Colin Hou wrote:

[General]

1. KIAI ending time: 01:22:145, 02:46:911, 04:11:677.fixed
2. 04:24:933 - pity that you choose to end map here. the outro instrument part is mappable and has a clear end.i didnt mapping this part scorelimit 20M that time i suck;_;

[Storyboard]

1. almost all things in StoryBoard[BG] folder should be resized to a proper resolution, check wiki plz.ok i ask yuca BG resize waiting now!
2. the name panel is used only in collab, how about make it also diff-spec?cant contact yukinohara can i keep this?

[Runaway]

1. slider tick rate 1.0 is enough if you were worrying about the speed changes. and also the sliderslide in both custom sampleset are a little noisy (especially in C2). try to get a blank .wav for sliderslide and sliderslide2, and remove the slidertick2.wav.
2. 00:02:437 (6,1) - try blanket them? overlap looks bad.
3. 00:38:716 (1,2) - new combo on (2) instead of (1)
4. 02:24:324 - add note, the drum still there
5. 02:55:370 (1) - end this at 02:58:074.
6. 03:25:545 (2) - sound more like note+slider and also the sliderticks are on wrong tick.
7. 03:43:072 (2) - a bit misleading on this. cuz the former 3/4 sliders are all with 1 repeat instead of 2. reduce 1 repeat and add note

[Blue Sky]

1. 00:00:867 (2,3) - they're quite random compared with the music. try use sliders to cover the guitar.

fixed everything except slider tick rate not fixed cuz i prefer this map tickrate 2
thanks for mod Colin! and garven

[General]
Source: Smile Cubic! -Suiheisen made Nan Mile? After & Another Stories-

[Runway]
Set slider tick rate to 1 or unmute the slidertick sound.
01:10:546 (4,5,6,7,8) - messy
01:29:645 (1) - Feels quite weird to use a long slider here.. Better to shorten this by 1/2 beat and add a note at 01:30:168 - . It'll fit better with vocal/instruments imo
01:44:122 (1) - Space this slider at higher DS and use curved one. As the previous pattern has a good flow, it shouldn't be like that.
01:59:645 (4) - y:192
02:03:656 - Add a note here.
02:05:749 (4,1) - They aren't stacked correctly.
02:24:411 (1,2,3) - Awkward flow and bad partial overlapping. How about rearranging like this?
02:25:806 (4,5,6) - The current pattern doesn't flow at all. How about doing like this?
02:32:783 (8) - Some jumps would fit nicely with the emphasis. try this out.
02:35:399 (3,4,5,6,1) - Move these notes to x:424. currently they aren't placed perpendicularly.
02:41:678 (2,3) - This jump is weird and pointless.
02:45:341 (1,1) - Prefer this spinner ended at 02:46:562 - . Such a short spinner doesn't fit this part imo.
02:55:283 (1) - Somehow I read this rhythm as 1/2 cause similar patterns such as 02:46:911 (2,3) - are using 1/2. Thus I think it would be better to unstack and space it out.
02:55:370 (1) - End this spinner at 02:57:899 - instead. No matter where the vocal ends cause it's quite vague. Better to follow the guitar.
03:21:795 (3) - Use the same shape as (1).
03:22:841 - Add a note here.
03:25:109 (1) - Remove newcombo.
03:25:981 (4) - Add newcombo.
03:27:899 (2,3,1) - Don't you think it's better to use a long slider? the current rhythm is really weird to be honest.. if you don't like using long sliders, I'd suggest a spinner here instead.
03:29:817 (3,4,5) - Spacing.
03:46:561 (1) - Make the length of this spinner the same as 00:57:029 (1) - .
03:51:619 (5,6) - same as 02:55:283 (1) - .

[Normal]
AR +1 would be better considering the BPM.
00:01:390 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:02:960 (1) - This rhythm is too simple compared to 00:00:170 (1,2,3) - .
00:13:251 - Add whistle or finish.
00:37:844 (3) - The emphasis is too strong to ignore imo.
00:54:063 - Add finish.
01:08:017 (1) - Add finish here for the sake of consistency with Insane.
02:01:215 - Remove clap.
02:02:610 (3) - Same as 00:37:844 (3) - .
02:09:237 (2,1) - Spacing.
02:16:563 - Add clap.
02:18:829 - Add finish.
02:21:097 (1) - messy.
02:25:109 (2) - Extend this slider by 1/2 beat.
02:35:050 (4) - Start this slider 1/2 earlier
02:44:120 (1) - Remove this repeat and add a note at 02:44:992 -
02:55:283 (1) - End this spinner at 02:57:899 - instead. No matter where the vocal ends cause it's quite vague. Better to follow the guitar.
03:43:595 - Add finish.
03:45:863 (1) - Start this spinner from 03:46:561 - like what you did at 00:57:029 (1) - .
03:59:816 (6) - Move to 03:59:642 -
03:57:549 - Add finish.
04:20:049 (1,1) - Combine these spinners into one? it's currently a bit unfriendly to beginners imo.

