
01:23:024 - remove clap
01:23:262 - remove clap
01:42:072 (2,3) - too short distance
02:32:548 (3,1) - change NC
02:33:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too difficult rhythm for Normal.
03:33:024 (1,2) - change NC

[Hard]
01:16:000 (6) - delete circle(not match the sound)
02:32:548 (3) - NC
02:39:214 (4) - add NC?(3 and 4 is too short distance...)
03:21:357 (4) - stack before slider
03:33:143 (6) - delete circle.

Good luck!!
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

Hi~

Add more hitsounds?
but it's not bad at all!!www

[Easy]

Turn up the volume like normal

00:38:262 - remove sliderwhistle

[Normal]

00:33:500 - move 1 grid left (lv4)
00:38:262 - remove sliderwhistle
03:07:310 - remove clap it's isolated

[Hard]

00:25:167~00:26:119 - It would be better to use 1.0x
00:44:929 - move 1 grid up and 1 grid right
02:32:548 - add a NC
03:33:550 - add a finish
03:41:119 - add a NC
03:44:929 - ^

Good luck!!!
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
In-Game Request ! (Your map needs 12+ star priority btw):

General
-> Make your sliders and patterns nicer.
-> Add more hitsounds!
-> Always pay attention to your spacing when mapping and when fixing someone's mods.

Easy
--> Some parts of the map feels empty. Try adding some whistles/claps on upbeats (2nd and 4th White ticks). For example, 00:23:976 - 00:43:976 and 01:33:500 - 02:00:643 feels empty because it lacks hitsounds. There are other places too.
Make the patterns nicer. Like this:
SPOILER

152,56,15405,1,2
88,104,15881,1,0
96,184,16357,2,0,B|200:256|288:152,1,200,2|2
00:19:691 (1,2,3,4) - ^
SPOILER

320,312,19691,5,0
264,368,20167,1,0
200,320,20643,1,0
136,272,21119,2,0,B|24:272,2,100,0|0|0
00:26:834 (1,2,3) - ^
SPOILER

288,296,26834,6,0,B|272:344|208:360|144:344|128:296,1,200,0|0
88,224,28262,1,0
127,152,28738,2,0,B|144:104|208:88|272:104|288:152,1,200,0|0
00:30:643 (1) - 2 grids down.
00:40:167 (1,2,3,1) - Why is the spacing 0.9x here? Your previous patterns have 0.8x spacing.
00:43:976 (1,2) - Here, you went back to 0.8x spacing.
1:00:961 - Unsnapped inherited timing section. It should be at 01:01:119.
02:10:643 (1,2,3,4) - I thought this pattern looks cooler XD:
SPOILER

232,296,210643,5,0
304,256,211119,1,0
376,216,211595,1,0
344,144,212072,2,0,B|296:40|296:40|200:40,1,200
80,96,213500,6,0,B|80:200,1,100,4|0
02:14:453 (1) - Readjust this slider a bit. It looks distorted.
02:17:310 (4) - Change this slider to a circle, so it's consistent with your previous break time. Also, add finish on this circle.
03:12:548 (1) - Angle this slider a bit so it is not touching the HP drain bar.
03:14:453 (3) - Symmetical with 03:12:548 (1).
03:21:119 (1,3) - These sliders are not symmetical. Make it symmetical. Like this:
SPOILER

192,200,201119,6,0,B|200:320|80:344,2,200
256,152,203500,1,0
320,200,203976,2,0,B|312:320|432:344,2,200
03:33:500 (1) - Your last Kiai Time should start here.

Normal
--> HP Drain +1.
01:07:786 (3,4) - Spacing.
01:15:882 (1,2,3) - You could make these symmetrical.
01:21:595 (1,2,3) - ^
01:42:072 (2,3) - Spacing.
02:09:691 (5) - New combo?
02:32:548 (3,1) - Switch their combos around.
03:33:500 (1) - Your last Kiai Time should start here.

Hard
--> Remove the following from .osu file: Video,0,"Titanium.avi"

03:33:500 (1) - Your last Kiai Time should start here.

Map needs a lot of work overall. Get more mods from people, then ask me for a recheck.

For
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
Hello,my english is not good,so,my grammar has some errors... :|


Generally,2 and 4 add clap.

Hard
AR6→7 is better

00:24:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing is too near...I don't think this is very good
00:40:167 (8) - I don't think two note here is good
01:01:119 - add inherited points use soft is better
01:11:595 - and add inherited points here use normal and vol use 70%
01:23:738 (4) - add whistle (use soft whistle in 2 and 4)
01:28:024 (7) - add new combo
01:29:691 (10) - add new combo
01:47:310 (6) - add note
02:04:453 - inherited points use soft here
02:19:214 (1) - so far :(
02:20:881 (7,8) - i don't think good,change it
02:35:405 (3) - slider tail add clap
02:36:714 - here use whistle
02:37:667 - ↑
03:33:262 (7) - remove slider finish,slider tail add finish
03:36:596 (5) - slider head add clap

hope it helpful for you
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Star~
GreyWarrior
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
GreyWarrior

BeatofIke wrote:

Star~
Thanks :P
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
Offset: 15390
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
You have an extra .osb with a wrong name, delete this.

[Titanium]
00:26:834 (1,2,3,4) - This sounds overmapped, there isnt any sound on the blue ticks to justify this.
00:34:214 (4,5,6,7,8) - looks a bit messy, organize them.
00:38:738 (2,3,4,5) - same here
01:21:119 (5) - why this sudden change of distance, keep the same in the combo.
01:30:881 (7) - I think you could do something else, that fits more the music, maybe a slider starting at 01:31:119 -
01:47:786 (1,2,3,4) - the stream is messy, put the circles at the same distance between each other
02:15:405 (2,3) - wrong spacing, should be farther, and circles are almost touching
02:23:024 (1,2,3) - make them equidistant
03:38:024 (4,5) - again the sudden change of distance with no reason, keep the same distance in the combo.
You should pay more attention to distance in general, there's a lot of small inconsistencies in spacing, that are clearly mistakes.
Also, somo of your patterns doesnt look elaborated enough, try to be more careful placinf objects so map doesnt look random or messy.

[Iron]
Same about the distance, try to keep consistence in the entire map, especially on a normal.
00:33:024 (1,2,3) - I dont like this kind of stuff, since are all in half beat, why not unstack them all or stack them all. right now looks just random in my opinion. Example here: 00:39:691 (3,4,5) - objects doesnt have same distance between them, Re check your entire map and fix stuff like this.
01:07:786 (3,4,5) - messy spacing here too
01:08:262 (5) - add a repeat
01:16:358 (2) - the new combo should be here
01:26:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - where are the hitsounds?
01:39:691 (3,4) - different from the spacing you used before, fix this
01:41:119 (1,2,3) - wrong spacing too, 2 and 3 are too close together if you check
02:32:548 (3) - new combo should be here
02:33:024 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing is wrong, and those circles on blue ticks are so hard to read in my opinion, if you want to keep this rhythm use sliders instead. Example: start a slider at: 02:33:500 - till 02:33:857 - and add a repeat.
03:03:976 (3,1,2,3) - spacing is too inconsistent... fix this plase

[Steel]
Same about the spacing, double check the diff witht distance snap on.
03:03:976 (2,3,4) - I didnt like this, the song is calm here, I think you shouldnt use the red ticks.
GreyWarrior
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
GreyWarrior

AdRon Zh3Ro wrote:

Offset: 15390
Thanks~ it sounds better :)
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod for request~~
and sorry for my late >.<

[General]
  1. There're two osb files, u may need to remove one or both of them
  2. You forget to Resnap All Notes & inherited points after changing the timing, please fix it Before anything else
  3. 01:31:580 - recommend to extend the first kiai to here
  4. and i suppose the default combo colour may not suit for your background....
[Steel]
  1. 00:37:771 - add a note here for drum...?
  2. 00:45:390 - ^
  3. 01:12:771 - start your spinner here?
  4. 01:47:295 - add a note?
  5. 01:50:628 (4) - move next NC to here?
  6. 02:17:771 - i suppose the break here may be not very suitable
  7. 02:38:247 (1) - bad shape ...try this?