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
Source: Smile Cubic! -Suiheisen made Nan Mile? After & Another Stories-

[Runway]
Set slider tick rate to 1 or unmute the slidertick sound.
01:10:546 (4,5,6,7,8) - messy
01:29:645 (1) - Feels quite weird to use a long slider here.. Better to shorten this by 1/2 beat and add a note at 01:30:168 - . It'll fit better with vocal/instruments imoi prefer this slider keep now
01:44:122 (1) - Space this slider at higher DS and use curved one. As the previous pattern has a good flow, it shouldn't be like that.

SPOILER

01:59:645 (4) - y:192
02:03:656 - Add a note here.
02:05:749 (4,1) - They aren't stacked correctly.
02:24:411 (1,2,3) - Awkward flow and bad partial overlapping. How about rearranging like this?

SPOILER

02:25:806 (4,5,6) - The current pattern doesn't flow at all. How about doing like this?nymph dont fixed this i think keep this part

SPOILER

02:32:783 (8) - Some jumps would fit nicely with the emphasis. try this out.

SPOILER

02:35:399 (3,4,5,6,1) - Move these notes to x:424. currently they aren't placed perpendicularly.
02:41:678 (2,3) - This jump is weird and pointless.
02:45:341 (1,1) - Prefer this spinner ended at 02:46:562 - . Such a short spinner doesn't fit this part imo.
02:55:283 (1) - Somehow I read this rhythm as 1/2 cause similar patterns such as 02:46:911 (2,3) - are using 1/2. Thus I think it would be better to unstack and space it out.
02:55:370 (1) - End this spinner at 02:57:899 - instead. No matter where the vocal ends cause it's quite vague. Better to follow the guitar.
03:21:795 (3) - Use the same shape as (1).
03:22:841 - Add a note here.
03:25:109 (1) - Remove newcombo.
03:25:981 (4) - Add newcombo.
03:27:899 (2,3,1) - Don't you think it's better to use a long slider? the current rhythm is really weird to be honest.. if you don't like using long sliders, I'd suggest a spinner here instead.
03:29:817 (3,4,5) - Spacing.
03:46:561 (1) - Make the length of this spinner the same as 00:57:029 (1) - .
03:51:619 (5,6) - same as 02:55:283 (1) - .

[Normal]
AR +1 would be better considering the BPM.
00:01:390 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:02:960 (1) - This rhythm is too simple compared to 00:00:170 (1,2,3) - .
00:13:251 - Add whistle or finish.
00:37:844 (3) - The emphasis is too strong to ignore imo.

SPOILER

00:54:063 - Add finish.
01:08:017 (1) - Add finish here for the sake of consistency with Insane.
02:01:215 - Remove clap.
02:02:610 (3) - Same as 00:37:844 (3) - .
02:09:237 (2,1) - Spacing.
02:16:563 - Add clap.
02:18:829 - Add finish.
02:21:097 (1) - messy.
02:25:109 (2) - Extend this slider by 1/2 beat.
02:35:050 (4) - Start this slider 1/2 earlier
02:44:120 (1) - Remove this repeat and add a note at 02:44:992 -
02:55:283 (1) - End this spinner at 02:57:899 - instead. No matter where the vocal ends cause it's quite vague. Better to follow the guitar.
03:43:595 - Add finish.
03:45:863 (1) - Start this spinner from 03:46:561 - like what you did at 00:57:029 (1) - .
03:59:816 (6) - Move to 03:59:642 -
03:57:549 - Add finish.
04:20:049 (1,1) - Combine these spinners into one? it's currently a bit unfriendly to beginners imo.

Normal all fixed
insane fixed other things

Recheck, no kudosu.

General: Well now that slider tick rate is set to 1, so slidertick hitsound can be unmuted imo.


Runway:
01:09:063 (6,1) - spacing.
01:10:110 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -

224,80,70110,2,0,B|136:40|36:104,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,112,70546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,140,70633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,180,70720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,212,70808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,240,70895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,264,70982,6,0,B|120:317|205:265,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:32:783 (8) - 3grid left.
03:22:841 - Add a note here.

Blue Sky:
00:36:449 - Remove clap.
02:02:610 (3) - not fixed yet.
02:35:050 (4) - ^

Edit: Rechecked via IRC and added yukinohara into tags. Rebubbled~ (I'm permitted by the popper.)

thank you Melo!

ranked!

congrats!

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thank you Colin frosty Melo Pokie and yuca! and everyone

>_<

yuca wrote:

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おめでとうございます

おめっす

Congratulation

Grats~!! :3

oh yay!!!!
waiiiiiiiiiiiii sorda!
omedetou~ !!

wa-i! congratulations!

ritaritaritaritaritaritarita>3<

Sorda's Darkness

Congrats on rank ~
Lovely SB ~ >w<

thanks all!
im glad got ranked this map!

Congrats! Also hope that JoJo can back to mapping~

ome~

Last time I saw this, the pretty storyboard didn't exist yet.

Congratulations.

>>KPY
yeah,i hope JoJo back to osu!
also thanks xsr and Faust! hope you can like awesome SB!