    400,120,158247,6,0,B|344:96|256:96|256:176|168:176|112:152,1,300,0|0
[Iron]
  1. 00:28:248 (2,3) - a slider first and then note here maybe better
  2. 00:31:104 - you may miss a note here...
  3. 01:26:342 - add something here for "missing clap"?
  4. 01:27:772 (4) - maybe u can make it more smooth...?
  5. 01:29:677 (6) - ^
  6. 01:43:010 (1,2) - and these linear stuff.... are not looked well
  7. 01:57:772 (3) - blank it to (2)'s centre? 240:184
  8. 02:05:867 (1) - it's not recommend to change the SV in low diffs... even hard. Player may be confusing. And more, the tickpoints are weird when you choose 0.5x SV because they're touch the border of hitcircles
  9. 02:23:962 (4) - make it curved?
  10. 02:23:962 (4) - add a note?
  11. 02:32:532 - why no claps in this kiai?
  12. 03:43:485 - you can add something here~
  13. 03:43:961 - and here~
  14. 03:44:437 - and also here
A suggestion : try to keep the length of combo no longer than 6 in Easy & Normal diff.

[Titanium]
  1. 00:18:247 (4) - suggestion: All your sliders like this are too curved. try to reduce the curve and use grid level 4 (tiny) could make your slider looked better :>
    for example:
  2. 00:30:389 (8,1) - i suppose you can make a triplet here ( add a note between them )
  3. 00:35:151 (8) - it could be moved to next white tick
  4. 00:39:318 (5) - delete it plz, heard weird >.<
  5. 00:41:223 (4) - move to 00:41:461 - if u wanna make a triplet. Generally , we place a triplet from redticks, but not white tick.
  6. 01:17:294 (3,4) - ^, similar to above, and won't mentioned triplet issues again.
  7. 01:24:675 - add a note?
  8. 01:25:628 - ^
  9. 01:47:889 (2) - i suppose it's unnecessary
  10. 01:57:056 - add a note?
  11. 01:58:009 - ^
  12. 02:10:151 - ^
  13. 02:32:294 (2) - remove it?
  14. 02:44:675 - add note?
  15. 02:45:628 - ^
  16. 03:10:866 - i don't like this break also ~
that's all ~~ sorry but i suppose your map still need more works~~ anyway, good luck with rank :>
Frobe
Former osu!catch Champion: 2015
743 posts
Joined January 2011
Frobe
Hi, from 1:1 chat '~'




SPOILER
- General -
  1. kiai start - 01:16:342 / 02:32:532 / 03:33:485
  2. kiai end - 01:31:580 / 02:47:770 / 03:48:723
    plz timing stack ;_;
  3. remove .osb file and full submission



- Titanium -

  1. HP -1?
  2. 00:16:342 (4,5,6) - 00:15:389 (1,2,3) ← This copy, and paste after move (a better triangle)
  3. 00:22:294 (4) - move top 1 grid
  4. 00:29:199 (3,4,5) - move bottom 2 grid
  5. 00:34:437 (5) - move right 2 grid , bottom 1 grid
  6. 00:37:532 (6) - move right 1 grid
  7. 01:01:104 (1,3) - remove whistle
  8. 01:03:247 (6) - move right 1 grid
  9. 01:09:913 (2) - move bottom 1 grid
  10. 01:11:342 (6) - move right 1 grid , top 1 grid
  11. 01:12:770 (4) - move bottom 1 grid
  12. 01:14:199 (1) - NC remove
  13. 01:26:342 (2) - 01:24:913 (6) slider end stack or move x:368 y:192
  14. 01:28:723 (2) - move left 1 grid
  15. 01:30:628 (6) - move right 1 grid
  16. 01:41:104 (1) - 01:39:675 (3) - slider end stack
  17. 02:01:342 (4,5) - 02:00:628 (3) - slider end stack
  18. 02:18:247 - timing white line in the stack
  19. 02:23:723 (2) - move bottom 3 grid
  20. 02:30:628 (1) - change stream?
  21. 02:42:056 (1,2) - slider end and stack
  22. 03:21:342 (4) - 03:20:151 (1) - slider end stack
  23. 03:31:580 (3) - NC
  24. 03:32:294 (1) - NC remove
  25. 03:36:104 (2) - move bottom 1 grid



- Iron -

  1. OD -1
  2. 02:13:024 - remove timing
  3. 01:22:056 (2) - move right 1 grid
  4. 01:46:818 (4) - ^
  5. 02:39:437 (2) - ^
  6. 03:14:437 (5) - move left 1 grid
  7. 03:31:104 - timing white line in the stack
  8. 03:48:723 (3) - move x:272 y:72 (a better triangle)



- Steel -

  1. AR +1~2
  2. 01:01:104 - timing white line in the stack




sorry, i can't easy,normal mod :(

good luck :)
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hi:3 As requested

[General]
●Delete to (David Guetta Ft Sia - Titanium (kratoz).osb) file. It's unnecessary.
●add to "Nothing But the Beat" tag ? this is album name . I think the addition of something better :3

[Steel]
●Approach Rate +1 . It is too low ><
●00:16:342 (3) - add whistle on the slider's end
●00:18:247 (5) - ^same here
●00:21:104 (4) - add whistle on the slider's head
●00:23:961 (1) - add whistle on the slider's end
●00:25:866 (3) - move to x:408 . 00:23:961 (1) - same to here.
●00:26:819 (1,3) - add whistle on the slider's head
●00:30:628 (1) - add finish.
●00:34:438 (1) - bend it to the opposite direction ? the flow is good :3
●01:11:580 (3) - remove slider's reverse. and spinner start at here 01:11:580 (3) -
●01:20:628 (2) - move to y:112
●01:27:771 (2,3,4,1) - this part is too hard for beginner.make some slider !
●01:33:961 (3) - spacing too close (0.85x) it is better to use DS0.8x
●01:39:199 (1) - add finish on the slider's head
●01:42:533 (1,3) - stack is confusing many beginners ><
●02:00:628 (5) - add New combo
●02:10:628 (1) - move to y:192 . 02:12:533 (3) - same to here
●02:19:199 (5) - add New combo
●02:24:914 (2) - spacing too close (1.07x) it is better to use DS0.8x
●02:30:628 - spinner start at here.
●03:06:819 (5,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? although i think the current one looks better.
●03:48:485 (1) - gradually add volume?

you should put clap sound o.o

[Iron]
●00:36:818 (2) - slider end at here . 00:37:294 -
●01:04:913 (5) - remove finish. it doesn't follow the music well.
●01:27:294 (3,4) - 1/2 make slider?
●01:41:104 (1) - hmm , make 1/4 slider ?


[Titanium]
●why you use volume of kiai time 50%? up to 70%!
●Overall Diffculty or HP Drain rate +1
●00:16:342 (4,5,6) - same to this pattern 00:15:389 (1,2,3) - ? make Triangle~ looks better imo
●00:28:723 (1,2) - spacing too close (1.08x) it is better to use DS1.4x.
●01:26:818 (3,5) - add whistle
●01:30:389 (5,6,7) - Make the spacing equal here
●01:39:675 (3) - stack to 01:41:104 (1) - ?
●01:53:961 (1) - this spinner isn't he music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●02:12:770 - add note :3 follow the Lyrics
●02:43:009 (2) - move to x:396 y:280
●03:32:294 (1) - remove New combo .

poor english... sorry :o

good luck ^^
PatZar
3,079 posts
Joined March 2013
PatZar
titanium

01:15:032 - why? just make it stream
01:45:628 (3) - 420 228
01:46:580 (6) - 268 188

01:46:104 (4) - use circle and same as 5
4= 368 184
5= 368 100 clap http://puu.sh/b7bp1/857568304d.png

01:50:866 (2) - ctrl+ g
03:32:175 - same as 01:15:032 -
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